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congyingzhou

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
crystal_song wrote:
Just letting you guys know that my order still hasn't been completed. And its been several months now
What order
Username(/s): congyingzhou, congyingzhou0123, roddarichard, it_is_congyingzhou
Which Section? Fiction, editing, bump
Examples: er… https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_4PeC9siyMODW9s-ktw-kmBKoGqhzqW_qTiL53j8JF8/edit?ouid=106295573118431007803&usp=docs_home&ths=true (dats my novel, 100 pages)
Are you following this topic? yes
Other: owner of TIPS, a shop with 100+ pages
you need permission to access the document

Yeah just request and I'll accept

FollowCherryBlossom

congyingzhou wrote:
FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
crystal_song wrote:
Just letting you guys know that my order still hasn't been completed. And its been several months now
What order
Username(/s): congyingzhou, congyingzhou0123, roddarichard, it_is_congyingzhou
Which Section? Fiction, editing, bump
Examples: er… https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_4PeC9siyMODW9s-ktw-kmBKoGqhzqW_qTiL53j8JF8/edit?ouid=106295573118431007803&usp=docs_home&ths=true (dats my novel, 100 pages)
Are you following this topic? yes
Other: owner of TIPS, a shop with 100+ pages
you need permission to access the document
Yeah just request and I'll accept

done

congyingzhou

FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
crystal_song wrote:
Just letting you guys know that my order still hasn't been completed. And its been several months now
What order
Username(/s): congyingzhou, congyingzhou0123, roddarichard, it_is_congyingzhou
Which Section? Fiction, editing, bump
Examples: er… https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_4PeC9siyMODW9s-ktw-kmBKoGqhzqW_qTiL53j8JF8/edit?ouid=106295573118431007803&usp=docs_home&ths=true (dats my novel, 100 pages)
Are you following this topic? yes
Other: owner of TIPS, a shop with 100+ pages
you need permission to access the document
Yeah just request and I'll accept
done

Accepted (in the docs)

WarriorCatLover1212

congyingzhou wrote:
FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
crystal_song wrote:
Just letting you guys know that my order still hasn't been completed. And its been several months now
What order
Username(/s): congyingzhou, congyingzhou0123, roddarichard, it_is_congyingzhou
Which Section? Fiction, editing, bump
Examples: er… https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_4PeC9siyMODW9s-ktw-kmBKoGqhzqW_qTiL53j8JF8/edit?ouid=106295573118431007803&usp=docs_home&ths=true (dats my novel, 100 pages)
Are you following this topic? yes
Other: owner of TIPS, a shop with 100+ pages
you need permission to access the document
Yeah just request and I'll accept
done
Accepted (in the docs)

i requested (im a book nerd)

LotusLavender

Hi. I am so sorry but I’d like to resign. Good luck in the future.

MystreyTurtle96

1. I'd like to be taken off of excused absence. That was from Christmas and is long over.
2. I'd actually like to resign, because even though I love writing, I've seen maybe three orders in the whole time I've been at this shop, and none of them were in my department. Sorry.

congyingzhou

WarriorCatLover1212 wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
FollowCherryBlossom wrote:
congyingzhou wrote:
snip
you need permission to access the document
Yeah just request and I'll accept
done
Accepted (in the docs)
i requested (im a book nerd)

Accepted in the docs

So am I accepted? You guys have read it surely, it's shorter than normal books (at least the ones I read)

SeraphinaBlaze

SeraphinaBlaze wrote:
Username(/s): SeraphinaBlaze

Which Section? Editing and Critique

Examples: Here's an example of how I might edit:

i stood completly still i was scared. If they found me… I tried not to think ov what theyd do. -Incorrect Paragraph-
I stood completely still. I was scared. If they found m… I tried not to think of what they'd do. -Edited Paragraph-

If I were then to critique something written like this, these would be my suggestions:

Work on your spelling and grammar. -Easy-
Work on your spelling and grammar, try to use more varied punctuation, and use more sophisticated vocabulary. -Medium-
Work on your spelling and grammar, try to use more varied punctuation, and use more sophisticated vocabulary. Try using different literary techniques to change up the theme, and improve the level of tension. -Hardcore-

Are you following this topic? Yes

Other: I've had some experience editing and critiquing my own and others' work.

Please can someone look at my application?

BlackWolfee

Hello! Would you like to join the Scratch Shop Support Union?

About Us
The Scratch Shop Support Union a union of shops to the purpose of supporting each other and making each other stronger. We also help new shop owners or new request takers to find their way into the wide world of the requests forum.
How Are We Different From Other Shop Unions?
Whilst it wouldn't be fair to call large shop unions a list of shops and a page of rules, truth is, at this moment they really aren't much more than that. In comparison, SSSU has many shop support programs such as an employee-to-shop directive, where employees can easily be directed to shops looking for workers or that suit their style, a featured shop program, in which shops that are doing well and deserve more attention can be featured, and an orders-to-shop directive, in which orders can be exchanged or directed to certain member shops. We also provide services such as advice for your shop, shop banners and formatting. In this way SSSU exists to strengthen Scratch shops together.
So what are you waiting for? Join us now!

Last edited by BlackWolfee (Feb. 17, 2019 01:14:44)

MystreyTurtle96

MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
1. I'd like to be taken off of excused absence. That was from Christmas and is long over.
2. I'd actually like to resign, because even though I love writing, I've seen maybe three orders in the whole time I've been at this shop, and none of them were in my department. Sorry.

