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- Piper_Camps
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Scratcher
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SWC Megathread || March 2023
March 10th Daily: ❝Welcome to the bookstore! Today, the Main Cabin will be filled up with books of our own creation! Write a 100-word blurb describing yours and comment it here to earn 100 points. Next, browse the rest of the collection—if you see any other books you'd be interested in buying, say so in a reply!❞
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Sixteen-year-old Mateo lives with his parents and his younger sister, nine-year-old Elena in an idyllic and peaceful city; Auroran. Auroran prides itself on being the only city in the world with a 0% crime rate. Mateo believes this for his entire life– until one day something changes.
When Elena goes missing one day, the Auroran government will do nothing, claiming nothing has happened– that Elena could not possibly have come to any harm in Auroran and must have simply left. They accuse her family of being ungrateful for what Auroran offers them, so the family pretends the girl’s disappearance doesn’t faze them.
Eventually, Mateo's parents believe the lie and begin to forget Elena; Mateo however is determined to find his sister and will stop at nothing to figure out what Auroran is up to.
Last edited by Piper_Camps (March 10, 2023 20:56:07)
- Piper_Camps
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Scratcher
500+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Word War with @selkie- | 4 Minutes | 364 Words |
I looked around the forest, walking through the trail with my earbuds in. Music was a great way for me to escape everything at home. Especially when everything at home was going so awful. Back at home mom and dad were always fighting and I tried my best to stay out of their way; I knew that if I did things would only go downhill for me. Instead of trying to stay out of their way in the house, I simply left whenever I sensed that things were getting tense; which to be fair was quite often lately. My parents would fight over the smallest things and oftentimes over things that didn’t even matter. I didn’t know what to do so I just left them to be. Usually, if I left for an hour or two they would be done or just about done fighting by the time I came back. My favorite place to go when they were fighting was the woods across the street from our house. It was especially peaceful in my favorite spot, an idyllic pond with trees framing the clearing. I usually went and sat there for a while with my earbuds in, reading a book or writing in my journal. Sometimes I even walked out there to get my homework done since the house was always super loud. I hadn’t told any of my friends that this was where I went, though I think more of them were starting to figure out that something was going on at my house because they were being awfully nice to me and weren’t asking to come to my house like they usually did. In fact, most of my friends were even inviting me over to their houses because they seemed to sense that my house wasn’t the best place to be right now. I wasn’t sure whether I wanted to tell them or not because I didn't want to share my parents problems with anybody else, ut just didn’t seem like my place In any case, the woods were a great way to relax and I knew it would always be my happy pace no matter what happened with my parents.
- 129waterfall
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Scratcher
500+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Waterfall's Daily March 10
Luna wasn't an ordinary girl. But of course she didn't know that. The way she perceived herself was a girl whose job was to get through life unnoticed, as to avoid conflict. Sure, some people might say that she would miss all the good parts of life doing this, but she really didn't mind. She didn't see anything to miss. It only made her more ordinary that she went to a fancy private school where everybody had magic powers, but she doesn't. She's constantly being annoyed by the whispers in the hall about her. But the most important artifact of their country goes missing, and dark forces are rising. And somehow, Luna finds herself being the one and only person that could stop it. Would she be able to find the artifact, defeat the villain, and restore peace in time?
140 words
Luna wasn't an ordinary girl. But of course she didn't know that. The way she perceived herself was a girl whose job was to get through life unnoticed, as to avoid conflict. Sure, some people might say that she would miss all the good parts of life doing this, but she really didn't mind. She didn't see anything to miss. It only made her more ordinary that she went to a fancy private school where everybody had magic powers, but she doesn't. She's constantly being annoyed by the whispers in the hall about her. But the most important artifact of their country goes missing, and dark forces are rising. And somehow, Luna finds herself being the one and only person that could stop it. Would she be able to find the artifact, defeat the villain, and restore peace in time?
