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- veggieman001
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Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:11)
- veggieman001
- Scratcher
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Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:17)
- mythbusteranimator
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:OI steal others' powers. Why do you have to be so good at writing as well, veggie?
I've been listening to…
Ogre Battle // Queen // Queen II // Heavy Metal, Hard Rock, Progressive Metal
Orion // Metallica // Master of Puppets // Heavy Metal, Thrash Metal, Instrumental
Damage Inc. // Metallica// Master of Puppets // Thrash Metal, Heavy Metal
Snow (Hey Oh) // Red Hot Chilli Peppers // Snow (Hey Oh) // Soft Rock, Acoustic
Who Wants To Live Forever // Queen // A Kind of Magic // Power Ballad, Soft Rock
I suggest you listen to…
For a influential playlist: Damage Inc and Orion. Both of these songs are part of the album that revolutionized heavy and thrash metal forever.
- NeilWest
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I thought it was well written and you could become a novel writer.Um… okay? I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
What'd you think of the story?
Just use less inuendo-y titles.
- scratchisthebest
- Scratcher
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It seems choppy, I don't know why.
Other than that it's pretty good
Other than that it's pretty good
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- veggieman001
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:24)
- banana500
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It's terrible.
Absolutely repulsive.
Causes small infants to uncontrollably sob.
Causes full-grown men to uncontrollably sob.
Induces prolonged periods of constant regurgitation.
Triggers the despair and the fall of all civilization.
Just kidding.
It's nicely written, and the way you handle first-person POV is what really moves the story along. I admire how ambient you make the whole thing seem, too. However, I'm not sure that I entirely understand the plot or the purpose.
Absolutely repulsive.
Causes small infants to uncontrollably sob.
Causes full-grown men to uncontrollably sob.
Induces prolonged periods of constant regurgitation.
Triggers the despair and the fall of all civilization.
Just kidding.
It's nicely written, and the way you handle first-person POV is what really moves the story along. I admire how ambient you make the whole thing seem, too. However, I'm not sure that I entirely understand the plot or the purpose.
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- veggieman001
- Scratcher
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Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:32)
- Laternenpfahl
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Nothing is permanent
why do you have to open your eyes to notice you are lying in lukewarm water? then again, it might be paint or something
yeah, I'm still here
- veggieman001
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:08:50)
- veggieman001
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Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:09:00)
- dvd4
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I didn't say you had to modify yourkinda odd“art”.I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.I know…Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.If you knew the internet…wetpervs I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
you would not think so
But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I just said you might want to pick a better title NEXTNote the the “next”time.
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- veggieman001
- Scratcher
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Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:09:09)
- veggieman001
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Nothing is permanent
Nothing is permanent.
Last edited by veggieman001 (July 19, 2013 01:09:16)
- luiysia
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I like it because it's a nice title and it's funnyI think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.I know…Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.If you knew the internet…wetpervs I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
you would not think so
But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
It’s such a little thing to weep—
So short a thing to sigh—
And yet—by Trades—the size of these
We men and women die!
- Emily Dickinson
- banana500
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(shhh guys there are kids on this site)But I think the best title is the one that fits the art best, which this does, so how could I choose one that's better?I didn't say you had to modify yourkinda odd“art”.I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.I know…Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.If you knew the internet…wetpervs I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
you would not think so
But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I just said you might want to pick a better title NEXTNote the the “next”time.
But yeah, I like the title! Even if it sounds kinda innuendo-y at first glance, it sums up the general idea of the story well.
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- dvd4
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Water.For example, what would you have titled this?Multiply by chuck norisBut I think the best title is the one that fits the art best, which this does, so how could I choose one that's better?I didn't say you had to modify yourkinda odd“art”.I think the title is well-fitting for the piece and don't see why I should have to modify my art just because some people aren't mature enough to handle it.I know…Please, just put that at the back of your mind. That wasn't my intent.If you knew the internet…wetpervs I'll save my first thoughts of the title for 4chan.
you would not think so
But try andcome up with a better title next time ;)
I just said you might want to pick a better title NEXTNote the the “next”time.
I mean a more descriptive title.
I dont think that's a bad name.
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