Prologue

There was seven cats on a battle patrol, one of them spoke in the eerie silence. “What are we going to do when we get the cat that kills others?” A Tom asked his leader that was dark-gray with darker three stripes. “I don't know.” She admitted to the blue-Tom with a deep voice. They went farther into the forest and found nothing that relegated to any dangers at all…wait was that a scent? It needs to be. “I think I smell her.” The cat of blue said barley louder than a whisper to his leader. “Good.” She said in a whisper too. The dark-gray she-cat raised her head to look around and saw something in the bushes to her front-right.
She squinted to see in between the bushes and saw dark-ginger fur instead of gray fur.
Confused she now transported herself over behind the cat and crouched behind it. She then pounced at the cat and made it go into the clearing were her clan-mates were. She heard the cat yowl in surprise which hurt her ears. “Whoa! We have a prisoner!” One of her clan-mates said. She ignored the meow and ordered her deputy and a warrior to hold the cat in place while asking questions. “What clan are you from, stranger?” The dark-gray she-cat asked the ginger tom. The tom answered hesitantly, “I-I don't come from any clan or…t-two-legs…” He answered very shakily to her.
“Alright then, if you are lying you'll die for that!” She warned him to stay cautious every second of the day.
All of a sudden a voice said, “he he he…you are pathetic Warriorlight…you'll die for letting in any cat that is not in your clan.” The voice said ever so annoyingly as ever, it could only belong to one cat, Rouk…

chapter one
But that was just the ending…this is how it all started…
A gingerly-white she-cat stalked through the undergrowth and enjoying the fresh air in the forest, the cat sat ever so peacefully she sniffed the air if there was anything to eat this time of day.
“Enjoying the fresh air, eh? Forepaw?” A voice of a cat spoke in the direction of the camp entrance, but not the entrance to the camp because they were in the forest. “Yes, it's beautiful out here.” She said very calmly and looking around very pleasantly.
“So, want to go hunting?” The cat spoke. “Sure, Spiritpelt.” Forepaw replied to the tom.
“Okay…where should we hunt then?” Spiritpelt asked the apprentice.
“Well lets go to New Fornė…” The apprentice said to the warrior very bravely but scared to go there. What are you playing at apprentice? Spiritpelt asked himself.
No answer. Why suggest the New Fornė? Beats me.
“Well then let's go.” He said to her. “Okay……wait. I smell something in the forest.” Mewed Forepaw very sudden. Forepaw lifted her head up and scanned the area for any thing that relegated to danger or prey. So they both went towards where the scent was getting stronger, and when they did, they found some cats in the middle of a clearing.
One of them were her sister; Tigerpaw, then others familiar to her, relieved she just wondered,
Should we join their hunting patrol? She asked herself wondering while looking at Spiritpelt for agreement since he was her mentor, she should ask. Then he noticed that she was looking at him and he just studied her eyes until he got the picture, “You want to go hunting with your sister?” He asked.
“Yes please.” Meowed Forepaw very excited to hunt with her sister Tigerpaw.

