Why hello there :0 I’m Lune, she/her, and I live in the time zone of EST. I’m a fantasy series obsessive, cat lover, bookworm, writer, Amity (Divergent), Ravenclaw (one third Hufflepuff), RainWing (WoF), bug lover, theater kid, and of course one of the most cheerfully morbid people you’ll ever meet.

Whew. That was a lot.

Considering the large amount of, er, passions I have, let’s boil things down to two categories: like quite a bit and love.
Let’s get things started with like quite a bit.
This is going to be pretty quick, so please let me know on my profile if you’d like to know more! I’d love to have a chat with someone about any of these topics.

Tetherball, bugs (specifically moths and cicadas), chocolate, astronomy (including a bit more space science, such as black holes or supernovas), murder mysteries, Old English, felting, miniatures, French, Sierra Sikora, Broadway music (my current favorites are Spamalot and Beetlejuice), chess, and etymology are all, despite the sheer number of them, things I dearly enjoy and hope to hold onto for a while into the future.

On to love. These, unlike the topics above, aren't simply my current obsessions. They are me.
Reading, writing, theater, cats, and math.
Those are the things that make me Lune. They’re what I want to do with my life. Who I want to be.

Reading was the beginning of me. Before books, I was just another hapless child without much thought to what words could do.
And then I read Harry Potter.
I realize now that Harry Potter isn’t actually the most well written or inclusive series. But when I devoured The Sorcerer’s Stone in first grade (I was not prepared for all of the death in the series ahaha), I realized why so many people were bookworms. The joy! The sadness! The love! And all because of some squiggles on a page.. it’s truly magical.
Currently, my favorite books are The Hunger Games series, The Martian, The Naturals, and The Inheritance Games.

Next up is writing. It frustrates me endlessly, yes, but I couldn’t imagine my life without it. I write a lot of fantasy, but I also love bi-fi, poetry, and mystery, as you might’ve guessed from my favorite reading genres.
Poetry is my absolute favorite genre to write in. I write more fantasy (because it’s a bit easier and I’m used to it after so many years of only fantasy), but it can’t quite compare to the wonders of spilling your feelings out on a page whenever you have a lot of them.

Theater is amazing. Whether pure acting, musicals, or improv (my absolute favorite), it’s one of my true passions! I love everything about it. I can’t list everything I’ve been in for sort-of-obvious reasons (doxxing), but my all-time favorite, along with being one of the most recent, is Little Women. I’ve loved the book since I was a tiny child, and it was an honor to be a part of such an amazing production.

Cats are in here for even-more-obvious reasons. I have two six-year-old cats (still kittens to me), Irish and Hobbes. I love them wholeheartedly and will forever <3

Last things last, math.
I actually hated math last year. It felt too complicated, too annoying, and sort of impossible.
But for some reason, it’s always the thing I’m looking forward to the most this year. Numbers just make sense; so long as you know the formula, the possibilities are endless. And there’s always a solution. It’s a little bit like writing in that way; both of them are so vast but can be explored so easily if you know what you’re doing.

Well, that’s it for now, folks! I hope you enjoyed getting to know me and learned some new things <3 Feel free to come and talk to me about anything in here (or anything whatsoever)!

I haven’t actually had much experience in leadership or writing. Not as much as I would like.But the bit I do have has helped me tremendously in growing into more of a writer and leader.

I’ve been in around 8 Scratch camps, 4 in SWC (1 as co-leader) and 1 each in SCC, WUC, (C)LASC and JWC, each as a camper with the exception of (C)LASC, in which I was a host.
Of those, the ones that helped me most to grow were definitely my 4 SWC sessions and (C)LASC hosting experience, in which I learned the most and was the most active.

Each SWC session, I grew so much as a writer and learned a whole lot. My first session, Fantasy SWC March ‘25, wasn’t very active as I was sort of busy and not always in the mood to write. I’m truly glad I decided to camp, though, because I got the gist of most of the activities, basically dipping my toes in the vast lake of SWC. If March ‘25 was a slight dip into SWC, July ‘25 was the plunge. I was a camper in Bi-fi Festival of Fae, and I did everything I could to be a part of the community, growing so much as a writer and learning a lot about myself.

Fairy Tales November ‘25 was similar: I was also a camper, and did much to be a part of the community and become a better writer. I probably grew the most this session as a writer; discovering poetry (my love) and diving into deeper writing were certainly a change for me, but they paid off.
My camping sessions, although not involving leadership, gave me a look at what amazing (co)leaders did for their campers and what an incredible cabin was like, from storylines to aesthetics to interactions.

