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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Silvi's thread, Weekly
Weekly Part 1

From the depths of the rivers and forests and jungles rose a great tree, tougher than everything and anything, mightier even than the king of the jungle, the lion. Surrounded by swirling rivers and rustling reeds, a bud grew. More and more followed until the tree was dripping with them. Slowly, the first bud began to open up. It grew more and more, until inside it lay a glimmering seed. Blue and turquoise lit the crystal clear pod, so beautiful to even the most boring person. On the raging river came a man in a boat, with a bag filled with treasures to the very brim. He passed the tree on its little island and saw the seeds. He pulled out a blade, elongated like a crescent moon and looked in sheer delight at the glimmering seeds before him. But instead of thinking of the life they could produce, he thought of the money and fame that he would recieve.

So he took the seeds and stuffed them in every little nook and cranny in his sack. His spiteful eyes glittered coldly as he stole his way through the sun-touched waters. Many days it took for him to reach his hometown, but when he did, fame was bestowed upon him. A young child with her mother passed him with his seeds laid out on a blanket. She leapt in excitement and managed to get a seed. She then found out that it was an egg, waiting to hatch, so in the gap between her waist and legs, her mother put a cage. Another boy got this done too, and they played together happily.

Time passed, and the birds hatched and the two children grew. They sang a sweet song and the children soon found themselves adults with a baby. The birds carried on growing, as did the children, now adults, Serena and Matthew. Eventually, Serena was a grandmother, and the bird was edging its way out of the cage. So Serena travelled far away, and stroked her bird, which she had named Solna after her mother, for the last time. Solne spread her beautiful blue and purple wings and took off, looking back at Serena, singing the song that was to be known as the Secret of Life.




Weekly Part 2

Food - Dim sum from Asia

“Hello Dylan! I went on holiday in the summer and I found something really cool!” said Mila. She had quite a mischievous reputation and usually lived by herself with her dog and a bunch of orphans, but came here for the summer quite a lot.
“Hiya! What did you find? A treasure island with pirates? A dinosaur? I don’t think that is as cool as what I found! ”
“I found food! Very, very tasty food! It’s from Asia and is called dim sum. It is lots of little dishes like dumplings and spring rolls and rice! You have got to try it!” Mila announced triumphantly.
“ Ha! Doesn’t sound like much to me! I found heaps of precious stones on a beach!” Dylan
scoffed.
“ Really, Dylan? I know this isn’t what you’re interested in, but it’s amazing and you can’t ignore this…”
“Fine. But I am still not interested.”
“You are from Asia, Dylan! I thought that you would know about it! I mean, come on, I know more about your cultural food than you! It doesn’t surprise me much though.”
Dylan cheeks burnt with embarrassment. He saw Asian food being carried around. It was right here in front of him and he didn’t even know about it! He had grown up in many countries of Asia, moving from place to place in a little boat with one friend only to help him throughout the journey of the treacherous seas.
He answered with something that surprised him. “ You’re right. I should know more about it.”
With that he bid Mila farewell and went home. He looked up about dim sum and went about making it.
He fried spiced rice, he steamed soft, velvety dumplings and plated salty fish in his secret kitchen at an abandoned cottage. It was filled with the aroma of India and China and Japan all at once and brought Dylan back to his hometown, in a small village of China. His eyes lit up and he almost wished that Mila could see him. That gave him an idea. He could give it to Mila. She would be so happy.
Dylan was a soft-hearted boy and saw only happiness in Mila’s eyes, not scorn or laughter. So he packed his dim sum in a little wicker basket and lugged it along the sun-dappled shoreline. His earlier mocking attitude had completely disappeared. He went up and knocked on Mila’s door. One of the other orphans came to him.
“ I need to see Mila”, he said. “Privately”.
He got to her room and saw her on her bed with her cousin who had organised the holiday with the help of an adult who took care of them sometimes.
“Mila, could I have you quickly outside?”
Once they were outside, he presented her the dish.
“ Do you like it?”
He asked tentatively.
Mila swallowed back some biting remarks and said, “ It’s lovely. What a wonderful idea… you could eat it with the other orphans and me! How would you like that?”
So Dylan went home later with a skip on his step and a smile on his face.


Weekly Part 3

Lotta ran through the rain miserably. Her hair was drenched, little shiny droplets splish-splashing onto the uneven paths. Her coat was sodden, soaked through and her shoes were soaking with slush and rain. She looked around uncertainly and saw that she was not in the quiet suburbs of Tokyo, but the centre, with horns beeping and people racing and shouting to get back home. She felt a sudden wind blow her towards a nearby house and she put out her hands, preparing for the worst. Her plaits streamed out behind her and she could almost feel the stinging graze on her grim hands. But then there was an eerie silence. No rain. She looked up and saw a wall above with an overhang, protecting her from the rain. An umbrella was propped up against a wall, and it leaned towards her. She felt a tingle rush over her, like… magic!
It was subtle red, like watercolour and it seemed to pull at her. She then finally reached a lampost, lit dimly with a burning flame. It had creepers around the top and reminded Lotta of a lighthouse, ready to come show you the way. So she followed the flame, to the left of herself, but it always seemed to appear again. The umbrella tugged at her arm, towards the bottom. An arrow appeared. Pointing in all the directions at once. It seemed confusing. Lotta then saw something appear in front of her, the lampost in miniature. Lucy looked at the umbrella.
“Hello, what’s your name? You’re the first child I’ve met. Strange… I seem to know you. You’re eyes, I know! Like that woman, same hair as well! Now what did she say her name was again?” said the umbrella.
Lotta could only stare in astonishment. Talking, a talking umbrella?
“Aha! Maria! Nice lady too.”
Lotta exclaimed, “ My mother, that’s my mother’s name!”
“Do you want to go play?”
“Why, of course!”
So she was twirled and dragged and pulled around by the umbrella. She screamed and laughed and cried and smiled. Then she remembered her home. She had to go back, she had to, she had to! She told the umbrella that and it cried,” Don’t leave me, don't leave me!”
Lotta replied mournfully, “I have too…”
“Well I’m coming with you!” the umbrella announced. “Your house is right over there!”
“So it is! Well come on!”
Then Lotta noticed the lampost again by her house, standing there, much more brightly lit.
“The lampost!”
“It will always come back to you, Lotta.” And with that, they went inside and lived together for many years to come.



Weekly Part 4

A tree, twisting up, touching the sky, grew from the damp ground out of an island. It had dark, red wood, a tree that symbolises forever, infinity. Leaves sprouted out, so green, all different shades, and water swirled around the base of the island. Then eggs sprouted from the tree, in little pods, a beautiful, shining, turquoise blue. Many, many more grew, until the tree would have drooped under the weight, if it had not been an infinity tree, the immortal tree.
Then a man rowed by, in the suddenly stormy waters. He had a particularly spiteful look in his eyes, and had a sack, treasure-filled. He picked one egg, two, so many that his bag almost burst. He rowed away with satisfaction, and went back to his home and lay down a blanket, upon the rough ground. He sat down and waited and waited, until the blazing sun was high in the glimmering sky.
A girl with her mother skipped past and stopped. She looked at the eggs for a minute and then went off to her mother. She came back after a minute and chose one. She danced with happiness and looked as if this was about to fix something broken that she so desperately wanted back. And it was so that her mother did come up with something like that, fixing something that everyone in the town had. The Gap, they called it, between the waist and thigh, there was a gap. You could see the other side through it, and there had been no one in this town born without it. But her mother came up with an ingenious idea. She went in front of the mirror, with her daughter, Serena, and put a cage in the Gap, with the egg inside. She went off and saw another child from her school, Matthew, with one too. So she played football with him and they laughed and were happy little 5-year olds, just playing together. Serena was happy and would be happy.

Soon, she and Matthew grew up, and she soon found herself with him a lot. Then she had a baby. The birds grew and Serena thought back to the little eggs that they were. So wonderful, full of new life, the best sign to see. Eggs were never eaten here because of that. She then remembered a tree, not from her own memory, but someone else’s. She saw dark, deep red wood and then knew that this was where the birds had come from. The tree in her mind suddenly became angry, which fit with its lovely colour and she felt her mind also get angry. The man had taken those poor defenceless eggs, so she made up her mind to take care of them and free them.

Serena and Matthew grew old, their birds now too big for the cage. So one day, Serena trekked with Matthew up hills, through forests and finally through sandy plains, where the sea could be heard faintly crashing onto the shore. She stroked and petted their birds, felt tears streaming, hot, down her cheeks, and suddenly felt weak. She buried her head into her bird’s ( who she had named Solna after her mother) wonderful gleaming feathers, all lilac and blues and pinks and reds and then said her final goodbyes. She opened the cage and lifted her bird out.
“Spread your wings and fly, fly away and be free.” she sobbed tearfully. She saw her spread her wings high and gently nibbled Serena’s arm before flying away into the distance.