Chapter two
A cat wandered in the forest and looked around hungrily not just for food but to kill cats.
What should I do in this fox dunging place? I know scare all the prey so other cats are starving. Good idea Rouk. Rouk went jumping everywhere yowling, scratching, and hissing at the bushes and the trees then the ground. She heard a noise behind her and saw two squirrels running to her direction. Lucky I am the fastest. She ran and jumped at the two squirrels and did a death blow the throat of one of them then killing bite to the throat to the other one. She licked her lips after she ate them both then ran in a direction so random she actually heard voices up ahead.
She crouched panting in the effort to breathe. “…that's why we need to get more prey, it's getting scarcer and scarcer. We must do something before all of it is gone.”
Now was her chance to kill one of them. But take it slowly, remember the first try you blew it by having yourself almost killed. That's not going to happen again.
She picked up her leg and acted like she was injured on her leg. Then she acted like she was limping towards the cats, once they heard they saw Rouk limping towards them.
“Who are you?” A blue tom asked her and noticed she was limping (but not really).
“Rouk, daughter of…ouch my leg” she fake winced and plopped over to her side actively. The blue Tom gasped and tried to catch her when she fell. But he didn't catch her she just fell down.
Once one of them went close enough to her paw to examine it, she quickly bolted on to her paws and launched at a brown she-cat with a white flash on her chest and a white fore paw.
When she did the brown cat tried to back up, but she got to her before the cat could even move.
She dove her jaws at her neck and bit it very hard then scratched the cat five times before she went limp. The blue tom gasped and ran towards Rouk for revenge. She ducked when he took a swipe to the
head. She went under the tom and scratched his belly then bit into his tail, and bit down harder to throw the massive tom across the clearing.
She ran towards the tom and Launched at him, all of the sudden another cat's weight weighed on her. Then she activated her power to throw the cat off of her then she instantly got up and looked for the cat that had pinned her down, she spotted the cat not far from her. Rouk went walking calmly and then put a paw on the cats neck and glared at it then dove her jaws into the flesh of the cats neck, then it went limp.
She released her firm hold of the cat and went to the blue tom and she put the same paw on the cats neck and dove for the cats exposed neck… Just what I've been waiting for the blood of the sapphire cat…
“Ooff!” Something had pinned her to the ground so firmly that it hurt to struggle out of it, the claws of her attacker was digging into her skin and blood coursed through her fur and onto the ground and expanding five fox-lengths. Then she used the same thing for the other cat and threw the cat off of Rouk with her power, that she could do anything with. When the cat got thrown off, Rouk got up ignoring the stinging in her side and belly.
She saw a dark-gray she-cat with darker three stripes, then with blue eyes.
But when she threw the she-cat off the cat didn't fall on her side or anywhere.
She has powers too? Ugh, now it's going to be much more harder than I thought. I'll have to see inside her to see her power. She activated the see through part of her powers. Rouk saw that the she-cat could teleport while battling or at anytime.
She will not know what's coming because I can do that too! She ran towards her, but the cat then put up her paws and took a strike but Rouk then teleported behind her and lashed at her back, also clinging to her back.
“Warriorlight!” Someone had exclaimed. She turned her head towards the source of the voice and saw a little she-cat with a mouse dangling from her mouth, looking terrified. The young she-cat dropped the mouse leaping into the air and her eyes glowed like a bright blue and she then saw the young she-cat flying towards Rouk with hatred in her eyes, burning like a ice-cold flame creeping into her soul burning it to the core. She admired this young cat but one thing…she was going to attack her.
Then she teleported behind her and then above her, she let herself drop onto the young she-cat, the young cat looked up and rolled to her right and then once Rouk hit the ground the young cat jumped on her and began scratching her everywhere on her including some biting. She realized not to fight the young cat and to flee, but she wasn't done with the so-called…Warriorlight. she would get back for infinite revenge.

Chapter three

A full moon blazed above a group of cats heads and they all waited on a flat platform to go to the gathering, loss put a sadness on the clan that two warriors died that earlier morning. But Warriorlight suffered only a few scratches and some bites. She was okay thanks to the apprentice; Forepaw, Warriorlight would have died, she was only leader for five moons and she had lost only two lives, on her nine life leadership deal.
She couldn't risk anymore because she hadn't been the leader for that long…
Once the leader gave the signal to go across the tree-line for the gathering place called: The Ten Pines, they all got up for the walk there…once inside it is an overload of ten lush green trees, and bushes moving to make a clearing for the clan cats that first came to the gathering. Once the cats sat down into their clans spot for them, they all sat in silence for the remembered and lost. “Dreamclan is here!” One of our clanmates said. Everyone in our group looked to the left and saw an outline of cats coming towards them. “…and here comes Dogclan.” The voice said again, she guessed that it was Darkface the medicine cat apprentice.
She was right it was the medicine cat apprentice saying those words.
Then Forepaw saw the outlines of cats to the front of her and then she noticed something in a flicker of light…she squinted to see better but all she saw was…a cat fighting her leader, then fighting with her…
“I think I see Dragonclan…” Darkface said yet again…no wait that was Cloudspell.
Forepaw saw her claws glazing with light, but not light enough for everyone to see it, but for her to only see it.
She just sat there looking at her claws with intensity that they glowed a bit more brightly. Shocked, she stopped looking at them and she looked up to see more cats file into The Ten Pines, almost all of them were here but one clan wasn't here, Spellclan.
She got up and teleported to the top most of the trees and blinked to see the erea and then saw five to six cats to the left-front of her, then she zoomed in to see the leader of Spellclan, relieved she blinked again and teleported back to where she was sitting.
She looked around to make sure no one saw that…“Spellclan Is here.” She said a couple minutes later.

