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Lythium
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Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|

2 reviews:

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70860076/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): eh?
Miscellaneous: I'm redoing the game from scratch, I just wanted to know how the features, etc are.

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/108037898/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): eh?
Miscellaneous: It's music.


Doni124
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Did I miss anything while I was offline?




Flint-L
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IronBit_Studios wrote:

lilyams wrote:

Hi! I think to make a Fire and ice movie. I need a ambiental nigth sound.
Where proyect I can find that?
???

IronBit, dude. Try to be polite to our customers. :\

@lilyams
We'd love to complete your order. Can you first fill out the form on the front page? Thanks!

EDIT 0: Here is the form:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc):
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):
Date(When you want it done):
Miscellaneous:

EDIT 1: This seems right up my alley. I claim this once the form has been filled out.

Last edited by Flint-L (May 6, 2016 05:52:58)


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“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
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Flint-L
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Lythium wrote:

2 reviews:

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70860076/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): eh?
Miscellaneous: I'm redoing the game from scratch, I just wanted to know how the features, etc are.

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/108037898/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): eh?
Miscellaneous: It's music.

Taken

Completed:

Okay, so I just wrote out the entire review, then my browser crashed and lost it. I'll just give the basics.

Facility: EARLY ALPHA

Nice job. The main problem I have with this is that it lagged severely during gameplay such that I was not even able to finish it.
In the art I would like to see more uniformity, especially in the thickness and lengths of the black borders of solid objects.

Creativity: 2/10 (with platformers it's hard to be creative - don't feel bad)
Glitches: None!
Grammar: No errors!
Coding: 4/10 I liked the physics in the game, but definitely try to fix the lag.
Overall: 8/10

Vale
(I won't even use the form for this)
Good job! This is definitely one of the better songs I've heard on Scratch, even better than some Monster-Scratch stuff! I liked the chords and melodies you used, as well as the use of different instruments. In my opinion, the song sounded like an introduction to a much more upbeat song. I don't know if that is what you wanted, but perhaps you could add some parts with louder drums, etc.

Overall: 9/10 Great job dude!

Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.

“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates


NDSDNS
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Flint-L wrote:

Lythium wrote:

2 reviews:

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/70860076/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): eh?
Miscellaneous: I'm redoing the game from scratch, I just wanted to know how the features, etc are.

Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/108037898/
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Skill(Your level of skill): eh?
Miscellaneous: It's music.

Taken

Completed:

Okay, so I just wrote out the entire review, then my browser crashed and lost it. I'll just give the basics.

Facility: EARLY ALPHA

Nice job. The main problem I have with this is that it lagged severely during gameplay such that I was not even able to finish it.
In the art I would like to see more uniformity, especially in the thickness and lengths of the black borders of solid objects.

Creativity: 2/10 (with platformers it's hard to be creative - don't feel bad)
Glitches: None!
Grammar: No errors!
Coding: 4/10 I liked the physics in the game, but definitely try to fix the lag.
Overall: 8/10

Vale
(I won't even use the form for this)
Good job! This is definitely one of the better songs I've heard on Scratch, even better than some Monster-Scratch stuff! I liked the chords and melodies you used, as well as the use of different instruments. In my opinion, the song sounded like an introduction to a much more upbeat song. I don't know if that is what you wanted, but perhaps you could add some parts with louder drums, etc.

Overall: 9/10 Great job dude!
I had the lag as well, but on chrome. I think it's a pepperflash thing.

i do stuff sometimes but not very often
rollercoasterfan
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Orders:

Veleanor wrote:
Type of Script(Multiplayer, Cloud list etc): I'd like a cloud saving system
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Project(Link to project you want the script in): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/93642115/
Miscellaneous: I'd like for the background and schedule for each username to stay the same across sessions.

