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- Coco_animator
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Part 1 Weekly - this is for @Spire-
Lyra broke into a grin as Delaney embraced her. Delaney then looks at her. “I'm going in right now,” Lyra's grin gradually fades as she hears Delaney's remark. “N-now? But you can't! The commanders-,” “The commanders deprived me because I had a limp. Now, I won't get hurt! I'm sure they will be pleased that one more person will be assisting them,” Lyra bites her lip and looks at the desert. Bodies were laid on the ground like leaves on a tree. She didn't want to let them go, but she knew that nothing would ever stop Delaney. “Fine,” She said. “Fine?” Delaney asked, surprised. They had mixed feelings - they were glad that their friend had let them, but at the same time, shocked that she would let them into such a dangerous situation. “Fine,” Lyra repeated. “But I'm going with you,” Delaney looks at their wooden leg. 'If Lyra gets slaughtered, it will all be my fault. Can I really make a difference in the battlefield?" They thought. “But you might get killed!” They blurt out. Lyra puts on her armour and adjusts the belts. “And so might you. I'm not going to let my best friend get killed alone in a sweltering hot desert without a single friend. If you're going, I'm coming. It's as simple as that,” Delaney knew they couldn't change their friends mind, whatever they would say. They nodded encouragingly and put on their armour. “It's time to fight,” They both slowly advance down the hill and into the desert. The green grass slowly withered to become pale golden grains of sand. The temperature rose, and within minutes, they both were covered in innumerous beads of sweat. “I'm starting to think we'll never reach the battlefield. It feels like we'll die of heat or dehydration,” Lyra croaks. Her throat is dry, sore and itchy. She would have done almost anything in exchange for water at that moment. (322 words)
Lyra broke into a grin as Delaney embraced her. Delaney then looks at her. “I'm going in right now,” Lyra's grin gradually fades as she hears Delaney's remark. “N-now? But you can't! The commanders-,” “The commanders deprived me because I had a limp. Now, I won't get hurt! I'm sure they will be pleased that one more person will be assisting them,” Lyra bites her lip and looks at the desert. Bodies were laid on the ground like leaves on a tree. She didn't want to let them go, but she knew that nothing would ever stop Delaney. “Fine,” She said. “Fine?” Delaney asked, surprised. They had mixed feelings - they were glad that their friend had let them, but at the same time, shocked that she would let them into such a dangerous situation. “Fine,” Lyra repeated. “But I'm going with you,” Delaney looks at their wooden leg. 'If Lyra gets slaughtered, it will all be my fault. Can I really make a difference in the battlefield?" They thought. “But you might get killed!” They blurt out. Lyra puts on her armour and adjusts the belts. “And so might you. I'm not going to let my best friend get killed alone in a sweltering hot desert without a single friend. If you're going, I'm coming. It's as simple as that,” Delaney knew they couldn't change their friends mind, whatever they would say. They nodded encouragingly and put on their armour. “It's time to fight,” They both slowly advance down the hill and into the desert. The green grass slowly withered to become pale golden grains of sand. The temperature rose, and within minutes, they both were covered in innumerous beads of sweat. “I'm starting to think we'll never reach the battlefield. It feels like we'll die of heat or dehydration,” Lyra croaks. Her throat is dry, sore and itchy. She would have done almost anything in exchange for water at that moment. (322 words)
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- FirestarForReal
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
daily 3/15
303 words
“How much does this cost?” Tamara looked wonderingly at the glossy white robot. It resembled a human, but all skin was sleek white metal plating. The plating's colors could change in a second, resembling a human or a creature from any other planet. It could be your mother, daughter, friend, lover, do anything. It could cook for you, clean for you, and it was powered by any sun from any galaxy.
“Made them myself,” Spirit slapped the robot lovingly. “Took years of traveling and eclectic materials. Yer gonna hafta pay a lot to get them.”
“How much?” Tamara said breathlessly, pulling out her virtual wallet. “I can pay, I promise. I need-”
“Everyone says that,” Spirit yawned, already bored. “But it costs an arm and a leg, I tell ya. I've had customers lining up all day and all night to get them, and so many companies wanting to buy their technology- ah just tell ‘em, it costs an arm and a leg.”
“Even companies can’t afford it? Like You-niverse?” Tamara named that universe company, and a couple others, as well. I'll never afford it! she thought with a sigh.
“Ya misunderstand,” Spirit smiled maliciously. “Ya have to give me an ARM and a LEG. And I ain't paying for any surgeries, get tha' yerself.”
“But…why not just take currencies? Why an arm and a leg?” Tamara gasped.
“You need to sacrifice EVERYTHING for them. The Living Robot 4000 isn't going to go to any lazy rich fool.” Spirit turned to go back in her shop of odds and ends.
“I'll get that robot, I will,” Tamara vowed with all her heart.
Spirit chuckled. “So you say. Well, everyone's vowed that, and one has yet to return for it.”
303 words
“How much does this cost?” Tamara looked wonderingly at the glossy white robot. It resembled a human, but all skin was sleek white metal plating. The plating's colors could change in a second, resembling a human or a creature from any other planet. It could be your mother, daughter, friend, lover, do anything. It could cook for you, clean for you, and it was powered by any sun from any galaxy.
“Made them myself,” Spirit slapped the robot lovingly. “Took years of traveling and eclectic materials. Yer gonna hafta pay a lot to get them.”
“How much?” Tamara said breathlessly, pulling out her virtual wallet. “I can pay, I promise. I need-”
“Everyone says that,” Spirit yawned, already bored. “But it costs an arm and a leg, I tell ya. I've had customers lining up all day and all night to get them, and so many companies wanting to buy their technology- ah just tell ‘em, it costs an arm and a leg.”
“Even companies can’t afford it? Like You-niverse?” Tamara named that universe company, and a couple others, as well. I'll never afford it! she thought with a sigh.
“Ya misunderstand,” Spirit smiled maliciously. “Ya have to give me an ARM and a LEG. And I ain't paying for any surgeries, get tha' yerself.”
“But…why not just take currencies? Why an arm and a leg?” Tamara gasped.
“You need to sacrifice EVERYTHING for them. The Living Robot 4000 isn't going to go to any lazy rich fool.” Spirit turned to go back in her shop of odds and ends.
“I'll get that robot, I will,” Tamara vowed with all her heart.
Spirit chuckled. “So you say. Well, everyone's vowed that, and one has yet to return for it.”
- dolphin_spring_water
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
15th Main Daily - March 2022
Idiom: Bury head in the sand. (meaning: hide from the truth)
395 words
“Come on, we’re gonna be late!”
“I know, you don’t have to tell me again,” I grumble back under my breath as I make my way down the hallway.
My mum either doesn’t hear or just pretends not to, and soon we’re out in the car on the way to school. It’s only a few minutes’ drive, and soon I’m waving goodbye to my mum and heading straight to my locker, nearly speed-walking. She’s right. I’m nearly late.
“Hey Em!”
“Oh hi Lucy! How are you doing?”
“Good!” she replies, bounces around happily as she usually does. “What ‘bout you?”
“Good too, yeah, in a rush, my sis took forever to get ready in the morning,” I say casually, unlocking my locker as I’m speaking. “Oh, by the way, I’m sorry, I didn’t get to do my part on the group project last night. Y’know how chaotic things have been lately. Could you maybe, you know, well… do my part? Pleeeeease?” I say, smiling sheepishly and not meeting Lucy’s eyes as I take out my books.
Lucy shakes her head, scoffing. “Of course you didn’t!” she says, hiding her annoyance under a fake light tone. I don’t blame her for being irritated. “I can’t believe it, you know I don’t have time do your part! And this is worth so much of our grades!”
I know what’s coming before it happens, as soon as the words are out of Lucy’s mouth. Involuntarily, her legs take her over to the sandpit a few metres away, and she plants her head directly in the sand until she is standing on her head. Of course, her refusal to believe that I hadn’t done the project would cause her to bury her head in the sand. This always happens; she’s so dramatic, and I can’t help but laugh.
But this laughter soon fades away as I hear the bell ring and realise how late I am. No, I can’t believe it! The teacher is going to be so mad. But then, things go from bad to worse when my legs carry me over beside Lucy and my head sticks itself straight in the sand next to her. I feel like kicking myself. Seriously, this is getting pathetic. Hiding from the truth that I’m going to be late? I sigh in frustration, sand filling my mouth as I think.
Ugh.
Idiom: Bury head in the sand. (meaning: hide from the truth)
395 words
“Come on, we’re gonna be late!”
“I know, you don’t have to tell me again,” I grumble back under my breath as I make my way down the hallway.
My mum either doesn’t hear or just pretends not to, and soon we’re out in the car on the way to school. It’s only a few minutes’ drive, and soon I’m waving goodbye to my mum and heading straight to my locker, nearly speed-walking. She’s right. I’m nearly late.
“Hey Em!”
“Oh hi Lucy! How are you doing?”
“Good!” she replies, bounces around happily as she usually does. “What ‘bout you?”
“Good too, yeah, in a rush, my sis took forever to get ready in the morning,” I say casually, unlocking my locker as I’m speaking. “Oh, by the way, I’m sorry, I didn’t get to do my part on the group project last night. Y’know how chaotic things have been lately. Could you maybe, you know, well… do my part? Pleeeeease?” I say, smiling sheepishly and not meeting Lucy’s eyes as I take out my books.
Lucy shakes her head, scoffing. “Of course you didn’t!” she says, hiding her annoyance under a fake light tone. I don’t blame her for being irritated. “I can’t believe it, you know I don’t have time do your part! And this is worth so much of our grades!”
I know what’s coming before it happens, as soon as the words are out of Lucy’s mouth. Involuntarily, her legs take her over to the sandpit a few metres away, and she plants her head directly in the sand until she is standing on her head. Of course, her refusal to believe that I hadn’t done the project would cause her to bury her head in the sand. This always happens; she’s so dramatic, and I can’t help but laugh.
But this laughter soon fades away as I hear the bell ring and realise how late I am. No, I can’t believe it! The teacher is going to be so mad. But then, things go from bad to worse when my legs carry me over beside Lucy and my head sticks itself straight in the sand next to her. I feel like kicking myself. Seriously, this is getting pathetic. Hiding from the truth that I’m going to be late? I sigh in frustration, sand filling my mouth as I think.
Ugh.
- Airfairy934
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Premise
You were given a necklace by your mother when you were born. Your mother runns the local apothecary and is the best healer for miles around. People always say her healing abilities are like magic but she shrugs them off and laughs - there’s a fine line between being a so-called ‘magical healer’ and being accused of witchcraft. Your mother and you are extremely close and she always tells you that your necklace will help you when you need it most and you wake up one morning to find it glowing brightly. Scared of what the townsfolk would say, you go on a long walk before coming back that evening to find all of your town has disappeared including your beloved mother. Panicked and scared, you vow to find how what happened and you start going through your mother’s notes only to find out, there’s alot more to your mother than meets the eye.
You were given a necklace by your mother when you were born. Your mother runns the local apothecary and is the best healer for miles around. People always say her healing abilities are like magic but she shrugs them off and laughs - there’s a fine line between being a so-called ‘magical healer’ and being accused of witchcraft. Your mother and you are extremely close and she always tells you that your necklace will help you when you need it most and you wake up one morning to find it glowing brightly. Scared of what the townsfolk would say, you go on a long walk before coming back that evening to find all of your town has disappeared including your beloved mother. Panicked and scared, you vow to find how what happened and you start going through your mother’s notes only to find out, there’s alot more to your mother than meets the eye.
- Cru-mble
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100+ posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
daily. march 15
357 words
Idiom: out of the blue
It was so out of the blue when it happen—thwack! Ouch. Well, it isn’t exactly like that anymore, since we’ve learned to expect it. But the day it started, we were all in a panic. You see, on March 15th, at precisely 9:24 in the morning, something strange happened. And when I say strange, I mean odd, weird, crazy, very strange. Nothing really exciting happened in our town, until this. Late at night, we’d had our first firework show in years; nearly everyone came to admire the spectacular. The last firework was a shining blur, causing the whole crowd to look up in awe. The aftermath of the firework had remained much longer than the others, but by then, no one seemed to care. Everyone had gone to bed, and in the morning, confused faces gazed upon the blue cloud hovering above the ground. It didn’t seem like much of an issue; it wasn’t doing anything. Until things started…flying out of it. As soon as someone mentioned or did something ‘out of the blue’, an object flew out from it. The first was someone dropping out of school, and the fear of disappointing their parents. As soon as they input their final decision, a huge stack of paperwork slammed into the floor of the apartment. Like I said—out of the blue. All around town, unexpected things were happening, and the items visualized it. Some things repeated themselves. A cake collapsed from all the layers, and another cake appeared in midair, only to fall and create a huge mess. All of our problems started with the blue, and then it changed. Now all sorts of things were flying out to cause trouble, not when trouble was caused. But no matter what we did, the blue blob still bothered us. We tried boarding ourselves into our homes, but the annoying objects still popped into the atmosphere—whoever or whatever gave them teleportation powers must have had something huge against us. We couldn’t figure it out. We couldn’t understand why now, of all times, it would start happening. This dilemma wore on for weeks, until we were completely, utterly, exhausted.
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- gh0stwriter
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
— writing comp —
“A little bird”
- ABAB structure
- Based on the book Catherine, Called Birdy by Karen Cushman
- Pantoum Poem
A little bird
Warbling a soft song
Struggling to be heard
Trying not to move along
Warbling a soft song
Beating wings against her cage
Trying not to move along
Staring at the pictures on each page
Beating her wings against her cage
Unable to survive alone
Staring at the pictures on each page
Never satisfied with each stitch sewn
Unable to survive alone
Too stubborn to leave the nest
Never satisfied with each stitch sewn
Starting to protest
Too stubborn to leave the nest
Struggling to be heard
Starting to protest
A little bird
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- scratch_warrior_cat
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500+ posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
The Quest
Written by Wari
150 words
Your main character wakes up one morning to find their community in chaos. When they ask what’s going on, a friend tells them that a precious item is missing, one that is integral to life as they know it. After a period of tension and delay, during which confusion and chaos run rampant, the leaders of the community announce that a team will be put together to find and retrieve the item.
To the main character’s surprise, they are chosen to lead the expedition. They bring together a team of their closest friends, and begin to investigate what has happened. After some questioning and research, they discover that the item was probably taken by a rival group.
So the friends embark on a journey to retrieve the item, knowing that they will encounter dangerous obstacles. But they carry on nonetheless, determined to save their community and find adventure and glory.
- -redredrobin-
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
WEEKLY 2
Part 1 - 389 words
Addie’s part: “There was a legend, in the small town of Avandale, which takes place in somewhere that would not immediately pop into someone's mind. No, no one could have thought of it at first. The first thing that would pop up in the citizens of the population of Avandale's minds would be a home, in which it would be haunted, with cobwebs stuck to the ceilings everywhere and bats roaming around the place. Another one would be the Supermarket of Avandale. It was already pretty dodgy and anyone with a good sense of morals would think of it almost immediately, with its old walls and cracked windows, and even the broken shards of glass that fell on the floor was barely hard to miss, though no one bothered to do the job a cleaner would do - pick it up. No, it wasn't any of those, nor was it the parks in random places around the town, or even the carparks that howl at night, with the late-night screeching of car breaks and tires that would occasionally be heard from across the street. It even was not the petrol stations that were practically open 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Instead, the legend took place in the official High School of Avandale, in which a stealthy ghost would roam the school halls during midnight, spying and traumatising any poor human being that somehow came across it. It was a time in which it was called the ‘Lengthy Hour’, as the ghost would stay until the sun rose. Many times, it would just hide in a corner and watch the students come in and out, weaving in and out of the doorframes, chatting and talking to their friends like nothing strange was happening; that everything was normal. The ghost didn't have a name, though many staff members have claimed they have seen the ghosts, but students being students, didn't believe them a single bit. Cathy was one of them. Who could've thought that an innocent school could be the place where a haunted legend took place?”
Cathy had never believed the rumors. Not when a teacher was found passed out from shock in the hallways one morning; not when a student sprinted out of the school right around sunrise claiming to have seen it. She knew it was a matter of time before someone took advantage of the fear these people had and she was determined not to fall for it when it happened. If there really was a ghost, it was probably some staff member or student putting on a costume and scaring people just for some laughs. People around here, they were just so easily fooled.
On one day during the depths of winter, she arrived at school early to prepare for a presentation. She walked alone — the buses wouldn’t make their rounds for another hour at the least. Her shoes clicked with each step across the icy grounds. The silence dampened the crisp morning, but Cathy didn’t mind the lack of voices in this so often raucous environment. Only today the silence was ominous; it was, after all, the Lengthy Hour.
Cathy laughed and shook her head. What a joke, these people shrieking about ghosts in the school. The entire town was paranoid.
She swung open the school doors - thank goodness they were unlocked - and headed to the auditorium. She propped open the doors so as to not get locked in. It felt so empty without the hundreds of students that would occupy this room later today. She unloaded her bag on the stage and went about setting everything up. The computer, check, the cords had to go there, no, wrong cord—
Suddenly she heard a sound. Wasn’t the school supposed to be empty? It seemed to come from outside the room, a strange sliding noise and a humming. She crouched behind the table, staring out the doors that she had decided to leave open. Why? She couldn’t remember.
Snakelike tendrils appeared from one side, going from side to side as they made their way down the hallway. And then they revealed a long wooden stick, being held by a man in blue with some earbuds in.
Of course the janitor was here! The doors were unlocked! Cathy stood up and brushed herself off, rolling her eyes at what she’d just done. There was no ghost and there never had been, right?
