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-Vuton-

JakeTheProgrammer wrote:
Reviews
Full username: JakeTheProgrammer
Link to what you want reviewed: Scratch Party: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/107917725/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Game
How harsh should we be?: As harsh as necessary for accurate constructive criticism.
Comments (anything else?): I've worked on this game a bit, and because of its large scope, it's hard for me to see the tiny little details that need ironing. It would be awesome if you guys could look into it and tell me every minor flaw so I could make this game a perfection! If you have any other ideas, like minigames or stages, please be specific!

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-Vuton-

JakeTheProgrammer wrote:
Reviews
Full username: JakeTheProgrammer
Link to what you want reviewed: Scratch Party: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/107917725/
Type of thing you want reviewed: Game
How harsh should we be?: As harsh as necessary for accurate constructive criticism.
Comments (anything else?): I've worked on this game a bit, and because of its large scope, it's hard for me to see the tiny little details that need ironing. It would be awesome if you guys could look into it and tell me every minor flaw so I could make this game a perfection! If you have any other ideas, like minigames or stages, please be specific!

Review for Scratch Party 2.0 by JakeTheProgrammer
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Coding (-/100) - 80
Graphics (-/100) - 60
Bugs (-/100) - 90 (Meaning I didn't find many bugs)
Grammar (-/100) - 99
Creativity (-/100) - 80

Comments: I actually really enjoyed trying out this game, it seems to have nearly the exact same concept as Mario Party but a lot more child-friendly.

Improvements that could be made: I think the speach bubbles by the butterfly should display for longer as it was quite a lot to read.
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Review by -Vuton- from Bigpuppy's Shop

MysteryMan937

Reviews
Full username: {MysteryMan937}
Link to what you want reviewed: {Little Ball Adventure}
Type of thing you want reviewed: {Platformer- Game}
How harsh should we be?: {10 - Harshest}
Comments (anything else?): {The project is nearly finished but just review what I've done so far. Tell me anything that needs fixing, or could, be better and also all the good things. Post the review on my project comments, Little Ball Adventure If there is not enough room in 1 comment, just post another one to finish it off.}
Thankyou.

Come check out my new platformer, Little Ball Adventure! Click the image to see it.

PokemonScratch101

bigpuppy wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Reviews
Full username: {@MistickMage}
Link to what you want reviewed: {https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/188587245/}
Type of thing you want reviewed: {Art}
How harsh should we be?: {Extremely harsh}
Comments (anything else?): {Its a drawing of my chicken, Sara}
Taken
Remember to use the review template please, although I think you will xD

How should I review art?

i haven't edited this in a long time - ps101, 2022

asqwde

Username?asqwde
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)?scripts
What is your favorite animal?dog
Example(s) of work?my pen platformer
Are you following this topic?yes
How many shops are you an employee at? 2 I think

bigpuppy

PokemonScratch101 wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Reviews
Full username: {@MistickMage}
Link to what you want reviewed: {https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/188587245/}
Type of thing you want reviewed: {Art}
How harsh should we be?: {Extremely harsh}
Comments (anything else?): {Its a drawing of my chicken, Sara}
Taken
Remember to use the review template please, although I think you will xD
How should I review art?

Just put “N/A” in all the spaces that don't apply (for art it'd be coding and bugs usually).

asqwde wrote:
Username?asqwde
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)?scripts
What is your favorite animal?dog
Example(s) of work?my pen platformer
Are you following this topic?yes
How many shops are you an employee at? 2 I think

Please give links to your examples of work

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

PokemonScratch101

bigpuppy wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Reviews
Full username: {@MistickMage}
Link to what you want reviewed: {https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/188587245/}
Type of thing you want reviewed: {Art}
How harsh should we be?: {Extremely harsh}
Comments (anything else?): {Its a drawing of my chicken, Sara}
Taken
Remember to use the review template please, although I think you will xD
How should I review art?
Just put “N/A” in all the spaces that don't apply (for art it'd be coding and bugs usually).
<snip>