And then I was off to my first session as a co-leader in Magical Realism March ‘26 with Kiara and Starrii, a cabin that brought buckets of chaos and joy, along with my first look at the wide world of (co)leading. It was a lot more responsibility than I had expected, but I did my best to complete everything and loved everything about it. My leadership skills blossomed as I realized how to motivate myself, support my team, and be realistic with the goals I took on. But Magreal’s efforts didn’t even stop at leadership; it also taught me so much about writing and even aesthetics. It was truly a session of wonder.

Co-leading Magreal was an honor, and helped me appreciate the merits to being both a co-leader and a camper. This session, I’d love to dive into leading and explore various techniques for writing and design, learn how to deal with the responsibilities that lie in such a position, and see how many bad time management habits I can lessen.

As for camp-like things, hosting the first session of (Co)Leader Application Support Center with Cat and Kiara brought me more leadership experience than I would ever have imagined. It was a lot of commitment, much more than I had ever had before at the time, and I found myself absolutely loving it. It made me look at time management, decision-making, teamwork as a whole, and brainstorming in whole new ways, giving me so much education as to what being a ‘leader’ is really like.

Outside of SWC, I’ve had a few experiences in leadership and teamwork. I was president of student council a few years back, which, although not well-organized on the school’s end, brought me experience in addressing a group of people, even if the teachers made all of the actual decisions. This past year, I was a parliamentarian in National Junior Honors Society, a role involving approving decisions made by the president and a bit of public speaking, giving me a look into what leadership is like in higher standards.

Writing-wise, I’ve been writing for around 4-5 years. Not nearly as much as some of you, but enough to feel like a true writer in my heart. I’m afraid I haven’t won any awards or anything like that for my writing, but then again, I haven’t entered many contests. In fact, the only one I’ve ever entered is the SWC Writing Competition. But awards have never really been why I write. I have always been a writer purely to express my thoughts, feelings, and ideas out in words somewhere I can always look back on, and to grow as a person through growing as a writer.

Overall, I might not be considered the most experienced out of all of you, even the ones who’ve never (co-)led before. But I’m willing to gain that experience, and I believe that is just as important.

If I’m accepted as leader, there are a couple ideas that have been floating around slowly taking over my brainspace for a while now. In any case, in no particular order, they are:

Script:
As a camper in Script, your job description only has one sentence: ‘Do whatever is needed to keep the theater up and running.’ Although a bit vague, you were hooked by the theater’s cozy (and chaotic) charm and decided to try it. Suddenly, though, all the actors have dropped out for the theater’s long-awaited first musical (a show that could make or break the stream of ticket-buyers) for unknown reasons, and the director has no choice but to hire the employees on as actors. Including you. And unfortunately, you can’t complain that it’s not part of your job description.
For this cabin, I have a pretty solid plan for the background, but the rest is something I want to explore with my co’s!
Script could also fit the genres of Lyric and Bi-fi.

Illu-fi:
Inspired by the Tea Dragon Society graphic novel series by Katie O’Neill, Illu-fi would be a low-stakes cabin focused on cabin bonding and making memories. Campers would become part of the Tea Dragon Society, reviving old traditions and take care of their very own tea dragons, tiny furballs that act and look much like a modern cat or dog, but with magical tea leaves growing on their horns that produce tea. Tea dragon tea, when drunk, floods your mind with memories, both joyous and melancholy, of time spent surrounded by friends and family. The storyline would mainly consist of daily writing prompts and roleplay, along with smaller chaotic prompts to help pass the time until the Festival, where campers get to drink their tea dragons’ tea and reflect on the session.
Illu-fi could be adapted to fit Fantasy or Classics.

Fairy Tales:
Fairy tales are often associated with happy endings, problem-solving magic, and true love. But when you actually look closely, they're filled with dark wit and, surprisingly, a good bit of tragedy. To me, a Fairy Tales cabin revolving around the darker side of fairy tales, along with some non-traditional fairy tales, like the poems of Edgar Allen Poe and myths from other cultures, would be a really cool concept! It would likely be quite writing-focused instead of storyline, but still integrating some plot bits along the way. This cabin would likely involve a low-key storyline that doesn't require too much activity, instead focusing on collaboration and creativity. This one in particular is one I would love to iron out with my co-leaders if it's accepted, as I have a lot of paths in my head that it could take.
Fairy Tales is definitely not the only genre this cabin could fit; it could easily become Poetry, Gothic, or Tragedy without much adaptation.
I also have ideas for Mystery, Fantasy, Magical Realism, Mythology, Historical Fiction, Paranormal, Adventure, and Action.