Is this a warriors fanfic?

Can I edit it for you?

Yes it is a Warriors fanfic, and I guess you can edit but don't change some things that I……I'll tell you something's I don't want changed.

Prologue

There were seven cats on a battle patrol. One of them spoke in the eerie silence.

“What are we going to do when we get the cat that kills others?” a tom asked the striped gray form of his leader.

“I don't know,” she admitted to the blue tom.

They went farther into the forest.

“I think I smell her,” the tom meowed, barely louder than a whisper.

“Good,” she replied. The dark-gray she-cat raised her head to look around and saw something in the bushes to her right.

She squinted, looking in between the bushes, and saw a ginger-furred shape. Confused, she transported herself behind the cat and crouched, ready to pounce. Her attack made the cat run into the clearing where her clanmates were in surprise, yowling. “Whoa! We have a prisoner!” one of her clanmates said. She ignored the meow and ordered her deputy and a warrior to hold the cat in place.

“What clan are you from, stranger?” the dark-gray she-cat asked the ginger tom.

“I-I don't come from any clan or…t-two-legs…” He answered shakily.

“If you are lying, you'll die for that!” She warned him.

Out of nowhere, a voice said, “He he he…you are pathetic, Warriorlight…you'll die before letting any cat into the clan,” the voice said. It could only belong to one cat. Rouk…

chapter one
A ginger-and-white she-cat stalked through the undergrowth, enjoying the fresh air in the forest. The cat sat peacefully as she sniffed the air, looking for a meal.

“Enjoying the fresh air, eh? Forepaw?” A voice of a cat spoke in the direction of the camp entrance, but not the entrance to the camp because they were in the forest.
—UNEDITED BELOW—
“Yes, it's beautiful out here.” She said very calmly and looking around very pleasantly.
“So, want to go hunting?” The cat spoke. “Sure, Spiritpelt.” Forepaw replied to the tom.
“Okay…where should we hunt then?” Spiritpelt asked the apprentice.
“Well lets go to New Fornė…” The apprentice said to the warrior very bravely but scared to go there. What are you playing at apprentice? Spiritpelt asked himself.
No answer. Why suggest the New Fornė? Beats me.
“Well then let's go.” He said to her. “Okay……wait. I smell something in the forest.” Mewed Forepaw very sudden. Forepaw lifted her head up and scanned the area for any thing that relegated to danger or prey. So they both went towards where the scent was getting stronger, and when they did, they found some cats in the middle of a clearing.
One of them were her sister; Tigerpaw, then others familiar to her, relieved she just wondered,
Should we join their hunting patrol? She asked herself wondering while looking at Spiritpelt for agreement since he was her mentor, she should ask. Then he noticed that she was looking at him and he just studied her eyes until he got the picture, “You want to go hunting with your sister?” He asked.
“Yes please.” Meowed Forepaw very excited to hunt with her sister Tigerpaw.

