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muellly
Scratcher
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✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨


Neverending dreams


Hello, welcome come to my Review and Idea shop. Here I wish to give others very detailed reviews so they know what someone else thinks about their game along with suggestions on how to make it better, and ideas for in depth plots here.


Forms: Please replace the () and everything inside of them with your answer.
Reviews:
I would like a review!
Link to Project:
(Put the link to the project here)
Any sections you want me to review: (Any thing you want to make sure I put in the review tell me here.)
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as your project is in two parts or that you like cats?)
Notes:I will put any joke sections in Italics. You may ask me for an other review after I have reviewed your game for me to rate the improvements you made since last time. I may love and/or favorite the project if I like it, but there are no guarantees.

I would like some reviewing advice.
Reviews you have given:
(Please link to any reviews you have already done.
What you were aiming for: (What exactly were you aiming to do in the reviews linked to?)
Anything in specific you would like advice on: (Is there anything you would really like advice on reviewing?)
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as you like dragons?)
Notes: Please link to reviews that you have already done, so I have a better idea on what advice to give you. It's hard to judge where you are if I have nothing to work off of.

Ideas:
I would like an idea for a project!
Genre of project:
(So I have a better idea of what to make the plot, please also include what kind of project your making such as a game or animation.)
Characters in project: (Got any characters that you want to include in the project? Please give me bios here so I give you ideas that are in character for them.)
Any ideas you already have for your project: (If you already have any ideas for your project please tell me them here so I can help expand upon them.)
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as you like dogs?)
Notes:I am assuming that you want a story based project idea.

I would like help developing a character!
Name of character:
(Does your character have a name, if so tell me here)
Appearance: (Have you designed any physical aspects of the character? If so give me a picture or describe them here.)
Any existing personality: (Tell me about any personality the character already has if they have any.)
Any existing backstory: (Tell me about any backstory the character already has if they have any.)
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as you like birds?)
Notes:I am assuming you want a character with a 3 dimensional personality. If you want me to draw a picture of the appearance of the character it will either be a blurry traditional picture or a poorly drawn digital art scribble.

I need a good song for this part!
What is happening in the scene:
(Tell me what is happening when the song plays.)
Mood: (What mood are you going for during the scene?)
Anything else: (Anything else you want to tell me such as you like 8 bit music?)
Notes: I am assuming you are okay with lyricless songs. I will look through the songs I know and might not be able to find a good song.

Rate this shop!
I would like to know how I did and if you liked your idea/review.
I give this shop a (insert your rating here) because (Explain why you gave your rating, what you liked about your order, anything I could improve on and anything else here)

Archive:
Reviews:
Psycho RPG and WareVenture by Exypno
Unlock the Phone by Coder_Annika
Darcy and Tecna Enchantix Speedpaint by -Darcy-
Graveyard Guardian by Pbro
OREO Clicker Game!! by girlsruless
Lead Littleclan! Warrior cats by Happyprincessgirl
Operation: Mouse vs. Aliens by BDDP
How to draw Vector Eyes by Quirky_Coders
Apple clicker by Alex11345
Scratch Party by JakeTheProgrammer
SpeedTrack Racing by Cub56
PONG (V2.1.1m) by Uniior
Bubble Simulator! by -ImagineNation-
Star Wars Battle by cs906941
Graph Runner by coolcat98
LavaSwitch Platformer by Cub56
Ideas:
Example of what I can do. (They didn't order)
Music idea for PrincessTS
Idea for -Darcy-
Idea for 2013animals
Girl development for 2013animals
Music idea for Happyprincessgirl
Crystalstar development for Happyprincessgirl
Scientist development for JAK15
Trap ideas for mr_scientific
Shop ratings:
10/10 - PrincessTS
12/12 -Darcy-
10/10 - Exypno
1/10 because scissors 10/10 - Pbro
10/10 - Happyprincessgirl
28/40 - Quirky_Coders
99/100 - BDDP
19/20 - python_megapixel
Misc shop resources:
List of tips on making projects
List of tips on telling stories
Tutorial on reviewing projects
Partners:

The Once Upon A Time Writing and OC Shop

The Once Upon A Time Writing and OC Shop - At my shop, you can order ocs, stories, poetry, story and character reviews, oc refs in vector and in bitmap, an interesting assortment of packs, writing prompts, and limited edition items.

Want to partner? Click here! Or just scroll down to the eighth bump.

I hope to see your order!

