Hey, I am Deli from SWC! I am sorted into the Non-Fiction cabin in November 2021! Here I will post my writing! Thanks! My writing may include some kind of murder and mystery, some blood, and some something something.

30/10/2021 Prompt 1: The driver

The bus zoomed through the city streets, the screeching of tires filling the air, nobody knew what the driver was doing. Except for the driver himself… Myra, a 16 yr old girl, was sitting on a bench waiting for her Uber. Just then the mysterious bus passed her, it was like a black hole, it was like that the time slowed down, in the windows she saw dark shadows with bright eyes staring into her soul. She started to follow the bus, the bus stopped by a sketchy forest cabin. The driver came out, but his face was covered with a red cloth. After the driver came out, came down 4 men, all covered with a black cloak. The driver led them to the sketchy cabin. Myra texted to cancel the Uber and watched the 5 people in awe. Myra was a smart person, she started to look around a found a ladder near the cabin (the cabin was like a treehouse but in ground and has a special staircase to climb) she didn't want to use the staircase as she would get caught so she used the ladder to climb and look through the window. Through the window she saw the 5 men to do some kind of ritual. But, alas, the ladder was very old, so it broke, and Myra fell down with a thump. The men heard the noise and started rushing downstairs, she could hear the footsteps of them. Her heart started beating immensely. (Lol, the thriller) She hurt her ankle, so she wasn't able to run fast. She quickly limped to the nearest bush and hid behind it. The 5 men came out, and started looking here and there. Her heart was racing. One of the 5 men came close to the bush. So scared, Myra got a heart attack. *Beep Beep, Beep Beep* “Whe- Where am I?” “My child!” Myra was in a hospital. Beside her, was her mother crying. “My child! You shouldn't be in middle of a forest!” “I am sorry mom, I had to” “But why you have to go!” “I was so intrigued by the bus-” “What bus!” “Mom, you didn't notice the bus?” “My child! There wasn't any bus anywhere near!” “Okay… What about the cabin? The cabin must be in place right?” “My child! I don't know which cabin you are talking about!” After Myra woke up from coma, she, now with some people, went to the cabin again, but there was no cabin there. She thought “Where did the cabin and the bus go?”….. Till date the cabin and the bus were not found ever again…..

30/10/2021 Prompt 2: The ancient spirit

Hungry as hell, I got out from my bed to get a Midnight Snack. Just then I heard whispering for my brother's room. “What could he be doing this late at night?” I opened the door quietly, and saw that my brother was doing some kind of ritual. Just as I opened my mouth to say something, the windows started to open and close, cold winds were touching my face like crazy. Just then the chaos stopped the the door shut right on my face, and I hurt my nose and gave a big “Ouch!!!!!!!” My parents were fallen in a deep sleep so they didn't hear me, but my brother heard me, rushed to the door, opened it, and said “Sis? What are you doing this late at night?” I screamed “What are YOU doing this late at night! Huh?” “Nothing sis, I was just sleeping!” “I was just sleeping? (sarcastically)” And entered his room to see his weird ritual setup “What is this? Huh?” “I am sorry sis… Please don't tell our parents!” “And why not?” “You see Maya is helping me with my Social Science project-” “Who is Maya!?” “You see Maya is a expert at Egyptian culture-” “Hmm… So you are telling me she is going to help you with it for free?” “No! No! No! After my Social Science project is finished, she is going to leave a note under my pillow stating what she wants. Okay? Don't worry about it!” “And when will your project is going to be finished?” “Tomorrow only sis! Don't worry!” “We will see about that…” With that I rushed out of the room and got to my bed and think about the matter, after seeing what my little brother was doing I was not hungry anymore. I woke up next morning with police sirens, I woke up with sleepy eyes and asked my parents “What is wrong mom and dad?” They pointed out to my brother's room crying, “He- he is dead?” I rushed inside and looked under the pillow, it looked like some other planet's language. “Maybe hieroglyphics?” I got to my computer and searched ‘Egyptian Hieroglyphics’ and translated the note, and it said…. ‘your soul’ (Man, what a mm hmm ending…)

