Thanks for the bump exypno! I have been getting a little procrastinately lately. However I will now try to bump this thread everyday! Anyway I guess this is the end of this bump. Bump you tomorrow!

Bump entry 33: Developing ideas
Sometimes it can be hard to think of plots that you feel are in depth. However the one of the best ways to make an idea better is to ask questions about it. For example lets take the idea of a hero goes on a quest to defeat an evil overlord. The first two questions you want to ask is who is the hero, and evil overlord, and why are they doing this. Thinking this through you can go from a hero goes on a quest to defeat an evil overlord to a kid that wants to live out an epic adventure like the ones they read in books, and bring peace to the land going with their older sibling going to watch over them, and to fulfill their dream of exploring the world to defeat a person who made an organization to overthrow the current government because the current government arrested someone they cared about in a way that feels unfair to them. This is only a baseline for a potential plot, but if you keep going you can make a full plot. That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

Hi, I need a few sprites for a game that I'm making. I need a Needle, Red blood cell, White blood cell, Disease, Pulsating heart, and Flesh skin blood background. All Pixel Art. Send to me ASAP.

Thanks.

@Opensourcerer This is not an art shop. When making this shop I ruled out art as something I offer as on another site my art shop there is extremely backed up. Please look for another shop that offers pixel art.

I would like a review!
Link to Project: Apple Clicker
Any sections you want me to review: Since this is a game… So everything, please
Anything else: The project is a game, and please be really detailed and harsh, I'm always open to suggestion, no matter how harsh it is

Apple Clicker
Gameplay: It's just like every other clicker game ever, you click the apple, buy auto click upgrades until you get to 100,000. Gameplay here is dominated by the upgrade buttons and shortly after getting an apple farm you have little to no reason to click anything other than the upgrade buttons. The you beat the game was pretty underwhelming, as it felt more like getting an easy achievement than actually beating something. However I do like the space background for after you get there. I felt like having some of the upgrades on the side, and all of them in more was repetitive.

Main menu: The instructions in the description was clear, however having an instructions button that just points to the instructions is very repetitive. I wish there was a way back to the main menu from the instructions menu. I like how you added an option for which color the apple is, however I notice that there is no option for a yellow apple. I wish there was a way to go back to the settings menu without restarting as I found the noise annoying quickly, and I wanted to turn it off.

Glitches: In the settings in some spots you can click to change it, however it doesn't let you change it back by clicking in the same place because the text moves it's location. I suggest adding a filled rectangle the same color as the background behind the text.

Apple galaxy: After a while you can buy a ton of apple planets. Does this mean you can get an entire galaxy of apples? It's so many apple planets. Do little appleians live in little homes and work at apple farms to send you more apples. Hopefully no space ships crash into the apple planets that suddenly appear whenever you buy one, especially when you have so many apple auto upgrades you can just mass buy new planets with no end!

Visuals: Most of the visuals are just pre-made Scratch graphics. While I have no problem with this, some people might think lesser of the game because of it. For the upgrade buttons on the right I like how you made them rectangular buttons. I wish you would do the same for the buttons in the more section. If you made the graphics for the buttons vector you could easily make an outline for the buttons which would make them look more professional. It would be nice if the more section updated with winning the game like the apple clicking section. The thumbnail is pretty basic, and it would fit the style of the text better if the right apple was green, and the apple in the middle had either a gradient in it that went from red to green, or the right side of it was made green. The apple on the right could be tilted slightly to match with the apple on the left. As for the main menu it's self it is underwhelming, and could use some work to make it look more exciting.

What I would like to see: I would like to see something to make this clicker memorable. If I wasn't reviewing this I would probably forget about this clicker in a day. Right now it is a very generic clicker game with apples, and an ending. If you really want this game to stand out you need to add something memorable. While playing this I got an idea about how you can handle upgrades. What about making a more section into a little farm like place. The auto clickers could take form in the place of apple trees. You can buy apple seeds with apples, then upgrade the seeds into huge trees with apples. You can make up a lot of different apples to buy with seeds. You could buy more plots of land with apples. If you allow people to go back into the settings you could make it so you can switch your clicker to the different kinds of apples you have planted. Being able to see your upgrades like this would defiantly make it more memorable than it is now, but this is just an idea. You could also add more apples per click upgrades to give someone a reason to click the apple instead of spamming auto click upgrades.