Last edited by muellly (Feb. 13, 2018 00:43:48)


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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Awards:

Things this shop is a part of:

(The section above was made to avoid making the first post to long; below is what was originally here.)
Bump entry 1: Shop just started
Hello there, welcome to the first in a series of bump entries for this shop. Well for this bump entry I just started the shop, so I don't have much to say…
Well I'm just waiting to review something and end up overanalysing it or something. Now that I think about it I should really write a bump entry for another thread I own.

Well that's all for this bump entry. Bump you next time!

Last edited by muellly (Jan. 4, 2018 19:20:19)


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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 2: Why I'm doing this, review addition
You might be wondering why I want to give detailed reviews (Or not and just want to read these bump entries). The reason is because when I get a review I really want the reviewer to look deep into the game. Beyond graphics and gameplay but what they thought of stuff such as characters, areas, the credits, or at least mention the name of any one other than the tittle character. I opened this shop as I wish to give someone a review from someone who looks way to deep into games; something that I feel most other reviews lack. Whether you want me to give feedback on whether or not that emotional scene worked, want someone to finally acknowledge the secrets in your game or just judging the color of that random cactus in the background I'll try to review it. Though it might seem like I'm over talking things and have no proof if my reviews are as detailed as I claim as I haven't reviewed anything yet at the time of writing this, just please give me a chance, and I'll try to make you happy with a review that gives extreme detail.

That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 3: Why I'm doing this, Idea addition
You might be wondering why I want to give detailed ideas. The reason is because I enjoy story based games. Stories give the player extra motivation to play till the end and makes the project much more memorable. I feel that characters are an important part of the story and makes the difference between having a ‘pretty good I guess’ project and a ‘Wow that was awesome!’ project. However I don't really get into more than make a story based game in the project ideas forums because there isn't that much of a chance that someone will make a game that takes a while to make when they are just looking for ideas. When someone asks in a shop however I feel that they are more likely to go through with the idea given to them. Why give someone a detailed idea a paragraph long (probably go longer if someone orders here) if they're never going to use it? I also have sections on my ideas forms asking if someone already has an idea because I want to help people develop their idea. To often plots in Scratch games are very basic, and I wish to see more in depth plots. I hope to get peoples ideas from Mario 64 to Paper Mario if you know what I mean.

That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 4:Example
I typed out a fully fleshed out idea today. The idea is here if you are wondering what I can do for ideas. The person didn't order but they did ask for help making the idea This is all I really have for examples as no one has ordered from me yet… Well if you act now you can be the first!

That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

Last edited by muellly (Sept. 22, 2017 19:11:02)


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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 5: Scale
Hello. Today I am going to show everyone the scale of which I will rate projects with.

0: This rating is for the projects that somehow get worse than a blank Scratch project. An example of this would be a Gif recolored to eyestraining colors while playing a loud and annoying noise in the background.

1: This rating is for the projects that are literal blank screens or don't really have any coding at all. An example would be a project that only has a button that doesn't work.

2: This rating is for projects that have minimal code. While there was some effort put into the project it only does 1 or 2 small things such as when the green flag was pressed the scratch cat said hello and moved 10 steps. This is also for art pieces that are not very good, and I can hardly identify it.

3: This rating is for projects that are basic but complete the bare minimum. These projects tend to have minimal art and features. Projects such as a single minigame with a white background and no title screen go here. Art where I can tell what you are trying to draw goes here.

4: This rating is for projects that are like 3s, but have more such as backdrops for everything, having multiple levels and having tittle screens. Projects such as a minigame with a tittle screen, one song and a few levels would go here. Unshaded art that is good goes here.

5: These projects are decent projects that feel basic, but complete. These projects may have a few songs, okay graphics and maybe a basic excuse plot. Ideas that have been done over and over again with nothing new added go here. Platformers without good detailed art or a basic new mechanic go here if they are not higher than a 7. Okay shaded art and really good unshaded art goes here.

6:These are projects that feel like they are somewhat professional and complete, however usually boring. These projects have the potential to be good but lack in creativity. These projects include games such as mazes and platformers that look fancy, or have a new mechanic that doesn't feel like anything has really changed, but that is all that is really going for them. These projects may have a very basic plot at the beginning and end with very generic characters. Good shaded art goes here.

7: These projects are good projects. These are either plotless games that are introduce things to make them original and fun, or games with a basic plot that are fun. These projects have good graphics and are usually professional enough by my standards. This is the highest rating plotless projects can get. Art where I wish I could draw that good goes here, and is the highest rating for art projects. Projects here and above are likely to get a love from me.