For many years, Serena felt empty, until she finally revisited the plains and saw a tre, high in the distance and an egg rolled down to her feet.
“Immortal.” she whispered.
minergold48
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Word War // July 7 // 196 words

SPOILERS FOR SKY: CHILDREN OF THE LIGHT

Original version used for word war:
Ermint was falling into an infinite void, unsure where she was. Well, I guess in some sort of dead limbo place, she thought, looking at her grey mitten like hands. What had just happened? It had all happened so fast…her and Vortex were running through what was basically hell, giving the glowing winged light they had spent such a long time collecting to a bunch of statues. Seemed pointless, but Vortex had said that they'd done it many times before, which meant…she wasn't dead. But she felt pretty dead. Could she feel dead? Before Ermint could continue her extistental crisis, she hit the floor, which apparently existed. At least that didn't hurt. She weakly pulled herself up, looking at her reflection in the ground, before looking to the only source of light, which looked like another glowing person in the distance. She pulled herself up, huffing, before limping towards the light. After what seemed like forever, she reached them. “Hello..?” she whispered, tilting her head at them as they lifted their empty, glowing face to look at her, before offering a hand. She took it, pulling them to their feet. They looked at the ground sadly

Edited version used for word count (312 words):
Ermint was slowly falling through an infinite void, unsure where she was. *Well, I guess I’m in some sort of dead limbo place,* she thought, looking at her grey mitten-like hands. What just happened? It had all passed so fast…her and Vortex were running through what was basically hell, giving the glowing winged light they had spent such a long time collecting to a bunch of statues. Seemed pointless, but Vortex had said that they'd done it many times before, which meant…she couldn’t be dead. But she felt pretty dead. Could one even feel dead? Before Ermint could continue her extistental crisis, she hit the floor, which apparently existed now. At least that didn't hurt. She weakly pulled herself up, looking at her gray, empty, lightless reflection in the ground, before looking to what seemed to be the only source of light, a glowing person in the distance. She pulled herself up, huffing in exhaustion, before limping towards the light. After what seemed like forever, she reached them. “Hello..?” she whispered, tilting her head at them as they lifted their blank, glowing face to look at her, before offering a hand. She took it, pulling them to their feet. They stared at her, before looking at the ground sadly. Ermint felt bad for them. How long had they been trapped in this void? She offered them a hug, startling them slightly. They stared at each other, before the glowing child went into Ermint’s hug. Ermint was filled with warmth, and when she opened her eyes, she realized that the kid was gone. But now, she was the one glowing golden, her body having regained its previous form, including the cape that she had just watched fall apart upon her maybe-death. She looked up at the golden beacon that had appeared in front of her, before following it up out of the void…

Last edited by minergold48 (July 16, 2023 19:50:21)

xXFierroOrFalafelXx
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

_gardenia_ wrote:

7/6/2023
- “PURE LUCK”
- because gamble is my favorite my only good oc

Verse 1:
roll the dice, shuffle the cards
still my heart (anything’s better than this)
all i have to do is win
but fake it till i make it
pretend, pretend
until it’s just pure luck in the end

Pre-chorus:
grin like a maniac, don’t let them see through
sinking deeper in my debt (i’m only a fool)
all i have to do is win
sin, sin, sin
if it means i’ll win
pretend, pretend
until it’s just pure luck in the end

Chorus:
pure, pure luck
in the casino where we rot
i’ve sinned and sinned
addicted, enraptured, consumed
but i’ll never stop if it means i’ll win
i’ll win, i’ll win, i’ll win
in the casino where we rot
pure, pure luck will come for me in the end

Verse 2:
deal the cards, juggle the dice
all i see are kings and queens
jacks, ace, jokers (the faces of my brothers and sisters)
JACKPOT!
i know i’ll win, win, win
i’ll win, win, win
even if i have to sin, sin, sin

Bridge:
(JACKPOT! JACKPOT!)
(sin, sin, sin)
(win, win, win)
(JACKPOT! JACKPOT!)

Verse 3:
cards in a house, watch them fold
one by one until the stack is done
miniature towers of gold (the faces of my wife and children)
JACKPOT!
pretend, pretend
until it’s just pure luck in the end

Pre-chorus:
grin like a maniac, don’t let them see through
sinking deeper in my debt (i’m only a fool)
all i have to do is win
sin, sin, sin
if it means i’ll win
pretend, pretend
until it’s just pure luck in the end

Chorus:
pure, pure luck
in the casino where we rot
i’ve sinned and sinned
addicted, enraptured, consumed
but i’ll never stop if it means i’ll win
i’ll win, i’ll win, i’ll win
in the casino where we rot
pure, pure luck did not come for me in the end.


I love the energy of this
Fantastical_Words
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Daily 6-7th July
(308 words)
Tempo: 100-ish bpm(maybe a little faster), 4/4
Strong beat and energetic
I'm not exactly proud of it, but I'm not so ashamed of it that I can't bring myself to show proof, sooo…


Intro
So it turns out I was empty,
Sad and helpless from the start,
At least that's what my friends told me! (One, two, three, four!)
Verse
They call me introverted and shy,
They say that I couldn’t hurt a fly.
I said “maybe that’s true but see,
You ain’t seen the worst of me
Be-cause I have so much more to show you.”
Chorus
Is it me? Under this clever trickery,
Is it me? Who’s pulling the strings,
Pulling the strings,
Who’s pulling the strings on me?
Verse
I wanted to break free from the lies, (A wild animal)
I wished to live my own * life.
But they tied me up in knots, (A cruel cannibal)
They put me on the spot, and said,
“Dance for us, dance with all you’ve got!” (Oh no!)
Chorus
Is it me? Under this clever trickery,
Is it me? Who’s pulling the strings,
Pulling the strings,
Who’s pulling the strings on me?
Bridge
And some days I lie alone, (Searching for the light)
I nurse my wounds, my skin and bone, (I twist and turn in the night)
I think about these friends of mine, (Who am I, but a part of their fight?)
I’m their puppet, all the time.
But, I wonder, (wonder)
Who’s pulling the strings,
On them, who’s the master puppeteer?
Chorus
Is it me? Under this clever trickery,
Is it me? Who’s pulling the strings,
Pulling the strings,
Who’s pulling the strings on me?
Verse
The crowd stands and nods in assent, (footsteps near)
They all seem happy, they are all content,
But inside I’m screaming (can you hear?)
Outside I’m smiling,
Where am I? What’s happened to my voice?
Outro
I can’t help it, (never wanted to)
I can’t help it, (wasn’t going to)
I can’t help it, (did I hurt you?)
Somebody help me! (please)
Mydoggiedaisy
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

i'll be here for u

i'll be here for u

verse one:

it's one am and we're calling
listening to all your venting
promising i'll never leave your side
i'll put you first, throw my mind aside
but you don't need to know that

pre chorus:

i'll give you all my time
i don't expect a dime
i just want you to be okay
each night for you i pray,
and

chorus:
time ticks by
i want to cry
but i'll always be there for you
we will never be through
i promise

verse two:

it's two am and we're through calling
now i'm stuck in my room crying
i can't go back; i'll be here for you
you say you'll be here for me too
but you don't need to fulfill that

pre chorus:

i'll give you all my time
i don't expect a dime
i just want you to be okay
each night for you i pray,
and

chorus:
time ticks by
i want to cry
but i'll always be there for you
we will never be through
i promise

bridge:

i hate myself
i'm torn in two
it's hard to love you
when i hate myself
but i'll try my best
call me whenever
i won't rest
until i know you're okay


pre chorus:

i'll give you all my time
i don't expect a dime
i just want you to be okay
each night for you i pray,
and

chorus:
time ticks by
i want to cry
but i'll always be there for you
we will never be through
i promise

verse three:

it's three am and you've called me back
that's fine, i'll be your air sac
promising that i'll always answer your calls
i'll be with you in your ups and your falls
and i'll let you know that

pre chorus:

i'll give you all my time
i don't expect a dime
i just want you to be okay
each night for you i pray,
and

chorus:
time ticks by
i want to cry
but i'll always be there for you
we will never be through
i promise

chorus:
time ticks by
i want to cry
but i'll always be there for you
we will never be through
i promise

bi daily for real fi, 370 words
minergold48
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Word War // July 7 // 205 words
Rambling nonsense about my comic story thing go brr

Original version used for word war:
A thing i was thinking about for experimental was changing it so that all of the experiments were instead cursed pokemon, or blessed, depending on how you see it, and there would still be the whole experimenting part but they would have captured the pokemon instead of made them, maybe they were created by the mon who was originally going to break out everyone, and the naturals still exist but theyd be named something different due to them being cursed and not experimented, im not quite sure what else to say though but uh
Eclipse and Pliko and everyone else would be a sort of support group for the cursed pokemon, helping them hide from the not naturals anymore, and there would still be the same main characters, except three are cursed, one is the kid of a creature looking to capture the cursed ones, and one is a scientist expirimenting on the mons except he feels really bad for them and might come up with an escape plan
there would be the same map, with the cool cherry blossom forest that made peach seem cursed even though it was more of a genetic change or something, like she evolved into a regional varient leafeon

Edited version used for word count (232 words):
A thing i was thinking about for Experimental was changing it so that all of the experiments were instead cursed Pokémon, or blessed, depending on how the characters in the world see it, and there would still be the whole experimenting on the different Pokémon part but they would have captured the Pokémon instead of made them. Maybe they were created by the ‘mon who was originally going to break out everyone, and the Naturals still exist but they'd be named something different due to the special Pokémon being cursed and not experimented on. Eclipse and Pliko and everyone else would be a sort of support group for the cursed pokemon, helping them hide from what’s no longer the Naturals, and there would still be the same main characters, except two are cursed, one just seems cursed, one is the kid of a ’mon looking to capture the cursed ones, and one is a scientist expirimenting on the ‘mons, except he feels really bad for them and might come up with an escape plan for those captured. There would be the same map, with the cool cherry blossom forest that made Peach seem cursed even though it was more of a genetic change, since she evolved into what seems like a regional variant Leafeon. The name of the comic will probably be changed as well, as it’s no longer focused on experimenting.

Last edited by minergold48 (July 24, 2023 20:00:54)

minergold48
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Word War // July 7 // 193 words

Original version used for word war:
Tiger and Ossa are best friends, both silly dragons, the only ones of their kind as far as they know, who love nature. Although Ossa always worries about the plants poisoning her, and avoids touching them, Tiger drags her around and helps get her outside of her comfort zone. Sometimes Ossa worries that Tiger's small temper will be unleashed on her, but so far that hasn't happened, and Tiger has told her that she'd try her very best to not do that to her. Although Tiger has a lot of abilities, being a dragon who can survive in all four elements, Ossa never feels jealous, already scared of fire that isn't her own carefully controlled breath, and not very excited about swimming, especially in the deep ocean. Tiger sometimes wonders if Ossa has a crush on her, but Ossa doesn't, and she wasn't planning on getting in a relationship either. They go flying together, as Ossa has the least amount of anxiety when in the air, although she sometimes struggles to keep up with her peppy best friend and her incredible flying skills. Tiger also doesn't make fun of Ossa's interesting patterns or

Edited version used for word count (223 words):
Tiger and Ossa are best friends, as they’re both silly dragons, the only ones of their kind, although they don’t really know that, and they love nature. Although Ossa always worries about plants poisoning her when they explore the wilderness, and avoids touching anything, Tiger drags her around and helps get her outside of her comfort zone. Ossa also worries that Tiger's small temper will be unleashed on her, but so far that hasn't happened, and Tiger has told her that she'd try her very best to not do that to her. Although Tiger has a lot of abilities, being a dragon who can survive and thrive in all four elements, Ossa never feels jealous, already scared of fire that isn't her own carefully controlled breath, and not very excited about swimming, especially in the deep ocean. Tiger sometimes wonders if Ossa has a crush on her, but Ossa doesn't, and she has no interest in getting in a relationship with anyone at the moment. They go flying together, as Ossa has the least amount of anxiety when in the air, although she sometimes struggles to keep up with her peppy best friend and her incredible flying skills. Tiger also doesn't make fun of Ossa's special patterns or her anxiety, and makes sure that her best friend is happy as much as possible!