HittmanA wrote:
Type of Art:logo
Date: ASAP but take time to do a good job plz, its important
Style: Vector (Make it look slightly cartoony but with sharp lines and edges
Description: I would like it to look like someone wearing a welding mask holding two lit welding torches (http://vignette1.wikia.nocookie.net/mafiawars/images/f/fb/Huge_item_welding_torch.png/revision/latest?cb=20120110012712) pointing outward. I would like some text in the background to say Science Soup. Also if possible I would like high contrast between the torches and the rest of the logo to make it look really dramatic as well as the welding mask to be lit by the torches glow.
Taken by rollercoasterfan

Arthurtilly wrote:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): Video game music
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium): medium
Date(When you want it done): By April 10, if possible
Miscellaneous: It's for a puzzle-platformed game, sort of like in a laboratory. Similar to the music in my project here.

Kittykat_005 wrote:
Type of Script(Multiplayer, Cloud list etc): Psychics.
Date(When you want it done): I'm in no particular rush, so anytime really.
Project(Link to project you want the script in): Just make a new project and put the script there. Miscellaneous: I want it so when you drag an object, it counts the velocity and you can throw it around as such, and it will bounce. I want it to be customize-able, as in the amount of gravity as well as the bounce height. I also want it so it will bounce off other sprites as well, and I want it to spin depending on the velocity, too.

Cr38or wrote:
Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): Banner
Date(When you want it done): 4/3/16 or sooner
Style(Vector or Bitmap): Vector
Miscellaneous: I need a banner for my shop, https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/190521/ I'd like it to have the shop title, as well as lightning bolts. As far as colors and other things, I'm open to anything
Taken by Crimson19

EasterIsland wrote:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): An Orchestral Theme, that sounds like a battle
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium): Medium
Date(When you want it done): Before February 15th (Just came up with that )
Miscellaneous: Do you do voice recordings? If so, make one of a Warrior-Like voice saying ‘Hmm…’ and ‘Yaaar!’

JonathanSchaffer wrote:
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): something bouncy, but not weird
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):medium
Date(When you want it done): as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: I was thinking like bunny hop with no music

NanoRook wrote:
Type of art: Banner.
Date: No strict deadline.
Style: Vector.
Misc. Make there be two arrows, both purple (Ones from the sprite library.) Have them be at either side of the banner (Left-right sides.) and have a cube (At the angle of 135.) be in the middle. And at the top, have text that says my name (And a little caption saying “I'm trying.”) in the Marker font. Make the background the same as it is in my Bounce! project (Viewable on my profile.) Also, the cube should be tilted like this and use this sprite: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/103290591/

Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): Background
Date(When you want it done): I'd prefer it to be done in two weeks, if possible in one
Style(Vector or Bitmap): Vector
Miscellaneous; Looking from the inside of a cave, looking out onto either a forest or lake. It's at night, so some stars and/or a moon might be seen, depending on the perspective. I'm looking for a magical kind of mysterious look, so other options could be included such as a waterfall in the cave, or glowing fireflies floating around. I'd be perfectly fine if you got creative.

StellarCat wrote:
Wondering if I can have a request:

I'd like you to draw pusheen the cat, in his normal position.
Type of Art: Sprite
Date: Soon
Style: Vector
Other: I need you to put a little bowl on her back?
I was wondering if you could make him into a walking sprite? I'd only need like, 2 costumes for that, because its a very short walking animation.

I also need more sprites.
I need a picture of a basic muffin, onigiri, a cookie and a slice of pizza that is not really detailed, but kind of cartoony. Just like they are in the Pusheen comic/gifs. Theres no point in giving themselves their own seperate form, because they're all the same.
Type of Art: Sprite
Date: Soon
Style: Vector
Other:
Sorry if its confusing!

scratchmeyou wrote:
Type of Art(Banner, logo etc): Book cover.
Date(When you want it done): Any, really. The sooner the better, though. No time limit.
Style(Vector or Bitmap): Both, but mostly vector, or the one you feel most comfortable with.
Miscellaneous; what?

