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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

hi there!

hello! my scratch alias is lia, and i am an asian-canadian girl who is participating in the july 2022 session of SWC.
Here is where I will deposit all of my writing for SWC.

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Stories
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AderynBe Home By 5:55

Dailies
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Weeklies
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Fan-Fiction WeeklyNewspaper WeeklyFantasy WeeklySusWC Weekly

In-Cabin Dailies
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Clue 4

Word Wars
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KitMVHPiper_Camps23BraveHeartSandy-Dunesdearbangtvn_

Random
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Stats but not really

Dawn's Tent
Word Count | 39,051/38,000

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Isn't it funny how day by day
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- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/1 Main Cabin Daily
274 words

So I've technically already introduced myself… but I'm going to do it again because I forgot some important things and plus this can now count for words.
Hello! I am a camper in the awesome cabin Adventure. I go by Lia as my Scratch name and I mostly post art related projects on my profile.
I'm not extremely active on forums but I prefer putting my writing in forums rather than projects.
I am an Asian-Canadian girl in EDT and I love reading, writing, drawing, and horseback riding. I have been a Christian for 4 years now and I hope to grow in my faith and be loving and understanding to those around me.
My favorite colors are blue, green, purple- in pastel shades- white, and black. (Black and gray for clothing) My clothes drawer is a blackhole and sometimes it's hard to find things because of that. But I like dressing like a ninja so-
However, I don't have black socks and that is my greatest clothing affliction. Well, I do have black socks but they have hot pink lines which I greatly dislike.
I completely forgot where I was going with this…
My favorite foods are sushi (which I'm having tonight because it's Canada Day), steak, potatoes, potato soup, mashed potatoes, baked potatoes, chicken macaroni soup, carrots, cucumbers, and pizza. If you couldn't tell; I really like potatoes.
My least favorite foods are tomatoes, eggplant, zucchini, spinach, durian, and mushrooms.
My favorite art mediums are markers with color pencils that make an awesome combo, digital, and pencils. My trusty old mechanical pencil.
Anyway, that is my 270+ word intro- Happy Canada Day!!!


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

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196 words

For the most part I keep art requests/commissions closed. But you may try and get one by simply reaching out to me via my socials. Just ask (nicely) for an art piece and send me a link to a reference for what you want me to draw. (i.e. contact me on my Scratch profile page, in Pinterest messages, or comment on one of my YouTube videos) There is a good chance that I might not be able to due to business in my schedule, art block, or because of the complexity of the design. All ARs that I do will be headshots and I prefer simplistic characters : )

THINGS TO KNOW
-I CAN ONLY DRAW HUMANS (specifically girls)
-I will only accept an art request if I feel like I will be able to complete it.
-ARs may take up to anywhere from less than a day to two weeks, so please be patient with my sloth like drawing abilities.
-ARs are ONLY for the person I specifically drew it for.
-Do NOT use my art without permission or credit. I cannot control what happens to my art so I must trust people to act honorably.


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Isn't it funny how day by day
nothing changes, but when you look back
everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

Aderyn
546 words for this blurb that I probably won't finish- but i might come back to it.

It'll stop bleeding… eventually.
My face contorted with pain as I shifted my shoulder to lean against the rock wall. Now that my weight was off my good arm, I could relax and maybe get some rest. That is, if my throbbing arm and ankle wound would permit me to.
It'll stop bleeding… eventually.
Right. Keep telling yourself that, Ryn. I'm positive that will work- absolutely positive. I was too exhausted to work up the energy to fight with myself. That says a lot, by the way. The rocky wall was biting into my shoulder, so I made a pathetic attempt to position myself so that my back was pressed up against the wall. Now the rock was cutting into my upper back, but I was too tired to care. Or at least too tired to do anything about it even if I did care.
The cave I had dragged myself into was eerily quiet. I had hidden myself some ways away from the entrance, far enough away to be invisible from the passersby (if any), but near enough to be able to have some dim light to see by. To the left of me the cave kept going- ‘For how long?’ I wasn't sure. Plus, I wasn't exactly peeing my pants in excitement to explore a pitch black cave with no light and a body exhausted from running and fighting and desperately in need of sleep and medical care.
I closed my eyes and swallowed the foreboding lump in my throat. The deep gash in my arm burned.
My head ached.
My entire body was sore.
Somehow I managed to sink into a dark, deep, dreamless sleep.


Take the pill

The voice came out of nowhere and startled me awake. For a moment I sat there dazed, my vision disoriented and my mind jumbled up in a thousand pieces. Then I remembered.
The pill.
Of course! How could I have forgotten- I had packed with me a pain relief pill. I slowly maneuvered my right arm to my left pocket. I groped around for a good ten seconds before my fingers touched the smooth pill.
I brought my stiff hand to my lips and stuck the pill in my mouth. It dissolved onto my tongue instantly and I swallowed the liquid medicine.

Taking the pill was a mistake.

Immediately the searing fire burning in my arm was doused and my other cuts and bruises ceased stinging and throbbing. I was still immobile, though. Unfortunately, with my pain gone, there was nothing to distract my thoughts. Memories and emotions crashed over me like a great wave and I could do nothing to stop it.

Had I been too hasty?
Should I have been more patient?
Probably.
I wasn't exactly known for my patient and understanding traits. I was a reckless, ambitious teen whose mood could and would swing at the blink of an eye. I was sensitive, despite the tough exterior I portrayed. I took pride in the fact that I was single. I also felt sad and a little bit annoyed that nobody wanted me. So I took great pains to make myself think that I was the most undesirable person and that no one would ever ask me out. I was strange that way.


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Isn't it funny how day by day
nothing changes, but when you look back
everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/2 Main Cabin Daily
I asked in the main cabin “Does she pick black or white?” and Zai (@Polarbear_17) very helpfully chose white :)
900 words

Time was ticking by.
It was so quiet in the room that Pam Jackson could literally hear the clock ticking. The steady rhythm of the noise was unnerving. Every second counted. Every tick she heard was a precious second slipping away. The tension in the room was unbearable. Sweat droplets trickled down Pam's temples and she swept them away with a quick jerk of her hand. Her fingers were a blur as they guided the needle through the soft, flowy fabrics. She quickly set aside the embroidered piece she had just finished stitching and reached for her thread box. Her hand paused over the neat rows of colorful string.

Black. White. Black or white?

She was stuck. She couldn't decide. The most important moment of her career and she couldn't choose between black and white.

White! It's a wedding gown for goodness' sake.
But black- it would be something unexpected and might add a whole new element to the dress-
Calm down Pam. You still have half an hour left.
The princess is a fairly minimalistic person, right? I don't know I don't know- why couldn't I have just stayed at home and baked gingerbread?


Pam wildly grabbed the black thread and shoved the string through her needle with lightning efficiency. Half an hour later Pam had a mannequin dressed in a full blown wedding gown. Pam rubbed her sweaty palms on her dress pants as the princess swished past her with her royal stylist. They thoroughly examined each gown- there were five in all- and took notes as they scrutinized the individual dresses.

Pam couldn't help but feel a little intimidated by her much older, more professional competitors. Like, even their hair seemed to be cut and styled for maximum efficiency. She inwardly winced when she saw that all of them had used black thread for the embroidery. Her hopes sank drastically. All the gowns had the same color pallette. The only thing that would distinguish them would be the embroidery patterns and the style of the dress.