30/10/2021 Database Prompt 3: The loudspeaker

*Tring tring, tring tring* The school had just ended, I was a little slow at packing my backpack, so I always exited the classroom a little late than most of the kids. It was my first year at school, but it was the day of March 31st, that this happened. I was packing my backpack, all the students had left, and just then, I heard some shuffling in the loudspeaker. “Myra (why do I use the same name for every character-)! Come to my office now!” It seemed like a voice of an very angry teacher. The voice continued “B-12 office down the left hallway, 2nd floor! Right now!” The teacher seemed very angry so I rushed down the stairs, as I was about to enter the left hallway I started to think “Hmm… Wasn't the B-12 office locked by the school management?” Again the voice demanded “Myra! Quick!” So without thinking I rushed to the office, but to my surprise, there wasn't a lock on it as usual, and not a ‘DO NOT ENTER’ sign. There I just saw 2 empty chairs and a desk. Just then I heard the shuffling again, this time it had a creepier voice on it, “Myra, please step in…” I was terrified but as I started to move away, it felt like some kind of unnatural energy pushed me inside. And the door closed and locked itself automatically. The windows started to open and close. Terrified, I curled up in a ball and started crying, I said to myself “It isn't time to cry, you should stand up for yourself and don't portray yourself as weak”. I dried my tears and saw a black shadow standing at the corner of the room, it started smiling at me and started getting closer with the demonic smile. I knocked on the door loudly for minutes. The shadow was just few steps close to me now, I had lost all the hope and sat in the place praying to god with my eyes closed. But the prayer was answered as I heard someone opening the door and pulling me out, I kept crying with my eyes closed, just then I heard the voice of the principal, I opened my eyes and saw all the teachers and janitors gathered around me. “Myra! What were you doing in the room! We panicked so much! Thank god you are okay!” “Bu- But some teacher on the loudspeaker called me to this office.” “Oh, you don't know about this…” “I don't know about what!” “You see, this office was owned by Mrs. Williams, she was a very bad teacher as she will call students to her office and beat them up because of no reason, one day she even beat a child to death, and the student was only 4. So one day, we locked her up, because she didn't want to leave, and starved her to death on March 31st, her ghost is still in this office, but on March 31st she lures a child into her office so she could take her revenge, and this time it was you…” “Wow, Mr. Anderson, I didn't know about this” And also, thanked the janitor for saving my life. Till this day, I never dared to even step in the left hallway and always pack my bag faster, because I don't know when she will call me again…..

2/11/2021 Main Cabin Daily: Favourite Desert

Aurora and Eustace were sitting on the bed, tomorrow was Halloween, they didn't know what costume they would wear. They were thinking and thinking and thinking…. Just then there was a sound of a horn outside their house, they leaned over the window to see an ice-cream truck, Eustace was just about to say it, but Aura said it quickly “I am going to be an ice-cream!” “No! I was going to say that!” They both fought. Just then, they heard footsteps of her mother, they were so busy to fight that they forgot about the ice-cream, hearing the footsteps they remained silent. “Children I bought different flavours of ice-cream today!” Eustace screamed with joy, “Yay, mom! But why today? Is today something special?” His mother laughed and said, “Ha! Ha! Don't try to be a fool! You didn't ask me to buy different flavour today, and were obedient!” They both were so excited! They never tasted other flavours rather than Vanilla. They were so amazed to see the different colours. “OMG! Aura! I got the minty choco flavour!” Screamed Eustace “And I got the strawberry one!” Said Aurora. So in Halloween, they DIYed their costumes and got to the Halloween party. They knocked on the door, Mellora opened the door, the most popular girl at school. She stood there and stared at them. Aurora and Eustace entered the party happily, just then Mellora stopped them, “Hey! What do you think you are doing!” “We are just entering the party!” They both replied. “Oh no! No! No! This is supposed to be a spooky party! Not a kids show! Now get off with your dumb ice-cream costumes!” They both were sad and wandered around the streets. Just then, they saw a poor boy trick or treating in the nearby house and getting rejected and returning home, they stopped the boy and asked why he is not sad. They boy replied, “I do not have a costume, so they did not give me candy, but at least I have clothes. There are people out there who do not have clothes. At least you have costumes, you can go trick or treating. We should always appreciate what we have!” After that, they trick or treated and had a great Halloween, they even gave half of the candy to the boy. Always remember to appreciate what you have! (Sorry, if this is like a Dhar Mann video, lol)

Main Cabin Weekly: Characters

2/11/2021 Part 1: Character Voices

(Note: As you know, Aurora and Eustace are the 2 characters I used in the 2nd Main Cabin Daily, I like this so much that I am going to use them for the Weekly too, so don't be mad.)