Chapter two
A cat wandered in the forest and looked around hungrily not just for food but to kill cats.
What should I do in this fox dunging place? I know scare all the prey so other cats are starving. Good idea Rouk. Rouk went jumping everywhere yowling, scratching, and hissing at the bushes and the trees then the ground. She heard a noise behind her and saw two squirrels running to her direction. Lucky I am the fastest. She ran and jumped at the two squirrels and did a death blow the throat of one of them then killing bite to the throat to the other one. She licked her lips after she ate them both then ran in a direction so random she actually heard voices up ahead.
She crouched panting in the effort to breathe. “…that's why we need to get more prey, it's getting scarcer and scarcer. We must do something before all of it is gone.”
Now was her chance to kill one of them. But take it slowly, remember the first try you blew it by having yourself almost killed. That's not going to happen again.
She picked up her leg and acted like she was injured on her leg. Then she acted like she was limping towards the cats, once they heard they saw Rouk limping towards them.
“Who are you?” A blue tom asked her and noticed she was limping (but not really).
“Rouk, daughter of…ouch my leg” she fake winced and plopped over to her side actively. The blue Tom gasped and tried to catch her when she fell. But he didn't catch her she just fell down.
Once one of them went close enough to her paw to examine it, she quickly bolted on to her paws and launched at a brown she-cat with a white flash on her chest and a white fore paw.
When she did the brown cat tried to back up, but she got to her before the cat could even move.
She dove her jaws at her neck and bit it very hard then scratched the cat five times before she went limp. The blue tom gasped and ran towards Rouk for revenge. She ducked when he took a swipe to the
head. She went under the tom and scratched his belly then bit into his tail, and bit down harder to throw the massive tom across the clearing.
She ran towards the tom and Launched at him, all of the sudden another cat's weight weighed on her. Then she activated her power to throw the cat off of her then she instantly got up and looked for the cat that had pinned her down, she spotted the cat not far from her. Rouk went walking calmly and then put a paw on the cats neck and glared at it then dove her jaws into the flesh of the cats neck, then it went limp.
She released her firm hold of the cat and went to the blue tom and she put the same paw on the cats neck and dove for the cats exposed neck… Just what I've been waiting for the blood of the sapphire cat…
“Ooff!” Something had pinned her to the ground so firmly that it hurt to struggle out of it, the claws of her attacker was digging into her skin and blood coursed through her fur and onto the ground and expanding five fox-lengths. Then she used the same thing for the other cat and threw the cat off of Rouk with her power, that she could do anything with. When the cat got thrown off, Rouk got up ignoring the stinging in her side and belly.
She saw a dark-gray she-cat with darker three stripes, then with blue eyes.
But when she threw the she-cat off the cat didn't fall on her side or anywhere.
She has powers too? Ugh, now it's going to be much more harder than I thought. I'll have to see inside her to see her power. She activated the see through part of her powers. Rouk saw that the she-cat could teleport while battling or at anytime.
She will not know what's coming because I can do that too! She ran towards her, but the cat then put up her paws and took a strike but Rouk then teleported behind her and lashed at her back, also clinging to her back.
“Warriorlight!” Someone had exclaimed. She turned her head towards the source of the voice and saw a little she-cat with a mouse dangling from her mouth, looking terrified. The young she-cat dropped the mouse leaping into the air and her eyes glowed like a bright blue and she then saw the young she-cat flying towards Rouk with hatred in her eyes, burning like a ice-cold flame creeping into her soul burning it to the core. She admired this young cat but one thing…she was going to attack her.
Then she teleported behind her and then above her, she let herself drop onto the young she-cat, the young cat looked up and rolled to her right and then once Rouk hit the ground the young cat jumped on her and began scratching her everywhere on her including some biting. She realized not to fight the young cat and to flee, but she wasn't done with the so-called…Warriorlight. she would get back for infinite revenge.

