-Spectrum wrote:

THENEWGAMECREATOR wrote:

beepcat wrote:

Can you review this for me?

username: beepcat
Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118794641/
Other info: This is my first interactive project

I'll do this if it hasn't been done already

It's actually been done twice already ^U^

Low-EarthOrbit wrote:

Username (Self explanatory): Low-EarthOrbit
Link (A link to the project or forum you want reviewed): Create-A-Hero! -Version 1.1
Other Info (Anything else we should know?): If anyone has any good ideas for studios I can put this in, it'd be greatly appreciated!

-Spectrum wrote:

Low-EarthOrbit wrote:

Username (Self explanatory): Low-EarthOrbit
Link (A link to the project or forum you want reviewed): Create-A-Hero! -Version 1.1
Other Info (Anything else we should know?): If anyone has any good ideas for studios I can put this in, it'd be greatly appreciated!

Project Name: Create-A-Hero
Username: Low-EarthOrbit
Reviewer: -Spectrum

Coding: ★★★★★★★★★ (9/10)
I really like the interface! It's slightly different from the other dress-up/create-a-character games on Scratch, in a good way.
Suggestions: Add a ‘done’ button so you can view your finished character with a cool background, perhaps?

Art: ★★★★★★★★★ (9/10)
The art is fantastic, it's nice and simple but creative.
Suggestions: Add some more sections on the character to customise, add some backgrounds.

Music: ★★★★★★★★ (8/10)
The song may be overused, but it's a great one and personally I love it!
Suggestions: None, apart from the obvious which is to find less-used music, but I don't see anything wrong with that song.

Complexity: ★★★★★★★ (7/10)
At the moment it's only of an average complexity level, but it's still awesome and I'm assuming you're going to add more to it?
Suggestions: All the suggestions in other categories.

Bugs/Glitches: ★★★★★★★★★★ (10/10)
None! At least not that I could find, even after playing for a little while.
Suggestions: N/A

Overall Quality: ★★★★★★★★★ (9/10)
I really like this project! The concept isn't that original, but you clearly worked hard on it and it's just awesome :3
Suggestions: N/A, see other categories ^u^

Final Notes: Well done, it's a great project. There are so many possibilities — it could become really big, I'm sure I look forward to seeing future updates, if there are any!

beepcat wrote:

Can you review this?
Username: beepcat
Link: Teaching Grandma to eat with chopsticks
Other info: This is an attempt at an animation.

beepcat wrote:
Can you review this?
Username: beepcat
Link: Teaching Grandma to eat with chopsticks
Other info: This is an attempt at an animation

Project Name: Teaching Grandma to Eat With Chopsticks
Username: beepcat
Reviewer: Low-EarthOrbit

Coding: ★★★★★ (5/10)
Very simplistic coding, but what works, works. There are very few issues with it, and it seems to function as intended.
Suggestions: Maybe have some control variable in there? That would be a huge help to keep everything consistent. Also, the fade out at the end was very jarring, I'm not sure if it was intended that way or not, but either way, I made a remix that fixes the problem, making the fade out much more smooth.

Art: ★★★★★★★ (7/10)
Pretty good for a first animation! You can definitely tell what everything is supposed to be, and it sets up the story well.
Suggestions: The characters are a bit stiff, and only two costumes in an animation is a little light. Maybe try adding some more costumes to make more realistic movement? (I would suggest using Vector for this.)

Music: (0/10)
There isn't any music.
Suggestions: Maybe try adding some music in? It would liven up the whole project.

Complexity: ★ (1/10)
No very complex, but sometimes, simpler is better, especially in this case.
Suggestions: None.

Bugs/Glitches: ★★★★★★★★★ (9/10)
Other than the harsh fade-out, none.
Suggestions: N/A

Overall Quality: ★★★★★★ (6/10)
I was a little confused at the story at first, but after a few times of watching it, I think I finally got it.
Suggestions: Just work on some more smoothness and making the characters lifelike. Other than that, just read the other comments.

Final Notes: Pretty good for a first attempt! I hope to see you work on it some more in the future, or make bigger, better animations as well.

Low-EarthOrbit wrote:

-Spectrum wrote:

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Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed it!! Oh, and just FYI, there are backgrounds, you just have to press space to cycle through them. Good idea abut the “done” button, I didn't think of that!
I intend to release many more updates (save codes are next). Any suggestions on anything else I should add?

PackersRuleGoPack wrote:

Could I have a thumbnail for a tutorial Im going to make called “How to make Scores and Cloud High Scores!” Please make it colorful and add my username to it!

TheUltimatum wrote:

Username:
Icon type:
Colors: Dark green and light green.
Description: I would love an icon with lots of curves and sharp angles.
Reference pic: You can use my current icon as a reference picture for the colors.
Anything else: Can you maybe incorporate my love of in some way Or Zelda too

godzilladude3134 wrote:

Hello, I was wondering if you could please make a banner for my shop. https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/216621/

ZLGames wrote:

TheUltimatum wrote:

Username:
Icon type:
Colors: Dark green and light green.
Description: I would love an icon with lots of curves and sharp angles.
Reference pic: You can use my current icon as a reference picture for the colors.
Anything else: Can you maybe incorporate my love of in some way Or Zelda too

Could you fill out the correct form?

TheUltimatum wrote:

ZLGames wrote:

TheUltimatum wrote:

Username:
Icon type:
Colors: Dark green and light green.
Description: I would love an icon with lots of curves and sharp angles.
Reference pic: You can use my current icon as a reference picture for the colors.
Anything else: Can you maybe incorporate my love of in some way Or Zelda too

Could you fill out the correct form?

? I filled out the one in the main post.

Username (Self explanatory):
Type (Logo, Sprite, etc.):
Size (The dimensions, or appproximate size):
Description (What should it look like?):
Colors (What colors should we use?):
Bitmap or Vector (Self explanatory):
Other Info (Anything else we should know?):

mr-mine wrote:

Hi checkin' up on the shop. Have I missed anything? Sorry, school started again so I've stopped getting on as much. :-P

ZLGames wrote:

PackersRuleGoPack wrote:

Could I have a thumbnail for a tutorial Im going to make called “How to make Scores and Cloud High Scores!” Please make it colorful and add my username to it!

Could you fill out the form?

PackersRuleGoPack wrote:

Username (Self explanatory): PackersRuleGoPack
Type (Logo, Sprite, etc.): Thumbnail for a Tutorial “How to make a Score and Cloud High Scores!”
Size (The dimensions, or appproximate size): Dimensions of a Scratch Project!
Description (What should it look like?): Appealing, very colorful, must have project name in bold letters, and my name too!
Colors (What colors should we use?): Whatever looks the best!
Bitmap or Vector (Self explanatory): Vector
Other Info (Anything else we should know?): Im a boy

TheUltimatum wrote:

Username (Self explanatory):TheUltimatum
Type (Logo, Sprite, etc.):Logo
Size (The dimensions, or appproximate size):About the size of your average logo.
Description (What should it look like?):Lots of curves and sharp angles incorporated in it.
Colors (What colors should we use?): light green and dark green and one other color you can use my current icon as a reference.
Bitmap or Vector (Self explanatory): Bitmap please I despise vector.
Other Info (Anything else we should know?): Could you maybe incorporate my love of sushi or Zelda?

PackersRuleGoPack wrote:

Username (Self explanatory): PackersRuleGoPack
Description of Outro (What should it look like?): As long as you want, must have my logo, just make it cool
Other Info (Anything else we should know?): You should add those love signs and fave signs