Okay, thanks. You might want to add an art review and/or music review template

i haven't edited this in a long time - ps101, 2022

poppybunny

Intro/Outro
Full username: poppybunny
Intro or Outro? (which one?): Intro
What do you want it to be like?: Cute realistic Cartoon bunny hops across screen. Camera zooms out so the bunny is in the u of poppybunny
Any music? If so, what music/type of music?: nope
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector
Comments (anything else?): don’t think so

when [bunny v] key pressed
say [I love Bunnies] for (2) secs

Like Warrior Cats? Try me! I’m a black link!click me! New Scratcher?Don’t forget me

 Call me Poppybunny, Poppy or Bunny. I am she/her. Warrior Cat fan. Fave character= Mapleshade :). Lord of the rings fan. Fave character= Galadriel. Fave animal: Bunny. Fave colour: Yellow. Fave online game outside of Scratch: not sure. Go to my profile and comment the word of the day to receive a *free* (Ts&Cs apply) logo design. Past Words of the day: None so far! Past winners of Logo word of the day: None so far!  Ts&Cs: Only one winner per day. Word of the day is valid until I edit it to a past word of the day. Today's word of the day is Pineapple. I will reply to the winning comment asking for info for your free logo design. You MUST give credit! Quote: Aim for the moon; even if you miss, you are still among the stars. - Author Unknown.

asqwde

Full username: {Asqwde}
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): {Studio thumbnail}
What you want it to be: {So it says “scratchers of the month”}
Bitmap or Vector?: {VecTor}
Comments (anything else?): it has scratch cat both side of the text

Last edited by asqwde (Jan. 1, 2018 23:22:12)

WintyMint

Full username: WintyMint
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Banner
What you want it to be: Something like the thumbnail for this but so that it fits at the top of the official forum without looking to big, messy, and out of place. (Please if you could have it so that it's already and url form and I can already easily put it at the top of my forum.) Thanks. <3
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector please.

Comments (anything else?): Nope!

★W i N T Y★

Writer ★ Dreamer ★ Sarcastic ★ Asian ★ Artist ★ Math

Just your average nerdy, geeky, mintastical artist.

PokemonScratch101

MistickMage wrote:
Reviews
Full username: {@MistickMage}
Link to what you want reviewed: {https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/188587245/}
Type of thing you want reviewed: {Art}
How harsh should we be?: {Extremely harsh}
Comments (anything else?): {Its a drawing of my chicken, Sara}

Review for Sara by @MistickMage
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Coding (N/A)
Graphics (90/100)
Bugs (N/A)
Grammar (100/100)
Creativity (100/100)

Comments: I love the creativity, and it's very interesting

Improvements that could be made: It looks too much like a blockshade, maybe smooth it out where the darker areas and lighter areas meet. It is hard to figure out where the skateboard is exactly, as the shadow is confusing me.
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Review by @PokemonScratch101 from Bigpuppy's Shop

Last edited by PokemonScratch101 (Jan. 2, 2018 00:07:58)

i haven't edited this in a long time - ps101, 2022

bigpuppy

PokemonScratch101 wrote:
-snip-
Okay, thanks. You might want to add an art review and/or music review template

Possibly, thanks for the idea!

asqwde wrote:
Full username: {Asqwde}
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): {Studio thumbnail}
What you want it to be: {So it says “scratchers of the month”}
Bitmap or Vector?: {VecTor}
Comments (anything else?): it has scratch cat both side of the text

Taken!

PokemonScratch101 wrote:
(snipped)
Review by @PokemonScratch101 from Bigpuppy's Shop

Lol- I should've changed that template to “The Doghouse” earlier; for anyone who doesn't know, this shop was originally called Bigpuppy's Everything Shop, then Bigpuppy's Shop, then The Doghouse.

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

asqwde

bigpuppy wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
bigpuppy wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
MistickMage wrote:
Reviews
Full username: {@MistickMage}
Link to what you want reviewed: {https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/188587245/}
Type of thing you want reviewed: {Art}
How harsh should we be?: {Extremely harsh}
Comments (anything else?): {Its a drawing of my chicken, Sara}
Taken
Remember to use the review template please, although I think you will xD
How should I review art?
Just put “N/A” in all the spaces that don't apply (for art it'd be coding and bugs usually).
asqwde wrote:
Username?asqwde
What things are you good at (art, scripts, etc.)?scripts
What is your favorite animal?dog
Example(s) of work?my pen platformer
Are you following this topic?yes
How many shops are you an employee at? 2 I think
Please give links to your examples of work