If I were to co-lead, I would love to be part of any genre listed above that's not stated in the ‘maybe not’ list below, along with Furry Sleuth (I’ve seen a couple people mention this in their apps and I absolutely love it), Journalism, Comedy, Lyric, or anything similar. I might not choose to co-lead Sci-fi, Cyberpunk, Contemporary, or Horror, as I’m not well-versed in those and probably wouldn’t do the best.
Despite that, it would mostly depend on the storyline, as I have seen versions of some of these that I thought were amazing even though the genre is not typically my forte.

I would prefer not to (co)lead TCTWNW, as they tend to be less active, but might if given the chance. Out of these cabin choices, Illu-fi (Fantasy might be the better genre for this cabin to keep from having two Illu-fi TCTWNWs in a row <3) would likely be the best for a non-competitive cabin.

Dedication
Time is a hard thing to pin down, but I do have a rough outline of what cabin planning season (and July itself) will be like.

My summers are quite varying as far as day-to-day availability, so I would be able to dedicate anywhere between 30 minutes to 3 hours online every day. In May, I will have school until the 22nd, which will keep me fairly busy. Those days, it will be more like 30 minutes to an hour. After that, I might have a few vacations (during which I will be completely offline) and extracurriculars, both of which will take up more time in the day. I will let both my team and the hosts (especially if it’s a vacation) know whenever those dates come up, as it will be much harder to get things done on those days. On all non-vacation days, no matter how busy, you can expect at the very least a check-in from me in the morning or afternoon to see how things are going.

If anything changes as far as my activity levels go, I will do my best to let my team know!

Management
To start things off, I’ll put it bluntly. I’m not the best at time management. I know I’m not. I’ve got a lot of issues: procrastination, distraction, and over-commitment are just the beginning. But what I will say is that I’m learning. I’ve already gotten a thousand times better than when I wrote about my management in January. In fact, I can’t believe how much better I’ve gotten. My biggest issues are still procrastination and overloading myself with work, but how much I’ve learned since then is incredible to me.

Last session, in Magreal, I learned a lot about the consequences these two things could have. I would load myself with things to do to help our cabin, and than feel terribly demotivated when I finally had time to do them because my to-do list felt so long. And demotivation leads to, you guessed it, procrastination. My procrastination doesn’t just come from over-commitment and demotivation; sometimes it comes from having other things I want to do more. But however it comes about, it’s always a beast to deal with.

Luckily for me, though, consequences can lead to improvement. And so they did.

I’ve learned to slam on the brakes whenever I spot my time management demons coming towards me and apply some of the techniques I’ve learned over the years: to-do lists, time blocking, determination, and optimism. Determination and time blocking, or pushing through my demotivation to get to where I want to be and spacing out my homework in chunks throughout the week, are my superheroes when it comes to procrastination. If I remember these two techniques, I know I can push through and get what I need to get done, done.

To-do lists and optimism are experts at driving over-commitment and/or its effects away: limiting myself to two things every day after school on my to-do list, or even just making one so I know exactly what I’m doing and whether or not to put another thing on the list, and when I don’t manage to keep a reasonable amount of items on said list, I have optimism (or staying enthusiastic and determined throughout the process) to fight off the burnout that can come from all of the work.

Now that we’ve listed my shortcomings (and how I solve them), we can move on to my strengths!

It’s not all down in the dumps whenever I’m managing my time. Although I’ve certainly got some big problems in time management, there are also things I’m great at.

Let’s take a look at organization and consistency.

Organization:
Organization is a beautiful thing. When you know exactly who’s doing what, at what time, and when they’re getting it done, most everything falls into place as perfectly as possible. Obviously, nothing’s perfect and there are always bumps in the road, but careful planning can help us adapt to those plans as best we can because we know what’s coming next.
I can easily chart out a to-do list or a timeline, and making schedules or goals for today are natural for me to come up with and stick to. Thinking ahead is something I was born doing, and I love setting deadlines that motivate me and others to keep pushing through.
Organization helps me and others stay on track, and it’s something I’m enormously grateful I possess.

