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Revive!
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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*cough cough* this is not how derpy dies *dies* Revive!
*rewinds time*
Okay I'm good now
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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
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“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
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Woo!*cough cough* this is not how derpy dies *dies* Revive!
*rewinds time*
Okay I'm good now
I have some really cool new ideas for fit in with draft 2! But we should probably make a new outline for it too.
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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DC started a new Hellblazer book and I think it could be interesting to take inspiration from.
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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Dead in America? Yeah, it does look interesting DC started a new Hellblazer book and I think it could be interesting to take inspiration from.
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"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
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“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
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The Newcastle Mystery.
I was reading John's first appearances (In Swamp Thing) and noticed something. Newcastle is built up as this horrible event, mistake but the reader is never told what it is. The aftermath and guilt is there but never explicitly stated until Hellblazer #11(?) What if we do something similar?
Building up the ghosts and regret but never showing what happened, until John enters the dreaming then the past is seen.
I was reading John's first appearances (In Swamp Thing) and noticed something. Newcastle is built up as this horrible event, mistake but the reader is never told what it is. The aftermath and guilt is there but never explicitly stated until Hellblazer #11(?) What if we do something similar?
Building up the ghosts and regret but never showing what happened, until John enters the dreaming then the past is seen.
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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- DerpyPig03
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move the flashback sequence to the dreaming? Yeah, I think that could work The Newcastle Mystery.
I was reading John's first appearances (In Swamp Thing) and noticed something. Newcastle is built up as this horrible event, mistake but the reader is never told what it is. The aftermath and guilt is there but never explicitly stated until Hellblazer #11(?) What if we do something similar?
Building up the ghosts and regret but never showing what happened, until John enters the dreaming then the past is seen.
It would also make Gaz and Astra's appearances more ominous
FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
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Alright. For the replacement flashback maybe a version of how John got Zatara (Zatanna's dad) killed? I'm just spit balling here.move the flashback sequence to the dreaming? Yeah, I think that could work The Newcastle Mystery.
I was reading John's first appearances (In Swamp Thing) and noticed something. Newcastle is built up as this horrible event, mistake but the reader is never told what it is. The aftermath and guilt is there but never explicitly stated until Hellblazer #11(?) What if we do something similar?
Building up the ghosts and regret but never showing what happened, until John enters the dreaming then the past is seen.
It would also make Gaz and Astra's appearances more ominous
A platypus? A platypus with a keyboard? Perry the platypus with a keyboard?
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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- DerpyPig03
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John killed Zee's dad? I don't remember thatAlright. For the replacement flashback maybe a version of how John got Zatara (Zatanna's dad) killed? I'm just spit balling here.move the flashback sequence to the dreaming? Yeah, I think that could work The Newcastle Mystery.
I was reading John's first appearances (In Swamp Thing) and noticed something. Newcastle is built up as this horrible event, mistake but the reader is never told what it is. The aftermath and guilt is there but never explicitly stated until Hellblazer #11(?) What if we do something similar?
Building up the ghosts and regret but never showing what happened, until John enters the dreaming then the past is seen.
It would also make Gaz and Astra's appearances more ominous
We could do their break up, but my vote would actually be no flashback there. We just cut the flashback entirely and then in the dreaming show the Newcastle and Asylum flashbacks together
FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
- Platypus_WKeyboard
- Scratcher
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Swamp Thing #50. To stop the Brujeria there was a ritual involving magic folk who were contacted by John, long story short they took to long causing Zatara and Sargon to burst in flames. John didn’t really cause it but he was heavily adjacent to it. I think it could work as a replacement to get the point across the original flashback did and show Zee and John’s prior relationship. But again this is just an idea.John killed Zee's dad? I don't remember thatAlright. For the replacement flashback maybe a version of how John got Zatara (Zatanna's dad) killed? I'm just spit balling here.move the flashback sequence to the dreaming? Yeah, I think that could work The Newcastle Mystery.
I was reading John's first appearances (In Swamp Thing) and noticed something. Newcastle is built up as this horrible event, mistake but the reader is never told what it is. The aftermath and guilt is there but never explicitly stated until Hellblazer #11(?) What if we do something similar?
Building up the ghosts and regret but never showing what happened, until John enters the dreaming then the past is seen.
It would also make Gaz and Astra's appearances more ominous
We could do their break up, but my vote would actually be no flashback there. We just cut the flashback entirely and then in the dreaming show the Newcastle and Asylum flashbacks together
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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Random comic facts for motivation: canonically Peacemaker is a fan of Mucous Membrane.
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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so is terry mcginnis batman Random comic facts for motivation: canonically Peacemaker is a fan of Mucous Membrane.
FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
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Huh, didn't know that.so is terry mcginnis batman Random comic facts for motivation: canonically Peacemaker is a fan of Mucous Membrane.
For a canonically bad band it has a lot of fans.
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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I think the joke is it was bad initially, but now its “retro” so its popular again lolHuh, didn't know that.so is terry mcginnis batman Random comic facts for motivation: canonically Peacemaker is a fan of Mucous Membrane.
For a canonically bad band it has a lot of fans.
FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
- Platypus_WKeyboard
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Probaly, there was a great two-part comic where a bunch of people try to make a Mucous Membrane/Newcastle documentary. It goes was well as you'd think.I think the joke is it was bad initially, but now its “retro” so its popular again lolHuh, didn't know that.so is terry mcginnis batman Random comic facts for motivation: canonically Peacemaker is a fan of Mucous Membrane.
For a canonically bad band it has a lot of fans.
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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I have two big ideas, one for C1 the other for Hellblazer. Wanna hear them?
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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sure! I have two big ideas, one for C1 the other for Hellblazer. Wanna hear them?
FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
- Platypus_WKeyboard
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1) So the main final battle in C1 is John getting a repeat, what if John does more than one? On each of his attempts his still uses the people around him but fails miserably. Then John learns his lesson and doesn't use them. It's a rough idea at the moment.sure! I have two big ideas, one for C1 the other for Hellblazer. Wanna hear them?
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“Do you know what kind of person becomes a psychologist? A person that wishes deep down that everyone more special than them was sick because healthy sounds so much more exciting than boring. You're average, Britta Perry. You're every kid on the playground who didn't get picked on. You're a business casual potted plant, a human white sale. You're VH1 Robocop 2 and Back to the Future 3. You're the center slice of a square cheese pizza. Actually, that sounds delicious. I'm the center slice of a square cheese pizza. You're Jim Belushi.”
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- DerpyPig03
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Could work… but might be a little too reminiscent of Doctor Strange, What If, Loki, or Live Die Repeat1) So the main final battle in C1 is John getting a repeat, what if John does more than one? On each of his attempts his still uses the people around him but fails miserably. Then John learns his lesson and doesn't use them. It's a rough idea at the moment.sure! I have two big ideas, one for C1 the other for Hellblazer. Wanna hear them?
EDIT: Also, I can't believe the MCU has used a time loop ending 3 times!!! lol
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FAVORITE BIBLE QUOTE
"Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres. Love never fails." - 1 Corinthians 13:4-8a (emphasis added)
FAVORITE MOVIE QUOTE
“One often meets his destiny on the road he takes to avoid it.” - Master Oogway
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