So, Aurora and Eustace are twins, and have the same brother sister relationships and personality when together. But this varies a lot when they are in a group (When I say ‘group’, I mean group in a situation like ‘Squid Game’). Aurora has leadership qualities, which makes her voice very determined (Aura is Aurora's Nick Name). And Eustace is the lazy one, and has the cool guy voice who doesn't care of what is happening. Aurora has a great bond between friends and family and is very heartbroken when someone on her group looses or gets humiliated making her voice very soft and gentle when talking to her friends or family. Eustace, while being the cool guy, is very intelligent and helps Aurora when she is in some kind of trouble and needs advice and always has some kind of out of the box idea.

“Awh! Mellora is always so mean!” Said Aura marching off angrily
“Ayy sis! Calm down! Someday she will learn her lesson!” Said Eustace to calm Aura down
“Oh, come on! Why do she have to do all of this! Doesn't she have other things to do!” Complained Aurora
“Maybe that's the reason! Just- Just calm down! Okay? Don't be so mad about this!”
“Oh! Why shouldn't I be mad!” Eustace just didn't want to try, he knew she is very very mad.
“Oh! Look! There's just a lonely boy standing outside the door!” Eustace pointed out to a boy who was standing on a person's doorstep
“Trick or Treat-” Said the boy nervously
“Oh! You want me to give you candy? Never! I only give candy to people who have candies! Now just leave me alone!” And Mrs. Wilson slammed the door across the boy's face.
“Oh little boy! Are you okay? Mrs. Wilson is always just so mean!” Said Aurora with sympathy
“No! No! No! I am okay! You don't have to be worried about it!”
“Is that so?” Questioned Eustace
“Yea! Definitely!” Said the boy trying to hide something
“No! No! No! You are definitely trying to hide something! Just tell it!” Said Aurora determined of her words

Stick around for Part 2! Coming soon!

3/11/2021 Part 2: Character Motivations

(Note: I am sorry this came out a day after, I actually wrote this yesterday, but I forgot to post it, so sorry for all the wait! And also, I forgot to let you know, the story I wrote for the second daily was an excerpt for )

6/11/2021 Main Cabin Daily: DA NACHO DAY >))

(Note: Sorry this came out so late, the past 3 days we had to attend many parties, cuz in India we celebrate Diwali, and it is a big celebration, so yea, hope you enjoy DA NACHO DAY >)) The words are by @Spire- , so shoutout to them >))

Stranded in the Desert I had nowhere to go. I just walked where the winds would take me. It was the time of Dusk, the winds stopped, there was a strange silence around me. The sky was full of stars. A star fell down and glided before my eyes. It started to float away, so mesmerized, I followed the shining miracle and it took me to a lake and vanished into the thin air.

MAN I HAVE TO DO THIS SH*T QUICK-

~The Invitation~

Deli was lying in the couch all day waiting for the invitation. “Ughh! When will the invitation come! Even Alyelle has this on her Instagram, like, 4 months ago! I can't wait for it this long, you know!” she said to herself. Just then the door bell rung. *tring, tring* “Uhm, uhm *coughs* is this Deli?” A girl stands there with a white and black cat. “Uhm… Yea! I am Deli! Nice to meet you! I haven't seen you here before, though…” Replied Deli trying to be a little polite. “Congratulations! I am the Camp's Co-Host and-” “Oh! You are the Co-Host! Nice to meet you! I have been waiting for this for so long! Want a cup of tea?!” Said Deli interruptedly. “No! No! No! I don't like tea! I am here to inform you that you are in Zura's Cabin! And I am here to take you there!” Replies the Co-Host. “Really! Like seriously. Really! I can't believe my ears!” Screamed Deli out of pure joy. “But you sure have to believe it!” Said the Co-Host with a smirk in her face. She leads Deli into a deep forest and finally stops at 15 cabins in sight. “See! If you need any help! The big cabin in the middle is the main cabin, there will be all important stuff, rankings, dailies and weeklies and a FAQ centre right there! Tee hee! And oh! In case you are wondering, that cabin! Right there! Is your cabin! Hope you have a great time!” And with this she tip-toed to the so called ‘Main Cabin’. But Deli ignored it all and hopped into her cabin. “Hello guys! It's me! Deli! I am in your cabin this month! Woo hoo!” But instead of lots of people, she saw a lovely navy blue computer on a desk. It wrote ‘Write/Record your message!’. As she approached the computer, the screen now showed ‘Camper accepted!’ and then it showed ‘touch the screen to enter’. Without knowing what to do, Deli touched the screen and the world around her turned black. When she gained consciousness she saw a beautiful city. But there was a twist! It was all colored in a beautiful pastel blue! Right beside her, there was a button, it read ‘click here’. She clicked it, but nothing happened for few seconds WIP WIP WIP