Chapter three

A full moon blazed above a group of cats heads and they all waited on a flat platform to go to the gathering, loss put a sadness on the clan that two warriors died that earlier morning. But Warriorlight suffered only a few scratches and some bites. She was okay thanks to the apprentice; Forepaw, Warriorlight would have died, she was only leader for five moons and she had lost only two lives, on her nine life leadership deal.
She couldn't risk anymore because she hadn't been the leader for that long…
Once the leader gave the signal to go across the tree-line for the gathering place called: The Ten Pines, they all got up for the walk there…once inside it is an overload of ten lush green trees, and bushes moving to make a clearing for the clan cats that first came to the gathering. Once the cats sat down into their clans spot for them, they all sat in silence for the remembered and lost. “Dreamclan is here!” One of our clanmates said. Everyone in our group looked to the left and saw an outline of cats coming towards them. “…and here comes Dogclan.” The voice said again, she guessed that it was Darkface the medicine cat apprentice.
She was right it was the medicine cat apprentice saying those words.
Then Forepaw saw the outlines of cats to the front of her and then she noticed something in a flicker of light…she squinted to see better but all she saw was…a cat fighting her leader, then fighting with her…
“I think I see Dragonclan…” Darkface said yet again…no wait that was Cloudspell.
Forepaw saw her claws glazing with light, but not light enough for everyone to see it, but for her to only see it.
She just sat there looking at her claws with intensity that they glowed a bit more brightly. Shocked, she stopped looking at them and she looked up to see more cats file into The Ten Pines, almost all of them were here but one clan wasn't here, Spellclan.
She got up and teleported to the top most of the trees and blinked to see the erea and then saw five to six cats to the left-front of her, then she zoomed in to see the leader of Spellclan, relieved she blinked again and teleported back to where she was sitting.
She looked around to make sure no one saw that…“Spellclan Is here.” She said a couple minutes later.

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Prologue

There were seven cats on a battle patrol. One of them spoke in the eerie silence.

“What are we going to do when we get the cat that kills others?” a tom asked the striped gray form of his leader.

“I don't know,” she admitted to the blue tom.

They went farther into the forest.

“I think I smell her,” the tom meowed, barely louder than a whisper.

“Good,” she replied. The dark-gray she-cat raised her head to look around and saw something in the bushes to her right.

She squinted, looking in between the bushes, and saw a ginger-furred shape. Confused, she transported herself behind the cat and crouched, ready to pounce. Her attack made the cat run into the clearing where her clanmates were in surprise, yowling. “Whoa! We have a prisoner!” one of her clanmates said. She ignored the meow and ordered her deputy and a warrior to hold the cat in place.

“What clan are you from, stranger?” the dark-gray she-cat asked the ginger tom.

“I-I don't come from any clan or…t-two-legs…” He answered shakily.

“If you are lying, you'll die for that!” She warned him.

Out of nowhere, a voice said, “He he he…you are pathetic, Warriorlight…you'll die before letting any cat into the clan,” the voice said. It could only belong to one cat. Rouk…

Chapter One
A ginger-and-white she-cat stalked through the undergrowth, enjoying the fresh air in the forest. The cat sat peacefully as she sniffed the air, looking for a meal.

“Enjoying the fresh air, eh, Forepaw?” A voice of a cat spoke from the direction of the camp entrance, but not the entrance to the camp because they were in the forest.
—UNEDITED BELOW—
“Yes, it's beautiful out here.” She said very calmly and looking around very pleasantly.
“So, want to go hunting?” The cat spoke. “Sure, Spiritpelt,” Forepaw replied to the tom.
“Okay…where should we hunt then?” Spiritpelt asked the apprentice.
“Well lets go to New Fornė…” The apprentice said to the warrior very bravely, although he was scared to go there. What are you playing at, apprentice? Spiritpelt asked himself.
No answer. Why suggest the New Fornė? Beats me.
“Well then let's go.” He said to her. “Okay……wait. I smell something in the forest,” mewed Forepaw very suddenly. Forepaw lifted her head up and scanned the area for any thing that relegated to danger or prey. They both went towards where the scent was getting stronger, and when they did, they found some cats in the middle of a clearing.
One of them were her sister; Tigerpaw, then others familiar to her, relieved she just wondered,
Should we join their hunting patrol? She asked herself that wondering while looking at Spiritpelt for agreement. Since he was her mentor, she should ask. Then he noticed that she was looking at him and he just studied her eyes until he got the picture, “You want to go hunting with your sister?” He asked.
“Yes please.” Meowed Forepaw very excited to hunt with her sister Tigerpaw.

