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AfraidRacer

CrushFruits wrote:
Username: CrushFruits -=-Duhhhhhh-=-

Name of the project: Simplistic Truth or Dare

Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237574524

What kind of Review you want: Short Review - This is a small game

Brief Description of the project: A simple truth or dare game with a built-in editor

Harshness: Neutral

Other notes: This project does not have a variety of starting Truths and Dares so you may need to add more in the editor. Also I would prefer a separated overall score for the editor.

Thanks a lot!

Taken! Will be done now.

AfraidRacer

CrushFruits wrote:
Username: CrushFruits -=-Duhhhhhh-=-

Name of the project: Simplistic Truth or Dare

Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237574524

What kind of Review you want: Short Review - This is a small game

Brief Description of the project: A simple truth or dare game with a built-in editor

Harshness: Neutral

Other notes: This project does not have a variety of starting Truths and Dares so you may need to add more in the editor. Also I would prefer a separated overall score for the editor.

Thanks a lot!

Simplistic Truth or Dare
Graphics 7/10 Nice and simple
Sound N/A this will be set to the average of other scores.
Creativity 710 Good job! Quite interesting.
Bugs/Glitches 9/10 None found
Animations/Transitions 2/10 You should really add some.
Overall Score 62/100

Simplistic Truth or Dare Editor
Overall score 80/100 Adding Truths or Dares is a great idea.

Total Score 71/100

CrushFruits

AfraidRacer wrote:
CrushFruits wrote:
Username: CrushFruits -=-Duhhhhhh-=-

Name of the project: Simplistic Truth or Dare

Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/237574524

What kind of Review you want: Short Review - This is a small game

Brief Description of the project: A simple truth or dare game with a built-in editor

Harshness: Neutral

Other notes: This project does not have a variety of starting Truths and Dares so you may need to add more in the editor. Also I would prefer a separated overall score for the editor.

Thanks a lot!
Simplistic Truth or Dare
Graphics 7/10 Nice and simple
Sound N/A this will be set to the average of other scores.
Creativity 710 Good job! Quite interesting.
Bugs/Glitches 9/10 None found
Animations/Transitions 2/10 You should really add some.
Overall Score 62/100

Simplistic Truth or Dare Editor
Overall score 80/100 Adding Truths or Dares is a great idea.

Total Score 71/100

Thank you for making a review
Glad you could help with the review. I just wanted to check if the project is okay.

xllent3000

alright nevermind I've waited 5 days but whatever (original content deleted)

Last edited by xllent3000 (Aug. 13, 2018 15:10:55)

smartzx

Can I apply?

Does anyone know where I can find an ACTIVE Big Brother AUDITION studio? Pweeez tell me. (I'm also find with the Amazing Race, but not Survivor)

AfraidRacer

bump

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AfraidRacer

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sti_scratch

AfraidRacer wrote:
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No, I was posting something but I took it back.

AfraidRacer

sti_scratch wrote:
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AfraidRacer

xllent3000 wrote:
alright nevermind I've waited 5 days but whatever (original content deleted)

Oh dear! I'm really sorry. I saw the project and forgot about it. Anyway, 65/100 Good job informing people about your beliefs, but can be made a bit more interesting with transitions and animations.

xllent3000

AfraidRacer wrote:
xllent3000 wrote:
alright nevermind I've waited 5 days but whatever (original content deleted)
Oh dear! I'm really sorry. I saw the project and forgot about it. Anyway, 65/100 Good job informing people about your beliefs, but can be made a bit more interesting with transitions and animations.

Thanks for the review, I'll probably take your suggestions. And I understand it was a mistake that you forgot about it, but it's all good now.

I'm a very forgiving person so I'll let it slide.

Last edited by xllent3000 (Aug. 14, 2018 12:49:42)

AfraidRacer

xllent3000 wrote:
AfraidRacer wrote:
xllent3000 wrote:
alright nevermind I've waited 5 days but whatever (original content deleted)
Oh dear! I'm really sorry. I saw the project and forgot about it. Anyway, 65/100 Good job informing people about your beliefs, but can be made a bit more interesting with transitions and animations.
Thanks for the review, I'll probably take your suggestions. And I understand it was a mistake that you forgot about it, but it's all good now. I'm a very forgiving person so I'll let it slide.

You're welcome!

We promise to give better service next time!

