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powercon5

Time using Scratch: about 3 years
Time as a Scratcher(website):1 year
Link to best project(s):http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/31421992/
Role as a: Programmer
Experience in other collaborations (leadership and time): none

I have read and agree to the rules
I have read and agree to staff roles.

Last edited by powercon5 (Nov. 7, 2014 22:48:40)

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ngreen1266

Epic Trolls Game Review
Graphics- 9.0/10.0- A little bit undetailed but still pretty good sprites and backgrounds for a Scratch game.
Clean Code-9.0/10.0- If you exit out of the shop when you are doing the tutorial before you get the stuff, the tutorial won't let you move on even if you do the things it asked.
Gameplay-9.0/10.0- Wow, this game features a lot of content and I mean a LOT of content. That's great, as I can tell you spent a lot of time working on it. A highly enjoyable RPG. A suggestion is to maybe add some exciting music. The ability to purchase supplies is great, though maybe adding some armor to the supplies would be a good idea. Well made and addictive game all and all.
Purpose-10.0/10.0- A well made, high quality, fun game that only a couple Scratchers can program!
Overall-37.0/10.0
Accolades Awarded-Pro Invent Pass with Merit
Worthy to be Featured?-Yes!

Last edited by ngreen1266 (Nov. 8, 2014 21:43:58)

talkingtoilet8

ngreen1266 wrote:
Epic Trolls Game Review
Graphics- 9.0/10.0- A little bit undetailed but still pretty good sprites and backgrounds for a Scratch game.
Clean Code-8.0/10.0- 2 bugs. 1. If you exit out of the shop when you are doing the tutorial before you get the stuff, the tutorial won't let you move on even if you do the things it asked. 2. I can't seem to move when I get out of the coliseum.
Gameplay-9.0/10.0- Wow, this game features a lot of content and I mean a LOT of content. That's great, as I can tell you spent a lot of time working on it. A highly enjoyable RPG. A suggestion is to maybe add some exciting music. The ability to purchase supplies is great, though maybe adding some armor to the supplies would be a good idea. Well made and addictive game all and all.
Purpose-10.0/10.0- A well made, high quality, fun game that only a couple Scratchers can program!
Overall-36.0/10.0
Accolades Awarded-Pro Invent Pass with Merit
Worthy to be Featured?-Yes!

I was working on the coliseum when you posted. That glitch doesn't happen anymore

Last edited by talkingtoilet8 (Nov. 8, 2014 18:10:35)

ngreen1266

talkingtoilet8 wrote:
ngreen1266 wrote:
Epic Trolls Game Review
Graphics- 9.0/10.0- A little bit undetailed but still pretty good sprites and backgrounds for a Scratch game.
Clean Code-8.0/10.0- 2 bugs. 1. If you exit out of the shop when you are doing the tutorial before you get the stuff, the tutorial won't let you move on even if you do the things it asked. 2. I can't seem to move when I get out of the coliseum.
Gameplay-9.0/10.0- Wow, this game features a lot of content and I mean a LOT of content. That's great, as I can tell you spent a lot of time working on it. A highly enjoyable RPG. A suggestion is to maybe add some exciting music. The ability to purchase supplies is great, though maybe adding some armor to the supplies would be a good idea. Well made and addictive game all and all.
Purpose-10.0/10.0- A well made, high quality, fun game that only a couple Scratchers can program!
Overall-36.0/10.0
Accolades Awarded-Pro Invent Pass with Merit
Worthy to be Featured?-Yes!

I was working on the coliseum when you posted. That glitch doesn't happen anymore

Cool. I edited my post to add this.

Co49

powercon5 wrote:
Time using Scratch: about 3 years
Time as a Scratcher(website):1 year
Link to best project(s):http://scratch.mit.edu/projects/31421992/
Role as a: Programmer
Experience in other collaborations (leadership and time): none

I have read and agree to the rules
I have read and agree to staff roles.

Welcome to the Pro Invent Inc collaboration!

If you ever need time off, then please ask here for the leave form and fill it out. As programmer, you are part of the Mini Game Team, managed by Tyman187 which is part of the Creativity Department, directed by HarryB178
Here is the general study.
Here is the creativity branch studio.
Here is the Newsletter studio.
Here is the collaboration account.
All assignments are posted here and at the HQ. I hope you have a great time a our collaboration.

Tyman187

@powercon5
Welcome!

“Gotta leave you all behind and face the truth.” Bohemian Rhapsody by Queen

monkeyboy29

I will be a special reporter and can write scratcher profiles. please tell me more about this on my profile page.

when I receive [ Monkeyboy29]
set [ Awesomeness] to [ Infinity]
say [Will help with graphix] for (2) secs

KingOfAwesome58219

Review for Epic Trolls: a Role-Playing Game by talkingtoilet8:
Graphics: (10/10.0) Nothing to complain about here
Clean Code: (10/10.0)
Game play: (10/10.0) There is a lot to do.
Purpose: (10/10.0)is.
Overall: (40/40.0)
What was good - the graphics and complexity - it's more than your average minigame
What could be improved - The Tutorial, maybe add a backstory explanation.
Pro Invent Distinction Awarded