“The princess will decide which one she likes best after she tries them on,” the royal stylist announced in an unbearably slow, superior tone. Her nose almost seemed connected to her hair somehow- it was raised so high up that Pam couldn't help but think it might have been tilted to that level by how tightly her hair was pulled back into a classic French twist.

The designers were escorted out to the waiting room, a large, spacious area filled with strategically placed couches and expensive looking trinkets lining the walls. Fragile pink and blue flowers in vases were neatly arranged on the marble coffee table.

Another half an hour ticked by. It felt like days. Pam sat uncomfortably in the corner of a large couch, feeling like she had been squeezed to the outer rim of the crowd, despite there being only four other people in the room, and each of them had their own couch. Pam just tuned out and flexed her wrists and fingers, which were beginning to cramp. Sewing almost nonstop for a week meant you were bound to get a hand cramp sooner or later.

When Pam tuned back in, the others were talking about their children getting into their sewing supplies, a conversation in which Pam could not relate to, even had she been invited to join in. The designers were interrupted when Fiona, the royal stylist, burst into the room with a grand entrance and announced in her nasally voice, “Her Royal Highness, the Princess Aurepia, has decided. Come with me.”
The other designers were subdued as the tension was once more lingering in the air.
A collapsible changing room was in the middle of the room.

“The princess is wearing the dress that she likes best. She felt this dress represented her the best and she felt like herself when she tried it on. The winning gown is-”

The changing room crumpled to the ground and there the princess stood in a stunning white gown.

For a second Pam couldn't see clearly. Then her gaze focused. It was white thread on the embroidery. She hadn't won. But hadn't everyone else used black thread? Suddenly Pam's gaze focused on a detail in the dress. It was her signature hem ‘one inch off the ground so then it doesn’t get dirty!'

“Pam Jackson, you have designed the gown that best suits Princess Aurepia- one that characterizes her character in a way that no designer has done until today. Congratulations.”
The princess twirled prettily, the flowy white fabric swishing against her ankles. Everyone clapped as Pam stepped forward.

“Thank you, Pam. I love this dress,” Princess Aurepia said in her soft, clear voice. “And I especially love the white thread you used to embroider the bodice. It looks like a special kind of lace.”

Pam became Princess Aurepia's go-to designer and she was even given an invite to the princess' royal wedding to King Orillius. Pam and the princess became close friends over the years and supported each other through thick and thin. The princess helped Pam through life dilemmas and Pam likewise lended a listening ear and a warm hug. They came up with answers for everything.

But to this day, Pam could never quite figure out how she had grabbed the white thread and had thought it was black for a good thirty-five minutes.


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Isn't it funny how day by day
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everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/3 Main Cabin Daily
354 words

I help out at my church a lot, especially in the children's ministry where I help watch the toddlers during the sermon. I don't think I'm technically old enough to be helping out in the toddler room but my ‘resumé’ boasts seven siblings and three younger siblings and so I'm naturally thought of as ‘good with kids.’ And I do enjoy playing with the kids because they're just so adorable and do the funniest things. Also I have a good stern face / poker face / face that looks intimidating.
Anyway, I volunteered last summer for the week-long Bible camp my church was hosting. My older sister and brother were helping out too.
(So technically this is a story about how I helped out my church instead of how I helped someone but eh- same difference.)
The first day we arrived fairly early as the volunteers/staff were supposed to get there a bit early so we could run over the schedule and set things up. I was supposed to be helping out with the younger kids along with my sister and a few other helpers, and my brother was volunteering to help with the older kids.
After our meeting dispersed, we all went to our rooms to set up. I was helping my sister put out mats for a game when I heard somebody call my name. Mrs. R, who was in charge of crafts, asked me to fill in for her daughter who was away at a last minute event. She knew I was into the artsy stuff so that's probably why she asked me. Her son, who is my brother's friend, was helping out too. So I kind of helped out everywhere- I helped with the crafts, I helped hand out waterbottles to the kids, and I ran around doing numerous other things. It was really fun and I felt really happy helping out, especially when the kids would say ‘Thank you’ in their high pitched voices.
Speaking of church, I have to get up at 6:30 tomorrow because I'm helping set up chairs in the overflow room for the early service.


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Isn't it funny how day by day
nothing changes, but when you look back
everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/4 Main Cabin Daily
690 total words

vagueness
292 words

Gillian Jones said, “Julie said you went somewhere yesterday. Where did you go?”
Garrett replied, “I brought my pet to a building. The people there were chatting about stuff. I interrupted them because of what I had come for. A lady gave me something and then another lady gave my pet some things. I waited for some time before a lady, not the lady from before before and not the lady from before, but a different lady, came up to me and told me my pet was finished with what it was doing. My pet was then escorted out of a room and it looked better. I carried my pet out to the back parking lot after I had given the lady from before some things. My pet sat in the thing at the back of the car, but in front of the very back of the car.”
Gillian looked confused, but she nodded and said, “So you brought King to the… vet and he looked healthier after the appointment?”

“You could say that,” Garrett replied vaguely.

“So he doesn't have ringworm like you thought he did?”

“Not that I know of.”

Gillian changed the subject. “What did you do today?”

“I went to a building.”

“Which building?”

“The one on the street.”

“What is its name?”

“Something that started with the word ‘the,’ I think,” Garrett replied.

Gillian inwardly sighed. She asked, “What did you buy?”

“Some stuff.”

“What kind of stuff?”

“Useful stuff.” Garrett answered, like it was the most obvious thing in the world. “You don't really think I would buy things that wouldn't work for what I wanted, right?”

“Ughh-” Gillian rolled her eyes and walked away.

“Now back to the stuff I was doing,” Garrett said happily.


ambiguity
398 words

I stared at my best friend, not sure if I had heard her right.

“So-” I furrowed my brows and barreled on- “you shot a girl.”
She nodded enthusiastically and my stomach twisted a little. “And then you accidently drowned her?”
She nodded again.

"How do you accidently drown someone?“

”You drop them in the water, silly.“

I was best friends with a murderer.

”So then- you hung her up on a clothesline?“

”Yeah, just so she could dry off.“

I decided that Kiera was in desperate need of some help.

”Kiera,“ I began carefully, not exactly sure how to converse with a cold blooded killer, ”that's not right. That's very, very wrong.“

”Why?“ she asked, looking slightly puzzled. ”She told me I could."

What the snickerdoodle cookie was going on?

“Okay. How about you tell me the story again from the very start.”

“Fine. I was walking down Main Street.” Kiera paused and sarcastically looked at me to make sure I was listening. I nodded her on. “And then I saw a girl. And she was a really pretty girl too. She had really long, silky black hair. And the prettiest greenish blue eyes. AND she was drinking some mango bubble tea with a pastel blue straw. Anyway, I asked her for permission to shoot her and she agreed. I took a couple shots. After I had gotten a few good shots, I took a sip of her bubble tea.”

“You drank her bubble tea?”

“She said I could! Anyway, after that I headed back home and I accidently dropped her in the stream under the bridge. So that's when I hung her up on the clothesline to dry.”
The look on my face must have been so tragically terrified that she finally cracked and laughed herself silly.

“You are the most gullible person I have ever known,” she choked out, shrieking with laughter. I, personally, didn't find it funny at all.

“So you were kidding this entire time? You didn't actually shoot, drown, and hang some girl you met on Main Street?”