I like it

First of all, I quite liked your writing! the plot was solid and i liked reading it ) the way you described your emotions made it feel like a genuine read, and your style is simple, yet i can really feel like i'm here in this scene. well done!


critique:


1: it’s all one block, which makes it a little hard to read. as @unxverse- said, i would make a new paragraph every time someone talks. for example:

Deli was lying in the couch all day waiting for the invitation. “Ughh! When will the invitation come! Even Alyelle has this on her Instagram, like, 4 months ago! I can't wait for it this long, you know!” she said to herself. Just then the door bell rung. *tring, tring* “Uhm, uhm *coughs* is this Deli?” A girl stands there with a white and black cat.

vs

Deli was lying in the couch all day waiting for the invitation.
“Ughh! When will the invitation come! Even Alyelle has this on her Instagram, like, 4 months ago! I can't wait for it this long, you know!” she said to herself.
Just then the door bell rung. *tring, tring*
“Uhm, uhm *coughs* is this Deli?” A girl stands there with a white and black cat.

for example, when kat speaks without it saying directly she's speaking, (“Congratulations! I am the Camp's Co-Host and-”) you would probably make that on its own line so it's easier to read and understand.


2: be a bit more descriptive!! for example, what does the forest smell/look/sound like? and the cabins - do they all look the same or are there noticeable differences? and the beautiful city - what makes it beautiful?

3: while you do a fantastic job of showing your emotion through your words, what about your body language or facial expressions or heart beat, etc? does your heart speed up in excitement when you realize you’re in zura’s cabin? does your face break into a wide grin? or maybe both of those and more?

critique:

i'm so sorry ahh i really got into depth here, and i apologize :0

Helloxx001 wrote:

Deli was lying in the couch all day waiting for the invitation.

this would probably be, “Deli was lying on the couch all day, waiting for the invitation.” i would also add a part about how you/deli feel waiting for the invite - but remember to show, not tell ;D

Helloxx001 wrote:

Deli“Ughh! When will the invitation come! Even Alyelle has this on her Instagram, like, 4 months ago! I can't wait for it this long, you know!” she said to herself.

when will the invitation come would probably have a question mark at the end ^^ also what do you mean by even alyelle has this on her instagram, 4 months ago? instead of said, you could use a more descriptive word. muttered, grumbled or sighed are all possible options!!

Helloxx001 wrote:

A girl stands there with a black and white cat.

you mix tenses here ^^ it seems like before this story you've been using past tense, but suddenly you switch to present haha. “a girl stood there with a black and white cat” would fit the rest of the story )
i'd love to hear more about this “girl” (totally not kat *cough*). what facial expression does she have on her face, and what body language does she show? and the cat too! what is the cat doing - is it by her legs, rubbing up against them, sitting patiently, licking itself, etc.

Helloxx001 wrote:

Replied Deli trying to be a little polite.

i think it flows better if you change it to, “replied Deli, trying to sound a little polite.” also, i made some grammar changes in that example too haha

Helloxx001 wrote:

“Oh! You are the Co-Host! Nice to meet you! I have been waiting for this for so long! Want a cup of tea?! ”Said Deli interruptedly.

you could combine some of this into: oh, you are the co-host! nice to meet you - i have been waiting for this so long! want a cup of tea?“ i also made some changes to the writing too that i think fits it better so the exclamation points aren't quite so overwhelming.

also, not quite sure interruptedly is a word?? xD you could say instead, ”interrupted Deli."