Last edited by minergold48 (July 24, 2023 20:12:22)

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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Word war against @fc_ghshsh :
We were falling… falling… falling…
Falling from a broken sky that couldn’t hold the two of us. Falling into a broken world that couldn’t deal with our brokenness. Falling into somewhere foreign, somewhere unnatural. I didn’t know where we were going, only that we were falling. Falling. Falling.
I tried to grip something, maybe grip the hand pulling me down with him. Maybe I could save myself. Maybe I had one more chance, one more shot. Maybe I could save myself. I couldn’t save him.
I tried desperately to claw for a piece of the sky, the sky that was shattering into shards of painful glass all around us. I hated him for this. He deserved it. Every bit of cruelty, every bit of murderous intent, was worth it. It was worth it. He could go here. I couldn’t. I’d only been dragged into this with him. I’d been dragged into his horrible plans. I couldn’t take it.
lizard-breath
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Hi-Fi Task:

Finland raised an eyebrow in the mirror. Was his mustache growing? He leaned in closer to examine.

“Excuse me.”

Finland’s head shot up and he looked to his left. A man gestured to the paper towel dispenser he was currently blocking. “Oh. Sorry,” Finland replied bashfully. He almost forgot that he was in a public restroom. Hopefully the stranger had not witnessed him examining himself in the mirror for a solid five minutes. He didn’t want the random guy to think he was narcissistic. Then again, it’s not like I will ever see this person again.

“Um excuse me,” the stranger added once more, “are you Finland Campbell, the famous author?”

“Posssibblyy.” Finland smiled. “I’m amazed you recognized me. I’m not really a public figure.”

“Not a public figure? Your books are always bestsellers!” The man was excited now. “I always check them out from my library.”

“Aww, that’s so sweet! I always love when my fans talk to me.”

“I wasn’t sure it was you at first because I thought you were off in LA doing bestseller author things,” the man explained as he threw his paper towels away.

“I actually moved here to live with my family.” Finland tilted his head. “I haven’t seen them in a while. Well, it’s been a pleasure meeting you. I have some business to attend to.”

224 words
syrozenne
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

July 7th - Word war (w/ prompt)
233 words

(Yes, I understand this doesn't really make sense but I was rushed snwoanska)

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Tears strolled down her cheeks. “You can't be leaving,” she sniffed.

“Honey, I'll be back soon,” He rubbed her shoulders, pulling her into a tight hug.

Dad was leaving again, the third time this year; it was only July. ‘For work’ he would tell me. I always knew it would happen. He would leave again and again, until he wouldn't come back. They've been fighting on and off at night, thinking I wouldn't be able to hear them. Talk about moving.. divorcing.. sending me away with a relative.

“There's a lot you don't know.. about me, yourself.. the world.” Dad would repeat to my 10 year old confused self. “One day, you'll wake up and enter reality. Realize that some things can't stay forever, just like us”. This time, maybe he meant it. How he was never coming back.

Dad released her arms and turned to me. “Take good care of Syrene for me, eh? Make good food and look after each other. I may be gone for longer than I know.”

Dad was one of my best friends. For a long time, it was only me and him. My real mother died a few months after I was born. Two years ago, he married Syrene before an on and off relationship. I may had just turned 13 at the time, but I knew it would never last.

I.. hoped it never lasted.

Last edited by syrozenne (July 8, 2023 01:53:43)

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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Hello lovely enemies :> Cabin Wars! Write 2000 words as a cabin in the next 4 hours, or lose 1000 points. Extra challenge: Use three song titles in your writing! Every cabin member who does this can claim 25 points for their cabin! This applies for up to six campers (resulting in 150 points earned maximum.). Have fun! D

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As I traipsed through the lonely house, I wondered if anyone would ever come back here again. There was a blank space in my memory where that moment should have filled. The moment when I was last in this house. The moment where I last experienced happiness.

Squatting down and running my fingers through the ashes below, the memories began to flood back to me.

It was a bright, sunny day and the grass was yellow from lack of rain. Me and Mother were dripping with so much sweat that we might as well have watered the lawn with it. Giggles and laughter floated in the sticky, summer air: we loved being outside. It was all smiling memories until the fire started. The smell of smoke soon ended our laughter and so did the sight of orange flames appearing on the top of our house, which stood so tall and proud.

Frantic screams echoed around our neighbourhood and that's where my memory ended. It ended with terror, fear and fire.

I wandered over to the photograph of my mother that had survived, tears blurring my eyes.

"I got my driver's license, Mother!" I laughed through my endless stream of tears. I never thought I could laugh again. Why was I laughing? As much as confusion blanked my mind, I couldn't stop. I fell to the ground in yet more laughter. Then, I realised, there had been one part of my memory that had not come back to me yet……… I had started the fire.

I laughed more and more.

~~258 words~~
(Sorry I couldn't do more)
MokshithaVedarsh
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

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MokshithaVedarsh
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

(School Report- 589 words)
Biodiversity of Telangana:
Telangana State is known for its rich heritage in biological diversity distributed in 9 agro climatic regions.
Among the Flora, the state harbors a total of 2,800 families belonging to 1,051 groups under 185 families. This accounts for 16% of the Angiosperms known from India. Of these, 2,071 species belong to 150 families and 796 groups are Dicotyledons and 729 species belong to 255 groups and 35 families are Monocotyledons.
Among the Fauna, Telangana State is rich with 108 species of mammals that include Tiger, Leopard, Sloth Bear, Giant Squirrel, Hyena, Fox, Wild Dog, Wild Boar, Indian Bison(Gaur), Spotted Deer, Barking Deer, Black Buck, Four-horned Antelope, Blue Bull, Sambar, Mouse Deer, Honey Badger, Civets,Jungle Cats, Otter, Pangolin, Bats, Tree Shrew, Common Langur,etc. The Telangana State Biodiversity Board (TSBB) has listed about 25 flowering plants, 12 fishes, nine reptiles, one amphibian, 27 birds and 23 animals as species invading the ecosystems.
There are many types of forest types found in India like- Tropical Moist deciduous, Tropical Dry Deciduous, Tropical Semi-evergreen, Dry Savannah and Tropical Scrub Forests. The State also holds 12 Protected Areas, which include 7 Wildlife Sanctuaries and 3 National Parks and 2 Tiger Reserves.

Biodiversity of Jharkhand:
The state of Jharkhand is a part of biodiversity rich regions of India because of its diverse geology and climatic conditions. The forests for the most verified to the type – Tropical Dry Deciduous Forest, Moist Deciduous Forest, Dry Peninsular Forest and Dry Mixed Deciduous Forest. The Forests of the state form catchments of the three main rivers — Koel, Damodar and Subernekha. State is also rich in wildlife. The species found represent a wide range of families for both plants and animals. This can be attributed to a variety of topography and landforms (including water bodies). Jharkhand also took the initiative to construct Biodiversity Park for Indigenous Plants at Ranchi. It has a variety of plants like Sita Ashok, Sal, Baboor, Arar, Bel and so on. Although it covers only 7 % of the earth's land surface yet harbors more than 70% of the total plant species and between 40- 50 % of the total animal species. On the basis of our field survey, various species present in the Dumka, Hazaribag and Gumla districts of Jharkhand are kept separately in five categories for giving more attention towards their conservation on the forest land and if necessary their large scale plantation on forest land. While enlisting the species in various categories the comparison between present resources survey finding and list of plants available in previous working plan of respective divisions have been taken into account. The species nominated into the appropriate categories.
Extinct: The taxon species which are no longer present in the wild, kept in this category.
Endangered: The taxon species whose numbers have been reduced to a critical level due to habitat destruction leading to immediate danger of extinction.
Vulnerable: species whose numbers are decreasing due to over exploitation, extensive destruction of habitat and other environmental disturbances and till now no assured security measure applied to arrest the adverse throughout the district and is facing high risk of extinction in the medium to future. It is not endangered.
Rare: The species small in number but no immediate threat on the size of population in the district are kept in this category.
Out of Danger: The species, whose numbers are relatively secured due to application of various conservation measures kept in this category.
These categories proved to be helpful as Jharkhand successfully Protected Endangered Species.



