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SSingh2008
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See's writing for SWC July 2022

Daily
24.7.22


118 words

I turn around
To find myself alone
Still unknown to the world,
Yet I can see it all clearly
Their lies, their smiles
I smell disgust from afar
yet they show pleasure in their talks.
I dare not ask why
As I’m to, afraid to be so daring
I sit back, relax with the soothing smell of daffodils,
Eating what I’d like to
Not going against my taste
Seemingly looking outside, at the beautiful sunset
As I hear birds chirping, going back to their homes
I hear arguments going bout
But what can I do?
Instead sit here, eating the most mouth-watering food ever,
Smelling the sweet scent of daffodils
And looking at the sunset outside my window.
SSingh2008
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See's writing for SWC July 2022

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25.7.22


164 words

You find yourself falling in an abyss, you don’t know if it’s real or imaginary just that your eyes feel heavy. As your eyes close.
You hear voices surrounding you until someone comes and screams in your ear “WAKE UP!!”, you get up in an instant. Your eyes take a bit of time adjusting to the surroundings, when you see three eyed, horned creatures in front of you. You take a step back, but one of them comes up to you and says “Hey, don’t be afraid we won’t harm you… if you don’t make us”, you falter back stumbling to the ground
Another monster said, pushing the first one aside, “Cut that out, your scaring them even more” it came up to you and gives you a hand getting up
The third one comes up to you and says with a smile, well in the best way a monster could smile “Welcome to the Myth Underworld where you’ll experience terror and much more”

SSingh2008
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See's writing for SWC July 2022

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26.7.22


318 words
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In the City of Adeali, you can see smoke rubbing the atmosphere. The vast mountain peaks look like towers over the sunburnt sky, and the rivers stand there as if they were all just thick layers of concrete. Water is hard to find, since most people have already used it all up. The government has been trying to spread back green into the land, but with no luck. The world seems to have agreed to the new situation at hand, and rocks form more often at this point. Hard, sharp ones at that. The population, or most of it at least, has since fled the city in search of safer living standards. The only people left are mostly farm workers, since sadly, they didn’t have enough money to move out. Since the incident of the Pollution Occurrence, the City of Adeali has become solidified and grimy, hardly suitable for living in anymore.

Present year 5014, technology has long advanced the human society. Though it started with its extinction, the humans extinction that is which was caused due to the lack of water and the polluted air.
A new civilization started with organisms called chrono which are now called humans as per there understanding of ancient writings.
The water is no longer is undrinkable because of technology and the power of science. Atoms are confined and pressured to form water as well as food for us chrono’s to survive, because like previous humans they also need the same environment. The entire world as a whole is inside a small spherical barrier on both sides of the earth.
Th city of Adelia is now, no longer as corrupt as it was before, except the mountains which were like towers are now diminished in size and can be visited by anyone, the society no longer depends on humans but cyborgs built by the chrono’s which take same action as humans and have the same feelings and emotions as them.
Fruits and vegetables are rare and can only be afforded by the highest rankers in science as of now science is the only subject important for the development of the chrono’s or humans. There is no presence of smoke in the sky due to the new way of creating fire that is using a molecular formula which does not liberate smoke when it is used to burn something. The rivers that were previously like layers of concrete have now turned to ice because of the earth going farther and farther away from the sun.
The seasons experienced by the city of Adelia is only spring and nothing else, as now this city is runned by spring creatures of the chrono’s. there’s no classification or rift between the qualified and the unqualified, each one of the chrono’s is treated equally with benefits or no benefits.

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SSingh2008
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See's writing for SWC July 2022

Daily
29.7.22


556 words
beginning:act natural and pretend you haven't seen them.
Conflict: An old family secret that changes everything
Setting: “This is a nice forest. Except it looks like these trees are about to explode or someth- OH NO WAIT THEY ACTUALLY ARE EXPLODING, RUN”
Climax: The dead person resurrects from the dead
ending: “you've finished. come on. let's go home.”