Helloxx001 wrote:

“No! No! No! I don't like tea! I am here to inform you that you are in Zura's Cabin! And I am here to take you there!” Replies the Co-Host.

this is quite a lot of exclamation points, and it's a bit overwhelming ^^ changing some of this to periods or combining sentences could fix this!!

helloxx001 wrote:

But you sure have to believe it!” Said the Co-Host with a smirk in her face.

not quite sure people have smirks in their faces?? lol i'm sure it was an innocent mistake just wanted to point it out ;D

helloxx001 wrote:

She leads Deli into a deep forest and finally stops at 15 cabins in sight.

you mix tenses around here ) it would be “she lead” instead haha. also i'm confused about this part - first deli is on a couch and then she's being lead to a forest? providing some context here would make the reader feel less confused. what's the journey like from the house (i'm assuming) to the forest. also, as i mentioned earlier, i'd love if you described the forest and cabins more

helloxx001 wrote:

She leads Deli into a deep forest and finally stops at 15 cabins in sight.

hellloxx001 wrote:

"See! If you need any help! The big cabin in the middle is the main cabin, there will be all important stuff, rankings, dailies and weeklies and a FAQ centre right there! Tee hee! And oh! In case you are wondering, that cabin! Right there! Is your cabin! Hope you have a great time!” And with this she tip-toed to the so called ‘Main Cabin’.

this piece of dialogue is a lot of short sentences and exclamation points, and the flow is a bit awkward. maybe change it to: “see, if you need any help, the big cabin in the middle is the Main Cabin - there will be important stuff, rankings, dailies, weeklies, and a FAQ centre right there! teehee! and oh - in case you were wondering, that cabin - right there! - is your cabin. hope you have a great time!”
tiptoed would be one word, and it would be “Main Cabin” xD

helloxx001 wrote:

But Deli ignored it all and hopped into her cabin. “Hello guys! It's me! Deli! I am in your cabin this month! Woo hoo!” But instead of lots of people, she saw a lovely navy blue computer on a desk. It wrote ‘Write/Record your message!’.

i can really feel deli/your excitement here!! excellent job i'd love to know what the cabin looks on the inside haha ) and wouldn't the computer show the words “write/record your message”, not wrote them :0 i would find another word to describe that instead of wrote lol


and for everything else, i'd really just show the beautiful city. i have a lot of questions about it what are the smells, sights, sounds, etc.? what makes it so beautiful? what does deli/you think about the city?

and ty for letting me critique this piece - all together, i enjoyed reading it, and i think that's an amazing piece of writing <3 bravo!

Jack splashed a glass of water on her sister trying to wake her up “Sister! Sister! Wake up!”

Adelle wakes up still feeling sleepy “Awh! Jack! What's up! What time is it?” Says Adelle yawning

“Hahah, Sis! Why are you joking around!? It's 6:30!” Chuckled Jack

“Wait… What?! Why didn't you wake me up!? My guru would kill me!”

Adelle rushes out of bed and starts gathering her bow and arrows

Jack follows Adelle and says while she rushes finding her stuff “I told you to not go hunting that late at night!” He chuckles

“Ya… Ya… Whatever! Now just leave me alone!” Says Adelle in a serious voice

Jack takes out a bow and some arrows and taps Adelle's back “You might be looking for these!” Says Jack in a squeaky voice.

“Give me that!” And she snatches the bow and arrows from Jack

“Mom! Can you give me the breakfast!” She shouted, but there was no response…

“Jack! Where is Mom?!” She shouted both angry and confused

“Oh! You are looking for Mom! Actually, the guru called Mom and Dad, but they didn't want to wake you up-”

“They, what!” And Adelle ran panting to the Banyan Tree

She saw Mom and Dad standing with the guru waiting for her, “Mom! Dad! Guru! Please don't be angry at me! I am sorry for hunting so late at night!” She apologized

“It's ok” Said the guru in a calm voice. “You can sit right there” Adelle sits down and starts listening to the guru

“To everyone who is present here! Today we are going to discuss a very important topic!”

“What is the topic teacher!?” Said a boy in the crowd

“Calm down! If you will keep yourself calm, only then you will be able to understand!”

