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TheAdriCoolManDude
Scratcher
1000+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

Username: TheAdriCoolManDude
Name of the project: 100 Projects Special! Official OC Is Drawn!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/240082967/
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Just an OC being drawn. Nothing really.
Harshness: 0
Other notes: Short Animation Not-Really Speedraw.


ScratchNY
Scratcher
93 posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

TheAdriCoolManDude wrote:

Username: TheAdriCoolManDude
Name of the project: 100 Projects Special! Official OC Is Drawn!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/240082967/
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Just an OC being drawn. Nothing really.
Harshness: 0
Other notes: Short Animation Not-Really Speedraw.
Taken! I'll have it done soon.
AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

Destroyer1727 wrote:

Username: Destroyer1727
Name of the project: Stick Magic
Link:https: Here you go.
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Two stick figures battle using magic.
Harshness: From 1 to 10 I choose 5.
Other notes: Don't include sound as 1 of the points please.
Thank you.
Graphics 5/10 Animations are good but stick figures and special effects can be worked on.
Story 6/10 Love the powers they have!
Creativity 8/10 This type of project isn't really new, but the attacks are really cool.
Bugs/Glitches N/A this will be set to the average of other scores.
Animations/Transitions 9/10 Very smooth, especially with the speed you are working at.
Overall Score 70/100 Great job and very creative but just needs a bit of polish.

TheAdriCoolManDude
Scratcher
1000+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

ScratchNY wrote:

TheAdriCoolManDude wrote:

Username: TheAdriCoolManDude
Name of the project: 100 Projects Special! Official OC Is Drawn!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/240082967/
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Just an OC being drawn. Nothing really.
Harshness: 0
Other notes: Short Animation Not-Really Speedraw.
Taken! I'll have it done soon.
Okay!


ScratchNY
Scratcher
93 posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

TheAdriCoolManDude wrote:

Username: TheAdriCoolManDude
Name of the project: 100 Projects Special! Official OC Is Drawn!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/240082967/
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Just an OC being drawn. Nothing really.
Harshness: 0
Other notes: Short Animation Not-Really Speedraw.
Graphics 7/10 Nice graphics, but if you could outline it, it'd look much better.
Sound N/A There is no sound
Creativity 8/10 The creativity is pretty nice, your OC is pretty cool
Bugs/Glitches 10/10 There weren't any bugs in scripting or visually
Animation 9/10 It's good, but you may wanna delete/add frames to make it smoother.
Overall 41/50 Overall great but there is room for improvement. If you are unhappy with this review, you can always request a re-review. Have a nice day!
TheAdriCoolManDude
Scratcher
1000+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

ScratchNY wrote:

TheAdriCoolManDude wrote:

Username: TheAdriCoolManDude
Name of the project: 100 Projects Special! Official OC Is Drawn!
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/240082967/
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Just an OC being drawn. Nothing really.
Harshness: 0
Other notes: Short Animation Not-Really Speedraw.
Graphics 7/10 Nice graphics, but if you could outline it, it'd look much better.
Sound N/A There is no sound
Creativity 8/10 The creativity is pretty nice, your OC is pretty cool
Bugs/Glitches 10/10 There weren't any bugs in scripting or visually
Animation 9/10 It's good, but you may wanna delete/add frames to make it smoother.
Overall 41/50 Overall great but there is room for improvement. If you are unhappy with this review, you can always request a re-review. Have a nice day!
Yay! I got an 82/100.


Destroyer1727
Scratcher
500+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

AfraidRacer wrote:

Destroyer1727 wrote:

Username: Destroyer1727
Name of the project: Stick Magic
Link:https: Here you go.
What kind of Review you want: Animation Review
Brief Description of the project: Two stick figures battle using magic.
Harshness: From 1 to 10 I choose 5.
Other notes: Don't include sound as 1 of the points please.
Thank you.
Graphics 5/10 Animations are good but stick figures and special effects can be worked on.
Story 6/10 Love the powers they have!
Creativity 8/10 This type of project isn't really new, but the attacks are really cool.
Bugs/Glitches N/A this will be set to the average of other scores.
Animations/Transitions 9/10 Very smooth, especially with the speed you are working at.
Overall Score 70/100 Great job and very creative but just needs a bit of polish.
Thank you!

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ScratchNY
Scratcher
93 posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

ScratchNY
Scratcher
93 posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

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ScratchNY
Scratcher
93 posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

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AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

define bump
change [bump v] by (1)

AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

set [bump v] to [true]

AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

I'm bored, so if any staff member wants a review I can do it.

AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

Username:@AfraidRacer
Name of the project: Astro Adventures Asteroid Attack
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/240796364/
What kind of Review you want: Comprehensive
Brief Description of the project: A shooter
Harshness: 7/10
Other notes: Please don't put the final review now, I will make changes according to suggestions by you.

AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

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dude341
Scratcher
1000+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

Username: dude341
Name of the project: Mario Maker Test
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/244183269/
What kind of Review you want: Short Review, it's not an animation but it's still a work in progress so I thought this type of review would be the best, please still give a bug report.
Brief Description of the project: A simple work in progress of a Mario Maker game.
Harshness: You can write the review how you want to do it, I want to improve my project to make it an actual Mario Maker game so say anything you want!
Other notes:

Last edited by dude341 (Sept. 2, 2018 10:21:05)


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AfraidRacer
Scratcher
100+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

dude341 wrote:

Username: dude341
Name of the project: Mario Maker Test
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/244183269/
What kind of Review you want: Short Review, it's not an animation but it's still a work in progress so I thought this type of review would be the best, please still give a bug report.
Brief Description of the project: A simple work in progress of a Mario Maker game.
Harshness: You can write the review how you want to do it, I want to improve my project to make it an actual Mario Maker game so say anything you want!
Other notes:
Taken! Give me 2-3 hours or less.

dude341
Scratcher
1000+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

AfraidRacer wrote:

dude341 wrote:

Username: dude341
Name of the project: Mario Maker Test
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/244183269/
What kind of Review you want: Short Review, it's not an animation but it's still a work in progress so I thought this type of review would be the best, please still give a bug report.
Brief Description of the project: A simple work in progress of a Mario Maker game.
Harshness: You can write the review how you want to do it, I want to improve my project to make it an actual Mario Maker game so say anything you want!
Other notes:
Taken! Give me 2-3 hours or less.
Thanks!

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dude341
Scratcher
1000+ posts

★sᴄʀᴀᴛᴄʜ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡ ɴᴇᴛᴡᴏʀᴋ!★ ᴛʜᴇ sʜᴏᴘ ғᴏʀ ᴀʟʟ ʏᴏᴜʀ ʀᴇᴠɪᴇᴡɪɴɢ ɴᴇᴇᴅs!

Oh yeah, also if you could review:
Username: dude341
Name of the project: Gobo Gets Phished in 2018
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/196465729/
What kind of Review you want: Simple
Brief Description of the project: A project created to tell people about a new type of scam in 2018 and how to stay safe online.
Harshness: Yes, this is just a remix of the original project Gobo Gets Phished but it's the things I changed that I would like you to review. Compare with the original project if you like.
Other notes:
and
Username: dude341
Name of the project: Video Player
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/215820441/
What kind of Review you want: Simple
Brief Description of the project: An easily remixable video player for use in any projects.
Harshness: Anyway you want
Other notes:
, that would be great, thanks!

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