8: These projects have the quality of a 7 attempt to tell a more than basic plot but fail in giving it.

9: These projects have at least the quality of a 7, and have a descent plot. These projects may either fail in having feels or fail in developing their characters very well. These projects are good but fail to be as memorable as 10s for a reason.

10: These projects are the first things I think of when I think of story based project. These projects give their characters development in a way that makes me care for them. These projects have feels that either get me to almost cry or makes my heart smile. These projects have in depth plot where you can't tell the exact ending from the beginning. These projects will definitely get a love and favorite from me.

11: These projects are beyond 10s, and have such good quality in storytelling that I will consider myself as part of the fandom. (cough Pija and Toast cough)

Please note this scale is not how much I liked the project, but how well made the project is compared to every other project on Scratch. This scale is mainly put here so I am consistent with what I rate things. It is possible that a project with a 5 that is basic is more enjoyable than a more fleshed out project with a 6. This scale tends to give higher ratings to projects with stories.

That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

Last edited by muellly (Nov. 2, 2017 20:54:40)


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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 6:Shop song!
I made a theme song for the shop! While I can make my own music I will only give ideas for already existing songs to use instead of making them because I am not very experienced at making songs, and I don't want to cause backup in this shop. Now that I think about it maybe I should have had priority on making this shop's banner instead of theme. Oh well maybe next time.

That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 7:Shop logo
I finally made the shop logo!
I made both a bigger one and smaller one depending on what size the logo should take up. Now that I have a logo I can finally add this shop to the Scratch shop dictionary! I hope I get an order soon…

Well that's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 8: Open for partners
Hello do you want to partner with Neverending dreams? Well just fill out this form and you can.
I would like to partner!
Shop name: (What is your shop called, also please post a link to it if one isn't in your signature)
Shop description: (What would you like the text next to your image to be? Say everything you can order at your shop. Please be specific, does your shop sell vector or pixel art? Music from games or do you make music, Scratch block or beepbox.co music? Please don't say everything as I will personally order something extremely obscure from your shop just to test you. I will put more shops with more detailed descriptions at the top of the list.)
Banner image: (Link to the image for your banner here)
I will only accept being partners if your banner and you text fits into 180 pixels of height (Though this is mostly for banners, I'll still put your shop if your text goes a few lines over). I do this so people with huge banners don't make the page needlessly longer. If your banner is to big please make a smaller one. Use my smaller banner above as an example of how big yours should be. I will check every few weeks to see if your shop is still active. If I don't see any orders finished or the owner posting in a week I will post in your shop asking if it is still open. If no one responds within 3 days your shop will be removed.

After I accept your partner request please put either my smaller banner above or my bigger banner at the top of the page to your shop's partners list.

I hope to see you partner with Neverending Dreams!

Last edited by muellly (Oct. 15, 2017 19:40:10)


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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

Bump entry 9: Project
Today I shared a project about the shop. The project can be found here. Anyway I hope I get some orders soon.

That's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

Last edited by muellly (Sept. 27, 2017 21:30:29)


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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
Exypno
Scratcher
100+ posts

✨ﬡєvєrєndíng ᗪrєαms✨ ☄ ѧ dєtαíllєd ☽ⓇⒺⓋⒾⒺⓌ☾ αnd ☽ⒾⒹⒺⒶ☾ shσp ★ σwnєd вч ⓂⓊⒺⓁⓁⓁⓎ✨

I like the idea of someone looking at my projects and stating ways to improve them. I can see that nobody else has requested anything yet, so I guess I'll be your first one.
Link to Project: (They're in my signature)
Any sections you want me to review: The gameplay, if there are any noticeable glitches, what you would like to see in them, and really anything else that you would want.
Anything else: They're both concepts that I liked the idea of, and then stopped developing. One of the reasons is my lack of ideas and lack of experience in programming. Any suggestions you can make would be great.

Something I want to do is collaborate with other people and improve my skills. Here are two of my unfinished games:
A turn-based Earthbound inspired RPG battle system and
a Zelda inspired “adventure game”.
I'm probably going through collaboration topics right now, aren't I?
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

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Exypno thank you for being the first to order!

