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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Okay, I know that I'm supposed to be deciding which other people should be doing Avengers, but I came up with an idea that I think is really good and original for it, and I've been working on a pitch secretly. My pitch will be released today.

Hint: Trench Track 8
“The Hype”?
Yes.

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how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
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macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide

Last edited by Matjam02 (April 7, 2022 17:48:09)


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Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
Can someone give me the guidelines/structure of a pitch?
I need it for Corsair and the Starjammers.If it gets accepted someone else can take it over.


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Pixelation-Creations wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
Can someone give me the guidelines/structure of a pitch?
I need it for Corsair and the Starjammers.If it gets accepted someone else can take it over.
Nothing really. Just an outline of the plot and characters is fine. You can include arcs, theme (I recommend including them) and future plans, but just the 2 first things are necessary.

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HexagonWorld wrote:

Pixelation-Creations wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
Can someone give me the guidelines/structure of a pitch?
I need it for Corsair and the Starjammers.If it gets accepted someone else can take it over.
Nothing really. Just an outline of the plot and characters is fine. You can include arcs, theme (I recommend including them) and future plans, but just the 2 first things are necessary.
and you can pitch anything like an Eye Scream Series or a New Warriors/Speedball project on people that haven't been taken and if you did want to involve them you could ask the people it involves like the using GLA members you'd ask Hexagon, Wolverine Boom, Daredevil Marv, etc
AnimatorsParadise
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Doctor Doom is done!

boom2ratz
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macandcheeseking wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

Pixelation-Creations wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
Can someone give me the guidelines/structure of a pitch?
I need it for Corsair and the Starjammers.If it gets accepted someone else can take it over.
Nothing really. Just an outline of the plot and characters is fine. You can include arcs, theme (I recommend including them) and future plans, but just the 2 first things are necessary.
and you can pitch anything like an Eye Scream Series or a New Warriors/Speedball project on people that haven't been taken and if you did want to involve them you could ask the people it involves like the using GLA members you'd ask Hexagon, Wolverine Boom, Daredevil Marv, etc
I wouldn't do New Warriors, I think it'd be cool if we introduced them in Civil War, and…

then they all die.

Oh.

Welp.
macandcheeseking
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boom2ratz wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

HexagonWorld wrote:

Pixelation-Creations wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
Can someone give me the guidelines/structure of a pitch?
I need it for Corsair and the Starjammers.If it gets accepted someone else can take it over.
Nothing really. Just an outline of the plot and characters is fine. You can include arcs, theme (I recommend including them) and future plans, but just the 2 first things are necessary.
and you can pitch anything like an Eye Scream Series or a New Warriors/Speedball project on people that haven't been taken and if you did want to involve them you could ask the people it involves like the using GLA members you'd ask Hexagon, Wolverine Boom, Daredevil Marv, etc
I wouldn't do New Warriors, I think it'd be cool if we introduced them in Civil War, and…

then they all die.

Oh.

Welp.
WHY?
boom2ratz
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macandcheeseking wrote:

WHY?
In the Civil War comic and my Civil War pitch, the New Warriors make a reality show and irresponsibly fight a group of villains, and they end up exploding a town, which causes the government to make the superhuman registration act, etc, etc.

Only Speedball survives IINM
macandcheeseking
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boom2ratz wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

WHY?
In the Civil War comic and my Civil War pitch, the New Warriors make a reality show and irresponsibly fight a group of villains, and they end up exploding a town, which causes the government to make the superhuman registration act, etc, etc.

Only Speedball survives IINM
ok though we could have a sort of miniseries before that if we did go with your civil war pitch
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Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
We should do a vote, since AP is now doing his own, and that would probably make him biased.

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Monsoon_Man wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
We should do a vote, since AP is now doing his own, and that would probably make him biased.
Yeah, just don't let people vote for themselves ofc

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macandcheeseking
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-MarvelComics- wrote:

Monsoon_Man wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

macandcheeseking wrote:

how would we decide which pitch be accepted? if AP makes his own he COULD technically just decide to accept his pitch
He’d choose I guess, or I set up a vote where we all decide
We should do a vote, since AP is now doing his own, and that would probably make him biased.
Yeah, just don't let people vote for themselves ofc
ok makes sense Since i did want to vote for myself
boom2ratz
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Nice pitch, Matjam! Only nitpick is this:

Matjam02 wrote:

(this film has to be after FF:H)
That's kind of impossible, since FF:H will be in phase 2(?), and we kind of want Avengers to be the big phase 1 finale
HexagonWorld
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boom2ratz wrote:

Nice pitch, Matjam! Only nitpick is this:

Matjam02 wrote:

(this film has to be after FF:H)
That's kind of impossible, since FF:H will be in phase 2(?), and we kind of want Avengers to be the big phase 1 finale
Yeah, that's just delaying everything.

