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Evan2963

Art
Full username: Evan2963
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Backdrop
What you want it to be: A forest backdrop, with a dirt ground and tall trees in the back. To see what I mean, go to the link below
Do you have a preferred employee? Anyone, as long as it gets done
Bitmap or Vector? Bitmap, please
Comments: (anything else?) It should look similar to this, just without the logo: https://steamuserimages-a.akamaihd.net/ugc/902126642704940749/ABF9C43EEA0C3C9BEE762A724BDCF65B5BDAC9D2/?interpolation=lanczos-none&output-format=jpeg&output-quality=95&fit=inside%7C1024:576&composite-to%3D%2A%2C%2A%7C1024%3A576&background-color=blackM

Evan2963

Reviews
Full username: Evan2963
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/163397813/
Type of thing you want reviewed: A Scribblenauts game
How harsh should we be? Fairly harsh
Comments: (anything else?) Please tell me what you want me to add and any changes I should make

bigpuppy

Evan2963 wrote:
Reviews
Full username: Evan2963
Link to what you want reviewed: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/163397813/
Type of thing you want reviewed: A Scribblenauts game
How harsh should we be? Fairly harsh
Comments: (anything else?) Please tell me what you want me to add and any changes I should make

Taken

bigpuppy

Review for Scribblenauts v1.12 by Evan2963
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Coding (99/100)
WOAH. You did a great job on the coding.

Graphics (97/100)
Again, awesome job! Maybe you could use a more fitting font than Helvetica though..?

Bugs (100/100)
Couldn't find any.

Grammar & Spelling (99/100)
You did good!

Creativity (80/100)
Hmm… There are tons of game remakes on Scratch. Although even though this isn't that creative in my opinion, you got great scores on everything else, so great job!

Comments:
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I have played Scribblenauts Unlimited before (the real game), and this is so very much like it. One more thing: amazing.

Improvements that could be made:
The one thing I mentioned. You should also add more items.
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Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop

Last edited by bigpuppy (June 6, 2017 21:05:02)

Evan2963

bigpuppy wrote:
Review for Scribblenauts v1.12 by Evan2963
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Coding (99/100)
WOAH. You did a great job on the coding.

Graphics (97/100)
Again, awesome job! Maybe you could use a more fitting font than Helvetica though..?

Bugs (100/100)
Couldn't find any.

Grammar & Spelling (99/100)
You did good!

Creativity (80/100)
Hmm… There are tons of game remakes on Scratch. Although even though this isn't that creative in my opinion, you got great scores on everything else, so great job!

Comments:
Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. I have played Scribblenauts Unlimited before (the real game), and this is so very much like it. One more thing: amazing.

Improvements that could be made:
The one thing I mentioned. You should also add more items.
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Review by bigpuppy from Bigpuppy's Shop

Thanks for the help!

CloudPixel

Bigpuppy could you delete this order? (I repeat DELETE)

Full username: zoyahammad
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): logo
What you want it to be: would like it to be a girl with no face and a fancy background (or just polka dots). The colors I would want are: blue brown and peach Or it has to look similar to ellielocks logo
Do you have a preferred employee? No
Bitmap or Vector? Vector
Comments: (anything else?) Just do it as fast as you can

Its because I ordered from…..

long story short XD

I ordered from a shop, the shop couldn't do it so handed my order to a partnered shop. A person at that shop decided to do it, but asked for one of OUR employees to do it by ordering the exact same order.

And so… that's why you should delete it.

foreststorm22

heyo

sorry to in interrupt

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CloudPixel

foreststorm22 wrote:
heyo sorry to in interrupt
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Off-topic

dawglove

Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?

bigpuppy

CloudPixel wrote:
Bigpuppy could you delete this order? (I repeat DELETE)

Full username: zoyahammad
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): logo
What you want it to be: would like it to be a girl with no face and a fancy background (or just polka dots). The colors I would want are: blue brown and peach Or it has to look similar to ellielocks logo
Do you have a preferred employee? No
Bitmap or Vector? Vector
Comments: (anything else?) Just do it as fast as you can

Its because I ordered from…..

long story short XD

I ordered from a shop, the shop couldn't do it so handed my order to a partnered shop. A person at that shop decided to do it, but asked for one of OUR employees to do it by ordering the exact same order.

And so… that's why you should delete it.

Ok

amberTALE

Username (Who you are): 8435 (main on @amberTALE)
Link to script (A link to the script you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/165061872/
Harshness (How harsh should we be when reviewing the script): As harsh as you can.
Date Wanted (When you want it): <1 week
Miscellaneous (Anything else): text engine by @-Multinia-

hedgehog_blue

amberTALE wrote:
Username (Who you are): 8435 (main on @amberTALE)
Link to script (A link to the script you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/165061872/
Harshness (How harsh should we be when reviewing the script): As harsh as you can.
Date Wanted (When you want it): <1 week
Miscellaneous (Anything else): text engine by @-Multinia-

Taken.

programmer83

@Bigpuppy, You forgot to put my rainbow and emoji banner on the finished order list.

hedgehog_blue

Review
As harsh as I can :(

avoidance game
by amberTALE

Coding 85/100

All of the different colored tiny squares could use a better
cloning system, they currently use a lot of sprites.

Graphics 75/100

The score text looks nice, but the character, tiny squares,
and words could follow a similar style. Effects and
animations are smooth and make the game feel better :)
Also the text in-game and after the game is different, I don't
know why…

Bugs 95/100

Player doesn't hide after losing. Couldn't find any other
bugs.

Grammar 100/100

No text, so this is all good :D

Creativity 70/100

I've seen games like this before, but the graphics have
a unique style.

Average Score
85/100

That's as harsh as I could do.

CloudPixel

dawglove wrote:
Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?

I'll check it out and see if we want to or not

p.s I'm a manager

programmer83

CloudPixel wrote:
dawglove wrote:
Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?
I'll check it out and see if we want to or not

p.s I'm a manager

Bigpuppy already said yes.

CloudPixel

programmer83 wrote:
CloudPixel wrote:
dawglove wrote:
Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?
I'll check it out and see if we want to or not

p.s I'm a manager
Bigpuppy already said yes.

Oh, okay

hedgehog_blue

programmer83 wrote:
CloudPixel wrote:
dawglove wrote:
Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?
I'll check it out and see if we want to or not

p.s I'm a manager
Bigpuppy already said yes.

I can't find the post saying that…

programmer83

hedgehog_blue wrote:
programmer83 wrote:
CloudPixel wrote:
dawglove wrote:
Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?
I'll check it out and see if we want to or not

p.s I'm a manager
Bigpuppy already said yes.
I can't find the post saying that…

Here https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/204320/?page=185#post-2664524

CloudPixel

programmer83 wrote:
hedgehog_blue wrote:
programmer83 wrote:
CloudPixel wrote:
dawglove wrote:
Hey, Bigpuppy! Do you want to partner with my shop, Dawglove's Shop?
I'll check it out and see if we want to or not

p.s I'm a manager
Bigpuppy already said yes.
I can't find the post saying that…
Here https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/204320/?page=185#post-2664524

Wait, no that was NOT the post. That was something I wrote.

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