For Cabin War


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Sunii_days
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

woo weekly. i don't like how i wrote anything here. oh well this isn't school I'm not getting graded. it was fun anyways! doing this really put into perspective how i would probably enjoy school if grades weren't a thing.


part 1, literal interpretation.
it is raining, and the water puddles all over the ground in those pools of flashing color. you can spot red and orange in there, and there goes a dash of yellow running by, a reflection of the girl in the world above. she's running, hands over head and eyes straight forward, and the droplets turn yellow around her.

she glances down, her eyes are brown. there is a umbrella. it is folded in, and matches her boots. (red, a sparky kind that stays bright.)
she opens the umbrella. (the rain is grey.)
sun shines down on her. (the rest do not get sun.)
her eyes are wide, her mouth gapes open. her raincoat is not yellow. (the word is grey.)

and she dashes through the rain, smile candied, bright and clear and sunlit.
and so the world stays grey, the rain falls. you cannot see the colors in the water.

you can spot grey and blue there, in the ground, and you can see the man walking by, kite over head, day presumably ruined. you can see a mother, a child, a umbrella not big enough for the two of them, the rain stays grey around us.

the sky is all colored with the rainbow, and you cannot quite make out the sun yet, but you can see yellow, and before long the sun makes it's way through and shoos away the blots on its page.

eyes to the sky, gasps and golden light, and the world is more yellow than the girl now, and you can see the rain is gone, and you can see the world outside of grey.
the girl hangs her head, hair falls flat, arms down. the umbrella is folded in now, its sun is unneeded.

the girl stands alongside shadows of people, figures, barely. they are waiting on the sidewalk. the girl stares up, squints.
it's almost too bright here now, too much.
she opens her umbrella, there is no rain. she holds it above her head. (it rains.)




part 2, symbolism with food.
i feel like i failed to the write the symbolism well. i never was the one to make rice, i can't say much on that. actually, is rice ‘culturally significant’ or is it just a personal me thing. is there like a specific kind of rice. i dunno. i suppose if i did want to make this more realistic to my experiences i could've had them wait for five minutes for it to cool haha. that would've ruined the Joe Failing At Eating While Also Failing At Friendship symbolism though. oh well, i wrote this at like. 5am. at least it's done.


joe looks surprisingly sad. wet. perhaps even pathetic.
'god, you look sad, wet, and pathetic.' ana informs him.
'okay.'
she scrutinizes him. he's sitting on her couch-soaking wet, she might add. his eyes are staring dead ahead at the wall. he seems to be even worse than he was last time she saw him.
'what.' he glances at her.
'what-i should be asking that? what in the world do you find so fascinating about /my/ wall.'
'you painted it. black.'
'and why, in any universe, would that matter?'
joe rolls his eyes, glances at the wall behind her. this wall, like every other wall in the house aside from the black one, is painted a pale blue.
'do you want to go back out in the rain?'
'what did i say? all i did was make an observation-is your wall not black?' he gestures towards the wall. ana is leaving the room.
'hey-hey, where are you going,'
'i made rice. dinner.'
joe blinks. ‘dinner.’
ana's eyes light up. ‘yeah, though i suppose you haven’t made that in a while, considering you're too much of a failure to make your own meals.'
'hey. not cool. and besides, i have a house. and everything. i am a functional adult, ana.'
ana pours the rice in bowls. steam erupts all over her face.
'the same house that allegedly got burned down by a fire-breathing dragon?'
'in my defense. i don't have a defense but i did have a house.'
'mmm. sure.' ana sets a bowl on her table for him. she leaves chopsticks. ‘that’s for you.'
joe picks up his utensils, scoops a bite. only to realize he did not recieve a spoon.
'what,'
ana smirks. she has spoons, of course. but this is funnier.
'hey. hey wait. this is a bit unfair-are you eating without me?'
she makes a point of taking her bites slowly. this is very petty, but she thinks she's allowed to be petty right now.
'look, just do it. that easy. you wanna eat or not?'
she watches him fail a few times. it's less fun than she thought after the first couple of tries.
'so. what happened.' small talk works well. though whether an explanation of how his house burned down is small talk or not is debatable.
joe sighs. ‘i mean, not much. a teenager broke into my home. a adult dressed in lord of the rings cosplay broke in through the other door. a dragon burned my house down.’ he exclaims with delight-he's managed to keep the rice from falling out for a second. it does so afterwards. his face falls too. ‘it’s nothing special, but i can't find somebody to fix the thing this time.'
'wow.'
'why are you mad at me?' it comes out of nowhere.
ana laughs. joe does not.
'well. for one, you're annoying, and i don't really know you. you're just some friend-of-a-friend. and then you showed up at dinner in the middle of the rain. and ruined my couch. rather than going to anybody else.'
the rice slips out. joe sighs.
'that's it?'
it doesn't sound like much, actually, when he puts it like that. then again, he was very annoying. when they were teenagers.
oh. that is a bit petty.
'well, i suppose it's fair enough.' joe shrugs.
'you really think so?' ana tilts her head, smirks.
'i mean. i don't care much, so.'
'you really did get worse, huh?'
'yeah-hey, look, i got it,' joe holds up his chopsticks for her to see. she claps mockingly. ‘good for you! congratulations. i am in absolute awe of your power.’
'you got worse too.' joe takes a bite. he smiles.





part 3. motif.
wooo i rewrote a scene from narnia with zero memory of narnia. anyways. i do not remember what happened in that book. i think i recall everybody speaking very politely. i think i may have butchered lucy's personality. i cannot remember the faun's name. i think the parents were away? oh well, this isn't meant to be accurate. not sure if i used the motif right.


lucy turned around suddenly, hair twirling along-and then she let out a little gasp, and right in front of her, lucy discovered, is a deer-man.
'oh! hello,' she greeted the deer-man, making sure to hold her hand out for shaking. he shook her hand politely. ‘i’m very sorry. you surprised me, is all. my name is lucy.' she sneaked a glance at his legs, which are not human, but the legs of a deer. how very strange.
'i am a faun.' the faun took a little bow. he smiled, chuckled nervously. ‘if it is not impolite, may i ask what a child your age is doing out here, in this weather?’
lucy paused. she glanced at the lamp-post. beyond there, back from where she came, felt safer, more secure, but without the bright falling snow and the warm light. still, the faun and the snow feels unfamiliar, and lucy could not remember if mother had said anything about situations such as these. she had been warned against strangers, but did that apply here?
'i didn't mean to end up here.'
'oh,' the faun nods. ‘your parents must be looking.’
lucy hesitates. ‘i don’t think they are. my siblings, though-' she stops. ‘i don’t think they are either.'
'ah.' the faun stares up at the lamp-post. ‘well. you shouldn’t stand out here for too long. would you like to come to my home?' he tilted his head, smiled reassuringly. ‘we could have tea-i’ve been waiting for someone to have tea with for a while now, i wouldn't mind.'
'oh-really?' lucy's face lights up a bit. ‘i’d like to come, i think.'
the faun nods, and holds out his left hand for her to hold. with his right, he points east of the lamp-post. ‘my house is that way.’
lucy takes his hand. for a creature who is only half a human, he is very kind. she glances back one last time at the lamp-post. it feels strange, doing this, like she is crossing a border finally, going over the fence she's been staring at for too long. feels like she's broken through something.
there is a odd silence, aside from the sound of their shoes in the snow. lucy grips the faun's hand, he stares ahead. it feels very odd walking through this place she does not know, and she can still feel the golden light illuminating the way, a new path, a strange one.
the snow falls, bright, pure. the snow goes just over her shoes, and there is snow nestled near her ankles.
lucy glances back.
'is something wrong?' the faun asks, tilting his head.
'huh-no, it's nothing.'
lucy does not look back again.





part 4. interpretation.
i failed miserably at making this any better than the first interpretation. i don't know if i expressed my ideas well enough. probably would've been easier to write a essay lol.


there is a world of bright colors, and a girl dashes through, hands over head, sending water splashing about with each step. and there, you can see her raincoat in the reflection, yellow. and there, it is gone, and so is she.

and in each reflection, the colors flash by as she does, until they don't, all of a sudden.
the girl has halted to a stop.

she is looking at a umbrella, set against a wall of stone and bricks. her eyes are the sort of bright, wide eyes of a child, her mouth pushed slightly open. the rain falls grey, the sky is blue.

she looks down at the umbrella.

the girl opens it slowly, half-unsure. there is the soft pitters and patters in the air.
the umbrella opens above her head-and there, the rain has stopped falling around her, and it's almost like she has a little world of sun all to herself, a curtain of hope and light. the world around her is grey. the world is strangely brown.

and so, what else is there to do but to enjoy the sunshine? she skips, smile golden, droplets splashing by.
the world is blue. shades of sea, of tears. the rest hold hands above head, try their best. it's all strangely drenched in despair.

the sun has been clouded over now, for a while, and you cannot quite make out the bright gold behind the mess of a rainbow seeping into itself. the most yellow the world has is the girl.

still though, it's ending, like most things do, and you can almost make out the sun, until it's not almost, and until the sun is all to be found in the sky.
and there are gasps and smiles and eyes turned to the clouds.
there is no rain. the sky is blue. the world is yellow.

and the world is hope and light and it all seems brighter. but the girl has stopped, eyes cast down, umbrella folded in.

she stands on the sidewalk, waiting. amongst her are silhouettes, shadows of people she can't care much for, but they're yellow too, the same color she is, the same color the world was not before. gold and sun-soaked.

the girls squints up at the sun, pout pushing on her lips. in defiance, almost, she opens the umbrella again. perhaps she hopes it will make her brighter again.

the umbrella opens above her head-and there, a pouring of water, a blue of the sea.
MokshithaVedarsh
Scratcher
93 posts

swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

The Two Young detectives.
Once upon a time there lived two sisters named Siri and Devi. Siri was 2 years older than Devi. Both Siri and Devi loved and were good at solving mysteries. They often used to help others in their colony to find their lost things, if any.

One fine day, They were playing in the park joyfully but they spotted a Thin, pale, weak old woman sad and was looking very tense. They went to her and asked why she was sad and she said, “ I have worked very hard for a month to earn money, today my master gave me money and I lost it. What will my son and I eat for a whole month?” Siri and Devi listened very carefully and decided to help that old woman.

They said together, “ Hello, I am Siri and this is Devi, I think we can help you find your money but first you have to answer my question.” The old woman said, “ Sure dears, Please, you're welcome to ask any question regarding this.”

Siri and Devi started their investigation. Siri asked, " Where did you last keep it?” The old woman said, “ I kept it somewhere near the wall.” Devi asked, “ Grandma, can you remember where you kept it exactly?” Old woman replied, “ hmm. I can’t remember as I am too old so I don’t remember things much.” Devi said, “ it’s fine, we will just look for some clues near the wall.”

They started to look everywhere but nowhere to be found. Fortunately they found a small piece of cloth from the purse the old woman was carrying. They examined and found that it was a type of chemical. They didn't know what it was so they started to look everywhere they could for that.

They were tensed about where to find it as they promised the old lady to find it. Then his Mother came and saw them looking worried and exhausted from all the searching, so she said, “ Siri and Devi, what is making you so worried and tired?” Siri and Devi told the old lady how they promised to find but only got a clue of a chemical. Her mother asked, “ Can you show it to me? I can help you.” Siri and Devi showed the piece of cloth which holds the chemical.