UNEDITED BY FIREDRAKE969 BELOW
Chapter Two
A cat wandered in the forest and looked around hungrily not just for food but to kill cats.
What should I do in this fox dunging place? I know scare all the prey so other cats are starving. Good idea Rouk. Rouk went jumping everywhere yowling, scratching, and hissing at the bushes and the trees then the ground. She heard a noise behind her and saw two squirrels running to her direction. Lucky I am the fastest. She ran and jumped at the two squirrels and did a death blow the throat of one of them then killing bite to the throat to the other one. She licked her lips after she ate them both then ran in a direction so random she actually heard voices up ahead.
She crouched panting in the effort to breathe. “…that's why we need to get more prey, it's getting scarcer and scarcer. We must do something before all of it is gone.”
Now was her chance to kill one of them. But take it slowly, remember the first try you blew it by having yourself almost killed. That's not going to happen again.
She picked up her leg and acted like she was injured on her leg. Then she acted like she was limping towards the cats, once they heard they saw Rouk limping towards them.
“Who are you?” A blue tom asked her and noticed she was limping (but not really).
“Rouk, daughter of…ouch my leg” she fake winced and plopped over to her side actively. The blue Tom gasped and tried to catch her when she fell. But he didn't catch her she just fell down.
Once one of them went close enough to her paw to examine it, she quickly bolted on to her paws and launched at a brown she-cat with a white flash on her chest and a white fore paw.
When she did the brown cat tried to back up, but she got to her before the cat could even move.
She dove her jaws at her neck and bit it very hard then scratched the cat five times before she went limp. The blue tom gasped and ran towards Rouk for revenge. She ducked when he took a swipe to the
head. She went under the tom and scratched his belly then bit into his tail, and bit down harder to throw the massive tom across the clearing.
She ran towards the tom and Launched at him, all of the sudden another cat's weight weighed on her. Then she activated her power to throw the cat off of her then she instantly got up and looked for the cat that had pinned her down, she spotted the cat not far from her. Rouk went walking calmly and then put a paw on the cats neck and glared at it then dove her jaws into the flesh of the cats neck, then it went limp.
She released her firm hold of the cat and went to the blue tom and she put the same paw on the cats neck and dove for the cats exposed neck… Just what I've been waiting for the blood of the sapphire cat…
“Ooff!” Something had pinned her to the ground so firmly that it hurt to struggle out of it, the claws of her attacker was digging into her skin and blood coursed through her fur and onto the ground and expanding five fox-lengths. Then she used the same thing for the other cat and threw the cat off of Rouk with her power, that she could do anything with. When the cat got thrown off, Rouk got up ignoring the stinging in her side and belly.
She saw a dark-gray she-cat with darker three stripes, then with blue eyes.
But when she threw the she-cat off the cat didn't fall on her side or anywhere.
She has powers too? Ugh, now it's going to be much more harder than I thought. I'll have to see inside her to see her power. She activated the see through part of her powers. Rouk saw that the she-cat could teleport while battling or at anytime.
She will not know what's coming because I can do that too! She ran towards her, but the cat then put up her paws and took a strike but Rouk then teleported behind her and lashed at her back, also clinging to her back.
“Warriorlight!” Someone had exclaimed. She turned her head towards the source of the voice and saw a little she-cat with a mouse dangling from her mouth, looking terrified. The young she-cat dropped the mouse leaping into the air and her eyes glowed like a bright blue and she then saw the young she-cat flying towards Rouk with hatred in her eyes, burning like a ice-cold flame creeping into her soul burning it to the core. She admired this young cat but one thing…she was going to attack her.
Then she teleported behind her and then above her, she let herself drop onto the young she-cat, the young cat looked up and rolled to her right and then once Rouk hit the ground the young cat jumped on her and began scratching her everywhere on her including some biting. She realized not to fight the young cat and to flee, but she wasn't done with the so-called…Warriorlight. she would get back for infinite revenge.

