-tvrtles wrote:

Bruuuuuhhhhh you have to teach me how to write as good as you

Practice makes perfect time for more practice

love it! can’t wait for the next chapter! :0

this is sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good!

Yay I found it!

This is amazing, Crow

woahwoahwoah this is godly work crow i can’t wait for the next chapter ヾ(｡･ω･)ｼ BUT THE CLIFFHANGER UGHH (；¬д¬)

SaiIAway-Test wrote:

--galaxi-- wrote:

holy hecc crow this is beauty in a nutshell scratch forum I love it sm

now time for the good ol' proofreading

YAYYY MY PERSONAL EDITOR \(//∇//)\ i bow down to you senpai

NUO U ISH SENPAI JUST- JUST LOOK AT THIS STORY OML IT'S THE FIRST CHAPTER BUT WE'RE ALREADY ALL DRAWN IN-

I wasn't even aware that this story was released-
This is amazing!
I already love Liraz

so is eits not going to continue?

Abruptly wrote:

so is eits not going to continue?

i think it will once crow is unblocked on @saiiaway ^^

gh0stwriter wrote:

Abruptly wrote:

so is eits not going to continue?

i think it will once crow is unblocked on @saiiaway ^^

i think Crow said she might continue it in the future but it's discontinued for now :>

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

BlackBerryPie25 wrote:

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

No, they aren't released yet

And we're already on page 2 (almost 3) and it's been like a day

queenbrita wrote:

BlackBerryPie25 wrote:

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

No, they aren't released yet

And we're already on page 2 (almost 3) and it's been like a day

Oh ackkk yea wow. We are one chatty group-
But it’s mostly due to having a good story to talk about :>

crow…
“ They say the Arusite dungeons are so dark that the prisoners inside fear the light. It’s the trick of a candlelight’s flicker that scares them, the shadows of something living that disturbs their silent breaths. It’s the torturous remembrance that they are still alive.”

that line is so incredibly beautiful. it frames the broad strokes of the dungeon- the emotions and the danger lurking in there. the prisoners are scared and broken, and this paragraph?? its so great i can’t eueuueue

“ To spend even an hour in utter silence and darkness—such a tormenting experience can drive one to the brink of insanity.”

eueue this line. we are made to sympathize with the prisoners and their torment. people depend
on their visuals and their ears. singing can help keep us happy in times of terror, and it’s so ??? real that you’vetaken away their voices and their eyes. that’s a really scary thing to do and imagine- a long time in one spot, where there isn’t the comfort of a familiar place, sound, or anything except for darkness and cold.

“Not a single sound would be made with your voice”

you can sing but it will never reach your ears. you can scream but it isn’t worth the effort. you can plead but your words are in vain,
wisps of wind that will never see the light. crow this line i love it it’s so eueuueueue

“ But the prince had seen these illegal enchantments before.”

the next leader of your precious kingdom, tainted. it’s an ironic situation, where his family could be seen as more criminal than the one he condemns. i love the expository paragraphs they’re so cool eueue

“ His lips curled in a bitter chuckle that resonated throughout the hollow cell, a tasteless way of humor as he stared back at her.”
description eueuuee

SunsetArtist1 wrote:

queenbrita wrote:

BlackBerryPie25 wrote:

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

No, they aren't released yet

And we're already on page 2 (almost 3) and it's been like a day

Oh ackkk yea wow. We are one chatty group-
But it’s mostly due to having a good story to talk about :>

i dunno, i feel like it's the hype for the story
and the story
and crow
and the chaos fandom

Peach_Drawing wrote:

SunsetArtist1 wrote:

queenbrita wrote:

BlackBerryPie25 wrote:

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

No, they aren't released yet

And we're already on page 2 (almost 3) and it's been like a day

Oh ackkk yea wow. We are one chatty group-
But it’s mostly due to having a good story to talk about :>

i dunno, i feel like it's the hype for the story
and the story
and crow
and the chaos fandom

I'm going for chaos

Oh no! I just realized we have to come up with new food products to sell! And something that stands for each page number (i.e. Aerith's kitties)

We can't sell Faarity marshmallows here. :'(

--galaxi-- wrote:

Peach_Drawing wrote:

SunsetArtist1 wrote:

queenbrita wrote:

BlackBerryPie25 wrote:

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

No, they aren't released yet

And we're already on page 2 (almost 3) and it's been like a day

Oh ackkk yea wow. We are one chatty group-
But it’s mostly due to having a good story to talk about :>

i dunno, i feel like it's the hype for the story
and the story
and crow
and the chaos fandom

I'm going for chaos

yep

DipsydoodlesOfficail wrote:

--galaxi-- wrote:

Peach_Drawing wrote:

SunsetArtist1 wrote:

queenbrita wrote:

BlackBerryPie25 wrote:

This is proof that EitS isn't so good just because of the plot or something, and that you can keep up your great work. Have chapters 2 and 3 been released already? I don't really know how forums works

No, they aren't released yet

And we're already on page 2 (almost 3) and it's been like a day

Oh ackkk yea wow. We are one chatty group-
But it’s mostly due to having a good story to talk about :>

i dunno, i feel like it's the hype for the story
and the story
and crow
and the chaos fandom

I'm going for chaos

yep

agreed

Oh ackkk yea wow. We are one chatty group-
But it’s mostly due to having a good story to talk about :>
i dunno, i feel like it's the hype for the story
and the story
and crow
and the chaos fandom

I'm going for chaos

same lol