Part 2 - 509 words
Name: Ells
Age: 102
Species: Dwarf
Personality and Traits (200): Ells is strong and confident in themself. They believe that being a century old makes them better than others because they have more life experience, though much of it was spent in the same place. A lot of their confidence is actually a facade because they’re not fully sure of their strength. They tend to be logical and down to earth because they have experience dealing with real threats and they realize that there’s no time to just be throwing out ideas that could never work. They try to avoid doing things just for fun and in today’s world would probably be a target for plenty of “Loosen up!” laughs their direction. They prefer to work alone because they find that sometimes it’s pointless to try to trust someone else; this is connected to something that happened in their past. When it comes to situations where brawn is necessary they’re quite capable even though they’re often doubted by people for their height of 4’2. They have a temper that they are not afraid to let loose on anyone if something is messed up, especially when the people who made the mistakes are in positions of authority and should know better.
Wants, Hopes, and Strengths (202): If they could have it their way, Ells would live alone and underground in a stony area where they’re able to mine and build. They don’t have very much family and they were never close, but a part of them hopes that they could get a chance to reconcile or at least make sure their family apologizes for their toxicity. They want to get things done without questions asked and they’d like to just live their life. They’re really strong and good at lifting. They enjoy mining and finding precious metals, especially because those can be sold to humans at high prices. They’re very good at those things and will study stone on sight no matter what. They wish that they could just study and work with rocks but they have to do other things so that they can support themself. While they’re very strong both physically and mentally, they have very little agility and they’re more based on endurance and stamina if in a fight. They want to be taken seriously as a dwarf especially because most people disrespecting them are many years younger (considering that they’re over a century old!) They would really like to grow a few inches too.
Dislikes and Fears (107): Ells can’t stand people who challenge their authority. If they say they want to do something they want to do it and if they ask other people to get something done it’s final. As a dwarf, they are often looked down on or not taken seriously because they’re shorter than most people they work with. This annoys them to no end and they will be happy to fight anyone who ridicules them in that regard. They’re afraid of being incapable; not because they overvalue their strength, but because the moment they stop being able to do the heavy lifting or difficult hammering they’re useless as a dwarf.
Part 3 - 400 words
This story takes place in Akihorren, a gnome city deep in a forest. The city has a high population and thrives, but is very unwelcome toward outsiders. They never take kindly to humans in their territory and have no intention of allowing any to pass through. They’re willing to tolerate other races - elves, dwarves, et cetera, but they hold a very specific grudge against humans for some reason. They have simple-appearing but effective weaponry and their army, despite being a third of the average human’s height, is prestigious as well as fierce. Many young gnomes aspire to join, though it seems slightly pointless to have a constantly training army when no one actually wants to invade and the land around them is uninhabited and available. Apart from the army, they’re very good with architectural design and engineering and innovate things quite often; a fair percentage of the buildings are just creative workspaces. This raises the question of why their weapons are so outdated - who still uses bows and arrows? - but despite the look of them, those bows and old-timey cannons are quite powerful and updated. The city’s buildings are not particularly tall, but many are in trees to take advantage of the space. The treehouses are very carefully engineered and there’s an entire part of the city high up; many have bridges to other buildings or staircases from houses on the ground. Nearly all of them have ladders for easy access. The city usually has warm weather in the summer, but may deal with harsh winds in the autumn and winter that can even be destructive of the treehouses. They often deal with having to repair the bridges despite the strong materials and designs used to keep them up. The spring usually brings light rains; the gnomes celebrate the first rain each year with gatherings and feasts. The city is quite unknown by the outside world, especially as most of its citizens never leave and never want to. However it does show up on most maps and isn’t particularly difficult to get to; many people simply deem it a waste of time. The story takes place during the aftermath of one such harsh wind at the end of the winter. Your main character is in the city just before the first rains of spring begin to fall and due to the celebrations, the gnomes are less hostile toward your character.
Part 4 - 151 words
“Your main character stumbles upon an old key, and suspects that it would fit perfectly into a locket they’ve owned for years.”
Your main character has a silver locket on a peculiar chain that they’ve owned for years. It came from someone close to them, already rusted a bit. They were told that there was something inside but never knew what. It was locked then, and they still haven’t figured out a way to open it. They wear it constantly, but one day they take it off before they go out. That day they accidentally trip over something on the ground - when they go to check, they discover a slightly rusted key. It’s on the same kind of strange chain as the locket! They instinctively know that this is the way to open that locket and discover what’s inside. However, when they return to try it out, the locket has disappeared. They’re furious, wondering who could have stolen it, and vow to find the locket that they’ve finally acquired the means to open.
Part 5 - 1037 words
Character: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=66#post-6112084
Setting: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=28#post-6086112
Premise: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/586550/?page=3#post-6116751
Jay was muttering under his breath as he walked home from school. One of the elven teachers had been showing clear favoritism to the nonhuman students, and it was getting more annoying every day! They were practically spelling a keysmash out loud.
A gnome on a broomstick narrowly missed running straight into them. “Sorry!” came a little yelp, as the tiny man zoomed away. Jay grinned for a moment - then decided to go back to sulking.
It was just so pointless! Of course, there were only a few humans in the school at all; maybe the elves wouldn’t hate them so much if there were more. Or maybe that would make it even worse! Jay continued to mutter nonsense words, shaking his head.
Suddenly, their hands began to adopt an eerie glow that shined directly into his face. Maybe they weren’t nonsense words after all! He was doing magic!
But the government, the laws against humans having magic — if anyone found out about it, the least he would get is a year in a dusty prison cell. They squeezed their hands into fists and shoved them into his pockets, hoping no one had seen them glowing just a moment before.
Of course, someone had. “Excuse me?” came the voice of someone tapping on his shoulder. Jay crossed his fingers, hoping that they were just here to ask him how he did his hair, or where they got their shoes, and not why his hands were glowing a minute ago.
“Yes?” he said as he turned, smiling, dreading the next question. They found themself face to face with a blue-haired elf who didn’t look happy at all. Some government official here to arrest him or something, already?
“You’ve got magic,” said the elf simply. It wasn’t anger, and it wasn’t fascination either. “I want you to help me.”
“Why?”
“You have magic. And you’re easy to blackmail because I can report you at any time to the Human Power Control Department and they’ll be happy to take you in.”
Of course, two minutes into discovering they had powers and he was already being blackmailed. What power did he even have? His hands just glowed for a few seconds. “Okay, sure, fine, I’ll help you. What do you want?”
“Meet me here at seven and I’ll explain.”
And he didn’t have a say in the matter. What had they gotten themself into?
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He pulled his hood over his face, hands in pockets once again. This time it was because of the cold, not the magic. They’d already had a hard time sneaking out, and they knew that their parents wouldn’t be lenient when they found out what he did. Of course, he could bear that. What he might not be able to bear was helping this elf with something where glowing hands came in handy.
They had no control over their powers; they hadn’t even gotten their hands to glow again since the afternoon. There was no way he’d be able to help an elf at midnight in the middle of a tiny town. That elf wasn’t even here yet!
And then a swift figure appeared that he already knew was the elf from before. She took off her own hood and looked at him with disdain.
“Ah. You’re here. Wonderful.” She started walking one direction and Jay followed.
“So what exactly do you need help with? You said that you would explain it all now but all you’ve done is walk away,” Jay said after a moment.
“Foolish human. Boy, we’re climbing Mount Brilla and we’re not coming back until my problem is solved. If you’d like to back out you can do so at any time! I have the HPCD in my contacts and I can easily ask them to come and detain you if you’d rather not assist me.”
Jay groaned under his breath. No backing out now!
Wait, what did she say?
“Climbing Mount Brilla? Are you insane?”
“HPCD on speed dial. Don’t yell so loud.”
And they continued walking, all the way to the base of the mountain that terrified everyone. It was said that either you’d drive the wildlife out, or they’d drive you out themselves. And Jay, hands still shoved in his pockets, followed the elf whose name he didn’t even know up the treacherous paths. There were multiple times where he looked down and wondered if maybe his power was floating, and he could just escape by jumping. Not that he would risk that being a failure.
They arrived about halfway up the mountain late in the night, the moon just a sliver in the sky. He’d never be home in time! Good thing it was a weekend. He should have left a note.
The elf gracefully hopped off the trail and led him to a glade. They watched their feet every step of the way, afraid that some sentient plant would come out and grab him. People weren’t supposed to climb here, and if they did, they weren’t supposed to leave the paths! But he had no choice.
“Look around,” said the elf. Jay struggled to put his finger on the tone; the elf had clearly had experience disguising her intentions with her voice.
He did as she asked. The glade was gorgeous if not for the circumstances. There was a large curved tree that waved around sagging branches of blue. The grass was soft and lush; practically the opposite of the dead lawns on every house in the town. But it was the animals that shone in the darkness. A group of deer had vines wrapped around their pale antlers, vines with the same eerie glow as Jay’s hands had been showing before. Rabbits had bits of something glowing scattered in their fur. It was truly a sight.
“So what was it you needed help with?” Jay asked, looking back at the elf. Suddenly he saw that she was flanked by a dozen other elves, armed with magic and weapons.
“Oh, we needed help rounding up magical humans. You seemed like a perfect candidate! Come with us,” she said smugly, and two elves grabbed him. The entire group continued the climb to the top, like some somber funeral march.
total: 2486 words
Part 1 - 389 words
Addie’s part: “There was a legend, in the small town of Avandale, which takes place in somewhere that would not immediately pop into someone's mind. No, no one could have thought of it at first. The first thing that would pop up in the citizens of the population of Avandale's minds would be a home, in which it would be haunted, with cobwebs stuck to the ceilings everywhere and bats roaming around the place. Another one would be the Supermarket of Avandale. It was already pretty dodgy and anyone with a good sense of morals would think of it almost immediately, with its old walls and cracked windows, and even the broken shards of glass that fell on the floor was barely hard to miss, though no one bothered to do the job a cleaner would do - pick it up. No, it wasn't any of those, nor was it the parks in random places around the town, or even the carparks that howl at night, with the late-night screeching of car breaks and tires that would occasionally be heard from across the street. It even was not the petrol stations that were practically open 24 hours a day, 7 days a week. Instead, the legend took place in the official High School of Avandale, in which a stealthy ghost would roam the school halls during midnight, spying and traumatising any poor human being that somehow came across it. It was a time in which it was called the ‘Lengthy Hour’, as the ghost would stay until the sun rose. Many times, it would just hide in a corner and watch the students come in and out, weaving in and out of the doorframes, chatting and talking to their friends like nothing strange was happening; that everything was normal. The ghost didn't have a name, though many staff members have claimed they have seen the ghosts, but students being students, didn't believe them a single bit. Cathy was one of them. Who could've thought that an innocent school could be the place where a haunted legend took place?”
Cathy had never believed the rumors. Not when a teacher was found passed out from shock in the hallways one morning; not when a student sprinted out of the school right around sunrise claiming to have seen it. She knew it was a matter of time before someone took advantage of the fear these people had and she was determined not to fall for it when it happened. If there really was a ghost, it was probably some staff member or student putting on a costume and scaring people just for some laughs. People around here, they were just so easily fooled.
On one day during the depths of winter, she arrived at school early to prepare for a presentation. She walked alone — the buses wouldn’t make their rounds for another hour at the least. Her shoes clicked with each step across the icy grounds. The silence dampened the crisp morning, but Cathy didn’t mind the lack of voices in this so often raucous environment. Only today the silence was ominous; it was, after all, the Lengthy Hour.
Cathy laughed and shook her head. What a joke, these people shrieking about ghosts in the school. The entire town was paranoid.
She swung open the school doors - thank goodness they were unlocked - and headed to the auditorium. She propped open the doors so as to not get locked in. It felt so empty without the hundreds of students that would occupy this room later today. She unloaded her bag on the stage and went about setting everything up. The computer, check, the cords had to go there, no, wrong cord—
Suddenly she heard a sound. Wasn’t the school supposed to be empty? It seemed to come from outside the room, a strange sliding noise and a humming. She crouched behind the table, staring out the doors that she had decided to leave open. Why? She couldn’t remember.
Snakelike tendrils appeared from one side, going from side to side as they made their way down the hallway. And then they revealed a long wooden stick, being held by a man in blue with some earbuds in.
Of course the janitor was here! The doors were unlocked! Cathy stood up and brushed herself off, rolling her eyes at what she’d just done. There was no ghost and there never had been, right?
Part 2 - 509 words
Name: Ells
Age: 102
Species: Dwarf
Personality and Traits (200): Ells is strong and confident in themself. They believe that being a century old makes them better than others because they have more life experience, though much of it was spent in the same place. A lot of their confidence is actually a facade because they’re not fully sure of their strength. They tend to be logical and down to earth because they have experience dealing with real threats and they realize that there’s no time to just be throwing out ideas that could never work. They try to avoid doing things just for fun and in today’s world would probably be a target for plenty of “Loosen up!” laughs their direction. They prefer to work alone because they find that sometimes it’s pointless to try to trust someone else; this is connected to something that happened in their past. When it comes to situations where brawn is necessary they’re quite capable even though they’re often doubted by people for their height of 4’2. They have a temper that they are not afraid to let loose on anyone if something is messed up, especially when the people who made the mistakes are in positions of authority and should know better.
Wants, Hopes, and Strengths (202): If they could have it their way, Ells would live alone and underground in a stony area where they’re able to mine and build. They don’t have very much family and they were never close, but a part of them hopes that they could get a chance to reconcile or at least make sure their family apologizes for their toxicity. They want to get things done without questions asked and they’d like to just live their life. They’re really strong and good at lifting. They enjoy mining and finding precious metals, especially because those can be sold to humans at high prices. They’re very good at those things and will study stone on sight no matter what. They wish that they could just study and work with rocks but they have to do other things so that they can support themself. While they’re very strong both physically and mentally, they have very little agility and they’re more based on endurance and stamina if in a fight. They want to be taken seriously as a dwarf especially because most people disrespecting them are many years younger (considering that they’re over a century old!) They would really like to grow a few inches too.
Dislikes and Fears (107): Ells can’t stand people who challenge their authority. If they say they want to do something they want to do it and if they ask other people to get something done it’s final. As a dwarf, they are often looked down on or not taken seriously because they’re shorter than most people they work with. This annoys them to no end and they will be happy to fight anyone who ridicules them in that regard. They’re afraid of being incapable; not because they overvalue their strength, but because the moment they stop being able to do the heavy lifting or difficult hammering they’re useless as a dwarf.
Part 3 - 400 words
This story takes place in Akihorren, a gnome city deep in a forest. The city has a high population and thrives, but is very unwelcome toward outsiders. They never take kindly to humans in their territory and have no intention of allowing any to pass through. They’re willing to tolerate other races - elves, dwarves, et cetera, but they hold a very specific grudge against humans for some reason. They have simple-appearing but effective weaponry and their army, despite being a third of the average human’s height, is prestigious as well as fierce. Many young gnomes aspire to join, though it seems slightly pointless to have a constantly training army when no one actually wants to invade and the land around them is uninhabited and available. Apart from the army, they’re very good with architectural design and engineering and innovate things quite often; a fair percentage of the buildings are just creative workspaces. This raises the question of why their weapons are so outdated - who still uses bows and arrows? - but despite the look of them, those bows and old-timey cannons are quite powerful and updated. The city’s buildings are not particularly tall, but many are in trees to take advantage of the space. The treehouses are very carefully engineered and there’s an entire part of the city high up; many have bridges to other buildings or staircases from houses on the ground. Nearly all of them have ladders for easy access. The city usually has warm weather in the summer, but may deal with harsh winds in the autumn and winter that can even be destructive of the treehouses. They often deal with having to repair the bridges despite the strong materials and designs used to keep them up. The spring usually brings light rains; the gnomes celebrate the first rain each year with gatherings and feasts. The city is quite unknown by the outside world, especially as most of its citizens never leave and never want to. However it does show up on most maps and isn’t particularly difficult to get to; many people simply deem it a waste of time. The story takes place during the aftermath of one such harsh wind at the end of the winter. Your main character is in the city just before the first rains of spring begin to fall and due to the celebrations, the gnomes are less hostile toward your character.
Part 4 - 151 words
“Your main character stumbles upon an old key, and suspects that it would fit perfectly into a locket they’ve owned for years.”
Your main character has a silver locket on a peculiar chain that they’ve owned for years. It came from someone close to them, already rusted a bit. They were told that there was something inside but never knew what. It was locked then, and they still haven’t figured out a way to open it. They wear it constantly, but one day they take it off before they go out. That day they accidentally trip over something on the ground - when they go to check, they discover a slightly rusted key. It’s on the same kind of strange chain as the locket! They instinctively know that this is the way to open that locket and discover what’s inside. However, when they return to try it out, the locket has disappeared. They’re furious, wondering who could have stolen it, and vow to find the locket that they’ve finally acquired the means to open.
Part 5 - 1037 words
Character: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=66#post-6112084
Setting: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=28#post-6086112
Premise: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/586550/?page=3#post-6116751
Jay was muttering under his breath as he walked home from school. One of the elven teachers had been showing clear favoritism to the nonhuman students, and it was getting more annoying every day! They were practically spelling a keysmash out loud.
A gnome on a broomstick narrowly missed running straight into them. “Sorry!” came a little yelp, as the tiny man zoomed away. Jay grinned for a moment - then decided to go back to sulking.
It was just so pointless! Of course, there were only a few humans in the school at all; maybe the elves wouldn’t hate them so much if there were more. Or maybe that would make it even worse! Jay continued to mutter nonsense words, shaking his head.
Suddenly, their hands began to adopt an eerie glow that shined directly into his face. Maybe they weren’t nonsense words after all! He was doing magic!
