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- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
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You have any ideas to contribute?Yea, I was thinking of including that in either ep 1 or 2. Btw, do you think maybe Orion could refuse the offer to become Prime, and then is deemed worthy or something later on, maybe right after the war starts? Just an idea that popped upThis is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
Hmmm… Maybe?
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- Optimusfreakingprime
- Scratcher
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Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- Optimusfreakingprime
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
I got the touch. And the power.
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
I got the touch. And the power.
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- Optimusfreakingprime
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
I got the touch. And the power.
Can you start writing the part I asked you too? Sorry if that sounds mean.
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
Yea. No, it doesn’t man. Don’t worry. I’m on it.YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
I got the touch. And the power.
Can you start writing the part I asked you too? Sorry if that sounds mean.
Just making sure, do you mean when Optimus and Megatron go to the high council, then the offer, than Megatron gets mad, and all that?
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- Optimusfreakingprime
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
Yea. No, it doesn’t man. Don’t worry. I’m on it.YOU’VE GOT THE TOUCH. NANA. NA. NA. YOU’VE GOT THE POOOOOWWWERRRRRRRR. YEA.MY EARLY DRAFTS (THAT, NOTE, WERE MADE, LIKE, LAST YEAR) HAD ORION GO TO THE CORE OF CYBERTRON AND GAIN THE MATRIX AND TURN INTO OPTIMUS. HOW DID YOU KNOW?! Well, Orion turn down the role but the council remains firm. Hearing this Megatron gets angered and leaves orion. Orion is disappointed and arranges a meeting with Megatron. Later during the early stages of the war, Orion enters the core of Cybertron in hopes to save Cybertron. Primus says that Orion can't do anything about it and gives Orion the matrix that contains a piece of the allspark.
I got the touch. And the power.
Can you start writing the part I asked you too? Sorry if that sounds mean.
Just making sure, do you mean when Optimus and Megatron go to the high council, then the offer, than Megatron gets mad, and all that?
yes
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
With the script part? Nope. Haven’t even started it. Cause I just got home from school. I’m about to start it.
R u done?
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
It is currently being worked on. I’m just warning you, that whole part is probably going to take up 3-5 scenes, so it’s gonna take a while to write.With the script part? Nope. Haven’t even started it. Cause I just got home from school. I’m about to start it.
R u done?
Last edited by ArgyleE1 (April 8, 2024 20:31:36)
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- Optimusfreakingprime
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- Optimusfreakingprime
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
No, its fine. I want the script done too. Once you are done tell me.It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
Okay. Today I’m taking a break from scratch for a while. I don’t know if it’ll be for the rest if the day, or just a few hours. But I just want some time off of technology, so I’m working on a Lego project. That being said, is it okay if I don’t work on the script today?No, its fine. I want the script done too. Once you are done tell me.It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- ArgyleE1
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I also have a headache, so that’s part of itOkay. Today I’m taking a break from scratch for a while. I don’t know if it’ll be for the rest if the day, or just a few hours. But I just want some time off of technology, so I’m working on a Lego project. That being said, is it okay if I don’t work on the script today?No, its fine. I want the script done too. Once you are done tell me.It’s fine man. I’m sorry for putting pressure on you and for being so impatient.So, the council offers to make Orion prime, and Orion refuses. I get that part. But, are Orion and Megatron able to change the council’s mind about the law they’re debating about, or no?This is what I’ve got so far. I cut out a bit from the begining cause it’s irrelevant, so some of this might be a bit confusing cause it’s out of context. Let me know what you think. Btw Orion and Magnus are in a bar. This also takes place in Cybertron. Alright, here we go:
EPISODE 1, SCENE 1:
Magnus: Took you long enough.
Orion: Sorry I’m late, I was….uh……
Magnus looks at Orion suspiciously.
Orion: …..oh yea! I decided to walk this time, so it took longer than usual.
Magnus: You always walk here.
Magnus: Were you-?
Orion (interrupting Magnus): *sigh* Fine. I was at another protest.
Magnus: I have a feeling you weren’t just standing in the background.
Orion: I was the one leading the protest, so what?!
Magnus: Sooner or later you’re gonna get in some real trouble with the police. You have to be more careful.
Orion: Why worry when my best friend is a captain of the police! You’ll just back me up.
Magnus (slightly irritated): I have a duty, Orion. And that duty is to protect Cybertron and to keep the peace, even if that means arresting you.
Orion sits straight(er) up in his chair and looks off into the distance.
Magnus: Some day, you won’t have me to back you up.
Orion looks back at Magnus and leans onto the table.
Orion: Magnus, please. You’re the only friend I have. I—
Magnus (interrupting Orion): You’re not gonna have any friends if you keep this up, Orion!
Orion: I—
Magnus (angry, interrupting Orion): Good night!
Magnus stands up and walks out of the bar.
Maccadam (bartender): Tough luck, huh.
Orion (irritated): *sigh* Yep.
Maccadam: You know, a lot of people agree with you.
Orion looks over his shoulder to look at Maccadam (his back is facing Maccadam)
Orion: What?
Maccadam: You think the law is wrong. That Cybertronians should be able to choose their place of work. Right?
Orion: ….yea, why?
Maccadam: I’m just saying, more people agree with that cause then you’ll ever know.
Orion: Yea, well why aren’t they doing anything about it?!
Maccadam (speaking while pouring a drink): That’s just the thing. They’re too scared. They don’t wanna get in all that—(Maccadam puts down the liquified Energon canister)—drama.
Maccadam smiles at Orion, then drinks some of the Energon he just poured.
Orion: Then who’s gonna do it? If no one says anything, nothing will change.
Maccadam nudges his head at Orion, then walks to the back of the store.
Orion stares off into the distance, thinking. He smiles, nods to himself, then exits the bar.
Amazing! Can you create a Megatron and orion scene? They are talking to to the cybertronian high council. That scene is when orion is deemed Optimus prime.
Yes. Sorry for not responding. I'm watching trf rotb
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
- ArgyleE1
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Animated Transformers film (and/or series)
Sorry to disappoint
“Intelligence is a privilege, and it needs to be used for the greater good of people.” — Dr. Otto Octavius
“Just because someone stumbles and loses their path, doesn’t mean they can’t be saved.” — Professor Charles Xavier
“No man can win every battle, but no man should fall without a struggle.“ — Peter Parker
“You Either Die A Hero, Or You Live Long Enough To See Yourself Become A Villain.” — Harvey Dent
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