I was going to walk past them, pretending nothing happened nor did I hear anything until Lara pinned me to the wall and started asking questions, “What did you hear?”
I avert their gazes as they intensely stare at me, when suddenly Lara asks
“What are you hiding?”
“No-nothing” I reply hastily
“Are you sure?” Rosa tries to confirm
“Yeah, yeah I’m fine” I reply, swinging my arms over their shoulders, “Now why don’t we go back to studying”
“No chance.” As soon as Rosa says that she snaps her fingers and her shadow ninja appears, “Capture Elsa and bring her to the dorms”
“Wai-” the world suddenly goes dark, my eyes feel heavy, I feel numb and tired as I fall to sleep
I can hear the whispers of voices echoing inside the room as I slowly open my eyes I find some people standing in front of me. I smell grass, and wet mud as I turn my head to look around I find my friends talking about something I can’t hear.
I get off the chair and go up to my friends, when they look at me they have a surprised expression. Without a word coming from their mouth, I understand what they mean “They now about it, they know about the secret”
“hAHA, now you know so just leave me be will ya” I shout at them
“ We did-didn’t think-”
“Just leave me alone” I scream not in my right senses when I snap out of it my friends are no longer there. I take in a deep breath, glancing around to check where I am.
“I’m in the middle of a forest, awesome” I tell myself when I hear a booming sound
“Why does that tree keep expanding” I think to myself as I try to look more closely, I understand “IT’S THE TREES BLOWING UP, wait why in the world are they exploding??”
“Elza get down” a voice calls to me from the back as I duck down, someone jumps over me. I lift my head back up to see who it is, finding Lara with her spear trying to stop the tree from exploding
The trees seems to be getting redder and redder when she shouts, “GET AWAY”
I run back as fast as possible when I hear the blast I turn around devastated. I run back towards Lara’s position. Tears to start to swell up in my eyes, as Lara lies on the ground not breathing
I kneel down lifting her head up into my lap “Why did you do that?” I sobbed when a green light flashed as my tears touched her. She started to breathe again when I felt her moving I quickly hugged her, almost strangling her
“Ouch, ouch that’s to tight Elza” she complained
“That’s what you get from dying on me” I replied still hugging her tight
“I died?” she asked feeling a sharp pain, remembering everything “… I remember now…”
“Where’s Rosa?” I ask almost forgetting about her
“Hiding behind that tree” Lara said pointing at the tree beside the exploded one
I rush towards her as soon as I see her hugging her to almost strangle her
“We’re done here. why not go back home” Rosa says with a smile, I nod as we get on our way back home
SSingh2008
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See's writing for SWC July 2022

Daily
30.7.22


321 words
Prompt: eating like a horse


“What else do we need?” Sora pondered
“Candles and a chalk” suggested Romeo
“We are not making a ghost summoning circle! But I think you’re right about the candles what birthday party doesn’t have candles on the cake” she added with a smile, searching for candles in the locker
“What are you looking for?” Ezra pops up and asks
“Foe candles for y-” Sora covers Romeo’s mouth with her hand stopping him from blurting out the plan
“Yea, them for the spirit summoning circle thingy…”
“Cool… can I be a part too?” Ezra asked with puppy dog eyes
Sora almost gave into them but Ezra’s plan failed, “haha… why don’t you go play with someone else Ez?”
“Robin’s busy making pasta and I don’t know what happened to Re he isn’t answering my calls” Ezra pleaded
Sora let out a deep sigh, “Then you can play with Brawl… for today” she mumbled in the end
“Really?”
“Yea”
Ezra went on his way to search for Brawl, while on the other hand Romeo was trying to sneak away, “Hold it right there” Sora said grabbing him by the collar “Do you think you can get out just by sneaking away”
“Nooo..” his voice trailed off
“Then you know what we need to do” she said with a smile
It was almost evening when Ezra returned with Brawl and found no one in the room, he was surprised when they all jumped out and screamed
“Happy Birthday!!” they started singing the birthday song while Ezra blew out the candles and started the cut the cake as well when Sora stopped her and said “You eat like a horse, wait for the others to take their pieces as well”
Robin took out her lassanga and placed it on the table, at which Ezra didn’t stop and started eating while the others merely watched him eat
“You sur
SSingh2008
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100+ posts