“No, silly. I shot a picture of her and I was carrying the picture home when I dropped it in the steam and so I hung up the picture of her on the clothesline to dry.”

“Kiera, you are going to be the death of me.”

“I know. That's why I'm your best friend.”


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Isn't it funny how day by day
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everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/5 Main Cabin Daily
440 words
A soft answer turns away wrath, but a harsh word stirs up anger. Proverbs 15:1, ESV Bible

"Danielle Michelle Mitchell!“
Uh oh. The sound of Lola's angry voice was scary enough, but my full name added to that? I was in big trouble. The terrifying stomping sounds of footsteps coming up the stairs weren't helping my chances of survival.
A second later Lola burst through my painted bedroom door. Her features were contorted with rage as she shook a golden cylinder in front of my face. I couldn't exactly see what it was since it was so close to my face but I didn't really care just then because Lola's ferocious expression was one mad enough to melt the fur off a bear.

”Did you use my lipstick for your drawings?“ she demanded. She was so mad that the cylinder was shaking in her trembling hand.

”Maybe a little,“ I said bravely. She yanked the cap off of the cylinder and revealed a sad, smashed little pink stump.

”A little? A little?“ she shrieked. Her face was turning purple. I sensed right then that I probably could have calmed her down with some apologetic words but I rose to the bait and snapped,

”Well, you have like hundreds of other stupid beauty products- why do you have to blow up at me about one little lipstick?“
Obviously not the right thing to say because Lola's face grew ten times more purple- but I was too frustrated and fed up to care.

”This-“ Lola waved the lipstick above her head like a mad woman, ”was my favorite lipstick. And you knew that, you little-“

”Girls! What is going on?“ Mom's shocked, concerned face doused the growing argument immediately.

”Danielle took my lipstick without asking and she ruined it,“ Lola tattled, playing victim like she always did. Mom took one glance at the stubby lipstick and then looked at me.

”Danielle. You know you're not supposed to take other people's things without asking. I don't care if they have a million others; it is not right to take other people's possessions without permission. Understood?“
I nodded submissively. Mom turned to Lola, who now looked a little ashamed.

”Lola, you're the older sister here. You need to act like it. Younger siblings can be annoying, but you never take out your anger on them like that. You could have just politely reminded her not to take your stuff.“

”Yes, Mom,“ Lola replied meekly.

”And girls, remember. A soft answer turns away wrath, but a harsh word stirs up anger. I believe the latter just happened here, am I correct?“
Lola and I nodded.

”Next time I would like to hear a soft answer instead, okay?“

”Yes, Mom," we said together.


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Isn't it funny how day by day
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/6 Main Cabin Daily
690 words using the alternative prompt

I couldn't believe it.
I had been lied to my entire life.
I had been manipulated and used.
And by the person I was closest to. That really broke me.

“You-” I said, pointing a trembling finger at my sister, “you lied to me.” Tears, angry tears and miserable tears, ran down my face as I confronted the person who had been my captor for years.

“It was for the best!” Alvara pleaded, backing away discreetly. For a split second there was a look of fear in her eyes. As there should be. I felt an unusual rush of power as I saw that crack in her usual sly, crafty gaze. I drew myself up a little straighter.

“How so?” I demanded, deciding to be merciful and give her a chance to explain herself.

“We were orphans,” Alvara said hastily. “We had no relatives. We had nowhere to go, okay? We would have starved to death on the streets. But with your powers we earned a lot of money. It was a matter of life and death!” she squeaked as I stepped closer.

“What we were doing was wrong,” I said slowly. “We stole things. We were dishonest. Alvara, we killed people. And you told me it was okay. Killing people- is not okay!”
Alvara scuttled like a beetle into the corner as I raised my voice. Her back was pressed up against the wall and she was now visibly afraid.

“I could end you right now,” I told her. “ And you know that.”

Alvara closed her eyes.

“But I won't.”

Her eyes flew open.

“I won't kill you. But,” I commanded our communication device to fly into her lap, “I want you to call off all the deals you've made. End our partnership with Om Sharae. Tell him we want out.”

I stepped out of our tiny home as she made the calls. Dusty air whipped my tanned face and peppered my curly black hair with sand as I leaned against the dried mud wall.
My thoughts drifted to Pae, the older woman who had urged me to confront my sister. In a way, I was both annoyed and grateful for our brief but life-impacting interaction. She had snuck up on me as I had been doing my daily ‘shopping,’ which just meant me using my telekinesis powers to shoplift food from the busy market.
She had immediately guessed what I had been doing and had talked to me in a cool, dark alley. The lady seemed honest and trustworthy so in a matter of minutes I had innocently spilled all the doings that Alvara and I had done.

“Telekinesis is a gift, my dear. In the right hands it is a beautiful blessing. In the wrong hands it is a weapon that can be used to hurt people.” Pae had then told me that her son also had telekinesis and was a royal guard. In a few minutes she had completely turned me around and had shown me right and wrong.

On my way back home I had pieced together than Alvara had used me- stupid, gullible me. If-

Suddenly a rough hand grabbed my shoulder and wrenched it back, unpleasantly breaking me out of my thoughts. A helmet was jammed on to my head and I found I couldn't use my powers. All this happened in a matter of seconds and then I found myself with my hands tied behind my back and Om Sharae's meaty red face snarling in front of me.

Alvara!

Behind the gang leader's bulky back stood my snake sister.

“So you think you can just run away?” Om Sharae growled. “No, no. You're too valuable to just be sifting around like a worthless piece of sand.”

He turned to Alvara and handed her a huge stack of money. I was too mad and shocked to speak.
Om Sharae's men tossed me into the back of a cart and I heard Alvara shout after us.

“You're too innocent, Kendra. One of these days it's going to get you killed.”

The only response I could make was to grit my teeth and plot revenge.


✦ lia ✦ christian ✦ ‘writer’ ✦ ‘artist’ ✦ infj-t

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Isn't it funny how day by day
nothing changes, but when you look back
everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/7 Word Wars
140 words - 2 min timer - prompt - vs KitVMH - won

The box cost six thousand dollars? Marie couldn't believe it. So she decided to buy it. After all, a box worth six grand was bound to have valuable goods inside. Marie bought the box and carted it home in her blue minivan. She pried open the wooden plank box with a thing and the lid opened easily. Inside was a bunch of envelopes and paper- worthless, she decided. So she chucked the box outside into a green garbage can. Outside there was a person and the person saw the box being chucked out Marie's second story window and decided to check it out. She opened the box and saw all the envelopes. She opened one and found three thousand dollars in cash. The other envelopes contained a total of two million dollars. The stranger could not believe

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✦ lia ✦ christian ✦ ‘writer’ ✦ ‘artist’ ✦ infj-t

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Isn't it funny how day by day
nothing changes, but when you look back
everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/8 Main Cabin Daily
Lewis Capaldi - Before You Go

Was never the right time, whenever you called
Went little, by little, by little until there was nothing at all
Our every moment, I start to replay
But all I can think about is seeing that look on your face

It wasn't the right time, every time you called
I walked, faster and faster, until there was nothing left
Our every minute I begin to repeat
But I can only imagine seeing that look on your face


450 words

The world was spinning before my eyes. It was only the nutrients that the Otherworlds were pumping into me that kept me on my feet. It was only a little while longer. Only a few minutes until my powers were drained from my body and I could finally sleep. A long, long sleep.

