StarzSparklez wrote:

I am available to be an artist for your series.

Partial2Partials wrote:

partypalace wrote:

Job wanted: VA
Skill in job (1-10):4
Activity (1-10):5
Other things we should note: I can sound like a boy or girl

Accepted! Which character would you like?

AFNNetworkK12 wrote:

can't we just add last names to the characters?

partypalace wrote:

Partial2Partials wrote:

partypalace wrote:

Job wanted: VA
Skill in job (1-10):4
Activity (1-10):5
Other things we should note: I can sound like a boy or girl

Accepted! Which character would you like?

Jill is what I would like please

Cassandra20 wrote:

Sammy = Samantha Quill

Cassandra20 wrote:

Sammy = Samantha Quill

Cassandra20 wrote:

Hey guys, bump-of-the-month ~ how are y'all going? I can write a script if you're busy

Cassandra20 wrote:

Also, I can do slightly animated things, like basic lip-sync (E, O, AH) and just sort of reference pictures, like for setting the scene without animating them. Here is my example (s):

Click to go to Google Photos

Partial2Partials wrote:

Cassandra20 wrote:

Hey guys, bump-of-the-month ~ how are y'all going? I can write a script if you're busy

Yeah, I'm starting to reconsider my role as a scriptwriter. If you can fill out an application for it, I'd definitely take a look at it.

Cassandra20 wrote:

Also, I can do slightly animated things, like basic lip-sync (E, O, AH) and just sort of reference pictures, like for setting the scene without animating them. Here is my example (s):

Click to go to Google Photos

Making pictures for setting the scene is G_A_C's job. However, I think @Sailor_jupiter_girl's account got deleted, so if you think you want to be the new character artists that works as well. It's okay if you don't, though.

Job wanted: Scriptwriter
Skill in job (1-10): I'm… actually not sure. I'm in Year 8, so I'm not doing any classes on scriptwriting until next year. However, I'll let you decide for yourself…
Activity (1-10): At least every two days. If I vanish, don't worry.
Other things we should note: I'm an artist in a different series, so I'm a bit busy, so you may want to consider getting someone else to fill the art position. Either way, I can draw all the characters as reference sheets, etc.

(Intro)
(Music is basically just static)
(As everyone appears, a front, two sides, and full-body portrait is shown, as if from a criminal photo.)
(Tone - grainy, and not quite black-and-white)

Characters:
Alex
Liza
Mack
Sammy
Bill (not appearing here)
Phuong (not appearing here)
Voiceover, sounding bored and plain
Jack
Jill

(Alex's shot.)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and crimes.
Alex: I'm, um, Alex. (Sounding determined) I'm twenty-nine. I got fired from McRonalds - actually, I quit working at McRonalds - so I hacked the Forex line in Vietnam. We're going to be rich!

(Liza's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and crimes.
Liza: Liza Menalope. (change last name to whatever you want.) Thirty-two. I hacked the Forex line in Vietnam. We're going to be rich.

(Mack's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and-
(Mack interrupts with a lot of indistinct, violent speech that ends in a sort of yell, yelling Don't mess with me!)
(A break.)
I'm Mack, the guy who's got his fist jammed up-
(He is broken off by static, and then there is a pause and the Mack's line starts over, but calmer.)
I'm Mack. Thirty-six. I work at the CIA - used to - from 9 til' 5. I hacked the Forex line in Vietnam. We're going to be rich.

(Sammy's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age and crimes.
Sammy: (starting off quiet and escalating into hysterical) I'm-Sammy-Quill-age-twenty-eight-got-fired-cause-Mack-pushed-me-and-I-spilt-Cup-a-Noodles-on-open-circitury…
(She calms down. Still stammering.)
Sammy, 28, used to work with Mack at the CIA - he got us fired. We - uh -spilt Cup-a-noodles on a billion-dollar computer… I hacked the Forex line. We're gonna be rich!

(New scene. Jack and Jill in an office. Jack is sitting at a desk, reading papers, and Jill is solving a Rubik's cube.)