Bump of this.

BlackWolfee

Bump!

PrincessFlowerTV

Critique
Username: PrincessFlowerTV
Link To Story: Can't get a link, so here you go:

The law was passed by the young king.
The cruel, unnecessary law.
Why for certain, no one knew.
But there wasn’t any changing his mind.
Now that fairies were outlawed, they were forced to leave the city.
Fairies didn’t do anything wrong. In fact, they did good to their neighbors on a regular basis.
But that all was disregarded. No one thought very badly of the new king, so the townspeople thought this new law to be fair and just. Why it was passed, no one but the king knew.
But there wasn’t anything anyone could do. The fairies left the town and fled to the nearby towns, countries, and forests.
A few stayed nearby the city, sneaking in with disguises. But all were caught and thrown in prison with no mercy. A certain girl snuck into the city, wanting to see her friends again after the long months. But she, too, was caught and thrown in the dungeon.

Easy, Medium or Hardcore? Medium.
Due Date: By the end of the month; i'm in no hurry.

Other: Whoever takes my order, please comment on my profile with the critique. Thanks!

MystreyTurtle96

MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
1. I'd like to be taken off of excused absence. That was from Christmas and is long over.
2. I'd actually like to resign, because even though I love writing, I've seen maybe three orders in the whole time I've been at this shop, and none of them were in my department. Sorry.
Bump of this.

I'm just going to not follow the thread anymore because no one noticed this.

Coder_Annika

MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
1. I'd like to be taken off of excused absence. That was from Christmas and is long over.
2. I'd actually like to resign, because even though I love writing, I've seen maybe three orders in the whole time I've been at this shop, and none of them were in my department. Sorry.
Bump of this.
I'm just going to not follow the thread anymore because no one noticed this.

Sorry to see you go

Unfortunately (ack why cant I spell anything rn?) I can't do anything 'bout the front page as I dont own the thread. Ask XCat on her profile, maybe.

congyingzhou

PrincessFlowerTV wrote:
Critique
Username: PrincessFlowerTV
Link To Story: Can't get a link, so here you go:
The law was passed by the young king.
The cruel, unnecessary law.
Why for certain, no one knew.
But there wasn’t any changing his mind.
Now that fairies were outlawed, they were forced to leave the city.
Fairies didn’t do anything wrong. In fact, they did good to their neighbors on a regular basis.
But that all was disregarded. No one thought very badly of the new king, so the townspeople thought this new law to be fair and just. Why it was passed, no one but the king knew.
But there wasn’t anything anyone could do. The fairies left the town and fled to the nearby towns, countries, and forests.
A few stayed nearby the city, sneaking in with disguises. But all were caught and thrown in prison with no mercy. A certain girl snuck into the city, wanting to see her friends again after the long months. But she, too, was caught and thrown in the dungeon.
Easy, Medium or Hardcore? Medium.
Due Date: By the end of the month; i'm in no hurry.
Other: Whoever takes my order, please comment on my profile with the critique. Thanks!

Do you mean that we have to review this?

DipLeChip

Poem
Username: Owen Rich
Subject: WW2 fields of war
Anything You Want Included? Just a bunch of description of a battle field in WW2
Due Date: soon
Other: big kek

XCat

MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
MystreyTurtle96 wrote:
1. I'd like to be taken off of excused absence. That was from Christmas and is long over.
2. I'd actually like to resign, because even though I love writing, I've seen maybe three orders in the whole time I've been at this shop, and none of them were in my department. Sorry.
Bump of this.
I'm just going to not follow the thread anymore because no one noticed this.

Sorry! I have been extremely busy lately, and unable to reply. Hope you enjoy yourself doing other things in life

XCat

LotusLavender wrote:
Hi. I am so sorry but I’d like to resign. Good luck in the future.

Okay. Good luck in the future to you, too

XCat

congyingzhou wrote:
PrincessFlowerTV wrote:
Critique
Username: PrincessFlowerTV
Link To Story: Can't get a link, so here you go:
The law was passed by the young king.
The cruel, unnecessary law.
Why for certain, no one knew.
But there wasn’t any changing his mind.
Now that fairies were outlawed, they were forced to leave the city.
Fairies didn’t do anything wrong. In fact, they did good to their neighbors on a regular basis.
But that all was disregarded. No one thought very badly of the new king, so the townspeople thought this new law to be fair and just. Why it was passed, no one but the king knew.
But there wasn’t anything anyone could do. The fairies left the town and fled to the nearby towns, countries, and forests.
A few stayed nearby the city, sneaking in with disguises. But all were caught and thrown in prison with no mercy. A certain girl snuck into the city, wanting to see her friends again after the long months. But she, too, was caught and thrown in the dungeon.
Easy, Medium or Hardcore? Medium.
Due Date: By the end of the month; i'm in no hurry.
Other: Whoever takes my order, please comment on my profile with the critique. Thanks!
Do you mean that we have to review this?

Yes, she is asking for a critique.

blossombreeze

OwenRich wrote:
Poem
Username: Owen Rich
Subject: WW2 fields of war
Anything You Want Included? Just a bunch of description of a battle field in WW2
Due Date: soon
Other: big kek

I'd like to do this! I recently visited the WWII memorial in Kansas City, and I was quite moved by the pictures of the battlefield that they had. Should the tone of the poem be more hopeful or sad?

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