I tried to direct my exhausted mind to happy thoughts- happy thoughts- think happy thoughts.

All I could think of was Cayden. A tear might have trickled down my stony, set face had I not been almost completely drained of my bodily fluids.

All those times he called. The leader Otherworld allowed me to have access to calls to prolong the realization of the absence. But calls could only last for a few minutes and there were always guards to watch my every move.
I had to lie to him so many times.

“Where are you?” he would ask.
“You can't ask me that, Cayden. Top secret mission, remember?” I would always almost start sobbing and shrieking for help. No. That would put Cayden in danger, Jasmine. Don't be so selfish.
I'd always have to hang up, no matter how abruptly.

The treadmill-like mechanism I was walking on increased the speed. I had to walk faster to keep up. I glanced at the hologram bar that showed how much energy they had sucked from me. Almost done. Almost.

I went back to my happy thoughts, happy thoughts. I started replaying every memory I had of me and Cayden.

Eating ice cream in the park's big oak tree, spying on passersby.
Eating sushi at the local sushi place every year for our combined birthdays.
Laughing over who could stuff the most marshmallows in their mouth.
A lot of my best memories with him involved eating.
I thought about every time he called me the best big sister in the world.
And every time he always, without fail, gave me a good night hug.
Every time he came on my runs with me, insisting that he could keep up.
And every time I always ended up piggy- backing him home.

Those memories would never relive themselves again. And my last memory of him- his absolutely crushed face when I told him I had to leave.

The Otherworlds had discovered my telepathic powers and had held Cayden as a threat over my head. I had promised to go peacefully in order for my brother to live.

His big blue eyes, swollen red from crying, watching me helplessly as I walked away from him. His face stayed in my mind's eye until the hologram bar reached one hundred percent and I collapsed into blackness.

You can sleep now, Jasmine.

He's safe.


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Isn't it funny how day by day
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everything is different.

- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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500+ posts

lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/9 Cabin Wars Stuff

first chunk - non-fi war
1105 words
Character Sheet

Name: Princess Amira
Full name: Amira Kendra Clarice (two middle names)
Age: 18 years
Physical appearance: She has long, curly (medium dark) brown hair and tanned olive skin. She has large eyes and she has mixed features due to her heritage, which on Earth would be the equivalent of Arabic, African, German, and Italian heritage. She has thick eyebrows and long eyelashes. Her height is five foot ten and a quarter inch (she gets very defensive about the quarter when it is neglected when talking about her height) She has a naturally slim, athletic frame.
Special/Unique attributes: she has heterochromia so her left eye is a hazelish green and her right eye is grayish blue. She has telekinesis powers.
Personality: Headstrong, stubborn, likes to get her own way but is fairly reasonable. She is independent but secretly cares a lot about what other people think about her. She is an ambivert who is extroverted with the people she is close to but introverted at first impressions. She is very empathetic and understanding. She loves helping people, despite her slight social anxiety. She loves animals, especially birds, dogs, cats, and horses.
Family:
Father- name not mentioned, hence referred to as HRH (his royal highness), HM (his majesty), or Father.
Mother - name not mentioned, hence referred to as HRH (her royal highness), HM (her majesty), or Mother.
Sister- Luna (younger sister), straight blonde hair and gray eyes, 14 years old.
Brother- Fletcher (older brother), curly black hair and green eyes, 21 years old.


Aspen's silky, chestnut red mane covered my face. My head was buried in the thick mane and I took a deep breath. I could smell the grass, the cool air, and the rich smell of horse. I could feel Aspen's warm neck, her mane as it brushed past my cheeks, and the large Ilvienia sun beating down on me and warming my back. I could hear the wind as it whistled softly, Aspen's quiet breathing, and-

“Princess, if you don't get your head out of the clouds, Aspen will run away and you'll go splat on the ground because you are not prepared.”

And Camden.

Or rather, Camden and Gavin. But Gavin doesn't make much noise so I didn't mind him. It did get a little creepy, though, how silent he was. I tend to forget him a lot and when he does speak it startles me. Anyway, Camden and Gavin were my royal guards and they followed me pretty much everywhere. As I said before, Gavin was the silent one. Camden was pretty much just like another big brother, always telling me what not to do and giving me harmless threats.

I rolled my eyes, making sure Camden couldn't see. I jerked my head out of Aspen's mane and the cool breeze struck my tanned face and made my dark brown hair billow back in curly waves. Again I was struck by the sheer beauty of the view expanding before me. The bright, cloudless azure sky spread above, behind, ahead, east, and west. The sun glowed benevolently on acres of waving green grass. The land ahead beckoned, boasting its flat stretches of short grass and dreamily faint blue hills in the distance.

“Princess Amira!” Camden's voice was sharper now and had taken on the tone that meant he would not tolerate any sort of protest on my part. I sighed. I had almost, almost been able to block him out of the beautiful picture I had been painting in my mind. I grumbled inwardly as I turned Aspen homeward. I nudged her forward and it almost felt like I was rocking in a boat in the calm Etheurius River; Aspen's legs were so long that she had the most beautiful, fluid strides.

As I passed him, I glanced at Camden on his large black horse and met his steely blue eyes with a glint in my eyes.

“Race you back,” I said, and Aspen took off with no further urging than a squeeze from my legs.

I heard Camden shouting after me, but Aspen was going so fast that the wind rushing past my ears blew his words into nothing more than a faint sound in the vast, open land. My skirts streamed behind me, bright blue fabric, as Aspen whizzed through a field of beautiful lilac colored flowers with large petals.
Mother might appreciate them, I decided, so I picked a neat little bundle with a mere thought.

Camden and Gavin were now totally out of sight, so I drew Aspen up into an easy canter as we approached home. Aspen was barely even winded from the long run and her glistening chestnut coat was as silky and perfect as ever. I tilted forward slightly as Aspen cantered up a hill. A large cottage loomed into view. It was my family's summer vacation home, nestled in the mountains. Beyond the house was the stable, and rolling acres dotted with horses were fenced in by white stone walls. The air up here was fresh and cool and below stretched a glorious mountain view. In the distance I could see the glistening royal city of Isl'noris.

The large walls surrounding and protecting the royal city of Isl'noris were towering and intimidating, but I knew that inside those walls were the sweetest, kindest people and the friendliest looking buildings. Of course, everything couldn't be perfect. If Isl'noris had been perfectly safe then I wouldn't have to have two body guards watching my every move. There were still some sketchy people lurking about. But other than that, Isl'noris was a fine and prosperous city with kind rulers who happened to be my parents.

Aspen's hooves clattered on the cobblestones as she trotted under the arch into the stable's courtyard. Most of the horses were grazing outside, but Taz, an old bay gelding, nickered from his stall. Immediately a swarm of grooms materialized as if from thin air.
“I CAN DISMOUNT ON MY OWN,” I said loudly as ten pairs of hands reached up to help me down. I slipped down quick as a wink and took Aspen to her stall to untack, despite the many protests and offers.

“Yuh'd'a think that by naoh they ‘ud catch on t’ the ‘int that d’ya prefer t' take care of yor owns horse by yorself, eh?” The familiar, deep drawl made me glance up as I slid the saddle off of Aspen's back.
I smiled as I saw the familiar blue eyes.
“Yuggink.”
The burly blonde man was leaning against the stall door and munching on a cookie. He looked tough but he was really a marshmallow inside.