Psycho RPG
Gameplay:
Battle: I love the battle cursor it adds a little feel that reminds me of using the joystick in classic console RPGs. The hit option is fine the way it is with a decent animation and it quickly executing. The skill option seems to lag a little bit after selecting which skill to use, and I feel that the animation is to small as I was more focused wondering when fire would cast then seeing the animation. Overall the button feels like you select it wait then the enemies' health goes down without anything happening. When you add in K's function maybe you could also put in a button in the top right of the skills menu to switch between skills. The item option feels like you select the item then the number of items you have lowers without anything else happening. A sound effect for using items would be nice here. I see that you can use as many items as you want in a turn. While this works for small RPGs like this it could get extremely broken if the game was longer, and items could be replenished. Finally the Flee is basic. It does what it is suppost to do however it just jumps back to the over world. It would be nice it there was a transition between leaving the battle and going to the over world. Overall battles are pretty much just move over hit with the awesome cursor then keep pressing space. It is okay for a battle, or two but if this battle system gets made into a bigger game it will become boring unless the skills menu gets more exciting.
Over World: The over world is okay. You can move around freely and when you touch an enemy you battle with it. That's pretty much all you can do at this point.

Glitches: I found one glitch. When the You Won pops up the battle the battle options pop up with it.

Cursor: I just love the battle cursor. It really adds a nice feel to the battle that I have never seen in other projects. It has a nice color.

Visuals:The art in the over world is really inconsistent. You should either make Seeko's pixels as big as the enemies's or make the enemies pixels as big as Seeko's. You should also make the backgrounds pixel art to match with your characters. As for the battle layout it's okay but it could be improved. First of all you could make the visible health/energy bar show as current/max. This could be achieved with 3 variables. Keep the two you have now that same except they don't show, and make the third one join (current) (/) (max). The neon -20 is kind of hard to read, so you should make it a darker blue, and I feel that the - should be brought down by one pixel. I also think that you should make the skill animations a bit bigger as they are barely noticeable as they are now. For the items I feel that you should make the names of items black text, and the number of items you have a large layout to match with the style of skills more.

Enemy design:The little enemy guy is cute. I like the glasses, eyes and smile on them.

Music:Battle:The music is nice and would defiantly work for all of the lesser enemies (Aka not bosses). I feel that you should give all of the battle options sound effects when they are executed.

Over world: The music here is beautiful! It is a very masterful piece that is very iconic! No song could be better than this!
Though in seriousness you should add some music to the over world.

What I would like to see: I honestly would like to see this made into a bigger game. Being able to visit a variety of areas, and being able to battle more enemies would be great. A story would also be great. I would like to know who Seeko and Fiss are, and see them go though some development. I would like to see the skills option expanded, and made so it feels more special than hit, but it costs energy. Removing the lag between selecting the skill, and bigger more noticeable animations would help do this.

Overall:I feel like this project is just the engine to something that could be a great game. This project feels small with only one playable character, enemy and map. The cursor adds great charm to the battle system that I haven't seen in other project before. This project is good if you want to have a battle or two against the enemy. Your final rating is 5/10 because it feels small but good, and this project has the potential to be much more which makes this feel very incomplete.


WareVenture (Demo)
Gameplay:The game play is okay. You have nice mechanics going on here. The shop's prices and upgrades seem reasonable. The shooting arrows at enemies is also okay though I wish I could shoot diagonally. The save points is also a good feature however checkpoints seem more of what they are, unless of course you add saving to this game. Fighting hordes of enemies with arrows seem like it could be fun but I can't really tell since there is only one enemy that gets defeated quickly.

Art:The art here is not very good. I can't really explain why to well but the full satiation colors along with the 8 bit sprites does not look good. However the art is okay, and doesn't really bother me while playing to much.

Story:Please note most of this is speculation. So you wake up and meet MinRO. He guides you though the area then it ends, or does it. Looking through the code there is NOT SUSPICIOUS and Ryan(Eyesack). They both seem to be crying. Is someone keeping them there? Is MinRO secretly trying to trap you there forever just like they trapped them? Are they just random things you added into your code? Probably the first two.

Glitches:First of all if you hold V when going to the area with the shop sometimes the shop song and the enemy battle song will play at the same time until you press the X. Not sure if this counts as a glitch, or I just messed up your code but Ryan(eyesack)'s music does not stop playing, and their health bar never goes away.

Music:The Music is suiting for the areas they are in. However in some areas you get by so quickly that you barely hear the song, and nothing happens, but the song to keep you in the area longer.

What I would like to see: I would like this game to be expanded. First of all having multiple enemy rooms would be nice. I would also like to see some rooms where you have to solve a puzzle to get by, with one puzzle where you have to shoot buttons with your arrows. I would also like to see a mystery plot in this game that can only be fully understood by hacking. Making this game have a story that seems to have confusing end, but once you gather clues and find out what really happened by looking through the code the entire game makes since, and earlier actions take on a new light.

