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- Mozboz
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
beepbox.co
I've started a shop for BeepBox songs for video games. I won't advertise it, but I'll provide the first order form and ask how I can improve based on my two prototypes I've sent the customer. I work with their feedback to make the finished track, and I think having help from this extremely talented forum topic would help even more with making the song better. 
And the prototypes: here and here.
Any thoughts on how to make it better? It's going to get extended, with more instruments and melodies as time goes on. But I think it's best to ask for help at this stage. (Guitar shred slides are a staple of my BeepBox music)
What is the genre of music?: Video game (not sure if that counts as a genre)
What is the context in the game, like when it will play in the game?: It will be a battle theme for the first phase of an Undertale fan game.
How long do you want it?: 1.5-2 minutes
Please describe your vision in more detail: Please have it be more chill than the average Undertale fan game theme, but still have some energy to it, similar to “Bonetrousle” from the Undertale OST.
(Optional) Create a moodboard filled with inspiration:
Any other info? (No, we have no codeword): None
And the prototypes: here and here.
Any thoughts on how to make it better? It's going to get extended, with more instruments and melodies as time goes on. But I think it's best to ask for help at this stage. (Guitar shred slides are a staple of my BeepBox music)
- SPIKEdahedgeboi
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
beepbox.co
Last edited by SPIKEdahedgeboi (Jan. 9, 2025 23:36:55)
- SimonCheeseburger
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
Echo.This is so good
(not finished)
feedback needed
insert cave noises
- The-Sectortions
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Scratcher
100+ posts
beepbox.co
Echo.made this very quick. you could make better high end drums and all that.
(not finished)
feedback needed
insert cave noises
- SPIKEdahedgeboi
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
beepbox.co
Echo.made this very quick. you could make better high end drums and all that.
(not finished)
feedback needed
insert cave noises
oh my gosh thank you. the drums sound so much better
- chase_is_cool99
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
dsdfsdffffdfddfdfdfdfadds tempo change to squeaky song and calls it a day
- SPIKEdahedgeboi
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
beepbox.co
dsdfsdffffdfddfdfdfdf
NO WAY YOU MADE THIS. THIS IS PEAK. IT TOTALLY DOESN'T SOUNDS LIKE ANOTHER SONG I TOTALLY HAVEN'T HEARD BEFORE. THIS IS SO GOOD FOR A BEGINNER.
- chase_is_cool99
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
ok chilldsdfsdffffdfddfdfdfdf
NO WAY YOU MADE THIS. THIS IS PEAK. IT TOTALLY DOESN'T SOUNDS LIKE ANOTHER SONG I TOTALLY HAVEN'T HEARD BEFORE. THIS IS SO GOOD FOR A BEGINNER.
- TheBlueRalsei
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Scratcher
100+ posts
beepbox.co
lollidk - tbrhi im tbr (call me tbr or idk)
holy moly. I scrolled too far back but wow
- TheBlueRalsei
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Scratcher
100+ posts
beepbox.co
i forgot that song even existedlollidk - tbrhi im tbr (call me tbr or idk)
holy moly. I scrolled too far back but wow
- TheBlueRalsei
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Scratcher
100+ posts
beepbox.co
brooo id be so fine with ths being the last thing i ever make in this dawoh my god raichu?
on a diff note its actually so cool to come here after like a year and some and still recognize some ppl
- MegaProgramGuy
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
what are the best stock instruments?Since the retro ones are simple I'd say they are the most accurate because most of the samples don't sound super realistic
However with some tweaking most stock instruments can be made to sound a lot better
- TheSqueakyOtter
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
beepbox.co
nuh uh, it is my altok chilldsdfsdffffdfddfdfdfdf
NO WAY YOU MADE THIS. THIS IS PEAK. IT TOTALLY DOESN'T SOUNDS LIKE ANOTHER SONG I TOTALLY HAVEN'T HEARD BEFORE. THIS IS SO GOOD FOR A BEGINNER.
edit: i will add it to my siggy for reference
and yeah it is also a school account so yeah
Last edited by TheSqueakyOtter (Jan. 10, 2025 15:55:33)
- chase_is_cool99
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
ohnuh uh, it is my altok chilldsdfsdffffdfddfdfdfdf
NO WAY YOU MADE THIS. THIS IS PEAK. IT TOTALLY DOESN'T SOUNDS LIKE ANOTHER SONG I TOTALLY HAVEN'T HEARD BEFORE. THIS IS SO GOOD FOR A BEGINNER.
edit: i will add it to my siggy for reference
and yeah it is also a school account so yeah
- chase_is_cool99
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
I've always liked new age padwhat are the best stock instruments?Since the retro ones are simple I'd say they are the most accurate because most of the samples don't sound super realistic
However with some tweaking most stock instruments can be made to sound a lot better
- MegaProgramGuy
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
yeah the pads and retro instruments are probably the most accurate, probably because they're meant to sound synthesized anywayI've always liked new age padwhat are the best stock instruments?Since the retro ones are simple I'd say they are the most accurate because most of the samples don't sound super realistic
However with some tweaking most stock instruments can be made to sound a lot better
acoustic ones still sound synthesized so they're a bit off
- TheSqueakyOtter
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
beepbox.co
these ones are quite goodyeah the pads and retro instruments are probably the most accurate, probably because they're meant to sound synthesized anywayI've always liked new age padwhat are the best stock instruments?Since the retro ones are simple I'd say they are the most accurate because most of the samples don't sound super realistic
However with some tweaking most stock instruments can be made to sound a lot better
acoustic ones still sound synthesized so they're a bit off
- SimonCheeseburger
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Scratcher
500+ posts
beepbox.co
I have never even heard of “Scoot”, sounds cool though also thats a really cool way to use the synth kickthese ones are quite goodyeah the pads and retro instruments are probably the most accurate, probably because they're meant to sound synthesized anywayI've always liked new age padwhat are the best stock instruments?Since the retro ones are simple I'd say they are the most accurate because most of the samples don't sound super realistic
However with some tweaking most stock instruments can be made to sound a lot better
acoustic ones still sound synthesized so they're a bit off