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

Weekly 1
WARNING: fanfiction is not my forté so um prepare yourself for some cringey writing
3150 total words


Part 1: Character Consistency
764 words total
Character Sheet
138 words

I chose Astrid Hofferson from How to Train Your Dragon because I literally cannot think of any other characters.

Series continuing or ended: ended I believe

Strengths: independent, leader traits, competitive, smart, strategic, combat skills, axes, and she has a dragon with a spiky tail.
Weaknesses: she's human, doesn't think out of the box that much, will always go back to save her friends (weakness because that makes her predictable), and she's got a dragon with a spiky tail who can get caught by dragon hunters.

Relationships:
Romantic interest - Hiccup
Friends - Heather, Tuffnut, Ruffnut, Fishlegs, Snotlout, Dagur, Mala, Atali, etc.
Family - not disclosed

Tendencies:
- Tends to be closed off and doesn't talk about her feelings that much
- Tends to get frustrated a lot when things don't happen like she wants them to
- insists she's fine when she isn't


Scenario: your character is stuck in a burning building with their friends and not everyone can escape
Time period: around the time frame of Dragons: Race to the Edge

626 words

The dragon riders were spending quality time with their dragons in the Edge's stable. That is, all except Fishlegs. He and Meatlug were in his rock garden.

Astrid was feeding Stormfly chicken, the Nadder's favorite type of meat, when suddenly the stables jolted. Astrid lost her footing and blacked out.

When she came to, she was lying on the ground, which was abnormally warm. Her eyes were burning and smoke clogged her nostrils and mouth. Hiccup was shaking her awake and Toothless was worriedly looking over his shoulder.

“What happened?” Astrid asked groggily, rubbing her head and not quite fully in control of her senses. Suddenly her half open eyes snapped awake. The stable was on fire!
Huge flames licked the wooden posts and swallowed them up with a roar. Smouldering black beams barred the entrance. They were trapped.

“Krogan and his Flyers,” Hiccup told her, his sooty face grim. He helped her up. “Fishlegs must have seen them attack. He'll go for help.”

Astrid could hear the Singetails shrieking from above the burning stable. Another fireball shook the stable.

“Where's Stormfly?” she asked, realizing her dragon was nowhere in sight.

“She, Hookfang, and Barf and Belch escaped as soon as the first blast hit,” Hiccup answered. “They've probably been caught by Krogan.” He turned to look at his faithful black Night Fury. “Toothless is our only way out of here.”

Ruff, Tuff, and Snotlout stumbled through the thick smoke, coughing.

“Okay, guys, we need to get on Toothless and get out of here before we burn up,” Hiccup said, assuming the leader position.

“Uh, can he carry all of us?” Tuffnut asked, looking dubiously at the average sized dragon.

“He's carried us before,” Hiccup pointed out.

“But he didn't carry five people that time,” Astrid interjected. “Not to mention he was walking on the ground, not flying out of a burning stable with a herd of Flyers waiting to blast him out of the sky. You've got to think clearly, Hiccup. Toothless can't carry all of us. We can't leave here until the Flyers are gone, or else we'll just get captured by them. And Toothless might get injured. Do you want that?”

“No,” Hiccup admitted. “But I don't want him or us to burn up, which will happen if we don't move soon. I'm just trying to think of the best way to get us out of here, okay?”

“I know you are,” Astrid said, her eyes tearing up from the smoke. “But you have no chance of getting out of here if we all have to escape.” She stepped back.

“What? Astrid, we're- I'm not leaving you behind,” Hiccup said, grabbing her arm.

“It's the only way,” Astrid said.

“Okay fine!” Hiccup exclaimed. “If you're staying then I'm staying. Ruff, Tuff, and Snotlout, you guys take Toothless and fly out of here.”

“We can't leave without you guys,” Ruff protested. “If you stay, we all stay.”

“Listen!” Astrid shouted. “I think some of the Flyers have gone away. We might be able to get past the remaining ones.”

“So you're coming now?” Hiccup asked.

“Get on,” Astrid told him. They all piled on top of Toothless. Astrid discreetly made sure she got the back position.

“Toothless, plasma blast,” Hiccup said, pointing to the roof. Toothless hit it so that the roof would fall in front of them rather than on top. The flames were getting hotter and higher and the smoke rushed up to the hole. The sudden burst of oxygen ignited the fire and Toothless jumped towards the hole to avoid the flames. He jumped a little heavily because, as Astrid knew, his cargo was too heavy for him. And that's why she jumped off his back and into the roaring flames.


Part 2: Character Voice
1025 total words

101 words
Elsa has a cold exterior to strangers and inside she is afraid she might say the wrong thing. She feels like an outsider, so she doesn't enjoy interacting with people that much. She doesn't talk quite as much as her younger sister but she has a serious, serene tone most of the time, especially when in regard to her royal duties. As the older sister, she was serious and reserved even when she and Anna were young. She did have a playful side though. She is the older sister who matured from her years of isolation into a quiet, serious person.

105 words
Anna is the polar opposite of her introverted older sister Elsa. She is extroverted and bubbly, despite the fact that she was locked out from the rest of society with no other girls her age to play with. She is very excitable, especially when it comes to social interaction, and tends to stress over those occasions because she isn't really sure how to act in those situations. She is mostly fun and cheerful and optimistic, but she does have a serious side. She is not all that different from her younger self and the product of her maturity is less drastic than that of Elsa's.


Scene from Elsa's Perspective
324 words

Mama and Papa had informed Anna and I that they were hosting a party and Anna was very excited. I wasn't exactly thrilled, but Anna's enthusiasm rubbed off on me. Also, we got to stay up late. Papa warned me about fifty times before the guests arrived to not use my powers in public. I agreed, but I wasn't exactly sure why he didn't want the guests to know I had ice powers. After all, I used them when I played with Anna all the time. We were five and eight at the time and the incident with my powers hadn't happened yet.
The night of the party, Mama dressed us up in pretty gowns- Anna had a floral green one and I had an icy blue one. While we were waiting upstairs in our room, we had a practice tea party. Anna accidently spilled some of her ‘tea’ on the dress and there was a water stain on the front. I told her it would dry off.
When Anna and I entered the ballroom with our parents, the golden lights from the chandeliers were blinding. Below the balcony on which we were standing stood a crowd of ladies in brightly colored ball gowns and men in fancy black suits.
Papa welcomed everyone and then said some other things that I can't remember. Then we went down the stairs and everybody started dancing.
It was absolutely chaotic from what I could see, which wasn't a lot given how small I was at the time. It was awful. There were so many swirling skirts and clicky black shoes that I was afraid Anna, who looked like she was having the time of her life, might be trampled by high heels and dress shoes. I don't remember much after that. Oh yes, and after a few minutes of dodging around skirts, Anna and I found the refreshments table and stayed there for most of the night.