Consistency:
Being consistent feels really important when you’re in charge of a group of people, in any scenario, most definitely including (co)leading a cabin. If some of my graphic designs or artworks come in way past the deadline and some come in almost immediately, my team wouldn’t know what to expect and how to keep things flowing in the cabin. I’m proud to say I’m pretty consistent in meeting deadlines, keeping up with activity, coming up with ideas, collaborating, and all the other parts that come with the leader position <3 This can help my cabin be fairly active overall, so campers won’t feel like they’re always waiting on the leaders to catch up with them or vice versa.

There you have it! My strengths and weaknesses in time management, along with a rough schedule of my summer. Time and I don’t always agree, but when we do, wonderful things can occur.

Communication

Communicating is one of the most crucial things in a leadership setting. Using it in a way that works for you and the people you’re working with can lead to life-changing experiences, memories that last forever, and an amazing experience overall.

My style is very heavy on collaboration: I’ll respond and add on to everything others have brought up, and than brainstorm a bit solo and bring back some ideas to the team if asked.

I always consider my team’s wants and needs before doing anything solo, most times checking in with them to see if they’re okay with my ideas and/or timing.

I can provide plenty of ideas if asked, but I sometimes have a hard time knowing if others want suggestions. A lot of people prefer to do their own thing without as much input, so I’ll usually try to stay on the safer side and not offer my ideas out. Sadly, this might hinder me from providing great ideas that could turn a boring cabin into an amazing one.

However, this session, if given the opportunity, I’m resolving to push myself to share my ideas out no matter how silly or unachievable they seem, to make my cabin as amazing as possible.

As for my methods to responding to my team in the planning forum, I like to scan through lists of what others have said, and add onto them one by one, ending with an idea if I’ve got one. I love bouncing off ideas and brainstorming as a group, no matter what the project.

The best things I’ve created have almost always been a group effort, and I know an SWC cabin is no different.

Accountability
I’m a fairly reliable person when it comes to accountability. I do, of course, have my issues, like everyone, but for the most part, I’d like to think it’s one of my greatest strengths in a leadership setting.

Yes, I have a bad habit of procrastination. But like I said, once I actually sit down to work, I’m quite productive. And I’m finding ways to battle the procrastination off in the first place.

And I do have a hard time letting myself do something that’s not perfect. I have a bad case of perfectionism. If I get stuck on something that doesn’t feel right, I’ll eye it for hours, trying to figure out how to fix it.

But I’m getting better at that, too. Most ‘issues’ lately are only fixed if I finish early. And that, to me, is a huge improvement.

So despite all that, I stay pretty consistent. And I have lots of strategies for keeping myself on task.

I can keep myself on track by sitting down in a comfortable place without distractions, and nothing but my work and possibly a snack in front of me.
Speaking of which, despite how silly it sounds, food can be pretty useful when you need to focus. It keeps you from getting distracted by looking at the clock to see how close dinner/lunch is, or getting disrupted by my stomach growling.

If a distraction sneaks its way into my head, I remind myself of what time I have and see if I’ve got time to chase after it. Oftentimes, I don’t. And even if I do, I don’t stop what I’m doing immediately and rush off. I give myself a stopping point, and if I’m still yearning to do something else, I do. But I don’t get carried away. I let myself have fun for slightly less time than I think I have, then go back to work.

I get things done by setting deadlines, putting reminders where I can see them (even if it’s just keeping a tab open on my computer instead of closing it), and keeping in mind that my team (or my grade, in the case of most schoolwork) is counting on me; I hate disappointing others and try my best to stay on top of things when I’m working in a group.

And that, I feel, is exactly what accountability is: knowing that others are relying on you and doing your part to keep things going.

And to me, that doesn’t mean doing everything you possibly can even if you don’t have enough time.

It means keeping track of the things you do have time for and asking for help in advance as soon as you realize you can’t do it. It means reminding others what they have to get done and offering for help if you have that capability. It means admitting to your mistakes and working to fix them.

And all of that is what I’m good at, or what I’m working on, day after day, to get better at.

Scenario C.

Losing motivation is something I can relate to. It’s something everyone deals with. And so is having trouble with accountability; sometimes time constraints and piles of work feel like a huge weight pressing down on you.

If something like this happens to someone on my team, I’d reach out privately (in case they aren’t comfortable sharing with the rest of the team or don’t want to clog the forum) and ask them what’s going on.