But the government, the laws against humans having magic — if anyone found out about it, the least he would get is a year in a dusty prison cell. They squeezed their hands into fists and shoved them into his pockets, hoping no one had seen them glowing just a moment before.
Of course, someone had. “Excuse me?” came the voice of someone tapping on his shoulder. Jay crossed his fingers, hoping that they were just here to ask him how he did his hair, or where they got their shoes, and not why his hands were glowing a minute ago.
“Yes?” he said as he turned, smiling, dreading the next question. They found themself face to face with a blue-haired elf who didn’t look happy at all. Some government official here to arrest him or something, already?
“You’ve got magic,” said the elf simply. It wasn’t anger, and it wasn’t fascination either. “I want you to help me.”
“Why?”
“You have magic. And you’re easy to blackmail because I can report you at any time to the Human Power Control Department and they’ll be happy to take you in.”
Of course, two minutes into discovering they had powers and he was already being blackmailed. What power did he even have? His hands just glowed for a few seconds. “Okay, sure, fine, I’ll help you. What do you want?”
“Meet me here at seven and I’ll explain.”
And he didn’t have a say in the matter. What had they gotten themself into?
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He pulled his hood over his face, hands in pockets once again. This time it was because of the cold, not the magic. They’d already had a hard time sneaking out, and they knew that their parents wouldn’t be lenient when they found out what he did. Of course, he could bear that. What he might not be able to bear was helping this elf with something where glowing hands came in handy.
They had no control over their powers; they hadn’t even gotten their hands to glow again since the afternoon. There was no way he’d be able to help an elf at midnight in the middle of a tiny town. That elf wasn’t even here yet!
And then a swift figure appeared that he already knew was the elf from before. She took off her own hood and looked at him with disdain.
“Ah. You’re here. Wonderful.” She started walking one direction and Jay followed.
“So what exactly do you need help with? You said that you would explain it all now but all you’ve done is walk away,” Jay said after a moment.
“Foolish human. Boy, we’re climbing Mount Brilla and we’re not coming back until my problem is solved. If you’d like to back out you can do so at any time! I have the HPCD in my contacts and I can easily ask them to come and detain you if you’d rather not assist me.”
Jay groaned under his breath. No backing out now!
Wait, what did she say?
“Climbing Mount Brilla? Are you insane?”
“HPCD on speed dial. Don’t yell so loud.”
And they continued walking, all the way to the base of the mountain that terrified everyone. It was said that either you’d drive the wildlife out, or they’d drive you out themselves. And Jay, hands still shoved in his pockets, followed the elf whose name he didn’t even know up the treacherous paths. There were multiple times where he looked down and wondered if maybe his power was floating, and he could just escape by jumping. Not that he would risk that being a failure.
They arrived about halfway up the mountain late in the night, the moon just a sliver in the sky. He’d never be home in time! Good thing it was a weekend. He should have left a note.
The elf gracefully hopped off the trail and led him to a glade. They watched their feet every step of the way, afraid that some sentient plant would come out and grab him. People weren’t supposed to climb here, and if they did, they weren’t supposed to leave the paths! But he had no choice.
“Look around,” said the elf. Jay struggled to put his finger on the tone; the elf had clearly had experience disguising her intentions with her voice.
He did as she asked. The glade was gorgeous if not for the circumstances. There was a large curved tree that waved around sagging branches of blue. The grass was soft and lush; practically the opposite of the dead lawns on every house in the town. But it was the animals that shone in the darkness. A group of deer had vines wrapped around their pale antlers, vines with the same eerie glow as Jay’s hands had been showing before. Rabbits had bits of something glowing scattered in their fur. It was truly a sight.
“So what was it you needed help with?” Jay asked, looking back at the elf. Suddenly he saw that she was flanked by a dozen other elves, armed with magic and weapons.
“Oh, we needed help rounding up magical humans. You seemed like a perfect candidate! Come with us,” she said smugly, and two elves grabbed him. The entire group continued the climb to the top, like some somber funeral march.
total: 2486 words
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500+ posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
March 15 Daily
Idioms
I will be using OCs that I've already made previously, so if some of the characters seem strangely specific that's why.
“Beating around the bush”
Pinky held a package of freshly dry-cleaned clothes as she walked home. It was one of the tasks that her mom had assigned for her to finish that week. She remembered specifically being told that she should keep the clothes clean on the way back. The weather was beautiful- not a cloud in the sky, the sun shining brightly. As she passed by a tree, she heard the pleasant whistle of birdsong that she loved. She knew she would be told off if she dropped the clothes, but she couldn't resist quickening her pace into a skip. On the grey brick pathway, she skipped along, smiling. Or that was until she was nearly at her house and she tripped over, the package of clothes falling into some shrubbery. She worriedly looked around, and got onto her hands and knees and shuffled the plant's branches. In that moment, she heard her mom's familiar footsteps from behind her. “What are you doing?” her mom asked. Pinky replied “I dropped something into this bush here, I'll find it in a moment.” She continued to shuffle the branches. Pinky's mom sighed. “I know you dropped the clothes into there. No use beating around the bush.”
“Over the moon”
Moony was excited. All her hard work was about to pay off- all the time she had spent on designing a hotel to be built on the surface of the moon, and her dream was about to become a reality- her friends were going to visit the Lunamoona hotel for the first time. Gawking out of the windows of the Starburst Shuttle as it soared through the infinite, starry darkness of space on an automated route, Moony's friends were in awe. The shuttle neared the moon. Its grey, rocky landscape was dotted with craters large and small. Then, out of the corner of her eye, Moony saw something. She announced “I present to you, the Lunamoona hotel!” A gleaming building emerged from beyond the curved horizon, illuminated by solar-powered lights. In that moment, Moony truly felt over the moon.
“The proof is in the pudding”
Under the light of her desk lamp, Nyx studied the printed-out images of a series of photos that showcased the supposed crime scene of a missing diamond necklace once more. The job alone of being a detective was a challenging task, with unsolved mysteries given to her all the time. Her job may have been made even more challenging by who she was- she was a hybrid between human DNA and a kind of alien vampire bat, created through experimentation. People used to not take her seriously because of her gigantic pointed ears, almost twice the height of her head, and her somewhat questionable eyesight that just seemed to stop working properly in sunlight. However, through her work, she had proven she could be a better detective than just any regular person. Looking at one of the pictures, she had an epiphany. Nyx made a phone call to a restaurant- she needed to examine the food deliveries. Upon arriving, she asked to see any caramel puddings that were about to be delivered- and there was one. As she picked up the open box, it felt oddly heavy. She stared at the pudding for a second, then split it in half- there was the missing necklace. It had fallen into the pudding mix. Later that day, she received a phone call from the owner of the necklace asking how she found it. Nyx's reply? “The proof is in the pudding!”
592 words
Idioms
I will be using OCs that I've already made previously, so if some of the characters seem strangely specific that's why.
“Beating around the bush”
Pinky held a package of freshly dry-cleaned clothes as she walked home. It was one of the tasks that her mom had assigned for her to finish that week. She remembered specifically being told that she should keep the clothes clean on the way back. The weather was beautiful- not a cloud in the sky, the sun shining brightly. As she passed by a tree, she heard the pleasant whistle of birdsong that she loved. She knew she would be told off if she dropped the clothes, but she couldn't resist quickening her pace into a skip. On the grey brick pathway, she skipped along, smiling. Or that was until she was nearly at her house and she tripped over, the package of clothes falling into some shrubbery. She worriedly looked around, and got onto her hands and knees and shuffled the plant's branches. In that moment, she heard her mom's familiar footsteps from behind her. “What are you doing?” her mom asked. Pinky replied “I dropped something into this bush here, I'll find it in a moment.” She continued to shuffle the branches. Pinky's mom sighed. “I know you dropped the clothes into there. No use beating around the bush.”
“Over the moon”
Moony was excited. All her hard work was about to pay off- all the time she had spent on designing a hotel to be built on the surface of the moon, and her dream was about to become a reality- her friends were going to visit the Lunamoona hotel for the first time. Gawking out of the windows of the Starburst Shuttle as it soared through the infinite, starry darkness of space on an automated route, Moony's friends were in awe. The shuttle neared the moon. Its grey, rocky landscape was dotted with craters large and small. Then, out of the corner of her eye, Moony saw something. She announced “I present to you, the Lunamoona hotel!” A gleaming building emerged from beyond the curved horizon, illuminated by solar-powered lights. In that moment, Moony truly felt over the moon.
“The proof is in the pudding”
Under the light of her desk lamp, Nyx studied the printed-out images of a series of photos that showcased the supposed crime scene of a missing diamond necklace once more. The job alone of being a detective was a challenging task, with unsolved mysteries given to her all the time. Her job may have been made even more challenging by who she was- she was a hybrid between human DNA and a kind of alien vampire bat, created through experimentation. People used to not take her seriously because of her gigantic pointed ears, almost twice the height of her head, and her somewhat questionable eyesight that just seemed to stop working properly in sunlight. However, through her work, she had proven she could be a better detective than just any regular person. Looking at one of the pictures, she had an epiphany. Nyx made a phone call to a restaurant- she needed to examine the food deliveries. Upon arriving, she asked to see any caramel puddings that were about to be delivered- and there was one. As she picked up the open box, it felt oddly heavy. She stared at the pudding for a second, then split it in half- there was the missing necklace. It had fallen into the pudding mix. Later that day, she received a phone call from the owner of the necklace asking how she found it. Nyx's reply? “The proof is in the pudding!”
592 words
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
3/9-16/22 Weekly
Total words: 2892
*As of right now, my partner has not yet responded the last comment to finish the story. Once she does, I'll add it
-Part 1-
@Telianar (Paige)’s words: 278
My words: 342
Total words: 629
Paige: River was not the type of person who liked to keep thoughts to herself; they tended to press at the sides of her brain in an uncomfortable way that no one seemed to understand when she tried to explain it to them.
Me: The thoughts are too loud, too insistent, too suffocating, and she spends countless hours spilling the thoughts onto paper just to get enough peace to sleep. It helps, but only a little. It’s nothing compared to the overwhelming relief of speaking them out loud for others to breathe in. “Keep your thoughts to yourself sometimes,” her mother warns time and time again. “Someday you’re going to hurt somebody- or yourself.”
Paige: And it has happened, a few times, when she bluntly stated what she thought of someone. Times like that, her mother doesn't say a thing, just gives her that look - the look which makes River feel so ashamed. But she has a feeling there are bigger things her mother worries about, problems River has yet to encounter.
Me: If life were perfect, things would stay just like that. She was content to play the dangerous game of walking on the thin tightrope between her mother’s approval and alleviating the discomfort of her thoughts. However, life isn’t perfect and never will be, so things change. “My mom leaves, like, every Friday night,” she explains to her friend one day. “She never says where she’s going. In fact, the only reason I know she leaves at all is because the creaking of the door wakes me up.”
Paige: “I sneak downstairs and watch her walk away,” River continues, “I usually can't sleep after that, so I hear her come back at around four in the morning.” River sighs and lies back on her bed as her friends stare in silence, unsure what to say. “Have you ever thought of following her?” one her friends, Lyla, finally asks. Now it's River's turn to stare; the idea had never occurred to her before. “No,” she finally replies. “On my own, in the middle of the night? Who knows how far she goes.”
Me: Allie, ever the bold one, pipes up, “You could follow her for just a little while, and once she gets too far, turn back and come home. Besides, you only ever hear the front door open, right? So she must be walking. If she drove in the car, surely you would be able to hear the garage open.” River hums and thinks about this. She knows that if she doesn’t get answers, the question will keep pounding at her, making rest a far away dream. “I’ll go,” she decides. “I won’t get any peace if I don’t.”
Paige: So she does. That night, after spending an hour or so writing down all the thoughts floating around her mind, River hears the front door open. Already wearing a hoody and boots, she hurries downstairs and out the door in time to see her mother nearing the end of the block. Checking that she has her phone, River takes a deep breath, then speed-walks after her mom. It's a long walk, twisting in and out of neighborhoods, sometimes making River feel as if she's going in circles.
Me: Finally, after what might as well be forever, her mother stops in front of an old, derelict building. River dives to the ground as her mother turns around, probably ensuring that she hasn’t been followed. Thankfully, she doesn’t spot River, and she heads inside. River scurries in after her. For a terrifying moment, she can’t find her, but then she hears voices coming from a room to her right. She peaks her head inside, and she can’t suppress the gasp that escapes her lips at what she sees.
-Part 2-
Words: 577
I purposely wrote her ideas and stuff kinda childishly, because, well, she’s six, and six year olds have a lot of big, genuine thoughts phrased is kid-ish ways.
Aster Reidwell
Six years old
Human
Personality and traits:
Aster is a rather shy girl. Strangers are very intimidating, and talking to peers her age isn’t all that much better. With gentle words and kind coaxing, however, she’ll warm up. Once she’s comfortable, she’s quite an energetic and open child. She likes helping others and is very polite when interacting with anyone. She’s prefers the arts more than sports or academics. She’s pretty sensitive and gets emotional quite easily (as most six year olds do). She communicates a lot through motions, and tends to use big gestures to emphasize what she’s talking about. She’s more of a listener than a speaker. She isn’t afraid of getting dirty, and she takes quite a liking to animals and insects. She’ll befriend just about anyone, including the grumpy old man who lives across the street. She’s a people-pleaser, and other people’s happiness improves her mood quite a lot. She can be quite gullible and trusting, so it isn’t hard to take advantage of her. She avoids conflict and is easily frightened. She loves and cares for her loved ones fiercely, however, and won’t let anyone hurt or make fun of them. She wants things done right the first time and will spend a lot of time very carefully doing crafts/projects/whatever.
Wants, hopes, strengths, and I went ahead and put some weaknesses in too:
As a people pleaser, she craves people’s approval and affection. She’s a cuddly type of person, and if someone is comfortable with it, she’ll immediately latch onto them through hugs or hand-holding. She wants to be a, in her words, people-helper when she grows up. She wants everyone to get along. She wants to have a pet dog, cat, and butterfly when she grows up. A dog because dogs love to play, a cat because cats are very cuddly, and a butterfly because they’re pretty, and she just hints it would be cool. She wants everyone, including herself, to be happy and safe forever. She wants to help a lot of people, make a lot of friends, and make sure that little kids don’t get sad and cry. She trusts people very easily, and she’s rather sensitive, so it isn’t hard to upset her. She’s easily distressed by other people’s suffering. She has a hard time asking for help, and she believes her worth as a person relies on her success. She wants to make nice things for people who don’t have much. She hopes that someday when she grows up, she can be a mommy, because she loves babies
Dislikes and fears:
She’s afraid of people being mean to her and not liking her. She’s also afraid of thunderstorms, because the lightning is really bright and the thunder is really loud. She also doesn’t like the dark, and while she’s very much afraid of the monster in her bed, she leaves a toy cookie out because maybe the monster just wants to be friends. She hates the taste of spinach, and she hates the texture in onions. She doesn’t like people who are mean to others. She doesn’t like yelling. Adults are pretty scary, especially tall, mean sounding ones. She doesn’t like the idea of speaking in front of a lot of people. She hates the idea of messing up and is careful to make sure she makes as little mistakes as possible. She doesn’t like getting in trouble. She doesn’t like the smell of smoke because it makes her gag and cough.
-Part 3-
Words: 426
A seemingly completely normal neighborhood. The houses are all pretty nice, and the paint colors on all of them are still quite bright and fresh. As with every neighborhood, there are some beautifully decorated front yards complete with the greenest of grass, beautiful flowers, and cheerful lawn decorations. There are other houses that contain no decoration except little green bushes spotted with bright red berries. Since the neighborhood was just made, there aren’t any full-grown trees yet. A friendly dog is often found lounging out on his owner’s front lawn. A cat makes it’s rounds around the neighborhood, stopping to sun bathe on people’s front porches. Nobody knows where the cat came from or who it belongs to, but nobody particularly minds its presence. Kids’ bikes and scooters lay out on the sidewalk. The driveway of somebody’s house is always decorated with various different chalk drawings. There’s a pond in the center of the neighborhood, but hardly anyone ever fishes out of it. There’s field of corn out behind the neighborhood, corn towering above even the tallest man. There’s a single, worn down ‘no trespassers’ sign. Nobody ever goes into the corn field.
In the cool of the evening, a few men gather out on the sidewalk and play cornhole, while their wives sit in lawn chairs and discuss the latest gossip. There’s that one grumpy couple that often shout at people who play music “too loud” on their golf carts as they drive past, but everyone in the neighborhood just ignores them. A small group of teenagers can often be found playing board games on a front porch, usually drinking Capri Suns and eating Kroger cookies. A little boy is learning to ride his bike, and people always call out various forms of “good luck!” as they pass by. A group of teenage boys play basketball with the rickety old hoop in the cold-a-sack every night. A woman walks her dog Chief every morning and evening, and everyone knows that Chief loves being pet. Two younger girls often make “potions” in their backyard, and they sell it to the other neighborhood kids. There’s a group of rough looking teenagers that play aggressive rap music, but they’re really quite nice and have helped little lost children find their way back home multiple times. The local Grandma of the nieghborhood gives out fresh-baked desserts to tired college students. When night falls, the neighborhood is bathed in darkness, as the street lights have burned out and not been replaced. Nobody, under any circumstances, leaves their house after dark.
-Part 4-
Words: 176
(For sake of simplicity, I’m referring to main character as ‘him’. You can obviously change the gender however you like. I also abbreviate him as MC)
Main character knows that it’s dangerous to go out after dark. Everybody tells him so, and he heeds to the warnings. But tonight, he goes out into the darkness for just a moment to turn off his sprinkler . Being out for a moment is just enough for something terrible to happen, apparently, because a chilling screech sounds from somewhere in the distance. Obviously disturbed, MC hurries back to safety.