Scene from Anna's Perspective
495 words

Elsa and I had been playing with our dolls, Guinevere and Anastasia, when Mama and Papa called us. I thought we had done something really, really bad and we were in so much trouble, but it turned out that our parents were just hosting a ball.
I was so excited because I hadn't had much social interaction- even before the whole Elsa incident. Elsa and I had private tutors and we could only go out to play in the castle yard. We were each other's only friends.
Anyway, I was just really excited about seeing other people, even if they were just boring old adults dancing around in balloons and suits. Elsa didn't seem quite as excited as I was. But I wasn't surprised because she was usually like that. She wasn't as socially needy as I was. She could just read a book for hours by herself. Boorrring. I was glad she found time in her empty schedule to play with me sometimes.
Anyway, Mama put us in some really really pretty gowns- I got a poofy sleeved green one with a skirt that looked like an upside down cupcake wrapper when I twirled. Elsa got a blue one that looked more grown-up than mine but I still think my dress was prettier. Don't tell her that, by the way.
I suggested having a tea party in order to hype us up for the real thing, so I got out my doll's tea set and we crooked our pinkies and daintily sipped imaginary tea. Then I remarked that my tea was too hot, so Elsa plopped an ice cube in my cup. It bounced right out and made a water stain on the front of my dress. I was horrified for a second because my dress was ruined, but Elsa told me it would dry off, so I didn't worry any more. Then we just rolled around on the ground laughing about how funnily the ice cube had slipped out of my cup.
Then Papa called us and we put away the tea set. We walked with our parents to the ballroom, on to the balcony looking over the ball room. The room was glistening with golden twinkles and everything was bright and so pretty. Papa said some boring, formal things and then everyone started dancing when the musicians began playing. There were so many colorful, poofy dresses that I felt a wild desire to just jump on one and see if it would launch me through the roof, but I gathered up my self-restraint and didn't. Elsa and I hopped around like bunnies and it was so much fun. We ran around all the big skirts as a game. And then I saw the refreshments table absolutely loaded with cakes and drinks and all sorts of chocolate deserts and how could I resist that?
Elsa and I stuffed ourselves silly with a ridiculous amount of goodies. I don't think I slept that night.


Part 3: Fanfic Tropes
755 words

I used the tropes Original Character, Modern AU, and Diary Fiction
(I included a character of my own making, Elsa and Anna are in a different universe, this fanfic is written in spoken digital diary format)
Words in between the *s means it's a sound being picked up on the recorder.


“*click* Dear Diary, enter date July 6th, nine thirteen PM.

Ehm.
Hi, it is Annaliese- again. I mean who else would it be? *snort laugh* So Mom and I moved into our new house last week. I haven't really logged in an entry for a while and the move is the reason why. Mom and I are mostly settled in and all our stuff came in the moving vans pretty quickly.
Arendelle Street is really nice from what I can see so far. It's really aesthetic to look at- it's like some person decided to make a color palette for it and since then, all other buildings have been painted to match the rest of the neighborhood. The houses are all white and different shades of pastel blue. A lot of houses have flower beds and window boxes with purple and pink flowers too. Each house has one tree in their front yard. They're a special type of tree with blue-y green leaves and look really pretty.
The neighborhood is really nice too. Our next door neighbors are especially nice. They're the Oldenburgs; Elsa and Anna Oldenburg. They are two sisters, around my age, and they live by themselves. Elsa's the older one- she's a lot quieter and when she does speak, she is very serious. She's got thick, platinum blonde hair that always seems to be in a side braid whenever I see her. It's such an interesting way how her hair swoops on the top of her head- and there's this little floop of hair that just deliciously floops over her forehead. I should ask her how she gets her hair to lie like that and how her hair is that light of a color. Maybe she dyes it. Anyway, she has really pale skin and a faint sprinkling of freckles over her cheeks and tiny button nose. She has big blue eyes and is tall and slim. Anna is a lot more tanned than Elsa and has way more freckles but the same button nose. She has huge turquoise blue eyes and bright ginger hair that just brushes over top her eyes. She has the same thin frame as Elsa but she is a little bit shorter. She's really funny and bubbly.
I don't even know why I just described them in like full detail *laughs* but yeah. They're really nice and friendly. Okay, I'm going to go take a shower and get ready for bed. Good night! *click*”

“*click* Dear Diary, enter date July 13, nine thirty PM.
Heyyyyyy-
It's Annaliese again. It's been a week. I hung out with the Oldenburgs a lot in the past seven days. They're super fun to hang out with. Also, I subtly brought up the subject of Elsa's hair and she told me her hair is naturally that color. She braided my hair so it looks like hers but mine doesn't floop the exact same way. It still looked pretty, despite my hair being the poopy brown color it is.
My nickname is now Lee-zah spelled L-i-e-s-a so as not to confuse me with Anna. Even if my nickname was Anna it's pronounced differently from Anna's since hers has the ‘on’ sound and mine has the ‘an’ sound. But it is less confusing this way, I guess.
My bedtimes have been getting later and later because I'm almost always over at the Oldenburgs' house. Mom doesn't mind because she's working all day anyway and because she knows how lonely I've been since Dad died and she had to get a full time job in order to support us. I'm going to go brush my teeth now. Bye! *click*”

“*click* Dear Diary, enter date July twentieth, nine forty PM.
I've got some really sad news for you today, diary. Mr. and Mrs. Oldenburg died in a car crash yesterday. Elsa and Anna are staying over at our place until things get sorted out. I feel really sad just hearing them cry. Seeing people cry makes me want to cry too. I feel like we've grown so close over the past month, so I am hurting too- but I'm not actually family so I feel like I shouldn't be around when they talk about it. Elsa and Anna are only seventeen and fourteen, so I don't know what's going to happen to them. Being fifteen and a half, I've felt like the middle sister and I know Mom loves having them around. Maybe she can adopt them. Well, I've got to go now. Good night. *click*”


Part 4: SWC Fan-Fiction
606 words

Who knows how many years ago…

“This is my mango!” shrieked Fairy Tales, swiping away the mango that Real Fi had been lifting to her mouth. “I picked it first,” she said, carefully looking over the yellowy orange skin to make sure it was still intact. Suddenly the mango was whisked away by a mysterious force. Fairy Tales, the oldest sibling of four, looked up in shock. Her face was contorted with pure rage as she made eye contact with the mango thief. Real Fi's dark green eyes flashed dangerously. Before an inevitable fight broke out, the two younger siblings, Adventure and Horror, stepped onto the scene.

“What's going on?” asked Adventure, her blue eyes worried.

"Re stole my mango. After I climbed all the way up there-“ Fairy Tales jabbed the air with her index finger and pointed to the highest branch of the mango tree-”to get it. And she just took it right out from under my nose because she knows the best mangoes are at the top. Her arms are too short to-“

”Hey!“ Real Fi interjected angrily. ”My arms are not short.“

Fairy Tales just sniffed and rolled her dark ruby eyes.

”Just chill, Fai, Re,“ Horror, the youngest sibling, turned to each of her older sisters in turn. ”It's just a mango.“

The three older sisters stared in absolute shock. Such treasonous words spoken about mango kind had never before been heard. Horror was blissfully ignorant as she blundered on, saying, ”Fai, you can just pick another mango, right? Or, you guys can split it in half and share it. Sharing is caring. Or, Addie can help Re get her own mango since her arms are long- like an octopus.“ Horror gratefully ended this little speech and smiled up at her sisters.

There was silence for a full minute.

”I can't take this anymore,“ blurted Fairy Tales, breaking the silence. ”Give me back my mango, Re!“ Fairy Tales lunged (gracefully) at her offending sibling and a huge fight broke loose. The younger sisters stood dumbfounded for a second as they watched their sisters fight.

”Come on, Horror, we've got to break them up,“ Adventure told her younger sibling. The two, with great effort, managed to tear apart their fuming sisters.

”Enough!“ shouted Fairy Tales. ”We clearly cannot live under the same roof if we can't resolve this. And I certainly can't live with a mango stealer eating at the same table as me.“ She glared witheringly at Real Fi.