Jill: Done. So, what about the four hackers? We found them yet? Put ‘em in jail?
Jack: No. They’re, uh, working together. Alexander, Eliza, Samantha, Mack - we don't know his full name - plus a few locals. There's a guy, recently released from prison, spotted talking to them. William Flanders.
Jill: Anyone else? (She mixes up the cube.)
Jack: Yes, a local woman… Ah! “Phuong”, that's her name. You get around to the locals, I'll check out the Forex line. Best warn them.
Jill: Roger, little bro'.
Jack: Five minutes hardly gives you the right to call me “little bro'”.
Jill: Still, same deal. I happen to be older by five minutes. (Raspberry.)
Jack: Aw, be quiet. (Grinning). Are you coming?
(They exit)

The end

Cassandra20 wrote:

Partial2Partials wrote:

Cassandra20 wrote:

Hey guys, bump-of-the-month ~ how are y'all going? I can write a script if you're busy

Yeah, I'm starting to reconsider my role as a scriptwriter. If you can fill out an application for it, I'd definitely take a look at it.

Cassandra20 wrote:

Also, I can do slightly animated things, like basic lip-sync (E, O, AH) and just sort of reference pictures, like for setting the scene without animating them. Here is my example (s):

Click to go to Google Photos

Making pictures for setting the scene is G_A_C's job. However, I think @Sailor_jupiter_girl's account got deleted, so if you think you want to be the new character artists that works as well. It's okay if you don't, though.

*Utter amazement* wow…
Okay! Um. I shall try my hand at character artist.


I applied for scriptwriter a while ago, so here is my new application:

Job wanted: Scriptwriter
Skill in job (1-10): I'm… actually not sure. I'm in Year 8, so I'm not doing any classes on scriptwriting until next year. However, I'll let you decide for yourself…
Activity (1-10): At least every two days. If I vanish, don't worry.
Other things we should note: I'm an artist in a different series, so I'm a bit busy, so you may want to consider getting someone else to fill the art position. Either way, I can draw all the characters as reference sheets, etc.

Here is a script I wrote for Episode 1. If it doesn't match the requirements for what the characters' personalities are, tell me

(Intro)
(Music is basically just static)
(As everyone appears, a front, two sides, and full-body portrait is shown, as if from a criminal photo.)
(Tone - grainy, and not quite black-and-white)

Characters:
Alex
Liza
Mack
Sammy
Bill (not appearing here)
Phuong (not appearing here)
Voiceover, sounding bored and plain
Jack
Jill

(Alex's shot.)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and crimes.
Alex: I'm, um, Alex. (Sounding determined) I'm twenty-nine. I got fired from McRonalds - actually, I quit working at McRonalds - so I hacked the Forex line in Vietnam. We're going to be rich!

(Liza's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and crimes.
Liza: Liza Menalope. (change last name to whatever you want.) Thirty-two. I hacked the Forex line in Vietnam. We're going to be rich.

(Mack's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and-
(Mack interrupts with a lot of indistinct, violent speech that ends in a sort of yell, yelling Don't mess with me!)
(A break.)
I'm Mack, the guy who's got his fist jammed up-
(He is broken off by static, and then there is a pause and the Mack's line starts over, but calmer.)
I'm Mack. Thirty-six. I work at the CIA - used to - from 9 til' 5. I hacked the Forex line in Vietnam. We're going to be rich.

(Sammy's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age and crimes.
Sammy: (starting off quiet and escalating into hysterical) I'm-Sammy-Quill-age-twenty-eight-got-fired-cause-Mack-pushed-me-and-I-spilt-Cup-a-Noodles-on-open-circitury…
(She calms down. Still stammering.)
Sammy, 28, used to work with Mack at the CIA - he got us fired. We - uh -spilt Cup-a-noodles on a billion-dollar computer… I hacked the Forex line. We're gonna be rich!

(New scene. Jack and Jill in an office. Jack is sitting at a desk, reading papers, and Jill is solving a Rubik's cube.)