140 words
- aIoe-there
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Scratcher
100+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
I knew something was wrong when my eyes turned to glass. They fell apart slowly, and I knew i had to fix them asap. I ran to auntie cynthia, who gaped at the sight. “JOANNA!” she exclaimed, clearly worried. I couldnt feel my eyes, they were numb; but it still felt weird. Maybe because I was looking at it. Well not exactly. Slowly my vision went away,and I begged auntie cynthia to fix it with her magical powers of her. She scolded me for the millionth time saying it was potion brewing and grabbed many items and ingredients from the kitchen. I struggled to find the chair but whne I did i collapsed on it and sighed. I needed my vision or I was seriously going to be blind forever! It suddenly started to hurt, and I groaned in pain. Auntie Cynthia rushed to me and I blacked out. An hour later, or who knew what time it was, Auntie Cynthia shook me awake “YOu still there, Joanna?” she said in a rushed voice. “Yep..” I whispered, groaning some more in pain. Auntie Cynthia had a worried look on her - word war, 191 words
- TwirlStar
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Scratcher
100+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Weekly 2
883 words
Part 1 - Relaxing Activity
135 words
Today I did some mindless piano playing. I think there's a difference between playing with sheet music in front of you and playing what's in your head. I did the latter. I played songs that I remembered from Hamilton, Disney movies, and I made up some songs that I thought sounded good. It was raining and I couldn't really go outside, so it was very refreshing to release all my energy into the keys. Now that I think about it, it's similar to typing. The difference is that while typing, your hands are confined to a small space, but with a piano you have a wide range of keys so it gives you a bit more freedom to move your hands around. In all, I think it was very relaxing to play music without thinking.
Part 2 - Consume Media
164 words
Media: Wicked Soundtrack
I listened to the first few songs from Wicked. I haven't listened to it in a while, and I remembered how great this musical is. While listening, I pictured the time I got to see it in person, with all the dances and sets and beautiful costumes. The first song, “No One Mourns The Wicked”, establishes that the munchkins see Elphaba as evil, but Glinda secretly remembers her friendship with Elphaba. Then it skips back in time to when they both were at school. In “The Wizard and I,” it's an I Want song showing that Elphaba feels ashamed of being different from everyone else, but she dreams to work with the Wizard of Oz and finally be accepted. The last song I listened to was “What Is This Feeling”, in which Glinda and Elphaba express how much they hate each other. The students side with Glinda because they think she is good and perfect, while Elphaba is green so she must be evil.
Part 3 - Story
584 words
I did a loose realistic fiction retelling of Wicked that takes place in a music school. I took the idea of one girl who thinks she's perfect, and one girl who is only there to help her sister, and both of them hate each other.
Melody practically vibrated as grasped the letter in her hands, the one that would make or break her future. It was in a crisp white envelope with a stamp that read, “Mozart College of Music”. Melody had been working for this her whole life, taking piano classes after school and practicing during all her spare time. She yelled for her parents, and they gathered around as she peeled open the envelope. Melody skimmed over the words, and the word accepted flashed before her eyes. She squealed. She got in!
Claire and her sister Bella beamed at their matching acceptance letters, then at each other. They were going to music school! Bella immediately wheeled herself to her room to start planning her classes, but Claire was pulled aside by her father.
“Remember,” he said in a low, warning voice, “you are only going to that school to care for your sister. So do well in your classes, but don't let them get in your way of helping Bella.”
Claire nodded. She knew why her father had let her sign up in the first place. Besides, she was already pretty good at music theory, so her classes wouldn't be too difficult. If she worked hard, she could have a great college experience.
“There must be some mistake!” cried Melody. “I asked for a private room! I need space to practice my talents!”
“This is a school, not a five star hotel,” said the headmaster. She handed Melody her key. “You'll do well to learn to live with a roommate.”
Melody opened her mouth to protest.
“Off you go now,” the headmaster interrupted.
Melody turned and stalked away.
“There must've been a mistake!” Claire protested. “We asked to be in the same dorm!”
The headmaster smiled at Claire and Bella. “Only you did, Claire.”
“What?”
“I specifically asked to be without you,” Bella muttered.
“What? But you need me to help you!”
“We have plenty of wheelchair accessible rooms on the bottom floor,” the headmaster explained. “Bella will be fine.”