He asks other people if they heard anything, but they respond no. Determined to figure out what — or who — made the noise, MC decides to venture back out into the darkness. When he does, he discovers a bone-chilling secret that sends the authorities chasing after him, trying to kill him before he can spread the secret to everyone else. To make matters worse, some of his own trusted family and/or friends are with the authorities, and now he has to figure out who he can trust.
-Part 5-
Words: 1635
Character: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/6081818/
Setting: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=65#post-6111407
Concept: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/583595/?page=1#post-6072965
Siren’s Bay. The most wonderful place on earth, the locals say.
Io supposes that it is. The most comforting breeze he’s ever felt runs through his hair and under his T-shirt. The ocean is so calm that he can look down and see his reflection better than he could in a mirror. Not to mention the dozens of colorful fish one could see swimming through the crystal clear water. The townspeople are all perfectly friendly, and wonderful smells are always wafting from the marketplace. The days are always sunny, bright, and of comfortable temperature. It is, by this means, paradise.
But now that Io’s twelve, he’s started noticing things. He notices the dazed look in the baker’s eyes as he peddles his bread. He notices that Cindy Joel’s daughter, who used to sit on the fence in the early morning and greet passerbys, isn’t there anymore. He notices that when you stand on the beach, you never see anything beyond the vast, eternal line of ocean, no matter where you stand on the island.
It’s… odd. Disconcerting. Weird. Io doesn’t know the right word for it; he just knows that it isn’t good.
“Mom, how come we never see anything on the beach other than the ocean?”
His mother laughs. “What do you expect to see? That’s how beaches work.”
Huffing, Io reiterates, “Yeah, but like, why don’t we see any boats? New people arrive every few months, but I’ve never seen the boats that bring them.”
Suddenly, his mother’s eyes go blank and dazed. The dinner table goes eerily quiet, and a quick glance at his father reveals that the man has the same look in his eyes.
“Mom?” Io whispers, regretting saying anything at all. “Mom, Dad, what’s wrong?”
“I would stop talking now,” his mother says listlessly.
“I don’t under—“
“Hush.” His father commands in the most hauntingly sweet voice Io’s ever heard. Shivers crawl up his back, and screeching silence sits heavy in the air.
Then, his parents blink, and all is normal. The sounds of dinner resume, and their eyes regain their normal color.
“How was work?” His mother asks, to which his father shrugs.
“It was alright. We got some good work done on the—“
“What was that!” Io shouts, startling the table to silence. “What— I— what happened? I don’t understand, why are you just pretending everything’s norma—“
The most delicate of whispers breathe into his ear.
Hush.
Io slumps back into his seat. For the briefest of moments, the dull look is back in his parents’ eyes, but then everything is back to normal.
He’s never hated normal so much in his life.
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Io is going to get to the bottom of this. He’s determined. Besides, it will be a fun weekend project. Not like he has a whole lot of better things to do.
Part of him is still uneasy from the… dinner incident, but while curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction brought it back.
So he decides to start with the baker. The man had the same, dazed look in his eyes as his parents did that night. Most people avoided the man at all costs, only coming up to buy a loaf of bread before scurrying away. Io had never really thought him before now.
Walking up to the cart, Io greets, “Hello, sir.”
“Hello, my boy! Come to buy some of my fine wares?”
The cheerful, boisterous voice doesn’t match the listless face. Io’s never seen something so dead.
“Yeah. Uh, what do you recommend?”
“Why, this loaf of raisin bread just came out of the oven! It’s a fabulous choice.”
Io has learned nothing so far, and he refuses to leave empty handed. After handing over the payment, he conversationally continues, “So, what have you been up to today?”
The baker blinks at him, seeming almost shocked. The look is gone as soon as it came, however, and the man only laughs jovially. “The same old! I’ve been very busy lately, so my days are little more than baking anymore! Though, I wouldn’t have it any other way.”
Io hums, deciding to press further. “That’s… nice. Yeah. What’s your name, by the way? You’ve been here my whole life, and I still don’t know you. Like, at all.”
The baker stills completely, and Io’s heart starts fluttering.
“Oh, you don’t need to know, little boy. I’m the baker, and that’s all.”
The voice isn’t jovial anymore. It’s dull, listless, dead.
And though every brain cell in his head begs for him to sprint out of the shop and never come back, Io has to continue. He has to.
“That just… that just seems rather rude. I can’t just keep calling you ‘baker’ the rest of my life—“
The man leaps over the counter and lunges at Io. Big, cold hands, grab him by his throat, and he’s slammed into the glass covering the display case of breads. Over and over he’s slammed, until his head starts to throb and tears start forming at his eyes.
“Stop! Stop, stop, it hurts, please stop sir—“
Just like that, the attack stops, and Io gasps for the little air he can suck down with the baker’s arm around his throat. Before he can open his mouth again, the grip softens, and the baker gently holds him by the shoulders.
“Get away,” he whispers, and when Io looks up at him, his eyes aren’t blank. They’re bright and alert and absolutely terrified. “Get away, child, or they’ll take you too.”
“I don’t— I don’t understand.”
“The sirens. They’ve taken me, and they’ll take you too. They always take the rebellious ones, they always, always do.”
“The sirens? What— what do you mean? I—“
Suddenly, the baker presses Io’s forehead to his. In a whisper so quiet Io has to strain to hear it, he explains, “The sirens have brought everyone here, and they’ll keep us here till the day we die. If you’re not curious, they’ll lure you in all over again, and then you’ll never get away. Listen to me closely, child. You know the cave in the middle of the island?”
Io nods hurriedly.
“You need to run there. As fast as you can. Stop for nothing and no one, do you understand? No one. Tear away the rocks blocking the entrance, and go inside until you find the bright, glowing rock. Touch it, and you’ll be safe. Do you understand?”
“I— this doesn’t—“
“You need to listen to me, boy. If you don’t leave now, they’ll catch you, and you do not want them to catch you. Do you understand?”
Hands trembling with panic and fear at the whole situation, he agrees. “Yes. Yes, I do. But, but what about you?”
The baker gives a soft, reassuring smile. “I’m going to keep helping curious little things like you get out. Now hurry. Fast as you can, and stop for nothing, no matter what it sounds like. They’re deceiving you, I swear they are.”
With that, he pushes Io away and out the door. Io glances back long enough to see the baker’s eyes return to a lifeless blank, and then he turns back around, and he runs.
The cave the man talked about isn’t all that far from the marketplace, thank goodness. Nobody pays him any mind, just taking it as an intense game of tag. In only a couple minutes, he reaches the cave and begins removing the little rocks covering the entrance.
“Io, what are you doing?”
The voice of his mother floats into his ears. He pauses his digging and searches the area for her.
“Mom? What are you doing he—“
He clicks his mouth shut as he remembers the baker’s warning.
“You need to come home, Io. You need to. I’ll be so sad if you don’t.”
Squeezing his eyes shut, he continues digging.
“Why aren’t you leaving? Me and your father are dying, Io. We’re dying, and we need you here with us. Please.”
He bites his lip so hard he tastes blood.
“You’re really going to trust the word of a delusional man over mine? I’m your mother. I love you, and you love me. He’s lying to you. He’s lying, Io!”
He hates that his mother’s words make sense. Hates that the most logical thing would be to stop, and to go home.
He stops digging for a moment. He should go home. He should really really really go home.
But he refuses, refuses to end up with dull eyes, just a living corpse, so he continues tearing away.
Soon, more sickly sweet voices start filling his ears, and they’re loud and insistent and lovely and calming. Tears start to blur his vision, and he hardly registers that he’s broken through the barrier before his hands wave into empty air.
Scrambling inside, he searches desperately for the glowing rock. The faint glow is better than the light of sun, and he wastes no time in running up to it.
He grabs the rock as if it’s his lifeline (and it is) and waits for something to happen.
Nothing does.
He lets out a choked sob, because the voices are getting closer. Closer, closer, closer, and he’s going to die.
Then, the world around him shifts. He blinks, and suddenly he’s standing in a room. He stands in shocked silence.
Silence. Wonderful, wonderful silence.
He sobs again, this time filled with sweet relief. The door to the room opens, and a woman pokes her head inside. They meet eyes, and she steps inside, closing the door softly behind her.
“Hey, buddy. It’s okay, you’re safe now. They can’t get you.”
He has a lot of questions. A lot of them. But for the moment, all he can do is sag in relief, and soak in the blissful silence.
Total words: 2892
*As of right now, my partner has not yet responded the last comment to finish the story. Once she does, I'll add it
-Part 1-
@Telianar (Paige)’s words: 278
My words: 342
Total words: 629
Paige: River was not the type of person who liked to keep thoughts to herself; they tended to press at the sides of her brain in an uncomfortable way that no one seemed to understand when she tried to explain it to them.
Me: The thoughts are too loud, too insistent, too suffocating, and she spends countless hours spilling the thoughts onto paper just to get enough peace to sleep. It helps, but only a little. It’s nothing compared to the overwhelming relief of speaking them out loud for others to breathe in. “Keep your thoughts to yourself sometimes,” her mother warns time and time again. “Someday you’re going to hurt somebody- or yourself.”
Paige: And it has happened, a few times, when she bluntly stated what she thought of someone. Times like that, her mother doesn't say a thing, just gives her that look - the look which makes River feel so ashamed. But she has a feeling there are bigger things her mother worries about, problems River has yet to encounter.
Me: If life were perfect, things would stay just like that. She was content to play the dangerous game of walking on the thin tightrope between her mother’s approval and alleviating the discomfort of her thoughts. However, life isn’t perfect and never will be, so things change. “My mom leaves, like, every Friday night,” she explains to her friend one day. “She never says where she’s going. In fact, the only reason I know she leaves at all is because the creaking of the door wakes me up.”
Paige: “I sneak downstairs and watch her walk away,” River continues, “I usually can't sleep after that, so I hear her come back at around four in the morning.” River sighs and lies back on her bed as her friends stare in silence, unsure what to say. “Have you ever thought of following her?” one her friends, Lyla, finally asks. Now it's River's turn to stare; the idea had never occurred to her before. “No,” she finally replies. “On my own, in the middle of the night? Who knows how far she goes.”
Me: Allie, ever the bold one, pipes up, “You could follow her for just a little while, and once she gets too far, turn back and come home. Besides, you only ever hear the front door open, right? So she must be walking. If she drove in the car, surely you would be able to hear the garage open.” River hums and thinks about this. She knows that if she doesn’t get answers, the question will keep pounding at her, making rest a far away dream. “I’ll go,” she decides. “I won’t get any peace if I don’t.”
Paige: So she does. That night, after spending an hour or so writing down all the thoughts floating around her mind, River hears the front door open. Already wearing a hoody and boots, she hurries downstairs and out the door in time to see her mother nearing the end of the block. Checking that she has her phone, River takes a deep breath, then speed-walks after her mom. It's a long walk, twisting in and out of neighborhoods, sometimes making River feel as if she's going in circles.
Me: Finally, after what might as well be forever, her mother stops in front of an old, derelict building. River dives to the ground as her mother turns around, probably ensuring that she hasn’t been followed. Thankfully, she doesn’t spot River, and she heads inside. River scurries in after her. For a terrifying moment, she can’t find her, but then she hears voices coming from a room to her right. She peaks her head inside, and she can’t suppress the gasp that escapes her lips at what she sees.
-Part 2-
Words: 577
I purposely wrote her ideas and stuff kinda childishly, because, well, she’s six, and six year olds have a lot of big, genuine thoughts phrased is kid-ish ways.
Aster Reidwell
Six years old
Human
Personality and traits:
Aster is a rather shy girl. Strangers are very intimidating, and talking to peers her age isn’t all that much better. With gentle words and kind coaxing, however, she’ll warm up. Once she’s comfortable, she’s quite an energetic and open child. She likes helping others and is very polite when interacting with anyone. She’s prefers the arts more than sports or academics. She’s pretty sensitive and gets emotional quite easily (as most six year olds do). She communicates a lot through motions, and tends to use big gestures to emphasize what she’s talking about. She’s more of a listener than a speaker. She isn’t afraid of getting dirty, and she takes quite a liking to animals and insects. She’ll befriend just about anyone, including the grumpy old man who lives across the street. She’s a people-pleaser, and other people’s happiness improves her mood quite a lot. She can be quite gullible and trusting, so it isn’t hard to take advantage of her. She avoids conflict and is easily frightened. She loves and cares for her loved ones fiercely, however, and won’t let anyone hurt or make fun of them. She wants things done right the first time and will spend a lot of time very carefully doing crafts/projects/whatever.
Wants, hopes, strengths, and I went ahead and put some weaknesses in too:
As a people pleaser, she craves people’s approval and affection. She’s a cuddly type of person, and if someone is comfortable with it, she’ll immediately latch onto them through hugs or hand-holding. She wants to be a, in her words, people-helper when she grows up. She wants everyone to get along. She wants to have a pet dog, cat, and butterfly when she grows up. A dog because dogs love to play, a cat because cats are very cuddly, and a butterfly because they’re pretty, and she just hints it would be cool. She wants everyone, including herself, to be happy and safe forever. She wants to help a lot of people, make a lot of friends, and make sure that little kids don’t get sad and cry. She trusts people very easily, and she’s rather sensitive, so it isn’t hard to upset her. She’s easily distressed by other people’s suffering. She has a hard time asking for help, and she believes her worth as a person relies on her success. She wants to make nice things for people who don’t have much. She hopes that someday when she grows up, she can be a mommy, because she loves babies
Dislikes and fears:
She’s afraid of people being mean to her and not liking her. She’s also afraid of thunderstorms, because the lightning is really bright and the thunder is really loud. She also doesn’t like the dark, and while she’s very much afraid of the monster in her bed, she leaves a toy cookie out because maybe the monster just wants to be friends. She hates the taste of spinach, and she hates the texture in onions. She doesn’t like people who are mean to others. She doesn’t like yelling. Adults are pretty scary, especially tall, mean sounding ones. She doesn’t like the idea of speaking in front of a lot of people. She hates the idea of messing up and is careful to make sure she makes as little mistakes as possible. She doesn’t like getting in trouble. She doesn’t like the smell of smoke because it makes her gag and cough.
-Part 3-
Words: 426
A seemingly completely normal neighborhood. The houses are all pretty nice, and the paint colors on all of them are still quite bright and fresh. As with every neighborhood, there are some beautifully decorated front yards complete with the greenest of grass, beautiful flowers, and cheerful lawn decorations. There are other houses that contain no decoration except little green bushes spotted with bright red berries. Since the neighborhood was just made, there aren’t any full-grown trees yet. A friendly dog is often found lounging out on his owner’s front lawn. A cat makes it’s rounds around the neighborhood, stopping to sun bathe on people’s front porches. Nobody knows where the cat came from or who it belongs to, but nobody particularly minds its presence. Kids’ bikes and scooters lay out on the sidewalk. The driveway of somebody’s house is always decorated with various different chalk drawings. There’s a pond in the center of the neighborhood, but hardly anyone ever fishes out of it. There’s field of corn out behind the neighborhood, corn towering above even the tallest man. There’s a single, worn down ‘no trespassers’ sign. Nobody ever goes into the corn field.
In the cool of the evening, a few men gather out on the sidewalk and play cornhole, while their wives sit in lawn chairs and discuss the latest gossip. There’s that one grumpy couple that often shout at people who play music “too loud” on their golf carts as they drive past, but everyone in the neighborhood just ignores them. A small group of teenagers can often be found playing board games on a front porch, usually drinking Capri Suns and eating Kroger cookies. A little boy is learning to ride his bike, and people always call out various forms of “good luck!” as they pass by. A group of teenage boys play basketball with the rickety old hoop in the cold-a-sack every night. A woman walks her dog Chief every morning and evening, and everyone knows that Chief loves being pet. Two younger girls often make “potions” in their backyard, and they sell it to the other neighborhood kids. There’s a group of rough looking teenagers that play aggressive rap music, but they’re really quite nice and have helped little lost children find their way back home multiple times. The local Grandma of the nieghborhood gives out fresh-baked desserts to tired college students. When night falls, the neighborhood is bathed in darkness, as the street lights have burned out and not been replaced. Nobody, under any circumstances, leaves their house after dark.
-Part 4-
Words: 176
(For sake of simplicity, I’m referring to main character as ‘him’. You can obviously change the gender however you like. I also abbreviate him as MC)
Main character knows that it’s dangerous to go out after dark. Everybody tells him so, and he heeds to the warnings. But tonight, he goes out into the darkness for just a moment to turn off his sprinkler . Being out for a moment is just enough for something terrible to happen, apparently, because a chilling screech sounds from somewhere in the distance. Obviously disturbed, MC hurries back to safety.
He asks other people if they heard anything, but they respond no. Determined to figure out what — or who — made the noise, MC decides to venture back out into the darkness. When he does, he discovers a bone-chilling secret that sends the authorities chasing after him, trying to kill him before he can spread the secret to everyone else. To make matters worse, some of his own trusted family and/or friends are with the authorities, and now he has to figure out who he can trust.
-Part 5-
Words: 1635
Character: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/6081818/
Setting: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=65#post-6111407
Concept: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/583595/?page=1#post-6072965
Siren’s Bay. The most wonderful place on earth, the locals say.
Io supposes that it is. The most comforting breeze he’s ever felt runs through his hair and under his T-shirt. The ocean is so calm that he can look down and see his reflection better than he could in a mirror. Not to mention the dozens of colorful fish one could see swimming through the crystal clear water. The townspeople are all perfectly friendly, and wonderful smells are always wafting from the marketplace. The days are always sunny, bright, and of comfortable temperature. It is, by this means, paradise.