See's writing for SWC July 2022

4th Weekly
3435 words (3348 words from the writing 87 words from sabotage)


PATHS TAKEN: 6-1, 5-2, 82-2, 7-4, 9-2, 1-4, 4-1, 3-2, 2-3, 101-2 | SABOTAGE RESULTS: 2- F, 1- F, 6- F, 5- S;3- S;4- S;7- F, 9- S;8- S | ENDING: neutral


Begin story with 100 words

The lights flicker as I stumble back trying to stay calm and stop my knees from crashing into each other. I try to stand steady when I feel a cold breeze, as if telling me that something bad is about to happen. I firstly take a deep breath, letting it out, I grab the object closest to me. I find a stick, holding it tight I quietly walk towards the end of the hall.
I hear my heart beating louder and louder with every second as footsteps approach me. I
take my stance to strike if it’s someone or something unusual.

Write for 5 minutes, feature of the setting suddenly becoming dangerous to your main character

I no longer hear footsteps and the lights have stopped flickering.
Everything feels calm once again as I approach my room no longer scared or frightened. I’m scared out of my wits as I see my room in a mess, a chill goes down my spine. I feel someone staring at me, with an ominous aura I spot someone hiding behind the curtains. I frantically decide to run when my feet’s stop moving nor do my hands move. I gulp down the words stuck in my throat as I must my courage, “Who-who’s th..ere?” I ask shuddering.
I cautiously approach the window, with the stick in my hand I carefully look behind the first curtain and find no one there, understanding that it must have been luck I thank God in that moment.
With trembling leg’s, I approach the second curtain, my hands shake nonstop, my heart beats loudly in my head so loud that I can hear it louder and faster with every second that passes by.

In these 200 words, A character reveals one of their main motives is to gain something

I pull back the curtains to find my friend, Daisy smiling at me, while I’m still in a shock.
“What happened Flow?” Daisy asks with a puzzled look
“What happened here?” I ask pointing at the room in its chaotic state, still confused
“Oh!…” her voice faded away with those words, “I was looking for something…” she added
“What was it?” I ask
“Umm… it was, well… the results for the writing competition”
Hearing this I was shocked, panicked I started searching for them “Hurry we need to find them, where did you last see them?”
“I don’t want to find them” Daisy replied and that was all that was needed to clear my doubts
“Yo-you wanted it to explode didn’t you…” I made a presumption with my hands trembling still at that thought
“Yea! I wanted to blast this place into pieces, specifically your room” she said with a dark look in her eyes, she wasn’t the same as before her eyes were… dark and lifeless
“I was hoping to hide it here then frame you for it and look I even made preparations” she said
“Why??”
“You act to much like a goody two shoes and I HATE IT!” when I heard these words from her, I was disappointed, when something crashed outside
I hurriedly ran towards the noise, finding Roes and Fela standing there trembling
I cautiously asked, “Did you hear us?” both of them nodded
“Please don’t tell any-”
“What do you mean don’t tell anyone, I’m going to inform the higher ups right now,” said Rose
“Yeah, what she said” agreed Fela

Change an element of your characters world into a fantastical element, supported by worldbuilding 300 words

“Guys listen to me” Flow said taking out her wand and casting a magic spell
“Um-mhpp” Flea and Rose struggled to speak until Flow’s spell ended
“I can’t believe you just did that” Flea argued
“I needed to, now you can’t tell anyone about it”
“Yeah just like you wanted” Rose said sarcastically, “Since you have magic you don’t need us do you, even if it was someone else you would have dealt with it already with erasing their memories then why not with us”
“Beca-”
“Cuz we are friends” Fela interrupted
This world had no guidance nor any rules, none could go against each other but yet they still could when they wanted to. We were differentiated because of our magical abilities yet we still are the same species but with different standings in this society.
“Here we have no value, and the little value we do have is because of our writing skills” Rosa said with a bitter sweet smile
“Don’t try to take that from us as well, understand” she added
“Rosa, in the world which we are has no value for those with weak abilities but the place where we are standing right now does. We can hope to be whatever we want or do just by showing our burning passion for writing”
“Still-”
“I know you know, what I mean and to add the best part of being here was to be able to write, wasn’t it? We were stopped because our abilities but here there’s no judgement based on that, only our ability to express using words is seen here, nothing more nothing less.”
“She’s right Rosa” Flow agreed with Flea, she took Rosa’s hand gripping it tight and added “I’m sorry if I made you feel inferior because of what I did but I didn’t cast a spell to stop you from saying about what happened just know but to not spill until you are totally convinced that you need to say”

For next 15 mins you must make a new line for every 8-10 words you write.