Her mother took it to her lab to commence the tests to find which chemical it was. Her eyes were worried and shocked to know which chemical it was. She told her children, “ The chemical is nitric acid which is used to test gold and the old woman's coins were made with copper. Solve this mystery and be safe. I have to go now as I have an important project to complete.”

The girls were confused and Siri gave a grin and siad, “ It was gold, a special type I think and it was covered with copper to make its appearance like a normal copper coin. They went back to the old lady and said, “ ma’am, your chemical was stolen by someone. It was because your metal is a special type of gold metal which was covered with copper.” The old woman was shocked and pleaded with them to find it and siri and devi did just that, they went to find the fingerprint to their father who was a Police Commissioner.

His father found the fingerprint, it was a thief who was very sneaky and then Siri went to his place and in a minute she fought all the assistants of the sneaky thief and reached him. He was shocked and Devi investigated the stolen purse. The thief didn’t utter a single word but was forced by Siri so he told everything he knew.
It was so that there was a Leader named Kingman who wanted to rule the entire world and be the richest man in the entire world. He started to know about a metal which can produce endless gold but only when it is mixed with Sapphire with a particular amount.

The girls were astonished and threatened him to tell them their hideout and he told in a rusty voice, “ It is near the Suvarnagiri lake.”

They girls went there and sneaked into the hideout. With a blink of an eye, Siri and Devi fought all the people in the hideout and went to Kingman.

They said in a clear voice, “ Kingman, your game is over. Now give me back the coins. You're under arrest!” The Kingman gave a wicked laugh and said, “ My game is always on and see the melody of money. If we sell the gold I’ll get 100 million as it can produce that much worth gold in a single day. See 100,000,000(stretching his voice) I’ll give you 40% of the share. The girls said, “ We will never-never be a person like you. We like to help others and earn money through our own hard work just like our parents.

The Kingman furiously called many men to attack them. Siri and Devi were kids. How can they fight such a strong army of men? They collected all their courage and stood there ready to fight for justice.

Just then, In the smoke came an army of policemen and his father was leading them. A fierce battle took place and as history says, “ always good wins” Siri and Devi won and Kingman was locked in the Jail for 15 long years as he had many other crimes committed and he felt ashamed and guilty for himself.

The machine was destroyed and the old woman was given a lot of money and his son studied hard and became an officer and started to serve the country. The old woman was proud and thanked Siri and Devi

Siri and Devi were very happy to help the old lady and were given a medal of young detectives medal by the Mayor of their city for such bravery and intelligence. They cracked a problem which big officers were not able to do!

Moral: One should always be kind and helpful to others. One should never steal anything from others. One should always think wisely and solve a problem.

Delta_doodles
Scratcher
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swc megathread ☼ july swc '23

Weekly 1

(3426/1500)
All I have to say about the word count is that, in my defence, I wrote this during cabin wars.

Part 1 - literal interpretation (319/300)
This comic - https://www.behance.net/gallery/580916/Silent-Comics/modules/3385919 (the link goes to the first page, couldn’t figure out how to link the whole thing)

The bulbs swayed on the tree’s limbs as the wind rustled through them. The warm sunlight coaxing open their tightly clasped petals, revealing the gem inside. The petals curled upward, away from the bars, the blue jewels gently reflecting the light.
The Boatman drew up to the edge of the island and produced his sickle. Carefully selecting the fruits, he sliced them free. Finished with his task, he placed his load on his prized boat and took his leave.

The girl was delighted when her mother approached the Boatman’s spot, littered with the strange egg like fruit. She jumped for joy, trying her best not to detach from her legs when her mother chose the ripest, bluest fruit and the exchange was made. She felt a rush of warmth when the egg fruit was put into place, a piece of her lost making her finally whole again.

She could now play with the other children who had their own gems. She eagerly awaited the hatching of her egg. And when it finally did hatch, it felt like her life was finally beginning. She felt powerful and independent, finally her own person. She felt free.

She grew up strong and confident and beautiful. She married her best friend, their birds sang songs to each other what their lips couldn’t speak. It grew to be as poised and elegant as she was. Full of love at the sight of her first born child. Full of wisdom at the sight of her first wrinkle.

When she climbed the mountain for the last time, she was filled not with regret, but with a sense of peace. Her bird sang songs of freedom and sorrow in equal parts. Her life was good and she was ready. Her bird broke free from its cage, free for the first time in its life, free to fly wherever it pleased.

And as its life began, another's ended.


Part 2 - Symbolism in food (1302/400)
Used OCs, hope that’s ok. Does an apple count as culturally significant?

She was cold again.
She was cold again, and she was alone. She was cold and the ground was hard. She was cold and her stomach hurt. She was cold and she missed-
“Stop!” Raya said through gritted teeth. She didn’t need to be feeling any of those things right now. All she needed to feel was…
Was what?
A sense of accomplishment for escaping?
Pride in being the chosen one?
Her emotions felt like the icebergs in the northern sea, hard as rocks and submerged beneath the waves. If she dared feel anything other than the rock hard ground pressing up to her back, the breezy wind against her face and the godsdang cold, the iceberg would burst into a million pieces. Was that even how icebergs worked?
Why was she on the ground?
Slowly, she dragged herself up so that her elbows propped her up and blinked her bleary eyes open and forced down her panic when she couldn’t make anything out.
A blur of white and pastel blue stuck out among the blurry white and grey snow. She couldn’t see much beyond that. The slur seemed to be bending over something.
“Zeph?” she croaked, and her voice was just gone, hoarse and scraping past the rocks in her throat.
The blur yelped, casting aside whatever they were looking at and turning, presumably, to face her.
“Oh, hi!” Raya winced from the loud noise, “You’re awake!”
Was she asleep? Her brain felt like it was stuffed with cotton, but she didn’t normally think that falling asleep resulted in feeling weak and dizzy, not being able to see and being so hungry it hurt.
Hungry.
“Zephyr.” she said slowly, “Did I pass out?”
“Huh?” the godling probably looked confused. Their face was just a smudge of white with green dots so it was hard to tell. “I dunno. You kind of just… flopped over and mumbled something about being tired. I thought you needed sleep. Mortals need sleep right?”
Okay, this conversation then. “Yes mortals need sleep, no that was not sleep,” she tried to get into a sitting position, only for waves of dizziness to send her crashing back to the ground. She surrendered to the pain, curling her hands around her stomach and wetting a tongue against her dry lips.
“Oh,” was all Zephyr said, uncharacteristically.
“I just need a minute,” she said, knowing that she needed far more than a minute. Knowing that she couldn’t take that long, because they needed to get away. Zephyr couldn’t go back. She couldn't go-
Could she?
She was too tired to be having thoughts about that
Zephyr said something that couldn't get past the fog in her ears. She blinked her eyes open, not realising she’d closed them.
“What?”
“When was the last time you ate?” the repeated.
“…What?” she said again.
“Mortals need food right? They break it up and use it to power their body or something? You don’t just get energy from the world right?”
It took her a minute to process the implications of that sentence. Yes, she was hungry. SHe was really, really hungry. But a good soldier would push through that and survive. Ziya would want her to-
“Do you want food?”
It was such a simple question.
“…yes” she finally said, aware that she sounded like a weak, small child.
“Okay!” Zephyr bounced up, pleased to have something to do, “Stay here, I’ll get you some!”
And before she could protest or ask if they even knew what edible food was, they were gone.
And she lay there, alone. Alone and cold.
Were they even coming back?
Technically, they didn’t need her the way she needed them. Raya was nothing but a deadweight at the moment, and she wouldn't entirely blame them for abandoning her.
Please don’t leave me.
She quelled the childish thought before it could tip the iceberg over.
Her eyes were just starting to close again when they returned.
“I come bearing gifts!” and gods, why were they always so loud?
She felt hands on her, and if she was herself she would have been up and running already. Instead, she let herself be hoisted up and propped up against something rough but less coarse than the ground. A tree maybe.
“Here,” something round and hard was placed into her hand and, like someone with either no common sense or a death wish, she bit into it.
It crunched and exploded into juicy flavour in her mouth. It tasted sweet, but sharp at the same time. At this point, it felt like eating sunshine. Already the pangs in her stomach had gone quiet and her vision was returning.
It was some sort of red fruit. Almost round shaped but not quite, with yellowish innards. She’d seen it before, somewhere. But the taste and feel was unfamiliar
“I found it growing on a tree,” Zephyr explained, “And I figured since most things that grow on trees are safe to eat, I could just give it to you.”
She made a mental note to warn them about poisonous fruits later.
“Thanks,” was all she said, “I’m feeling better.”
“That’s great!” she could properly see now, and they were under a tree, “Do you want me to get more?”
“Maybe later,” she’d heard that you shouldn’t overeat while coming out of starvation, “They’re called apples, I think. I’ve only seen them in books before. They don’t grow in the northlands.”
“Nothing grows in the North,” Zephyr said with a shrug, before lapsing into uncharacteristic silence.
Silence was cold.
“Do you want a bite?” she blurted out. Wait, what was she thinking? Why would she share her limited resources with someone she barely knew? Keep your guard up, trust no one.
Yet her hand still stretched forward, offering them the apple.
“Immortals don’t need to eat,” they pointed out.
“What do you have mouths for then?”
“To talk, obviously.” they were still eyeing the apple.
“Just take a bite,” she said, “Just to see how it tastes.”
They took it and stared at it for a few seconds, as if trying to work out how it worked. Then they took far too tiny a nibble.
“Oh!” instantly, the air currents swivelled and Zephyr was suspended upward, floating in front of her. “Oh wow! I thought mortal food was gross.”
“I’ll pretend not to hear that,” she said, settling on the tree.
“It tastes like… it tastes like… friendship!” they declared, “Friendship apples!”
Raya snorted. Still, part of her found that accurate. Not that she and Zephyr were friends or anything.
“Can you… get more?” she asked, already tensing up at the chance of a refusal.
“Sure!” they said, already ready to whizz away, “Be right back! Don’t go anywhere!”
And then they were gone. And Raya slowly finished the apple in her hand, and for the first time she felt warm.

