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A-Sad-Invention

**REMOVED MWAHAHAHA**

Last edited by A-Sad-Invention (Dec. 18, 2021 01:38:15)

mis·take
/məˈstāk/
noun
an action or judgment that is misguided or wrong.
“coming here was a mistake”

dear reader
burn all the files, desert all your past lives
and if you don't recognize yourself
that means you did it right

A-Sad-Invention

**REMOVED HHAHHAHA**

Last edited by A-Sad-Invention (Dec. 18, 2021 01:38:33)

mis·take
/məˈstāk/
noun
an action or judgment that is misguided or wrong.
“coming here was a mistake”

dear reader
burn all the files, desert all your past lives
and if you don't recognize yourself
that means you did it right

MarcelinaxBooks

My Feedback:
Oh wow, oh wow, OH WOW! This story is sad but happy all at the same time! I like the plot, characters, and overall theme. However, I wish it were a little longer if that's possible. And maybe more dialogue between the characters. Other than that, it is beautifully written. You wrote a wonderful story; great job! <33

Sandy-Dunes

AYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY LET'S GO YOU WON JUNIOR'S

I still didn't really read it, as you instructed me, but great work! I caught a glimpse of Klopot's name though, hehe.

“i have been made to protect you. only in death will i be kept from this oath”

(matching with misty)

A-Sad-Invention

mis·take
/məˈstāk/
noun
an action or judgment that is misguided or wrong.
“coming here was a mistake”

dear reader
burn all the files, desert all your past lives
and if you don't recognize yourself
that means you did it right

Sandy-Dunes

wow misty you removed the writing :<

“i have been made to protect you. only in death will i be kept from this oath”

(matching with misty)

A-Sad-Invention

:]

mis·take
/məˈstāk/
noun
an action or judgment that is misguided or wrong.
“coming here was a mistake”

dear reader
burn all the files, desert all your past lives
and if you don't recognize yourself
that means you did it right

A-Sad-Invention

i shall abandon mwaahaha

mis·take
/məˈstāk/
noun
an action or judgment that is misguided or wrong.
“coming here was a mistake”

dear reader
burn all the files, desert all your past lives
and if you don't recognize yourself
that means you did it right

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