“do you think a few words of compassion can make
up to it? I’ll answer it for you, NO! because
I don’t need them” said Rosa walking away from Flea
and the elevator came as she was about to enter
Flea and Flow charged in together into it
As Flow casted a spell and Flea did one of
her one spell’s. “what do you think you
are doing?-” “Keeping you tied up that’s it”
Flea said with a smirk “Are you on her side
Now?” “I certainly am not, I just want to
talk it out first”. “Now all I wanted to say
…is I’m SORRY for nothing about you guys and how
you’d felt about it” “Not forgiven” Rosa shouts
“Should I conjure up a weird face for myself then?”
“Maybe” Flow did as she said conjuring up a face
which would make anyone laugh out loud until their stomach
pained. “Now?” “50% you’re forgiven but don’t expect more”
Flea then turned her hair blue form white which really
Cracked both Flea and Rosa up because seeing
Flow with an other hair except white was just unthinkable
In this entire world for them, she could never change
it no matter how much they wanted to view her
with a new hair colour except white was…
“Now am I forgiven” Flow pleaded “Yeah-
You are” Rosa said trying to control herself from bursting
Into laughter once again but Flea beat her to it
Laughing so loud and hard that she ended up gasping
for breath. “What should we do now?” Flea asked
“No idea” replied Rosa “Maybe play with her hair”
Flea said with a smirk as she surrounded Flow
And Flow stumbled to her feet ready to submit to
Them knowing she could not escape them with this matter
any way even if she tried a spell. Rosa also
added in lurking over Flow with an evil smile

For 8 mins incorporate the plot twist in which the antagonist is actually part of the mc’s family

“Anyway isn’t Daisy your cousin?” asked Rosa
“Yeah” Flow replied reluctantly
“Then why does she want to ruin you” asked Flea
Rosa answered for Flow when she stayed silent for more than five seconds, “She’s twisted like many people who think writing our way up to the ranks is wrong, that’s why she despises her”
“Aren’t we working stop to them, I mean this project is all about that is it not?” said Flea with reluctance
“That doesn’t matter, not anymore our goal here is to make it possible for all to have equality” Flow said interrupting their train of thoughts to god knows what kind of fantasy them might have created about her cousin
“Oh, do I hear someone mention me?” said a voice when the three of them turned around to find Daisy listening in on their conversation
“How long have you been there?” asked Rosa
“a few minutes, 15 or so”
“You call that a few minutes?” questioned Flow
“Cousin!” Daisy said reaching her arms out to hug her but Flow dogged pushing her aside
“Don’t you see she doesn’t want to meet you” snapped Flea
“So? What should I do about it?”
“Maybe backup a few hundred light years away from her and us” Rosa said coming close to Flow and holding her hand steady
“Yeah, as you like it I shall leave now” she said going to her own room
“You alright?” Rosa asked Flow with concerned eyes
“Yeah, I’m fine” Flow replied still processing everything that they just discussed about coming to the realization that Daisy must have already done something to the other writers or worse to the judges

For 5 minutes incorporate features of mystery, adventure or horror

“Rosa, Flea I think something horrible is going to happen” Flow said with legs shaking and her heart pit patting faster and faster thinking about what could happen.
When suddenly the lights go out, the elevator moves down and stops yet again trapping them in a difficult situation.
“everyone take out your phone and turn on the flash light” Rosa whispers in the silence left by the darkness
They do so ask she says, with a little bit of light in every direction Flea doesn’t stop what she wanted to say “I think Daisy is up to something very bad”
“Like?”
“Corrupting the other writers or worse doing something to the judges” Flow says with a shudder as a chill goes down her spine “Guys did you feel that cold air just now”
“What cold air, there’s no way for air to come here” said Flea with a puzzled look which couldn’t be seen by nay of them
“Maybe it’s your imagination Flow” Rosa tries to reassure but Flow still feels that’s something is entirely wrong with what happened just now.