If they don’t have enough time, I’d work with the rest of my team to figure out who has the most time on their hands and if they’re willing to take on some of the (co)leader’s work. If no one is able, we’ll try to simplify the plan and take some items off the list to lessen the load.

If they just can’t see the point of working on the stuff, I’d ask them what feels pointless about it and see what I can do to explain the meaning behind it while still validating their feelings. I might also ask them what they think might be a better idea, and discuss any given ideas with the rest of my team so they’re working on something that feels more important to them.

If they just don’t feel like they have the skills to do it, I would ask them what about it feels ‘impossible’ and guide them through the process. If that doesn’t work, I’d see if anyone would be willing to switch around some assignments and give them something that they feel comfortable working on.

If they don’t give an answer, I’d see what I could figure out from context and try some more collaboration-focused things where they could easily give their input on what they do or don’t want to do. And if all of this fails, I’d try a simplified version of each of the methods above and see what seems to work.

I definitely know what this situation feels like, and I’d do whatever I can to boost morale and keep things on track.

SWC has had an enormous impact on me, and from my very inactive first session last March to this very day, it affects how I think, how I approach leadership, how I interact with others, and most of all how I write.

I started out in March as a silly writer who never planned and thought the only thing worth writing was a novel.

I can’t believe how wrong I was.

SWC has changed my writing in so many ways, from providing endless inspiration to changing my style almost completely.

Nowadays, I’m filled to the brim with ideas for poems, flash fiction, short stories, scripts, and yes, books.

Characters and worlds feel so much more real. Word choice has become so much more important. My writing has become a lot sillier at times, but than I start a poem and a slight solemn melancholy comes over me almost immediately.

Before SWC, I wrote completely for the plot, didn’t give a thought towards character development, and, well, had terrible grammar and syntax.
I’m so, so glad I signed up as a backup camper that March.

My life will never be the same.

As for creating a positive impact on other SWCers, whether first-timers or war veterans, I intend to create a session they’ll remember.

I want to make a cabin that doesn’t feel like it’s got high expectations: high-demand storylines that the (co)leaders are begging you to participate in, nothing so competitive that you feel like your letting your cabin down if you don’t do the weekly, nothing telling you to write a million words.

Whether I’m in a leadership position this session or not, I aim to help those I interact with to feel motivated and satisfied with their writing. Whether these opportunities come in the form of critiquitaires, or being an accountability buddy with someone, or even just telling them that their writing is really cool, or anything else I can do, I’ll try my best to take on as many as I can without burning out.

SWC is such an amazing place for me— I hope I can make it just that for others around me, too.

a.
“A calm, encouraging cabin with a low-maintenance but immersive storyline and a focus on improvement, bonding, and personal goals” (129 characters and 19 words).

b.
Whatever cabin I end up (co)leading this session, if I’m given the chance to do so, I want to give campers a memorable experience that they’ll enjoy down to every second.

Campers, like I mentioned in my ‘SWC Impact’ section, shouldn’t feel pressured to do everything or interact with everyone.

I would create this atmosphere by making sure the cabin has a minimal, or low-maintenence, storyline that creates something campers are proud of, and it wouldn’t be focused too much on competition.

Activities like Cabin Wars would be a chance to have some fun writing with your cabin, not something that requires thousands of words from each person, and dailies, weeklies, critiques, and word wars would be portrayed as an oppotunity to improve, instead of one to gain points.

All in all, I hope to create a cabin that’s encouraging and doesn’t cause any stress, focused almost completely on bonding, memories, and improvement.

a.
⁀➷ I can add points consistently through the session
⁀➷ I’m willing to share a promotional project for SWC
⁀➷ I’m willing to put the camper signups link in my “About Me” or “What I’m Working On” on my Scratch Profile
b.
I’ve read all things listed in the FAQ and can complete all of them!

I would either reside in the Tea Shop with the Mad Hatter or in the Rabbit Hole with a book <3 Holed up in a corner with a book or sitting in a beautiful tea shop surrounded by insanity both sound like perfect places to stay for eternity!

what's the best part of your cabin?

what's one thing you're looking forward to this session?

any dailies / daily types you're looking forward to / hoping to see this session?

favorite swc activity?

what's one valuable thing you've learned from swc?

what's one random thing you've learned from swc?

what's one thing you wish swc had?

what's one compliment you could give to another cabin?

what's an idea you have for swc in the future?

what's your least favorite part of swc?

have you ever read a book recommended by a swcer?

if so, what book? did you like it?

what's a writing technique you've learned from swc?