I gonna add my own…
Description: shaped like a book cover, it's in the forest, and sunlight shines on a clearing. In the clearing, there are shrubs and grass, and a small, narrow pure light-blue creek running through the back of it, and into the forest. A little in front of the creek, two 9-ish year old girls are sitting, and the picture is kinda zoomed-ish on them. (not an animation. One of the girls, the taller one, has really dirty-blonde hair tied back in a ponytail, with a blue T-shirt and black pants, and white socks, and black sneakers with no sign on them. The other girl is small, has jet-black hair also in a ponytail, a green T-shirt and brown shorts a tiny bit over her knees, blue socks, and orange shoes. One parrot is on a shoulder of one girl, and another on the other one. There are words in a nice, elegant, font that isn't a scratch font: Bravery of Magic. The color is fire-y with fire coming out of the words. Under, in the same font, but smaller size, Pearl of the Moons' is there. Note that the ‘ is after the s. Those two texts are near the top, in the sky, and the text: by scratchmeyou with a different, but elegant font is near the bottom, with different shades of blue, and wave-things coming from it like the fire-things.. Pearl of the Moons’ is in silver, not light grey. Silver. I'ld like it to look realistic, like a photo or a drawing by a professional artist.
Colors: a lot. Blue, white, and yellow for the sky, clouds, and sun. Brown and green for the trees, yellow-white for the light, and so on. Thanks!

SiberianNinja wrote:
Type of Art: I would like a logo please.
Date: I don't care about the length, as long as it is good quality
Style: I would prefer Vector Graphics please
Miscellaneous: Some specifics; 50% transparent so it can always be shown in-game, small-ish, and my preferred color scheme is either: Black/Red, Dark Green/Blue, White/Blue, or Gray/Dark Blue.














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CelloPlayer12
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Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!

NDSDNS
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CelloPlayer12 wrote:

Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!
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i do stuff sometimes but not very often
CelloPlayer12
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NDSDNS wrote:

CelloPlayer12 wrote:

Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!
Taken
Thx!!

NDSDNS
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CelloPlayer12 wrote:

NDSDNS wrote:

CelloPlayer12 wrote:

Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!
Taken
Thx!!
Actually, I can't Forgot it was vector. Plus, I'm really busy.

i do stuff sometimes but not very often
CelloPlayer12
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NDSDNS wrote:

CelloPlayer12 wrote:

NDSDNS wrote:

CelloPlayer12 wrote:

Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!
Taken
Thx!!
Actually, I can't Forgot it was vector. Plus, I'm really busy.
Ok!

Lythium
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CelloPlayer12 wrote:

Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!
Taken and done.

Enjoy!

CelloPlayer12
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Lythium wrote:

CelloPlayer12 wrote:

Type of Art: Thumbnail for my game,Orbit
Date: When ever you can finish it.
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous: Make it however you want, just base it of the game and have lots of black in it. Thx!
Taken and done.

Enjoy!
Whoa!!! Thanks!!

NDSDNS
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Type of Script(Multiplayer, Cloud list etc): Platforming script that has a jetpack feature that allows the player to fly a small distance.
Date(When you want it done): ASAP
Project(Link to project you want the script in): Not made yet, want the script
Miscellaneous:

i do stuff sometimes but not very often
MoonstarBubbles
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Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): Introduction Music (sort of like a theme song, but with no words.)
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium): Medium, fast, or medium fast.
Date(When you want it done): May 16, 2016.
Miscellaneous: ?

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TheHockeyist
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Still here, guys. We have some orders coming in.


Sigton
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*lurkez*

Sigton


kittykat_005
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OOOO It's a ghost! BOO!

Sorry for inactivity…

Funny Doge memes.
Flint-L
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MoonstarBubbles wrote:

Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc): Introduction Music (sort of like a theme song, but with no words.)
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium): Medium, fast, or medium fast.
Date(When you want it done): May 16, 2016.
Miscellaneous: ?

Could you give a genre? For example, orchestral, electronic, rock, ambient… That would make this a bit easier to complete. The way you have it now is a bit open-ended.

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ellielocks
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Type of Art: Theme/thumbnail template
Date: ASAP
Style: Vector
Miscellaneous; I want it to be book-related, as it's a theme I'm surprising @sreader17 with. You can see a project she's made with something related to it, here, but I want to get her a higher quality theme.
Thank y'all so much!

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