With 200 words describe your char to be the chosen one

“No, I’m sure of it-”
“Hey, HEY FLOW where are you?” Rosa screamed searching for her with the little bit of light she had at her disposal while Flea still felt around the wall to see if there was a secret door somewhere, when suddenly a beam of light flashed from beneath them. The light blinded them when they saw Flow emerge out of it by the end. They rushed to her side,
“Hey flow wake up” Flea said slapping her to possibly wake her up
“Ughh, we need water not slaps to wake her up” Rosa muttered
“I can create water”
“Then why didn’t you do so in the beginning”, Flea casted her spell when a few drops of water started to fill the room as if raining. Rosa cupped water in her hand poring it onto Flow’s face
Flow stirred in her position finally waking up and when she got up both Rosa and Flea hugged her tight almost suffocating her
“What happened to you”, “What was that light?”, “Where did you go?”
“Stop, stop, stop Rosa with the questions I’ll tell you everything just let me process it”
After a few minutes Flow took in a deep breath and started, “I’m the chosen one, the one to bring equality to this world and I have to do it anyway possible”
“You sure you ok?” asked Flea with doubt
“Yeah I just had my awakening so I’m not entirely clear about it, but I know what I’m saying and its true”

create a character from one of the cabin members of your cabin from the about me

“Hey you guys alright?” someone asks as Flea, Flow and Rosa glance around to find anyone else except them their when they find a girl backed away into corner of the elevator
“Oh, sorry… who are you” asked Rosa
“You don’t need to know” the girl said pushing her glasses up
“Anyway why didn’t we notice you before?” asks Flow
“Cuz I was covered by an invisibility spell which I had to get rid of thanks to you guys” she grumbled
“Then you were here…”
“From the very beginning, from the point where you started to tie Rosa up to the point where you awakened”
Rosa snapped her fingers and said “I knew I had seen you before, you’re Aid aren’t you? I mean I’m pretty sure you are-”
“If you do know please stop with it already”
“You truly are an honest and straightforward person, yet helpful in times of need and someone who’s tuck to books”
Hearing this Aid blushed covering her face with the book she held in her hand, “How do you know I helped you?”
“Flea’s magic isn’t powerful enough to pour down the amount of rain she did to soak us” she said showing her drenched clothes
“Have some faith in me will ya!” Flea grumbled
“And with what Flow said when she said about cold air I think it was from your spells effect and that’s all to it”
“…” Aid stayed stunned
“You know about us why don’t you tell us more about yo then since you alreafy know about Flow”
“Well then I’m Aid a soon to be professor and a bookworm.”
“How can you only say that much about yourself? And what do you mean professor?” asked Flea
“Oh opps, I miss spoke I meant assistant professor and yes that’s all I have to say about me”
“Well I’ll add to your introduction then.” Said Rosa “She has won the first place medal for… everything she did”

Incorporate Chekhov’s principle and write 300 words

Flow took out her wand writing something down on the floor.
“Watcha doin?” asked Flea with curiosity and Aid and Rosa weren’t left behind
“I just remembered a transportal magic spell it’ll transport us to where we want to” she said completing the drawing and chanting when they all transported into a room filled with pilled with papers and papers
“Hey that’s my stick” Flow said running to get the familiar stick she once used to protect herself but now in doubt about how it got here
“Isn’t that the stick you had with you in your room?” asked Rosa
“Yeah but I don’t know how it got here…” Flow trailed off with her thoughts
“Maybe Daisy brought it here and the spell which casted transported us to where the last thing you had contact with was” said Aid with curiosity in her eyes as she stared at the stick, suddenly taking it from Flow “Interesting” was the only word that came out of her mouth as she started at the stick even more intently
“Where did you find this from?” she asked
“Don’t remember, well it was maybe in the hallway or something” Flow replied still not sure if to trust Aid completely or not
“Well this stick has magical properties, which are certainly not… common for things to have”
“Anyway where is this place?” Rosa asked the question which most of them seemed to have forgotten about
“Probably the storage room, which would explain all these papers. I mean I knew we had a storage room and there were rumours that it was stacked from top to bottom but god this is unreal, papers everywhere no place to even sit” said Flow in wonder and awe
“Heh, you haven’t seen everything this place is even bigger”
“Who said that?” they all scrambled
“Th-the stick did!” Aid said with her body trembling they all turned to look towards the stick some in awe and others in disbelief