favorite cabin you've been in?

favorite cabin you weren't in?

what's your favorite storyline activity that you've done/seen?

what's your favorite type of cabin merch?

what's the best qotd you've seen?

what's the consistently best cabin genre?

what's the most amount of cabin preferences you've ever put in a signup?

what's the best part of between-sessions?

do you prefer the memory book or results?

if you could meet any irl swcer, who would it be?

what's the best daily you've ever seen?

how has your perspective on swc changed?

what has been your favorite session?

what's the best username you've ever seen in swc?

what's the best nickname you've ever seen in swc?

have you ever applied for (co)leader?

if so, what was your favorite part of making the app?

what's a song that matches your cabin's vibes?

is your cabin based on a fandom? if so, do you like that fandom?

have you ever participated in a bandwagon? if so, which one was your favorite?

got any random swc trivia you want to share?

who's your favorite mascot?

what's your favorite session theme you've seen?

critique for melody <33

heyy melody!! this app is great, and with some tweaking I think you're definitely on the road to success here.

about me:

nitpicks

you'll probably want to capitalize your i's here <3 she in she/her shouldn't be capitalized. I, personally, think that exclamation points shouldn't be used twice in a row in apps, to avoid clunkiness and looking sloppy (which you don't, it just tends to miff me slightly)! also make sure to capitalize the start of sentences.

larger things

my main thing would be expanding on this. this is a section for us to get to know you personally, and you don't want to seem like a stranger! i'd add probably two more paragraphs about your hobbies along with an explanation of what they mean to you (which you do very well), and then add a little closing note such as ‘well, there you go! thanks for enduring my rambles <3’

previous participation:

nitpicks

you double space (as in line spacing) here in your past sessions list and nowhere else in the section and—for the most part— nowhere in the app, which is a bit jarring— i'd suggest picking one to use consistently (I suggest double space, but either work)!

capitalize your i's <33

larger things

once again, i'd add some more details— what is your leadership experience like? what has each session taught you? have you done any other scratch camps? what does leadership mean to you (less so on this one as the question doesn't specifically ask for it, but I do suggest adding a bit of it in perhaps)?

cabin prefs:

nitpicks

cabin shouldn't be capitalized, sandiego should be! refer to my earlier note about exclamation notes as well. and correct me if i'm wrong but wouldn't your non-fi cabin fit better in historical fiction?

no need to repeat yourself on that last little part!

larger things

nothing much, just make sure your 1900s cabin is appropriate, as some things in that time could be triggering for some swcers.

time stuff:

nitpicks

from now on just assume the exclamation mark thing counts for all answers <3

larger things

elaborate on both, I'd say— mention how your schedule will compare across months and even between weekdays and weekends for the first part, and then take note on how you're improving your weaknesses perhaps in the second one!

communication and accountability:

nitpicks

n/a besides the exclamation mark thing!

larger things

i'd say a lot of expanding is needed here. what are your weaknesses in communication? how do you respond to problems? what do you do if something comes up?

as well, make sure to get into the accountability part for both yourself and others— I don't see anything about it here. how do you communicate when you can't get something done, or one of your (co)leaders is struggling with deadlines?

impact:

nitpicks

capitalize your i's!

larger things

please please expand on this <33 it's going in a good direction, but make it truly personal to you— how does swc impact you in a way that can't just be applied to any other camper? it needs to be specific and true to you. some ideas would be mention how you found it, why you stayed, what about it keeps you happy!

for part b, just really really expand. do you have any specific ideas? how do you intend to connect and bond with your campers? how are you going to forge those friendships with them? I also wouldn't use forceful words like ‘make’— try ‘encourage’ or ‘inspire.’

cabin atmosphere:

nitpicks

it looks more professional to scrap ‘the cabin atmosphere i’m aiming for' and replace it with a nice ‘a ____ cabin with ____’ or ‘with a focus/centering around ___…’

i'd also put quotations marks around the first part and add a character count in parentheses at the end!!

larger things

this'll be similar to the impact question! make it personal to your cabin, and give a detailed explanation of how you're going to do these things.

checkboxes:

I wouldn't put n/a for the last one— i'd restate it like you did with the others. you also seem to have skipped the adding points one!!

format:

it's always nice to be able to find specific answers easily— so i'd suggest using consistent and clear spacing and bolding / underlining / italicizing your answer titles!


overall, you've got a really strong app— you mainly need to focus on grammar and adding details. YOU GOT THIS <3