She ran. Trying not to fall into a tumble down a mountain, as fast as she dared to go.
Her breath came out in gasps, choked noises mixed with the steaming air that might have been sobs. Sweat dripped down her forehead.
She was tired, her legs hurt, she couldn't breath past the paralysing fear and she was alone.
She was alone.
She stopped, gasping for breath and hunching over. She was so tired. She slumped against a tree, forcing herself to breathe.
She missed her friends, she missed Olive and Orion. She missed Aiken. She even missed Naini. She missed Zephyr.
“Get.. get it together,” she gasped, “Get it together!”
She forced herself to breathe the still stifling air. Deep breath in, slow breath out. In and out.
There was something on the tree branch above her head. Something roundish and bright red.
Friendship apple.
The iceberg tipped and she burst out sobbing.


Part 3 - Motifs (1132/400)
Motif - the lamp-post, Chronicles of Narnia

Lucy shivered and tightened her grip on the umbrella, the sudden gust of wind ruffling her golden hair. Rain lashed down on the cobblestones, casting the world into a haze. Her cheeks were wet.
She walked forward slowly, splashing the wet ground.
She liked to think she could hear the raindrops singing to themselves. She once knew a place where that was possible.
With a sudden jerk, her foot slipped out from under her, sending her toppling against a tree she could barely see in the rain.
“Pardon me,” she said. The tree said nothing, just stood there resolutely.
“Right,” Lucy said, shaking her head, “Right of course.”
Because she was in a place where trees didn’t talk. Where she was not a queen but a schoolgirl. She was on earth, not Narnia.
Lucy had taken to the change a bit better than her siblings (Peter still had a habit of challenging others to duels, and Edmund had to re-learn the rules of chess since Narnia played it quite a bit differently) but she still had moments like this.
Carefully she resumed her course, wondering vaguely how much more rain her poor umbrella could take and wondering if all this had been a terrible idea.
A few years ago, Lucy had never thought of herself as the type to run away. She’s been a good little girl, with a keen enough imagination to keep herself entertained when life got hard. Then she’d wandered into a world in a wardrobe and nothing had ever been the same again.
Which led to running away. The ‘real world’ was just so awfully boring and Lucy couldn’t stop longing for Narnia.
Susan had called it childish.
Which eventually led to her not-plan.
Lucy Pevensie, a child prone to flights of fancy, was not a particularly good plan maker. The idea of running away enticed her, but she didn’t have much of a way of going about it. Which led to her being here, apologising to trees, caught in the rain with nothing but a broken umbrella.
She sighed, cursing herself for being herself. She blinked away the water on her face and rubbed her eyes. She could barely see her hand if she held it out in front of her.
She slipped again, this time catching herself before she fell, but the resulting stumble made her lose her barings.
Lucy was lost.
Lucy Pevensie the Valiant, second Queen of Narnia and Aslan’s favourite, was utterly hopelessly lost in a land not her own.
A vague shimmer of light caught her attention and she nearly fell over again. The light was golden, and hovered in the rain just above her head.
“Magic!” she cried, “It must be!”
Her heart thudded in her chest as she stumbled towards the light. Her not-plan had succeeded, and fate had come her way. Surely this was it, wasn’t it? Surely it was time for her to finally be home again? She broke out into a run, umbrella falling on the ground behind her as she reached for the light-
And collided with a metal pole.
She screamed in surprise as she fell back, landing on the wet, muddy road.
It was a lamp-post.
For a minute, she remembered the lamp-post in Narnia, how its warm glow had welcomed her as she stepped into the snowy world of magic and wonder.
But this was an ordinary lamp-post, like any in london. Glowing with an electric light and made in a factory.
And there was no magic, and Lucy was just a girl, soaking wet and sitting on a road in the rain.
“Well,” she said, “Well then,”
Without warning, even to herself, she burst out sobbing. Being denied what you want most in the world is incredibly painful and Lucy wanted something desperately.
“I-I want to go home!” she sobbed, “Take me back, please.”
The lamp-post did nothing.
“Take me back!” she screamed, pounding her fist on the unyielding metal.
There’s no need to be rude, little one.
She nearly sobbed with relief, for a second, she’d believed that the magic hadn’t worked.
“I’m sorry,” she said, wiping her face, “Can I please go to Narnia,”
You need only ask, child.
The voice sounded like Aslan, even from realms away.
“Thank you,” she said, “Thank you, thank you ever so much. I’ll just… fetch Peter and Edmund. And I suppose Susan should come as well. I can.. Telephone probably, wait a-”
You misunderstand.
“Excuse me?” she blinked, confused.
Only you shall be permitted into Narnia. Only you have sought it out, so only you will come.
“But that’s not fair!” she protested, “The others would have too, it’s just that they’re… well they adjusted. They’re better at being adults.”
The voice said nothing.
“I can’t leave them can I?” she glanced up at the lamp-post, still so normal and un-magic looking.
You must if you wish to return to Narnia.
“But without them… it isn’t home.”
Then where is home?
Twelve years ago, Lucy had seen a lamp-post like this one in a magical world, and the first thing she’d done was fetch her siblings. The days of it being just the four of them were more magic than anything.
Later, when they were kings and queens, when Susan and Edmund were gone on diplomacy missions and Peter was off being king… she’d been more lonely than ever on earth.
She didn’t want to be alone, without them even if it meant having Narnia back.
So what did she want?
“I want to go home,” she said to the lamp-post.
It said nothing.
“I want to go home, but… maybe I’m already home. Maybe I’m home or almost there anyway.”
The worst part of Narnia had always been the fights with her siblings.
“I… want my family. Back the way it was. Back before Peter became all hard and Susan left and Ed started to forget-” she choked back another sob, “Home is right here isn’t it? Just not quite.”
The voice said nothing.
“I ran away because I didn’t want to have to…” she shook her head, “I… I think I understand now. I can fix this.” she stared at the lamp, “Thank you.”
And then she was gone.

It was only later, after she had apologised and a much needed conversation had been started. After her siblings had apologised and promised they would keep Narnia’s memory alive without letting it consume them. After they had promised to try and be less distant, more like a family.
After all that, she wondered if the voice was really Aslan’s.
Then she realised that the voice had been her own. The voice was her own, and the path was her own and Lucy Pevensie was ready for the real world.


Part 4 - Rewrite (673/400)

The tree is where it always began.
It stood proud and tall on the island, limbs stretching towards the sky. The bulbs swayed on its branches as the wind sent them shivering. The sunlight coaxed the bulbs open, their gentle white petals curling away to reveal the shimmering blue seed inside.

If the tree is where it all began, the boatman is the deliverer.
His oars slipped into the flowing ocean with nary a sound as his boat cut through the water. He drew his boat up to the edge of the island and climbed out. Selecting the bulbs was a task he had done since the beginning of time and he wasted none of it today. He gathered his load onto his boat and departed.

The bulbs lay on the dusty ground, waiting.
The boatman kept his watchful eye on them and pretended he couldn’t sense their impatience as he lay on his mat. His other eye, he kept open for customers. This eye fell on a mother and daughter making their way over to him. The girl was still frozen, the gap between her head and legs allowing her to jump far too high in the air with excitement. With a smile, the woman indicated the best of his stock. With a refreshing lack of haggling over price, the match was made.

She held as still as possible when her mother approached her with the bulb. She wanted to jump for joy because she was so excited or run away because she was afraid it would hurt.
It didn’t hurt.
She had always been in pieces and this made her Whole.

And so life begins.

She met him while playing football. Even though she was only newly Whole she could still outrun him and he only kept up because of his skill with the ball, which she grudgingly admitted was considerable. And she felt the gem in her new chest twitch and shiver whenever they locked eyes.

She knew that she would grow of course now that she was no longer frozen, but maybe she wasn’t prepared for it to be so fast. Her hair grew out and her legs turned longer.

And then it hatched.

There was a bird in the cage of her chest now. It took some getting used to, of course. It had its own moods, its own voice. It felt like she had been blind all her life and was only just starting to see the world beyond childlike innocence.

And so the girl grew.

She grew to be poised and clever and beautiful. Always quick with a witty comeback. She fell in love with the boy she played football with as a little girl, or perhaps she flew in love because that was more like what it felt like. Their birds sang to each other, and only grew silent with joy when their first child was born. She reached her prime, she was everything she ever dreamed of being.

And still she grew.

Her skin turned saggy, her eyes began to glaze and her teeth went crooked. She grew more and more tired with every step. And her bird. It grew bigger and bigger and more beautiful until the bars of the cage could keep it a prisoner no longer.

The bird longed to be free.

And so she climbed the mountain from which none returned. She felt equal parts deep sorrow and liberating peace, for her life had been full. Full of love for her family, full of wisdom from all she had learnt, full of joy and hardship and beauty. Holding the memories tight to her for one last time, she took a deep breath and set them free.

And her bird broke free from its cage, free for the first time in its life to fly, free and ready for its life to begin.

And as its life began, hers ended.

Eventually, it too would return to the tree.

It starts at the tree and ends at the mountain, before starting anew.


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Cabin Wars <3

Word count - 588 words

Centrioles
Found only in animal cells, centrioles are organelles that are made up of bunches of microtubules that assist the cell during cell division. When the cell is about to divide, the chromosomes travel in the microtubules of the centrioles as it heads to either end of the nucleus for the beginning of cell division.

Cilia & Flagella
Only in animal cells, cilia are tiny hairs found on the exterior surface of the cell membrane that propel the cell and move substances around the cell away/towards the cell. Along with the flagella, long wavy structures that project out in a whip-like motion, the cilia assists with the locomotion of the cell - enabling the organism to move in its environment.

Cytoplasm
Cytoplasm is a jelly-like substance that takes up most of the cell volume. It is mostly transparent as over 80% of the cytoplasm is made up of water, while the other 20% is composed of salt particles, and a variety of organic molecules. The cytoplasm's main function is to suspend and support the organelles within the cell. Other than this, the cytoplasm also helps to transport materials, like hormones, through the cell, while dissolving harmful substances that enter the cell. Numerous cellular processes occur within the cytoplasm, some of which include: protein synthesis, mitosis, and meiosis, that helps the cell survive.

