fleur-du-soleil wrote:

galaximoth wrote:

hi! I made another poem, can someone pls give me feedback?
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1271214718

This is such a cool poem, and the rhyme scheme is great! I wish I could write this well. Thank you for submitting your project The only feedback I can give is maybe you could collaborate with other scratchers to add images that go along with it. However, that's all I can really think of because it's awesome as is! Have a great day

thank you so much!!! I'm definitely writing more, so maybe I'll try incorporating some images!

galaximoth wrote:

hi! I made another poem, can someone pls give me feedback?
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1271214718

There really isn’t much i can say about this poem. It’s so cool and amazing, you’re a wonderful writer! Maybe add drawings/illustrations of images related to the poem? Keep up the hard work!

Cherryglow- wrote:

galaximoth wrote:

hi! I made another poem, can someone pls give me feedback?
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1271214718

There really isn’t much i can say about this poem. It’s so cool and amazing, you’re a wonderful writer! Maybe add drawings/illustrations of images related to the poem? Keep up the hard work!

thank you so much1!!!!!1

I have yet another poem! Credited to @DarkSarcasm for giving me the idea to talk about the pain of existence (its not dark and sad don't worry)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1272362058

y'all I know I made one twenty minutes ago but I'm doing good rn so here's another! https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1272372886

galaximoth wrote:

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I have yet another poem! Credited to @DarkSarcasm for giving me the idea to talk about the pain of existence (its not dark and sad don't worry)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1272362058

Hi! I like the personal tone that this poem takes, it makes it feel relatable and intentional. It blends daily pain with the joy of simple things, which I find interesting, as it showcases the ambiguity of human feelings in a simply way.

I suggest that you credit the artist of the background song, even if they don't require it.

As long as your poem is art, there is no right way to do it, in my opinion. So if you'd like more specific feedback on how to do something, you can let me know and I'd be glad to help you.

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1273127454 Natural log please read instructions and notes and credits before starting the project

aqib3 wrote:

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1273127454 Natural log please read instructions and notes and credits before starting the project

Nice work! I really like that you added automode, as well as the option to increase and decrease manually. I honestly have no suggestions, you did a great job

lolrenz12 wrote:

galaximoth wrote:

(#24)
I have yet another poem! Credited to @DarkSarcasm for giving me the idea to talk about the pain of existence (its not dark and sad don't worry)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1272362058

Hi! I like the personal tone that this poem takes, it makes it feel relatable and intentional. It blends daily pain with the joy of simple things, which I find interesting, as it showcases the ambiguity of human feelings in a simply way.

I suggest that you credit the artist of the background song, even if they don't require it.

As long as your poem is art, there is no right way to do it, in my opinion. So if you'd like more specific feedback on how to do something, you can let me know and I'd be glad to help you.

ok! forgot the name of it lol I'ma go search it!

Hello! Anyone want feedback on a project?

galaximoth wrote:

I have yet another poem! Credited to @DarkSarcasm for giving me the idea to talk about the pain of existence (its not dark and sad don't worry)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1272362058

Wow. Full stop. THIS IS SPECTACULAR. I don’t have anything to say about it! Keep on writing poems like this

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1274738252 I made a GRAPH SIMULATOR in scratch also read the instructions and notes and credits if you want to dive deeper

Cherryglow- wrote:

galaximoth wrote:

I have yet another poem! Credited to @DarkSarcasm for giving me the idea to talk about the pain of existence (its not dark and sad don't worry)
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1272362058

Wow. Full stop. THIS IS SPECTACULAR. I don’t have anything to say about it! Keep on writing poems like this

omg tysmm!!!!

aqib3 wrote:

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1274738252 I made a GRAPH SIMULATOR in scratch also read the instructions and notes and credits if you want to dive deeper

Oh my gosh, this is amazing! I wish I had this when I took algebra, it is really helpful. I love when scratchers make educational projects to teach others. Great project!

aqib3 wrote:

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https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1274738252 I made a GRAPH SIMULATOR in scratch also read the instructions and notes and credits if you want to dive deeper

Hello! Turning maths concepts into interactive projects sounds like a great idea to me! I think it can help people understand more intuitively how these graphs work when they are learning about them. I'd suggest that you add negative Y, it otherwise feels incomplete.

If you'd like more specific feedback, feel free to ask! Even just about maths.

Hey, all you Scratchers searching for feedback!

Join my Anything Contest - With a Twist! You can win many fun prizes — some standard, some tailored to unpopular Scratchers, and some FREE! Don't pass up this opportunity!!!

There is also a requested feedback element, which I thought might sound interesting to anyone posting here.

https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1279437306

I finally got more inspiration! if anyone guesses what show and song I'm referencing you are my new favorite person

SoccerBrains24 wrote:

Hey, all you Scratchers searching for feedback!

Join my Anything Contest - With a Twist! You can win many fun prizes — some standard, some tailored to unpopular Scratchers, and some FREE! Don't pass up this opportunity!!!

There is also a requested feedback element, which I thought might sound interesting to anyone posting here.

ok thanks

Hello there! You might remember me from the old topic asking about RuneCraft, well I have made a new game!
I cal it Ultimate Go, UGO for short.
I would like feedback and ideas on how to make the project better, thanks!
Link here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1280233689

kahoot_player21 wrote:

(#39)
Hello there! You might remember me from the old topic asking about RuneCraft, well I have made a new game!
I cal it Ultimate Go, UGO for short.
I would like feedback and ideas on how to make the project better, thanks!
Link here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/1280233689

Hello! It seems like the link doesn't work.