Overall: This is a very generic clicker game that has nothing but the ending, which is underwhelming, to make it memorable. I give this clicker a 4/10 for being a generic clicker about apples that has an “end”.

Thank you muellly, as since this game is in alpha, I will put your idea into consideration. your review was fantastic and the team is really grateful for it. thank you
the review was fantastic and the speed to make this review was quick, seeing that you had played the whole game. I would say the service was great and you actually thought of the same idea as me with the back to settings button. the thumbnail was made by ☄️ TS SᕼOᑭᑭE ☄️ and I'll change the thumbnail just a bit (also I heard that you are a partner with ☄️ TS SᕼOᑭᑭE ☄️… Right?)
Signed, Alex11345

@Alex11345 yep, I'm partnered with the TS shoppe. Anyway now for our regularly scheduled bump entry. Wait a minute when did I even have a schedule for this. Don't I just usally bump whenever I feel like it. Sometimes two or three times in a day, some times once in a few months note to self, never announce release dates for games for a bump entry again, anyway now for the actual entry part of this bump. Wait a minute me talking about when I post bump entries it has taken up a mini bump it's self. Well I guess there is no more of this

Bump entry 34: got a lot of orders
I should have gone this bump entry weeks ago, but I got procastinaty. Anyway I have done 2 character ideas, a music idea and 4 reviews. I took a while to finish the first character idea, however afterwards I was on a role for a few days! Until I fell into a procastination loop for a while, and only started to actively post bumps a few days after reviewing Apple clicker. In those reviews I did a review for someone to review my shop. And I got to say I find it ironic that my harshest review happened when someone was rating my shop for kindness. I guess the more I have to work with, I have more opportunities to lighten the mood. Anyway that's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

Bump entry 35: New years resolution
My new years resolution for this shop is to bump more often. In the past I have gone weeks without bumping due to procastination. I want this to change, and to bump this shop at least three times a week if it isn't getting any activity. Wow this bump entry is shorter than usual. That's it for this bump entry, bump you next time!

@muelly how'd you put emojis on the title i tried it many times and it didn't work

Sorry if this isn't about the topic

 continue this hashtag if you live in australia [img]http://u.cubeupload.com/rabbitcarrots/FEDB1435D41540BFB9FB.jpeg[/img] is the image code xD oh and btw this siggy is from @Hellounicorns2    :cool:

Thanks for choosing The Shop Review Shop! As I see you have a rating system already in place, I will be using other's experiences as well as my own.

You'll receive a test order soon. When it is completed, you should receive a review within a few days.

I would like help developing a character!
Name of character: I haven't thought of one
Appearance: See the name section
Any existing personality: He is an evil scientist who wishes to kill the good scientist
Any existing backstory: He has had some kind of feud with the good scientist. If you could elaborate on this a bit then that would be appreciated.
Anything else: Don't worry about drawing it. As long as you give me detailed info about the appearance then I can take it to an art shop.

I would like a review!
Link to Project: Scratch Party
Any sections you want me to review: Everything would be awesome!
Anything else: If you can come up with any new simple minigames to add, that would be much appreciated. I only have 5 at the moment and I would love to expand that! Thanks!

@JAK15
The scientist's name is Kyle. He is in his early 30s.

Personality: Kyle knows how to act charming however he only really values people based on how much use they are to him. If he can he will try to trick others to do the work for him. He is secretive, and likes to tell people about his research after he has finished large sections of it. Kyle often feels like he has to be in charge of things or he panics on the inside. Kyle holds grudges for a long time. He has an eye for an eye mindset through his revenge is usually a greater wrong so it is more of an arm for a finger for him. Kyle likes to go on to MMOs and troll people for his own entertainment. Kyle holds interest in minerals, so he keeps a medium sized rock collection. Kyle has a greater interest in space. He owns a telescopes and he wishes to become the leader of a space colony on mars.