Last edited by KingOfAwesome58219 (Nov. 10, 2014 18:03:55)

KingOfAwesome58219

Review for Zombie Car Game? by PizzaGamer24

Here's a review from Pro Invent Inc.
Graphics: (9/10.0) The road is a bit trippy
Clean Code: (9/10.0) The zombie is currently stuck in my car
Game play: (9/10.0) Rather interesting, but I have no idea what I am doing.
Purpose: (6/10.0) There is no storyline or explanation of any kind.
Overall: (33/40.0)
What was good: The car/zombie art, the theme. I can clearly tell what I am supposed to be doing from the beginning
What could be improved: The storyline and maybe some way to kill the zombies without losing health
Pro Invent Pass Awarded

Last edited by KingOfAwesome58219 (Nov. 10, 2014 18:04:41)

KingOfAwesome58219

Review for Forgotten by Haiming
Graphics: (10/10.0) Their wasn't really any need for graphics in this game anyways - but the light is nice.
Clean Code: (10/10.0)
Game play: (9/10.0) Confusing at first - but I guess that's the point
Purpose: (10/10.0)
Overall: (39/40.0)
What was good: Pretty much everything - the music, the gameplay, the mysteriousness.
What could be improved: The graphics of the objects
Pro Invent Distinction Awarded

Last edited by KingOfAwesome58219 (Nov. 10, 2014 18:05:23)

KingOfAwesome58219

Review for Jail Escape 2 by Accuracy114
Graphics: (10/10.0)
Clean Code: (9/10.0) Some bugs here and there - If I leave the computer room while the computer is still loading up, and come back, it won't load.
Game play: (10/10.0)
Purpose: (10/10.0)
Overall: (39/40.0)
What was good: The gameplay - this game is a lot of fun.
What could be improved: Mainly just the few little glitches.
Pro Invent Distinction Awarded
- Pro Invent Inc.
I think that's all the reviews I'm behind on.

Last edited by KingOfAwesome58219 (Nov. 10, 2014 18:07:06)

sunnypiano

Sorry, but I'm leaving Scratch, so I'll appoint HarryB178 as Manager of Fiction Team.

ngreen1266

sunnypiano wrote:
Sorry, but I'm leaving Scratch, so I'll appoint HarryB178 as Manager of Fiction Team.

powercon5

Tyman187 wrote:
@powercon5
Welcome!

thanks

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ngreen1266

Epic Trolls Final Results
Graphics-9.5/10.0
Clean Code-8.5/10.0
Gameplay-9.5/10.0
Purpose-9.5/10.0
Overall-37.0/40.0
Accolades Awarded-Pro Invent Pass with Merit

Last edited by ngreen1266 (Nov. 9, 2014 01:31:26)

talkingtoilet8

KingOfAwesome58219 wrote:
Review for Epic Trolls: a Role-Playing Game by talkingtoilet8:
Graphics: (10/10.0) Nothing to complain about here
Clean Code: (8/10.0) I can't pass the tutorial, after I make my club and axe, and go outside, nothing happens.
Game play: (10/10.0) There is a lot to do.
Purpose: (9/10.0) I'm not quite sure what my backstory is.
Overall: (37/40.0)
What was good - the graphics and complexity - it's more than your average minigame
What could be improved - The Tutorial, maybe add a backstory explanation.
Is that good?

The backstory is explained when you complete the mine, and try again if the tuttorial isnt working

HarryB178

sunnypiano wrote:
Sorry, but I'm leaving Scratch, so I'll appoint HarryB178 as Manager of Fiction Team.

You need to fill out the leave form.

OK, I am not officially leaving, but this is the only collab I am really active with. I will still post ideas and fiction writing, but I will not do many projects.

SOOO, I am NOT LEAVING!

Good luck sunnypiano with your future endeavours!

BTW, open a fiction writing slot.

Co49

@KingOfAwesome58219
Thank you for your reviews.

@sunnypiano
Sad to see you leave, hope you had a good time at Pro Invent and good luck!

Co49

ASSIGNMENTS AND QUESTIONS ALL HERE

@NOTE TO ALL MEMBERS:
-The Pro Invent HQ is not up to date with current assignments because it is being updated so that it is easier to check assignments. I'll tell everyone when this is done.

@Tyman187
-Please tell me the general concept of the game.
-Pick another active scratcher outside this collaboration to interview and request (by around 8th November)
-Interview this scratcher (by around 18th November)

@HarryB178
-Write the chapter (by around 24th November)
-Continue to direct the mini game team.

@F1zero
-Finish the November tutorial (by around 8th November)

@Game Review Team
http://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/37579/?page=30#post-537876

@Kameli
-Brainstorm possible article titles.

@professornutmeg
-Please curate the studios
-Brainstorm possible article titles.

@CelebiGamer
-Brainstorm possible article titles.

@All of Mini Game team, including graphic artists and programmers
-Report to Tyman187 and await assignments to help with the mini game.

Members who are a little inactive
Please report here even if you do not have an assignment:
-Wrclass
-jjbrady18
-F1zero

Last edited by Co49 (Nov. 13, 2014 18:55:21)

talkingtoilet8

wasn't the general concept of the minigame my santa screws up project?

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