Write 205 words of your character realizing that true beauty is found inside of oneself

“Know I now, wait I meant now I know that true beauty comes from the inside” Flow said which seriously creeped the others out, “You don’t agree?” she asked them
“It’s true” they all replied in unison
“See this stick talks now because of it’s inner beauty and not the outside one”
“What do you mean?” Flea asks
“We all are different despite being of the same species yet we all have the same goal inside us. So inside our hearts we are truly beautiful even if one of us always looks cranky…”
“Hey!” Rosa snarled
“… and some may look dumb”
“Who?”
“and lastly some are just not considered to be but we are all beautiful from the inside”
“Where’s is all this mushy stuff coming from Flow” Aid shuddered
“I just realized it when the stick spoke, Daisy is just like us you can say. We are all the same but different in another way. she is beautiful inside even if she is not on the outside”
“We already know that she’s beautiful!” Rosa said
“But if her heart is beautiful and if she thinks of herself to be beautiful is different is it not?”
“Stop with the formal language thing” Flea said with a puzzled look
“Ok, ok I’ll get to the point. We should never judge someone based on looks nor criticize ourselves for it because true beauty lies inside us and not outside”
“you seem to have gotten quick witted somehow” says Rosa with a smile
“I was already very smart from the beginning” Flow said with a grin and took a glance towards each one of them and added “We all have our own strengths and we are all beautiful on the inside”
“Yea” agreed Fela

Write 500 words to end your story

In this world where we are criticized upon only for not having abilities to do better we find our place in this land of stories, where we have no differentiation between us just a bit of rivalry with each other and a dash of power of emotions to it
“We surly are lucky”
“How so?”
“To get away from Daisy I mean she was really creeping me out with what she did back then-”
“we still need to figure out why she did that” Flow said with questions arising inside her about how Daisy even found out about it, for her to find out about ti must have to from someone who’s very knowledgeable, knows there way around this place and is not that jerked out of the group either
Flow gasped as she took out her wand pointing it at Aid, “Flow what are you doing?” Rosa asked in surprise
“She’s the one who turned her against me” she said with shaking hands as Flea and Rosa came to her side
“Took you long enough to figure it out didn’t it” Aid smirked
“I knew you tow wouldn’t be able to solve this so I left it up to her all on her one to do what she wanted without any doubt she’s truly the chosen one who will save you if she stays alive and is able to make it out of here” she said with an ominous aura surrounding her
“What do you mean?” Flow mustered the courage to ask
“you still don’t remember do you, I was once an all mighty magic user but your ancestor defeated me I out on a curse on them that you all will suffer the same death be it the end through a stabbed heart or dying with guilt”
As soon as she said that a fire lit across the room Rosa, Flea and Flow were all suffocated by the fire while Aid seemed to have disappeared and was no longer to be found in the room
“Guys we need to *cough* get out of *here*” Flow said coughing
“Don’t you think we already know that?” Flea said still being able to breathe without any difficulties take this she said throwing over a handkerchief to both of them and telling them to cover their mouths
“I’ll cast a spell to make it wet so that we can breathe once again” she added
She cast her spell but the process was slow with only some of the fire fading away Rosa noticed something
“Why isn’t the paper burning?” she questioned
“Maybe it’s inflammable” said Flea
“No, that can’t be this fire is fake and it only effects our lungs we need to run from here or else we’ll suffocate and die and even someone does find us here they’ll think we just died of exhaustion or something with the case being left closed we need to get out no matter what” she said grabbing Flow and Flea by the arms and running towards the door at full speed

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