Co49 wrote:

Review of thє líl ghσѕtíє ѕhσp - 23/04/2020 - Co49
The banner is very good. There is good use of formatting to making the first post easy to read and the layout is excellent. The navigation menu is also very good. There are clear forms (including feedback forms) and rules. They have also included a portfolio. I think it use to be the norm for shops to include examples of their work but you do not see it that often now. Anyway, it is great to include as it demonstrates your quality of work to potential customers.

The shop seems to have active workers, stays on topic and has got quite a few orders done. I think it's quite impressive only having opened two weeks ago. I cannot really offer any advice because I can't see anything the shop is doing wrong.

kitten769 wrote:

Co49 wrote:

Review of thє líl ghσѕtíє ѕhσp - 23/04/2020 - Co49
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OK, have you posted that on their thread? When you do, I can tick you off.

Co49 wrote:

kitten769 wrote:

Co49 wrote:

Review of thє líl ghσѕtíє ѕhσp - 23/04/2020 - Co49
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OK, have you posted that on their thread? When you do, I can tick you off.

I have done now. I'll get my next review done soon.

RedGuy7 wrote:

lonemoon arts closed

kitten769 wrote:

RedGuy7 wrote:

lonemoon arts closed

Thank you, I'll remove them from the whatsit. Have you done a review yet?

crossme72 wrote:

kitten769 wrote:

RedGuy7 wrote:

lonemoon arts closed

Thank you, I'll remove them from the whatsit. Have you done a review yet?

redguy7 reviewed my shop! (the profile picture shop)

crossme72 wrote:

I've done a review here!:
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/3951578/


I might do some more later

Jolia_RKW wrote:

Shop name: ·͙*̩̩͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩̥͙ Tʜᴇ FY Pʀᴏᴊᴇᴄᴛ Sʜᴏᴘ *̩̩̥͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩͙‧͙
Shop owner name: Jolia_RKW
Employee count: 1 or 2
Permission from owner to do this: Yes
Banner:
Link to shop: ~here~
Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ!

I think I did this right!

kitten769 wrote:

Jolia_RKW wrote:

Shop name: ·͙*̩̩͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩̥͙ Tʜᴇ FY Pʀᴏᴊᴇᴄᴛ Sʜᴏᴘ *̩̩̥͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩͙‧͙
Shop owner name: Jolia_RKW
Employee count: 1 or 2
Permission from owner to do this: Yes
Banner:
Link to shop: ~here~
Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ!

I think I did this right!

It is good, but your motto is almost word for word the same as the thumbnail shop's. Where did I you get it from?

Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs! ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ

Jolia_RKW wrote:

kitten769 wrote:

Jolia_RKW wrote:

Shop name: ·͙*̩̩͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩̥͙ Tʜᴇ FY Pʀᴏᴊᴇᴄᴛ Sʜᴏᴘ *̩̩̥͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩͙‧͙
Shop owner name: Jolia_RKW
Employee count: 1 or 2
Permission from owner to do this: Yes
Banner:
Link to shop: ~here~
Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ!

I think I did this right!

It is good, but your motto is almost word for word the same as the thumbnail shop's. Where did I you get it from?

I thought of it, but if it is too similar then just change it to:

Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs! ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ

kitten769 wrote:

Jolia_RKW wrote:

kitten769 wrote:

Jolia_RKW wrote:

Shop name: ·͙*̩̩͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩̥͙ Tʜᴇ FY Pʀᴏᴊᴇᴄᴛ Sʜᴏᴘ *̩̩̥͙˚̩̥̩̥*̩̩͙‧͙
Shop owner name: Jolia_RKW
Employee count: 1 or 2
Permission from owner to do this: Yes
Banner:
Link to shop: ~here~
Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ!

I think I did this right!

It is good, but your motto is almost word for word the same as the thumbnail shop's. Where did I you get it from?

I thought of it, but if it is too similar then just change it to:

Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs! ɪɴ ʜᴀʟғ ᴛʜᴇ ᴛɪᴍᴇ

I'll add it as it is anyway.

Motto: Hɪɢʜ-Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ Rᴇsᴜʟᴛs!

R4356th wrote:

Shop joining form:
Shop name: R Advertising™
Shop owner name: R4356th
Employee count: 1
Permission from owner to do this: I am the owner.
Banner: None yet
Link to shop: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/398395/
Motto: Advertising following the Community Guidelines

vrie wrote:

R4356th wrote:

Shop joining form:
Shop name: R Advertising™
Shop owner name: R4356th
Employee count: 1
Permission from owner to do this: I am the owner.
Banner: None yet
Link to shop: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/398395/
Motto: Advertising following the Community Guidelines

um, I don't mean to be rude, but you ask people to pay with loves/faves/follows, and that is against the community guidelines…

R4356th wrote:

Shop joining form:
Shop name: R Surveys™
Shop owner name: R4356th
Employee count: 8
Permission from owner to do this: I am the owner.
Banner: None yet
Link to shop: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/398642/
Motto: Get to know what the community thinks!