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- BlauHourglass
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I also like Mirelle… or Leila. Something full of ‘l’s, haha.Let's do a vote for the twin names!GENER NEUTRAL NAMES?? I GOTCHU!!!-snip- -snip-
~Luca
~Alex
~Kellen/Kellyn
~Logan
~Jade
~Charlie
~Wren (I like best)
~Robbie/Robin
~Holy
~Remy/Remi
~Billie/Billy
~Nelly/Nellie
I also like King Angon. .For the twin, here are some names
~Beth
~Ryli
~Mirelle
~Jaden
~Mila
~Josephine
~Gina
~Brooke (I like best)
~Leila
~Phoebe
I vote Mirelle.
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
I like Mirelle or Brooke. Seems like Mirelle is winningI also like Mirelle… or Leila. Something full of ‘l’s, haha.Let's do a vote for the twin names!-snip--snip- -snip-
For the twin, here are some names
~Beth
~Ryli
~Mirelle
~Jaden
~Mila
~Josephine
~Gina
~Brooke (I like best)
~Leila
~Phoebe
I vote Mirelle.
- BlauHourglass
- Scratcher
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
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- Scratcher
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Guys, we NEED to get into the specifics now. Which realm do we start with?
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- prishaJuni
- Scratcher
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Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
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- prishaJuni
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
But maybe… since the mc's name is customizable, maybe it could be the twin's name.Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
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- BlauHourglass
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
Oh, I thought that it was for the twin.But maybe… since the mc's name is customizable, maybe it could be the twin's name.Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…
I suggest we start with the first realm: the normal/earth/foresty realm. Guys, we NEED to get into the specifics now. Which realm do we start with?
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I'm starting a vote for the king's name.
I vote for Angon.
I vote for Angon.
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- Malicondi
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currently, I'm coding a pathfinding algorithm that we can use for the game, for enemies.
sidenote: i like Mirelle and Angon as names
sidenote: i like Mirelle and Angon as names
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- BlauHourglass
- Scratcher
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
Angon's fine.
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⧗ Blau's Headspace ⧗- prishaJuni
- Scratcher
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Same here. I'm starting a vote for the king's name.
I vote for Angon.
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- prishaJuni
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Yeah, that's what I was thinking. Now, let's talk about the scenes.Oh, I thought that it was for the twin.But maybe… since the mc's name is customizable, maybe it could be the twin's name.Ok! The name is officially Mirelle. Mirelle is just.. simple, pretty, and elegant. And also kinda fits the “fantasy”. It's not generic either…I suggest we start with the first realm: the normal/earth/foresty realm. Guys, we NEED to get into the specifics now. Which realm do we start with?
Somebody mentioned “the crazy one” who lives in a cave. Maybe the player has to complete a quest before getting some info (what info, ideas pls) about his sister's whereabouts.
After the quest, the crazy one tells him to find the ________?
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- BlauHourglass
- Scratcher
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
Hmm.. Somebody mentioned “the crazy one” who lives in a cave. Maybe the player has to complete a quest before getting some info (what info, ideas pls) about his sister's whereabouts.
After the quest, the crazy one tells him to find the ________?
Maybe:
MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.
The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
。 ゚。⋆☾ If everyone were smart, no one would be. ☽ ⋆。 ゚☁︎。 ⋆。 ゚☾ But sleep's a part of the job, y'know. ☽ ⋆。 ゚。
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Co-owner of The Glow Shop
Co-owner of Ville de L'Art
♕ Classical SSC May '24 ♕
⸙ Epistolary SWC March '24 ⸙
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Co-owner of Ville de L'Art
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⸙ Epistolary SWC March '24 ⸙
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- Scratcher
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As a game developer, I'm going to put some thought into whats happening (since we have the main idea down). It can start in the forest area, going to the desert. They need to find a jar of sand in some cave (this links to the crazy man story, they think he can help with the sister and might have sand) and, once they have that, they need to find the village craftsman/blacksmith and make a key with a certain template found with the sand. Maybe they need to separately look for the mold/template.
- Piggygirl3838
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Hi! I like that idea. Can they unlock a key(?) to get to the next realm, or can they freely go from place to place? We need bosses, enemies, etc.-snip-
Boss: King Angon, something for each realm. A strange wolf creature stalking him to earn the highest power?
Enemies: IDK
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- prishaJuni
- Scratcher
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Yeah! That sounds great!Hmm.. Somebody mentioned “the crazy one” who lives in a cave. Maybe the player has to complete a quest before getting some info (what info, ideas pls) about his sister's whereabouts.
After the quest, the crazy one tells him to find the ________?
Maybe:
MC is looking for sister, and some village folk speak of a strange, crazy man who lives in the cave systems nearby, who constantly speaks “oracles”. MC decides to see the crazy man for himself but gets attacked for some strange “energy/essence” inside of him. After battle, the crazy one regains some level of coherency and tells yet another oracle to the MC, who then moves on.
The message can be some form of poetry with Latin and old English entailing some vague things about the twin. Not enough to tell the MC where the girl is, but just enough to let him know that she exists, had been spotted by the crazy guy, and is somewhere.
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- prishaJuni
- Scratcher
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
I like this idea! As a game developer, I'm going to put some thought into whats happening (since we have the main idea down). It can start in the forest area, going to the desert. They need to find a jar of sand in some cave (this links to the crazy man story, they think he can help with the sister and might have sand) and, once they have that, they need to find the village craftsman/blacksmith and make a key with a certain template found with the sand. Maybe they need to separately look for the mold/template.
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- Piggygirl3838
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The Fourth Realm | Story Writing Discussion
I like the idea! I think that once they find the crazy man, they should be able to continue, so not separately find the mold. I think we should continue through the three realms as fast as possible.I like this idea! As a game developer, I'm going to put some thought into whats happening (since we have the main idea down). It can start in the forest area, going to the desert. They need to find a jar of sand in some cave (this links to the crazy man story, they think he can help with the sister and might have sand) and, once they have that, they need to find the village craftsman/blacksmith and make a key with a certain template found with the sand. Maybe they need to separately look for the mold/template.
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