But now that Io’s twelve, he’s started noticing things. He notices the dazed look in the baker’s eyes as he peddles his bread. He notices that Cindy Joel’s daughter, who used to sit on the fence in the early morning and greet passerbys, isn’t there anymore. He notices that when you stand on the beach, you never see anything beyond the vast, eternal line of ocean, no matter where you stand on the island.
It’s… odd. Disconcerting. Weird. Io doesn’t know the right word for it; he just knows that it isn’t good.
“Mom, how come we never see anything on the beach other than the ocean?”
His mother laughs. “What do you expect to see? That’s how beaches work.”
Huffing, Io reiterates, “Yeah, but like, why don’t we see any boats? New people arrive every few months, but I’ve never seen the boats that bring them.”
Suddenly, his mother’s eyes go blank and dazed. The dinner table goes eerily quiet, and a quick glance at his father reveals that the man has the same look in his eyes.
“Mom?” Io whispers, regretting saying anything at all. “Mom, Dad, what’s wrong?”
“I would stop talking now,” his mother says listlessly.
“I don’t under—“
“Hush.” His father commands in the most hauntingly sweet voice Io’s ever heard. Shivers crawl up his back, and screeching silence sits heavy in the air.
Then, his parents blink, and all is normal. The sounds of dinner resume, and their eyes regain their normal color.
“How was work?” His mother asks, to which his father shrugs.
“It was alright. We got some good work done on the—“
“What was that!” Io shouts, startling the table to silence. “What— I— what happened? I don’t understand, why are you just pretending everything’s norma—“
The most delicate of whispers breathe into his ear.
Hush.
Io slumps back into his seat. For the briefest of moments, the dull look is back in his parents’ eyes, but then everything is back to normal.
He’s never hated normal so much in his life.
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Io is going to get to the bottom of this. He’s determined. Besides, it will be a fun weekend project. Not like he has a whole lot of better things to do.
Part of him is still uneasy from the… dinner incident, but while curiosity killed the cat, satisfaction brought it back.
So he decides to start with the baker. The man had the same, dazed look in his eyes as his parents did that night. Most people avoided the man at all costs, only coming up to buy a loaf of bread before scurrying away. Io had never really thought him before now.
Walking up to the cart, Io greets, “Hello, sir.”
“Hello, my boy! Come to buy some of my fine wares?”
The cheerful, boisterous voice doesn’t match the listless face. Io’s never seen something so dead.
“Yeah. Uh, what do you recommend?”
“Why, this loaf of raisin bread just came out of the oven! It’s a fabulous choice.”
Io has learned nothing so far, and he refuses to leave empty handed. After handing over the payment, he conversationally continues, “So, what have you been up to today?”
The baker blinks at him, seeming almost shocked. The look is gone as soon as it came, however, and the man only laughs jovially. “The same old! I’ve been very busy lately, so my days are little more than baking anymore! Though, I wouldn’t have it any other way.”
Io hums, deciding to press further. “That’s… nice. Yeah. What’s your name, by the way? You’ve been here my whole life, and I still don’t know you. Like, at all.”
The baker stills completely, and Io’s heart starts fluttering.
“Oh, you don’t need to know, little boy. I’m the baker, and that’s all.”
The voice isn’t jovial anymore. It’s dull, listless, dead.
And though every brain cell in his head begs for him to sprint out of the shop and never come back, Io has to continue. He has to.
“That just… that just seems rather rude. I can’t just keep calling you ‘baker’ the rest of my life—“
The man leaps over the counter and lunges at Io. Big, cold hands, grab him by his throat, and he’s slammed into the glass covering the display case of breads. Over and over he’s slammed, until his head starts to throb and tears start forming at his eyes.
“Stop! Stop, stop, it hurts, please stop sir—“
Just like that, the attack stops, and Io gasps for the little air he can suck down with the baker’s arm around his throat. Before he can open his mouth again, the grip softens, and the baker gently holds him by the shoulders.
“Get away,” he whispers, and when Io looks up at him, his eyes aren’t blank. They’re bright and alert and absolutely terrified. “Get away, child, or they’ll take you too.”
“I don’t— I don’t understand.”
“The sirens. They’ve taken me, and they’ll take you too. They always take the rebellious ones, they always, always do.”
“The sirens? What— what do you mean? I—“
Suddenly, the baker presses Io’s forehead to his. In a whisper so quiet Io has to strain to hear it, he explains, “The sirens have brought everyone here, and they’ll keep us here till the day we die. If you’re not curious, they’ll lure you in all over again, and then you’ll never get away. Listen to me closely, child. You know the cave in the middle of the island?”
Io nods hurriedly.
“You need to run there. As fast as you can. Stop for nothing and no one, do you understand? No one. Tear away the rocks blocking the entrance, and go inside until you find the bright, glowing rock. Touch it, and you’ll be safe. Do you understand?”
“I— this doesn’t—“
“You need to listen to me, boy. If you don’t leave now, they’ll catch you, and you do not want them to catch you. Do you understand?”
Hands trembling with panic and fear at the whole situation, he agrees. “Yes. Yes, I do. But, but what about you?”
The baker gives a soft, reassuring smile. “I’m going to keep helping curious little things like you get out. Now hurry. Fast as you can, and stop for nothing, no matter what it sounds like. They’re deceiving you, I swear they are.”
With that, he pushes Io away and out the door. Io glances back long enough to see the baker’s eyes return to a lifeless blank, and then he turns back around, and he runs.
The cave the man talked about isn’t all that far from the marketplace, thank goodness. Nobody pays him any mind, just taking it as an intense game of tag. In only a couple minutes, he reaches the cave and begins removing the little rocks covering the entrance.
“Io, what are you doing?”
The voice of his mother floats into his ears. He pauses his digging and searches the area for her.
“Mom? What are you doing he—“
He clicks his mouth shut as he remembers the baker’s warning.
“You need to come home, Io. You need to. I’ll be so sad if you don’t.”
Squeezing his eyes shut, he continues digging.
“Why aren’t you leaving? Me and your father are dying, Io. We’re dying, and we need you here with us. Please.”
He bites his lip so hard he tastes blood.
“You’re really going to trust the word of a delusional man over mine? I’m your mother. I love you, and you love me. He’s lying to you. He’s lying, Io!”
He hates that his mother’s words make sense. Hates that the most logical thing would be to stop, and to go home.
He stops digging for a moment. He should go home. He should really really really go home.
But he refuses, refuses to end up with dull eyes, just a living corpse, so he continues tearing away.
Soon, more sickly sweet voices start filling his ears, and they’re loud and insistent and lovely and calming. Tears start to blur his vision, and he hardly registers that he’s broken through the barrier before his hands wave into empty air.
Scrambling inside, he searches desperately for the glowing rock. The faint glow is better than the light of sun, and he wastes no time in running up to it.
He grabs the rock as if it’s his lifeline (and it is) and waits for something to happen.
Nothing does.
He lets out a choked sob, because the voices are getting closer. Closer, closer, closer, and he’s going to die.
Then, the world around him shifts. He blinks, and suddenly he’s standing in a room. He stands in shocked silence.
Silence. Wonderful, wonderful silence.
He sobs again, this time filled with sweet relief. The door to the room opens, and a woman pokes her head inside. They meet eyes, and she steps inside, closing the door softly behind her.
“Hey, buddy. It’s okay, you’re safe now. They can’t get you.”
He has a lot of questions. A lot of them. But for the moment, all he can do is sag in relief, and soak in the blissful silence.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Weekly Premise
Your Main Character storms home from work/school/whereever. They have had a horrible day, and all they want to do is lay down in bed and cry. When they check their phone, they find a video posted on social media/youtube. From their account. As they watch, It receives more and more likes than anything they’ve posted before combined. They hesitantly press play. Once they’ve seen the video, they stalk out the front door and drive/walk/bike to a house in a nearby neighborhood. Your MC stands on the porch, banging on the bright red door. When it opens, your MC brushes past the confused person and shoves a door on the top floor open.
“Why are you so keen on ruining my life?” MC yells, walking into a corner and opening a box that blends in seamlessly with the wall. “What did I ever do to you?”
Your Main Character storms home from work/school/whereever. They have had a horrible day, and all they want to do is lay down in bed and cry. When they check their phone, they find a video posted on social media/youtube. From their account. As they watch, It receives more and more likes than anything they’ve posted before combined. They hesitantly press play. Once they’ve seen the video, they stalk out the front door and drive/walk/bike to a house in a nearby neighborhood. Your MC stands on the porch, banging on the bright red door. When it opens, your MC brushes past the confused person and shoves a door on the top floor open.
“Why are you so keen on ruining my life?” MC yells, walking into a corner and opening a box that blends in seamlessly with the wall. “What did I ever do to you?”
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
weekly. march 16
2767 words total
1: 608/600 words
2: 555/500 words
3: 404/400 words
4: 182/150 words
5: 1018/1000 words
warm-up section (part 1)
361 words (my part), 608 words total
Clem: A shadow glanced over the corner of the already dark street, the street lights blinking before going out.
Jade: A cloaked woman dressed in black walks through the vacant streets, blending in with the dark night.
Clem: She stuffs something metallic into her coat pocket, her low heels tapping quietly. She stops momentarily at a doorway, but then resumes her brisk walk, heading for the dead end of the ally.
Jade: She shakes her head as she walks, trying to clear her uneasy thoughts. As she reaches the end of the alley, she stops and leans against a wall, as if waiting for someone.
Clem: No one seems to come, but eventually, she steps forward from the wall, pulls out the same metal device, and speaks to it, her words not audible. Without a pause, she snaps the object closed, turns on one foot, and plunges into the wall behind her.
Jade: As she steps through the wall, it turns solid behind her. She shoves the metal device back in her pocket and looks towards the hidden area, her face stony and serious.
Clem: The woman stands in front of a large silver machine. It hums with energy, and the light from it still shines through the thick black tarp. She moves hesitantly toward it, bending down and pulling off just a corner of the tarp. Immediately, a blinding light flashes, and she backs away quickly, letting go of the edge, covering the strange item and reducing the glow.
Jade: She takes a long, deep breath before shakily walking towards the machine once again. The woman closes her eyes, the tarp in hand, and releases it with a wave of her hand. She waits until the blinding light dims before opening her eyes, a relieved smile imprinted on her face as she glances at the masterpiece in front of her.
Clem: The light wasn’t as bright anymore, but she still had to squint to make out everything. Polished levers, buttons, and other mechanical traits covered the majority of it. Several indents on the corners of the rectangular device indicate that something needs to be placed there. After a moment, the woman looks away, brushing away the tears from her now watering eyes. Finally she looks back again, pulling the small object from her inner pocket and stepping closer to one of the corners with the indent. She traces it with her fingers, measuring the depth and width before placing the other metallic object into the cavity. As if drawn like a magnet, the object flies from her palm and clicks as it fits perfectly inside. A clear sheet slides over it, sealing the pieces together. The light brightens again, and the woman shields her eyes. The machine is now one fourth closer to being complete.
Jade: The woman sighs, as though expecting the journey ahead, and turns around, her energy finally giving away and showing how tired she really is. She was so fatigued that she almost did not notice the person standing in front of her, their mouth wide open with shock; too surprised to utter a word.
Clem: It registered that there was someone inside her secret room. She acted on instinct and took out the shocked-frozen person with a single hit.
Jade: The woman, still tense and watchful, scanned around the perimeter to see if the stranger had brought anyone with them. Satisfied with her search, she averted her attention to the body collapsed right in front of her. The woman analyzed them, checking their clothes before hastily flipping them over, as they had fallen face-first. She gasped at the familiar face, so shocked that, for once, she forgot all of her problems, identities, troubles, and secrets, her entire attention on the familiar face that she had just knocked unconscious.
Clem: It was like her mind was on a train, rolling over a one-way track.
Jade: She stumbled from the shock, but somehow managed to keep her balance. Her mind was racing and her heart was thumping so quickly that the only thing she could hear was it’s constant pounding in her ears. Her memories were frazzled and scattered. She hadn’t seen this man before, not in this century. But her entire gut feeling told her otherwise.
character section (part 2)
555/500 words total
Name: Sy Le
Age: 17
Species: Human
Personality & traits
202 words
Sy is a very monotone person. Doesn’t like interactions much with certain people, especially peppy and optimistic people. She’s very detective-like, enjoys slipping and hiding in shadows. Always up for a challenge, though doesn’t like to show enthusiasm. She’s often conflicted between personalities, like trying to keep her cool but can’t help feeling excited for things, which draws attention to her, something Sy would like to avoid. She’s pretty average: smart but not very nerdy, shy but can still speak up when she wants to, rather not be in charge but still offers ideas. Introverted, working alone is her style. She has dreams to be something more but can never find the opportunity to do so. Wears darker colors, but not necessarily black. Tends to wear more of a maroon or beige colored coat, gloves, and simple combat boots. Her hair’s normally in her face, but doesn’t tie it back often for insecure reasons. Tends to be out late, but her parents don’t question much. Her hobbies include researching mysterious issues and journaling—Sy’s fairly crafty and is building her survival skills slowly, envying adventure. For now, she’s still in school, maintaining good grades. Classes aren’t too important for her and she prefers to study on her own instead of in class.
Wants, hopes & strengths
245 words
Sy only wants are to be something more than she is. She’s a typical example of a person, and wants to show how useful she can be. Sy doesn’t have many friends or family to rely on, so she wants to make the ones she has proud. She hopes that one day she can be a full-time detective of sorts, or something that requires more skill and isn’t something she’ll be bored with. Sy longs for someone to acknowledge who she is, and won’t dismiss her at first glance. Sy’s strengths are her wits and creativity, ability to fade into the background and not bring attention toward herself; helpful when she needs to eavesdrop a conversation or be somewhere she shouldn’t be. Sy also wants to ensure that her strengths are enhanced with practice and repeated events, but she hasn’t had any chances to shine, or if there was one, someone else was preferred over her. She hopes that someday people will give her a chance and not be untrusting to her from the start. It’s like people are very judging from the outside, so when they see her shyness and tendency to wear more interesting clothing, they turn her away. Physically, Sy isn’t much, so she’s generally underestimated. She does have some strength, but it’s not something that’s clear right away. The problem is that options are very slim, and she needs time to open up, but everyone she meet is impatient and uninterested.
Dislikes & fears
108 words
Sy doesn’t like bright areas, colors, talking with adults, the heat, working in groups, and staying outside very often. Though she can withstand quite a lot, it doesn’t mean that she’s enjoying things she has to do. Sy’s fears include losing her dignity, heights/high altitudes (being in the mountains or similar areas), deep water (when you can’t tell where the bottom is), claustrophobia. All of these fears are not to a very high degree, but she is still scared to a point of slight hesitation. Sy knows that if she wants to live her dream job, she needs to step it up and be as fearless as possible.
setting section (part 3)
404/400 words total
The rocky plains are sometimes referred to as “The Deathly Lands” because of their likeliness to cause people—children, adults, and the overly strong or persevering—to die out before making it beyond its premises. The plains are exactly as they are named: rocky. The one thing that is not explained by its title would be how it is the most feared among everyone. It’s almost as if there used to be waves, like the area was an eerie beach before being frozen over and turned into a wasteland. There is not any life for miles, and the ones who go in tend to never return, or if they do, their minds are ruined. Only one person has gone in and out and stayed relatively sane, but they still refuse to ever talk about what happened in the Deathly Lands. No one knows the history of it either—how it came to be, or how the legends were created. However, a journey through it is inevitable. It’s the only way out. The town that lies before it is small and overpopulated, but it is encased in the horrible place, like an island. Rumors are that the town is an island in a vast, rocky sea, and there are others out there who have the same issue. People go into the plains with the hope they will find signs of life that prove they are not alone in this world, or if there is somewhere to escape to. People also say that the rocky sea is not stationary, and that during irregular periods of the night, it moves, pushing the island ever so slightly. No one’s ever been able to track any possible movements, but a few older folks believe otherwise, swearing they heard and felt sudden jolts beneath them during their sleep. Beyond The Deathly Lands are a selection of mountains, their peaks rising high in the yellow sky. Even if you could make it past the rocky plains, you would never have a chance past the mountains: the same color and material of what leads up to it, but much more treacherous. You would have to go around, which could take weeks, months—or you could climb. Both options seem impossible, but everything that is known is only assumed. The citizens that are stuck in the middle of the treacherous area do not have much more to say other than what they can observe from a distance.
premise section (part 4)
182/150 words
Your source of magical paints has run out!
It’s another long day, and you come home to an empty house; everyone’s out for the evening. You plop down onto your bed, relieved to be alone for once. Excitedly, you reach under your bed for your secret stash of magical paints, and pull out an unusually light tray. You prop the items onto your pillow, and pick up one of your tubes, containing your favorite colored paint. To your shock, nothing comes out of the bottle when you flip it upside down! You squeeze tightly, but there seems to only be air inside. Now nervous, you unscrew the cap, and peer inside. Nothing. You throw down the tube and try the others. Unfortunately, they’re all empty. Even though you knew that the paints would eventually run out, you didn’t think it would be so soon. Then you remember the day before—and there had still been a whole lot of paint left. How could you have used them all? Suddenly it hits you—someone must have stolen or used your paints, without permission. But no one knows your secret, how could this happen?
story section (part 5)
1018/1000 words
character: @annahannah
setting: @luna-lovegood-lol
premise: @airfairy934
Emery was running around the track like she always did, smelling the fresh air of Ilarion. Tonight would be the night of the festival, which Emery personally thought was stupid. It wasn’t like anyone on Ilarion was honored like those who died on Taiga’s Bane. Why was there a festival in the first place? It was forbidden to enter the isle after the deaths that followed the ones who did, so why celebrate their deeds, being evil and wrong? Emery always found the subject backwards, but she never questioned the tradition. She stopped to take a break, veering off the path she herself had worn into the ground, into an area where the trees shaded the ground. Emery sat on the soft leaves that had drifted to the floor, taking a drink of water at staring up at the houses strung up as canopies.