Chapter three

A full moon blazed above a group of cats heads and they all waited on a flat platform to go to the gathering, loss put a sadness on the clan that two warriors died that earlier morning. But Warriorlight suffered only a few scratches and some bites. She was okay thanks to the apprentice; Forepaw, Warriorlight would have died, she was only leader for five moons and she had lost only two lives, on her nine life leadership deal.
She couldn't risk anymore because she hadn't been the leader for that long…
Once the leader gave the signal to go across the tree-line for the gathering place called: The Ten Pines, they all got up for the walk there…once inside it is an overload of ten lush green trees, and bushes moving to make a clearing for the clan cats that first came to the gathering. Once the cats sat down into their clans spot for them, they all sat in silence for the remembered and lost. “Dreamclan is here!” One of our clanmates said. Everyone in our group looked to the left and saw an outline of cats coming towards them. “…and here comes Dogclan.” The voice said again, she guessed that it was Darkface the medicine cat apprentice.
She was right it was the medicine cat apprentice saying those words.
Then Forepaw saw the outlines of cats to the front of her and then she noticed something in a flicker of light…she squinted to see better but all she saw was…a cat fighting her leader, then fighting with her…
“I think I see Dragonclan…” Darkface said yet again…no wait that was Cloudspell.
Forepaw saw her claws glazing with light, but not light enough for everyone to see it, but for her to only see it.
She just sat there looking at her claws with intensity that they glowed a bit more brightly. Shocked, she stopped looking at them and she looked up to see more cats file into The Ten Pines, almost all of them were here but one clan wasn't here, Spellclan.
She got up and teleported to the top most of the trees and blinked to see the erea and then saw five to six cats to the left-front of her, then she zoomed in to see the leader of Spellclan, relieved she blinked again and teleported back to where she was sitting.
She looked around to make sure no one saw that…“Spellclan Is here.” She said a couple minutes later.

More edits in red.

Hmm, I guess that'll work, thanks! You know, I'd love to have this be a book like the real warriors books, but…I don't know if Erin Hunter will take my idea for me to read it in their description imagery, stuff like that…You understand, right?

Well, to be published such as a real Warriors book…
1. It'd have to be longer. Most Warriors books are like 20-ish (I think) chapters.
2. Warriors is copyrighted. You'd have to pay/get royalties/request to use Erin Hunter's idea.

You can post it on fanfiction.net, though! I completely understand.

firedrake969_test wrote:

Most Warriors books are like 20-ish (I think) chapters.

Actually more like 30-ish.

Well, then I have a lot of things to attend to. Also I will pay the Erin Hunters for their ideas, and stuff. Also yes I'll make them longer.

More like 40-ish chapters, or 60-ish true stuff, I have read a 60 chapter book! No lie!

Scarsky13 wrote:

More like 40-ish chapters, or 60-ish true stuff, I have read a 60 chapter book! No lie!

Was it one of the Super Editions?

No it was this other book, I can't remember what it's called but I know it was like 60-ish chapters.
It was a long time ago.

Scarsky13 wrote:

Well, then I have a lot of things to attend to. Also I will pay the Erin Hunters for their ideas, and stuff. Also yes I'll make them longer.

Well, you actually have to get ahold of Erin Hunter, and can't just pay here via mail or something. She has to license it to you.

Hmmm, okay show me the place where Erin hunter goes on to see the question or any thing.

She doesn't go on anywhere AFAIK. It's copyright law: You need to get her permission. Email or use the site's (if any) contact me part (if any).

Hmmm, I don't know how to contact her crew, but I think I know a place on the web.

I do too! You go on the Warriors site and look there!

Hmmm… http://www.warriorcats.com/meet-erin-hunter but it doesn't give contact info, really. You can't just post on forums, I'm pretty sure there's quite a bit of legal stuff.

Well, there is a lot of stuff that the Erin Hunters actually answer your questions! Like when you go on the most frequently asked questions, they actually get answered from the Erin Hunters themselves!