Nothing is permanent

veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:11)

Ersatz-

LucidSquare

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veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:17)

mythbusteranimator

veggieman001 wrote:
possibly wrote:
Why do you have to be so good at writing as well, veggie?
I steal others' powers.

:O

I've been listening to…
Ogre Battle // Queen // Queen II // Heavy Metal, Hard Rock, Progressive Metal
Orion // Metallica // Master of Puppets // Heavy Metal, Thrash Metal, Instrumental
Damage Inc. // Metallica// Master of Puppets // Thrash Metal, Heavy Metal
Snow (Hey Oh) // Red Hot Chilli Peppers // Snow (Hey Oh) // Soft Rock, Acoustic
Who Wants To Live Forever // Queen // A Kind of Magic // Power Ballad, Soft Rock
I suggest you listen to…
For a influential playlist: Damage Inc and Orion. Both of these songs are part of the album that revolutionized heavy and thrash metal forever.

NeilWest

veggieman001 wrote:
NeilWest wrote:
I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
Um… okay?

What'd you think of the story?

I thought it was well written and you could become a novel writer.

Just use less inuendo-y titles.

Semblance

It's very balanced.

scratchisthebest

It seems choppy, I don't know why.

Other than that it's pretty good

I am a Lava Expert

veggieman001

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Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:24)

banana500

It's terrible.
Absolutely repulsive.
Causes small infants to uncontrollably sob.
Causes full-grown men to uncontrollably sob.
Induces prolonged periods of constant regurgitation.
Triggers the despair and the fall of all civilization.

Just kidding.

It's nicely written, and the way you handle first-person POV is what really moves the story along. I admire how ambient you make the whole thing seem, too. However, I'm not sure that I entirely understand the plot or the purpose.

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Steam ID: rock on freaky bro

veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:32)

Laternenpfahl

why do you have to open your eyes to notice you are lying in lukewarm water? then again, it might be paint or something

yeah, I'm still here

veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

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veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

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dvd4

veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
SeptimusHeap wrote:
luiysia wrote:
wet
NeilWest wrote:
I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
pervs
If you knew the internet…

you would not think so
Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.
I know…

But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.

I didn't say you had to modify yourkinda odd“art”.

I just said you might want to pick a better title NEXTNote the the “next”time.

YOU WILL REMEMBER MY NAME

veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:09:09)

veggieman001

Nothing is permanent.

Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:09:16)

luiysia

veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
SeptimusHeap wrote:
luiysia wrote:
wet
NeilWest wrote:
I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
pervs
If you knew the internet…

you would not think so
Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.
I know…

But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.

I like it because it's a nice title and it's funny

It’s such a little thing to weep—
So short a thing to sigh—
And yet—by Trades—the size of these
We men and women die!

- Emily Dickinson

banana500

veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
SeptimusHeap wrote:
luiysia wrote:
wet
NeilWest wrote:
I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
pervs
If you knew the internet…

you would not think so
Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.
I know…

But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.
I didn't say you had to modify yourkinda odd“art”.

I just said you might want to pick a better title NEXTNote the the “next”time.
But I think the best title is the one that fits the art best, which this does, so how could I choose one that's better?

(shhh guys there are kids on this site)

But yeah, I like the title! Even if it sounds kinda innuendo-y at first glance, it sums up the general idea of the story well.

3DS FC: 4871-4221-1009 | Notify me before adding so I can add you back!
Steam ID: rock on freaky bro

dvd4

veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
veggieman001 wrote:
dvd4 wrote:
SeptimusHeap wrote:
luiysia wrote:
wet
NeilWest wrote:
I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
pervs
If you knew the internet…

you would not think so
Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.
I know…

But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.
I didn't say you had to modify yourkinda odd“art”.

I just said you might want to pick a better title NEXTNote the the “next”time.
But I think the best title is the one that fits the art best, which this does, so how could I choose one that's better?
Multiply by chuck noris

I mean a more descriptive title.
For example, what would you have titled this?

Water.

I dont think that's a bad name.

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