Technically, Emery wasn’t supposed to be on the ground. The trees were pretty thick, but there was always a few clusters with breaks in the leaves, where she could see above, and where the light could come in.
The reason the houses had been built up on the longest, strongest branches, was because there wasn’t enough room on the island floor. The homes formed a perfect circle around an area of trees, with walkways built across the center for easier access to places across the way.
This was where Emery lived, one small enclosure of houses. Another ring of buildings was located not too far off in either direction—so if you had a bird’s eye view, you’d see large circles, evenly spaced from each other, like the coin slots in the Connect Four game.
There was a thin, rickety ladder placed at the eastern side of each circle, providing ground access if necessary. Emery probably shouldn’t have been using it, but after a couple years, it seemed that no one cared if she went down it or not. So, practically every morning, Emery made the journey from her house to another a couple doors down to the wooden ladder for her short jog.
After a few minutes of rest and listening to the silence of the early day, Emery made her way back to the ladder, hoping her mother hadn’t decided to wake up sooner to prepare for the festival.
As she was pulling herself over the ladder, a sudden jangling and the sound of a heavy object hitting a leaf of a plant made her look down in surprise. Shining on the floor a few feet beneath her was the necklace her mother had gifted to her just last night.
Emery hopped off the ladder to retrieve the jewelry, and picked it up, holding the sparkling gem in her palm. For a second, Emery stared admiringly at the crystal necklace, then shook her head, blinking. She had never had a liking for jewelry, why was this different? She fingered the clasp and pulled it toward the front of her neck, clicking each end into place before sliding it behind her head again. Emery tucked the pendant into her shirt, not wanting it to get in the way.
As she made her way home, her mind drifted back to the festival that would happen later. If the people that didn’t obey the rules get honored yearly, why don’t we all just follow their path to get some credit? She thought bitterly. The gentle wind stopped, the rustling leaves and chirping birds went silent.
Emery herself paused, confused, but ignored it and opened her front door, which creaked slightly.
“Mom?” Emery called, her voice echoing slightly in the hall. Silence.
She poked her head inside the doorway to her mother’s room, but found the bed nicely made and no one to be seen.
Curious, Emery stepped further into the room, letting the door swing quietly shut behind her. Her eyes searched the room, and landed on the askew papers on the desk in the corner. Oddly, her mother’s favorite plant was on the ground, the pot cracked along one side with dirt spilled all over the floor.
First, Emery examined the pages on top of the desk. Most of them were folded and creased, some torn. Hasty writing was scrawled all over the small sheets. She analyzed the familiar script, glancing at some legible writing at the top of one of the papers.
A spell, a wish…long forgotten curse…Emery skimmed over the words, had her mother been writing a story? She’d always wanted to, but why these notes? Emery knew that her mother didn’t like her current job much, just helping everyday people with their illnesses and injuries. She had been naturally gifted at healing, so her job was given automatically.
Over time, her joy for the work dwindled, and she grew impatient and angry. If she had been writing a book of sorts, Emery was happy that she finally got around to it.
Emery was about to read more, but she spotted something at the corner of her eye, something reflecting the sunlight.
She turned to where it was coming from, and found the broken pot she’d seen earlier. Emery bent to inspect it, pulling a piece of the clay pot that had been broken off. Underneath the piece was something white—something tiny. Emery shifted the dirt around it away, and found a diamond—if it was real she didn’t know it—and plucked it with her fingers. It looked like a part of something bigger. As she hunched over the broken pot, something came swinging out in front of her: the necklace. Emery grabbed it to stop it from moving, but then realized something. There was a chip in the gem in the pendant, just around the size of the small rock.
Cautiously, Emery oriented the smaller piece to fit in the larger one, and placed it in the cavity. As soon as it was in place, a gust of air blew into her face, and the gem glowed. She heard the pages flapping, and looked up, to see writing illuminated across the papers. Whatever her mother had planned, Emery was about to find out.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
random free verse poem i may or may not edit for the writing comp:
This rebellion, what has it left us with?
Nothing; but a shack on the edge of the crashing cliff.
They promised they would set out and go forth,
To avenge us all, to bring peace and joy to us all;
They broke through the rain and the falling snow,
Yet it all had to end with a faltering shift.
They opened fire on the peaceful crowd,
Who was marching and yelling for justice for all.
This grey-blue world was never kind,
The tyrant witty and cruel to the mind,
The scarlet carpet had come from the fallen,
A goal to aim for the crazed minds.
And us? we were left behind, forgotten.
So we should come forth! and forward.
Join us; fight for the outcasts of our kind;
For the shack on the edge of the crashing cliff,
For the removal of the scarlet carpet,
For the hope of sunlight in eternal grief,
For our fallen leaders, the sun in the sunflowers,
They painted the right direction for us!
They have given us a chance.
We were given a second chance,
To fight, and to finally be free.
This rebellion, what has it left us with?
Nothing; but a shack on the edge of the crashing cliff.
They promised they would set out and go forth,
To avenge us all, to bring peace and joy to us all;
They broke through the rain and the falling snow,
Yet it all had to end with a faltering shift.
They opened fire on the peaceful crowd,
Who was marching and yelling for justice for all.
This grey-blue world was never kind,
The tyrant witty and cruel to the mind,
The scarlet carpet had come from the fallen,
A goal to aim for the crazed minds.
And us? we were left behind, forgotten.
So we should come forth! and forward.
Join us; fight for the outcasts of our kind;
For the shack on the edge of the crashing cliff,
For the removal of the scarlet carpet,
For the hope of sunlight in eternal grief,
For our fallen leaders, the sun in the sunflowers,
They painted the right direction for us!
They have given us a chance.
We were given a second chance,
To fight, and to finally be free.
- Godslamb
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51 posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
daily 15/3/22
Idioms used: Beating up a dead horse, there is a vhip on you're sholder, wildngoose chase, easy as pie
It was a normal day after school and little Paul was playing in the garden. Paul lived with his Papa, his Mama, his Nonna, and his older sister Julie. Now Paul was a disobedient little boy and whenever someone told him to do something he would do the exact opposite. For example if his Mama told him to come inside he would go outside. If his Nonna told him to read a book he would play a game. And if his Papa told him to milk the cows he’d finish all the milk they already had. Only his sister,Julie, could get him to listen, or at least trick him into listening to her, his Mama, Papa, and Nonna. His sister would trick him with puns and sayings, but most of all idioms. About a day ago there had been some cake and Julie, annoyed at her brother hid it from him. Paul was very mad at her for that and promised her that she would pay. One day Paul while playing in the garden, saw Julie come out of the house he thought this a perfect time to get revenge. He grabbed his sisters favorite doll and told her he was going to let the goat have it. Julie screamed, “ Why would you do that.” Paul said, “ Because you his my cake and when I tried to find it you said i was going on a wild goose chase.” Julie quickly thought abut what she would say. Then she got an idea and yelled, “ There is a chip on your shoulder! And if you feed my doll to the goat I will tell her that you are beating up a dead horse!” Paul looked at his shoulders but there was nothing on them. And all the horses were in the barn so how could he be doing that. But if is parents heard that they’d probably assume he killed a horse. So he reluctantly gave the doll back and trudged home. “That was as easy as pie,” Julie said with a twinkle in her eye
(346 words)
Idioms used: Beating up a dead horse, there is a vhip on you're sholder, wildngoose chase, easy as pie
It was a normal day after school and little Paul was playing in the garden. Paul lived with his Papa, his Mama, his Nonna, and his older sister Julie. Now Paul was a disobedient little boy and whenever someone told him to do something he would do the exact opposite. For example if his Mama told him to come inside he would go outside. If his Nonna told him to read a book he would play a game. And if his Papa told him to milk the cows he’d finish all the milk they already had. Only his sister,Julie, could get him to listen, or at least trick him into listening to her, his Mama, Papa, and Nonna. His sister would trick him with puns and sayings, but most of all idioms. About a day ago there had been some cake and Julie, annoyed at her brother hid it from him. Paul was very mad at her for that and promised her that she would pay. One day Paul while playing in the garden, saw Julie come out of the house he thought this a perfect time to get revenge. He grabbed his sisters favorite doll and told her he was going to let the goat have it. Julie screamed, “ Why would you do that.” Paul said, “ Because you his my cake and when I tried to find it you said i was going on a wild goose chase.” Julie quickly thought abut what she would say. Then she got an idea and yelled, “ There is a chip on your shoulder! And if you feed my doll to the goat I will tell her that you are beating up a dead horse!” Paul looked at his shoulders but there was nothing on them. And all the horses were in the barn so how could he be doing that. But if is parents heard that they’d probably assume he killed a horse. So he reluctantly gave the doll back and trudged home. “That was as easy as pie,” Julie said with a twinkle in her eye
(346 words)
Last edited by Godslamb (March 15, 2022 16:07:47)
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
15/3 daily - 304 words!
I was up my favourite tree when the dog barked. The bark caused me excruciating pain. So much pain that I dived head first out of the tree. Unintentionally, of course.
For some reason, I could not turn myself onto my feet. My face hit the floor face first and I was dead. Picking myself up, I resumed my daily business: chasing squirrels, flailing at pigeons and enjoying that creamy tuna for dinner. However, the thought continued to bug me for the rest of the day - I was onto Life 2.
You are probably wondering why I am alive, human. Well, it turns out you humans are right; us cats do have nine lives. That’s why cats have such a long lifespan. So whenever you see a dead cat, wait a moment before phoning its owners, as it could merely be resting between lives. Now, do not get too excited about this - these lives have quite a short span, and often we die falling from trees. If you like dogs, here is some sad news: dogs have one life. In fact, cats are the only animal (that I know of) to have more than one life, so you better keep your dog safe!
The next day, I fell off the top of the local high school’s roof. Luckily, no one spotted me fall to my death and resurrect myself only seconds later. Later that day, I was run over by a car. They saw me dead, but they did not recognise me. I watched them return a few minutes later and look for my body, yet they did not see or hear me hissing from inside the hedge. Humans ought to all wear glasses. In fact, they should all have telescope lenses in their eyes - even the ones wearing spectacles cannot see a thing. Anyway, I probably ought to stop dying - I’m already on Life 4!
I was up my favourite tree when the dog barked. The bark caused me excruciating pain. So much pain that I dived head first out of the tree. Unintentionally, of course.
For some reason, I could not turn myself onto my feet. My face hit the floor face first and I was dead. Picking myself up, I resumed my daily business: chasing squirrels, flailing at pigeons and enjoying that creamy tuna for dinner. However, the thought continued to bug me for the rest of the day - I was onto Life 2.
You are probably wondering why I am alive, human. Well, it turns out you humans are right; us cats do have nine lives. That’s why cats have such a long lifespan. So whenever you see a dead cat, wait a moment before phoning its owners, as it could merely be resting between lives. Now, do not get too excited about this - these lives have quite a short span, and often we die falling from trees. If you like dogs, here is some sad news: dogs have one life. In fact, cats are the only animal (that I know of) to have more than one life, so you better keep your dog safe!
The next day, I fell off the top of the local high school’s roof. Luckily, no one spotted me fall to my death and resurrect myself only seconds later. Later that day, I was run over by a car. They saw me dead, but they did not recognise me. I watched them return a few minutes later and look for my body, yet they did not see or hear me hissing from inside the hedge. Humans ought to all wear glasses. In fact, they should all have telescope lenses in their eyes - even the ones wearing spectacles cannot see a thing. Anyway, I probably ought to stop dying - I’m already on Life 4!
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Weekly #2
Part 1, Written along side with Libra
The whole thing can be found right here
We decided to split the word count in half. All together we wrote 2,446 words.
So I wrote about 1,223 of them
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Word Count: 1,223
Part 2: Character
Word Count: 618
Part 3: Setting
Word Count: 502
Part 4: Premise
Word Count: 177
Part 5: A complete story
Character from Alba
Setting from here
Premise from Moss
Word Count: 1,130
Total Word Count: 3,650
Thanks for reading||Back to contents
Part 1, Written along side with Libra
The whole thing can be found right here
We decided to split the word count in half. All together we wrote 2,446 words.
So I wrote about 1,223 of them
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Word Count: 1,223
Part 2: Character
Name: Rebecca Morris
Age: 22
Species: Human
Personality and Traits: Rebecca is a hard-working human being. She always tries to prioritize the most important things first. When put into a group, she immediately assumes the role of leader, and guides everyone though the project or assignment. However, when people start to fall behind, she starts to get ticked off. Not only just because she knows if everyone doesn't finish they'll fail, but also because she's short-tempered. Even little things can get to her and irritate her. But Rebecca always tries to think positive, even when things aren't looking too great. This can prove to be difficult for her because of her temper, but when she puts her mind to it she can control herself. When she's working in a group, Rebecca can get lazy over certain things. Since there's usually not a consequence for not doing those things, Rebecca can procrastinate a lot on them. Rebecca is the type to always try and push herself, even when she doesn't want to. She really wants to succeed and attempt to come out at the top. Most of the time, Rebecca is willing to push and push in order to get there. Even though this puts a lot of strait on her, she isn't the type to back down. However, when there's no clear path to success, Rebecca can get lazy and veer off the path.
Wants, Hopes, and Strengths: Rebecca wants to achieve success. She wants to one day look back upon her life and say ‘Hey, I made it.’ Rebecca also wants to have contributed to something life changing. She thinks that if she never stops pushing herself she'll one day discover something extrodinary. Her best subject back in school has always been science, and she wants to become a chemist when she graduates with her master degree. Throughout her time at college, she has been dedicated to finishing at the top of her class. Some days pass by where all she did was study. However, when days like these happen the next day(s) tend to be harder for her to get anything done. She hopes that when she graduates she'll immediately find a job that wants her to do something important. Rebecca knows that something like this to happen is nearly impossible, but she's aiming high anyway. She wants to work hard and hope that she'll be there. She also hopes that she won't have to wait a period of time for her to start working. This is why she pushes herself so hard. Rebecca doesn't want to wait around for life to happen. She can be very impatient at times, so the sooner she has something important to do, the better it is for her.
Dislikes and Fears: Rebecca really hates people who lag behind. Since she loves to play leader, she's in charge of everyone in the group. When someone starts acting lazy, she has to force herself not to lash out at them. Even though she's pretty lazy at times, she shows no sign of this when working in a group. Rebecca tends to want to work alone for this very reason, but doesn't mind working in a group. Rebecca also isn't fond of the dark. This fear comes from when she was a little girl, around 9 years old. Her older brother liked to trick her into walking into a closet, and then close the door on her and lock it from the outside. Rebecca really hated being left alone in the dark, and to this day she always turns the light on in a room. Rebecca also really doesn't like horror movies. Nothing in particular bothers her, it's just she prefers not to watch them.——–
Word Count: 618
Part 3: Setting
If you think you ever saw a place so peaceful it was almost insane, then your probably talking about Starryburn beach. Down at Starryburn beach, everything is calm and serene. Not many people know about this place, since it's hidden from weary eyes. But if you ever go around thinking and wishing you could be in such a peaceful place, you might find Starryburn beach. The sand is always warm and is textiled to not make you itch. The star that's generously providing such warmth is always shinning bright. The ocean that the beach overlooks is clear and rich in color. But before you go thinking this is just an ordinary beach, think not, because this isn't like some beach in the Caribbeans. This is a magical beach. The white-blue star that shines here is much bigger and brighter than the sun. And the sky, you ask? The Starryburn beach offers a pleasant and relaxing view of a distant nebula full of young stars. Words cannot describe how magnificent the view is. The ocean here is no ordinary ocean. The color is a soothing gradient from plum to lilac. The waves are constant, and don't need wind or tides to control them. When you dive below the surface, you will witness the best sight of your life. Here at Starryburn beach, we don't have sea life. But that doesn't mean there isn't life at all. We raise newborn stars under the waters. This is where stars live before the wonderful people running the Starryburn beach send them up to the sky, to live out the rest of their long lives. But while the baby stars are still there, you can admire them and watch them grow, although you won't see much difference since they age very slowly. We breed every star type in these waters except for dwarfs since they have their own place dedicated to them. You may swim amongst the stars as you wish, but we advice you not to go too close. After all, even as babies they still are millions of degrees hotter than you. The habitat in the ocean of Starryburn beach is relatively simple, but still elegant in it's own way. Since the ocean is home to our baby stars, it's formatted just for them. They spend most of their time here playing and growing in the coral. It's best to leave them alone, although some stars are known to be attracted to some of the humans who have visited this humble beach. It's best not to get attached to them, however. We have an area under the water where you can relax in our nova circle. Here the water has been heated to noticably a warmer temperature then the rest of the ocean. Here, you may relax while being surrounded by the same materials used to create stars, but less powerful so species on Earth can handle it. You will feel yourself let go of all worries, as you lose conscious… and awake without stress.——-
Word Count: 502
Part 4: Premise
Your character is running. They've been out all day running. Now they have come home- or where ever they live- to finally rest. They throw themselves on a bed, and immediately drift off to sleep. The next morning, when they wake up, they feel a bit off weather. They try and push themselves out of bed, but their body immediately sores in pain. Your character immediately starts to observe themselves to figure out what's wrong. After looking over, there's nothing they can see that isn't normal. They decide that it must have been nothing, but when they stand up, they feel the pain. Your character sits down on the bed, and rubs their leg- or leg like thing, for creatures. The pain is almost blinding. Your character decides that they must have sprained their leg yesterday for running so much. They realize this is a bad thing, since without being able to walk well, they can't do an important thing they were going to do(which you can edit to fit your character.)——
How will they overcome this?