Ok!
My 100% pen project: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/193746022/

PokemonScratch101

Art
Full username: {ANSWER HERE}
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Sprite
What you want it to be: A perfect 5 pointed star, any color
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector
Comments (anything else?): Need it ASAP (today)

i haven't edited this in a long time - ps101, 2022

FollowCherryBlossom

PokemonScratch101 wrote:
Art
Full username: {ANSWER HERE}
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Sprite
What you want it to be: A perfect 5 pointed star, any color
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector
Comments (anything else?): Need it ASAP (today)

Taken

(((Finn the [Evil Kumquat Protector v]::#B22222)::#ffb6c1)::#9370DB)

poppybunny

poppybunny wrote:
Intro/Outro
Full username: poppybunny
Intro or Outro? (which one?): Intro
What do you want it to be like?: Cute realistic Cartoon bunny hops across screen. Camera zooms out so the bunny is in the u of poppybunny
Any music? If so, what music/type of music?: nope
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector
Comments (anything else?): don’t think so

when [bunny v] key pressed
say [I love Bunnies] for (2) secs

Like Warrior Cats? Try me! I’m a black link!click me! New Scratcher?Don’t forget me

 Call me Poppybunny, Poppy or Bunny. I am she/her. Warrior Cat fan. Fave character= Mapleshade :). Lord of the rings fan. Fave character= Galadriel. Fave animal: Bunny. Fave colour: Yellow. Fave online game outside of Scratch: not sure. Go to my profile and comment the word of the day to receive a *free* (Ts&Cs apply) logo design. Past Words of the day: None so far! Past winners of Logo word of the day: None so far!  Ts&Cs: Only one winner per day. Word of the day is valid until I edit it to a past word of the day. Today's word of the day is Pineapple. I will reply to the winning comment asking for info for your free logo design. You MUST give credit! Quote: Aim for the moon; even if you miss, you are still among the stars. - Author Unknown.

WintyMint

WintyMint wrote:
Full username: WintyMint
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Banner
What you want it to be: Something like the thumbnail for this but so that it fits at the top of the official forum without looking to big, messy, and out of place. (Please if you could have it so that it's already and url form and I can already easily put it at the top of my forum.) Thanks. <3
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector please.
Comments (anything else?): Nope!

★W i N T Y★

Writer ★ Dreamer ★ Sarcastic ★ Asian ★ Artist ★ Math

Just your average nerdy, geeky, mintastical artist.

FollowCherryBlossom

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
PokemonScratch101 wrote:
Art
Full username: {ANSWER HERE}
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Sprite
What you want it to be: A perfect 5 pointed star, any color
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector
Comments (anything else?): Need it ASAP (today)
Taken

Done https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/195873358/

(((Finn the [Evil Kumquat Protector v]::#B22222)::#ffb6c1)::#9370DB)

bigpuppy

poppybunny wrote:
poppybunny wrote:
Intro/Outro
Full username: poppybunny
Intro or Outro? (which one?): Intro
What do you want it to be like?: Cute realistic Cartoon bunny hops across screen. Camera zooms out so the bunny is in the u of poppybunny
Any music? If so, what music/type of music?: nope
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector
Comments (anything else?): don’t think so

WintyMint wrote:
WintyMint wrote:
Full username: WintyMint
Type of art (logo, sprite, etc.): Banner
What you want it to be: Something like the thumbnail for this but so that it fits at the top of the official forum without looking to big, messy, and out of place. (Please if you could have it so that it's already and url form and I can already easily put it at the top of my forum.) Thanks. <3
Bitmap or Vector?: Vector please.
Comments (anything else?): Nope!

Please don't repost your orders! Thanks

asqwde wrote:
My 100% pen project: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/193746022/

Hired you!

Last edited by bigpuppy (Jan. 2, 2018 16:37:32)

“Change happens by listening and then starting a dialogue with the people who are doing something you don't believe is right.” -Jane Goodall

biqpuppy

Studio thumbnail for @asqwde done: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/195798192/

Last edited by biqpuppy (Jan. 2, 2018 16:49:24)

Whoa, you found one of the few posts on my primary alternate account! Congratulations!

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