Backstory: Kyle was a single child. His mom and dad fought a lot. When Kyle was 8 his parents got a divorce, and his dad moved away. His mom got very busy with jobs after this and rarely had time for him. When Kyle was 7 a bully named John picked on him because it made John feel superior. Kyle was to scared to tell anyone about the bully. Over time Kyle learned from the bully, and learned how turn the bullying around on the bully, making him feel like he had to take care of himself in this world. In middle through high school Kyle often took advantage of others to get the answers for homeworks, and let them do most of the world toward group projects. Kyle was rather lazy during his childhood however he became more hard working when college came around. After graduating he went to work at a space program with hopes that he will be able to establish a colony on mars, which he would the leader of. At his work place is a guy named Joey. Joey has shared research Kyle was working on by himself in secret at the same time. Joey has also corrected Kyle one to many times (Joey has told Kyle the correct answer when Kyle was wrong in about the most polite way possible twice.). Kyle feels like Joey steals his spot light, makes him look like a fool way to much, and puts Kyle's chance of leadership on a mars colony in danger. Joey is Kyle's sworn rival, and Kyle swears to kill Joey (and Joey doesn't have the slightest clue about this rivalry).

Appearance Kyle is 5'4 feet tall. He has green eyes that normally give a cold stare, but can fake kindness if they have to. He wears black rimed glasses, a lab coat, a red shirt and jeans normally. He has short brown hair.

@JakeTheProgrammer
Scratch Party
Gameplay: The game is off to a good start. I chose the penguin. I think you should put that you have to press space to hit the dice block in the instructions. I like how you made it so you can the CPUs take their own turns, however I suggest that you add a skip button as it can get annoying after a while. By the third turn I have seen how annoying ? spaces can be by having someone steal then swap coins with me. Luck completely screwing over someone over was a problem with the Mario party series, and it is annoying here to. I hope this coin stealing doesn't cost me a star. It was pretty great when I saw Rex lose 10 coins by landing on a witch space after he won Memory. However Rex was still able to get a star because of the coin swap. *insert my eye twiching here* On my next turn I landed on a witch space. The witch gave me the 10 coins she took from Rex. It's nice to know someone understands the rage of coin swaps. I like how the story mode games are only 10 turns long. I think it is a reasonable amount of time for this mode. I like how you made special spaces for the boards. The pyramid seams like a risk, and I like how you made it optional. The ices spaces are fitting for the board you find them in. The garden and witch's castle board could use it's own special spaces to make it stand out more. Maybe for the witch's castle you would go into the witch attack minigame by yourself and if you douged X attacks you could get some coins. For the snowy level things looked bleak. I was sent back to the start, half of my coins were stolen, Rex took 8 of my coins and I landed on two freeze spaces in a row. I did what any noble reviewer would do. I slightly altered the game's code and gave myself a few stars to ensure victory. I was disappointed that the story mode completely lacked story. Rex keeps swaping with my coins. Me: Rex get your own coins instead of stealing mine. Didn't anyone tell you stealing is wrong?. Rex: Why do you only complain when I steal your coins but praise the witch when she does it? Me: She is giving to charity. It is sort of disappointing how the only thing that easy mode unlocks is medium mode. It is like having to beat a long mission just to be able to play the mission again to unlock stuff even if you could handle the increased difficulty in the first place. I like how you can chose how long to play a game in party mode. 20 turns seems a little low for the maximum. You should allow people to go up to 50 if they would like.

Minigames: I suggest adding a results screen for the minigames with rankings and poses for all of the places.
Witch attack: This is nice. You get to dodge attacks. I suggest adding walking and jumping animations for all of the characters to make it look nicer. I like how you made multiple obstacles with there being lightning strikes, bats and basket balls. I really like the ghost, and its a bit of a shame they don't show up that much. Well after I said that the ghost showed up 3 times in the next witch attack which was nice. Through the winner should show up after there is one person left instead of everyone dying. This minigame is fair.