Cytoskeleton
The cytoskeleton, a large network of protein particles and filaments, is an internal structure within the cell that helps to maintain cell structure and enables the cell to carry out its functions and cellular processes.

Endoplasmic Reticulum
The endoplasmic reticulum (ER), consisting of two portions, the rough ER and the smooth ER, is the largest organelle within the cell. Made up of a network of membranes, the ER is a major site of protein synthesis, where chemical compounds are stored, packaged, and processed. The main difference between the rough and smooth ER is that the rough ER is studded with ribosomes, while the smooth ER is not.

Golgi Apparatus
The golgi apparatus, sometimes referred to as the golgi complex, is a membrane-bound organelle found in eukaryotes. It is a structure located adjacent to the nucleus and endoplasmic reticulum (ER), shaped like gummy worms, that processes and packages proteins and lipid (fat) particles received from the ER. The proteins first enter these packaged proteins are then transported to their final destinations: lysosomes, the cell membrane, or secretion.

Lysosomes
Lysosomes are membrane-bound organelles that contain over 50 different digestive enzymes (Cooper, n.d.) to break down a variety of lipids, carbohydrates, and waste particles. They work as a cell’s very own digestive system, assisting in excretion, to limit infections and diseases within the cell.

Mitochondria
The mitochondria, also known as the powerhouse of the cell, are organelles that use oxygen to convert nutrients into energy for the cell. The energy produced by the mitochondria is stored in a small molecule called the adenosine triphosphate (ATP). The number of mitochondria in a cell varies from cell to cell, as some cells may require more energy to complete their assigned task than others.

Nucleus
The nucleus, the control center of the cell, is a membrane-bound organelle that contains the genetic information (DNA) of the cell, that tells all the organelles what they need to do. They contain the individual cells’ chromosomes, rod-like structures that assist with cell division, and regulate cellular activities such as: metabolism, excretion, etc. It is also where RNA is made from DNA strands found within the chromosomes in the nucleus
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Eevee's Writing Archive <3

Hello! I'm Eevee and welcome to my archive of writings for SWC July 2023! I am a (backup) camper in Poetry Lighthouse this session with Finley and Niko! Feel free to leave critiques on my profile

Table of Context
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Word goal: 32,994/30,000
- Checkpoint #1: 7/7 5,000
- Checkpoint #2 7/10 10,000
- Checkpoint #3 7/14 15,000
- Checkpoint #1: 7/17 20,000
- Checkpoint #2 7/21 25,000
- Checkpoint #3 7/23 30,000

~Dailies~

July 2
July 12
July 14
July 16
July 17
July 18-19
July 20
July 25-26
July 28

~Weeklies~

Week 1
Week 3
Week 4

~Word Wars~

TBD :>

~Other~

TBD
TBD
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Weekly #1
7/8-9/2023
300 words

Part One:

For the first part of this weekly, we’ll be looking at silent comic strips (https://behance.net/gallery/580916/Silent-Comics) for inspiration. (If this website is blocked, go here (https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/870119119/) to find silent comic strips that have been uploaded to a scratch project). Browse through the comic strips and select either a whole comic or singular panel. Alternatively, you can visit https://www.onceuponapicture.co.uk/ and select an image (or multiple, if you want to somehow connect them together) (scratch-based version for onceuponapicture: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/764339470).

Examine your selected silent comic strip (panel) or images. What are the key details that are popping out to you? How are the frames connected? Pay close attention to your comic strip or image, and write 300 words on your literal interpretation of the events going on. You’ve got this!

I'm using #4-5 pages of the behance silent comics.
300 words

A elderly man sits at the beach, with a pipe in his hand. He's surrounded by multiple fish in clear containers, most of them stacked on a orange rug. He seems to be wondering what to do with all of these fish, which are seen in a variety of colors. Green, blue, orange… In the distance, near the horizon line, there is a figure seen coming towards him. The figure comes up to the man. They are pointing and asking the man about the fish bowls. They seem interested in one of the fish. The figure is seen having a body only neck down. They pick up one of the spherical glass containers with a red fish inside and tries it on their neck. The fish seems a bit startled by being picked up ang getting a larger body. The man is glad to be giving the fish away to someone else. The figure, pleased with their new head, leaves the man and goes to the ocean. Eventually, they start wading into the ocean. The fish makes up the eyes on the head. They may be made up of a steel or alternatively, water with a protective covering, but the form is identifiable as body. They tread into the ocean, wading with their knees into the water. They continue to go in deeper, with only the head, shoulders, and the upper torso is seen above water. Soon, they are fully submerged, not able to be seen from above water. They dive deeper into the ocean. Less light is seen as they continue to swim deeper, getting farther from the surface. Finally, they come upon life in the ocean. A flock of chirping birds are seen flying through the sea beneath the figure and the fish stares at them in wonder.

Part Two:

The second part of the weekly covers symbolism, about which you can learn more about in Sprout's fantastic symbolism workshop! https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/550221272/

After finishing the workshop, pick a culturally significant dish and write a scene in which one character gives it to another character. Keep in mind that this dish should be significant in a way that emphasises their conversation. Write 400 words for this prompt, either as fanfiction or with your original characters. Have fun!

400 words (Extra blurbs: 93 words)
(For some context, Adhira is a ten year old Indian-American and Eevee, particularly Real-fi Eevee the connoisseur, is a 19 year old Korean-American. For the sake of this story, they're neighbors.)
(Also July 7th is Adhira's canonical birthday!! <33)

“Just need to add in a pinch of salt and we should be done!” Eevee announces, stirring the soup with a wooden spoon. She pulls the spoon up to her lips and blows before taking a sip. “Mm, perfect. You wanna try, Ira?”
Adhira shakes her head, “It'll be a surprise when we /really/ eat it.”
“Fine with me!”
Eevee pulls out two blue bowls and starts scooping in the seaweed soup. She asks, “Are you okay spending your birthday here with me? I know that you love being around your family.”
“Dad's not in town and Mama's at work. Grandma Pat is always taking care of Aadrik; I don't want to give her more to do. Besides,” she lets out a cheeky grin, “I love spending time over here and eating your food! Uh- And learning more about your culture.”
Eevee laughs, “Okay, little missy. Let's get these bowls to the table.”
——–
“What's this called again?” Adhira asks, poking at the seaweed with her spoon.
“Miyeok kuk; it means seaweed soup. Quite literally,” Eevee responds, taking another bite.
Adhira stares at the bowl, stirring it with her spoon. “Why are we eating this in the middle of summer? It's literally 70 degrees outside!”
“Well, for most Koreans, it symbolizes birth and in turn birthdays**. I thought you might like to try it today,” Eevee nods at the balloon tied to Adhira's chair, “since it is your birthday.”
“Huh, interesting,” she muses.
Eevee prods, “Are you going to try it?”
Adhira scrunches up her nose. “The seaweed is slimy.”
“It's seaweed! And soup! What did you expect? Trust me, when this was dry, it wasn't nearly as delicious as it is now,” Eevee grins, “You like the soup; why not try the seaweed?”
“Eh,” Adhira drawls, “Eevee, it's not that I don't like your food; it's just /slimy/.”
“It's fine! You don't need to try it, though you never know if you'll like it. I promise, if you don't like it, I won't be offended and we can get the cake out,” she assures.
Hesitantly, Adhira takes a scoop, blowing on the spoon before taking a gulp.
“So…” Eevee asks, “what did you think?”
Adhira gives a half-hearted smile “It's definitely the texture. It's not your fault, but why is seaweed so slimy?”
“Guess it was just made that way,” Eevee shrugs.
“Then,” Adhira starts, her eyes shining, “cake?”
“Of course!”

**Miyeok kuk, or 미역국 in Korean, is a soup that most mothers get after they give birth due to some of the helth benefits it has and tradition. In turn, this is usually eaten on birthdays in celebration and memory of that time. It's not reserved for birthdays, but it is more common then.

Part Three:

The first step of this next task is to read this (https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/584627/ ) fantastic workshop on theme, written by the wonderful Elfie. It’s a fascinating read, and it picks up on what we’ll be working on for Part 3 ;D

Read it yet? Good! Those of you paying attention will now be familiar with motif - that is, the writing technique of including a recurring idea or symbol in your work. It’s probably something you’ve used in your own writing already, perhaps even without realising; it is also key to many wonderful examples of literature. We’ve put together some such examples in this project here (https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/868198469/).

After you’ve browsed the Motif-tionary, your task is simple: choose a page, and write a scene continuing the use of its motif! Don’t worry - you don’t need to have heard of any of these stories before. Instead, use your imagination and base your writing only off the extracts we’ve given you. Your scene can expand upon the events of a previous extract, or even aim to conclude the story, as long as the motif is still present. Mimicking the author’s writing style will get you brownie points from Alba Alocasia, but is not compulsory!

Your scene, continuing a motif from one of the slides of the Motif-tionary, should be at least 400 words long. I hope you enjoy following in the footsteps of these incredible authors!

(any inaccuracies are entirely my fault and i did not fact check anything. read the books; c. s. lewis is much better at knowing the ways of narnia /lh it is a bit of a fanfic and what-if, but this isn't supposed to be a retelling anyways. i did try to stay true to some things, though my memory isn't very clear and i knew if i tried to fact check everything, i would end up making a rewriting of it. also i'm terrible with character voices.)

“But I don’t even know the way back to my own country,” pleaded Edmund.
"That’s easy,” answered the Queen. “Do you see that lamp?” She pointed with her wand and Edmund turned and saw the same lamp-post under which Lucy had met the Faun. “Straight on, beyond that, is the way to the World of Men. And now look the other way…
The land reaching from this lamp-post to the farthest you can see at the horizon, that is Narnia, where I rule queen.“
”If going beyond the lamp-post takes me back home, then I need to carry on this way,“ Edmund concluded.
The Queen jerked her head back towards Edmund. ”Leaving so soon?“ she soothed, ”You are in my land and the lamp-post won't move. It's right there. Why, you must be freezing, here.“ She unwraps her fluffy scarf and hands it down to him. ”Would you like something? Perhaps something to eat or drink?“
Edmund ponders for a moment before looking back up at the Queen. ”I would like some Turkish Delight, if you have any."
The Queen simply nods and uncaps a veil, tipping it towards the ground.