Auroura_Wolf

It always confuses me as to why people ask for username… It says my username right there on the project page

Username: Auroura_WoIf
Name of the project: Top hat collector 1.0
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238924436/
What kind of Review you want: Short
Brief Description of the project: It's pretty much a cookie clicker clone with a different way to collect the cookies (oh and they aren't cookies)
Harshness: About as soft as a teddy bear
Other notes: I made this game in something like two days.

My alt account, where I upload nothing (much like my main account)
I play video games and sometimes do other things. I don't really make anything on Scratch anymore, but I'm relatively active on the Undertale and Deltarune forums.
Click this. Or don't.

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sti_scratch

Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral!!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

AfraidRacer

sti_scratch wrote:
Congratulations!!

Your shop has successfully joined Ordercentral!!

Keep in mind that I am the only one able to take orders in the Ordercentral topic, but I'll transfer some orders in your own shop topic for you to complete if your shop is the most suitable for the order.

Also, please, if you can, provide a banner.
If you decide to get it from a shop, it's okay. You just need to give credit and tell me what shop made it, and also the employee of the shop who made it.

But it's okay, you're not an art shop anyway.

Thanks! Just one question, I need people to specify the kind of review they want. How is that going to work out?

Don't you think the ‘this shop joined in the end because of an incomplete order’ is a bit harsh?

AfraidRacer

Auroura_Wolf wrote:
It always confuses me as to why people ask for username… It says my username right there on the project page
Username: Auroura_WoIf
Name of the project: Top hat collector 1.0
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238924436/
What kind of Review you want: Short
Brief Description of the project: It's pretty much a cookie clicker clone with a different way to collect the cookies (oh and they aren't cookies)
Harshness: About as soft as a teddy bear
Other notes: I made this game in something like two days.

Taken! Will be done within 10 minutes. (The link doesn't work, I'll try on phosphorus)

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 15, 2018 08:50:23)

AfraidRacer

AfraidRacer wrote:
Auroura_Wolf wrote:
It always confuses me as to why people ask for username… It says my username right there on the project page
Username: Auroura_WoIf
Name of the project: Top hat collector 1.0
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238924436/
What kind of Review you want: Short
Brief Description of the project: It's pretty much a cookie clicker clone with a different way to collect the cookies (oh and they aren't cookies)
Harshness: About as soft as a teddy bear
Other notes: I made this game in something like two days.
Taken! Will be done within 10 minutes. (The link doesn't work, I'll try on phosphorus)

Yeah, Phosphorus destroys the project. Could you share it?

AfraidRacer

Auroura_Wolf wrote:
It always confuses me as to why people ask for username… It says my username right there on the project page
Username: Auroura_WoIf
Name of the project: Top hat collector 1.0
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/238924436/
What kind of Review you want: Short
Brief Description of the project: It's pretty much a cookie clicker clone with a different way to collect the cookies (oh and they aren't cookies)
Harshness: About as soft as a teddy bear
Other notes: I made this game in something like two days.

Hmmm…I'll do a Custom Review.
Graphics 9/10 Nice and smooth, but could be worked on a bit. Some transitions could also work.
Gameplay 7/10 Collecting stuff is good but not very engaging or original. I like the inertia effect(takes some time to stop).
Difficulty 7/10 Can be worked on a bit since you can't go from one side of the screen to the other easily. Try making the objects eventually fall faster and increase the speed of the dog.
Bugs/Glitches 7/10 The falling objects should hide when you switch from one screen to another.
Creativity 6/10 Collecting hats and bow ties is cool but gameplay needs work.
Overall Score 72/100 Good job but needs more polish and creativity.

Last edited by AfraidRacer (Aug. 15, 2018 09:50:50)

enricondal

Hi everyone! I have just found this place and I would like to share my project so you can review it and tell me how it is. Thanks in advance!

Username: enricondal
Name of the project: Dark Zone
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/36723716/
What kind of review you want: Comprehensive review
Brief description of the project: In Dark Zone you take control of a spaceship and you try to survive in space as much as possible by dodging asteroids. To help you there are three different “power-ups” that you'll get for surviving a specific amount of time. The game has also got a cloud-data Hall of fame with the 5 best scores.
Harshness: Say what you have to say, I can handle it
Other notes: The game was published a long time ago but I'm trying to improve it as much as possible and see where it can get. In the Instructions writen part of the project there can be found some more ‘deep’ explanations and in the Notes and Credits one, there are all the updates that have been added, just in case you're curious. One last thing, I would like to get help in the code that makes the spaceship move, because if it's moven very slowly by the player, it seems kinda weird.

Thanks for everything! I appreciate what you are doing!

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