”Fai, come on. How do you know that was your mango? This could all just be a huge misunderstanding,“ Adventure said.

”I know it is my mango because I know,“ Fairy Tales said ominously. Adventure gritted her teeth as she had failed to dissolve the argument. She turned to Horror.

”This is all your fault,“ she muttered.

”What do you mean- 'all my fault?'“ Horror drew back.

”Your goody two shoes pep talk just made them angrier. And you've disgraced our mango honor.“

”Addie, Horror- Re and I have decided that you girls will have to choose between us,“ Fairy Tales said.

”Okay,“ Horror said. She walked over to her big sister's side. ”I don't like Addie anymore anyways. She said I disgraced our mango honor or something like that.“

”You did!“ Adventure exploded. ”And you said my arms are as long as an octopus'. And they're not, sadly. Because if they were, I'd be able to reach out and slap that smug little grin off your face." She spun on her heel and walked to Real Fi's side.

Thus began the rivalry between siblings, and the birth of Schism City.


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- C. S. Lewis


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yishujia
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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

In-Cabin Writing
286 words
Writing Prompt: Find an old short piece of your writing. If your writing is all on the longer side, pick a paragraph or two from a longer piece. It doesn't matter exactly how old it is, but try to make it so you can see noticeable improvement between this piece and your current writing. Now, rewrite it! Share both the original version and your new version.



Old Version

Chaos was everywhere. That meant war. Mandalan was panicking. The Energitians were attacking!
Duchess Windstorm scurried along on the sidewalk with her only child following her. Airships and hover cars zoomed past her on the airway, carrying supplies for the Mandalinian army and the rest of Nebular. The Energitians were attacking fiercely, dropping nuclear bombs on Mandalan’s force shields, which covered the entire city. Energitians were attacking everywhere on Nebular, so nowhere on Nebular was safe. Duchess Windstorm stopped abruptly at a corner and waited as a hover car wooshed past.
“Come along, now, Starblade,” she urged, tugging the cloak sleeve of her daughter gently. Nine year old Starblade had silky raven black hair and vibrant green eyes and was extremely athletic. She quickly picked out a route across the airway and soon launched off the platform. They were separated for a moment as they bounded across the tops of airships and hover cars to the other side.
“Mother,” Starblade began as they sprinted along on the sidewalk leading back to their house, “what’s going to happen to Mandalan?”


New Version

Small fires smouldered angrily in parts of Mandalan, the royal city of Nebular. Electronic bombs were raining down from the Energitians warships, which were harbored in the airspace above Mandalan. The Energitians, Nebular's bitter rivals, had caught Mandalan half off guard.
Nebular was one of the most technologically advanced planets in the Luminar Galaxy, so naturally, its royal city had fortifications and shields. Only a few of the Energitian proton bombs had managed to break through weakened parts of Mandalan's dome shaped shield, which spread across all of the city.

Duchess Windstorm stood on the blue holographic-looking sidewalk for a moment, distracted by the chaos in the city. A bomb fell on the shield above and exploded. Starblade, the duchess' only child, stared wide-eyed at the explosion.
“Come,” Duchess Windstorm said hastily, breaking out of her momentary brooding. She took a firm hold on the long sleeve of her daughter's cloak, so as not to lose the small girl in the busy, bustling city. The duchess' daughter was nine years old and a natural beauty. Her hair was a silky raven black and her eyes were a large, expressive green. She was slim and athletic, having taken after both her parents, and she followed her mother with long strides to keep up. They reached the end of the blue sidewalk and waited for a moment at the airway, where hovercrafts and small cargo ships whizzed past. Then they crossed as a blue sidewalk appeared, blocking traffic and allowing pedestrians to cross.
Duchess Windstorm and her daughter hurried along at a brisk pace. Starblade, an observant girl, noticed a furrow in her mother's dark brows.
“Mother,” she said timidly, still running along, “what will happen to Mandalan?”


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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/9 Word Wars
320 words - 6 minutes - no prompt - Piper_Camps - won

Sue grabbed a forest green marker and aggressively started coloring in an eye. She was determined to make this her best drawing piece ever, and so far it was looking promising. She had already done the pencil sketch with her trusty purple mechanical pencil. She had already inked in the lineart with her fabulous black pen and she had all her colors laid out before her. She was planning on mixing pencil and marker mediums together as she found that those two were an ultimate art medium combo. The green was such a nice green that she decided to color the headband of the portrait she was drawing that color too, as well as maybe the collar of the shirt… she wasn't sure yet. Sue wiped her forehead with a face cloth. Drawing was such stressful work. One slip of the hand and your drawing could be ruined within a matter of milliseconds. It was extremely meticulous and tedious to get a perfect art work. Also probably impossible, to get a perfectly flawless art piece. If it was flawed then Sue would throw it away, she thought determinedly. She would not stop until she had gotten the perfect portrait. She would became the greatest artist the world has ever known. She would make sure of that. She, Sue Wilson, would become the child prodigy of art and would completely win over the hearts of the toughest art critics with her amazing stick figures. Sue Wilson, age six, already the best artist in the word. It had a nice ring to it, the little girl decided. She absently grabbed a cup of water and chugged it. A single drop rolled down her chin and splashed onto her paper as if in slow motion. Sue's future was crushed under that one little droplet of water, as it smeared the ink and left a water splotches on the cheap paper. Sue was heartbroken


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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/9 cabin wars
Real-Fi war
510/500 words and extra challenge ( written in verse) completed.

Blue raincoat, black rubber boots, my old bucket hat,
And a snack for the journey.
I stepped out the door, dressed in my best, only to find out that-

The sun was out shining, the sky was warm blue,
Not a puddle in sight, not a cloud in my view

So I went back inside, changed up my mood,
Put on some shorts and a tank top.

Then I went back outside and whaddya know-
It's raining and pouring but nobody's snoring because
It's Monday afternoon for goodness sake-
Who would be sleeping on this fine day?

I assumed I was cursed and changed back real quick,
Into my teddy pajamas.
I ate up my snack (blue Sour Patch Kids)
And laid on my couch for a while.

I got really bored, and decided to nap,
Not because I was tired.
I slept for an hour
Or maybe five minutes
And decided to check out the weather.

It was hailing and snowing and it's only September-
I don't know how that makes sense?
I went back inside and made me a sandwich-
That is grammatically incorrect.

It was late afternoon and I made up my mind
That I would go out tomorrow.
And with the snow, I realized,
I could make a snowman!

And surprise surprise-
When tomorrow came, the sun had melted the snow.
Now the ground was all slooshy and slushy and muddy,
And I could not go outside.


If only the sun would not shine today! If only the sky was bleak gray,
Then I would not, no I would not, have to be out and away.

Early in the morning, the sun is up and bright. But it does not
Have to stay
Obnoxiously shiny all day.

Oh Mr. Cloud- yes you.
I know how often I wish
For you to go away,
But please just once,
please hide the sun-
It would mean so much to me

If only you could hide the sun, at least until the sum'rs o'er
Then I would not, no I would not, ask for anything more

Late in the afternoon, the sun might be awake. But it might not
if you just
only hide it away

Oh gray storm clouds
Please come and hide
This sun from view.
Please this once,
Just this once,
At least until summer is over.


