cs906941 wrote:

hellounicorns2 wrote:

cs906941 wrote:

Review:
Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): You are a X-wing trying to blow up as many tie fighters as possible.
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review )? Speak your mind, but preferably good
Length of gameplay/animation: survival, so as long as you make it, but normally 1-2 mins.
Any other noteslease notify me on my profile page
Link :https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/196397458/
Preferable time frame (when you would like it to be done by, please don't be demanding): ASAP, but no rush.
please
thanks

No problem. I'll start on it right away

Here it is!

Hardness- 5/10- It is a bit easy. I making the enemies move faster as you go along would be a nice addition. Even some harder enemies would be great!
Speed- 9/10- The game runs fast, and the enemies look smooth.
Lag/Glitches- 10/10- None found! Good work!
Storyline- N/A- This will be set to the average of the other ratings
Instructions- 10/10- Easy to read, no extra fuss
Ease of use and transitions- 9/10- It transitions well and is easy to play!
Art- 7/10- The art isn't the best you will find, but at the same time it is pretty decent
Engagement- 6/10- It can get a bit boring after a while, maybe make the game get harder as you go along.
Originality- 8/10- While it is based off star wars there are not many games like it!
Sound- 7/10- The pop isn't the best sound effect, a although the music is fitting.
Overall rating- 79/100
I'm not normally the biggest fan of star wars, and star wars games. But this this is an exception. The game is addicting. The instructions are simple, and the music is very fitting. I can see that you have put work into making sure the sound effects work well and that the code runs smoothly. This is another great example of turning a simple concept and fine tuning the script until it is very complicated. Just a few suggestions. Could the record show up at the start and end of the game? It is annoying to have to see inside to check the cloud data. Maybe add text to show that the variable is the world record and then the world record variable next to it. Another suggestion- can you at different opponents that appear later in the game? Having just one opponent can get a little boring as time goes on. Faster opponents would also be a nice addition, as at current speed they are fairly slow. Anyways great game, hope it gets better in the future! And congrats on you score of 79!
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Thanks! Do you think I should make it so you can't stop moving forward?

cs906941 wrote:

Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): Blow up Tie-fighters
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review )? Speak your mind
Length of gameplay/animation: 1-2 mins
Any other notes: Please notify me on my profile page when done. Also, @hellounicorns2 did the original, maybe they want to do this one?
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/196397458/
Preferable time frame (when you would like it to be done by, please don't be demanding): No rush, but ASAP

cs906941 wrote:

Brief description of game/animation (only brief, we don't want any spoilers!): Blow up Tie-fighters
How harsh would you like it to be? (we will always be constructive, but be careful because if you choose too harsh you may be disappointed with your review )? Speak your mind
Length of gameplay/animation: 1-2 mins
Any other notes: Please notify me on my profile page when done. Also, @hellounicorns2 did the original, maybe they want to do this one?
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/196397458/
Preferable time frame (when you would like it to be done by, please don't be demanding): No rush, but ASAP

Link to project:
Any previously found bugs:
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SwordieTheCoder wrote:

Please make a review for my game:
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/195557627/ (Space Race)


And could you make a tower for my tower defence (rocket or doomsday device)

JAK15 wrote:

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Additional text: 15 in large bold type
Pictures on top (please insert a picture of the picture): I'd like a fairly plain design, so no picture needed.
General themes (don't be too specific, just something like “dark blue” or “green”): Teal, red and white ‘flat design’ style
Preferable time frame (when you would like it to be done by, please don't be demanding): As quickly as possible
Other:, I'd preferably like the text on a white computer screen or similar. If the text could be drawn on as GIF animation that would be ideal.

JAK15 wrote:

LOGO
Additional text: 15 in large bold type
Pictures on top (please insert a picture of the picture): I'd like a fairly plain design, so no picture needed.
General themes (don't be too specific, just something like “dark blue” or “green”): Teal, red and white ‘flat design’ style
Preferable time frame (when you would like it to be done by, please don't be demanding): As quickly as possible
Other:, I'd preferably like the text on a white computer screen or similar. If the text could be drawn on as GIF animation that would be ideal.

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