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AnimatorsParadise
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One final hint before I release it: The Hype, Chorus, Line 2

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Alright, it's finally done. I meant to release this a bit earlier, but here it is:

My Avengers Pitch:


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Table of Contents:
1.
Plot.
2.
Future Plans

BEGINNING:

We see the back of a short figure, he's opening a crate. It's full of bombs, he closes the lid. He puts the crate on a metal floor.

He opens another crate, which is full of rope. He also puts it on the floor.

Cut to Title Card:
Avengers

Then the title glitches out (this will be important later), and switches to:

Morshu and the Starjammers

Morshu and the Starjammers open the door to their spaceship, and are greeted by Link. Link wants to buy some lamp oil, rope, and bombs, but he doesn't have enough rupees, so he can't buy them.

Then Morshu begins spacewalking, and he begins moving the rope around.

“Trees” (The Regional At Best version, not the Vessel Version) by Twenty one Pilots begins playing.

This is a confusing scene, like the one with Hulk in Matjam's pitch.

Then it reveals that he made a map of the world, but some things are off. (This will be important later.)

Then Morshu and the Starjammers drive their spaceship over a planet.

But then, the Illuminator floats up in front of their spaceship, and says that he must purge darkness from the world!

Morshu then says, come back when you're a little MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

“Dead” by My Chemical Romance starts playing

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM

We then cut to the Starjammers landing on this planet. They then walk by a port, and meet a man holding a paper and pen. They sign up to be part of the Hyrulean merchant navy.

Morshu and the Starjammers then sail their ship to a place, and they steal more lamp oil, rope, and bombs.

We see a man from behind, looking over at the scene. He says that he'll have to get them.

Morshu and the Starjammers say that they're hungry, and a man meets them in an alleyway, saying that he owns a restaurant. They go in, and Morshu eats some food. The camera briefly glides to a pepper logo on the wall. (This will be important later.)

Morshu then pauses, and a bright flash of light ocurres in front of him, and there's a figure.

The figure says that he is the Living AnimatorsParadise, and Morshu must be judged for his crimes of eating Chipotle and making a bordergorey and incorrect map, and preventing multiversal chaos from spreading.

Then we see a portal open in front of the man from earlier, and Putin walks out of the portal. The man says:

“Don't underestimate me, lobster. I beat Raeykjur, I beat the commonwealth, I beat Cerprus. So I can beat you. I will take back Sweden from your Raekyjur territory, and restore the Swedish Empire.”

Putin asks what his name is.

The man responds with, and lifts his head up, “Matthew James the 2nd.”

Then we see a man, who looks like Samuel Jackson, in another place, say “we need a team.” He then unleashes a purple lightsaber, and a portal opens in front of him.

Then we see Kaj, in another place, say “The corruption is beginning. Soon the whole world will be glitched!”

Then we see the Starjammers going to a planet, and passing by the Milano, which pops out of a portal.

Then we see Jude Law fall through a portal, and he is surrounded by The Beatles, who are saying hello to him.

Then we see Wolverine on a ship in Pan, singing Smells Like Teen Spirit.

Then we see Batman walk through a portal.

Then we see Youtubers disappointed that their Morshu videos are gone.

Then we see a random crisp store in Britain, saying that they think he's growing too powerful.



Post Credits Scene:
One of the Starjammers picks up a walkman on the planet. On it is written in red marker: “Peter Quill.” The Starjammer presses a button on it, and it begins playing:

“Never Gonna Give You Up” by Rick Astley.


Future Plans:
Morshu and the Starjammers 2 will have a multiversal crisis, and it will be our big crossover event. It will be APMU vs. MCU vs. Country Clash 2 vs. Country Clash 4. vs. DC vs. Star Wars vs. Immersiverse vs. Youtube vs. Real Life vs. Pan vs. The Beatles Some random crisp store in Britain. Matjam will play a huge role in it, and he will help write it. Due to all the universes involved, and as tribute to the original Corsair pitch, everybody will write.

The Milano sets up GOTG, Jude Law sets up Captain Marvel, and Pan sets up Wolverine and X-Men.

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

My Avengers Pitch
This is great. Nobody should try to make anything better than this. I mean, the way you integrated Daredevil? Flawless.

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Alright, it's finally done. I meant to release this a bit earlier, but here it is:

My Avengers Pitch:
Yessir. This should win the pitch wars for sure.

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