Overall:This game's demo is good, but I feel is basic. I sense a mystery going on, but I wish I could get more out of it. This game could be made into an okay full game, however it would be held back by the art. This project is a good demo which I hope you expand on. I give this project a 4/10 because it is a demo that doesn't give me anything but the basic mechanics and vague secrets to go off of, and it doesn't keep my interest for very long.

Please note the low overall scores mostly come from these games being/feeling incomplete. If they were complete, and had more to them they would probably get a 7 and a 6 respectively, and this isn't even getting into how stories would boost the rating.

Here are your reviews Exypno, I hope they help you make these games better!

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Exypno
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These reviews were great and give me just a bit more motivation to improve. Also a side note: It's funny how you tried to decipher what I had hidden in the code. What was really going on is that it was a joke that I started with a friend. I said to him, “Hey, why don't I make you a secret boss in the game?” and he said, “Sure! Why not?” He drew all the sprites and I added in a song that he had just composed (poorly) in a demo of FL studio. “Eyesack” was meant to be a different spelling of “Isaac,” because he wanted a reference to The Binding of Isaac. The boss fight was going to be unlocked in the shop after getting about a million “credits.” I made it so that the p button just gave the player that many immediately so that I could test the boss fight. Even though it was all a joke, I find your speculation really interesting and I may even make Ryan or Eyesack relevant to the story of the game. (also, MinRo is just supposed to be a simple tutorial character. Nothing special there, either. Sorry to ruin that for you, but note that this is just the beginning.)

Last edited by Exypno (Sept. 28, 2017 01:56:05)


Something I want to do is collaborate with other people and improve my skills. Here are two of my unfinished games:
A turn-based Earthbound inspired RPG battle system and
a Zelda inspired “adventure game”.
I'm probably going through collaboration topics right now, aren't I?
Exypno
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On another note, is it okay if I keep your review in a text file so that I can reference it again later?

Something I want to do is collaborate with other people and improve my skills. Here are two of my unfinished games:
A turn-based Earthbound inspired RPG battle system and
a Zelda inspired “adventure game”.
I'm probably going through collaboration topics right now, aren't I?
PrincessTS
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I need a good song for this part!
What is happening in the scene: This is for a FPC application, the main character is in school.
Mood: Happy
Anything else: Nada.
muellly
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@PrincessTS
Okay I found 3 songs that could work.
Children of Serene Village - Super Pokemon Mystery Dungeon
Treasure Within your Heart - Super Pokemon Mystery Dungeon
The Gate Keepers - Pokemon Mystery dungeon Explorers of Sky

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
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@Exypno You can keep my reviews on a text file if you want. I hope these reviews full you with DETERMINATION to improve those games. Still I take that anything hidden in the code as a secret that is important to the plot of a game. That means I over analyze things sometimes such as the joke you made with your friend XD. If you ever make full versions of either game let me know as I would like to see them.

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
PrincessTS
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I give this shop a 10/10 because
1. Fast service. You got it done in 24 hours or less.
2. You gave me 3 songs. It wasn't just 1 song, you found three really great options for me.
3. You notified me on my profile that my order was ready. I do not like following threads for the sake of knowing when my order has been done.
4. The music was great!
muellly
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Thanks PrincessTS, reading your rating filled me with determination! (I might use that reference to much.) Anyway I'm glad you enjoyed your order. (I may or may not have face palmed a few hours after completing your order when I realized I didn't comment on your profile yet… I'm glad I remembered to do that.)

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
muellly
Scratcher
1000+ posts

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Bump entry 10: Review annoyances part 1
Today I am going to bump about one thing that annoys me when I get reviews, vagueness. It is hard to know what others are talking about when they are vague. If you have no idea what the person who reviewed meant then how are you going to know how to improve? I once got a review that said the enemies needed better art. However due to the vagueness of enemies I had no idea who as there was many ways to interpret enemy in the project which meant it was possible to consider about 100ish characters as enemies. I wish to avoid being vague, and if you ever feel that I am being vague about something tell me, and I'll try to clear it up. Anyway my advice to avoid vagueness is to look inside the code for the name of what you are trying to say, and if you say something needs to be improved say how it can be improved.

Anyway that's all for this bump entry, bump you next time!

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I would greatly appreciate if you were to check of this game I spent months that includes plot and bosses here https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/97452006/ ………………………………………Want a detailed review or idea?

I'm a major fan of Pokemon, Undertale and the Pija and Toast series.
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