Walking home on cobblestone, familiar cracks and holes
Crisp autumn air, everywhere- simply just not fair
So what if she is mean?
So what if she is wrong?
She still got off, and punished me, for all her school woes.
Woe to her for abusing her money
Bribing teachers with gold.
Getting me in trouble, even though I did no wrong.
I know I didn't deserve it.
I don't care if they don't believe me.
I know that it wasn't me.
I don't care because I know and that's all I need to know.
She can't use me
Can't make me feel bad.
I don't care
What they think about me
Because I know
I have done no wrong


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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/10 Main Cabin Daily
hello, weird, field, added, tides, and index
570 words

"Hello hello! Welcome to ‘Hangout with Liv and Kristy,’“ Liv laughed, throwing our her arms and flopping down on the grass beside her best friend, Kristy Denver.
”You're weird, you know that?“ Kristy said, playfully punching Liv's tanned arm.
”Am not!“ Liv protested, shoving back at Kristy's freckled arm.
”Are too!“
”C-3PO,“ Liv retorted, and they both started rolling around, laughing away at the classic joke between them.
”I got you an ice cap from Tim Hortons,“ Kristy said, turning around to grab the tray, which was set against the large tree behind the girls.
”You know me so well,“ Liv said, pretending to wipe away a tear. ”Thanks," she added as Kristy handed her the drink and a straw. The girls sipped away at their drinks, sitting in the shade of the big tree near the fence line of the Denvers' field.
Liv stared out across the rolling land of long grass and her green eyes had a far away look to them.
"The grasses look like tides,“ she said, taking her straw out of her mouth to speak. Kristy made an agreeing sound through her straw. The girls sat in silence for a few moments, enjoying the breeze, warm summer sun, and cloudless azure sky.

”What was the fabulous Liv Rogers up to today?“ Kristy asked, slurping up the last bit of her iced lemonade and setting her empty cup in the tray beside her.

”Eh. Nothing much. I went on a hike with Mom. I had a salad and a sunny side up sandwich after that. Then I took a two mile run and visited a bit with Hannah,“ Liv said, poking at the remaining sips of ice cap at the bottom of her cup. Kristy nodded at the mention of Liv's older cousin as she had met Hannah before. ”Then I jogged back, had some water, read a book, and then came over here.“

”I could never be as active as you,“ Kristy commented. ”Running at least two miles a day sounds like torture.“
”It's fun!!“ Liv insisted, putting her empty cup beside Kristy's. ”As your best friend, I can't believe I haven't dragged you on a run with me yet.“
”Me either,“ Kristy agreed. ”But I'm not complaining,“ she grinned. ”Besides, riding is all the exercise I need.“
Liv rolled her eyes.
”And taking care of the horses is exercise in of itself. Mucking out stalls, cleaning the pasture water buckets, etcetera.“ Kristy said.
”Okay fine, I'll count it,“ Liv relented. She looked over into the adjoining pasture where the Denvers' horses were grazing.
”Oh wait, look!“ Kristy said suddenly. Liv twisted around to look at her friend, who was extending her hand. Liv gasped dramatically as her eyes caught the glint of a circlet on her friend's finger.
”Kristy!“ Liv exclaimed, pretending to be scandalized. ”You are wayyy to young to be engaged,“ she said, putting on what Kristy called her ‘mom-face.’
”Chill, girl,“ Kristy laughed. ”It's on my index finger, not my ring finger,“ she pointed out smugly. ”And look, I got you a matching one.“ Kristy pulled out a ring from her pocket and handed it to Liv.
”Aw, thanks bestie,“ Liv squealed. She put it on her right index finger and hugged Kristy.
”And, and-“ Kristy pulled away excitedly, ”we can do this." She fist bumped Liv's fist and the rings made a clinking sound. The girls laughed and hugged again.


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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/10 Word Wars
134 words - no prompt - 2 minutes - 23BraveHeart - lost

Susie eyed the green candy with her blue eyes. She stared at it like she was laser beaming it right through the center. She wanted that candy. Very badly. But she knew she wasn't supposed to take it. So she refrained. She just stared at it with a pathetic expression on her face. She stared at it with a blank expression. Nobody knows how long she was standing there for, just looking at that big piece of candy. Nobody knows if she even ended up getting it. Legend says she's still staring at the candy, willing for it to just fly into her mouth so she can eat it. But nobody knows. I guess you'll just have to draw your own conclusions from this tale. Will Susie get her candy? Or will she just

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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/11 Main Cabin Daily
605 words

-only know you love her when you let her go. And you let her- Kendra Hazelwood hastily hit the button for the next channel. Immediately an up-tempo country song played from the car's speakers. Kendra turned down the volume. She shifted her gaze to the road and clutched the steering wheel with her hands, which had started trembling.
She had not meant to play that song. If she could, she would never play it again. She never wanted to hear it again. It hurt too much. She had just wanted something to fill the endless void of silence during her unfortunately long car trip and that song from her past had played. And with the lyric that she most hated, too.

Kendra was twenty-three years old. She was told that she was the spitting image of her mother, Carla Hazelwood, with her curly black hair, lean build, and dark olive skin. Ever since Carla had passed, Kendra never wanted to hear the mention of her mother's name again. It wasn't because Kendra didn't like her mom. The two had actually shared a strong, beautiful mother-daughter bond and loved each other to bits.
Mrs. Hazelwood had been a single mom for 10 years, which was since her late husband had died in a lumberjack expedition. Ever since she had been ten years old, Kendra had thought her mother was the strongest person in the world. And that's why the fatherless daughter took it so hard when Carla was diagnosed with stage three cancer when Kendra had graduated from university. Mrs. Hazelwood was a strong woman, and she fought for her life and for her daughter, but human strength can only last for so long.
Carla Rose Hazelwood died when she was 46 years old.
Kendra took it very, very hard when her mother died. She stayed with her aunt for a month but stayed in the room she was living in almost every day. She didn't talk to anyone. By week two, her aunt had given up entirely on trying to coax her heartbroken niece out of her room.
It was August first. Kendra had finally decided to go out. Her aunt had all too eagerly loaned her almost-new car to her and there she was, driving down a country road at sixty and about to have a melt down. The tears gathered in her gray eyes. She stubbornly blinked them back but she blinked too hard and a tear dropped onto her black shirt. The perks of wearing blacking clothing: water stains are mostly invisible.
The words of the song echoed in Kendra's brain. And it was true.
She had taken her mother for granted. And now she was dead and buried. Kendra didn't know how much she had had until she lost it. She didn't know what she was going to do.
The tears threatened to blur her vision and she gratefully turned into a driveway. She was here. She turned off the car engine, unbuckled her seat belt, grabbed the flowers from the passenger seat, and climbed out of the car.
In the midst of the sea of gravestones, the black clad figure crouched in front of a small, rough one. Kendra laid the flowers down gently against the slab of rock.
She stared at the etched lines in the stone for a moment. She opened her mouth to speak, to say something like they did in movies when they were mourning a loved one, but nothing came out of her mouth except sobs. Kendra clapped her hand to her mouth to try and stifle her crying, but it didn't help. So she just crouched there, rocking back and forth, crying in front of her mother's grave.


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lia's swc writing ▪︎ july 2022

7/13 Main Cabin Daily
I cannot draw maps :') does this even qualify as one? I kinda just labeled the places that were mentioned in my story. Anyway the art is all by me except for the city which I traced because i cannot draw huge cities- I drew the house but did use a reference



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