Jill: Done. So, what about the four hackers? We found them yet? Put ‘em in jail?
Jack: No. They’re, uh, working together. Alexander, Eliza, Samantha, Mack - we don't know his full name - plus a few locals. There's a guy, recently released from prison, spotted talking to them. William Flanders.
Jill: Anyone else? (She mixes up the cube.)
Jack: Yes, a local woman… Ah! “Phuong”, that's her name. You get around to the locals, I'll check out the Forex line. Best warn them.
Jill: Roger, little bro'.
Jack: Five minutes hardly gives you the right to call me “little bro'”.
Jill: Still, same deal. I happen to be older by five minutes. (Raspberry.)
Jack: Aw, be quiet. (Grinning). Are you coming?
(They exit)

The end

Partial2Partials wrote:

Sounds good! My one correction is that “forex line” isn't really the proper terminology - I'd prefer it if it said “forex market.” Still really good though. I think we should definitely use this script.

(Intro)
(Music is basically just static)
(As everyone appears, a front, two sides, and full-body portrait is shown, as if from a criminal photo.)
(Tone - grainy, and not quite black-and-white)

Characters:
Alex
Liza
Mack
Sammy
Bill (not appearing here)
Phuong (not appearing here)
Voiceover, sounding bored and plain
Jack
Jill

(Alex's shot.)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and crimes.
Alex: I'm, um, Alex. (Sounding determined) I'm twenty-nine. I got fired from McRonalds - actually, I quit working at McRonalds - so I hacked the Forex market in Vietnam. We're going to be rich!

(Liza's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and crimes.
Liza: Liza Menalope. (change the last name to whatever you want.) Thirty-two. I hacked the Forex market in Vietnam. We're going to be rich.

(Mack's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age, and-
(Mack interrupts with a lot of indistinct, violent speech that ends in a sort of yell, yelling Don't mess with me!)
(A break.)
I'm Mack, the guy who's got his fist jammed up-
(He is broken off by static, and then there is a pause and Mack's line starts over, but calmer.)
I'm Mack. Thirty-six. I work at the CIA - used to - from 9 til' 5. I hacked the Forex market in Vietnam. We're going to be rich.

(Sammy's shot)
Voiceover: State your name, age and crimes.
Sammy: (starting off quiet and escalating into hysterical) I'm-Sammy-Quill-age-twenty-eight-got-fired-cause-Mack-pushed-me-and-I-spilt-Cup-a-Noodles-on-open-circitury…
(She calms down. Still stammering.)
Sammy, 28, used to work with Mack at the CIA - he got us fired. We - uh -spilt Cup-a-noodles on a billion-dollar computer… I hacked the Forex market. We're gonna be rich!

(New scene. Jack and Jill in an office. Jack is sitting at a desk, reading papers, and Jill is solving a Rubik's cube.)

Jill: Done. So, what about the four hackers? We found ‘em yet? Put ‘em in jail?
Jack: No. They’re, uh, working together. Alexander, Eliza, Samantha, Mack - we don’t know his full name - plus a few locals. There's a guy, recently released from prison, spotted talking to them. William Flanders.
Jill: Anyone else? (She mixes up the cube.)
Jack: Yes, a local woman… Ah! “Phuong”, that's her name. You get around to the locals, I'll check out the Forex workers. Best warn them.
Jill: Roger, little bro'.
Jack: Five minutes hardly gives you the right to call me “little bro'”. (Irritably)
Jill: Still, same deal. I happen to be older by five minutes. (Raspberry.)
Jack: Be - quiet - Jill. Are you coming?
(They exit)

The end

Cassandra20 wrote:

Partial2Partials wrote:

Sounds good! My one correction is that “forex line” isn't really the proper terminology - I'd prefer it if it said “forex market.” Still really good though. I think we should definitely use this script.

Thankyou

I will edit that script. Also, make Jack and Jill less nice. *nyehehe*

Cassandra20 wrote:

NOTES:

1.) Jack and Jill initially appear normal-ish, but I want to have them get worse and worse until one gets blown up or something.
2.) Mack, be DRAMATIC. Really, really, dramatic.
3.) Everything's a bit over-the-top.
4.) Music changes slightly for everyone -
Alex: Uplifting
Liza: Monotonous
Mack: Steady
Sammy: Fast-paced

…but it's really subtle and already distorted.