TBF


Part Four:

Now that you’ve learned all about symbolism and motifs from our wonderful workshop writers, it’s time to return to the narrative you wrote for part one! Looking back at the silent comic you chose to write about, try to pinpoint some of its symbols, themes, and motifs – what might some of the images signify beyond how they first appear? With this in mind, rewrite your original narrative with at least 400 words. You’re almost there–good luck!

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Weekly 1: (2053 words)

Activity 1- whole comic strip, The Secret of Life (440 words)

The comic strip opens with an image of a tree with white pods on an island, surrounded by water. There are birds and clouds in the background. The tree’s pods start to open up, revealing another yellow pod. Soon the outer yellow layer deteriorates and reveals a blue egg held in a cage, with white tendrils going up around the stem. A robed man with a big hat and a rowboat is rowing through the water. He has a sack in the back of the boat, and his head is angled away from the viewer.
In the next page, he reaches the small island with the tree. By then, all of the pods have opened up, and the tree is full of cages and blue eggs. With a weary expression, the old man holds up a scythe. Then the comic skips to the man rowing away from the island, the sack full of the cages and eggs. Birds hover in the background.
The next panel is a scene in which the man has a table in a small town. His back is against the wall as he stares at the cages with the blue eggs. Small buildings are placed around, with another merchant under a green awning slumps against the wall. There are women walking through the town, and children (without midsections) are running around. A woman with dark skin who is wearing a hair covering and holding the hand of a small girl walks up to the table.
The woman tries out different cages and selects one. The happy girl reaches for it. The woman pays for the cage and fastens it around the young girl’s midsection, and the girl runs off to play a ball sport with another young boy with a cage for a heart. In the next panel, the girl looks in a mirror while brushing her hair and sees that the egg in her chest has hatched into a blue bird. The cat at her feet smiles.
In the following panel, the girl has grown into a young woman. She is holding the hand of the young man she was playing with earlier as they walk, and the birds in their chest sing to each other. The girl grows older as the bird gets bigger, and she has a small child. She is now wearing a hair covering, and as she grows very old the bird just gets bigger. Then she walks up a hill to a cliff under the stars. In the next panel, the bird is free from the cage and is very big.
It flies away under the stars, singing its song.


Activity 2: Symbolism- Caraval fanfic (721 words)

The letter came in a box the color of nightmares turned to dreams, velvet black threaded through with silver drops of stars. The parchment looked blank, but Tella smiled as she held it up to the light. Shining ink black as night and a wax seal the color of blood, marked with the symbol of Caraval, adorned the letter. Tella’s brow rose. She and Dante (master of Caraval, ex-prince, and her newly mortal boyfriend) usually exchanged letters, but not with all the finery of this one. Plus, it came with a gift. Tella smiled as she lifted the beautiful dress out of the box. It was perfect for her and Dante. A dress made of smiles that were shattered and sewed together again from kept promises and stolen kisses. The skirt was made of white tulle, with a cut out in the front for her legs, and scarlet gems like drops of blood adorned the wispy tiers. Delicate black threading adorned the skirt, and Tella realized it was the Map of Everything’s drawing of Valenda she and Dante had followed. The bodice looked like something a pirate would wear, smooth black leather threaded with red roses. It laced up into a high heart-shaped collar. Tella knew it would look enchanting, and she read the letter eagerly. It read,
Dearest Donatella,
Please join me for a dinner picnic in the castle garden at dusk. If you’d like, please wear this dress, I had it made for the occasion.
Sincerely,
Caraval Master Legend

“Hello, Dante.” Tella said as he turns around. Dante smiled. His tattoos are back, but the ink over his arms matched the stitching on her dress. He gestured for her to sit down on the blanket, a light green quilt that felt as if it was filled with clouds. Tella’s eyes sparkled as Dante watched her look over the beautiful spread of food he had prepared, in the center of which lay a familiar plate of colorful cakes that looked like presents. From her (regrettable) engagement to the Prince of Hearts, Tella knew these were a traditional engagement dish. But they weren’t engaged, not yet. Tella’s heart beat faster. “Dante,” Tella said slowly, “are these love muffins?” He laughed, a magical sound. “Yes, they’re a dish made for royal couples. I had the baker make them. Each is filled with a different filling that will share what the future will hold for the lovers. How did you know?” He asked curiously. Tella didn’t want to ruin the moment by talking about Jacks, and she didn’t want to let Dante know that she knew what was going to happen, so she shrugged. “I think Scarlett told me once.” Dante seemed to be able to tell she wasn’t telling the truth, but he didn’t say anything as he raised a cake to his lips. It was pale silver, with a ruffled edge made of white frosting and beautifully painted gold feathers. As he took a large bite, blackberry jam oozed out. Tella wiped it off the corner of his mouth. Dante raised his eyes to hers, taking her hand. “I believe that means that our love will be deep and true. Your turn?” He asked. She closed her eyes and picked a cake the color of lilacs. Biting into it, tea-scented cream spilled out, and she wiped her chin before asking Dante what the filling meant. “It means we’ll always be there for each other.” He explained.
Dante’s eyes filled with love as he stood up once they finished the cakes. “Would you care to take a walk?” He asked. Tella let him lead her to a beautiful willow tree. Under it, Dante and Tella sat together, watching the stars and sharing stories for hours. As the moon dipped under the horizon, Dante got down on one knee. “Donatella Dragna.” He said, emotion clouding his voice. “I love you, truly love you, more than the moon and the stars and living forever. I want to spend the rest of my life with you, no matter how long it is. Will you marry me?” Tella started to cry. “Yes!” She said, flinging herself into Dante’s arms. “Yes, Dante, yes!” He hugged her back, and soon the hug turned into a kiss as they held each other until the sun peeked through the night.


Activity 3: Extract- The Lion, the Witch, and the Wardrobe (474 words)

So there they went past the lamp-post, seeking adventure. King Edmund said strangely, “That lamp-post seemed to me to be a spirit of the forest, for who would place a lamp-post surrounded by dark trees? Furthermore, I believe that the beginning of a stream seems to be nearby, for my ears hear the sound of rushing water when I look in that direction, near the birch-trees. We shall go over there, and I am to think that the start of a wondrous journey will become of us!”
Lucy nodded, so they went to the birch trees, and there they found a stream of rushing water. There by the river dipping its head into the cool water was a beautiful deer with a shimmering white coat and midnight-blue eyes. Lucy’s eyes lit up as she said, “Oh, Edmund, look at that beautiful deer! It seems to me to be another spirit who is urging us on during this adventure! We shall follow it, Edmund, and see where the spirit leads us.” So there they went, following the animal as it went slowly deeper into the forest. After walking for a while, their feet began to tire, and so they sat down in a clearing of trees. Faery-lights danced around them, but the deer darted away as soon as they reached the clearing. Lucy’s face fell at the loss of the deer, but brightened when she spotted a lamp-post in the middle of the clearing. “Look, Edmund, look!” She shouted joyously, “Another lamp-post! We must follow it!” So Lucy led the way, past the lamp-post, through trees that reached their branches out to scrape the clothes of the traveling pair until their royal robes were nothing more than velvet scraps. But still they journeyed on until they came to a house tucked into the tops of the trees. “A tree-house!” Edmund cried. “We must climb it, Lucy, and see what’s inside!” So Edmund went to climb the tree-house, and Lucy stood guard at the foot of the tree lest anyone come and see what the king of Narnia was doing. Edmund returned when the sun dipped below the horizon, holding something clutched in a leather bag. “What is it you have, Edmund?” Lucy asked curiously. “I found this on a little table set for tea.” Edmund said, eyes aglow with the excitement of an adventure. “It spoke to me! A little voice came from in the bag and said, For King Edmund and Queen Lucy. Let’s open it!” Lucy came nearer to Edmund and they opened the bag together. “Oh, Edmund, it’s beautiful!” Lucy said happily. Edmund smiled wide. It was a glass globe filled with snow, with a little lamp-post in the middle. “It’s a snow-globe!” Lucy said.
With their new prize, Lucy and Edmund returned to the castle, promising to go on more adventures.


Activity 4: The Secret of Life- (418 words)

“The Secret of Life” is a silent comic which deals with themes of growth, death, and love by illustrating the life cycle of a bird in a cage that is joined with a human to create a body with a living, breathing heart. The recurring motif of the story is a birdcage, which holds a blue bird. This cage is locked into a human body and becomes its heart. The motif symbolizes growth, since as the human grows, so does the bird, until the human passes away and the bird is free to sing its song and continue the life of the human forever. It opens on a tree, which seems to be the Tree of Life or some other important part of the story. The pods start to grow and transform into a cage holding an egg, and they are harvested by an old man who canoes across the water to reach the island with the tree. He harvests the cages and takes them back to the mainland, and sets up a stall in the market. Around him, children play, but their midsection is missing. A woman heads up to the stall to buy a bird for her young daughter, who is so excited that she’ll finally have a constant companion. She finds the perfect fit, and goes off to play soccer with a friend. As she grows up, so does the bird, and soon it hatches as she becomes mature. The beautiful bird only grows as the girl becomes an adult, and soon she is hand in hand with her childhood best friend as their birds sing together in harmony. The birds together symbolize love as they chirp happily. Soon, the woman dons a head covering as she becomes a mother. Her baby boy is beautiful. As she grows into an old woman, her bird becomes too big for the cage. They decide together that it is time, and the woman hobbles up to the cliff, as the only part of the comic set at night starts. Soon the bird is free, and absolutely gigantic. She sings her song as she takes off into the night, forever living on in her keeper’s memory.
This comic is a beautiful and chilling perspective on life, death, and love. The bird symbolizes the human heart, and how it grows and become more beautiful with every moment we live. Eventually, it shows that our heart and what we stood for will live on forever, singing our song to the heavens.

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