Word Count: 177
Part 5: A complete story
Character from Alba
Setting from here
Premise from Moss
Thea is outside taking a walk when suddenly a small rabbit hops out behind her. Its coat is an unnatural shade of blue, and it almost looks like it is glowing. Thea spins to see the animal hopping away, heading into a small area (like a tree tunnel in a forest, an alleyway in a city, an underground tunnel in a giant plain/field, etc.). It jumps onto the shoulder of a person dressed in all black, and they walk away. She follows it inside, into a massive open clearing, much larger than you would have expected from the entrance. The person sits down, crossing their legs and settling with the rabbit sitting calmly atop their head. They begin to chant an otherworldly song, and the rabbit glows brighter and brighter, until finally, it explodes. After the blue dust fades, the only thing left behind is…————
a shimmering purple bird
Thea jumps up at the sight of the bird. First the rabbit, now a bird. The person must have disappeared into the dust. Thea moves closer to the bird. I've never seen a bird that looks like this before. She thought. The bird notices her and eyes her curiously.
“Can you…can you understand me?” She asks the bird. The Bird tilts it's head, and makes a nod like gesture. Thea smirks at the bird. Similar to the rabbit, the bird almost appears to be glowing, except the bird looks more shinny. “Do you happen to have an owner?” She gently asks the bird. The bird moves closer to Thea, and is right by her knees. It flaps it's wings and looks around. They were still in the open clearing, and the only light source was the bird itself.
Maybe that person who has the rabbit is it's owner. Thea thought. She decided that she should probably try and give the bird back to them, but the problem was that she was unsure how to do so. I should take care of the bird until I find it's owner. She carefully reached out her hand, and the bird walked on her palm.
“You need a name… does Misty sound alright?” She asks. The bird flew onto Thea's shoulder and leaned it's beak against Thea's neck. She looked over at the bird and smiled. “Alright then, Misty it is.” She decided. Misty did the same nod like gesture and now flew onto Thea's head.
Thea scanned the area. They had traveled into the forest, where the Moonlight doesn't always reach. The forests only had light on one day, the summer solstice. Since it was only April, the forests would remain dark for a while. Thea quickly thought about how they would get back towards the ocean, where Thea lived. Misty noticed Thea thinking, and suddenly flew off, bring the light with her.
Thea was stunned for a moment, before realizing what happened. When she did, she got up and ran after Misty. It wasn't hard to find her, since she just needed to follow the light. After a while, Thea finally caught up with Misty, who was sitting on some sand right by the water. It was daytime, and it was pitch black out. The waves from the ocean provided a little light, but most of the light came from Misty.
“H-How did you know this is where I was heading?” Thea asked Misty. Misty flew onto Thea's shoulder and perched there. Thea gave Misty a slight smile, before walking barefoot into the water. She only went as deep to cover her ankles. She giggled softly to herself and started twirling around in the water. Misty started flying around her.
After a while, the moon started to rise. It brought the magnificent moonlight with it. Thea started walking towards her little house alongside the beach, with a slight smile on her face. She usually never had anyone to keep her company, but now she had Misty with her. Thea could see in the distance that a few people had gotten up and started working on planting crops.
Thea's house was settled along the beach, close to the coastline. It was relatively father away from where most people on Argentlun lived. Thea liked that since she didn't have to deal with a lot of people often. Thea went into her small garden where a few white roses and moondrop flowers grew. Misty flew onto a small cherry tree that was slowly growing. Thea smiled at Misty, and went inside.
The house was a bit messy, but Thea kind of liked it that way. She walked towards a small bookshelf and grabbed a small, dark blue-ish colored notebook. She went into another room, her small bedroom, and laid down on her bed. She slowly began to poor her thoughts onto a sheet in the book:Dear Diary,
Today was really something. I woke up in the daytime just so I could walk around Argentlun and be alone, but I never expected my little trip to be so.. chaotic.
I was going towards the desert when I saw a glowing blue rabbit. I've seen plenty of different species of animals on this small island, but I've never seen anything that looked like that. The moment I saw it, I immediately wanted to learn more about it. It was so different an interesting, unlike most things that live on this island.
When it started hopping away, I rushed to follow it. It ran towards a person all dressed in black, which was unusual since most of the teens and adults wear light green. I don't, of course, but black…. it really surprised me. Then the person dashed away into the dark forest, and I still followed them. They started chanting some song, in a language I've never heard before.
And then, right in front of my eyes, the rabbit exploded, and the person disappeared into the dust. But the rabbit left behind a bird, that had the same coat as the rabbit except purple. If I was interested in the rabbit before, I was curious about the bird. I've always liked birds, even if everyone else thinks that they eat the crops they worked so hard to plant. But I've always viewed them as magestic creatures.
The person who had the rabbit must own the bird too. But I couldn't leave the bird alone, in the dark forest. So I decided to take her home with me. I named her Misty, since I thought it fitted her well. Misty seems pretty happy to be with me, and I'm really enjoying having someone to talk to. It's nice to have a little friend to hang out with.
I know I should try and find Misty's owner so I can give her back, but I wouldn't mind watching her for a bit longer. She's such a joy to have around. I hope maybe we can be life long friends.
~*Thea*~
Thea put down her notebook, and took a peek out the window. The moonlight was fulling the island with light. She noticed that some people were pointing towards her house. She sighed quietly to herself. People always liked to give her trouble, and they didn't like her much. She always tried to get them to like her, but it never worked.
She slowly walked back outside, and glanced at Misty. She was over by the roses, and she appeared to be sleeping. Thea smiled at the bird. She decided that she shouldn't let anyone see Misty, in case they get any wrong ideas. Plus, she already kept her animal lover side a secret to everyone else. One bird shouldn't be much of a difference….right?
Word Count: 1,130
Total Word Count: 3,650
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Daily for SWC March 15th:
See if you can find the idiom lol.
Sheriff Puddle’s boots clinked as he walked down the dusty dirt road down to the saloon. His search for Bandit Blessing was coming to a close- he could tell he was about to find her. He kicked open the swinging doors and all eyes turned to him, and all talking stopped.
“I’d like to know where I could find Bandit Blessing,” He said loudly. Nobody said a word. Finally, someone in the back spoke up.
“I might know where to find him.”
Sheriff Puddle looked at the man who’d spoken, as did everyone else at the saloon. The sheriff had never seen him before, this must be the new guy in town that’d Puddle’d been looking for. The one who’d been overheard talking about working for Bandit Blessing for a bit. Sheriff Puddle grinned. He walked over to the man.
“How about I buy you a drink?” He said. The man looked at the sheriff for a moment, then nodded.
“Sure, I’ll take a drink.”
“Good.” Puddle gestured to the bartender and was brought to drinks. He handed one to the man. “My name is Sheriff Puddle, and I’ve been looking for Bandit Blessing for a while now. You know where I could find her?” The man took a sip of his drink.
“Possibly,” He said. “But I’m not a hundred percent sure. She might be gone by now.”
“Any clues would be better than none.” The man nodded.
“I heard tell that she was around here from someone I used to know when… nevermind that. I know where she might be. For a price, I can take you there.”
Sheriff Puddle leaned back in his seat and eyed the man. “How much do you want?” He asked.
The man smiled. “Let’s see… How about twenty dollars.” The sheriff whistled.
“No can do sir, that’s too much. How about ten?”
“Deal.” Sheriff puddle pulled out the ten dollars and handed them to the man. The man stuffed it in his pocket and stood up. “Let’s go.”
The sheriff followed him out of the saloon and down the street. The man hopped onto his horse and the sheriff got on the back. The man rode for fifteen minutes away from town, before stopping the horse. They both climbed off.
“How is this somewhere Bandit Blessing could be hiding? It’s the middle of a dessert!” The sheriff said, looking around.
“Exactly,” A voice said from behind Sheriff Puddle. Puddle turned around and saw the man standing behind him. But that hadn’t been the man’s voice, it’d been a girl’s. The man grinned and took his hat off. The removal of the hat showed that it was concealing lots of hair underneath and that the man was actually Bandit Blessing.
“You!” The sheriff yelled. “It was you the whole time, you were Blessing in disguise!”
Blessing smiled. “Of course, it was part of the plan to trick you out here. Nobody will ever find you.” Blessing raised her hand above the gun she had hanging at her waist. Sheriff Puddle did the same. They stared at each other. Quick as a flash they both grabbed their guns and fired simultaneously. Both of them screamed in pain and Blessing fell to the ground. She was shot in the leg, and Sheriff Puddle was shot in the arm. Before Bandit Blessing could grab her gun from off the ground, the sheriff walked up and pointed his gun at her head.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you. You’re coming with me.”
The idiom was blessing in disguise if you didn't know xD
See if you can find the idiom lol.
Sheriff Puddle’s boots clinked as he walked down the dusty dirt road down to the saloon. His search for Bandit Blessing was coming to a close- he could tell he was about to find her. He kicked open the swinging doors and all eyes turned to him, and all talking stopped.
“I’d like to know where I could find Bandit Blessing,” He said loudly. Nobody said a word. Finally, someone in the back spoke up.
“I might know where to find him.”
Sheriff Puddle looked at the man who’d spoken, as did everyone else at the saloon. The sheriff had never seen him before, this must be the new guy in town that’d Puddle’d been looking for. The one who’d been overheard talking about working for Bandit Blessing for a bit. Sheriff Puddle grinned. He walked over to the man.
“How about I buy you a drink?” He said. The man looked at the sheriff for a moment, then nodded.
“Sure, I’ll take a drink.”
“Good.” Puddle gestured to the bartender and was brought to drinks. He handed one to the man. “My name is Sheriff Puddle, and I’ve been looking for Bandit Blessing for a while now. You know where I could find her?” The man took a sip of his drink.
“Possibly,” He said. “But I’m not a hundred percent sure. She might be gone by now.”
“Any clues would be better than none.” The man nodded.
“I heard tell that she was around here from someone I used to know when… nevermind that. I know where she might be. For a price, I can take you there.”
Sheriff Puddle leaned back in his seat and eyed the man. “How much do you want?” He asked.
The man smiled. “Let’s see… How about twenty dollars.” The sheriff whistled.
“No can do sir, that’s too much. How about ten?”
“Deal.” Sheriff puddle pulled out the ten dollars and handed them to the man. The man stuffed it in his pocket and stood up. “Let’s go.”
The sheriff followed him out of the saloon and down the street. The man hopped onto his horse and the sheriff got on the back. The man rode for fifteen minutes away from town, before stopping the horse. They both climbed off.
“How is this somewhere Bandit Blessing could be hiding? It’s the middle of a dessert!” The sheriff said, looking around.
“Exactly,” A voice said from behind Sheriff Puddle. Puddle turned around and saw the man standing behind him. But that hadn’t been the man’s voice, it’d been a girl’s. The man grinned and took his hat off. The removal of the hat showed that it was concealing lots of hair underneath and that the man was actually Bandit Blessing.
“You!” The sheriff yelled. “It was you the whole time, you were Blessing in disguise!”
Blessing smiled. “Of course, it was part of the plan to trick you out here. Nobody will ever find you.” Blessing raised her hand above the gun she had hanging at her waist. Sheriff Puddle did the same. They stared at each other. Quick as a flash they both grabbed their guns and fired simultaneously. Both of them screamed in pain and Blessing fell to the ground. She was shot in the leg, and Sheriff Puddle was shot in the arm. Before Bandit Blessing could grab her gun from off the ground, the sheriff walked up and pointed his gun at her head.
“I wouldn’t do that if I were you. You’re coming with me.”
The idiom was blessing in disguise if you didn't know xD
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Word War 1:140 words
“One, two, three, go!”
I Hear that same old voice in my head whenever I do a race, some homework, or just something really. I just always race myself, ever since I was little. I guess that's why I'm one of the fastest people in my class, other that Jemima, who's pretty much the fastest. I don't know how she does it. Not really. Maybe it's because she's not constantly trying to race things? I don't know. I guess I just rush too much. But being fast is a good thing, right? I'm still not sure.
Right now, I'm running laps around the playground for Sports Day, which is my favourite time of the year. It's better than Christmas. It's better than Halloween, it's pretty much better than anything. That's because you run around a lot, Which I do best.
“One, two, three, go!”
I Hear that same old voice in my head whenever I do a race, some homework, or just something really. I just always race myself, ever since I was little. I guess that's why I'm one of the fastest people in my class, other that Jemima, who's pretty much the fastest. I don't know how she does it. Not really. Maybe it's because she's not constantly trying to race things? I don't know. I guess I just rush too much. But being fast is a good thing, right? I'm still not sure.
Right now, I'm running laps around the playground for Sports Day, which is my favourite time of the year. It's better than Christmas. It's better than Halloween, it's pretty much better than anything. That's because you run around a lot, Which I do best.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Main Cabin Daily 3/15
Topic: Idioms turned real
Words: 324
Idiom used: Bull in a china shop
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'Do you want to go to Chinatown today? They've got a lot of cool stuff.' I texted my friend Casey.
The reply was almost instant. ‘Sure’ he texted back.
It was a Saturday afternoon, and we both had nothing to do. Chores were finished, schoolwork done. Chinatown was only a mile away from our houses, and Casey lived two houses down on the opposite side to mine.
I let my parents know before I put on a bright red sweater and some jeans to match Chinatown. A hair clip kept my hair held in a tight bun.
I grabbed a purse and stuffed a bit of cash in case I wanted to buy something. We agreed to meet up in the closest building to my house, a restaurant.
I secured my purse in one of my deep jean pockets, and began walking. It was spring and the sun was only out enough to make the place feel heated slightly, not overly hot. It was around 60 degrees (f). When I arrived, Casey was already there.
I took a few pictures of the paper lanterns, and the amazing architecture surrounding it. We decided to go to the shop with all of the nice china pottery, but I could tell that Casey was nervous about it for some reason.
In the shop, we split our ways as I looked at the porcelain cups and plates, all with complex blue patterns.
I heard a crash come from the other end of the store. I rushed over to see what happened. Casey was standing and looking down at a smashed porcelain bowl at his feet.
“I-i'm sorry.” He mumbled, the whole eyes of the store on him.
I took control of the situation. “It's ok,” I said, handing the store owner the amount that the bowl had cost.
“You're like a bull in a china shop,” I joke.
All of a sudden, Casey starts changing into a bull. Right in front of me.
Topic: Idioms turned real
Words: 324
Idiom used: Bull in a china shop
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'Do you want to go to Chinatown today? They've got a lot of cool stuff.' I texted my friend Casey.
The reply was almost instant. ‘Sure’ he texted back.
It was a Saturday afternoon, and we both had nothing to do. Chores were finished, schoolwork done. Chinatown was only a mile away from our houses, and Casey lived two houses down on the opposite side to mine.
I let my parents know before I put on a bright red sweater and some jeans to match Chinatown. A hair clip kept my hair held in a tight bun.
I grabbed a purse and stuffed a bit of cash in case I wanted to buy something. We agreed to meet up in the closest building to my house, a restaurant.
I secured my purse in one of my deep jean pockets, and began walking. It was spring and the sun was only out enough to make the place feel heated slightly, not overly hot. It was around 60 degrees (f). When I arrived, Casey was already there.
I took a few pictures of the paper lanterns, and the amazing architecture surrounding it. We decided to go to the shop with all of the nice china pottery, but I could tell that Casey was nervous about it for some reason.
In the shop, we split our ways as I looked at the porcelain cups and plates, all with complex blue patterns.
I heard a crash come from the other end of the store. I rushed over to see what happened. Casey was standing and looking down at a smashed porcelain bowl at his feet.
“I-i'm sorry.” He mumbled, the whole eyes of the store on him.
I took control of the situation. “It's ok,” I said, handing the store owner the amount that the bowl had cost.
“You're like a bull in a china shop,” I joke.
All of a sudden, Casey starts changing into a bull. Right in front of me.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Here's the writing for the weekly! Sorry it took so long- I think that I got all the necessary components of the story, with the word counts and everything
My Main SWC Thread: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/582424/?page=12#post-6081187
Comment thread: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/booklover883322/#comments-192408398
Bookie: 438
Slithering shadows slid over my limbs, pinning me down. “Ahh… glad to have you here.” Said a voice, snakelike with a hint of gravel. …family! You promised, dude!” “And what would the job be? I want them back! You keep on giving me more tasks when the deadline that YOU set keeps getting closer.” The shadows slowly released me, and followed their master. What was I supposed to do now? Of course, the city kind of creepy was nothing compared to that dude's type of creepy. He was a whole new type of evil. I, however, didn't belong to either side. I glanced around me and ducked into a little stone maintenance door in the side of the hill. Of course, I could totally stay in my family's old home, but that would give a whole new set of problems. Not to mention I glanced around me again. I didn't see any notes, but no matter how vigilant I was, he or one of his crones were always able to slip past me. I sighed as I ate. It was absolutely disgusting, but beggars cant be choosers. But of course, my luck could just fully deteriorate and leave me surrounded by a whole pack. My luck's like that. Day broke, but of course, being underground, I didn't get the memo. I sat up and yawned, thinking that I had woken up way too early. I decided to go check outside. When I stepped out, the sun overhead was bright and powerful. Shoot, it was probably noon, or even a little after. I went outside fully and closed the door. Pinned on the door, there was a note. “Hey there, lazy I scoffed. If it weren't for my family, I would've found that key and thrown it off a bridge. I looked around me. Hopefully the library hadn't walked off, because I needed to get there as soon as possible. I looked around. Where in the world could that map be? Where in the world could it be? Finally, I chanced on a sign that said, ”Maps“. Nothing. I decided to go get a librarian, maybe they would have a good idea of where I could find it. She looked at me weird. “Are you alright in the head? We don’t have ‘catacombs’,” she put up air quotes, “in this city.” “Are you alright?” she asked. ”Really?“ I asked. ”Thanks.“ I immediately cooled down She seemed to go deliberately slow, and it aggravated me. ”This is where we keep our maps that we're not supposed to have.“ She gestured to the room and left me to my own devices.
