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DipLeChip
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

blossombreeze wrote:

OwenRich wrote:

Poem
Username: Owen Rich
Subject: WW2 fields of war
Anything You Want Included? Just a bunch of description of a battle field in WW2
Due Date: soon
Other: big kek

I'd like to do this! I recently visited the WWII memorial in Kansas City, and I was quite moved by the pictures of the battlefield that they had. Should the tone of the poem be more hopeful or sad?
just the dread. I WANT THE EUROPEAN FRONT, NO AMERICA

stop fuming and start loving :p
blossombreeze
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

OwenRich wrote:

blossombreeze wrote:

OwenRich wrote:

Poem
Username: Owen Rich
Subject: WW2 fields of war
Anything You Want Included? Just a bunch of description of a battle field in WW2
Due Date: soon
Other: big kek

I'd like to do this! I recently visited the WWII memorial in Kansas City, and I was quite moved by the pictures of the battlefield that they had. Should the tone of the poem be more hopeful or sad?
just the dread. I WANT THE EUROPEAN FRONT, NO AMERICA

Ok, does this work for you? If not I can rewrite it. I know it's got a bit of violence in it, but it's pretty hard to get around that when describing a war

There are no flowers here.
The whistle of shells is all we hear,
The rattle of bullets, the gun’s dull sheen,
Destroying everything green.

There are no trees around.
The battle had torn up the ground,
Leaving deep trenches as scars.
The only fruits are those in jars.

The ground around us is all churned,
All vegetation has been burned.
Everything is bleak and gray,
Like an eternal night with no day.

In a place with no nature of any kind,
A place where death is easy to find,
Here we take up the knives,
Here we lay down our lives.

There’s just one favor that we crave,
Plant some flowers on our grave.

Last edited by blossombreeze (Feb. 22, 2019 06:29:28)


“If your work still isn't done, blame the computer”- Fortune cookie “When in doubt blow it up” -Hawkeye
I followed both of these pieces of great advice and blew up my computer
define Goodness
forever



move (In Jesus's) steps

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DipLeChip
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1000+ posts

˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

blossombreeze wrote:

~snippy~

Me liky. I will take it.

stop fuming and start loving :p
Coder_Annika
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

OwenRich wrote:

blossombreeze wrote:

~snippy~

Me liky. I will take it.
Wow, that's impressive!



blossombreeze
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

OwenRich wrote:

blossombreeze wrote:

~snippy~

Me liky. I will take it.

I'm glad you like it! (I just now noticed the typo at the beginning of the second line of the first stanza, I have that corrected now).

“If your work still isn't done, blame the computer”- Fortune cookie “When in doubt blow it up” -Hawkeye
I followed both of these pieces of great advice and blew up my computer
define Goodness
forever



move (In Jesus's) steps

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amazinggurliegurl1
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

Fiction Writing
Username:amazinggurliegurl1
Chapter or Short Story? Chapter
Plot Rundown: some sort of really cool princess book chapter or sum cool
Due Date: ASAP
Other:
--_Nova_--
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

amazinggurliegurl1 wrote:

Fiction Writing
Username:amazinggurliegurl1
Chapter or Short Story? Chapter
Plot Rundown: some sort of really cool princess book chapter or sum cool
Due Date: ASAP
Other:
I might be able to do this, what length do you prefer? Also, can you describe the plot in a little more detail?
[Edit] Ah oops just realized I haven't applied for a fiction author yet…

Last edited by --_Nova_-- (Feb. 23, 2019 20:30:26)


amazinggurliegurl1
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

Any length you’d like I don’t wanna make u work to hard XD

--_Nova_-- wrote:

amazinggurliegurl1 wrote:

Fiction Writing
Username:amazinggurliegurl1
Chapter or Short Story? Chapter
Plot Rundown: some sort of really cool princess book chapter or sum cool
Due Date: ASAP
Other:
I might be able to do this, what length do you prefer?
amazinggurliegurl1
Scratcher
100+ posts

˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

Oh okay

--_Nova_-- wrote:

amazinggurliegurl1 wrote:

Fiction Writing
Username:amazinggurliegurl1
Chapter or Short Story? Chapter
Plot Rundown: some sort of really cool princess book chapter or sum cool
Due Date: ASAP
Other:
I might be able to do this, what length do you prefer? Also, can you describe the plot in a little more detail?
[Edit] Ah oops just realized I haven't applied for a fiction author yet…
XCat
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1000+ posts

˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•




XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•



CherryBlossom-Remix
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

I am FollowCherryBlossom as you might already know, and I am now following all my shops with this account because as you might also know, I've been featured and have about 3000 messages on FollowCherryBlossom and can't possibly scroll through them all so I'll keep track on here. Also I am away and not on scratch from 22nd -24th March. Thanks for reading!!!
charlottelucy15
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100+ posts

˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

Join Us
Username(/s): @charlottelucy15
Which Section? Editing
Examples: I have a project on my profile, I haven't updated it and it's not that good but I mainly do my writing off scratch, if you need I could give a link
Are you following this topic? Yes
Other: I will try be as active as possible however school gets in the way so I apologise in advance for that circumstance.

Hey guys, just click on my name to check out my profile which I recommend in my so humble opinion, same with my shop -Diamond Snake- https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/311697/?page=1#post-3241067
XCat
Scratcher
1000+ posts

˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

CherryBlossom-Remix wrote:

I am FollowCherryBlossom as you might already know, and I am now following all my shops with this account because as you might also know, I've been featured and have about 3000 messages on FollowCherryBlossom and can't possibly scroll through them all so I'll keep track on here. Also I am away and not on scratch from 22nd -24th March. Thanks for reading!!!
Yep


BlackWolfee
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

Bump!

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XCat
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˜”*°•. ᴛʜᴇ ᴡʀɪᴛᴇʀs ᴄᴏʀᴘ. ~ ʀᴇʟɪᴀʙɪʟɪᴛʏ & Qᴜᴀʟɪᴛʏ | ɴᴏᴡ ᴛᴀᴋɪɴɢ ᴏʀᴅᴇʀs ᴀɴᴅ ᴡᴏʀᴋᴇʀs ˜”*°•

Hello everyone! I’m just going to temporarily close the shop while I get the SPA up and running, and will reopen at some stage.

Sorry for any inconvenience!


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