The guru clears her throat "So where were we? Yes! So this is the story of Ilona. Ilona is a giant bison. But the freaky thing is, that it has six blue glowing eyes, three on each side. But! It isn't not that dangerous as it sounds! Actually! It was a creature sent by the gods to protect the fairies on the Earth! It is very very friendly! And it did not hurt a single fly! But if someone does attack it or the fairies intentionally, then they sure deserved a price to pay! But it had to develop its ability to detect if it was intentionally or not and at least two innocent lives got killed every year due to its not so developed ability. So they fairies put a spell on it, so it would sleep forever and develop its powers and turned it into a hill so that no one recognizes it. But the thing was, the spell can only be broken by the fairies themselves, anyone else who tried to break the spell, would sure wake up Ilona! But! She would turn evil and destroy this village. So, no one dared to go on that hill! But one day the fairies disappeared mysteriously. And can only be summoned when a brave person would climb the hill and find a book of secrets and summon the fairies again…..

(There are more words, but I can't copy it, lol)

23/11/2021 Main Cabin Daily: FRIENDOS
(I am gonna do a continuation of their ‘stories’ in the studio ‘about’ thingys :>)

First is our sibling! Thriller!:

YES, ITS YOURS >:)) P.S. it's me

~Thank you notes for SWC November 2021~

Haii!! I know its late, and its December. But this session was so memorable as it was my…. first session! D D And let me tell ya all! THIS. WAS. FUN! So here are the thank you notes

Hosts and Co-Hosts of Main Cabin:

@-Alocasia : OMG Alba!! You are so good!!! People were worshiping Alba, and I was like *??? But once I checked her account, I became her worshipper myself XDD! Your voice is A.N.G.E.L.I.C. and you play.. what is that? Guitar?? So well!!!! I definitely recommend you to check her account!! Because she is so good!!!

@Bellevue91 : I don't know Birdi very much, but I can tell…. whatever she does is so good and professional!! Unlike me who is a messy unicorn (By the way, this is my main @Helloxx001 ) I loved to have you both Birdi and Alba as hosts! <3

@-ChocoLoco- : Ayo, I also don't know Bakie yet. But talk about… *a.e.s.t.h.e.t.i.c.s.* and ahrt <3

@whiteandblackcat : Again, talk about *a.e.s.t.h.e.t.i.c.s.* and vectour ahrt <3 (Also! Kat is very kind! Although my comment did not reach in the signup project, she still let me in! Now that's kind! Or else I wouldn't be able to have this wonderful time!)

@honeybreeze : OMG! Honey is so so funny! And having Honey by your side makes things 10x better! And also being funny and comedic, she is also so talented. Idk about when you are reading this, but currently her featured project is a carved pumpkin, which I guess was for Halloween? But the carving, man Jesus Christ! That's pure talent! And art? Her art is also so good! I definitely love her! <3

Now moving on to In-Cabin Leaders, Co-Leaders and Friends!

@Cherrie_Tree : Can I give the poggest person award for this gurl right here?? Please?

@suburban-darkness : OMG! All the leaders are so pog! And Fenn? Friendliest one of all times! I really, REALLY want to have Fenn as a leader in next session also, but I know it ain't happenin' :^)) Like I wanna know!!! How can a human be so perfectt!! :00 0

@pitau : Pi… Yea, yea, yea THE PI!!! THE ONLY ONLY PI! See! Look at my pfp!! Lookin' at it? Yea! That was made by Pi! Except the Christmas edits :3 But mostly by Pi! That's how talented she is! I just- I don't know man… I love it!

@S_theCreator : Creaty! One of the most active ones in the gang right there! And she has done a memorable! Great job of bringing in the flying pig in my life! Like, look at the prompt she suggested: Imagine you see a flying pig out of your window, what will you do >: )) THAT, NOW THAT IS ONE TYPE OF PROMPT

@Kiju_the_RainWing : Also one of the active ones! I don't know much about Kiju, but she made an absolutely magnificent project! You wanna see it? Depends if it is still up or not https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/600763935 It is called “Formal apology” and wow did she do a great job at this- And the sarcasm… wow wow wow, its on cloud 9. And that's the best part of her. Her art is also awesome! And darn, she is so good at making dragons-

@unxverse- : Guys, listen up!- If this isn't the most mysterious…. and umm… funny? Scratcher on Scratch! Then I don't know who it is! Basically….. umm… she is also a messy unicorn like me! Ok?