Ayid: 658
I could feel the cold wind brush against the hair on the back of my exposed neck. Clearly my black hoodie wasn't doing its job. The voice sent a shiver down my back. I stammered, ”I-I followed all the instructions, now give me back my… The mysterious voice replied, “Not yet…” I bit my lip to stop myself from screaming. “After you do this last job for me.” The voice echoed through out the alley. “I can't tell you yet.” The voice had gotten closer. “Come back here tomorrow at noon. There will be another note waiting for you.” The voice now sounded above my shoulder. I turned around, but saw no one. I clenched my fists and took a deep breath. A few more days. Then I can see them. I slowly backed out of the alley and steadily walked through the city. How different the city looked in the cover of night. Quiet and kind of creepy. I walked past the tall fancy apartments and buildings and reached a set of train tracks. These train tracks divided the city into two sides, the rich and the poor. I crossed over the tracks and head down a muddy slope. inside, I was sheltered from the cold wind. I sat down on a pile of leaves, wondering how long I have to stay here? I looked around. Not a very impressive home. the fact that me and my family have missing for more than 5 months. I think the neighbors would freak out if I came back all of a sudden. My tummy growled, okay I was getting hungry. I glanced at a pile of cans to my right. Ignoring the fact that it was basically stolen, I grabbed some green beans and ate it with a plastic spoon. Soon after I finished eating, I heard a howl, near by. I shuddered. Wolves. They wandered the city at night, but I never actually saw one, thankfully. My eyes drooped, so I decided to leave all my problems to tomorrow me, and sleep. I lay on the piles of leaves and slept, praying for good happy dreams. Of course that didn't happen. “your last and final task is to gain a valuable item of mine… a key. it can be found in the catacombs under the city you can find a map somewhere in the library? anyway I need the key. when you find it you HAVE to keep it safe. It's really important… I tucked the note in my hoodie and ran to the city. As I climbed up the hill I could see the skyscraper tops. I dodged crowds of tourists and people in my effort to get to the library. I finally found the library, it's been a while since I saw the large brick building. With out any hesitation, I walk in. I strolled through the library for a bit searching for the maps section I walked through the aisle, there were hundreds of maps, I glanced around trying to find anything that had ‘catacombs’ on it. I saw one pushing a cart of books so I went to her. ”Hello.“ She looked at me. ”Do you know where I can find a map of the catacombs?“ I stared at her. Are you kidding me?!?! I was so made I felt like knocking over a shelf ”NO!“ I screamed at her. I'm being very quiet like i'm supposed to be. She blinked at me and sighed, ”Ok look kid, I'm not supposed to be telling you this, but I think there's a map in the back office you can use that for a day alright?“ She nodded. ”You'll have to wait a bit, until I can finish putting these books away.“ She motioned to the cart. I nodded. I tapped my foot as I waited. finally, after what seemed like 150,000 years, she led me to an office in the back of the library.
The whole story: 1098 (with slight edits)
Slithering shadows slid over my limbs, pinning me down. I could feel the cold wind brush against the hair on the back of my exposed neck. Clearly my black hoodie wasn't doing its job.
“Ahh… glad to have you here.” Said a voice, snakelike with a hint of gravel. The voice sent a shiver down my back.
I stammered, ”I-I followed all the instructions, now give me back my family! You promised, dude!”
The mysterious voice replied, “Not yet…”
I bit my lip to stop myself from screaming.
“After you do this last job for me.” The voice echoed throughout the alley.
“And what would the job be? I want them back! You keep on giving me more tasks when the deadline that YOU set keeps getting closer.”
“I can't tell you yet.” The voice had gotten closer. “Come back here tomorrow at noon. There will be another note waiting for you.” The voice now sounded above my shoulder.
I turned my head, but saw no one. The shadows slowly released me, and followed their master. What was I supposed to do now?
I clenched my fists and took a deep breath. A few more days. Then I can see them.
I slowly backed out of the alley and steadily walked through the city. How different the city looked in the cover of night. Quiet and kind of creepy. Of course, the city kind of creepy was nothing compared to that dude's type of creepy. He was a whole new type of evil.
I walked past the tall fancy apartments and buildings and reached a set of train tracks. These train tracks divided the city into two sides, the rich and the poor. I crossed over the tracks and headed down a muddy slope. I, however, didn't belong to either side.
I glanced around me and ducked into a little stone maintenance door on the side of the hill. Inside, I was sheltered from the cold wind. I sat down on a pile of leaves, wondering how long I have to stay here.
I looked around. Not a very impressive home. Of course, I could totally stay in my family's old home, but that would give a whole new set of problems. Not to mention the fact that me and my family have been missing for more than 5 months. I think the neighbors would freak out if I came back all of a sudden.
I glanced around me again. I didn't see any notes, but no matter how vigilant I was, he or one of his crones were always able to slip past me. My tummy growled, okay I was getting hungry. I glanced at a pile of cans to my right. Ignoring the fact that the food was basically stolen, I grabbed some green beans and ate the cold veggies with a plastic spoon. I sighed as I ate.
It was absolutely disgusting, but beggars can't be choosers.
Soon after I finished eating, I heard a howl nearby. I shuddered.
Wolves.
They wandered the city at night, but I never actually saw one, thankfully.
But of course, my luck could just fully deteriorate and leave me surrounded by a whole pack. My luck's like that.
My eyes drooped, so I decided to leave all my problems to tomorrow me, and sleep. I lay on the piles of leaves and slept, praying for good happy dreams. Of course that didn't happen.
Day broke, but of course, being underground, I didn't get the memo.
I sat up and yawned, thinking that I had woken up way too early. I decided to go check outside. When I stepped out, the sun overhead was bright and powerful. Shoot, it was probably noon, or even a little after. I went outside fully and closed the door.
Pinned on the door, there was a note. “Hey there, lazy. Your last and final task is to gain a valuable item of mine… a key. It can be found in the catacombs under the city. You can find a map somewhere in the library. Anyways, I need the key. when you find it you HAVE to keep it safe. It's really important…”
I scoffed. If it weren't for my family, I would've found that key and thrown it off a bridge.
I tucked the note in my hoodie and ran to the city. As I climbed up the hill I could see the skyscraper tops. I dodged crowds of tourists and people in my effort to get to the library. I looked around me. Hopefully the library hadn't walked off, because I needed to get there as soon as possible.
I finally found the library, it's been a while since I saw the large brick building. Without any hesitation, I walked in.
I looked around. Where in the world could that map be? I strolled through the library for a bit, searching for the maps section.
Where in the world could it be?
Finally, I chanced upon a sign that said, ”Maps“. I walked through the aisle, there were hundreds of maps, I glanced around trying to find anything that had ‘catacombs’ on it. Nothing.
I decided to go get a librarian, maybe they would have a good idea of where I could find it.
I saw one pushing a cart of books so I went to her. ”Hello.“
She looked at me.
”Do you know where I can find a map of the catacombs?“
She looked at me weird. “Are you alright in the head? We don’t have ‘catacombs’,” she put up air quotes, “in this city.”
I stared at her. Are you kidding me?!?! I was so made I felt like knocking over a shelf
“Are you alright?” she asked.
”NO!“ I screamed at her. I'm being very quiet like I'm supposed to be.
She blinked at me and sighed, ”Ok look kid, I'm not supposed to be telling you this, but I think there's a map in the back office you can use that for a day alright?“
”Really?“ I asked. ”Thanks.“ I immediately cooled down.
She nodded. ”You'll have to wait a bit, until I can finish putting these books away.“ She motioned to the cart. I nodded. I tapped my foot as I waited. She seemed to go deliberately slow, and it aggravated me.
Finally, after what seemed like 150,000 years, she led me to an office in the back of the library. ”This is where we keep our maps that we're not supposed to have." She gestured to the room and left me to my own devices.
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Slithering shadows slid over my limbs, pinning me down. “Ahh… glad to have you here.” Said a voice, snakelike with a hint of gravel. …family! You promised, dude!” “And what would the job be? I want them back! You keep on giving me more tasks when the deadline that YOU set keeps getting closer.” The shadows slowly released me, and followed their master. What was I supposed to do now? Of course, the city kind of creepy was nothing compared to that dude's type of creepy. He was a whole new type of evil. I, however, didn't belong to either side. I glanced around me and ducked into a little stone maintenance door in the side of the hill. Of course, I could totally stay in my family's old home, but that would give a whole new set of problems. Not to mention I glanced around me again. I didn't see any notes, but no matter how vigilant I was, he or one of his crones were always able to slip past me. I sighed as I ate. It was absolutely disgusting, but beggars cant be choosers. But of course, my luck could just fully deteriorate and leave me surrounded by a whole pack. My luck's like that. Day broke, but of course, being underground, I didn't get the memo. I sat up and yawned, thinking that I had woken up way too early. I decided to go check outside. When I stepped out, the sun overhead was bright and powerful. Shoot, it was probably noon, or even a little after. I went outside fully and closed the door. Pinned on the door, there was a note. “Hey there, lazy I scoffed. If it weren't for my family, I would've found that key and thrown it off a bridge. I looked around me. Hopefully the library hadn't walked off, because I needed to get there as soon as possible. I looked around. Where in the world could that map be? Where in the world could it be? Finally, I chanced on a sign that said, ”Maps“. Nothing. I decided to go get a librarian, maybe they would have a good idea of where I could find it. She looked at me weird. “Are you alright in the head? We don’t have ‘catacombs’,” she put up air quotes, “in this city.” “Are you alright?” she asked. ”Really?“ I asked. ”Thanks.“ I immediately cooled down She seemed to go deliberately slow, and it aggravated me. ”This is where we keep our maps that we're not supposed to have.“ She gestured to the room and left me to my own devices.
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I could feel the cold wind brush against the hair on the back of my exposed neck. Clearly my black hoodie wasn't doing its job. The voice sent a shiver down my back. I stammered, ”I-I followed all the instructions, now give me back my… The mysterious voice replied, “Not yet…” I bit my lip to stop myself from screaming. “After you do this last job for me.” The voice echoed through out the alley. “I can't tell you yet.” The voice had gotten closer. “Come back here tomorrow at noon. There will be another note waiting for you.” The voice now sounded above my shoulder. I turned around, but saw no one. I clenched my fists and took a deep breath. A few more days. Then I can see them. I slowly backed out of the alley and steadily walked through the city. How different the city looked in the cover of night. Quiet and kind of creepy. I walked past the tall fancy apartments and buildings and reached a set of train tracks. These train tracks divided the city into two sides, the rich and the poor. I crossed over the tracks and head down a muddy slope. inside, I was sheltered from the cold wind. I sat down on a pile of leaves, wondering how long I have to stay here? I looked around. Not a very impressive home. the fact that me and my family have missing for more than 5 months. I think the neighbors would freak out if I came back all of a sudden. My tummy growled, okay I was getting hungry. I glanced at a pile of cans to my right. Ignoring the fact that it was basically stolen, I grabbed some green beans and ate it with a plastic spoon. Soon after I finished eating, I heard a howl, near by. I shuddered. Wolves. They wandered the city at night, but I never actually saw one, thankfully. My eyes drooped, so I decided to leave all my problems to tomorrow me, and sleep. I lay on the piles of leaves and slept, praying for good happy dreams. Of course that didn't happen. “your last and final task is to gain a valuable item of mine… a key. it can be found in the catacombs under the city you can find a map somewhere in the library? anyway I need the key. when you find it you HAVE to keep it safe. It's really important… I tucked the note in my hoodie and ran to the city. As I climbed up the hill I could see the skyscraper tops. I dodged crowds of tourists and people in my effort to get to the library. I finally found the library, it's been a while since I saw the large brick building. With out any hesitation, I walk in. I strolled through the library for a bit searching for the maps section I walked through the aisle, there were hundreds of maps, I glanced around trying to find anything that had ‘catacombs’ on it. I saw one pushing a cart of books so I went to her. ”Hello.“ She looked at me. ”Do you know where I can find a map of the catacombs?“ I stared at her. Are you kidding me?!?! I was so made I felt like knocking over a shelf ”NO!“ I screamed at her. I'm being very quiet like i'm supposed to be. She blinked at me and sighed, ”Ok look kid, I'm not supposed to be telling you this, but I think there's a map in the back office you can use that for a day alright?“ She nodded. ”You'll have to wait a bit, until I can finish putting these books away.“ She motioned to the cart. I nodded. I tapped my foot as I waited. finally, after what seemed like 150,000 years, she led me to an office in the back of the library.
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Slithering shadows slid over my limbs, pinning me down. I could feel the cold wind brush against the hair on the back of my exposed neck. Clearly my black hoodie wasn't doing its job.
“Ahh… glad to have you here.” Said a voice, snakelike with a hint of gravel. The voice sent a shiver down my back.
I stammered, ”I-I followed all the instructions, now give me back my family! You promised, dude!”
The mysterious voice replied, “Not yet…”
I bit my lip to stop myself from screaming.
“After you do this last job for me.” The voice echoed throughout the alley.
“And what would the job be? I want them back! You keep on giving me more tasks when the deadline that YOU set keeps getting closer.”
“I can't tell you yet.” The voice had gotten closer. “Come back here tomorrow at noon. There will be another note waiting for you.” The voice now sounded above my shoulder.
I turned my head, but saw no one. The shadows slowly released me, and followed their master. What was I supposed to do now?
I clenched my fists and took a deep breath. A few more days. Then I can see them.
I slowly backed out of the alley and steadily walked through the city. How different the city looked in the cover of night. Quiet and kind of creepy. Of course, the city kind of creepy was nothing compared to that dude's type of creepy. He was a whole new type of evil.
I walked past the tall fancy apartments and buildings and reached a set of train tracks. These train tracks divided the city into two sides, the rich and the poor. I crossed over the tracks and headed down a muddy slope. I, however, didn't belong to either side.
I glanced around me and ducked into a little stone maintenance door on the side of the hill. Inside, I was sheltered from the cold wind. I sat down on a pile of leaves, wondering how long I have to stay here.
I looked around. Not a very impressive home. Of course, I could totally stay in my family's old home, but that would give a whole new set of problems. Not to mention the fact that me and my family have been missing for more than 5 months. I think the neighbors would freak out if I came back all of a sudden.
I glanced around me again. I didn't see any notes, but no matter how vigilant I was, he or one of his crones were always able to slip past me. My tummy growled, okay I was getting hungry. I glanced at a pile of cans to my right. Ignoring the fact that the food was basically stolen, I grabbed some green beans and ate the cold veggies with a plastic spoon. I sighed as I ate.
It was absolutely disgusting, but beggars can't be choosers.
Soon after I finished eating, I heard a howl nearby. I shuddered.
Wolves.
They wandered the city at night, but I never actually saw one, thankfully.
But of course, my luck could just fully deteriorate and leave me surrounded by a whole pack. My luck's like that.
My eyes drooped, so I decided to leave all my problems to tomorrow me, and sleep. I lay on the piles of leaves and slept, praying for good happy dreams. Of course that didn't happen.
Day broke, but of course, being underground, I didn't get the memo.
I sat up and yawned, thinking that I had woken up way too early. I decided to go check outside. When I stepped out, the sun overhead was bright and powerful. Shoot, it was probably noon, or even a little after. I went outside fully and closed the door.
Pinned on the door, there was a note. “Hey there, lazy. Your last and final task is to gain a valuable item of mine… a key. It can be found in the catacombs under the city. You can find a map somewhere in the library. Anyways, I need the key. when you find it you HAVE to keep it safe. It's really important…”
I scoffed. If it weren't for my family, I would've found that key and thrown it off a bridge.
I tucked the note in my hoodie and ran to the city. As I climbed up the hill I could see the skyscraper tops. I dodged crowds of tourists and people in my effort to get to the library. I looked around me. Hopefully the library hadn't walked off, because I needed to get there as soon as possible.
I finally found the library, it's been a while since I saw the large brick building. Without any hesitation, I walked in.
I looked around. Where in the world could that map be? I strolled through the library for a bit, searching for the maps section.
Where in the world could it be?
Finally, I chanced upon a sign that said, ”Maps“. I walked through the aisle, there were hundreds of maps, I glanced around trying to find anything that had ‘catacombs’ on it. Nothing.
I decided to go get a librarian, maybe they would have a good idea of where I could find it.
I saw one pushing a cart of books so I went to her. ”Hello.“
She looked at me.
”Do you know where I can find a map of the catacombs?“
She looked at me weird. “Are you alright in the head? We don’t have ‘catacombs’,” she put up air quotes, “in this city.”
I stared at her. Are you kidding me?!?! I was so made I felt like knocking over a shelf
“Are you alright?” she asked.
”NO!“ I screamed at her. I'm being very quiet like I'm supposed to be.
She blinked at me and sighed, ”Ok look kid, I'm not supposed to be telling you this, but I think there's a map in the back office you can use that for a day alright?“
”Really?“ I asked. ”Thanks.“ I immediately cooled down.
She nodded. ”You'll have to wait a bit, until I can finish putting these books away.“ She motioned to the cart. I nodded. I tapped my foot as I waited. She seemed to go deliberately slow, and it aggravated me.
Finally, after what seemed like 150,000 years, she led me to an office in the back of the library. ”This is where we keep our maps that we're not supposed to have." She gestured to the room and left me to my own devices.