Memory: This game looks plain and is annoying. The concept by itself is fine, however with the pops being the only way to tell when something moves twice it cost me a game because I thought that right arrow staying completely still meant I only had to do it once. I suggest making it more clean when the arrows are switching. This minigame is not fair as doesn't tell you when you have to do something twice and allows and punishes you to move more than the arrows that are shown. After more than 5ish games of this I finally figured out that the arrows add on every time. You need to explain this in the instructions as I thought it showed a new sequence every around instead of it adding on.

Countdown: I don't understand the CPU on this one. I think Pico, an easy CPU, got it exact but I have no idea. I suggest adding in the times when everyone reacted in a 0.00 format. I don't even know about this one.

Reflex: I like how the lady bug rambles on and on about stuff. I say this is a pretty nice minigame. This minigame is fair. Maybe you should add sup to the gibberish the lady bug says to finish the sayings of the almost saying a direction.

Apple Catch: This minigame is pretty nice. Through you should explain what darker red apples do (which I think they take away 2 of your apples). This minigame is fair.

Visuals: I like the thumbnail however the mode selection screen is disappointingly bare after it. I like how you made it Scratch spirtes style for a Scratch themed game. However you could make the art more consistent. For the background objects you should add an outline around their shapes to make them look more in line with Scratch style sprites.

Minigame suggestions: First of all you could add a game where hurdles keep coming toward you and the last one to touch the hurdles win. For another everyone could chose a directon, and if no one else chose the direction you would get a point, and the first to 3 wins. There could be a game where you have to get as many of X as you can by pressing a button however sometimes opsitcals show up which you have to press another for and pressing the first button will stun you for a few seconds; the person with the most of X would win. For another you would have to press certain buttons to progress, and to win whoever gets to the end first or the last one standing would win. . You could also occasionally have the witch take over the minigame and have her give the coins to whoever loses first.

Suggestions: You should add in a free play mode where you can play minigames freely to your heart's content. You should also add in a score mode for the minigames that can have it where the goal is to get the highest score. Maybe for the witch you could add in a space where the witch gives you all of the coins she stole if you are in last and maybe 3rd place. You would have to land on this space to activate it, and there should only be one of them on a map.

The witch: The witch is so kind. She cares about the people who are falling behind. When Rex swaped coins with me on one turn she took 10 coins from Rex and when I landed on her she gave me the 10 coins. Even when I was on first place and landed on her she made me give 10 coins to last place. I have respect for her generosity. In witch attack the game after I wrote I wanted to see the ghost more she used it 3 times. I can't help but smile whenever she appears. When I went to the witch castle the first minigame played was witch attack. It was nice of the witch to pick a minigame with the theme.

Overall: This game is pretty well made. It is good for playing with others, and alone. However the chance/witch spaces have effects that can cost one the game such as evening coins, being sent back to start, coin trading, and all of the coin stealing targeting first place. The minigames for the most part are fun. The game is fun if you decide to play it every once in while however trying to unlock everything in one sitting is tedious(This isn't bad as it keeps players coming back however the game does get boring after a while if you do it all in one sitting like I did writing this review.). I give Scratch party a 6.5/10 for being a pretty well made party game that supports 1-4 that gets boring after a while due to repetition of the content.

muellly wrote:

@JakeTheProgrammer
Scratch Party
Gameplay: The game is off to a good start. I chose the penguin…

Finally, someone took time to actually review every little aspect of my game. I greatly appreciate that! Thanks!

Bump entry 36: Golden sticker
I got my shop reviewed by the shop review shop. The review is a few posts up. Anyway I'm proud that I got a golden sticker! Okay is it just me or are these bump entries keep getting shorter? Anyway this is it for this bump entry, bump you next time!

Here is a little bump for this thread. I'm not to sure what to write here however. Well at least I'm bumping right? More quality bumps coming to you soon… well as in as soon as I think of them.