Sulkily, Claire grabbed her key and went to find her dorm room.
Walking in the hallway, Melody's ears were bombarded with electric guitar music. Melody hated rock– it was so loud and chaotic, barely music at all. She pitied whoever had to be roommates with a rock person.
Someone in the hallway turned to face her. “Hey, do I recognize you?”
“Probably,” replied Melody. “I've been on TV a lot. Talent shows, commercials, that sort of thing.”
“Oh. Cool.”
“Well, see you around,” Melody chirped. It's not easy being famous, she thought. She finally found her room number, slid open the door, and saw… a girl with a bright red electric guitar.
Melody plastered a fake grin on her face. “Hi. I'm Melody. I'm your roommate,” she greeted the girl in the most friendly voice she could manage.
The girl stopped playing and took in the person standing at the door, wearing a pink skirt and a headband. “Hey. Claire.”
“So. You like rock.”
“Yeah. Well, I like a lot of genres, but mostly rock, you know?”
“Well. I like classical, mostly.”
“Classical? That's kinda boring.”
“Boring?” Melody gasped. “Well, rock is loud and annoying and not even music!”
“Hey! Rock is great!” Claire argued.
“You know what? I'm just going to unpack,” Melody grumbled.
Claire continued playing.
“Cut it out!” shouted Melody. But Claire either didn't hear or didn't care. Melody rolled her eyes and grabbed some earbuds. She already knew she hated her new roommate.
883 words
Part 1 - Relaxing Activity
135 words
Today I did some mindless piano playing. I think there's a difference between playing with sheet music in front of you and playing what's in your head. I did the latter. I played songs that I remembered from Hamilton, Disney movies, and I made up some songs that I thought sounded good. It was raining and I couldn't really go outside, so it was very refreshing to release all my energy into the keys. Now that I think about it, it's similar to typing. The difference is that while typing, your hands are confined to a small space, but with a piano you have a wide range of keys so it gives you a bit more freedom to move your hands around. In all, I think it was very relaxing to play music without thinking.
Part 2 - Consume Media
164 words
Media: Wicked Soundtrack
I listened to the first few songs from Wicked. I haven't listened to it in a while, and I remembered how great this musical is. While listening, I pictured the time I got to see it in person, with all the dances and sets and beautiful costumes. The first song, “No One Mourns The Wicked”, establishes that the munchkins see Elphaba as evil, but Glinda secretly remembers her friendship with Elphaba. Then it skips back in time to when they both were at school. In “The Wizard and I,” it's an I Want song showing that Elphaba feels ashamed of being different from everyone else, but she dreams to work with the Wizard of Oz and finally be accepted. The last song I listened to was “What Is This Feeling”, in which Glinda and Elphaba express how much they hate each other. The students side with Glinda because they think she is good and perfect, while Elphaba is green so she must be evil.
Part 3 - Story
584 words
I did a loose realistic fiction retelling of Wicked that takes place in a music school. I took the idea of one girl who thinks she's perfect, and one girl who is only there to help her sister, and both of them hate each other.
Melody practically vibrated as grasped the letter in her hands, the one that would make or break her future. It was in a crisp white envelope with a stamp that read, “Mozart College of Music”. Melody had been working for this her whole life, taking piano classes after school and practicing during all her spare time. She yelled for her parents, and they gathered around as she peeled open the envelope. Melody skimmed over the words, and the word accepted flashed before her eyes. She squealed. She got in!
Claire and her sister Bella beamed at their matching acceptance letters, then at each other. They were going to music school! Bella immediately wheeled herself to her room to start planning her classes, but Claire was pulled aside by her father.
“Remember,” he said in a low, warning voice, “you are only going to that school to care for your sister. So do well in your classes, but don't let them get in your way of helping Bella.”
Claire nodded. She knew why her father had let her sign up in the first place. Besides, she was already pretty good at music theory, so her classes wouldn't be too difficult. If she worked hard, she could have a great college experience.
“There must be some mistake!” cried Melody. “I asked for a private room! I need space to practice my talents!”
“This is a school, not a five star hotel,” said the headmaster. She handed Melody her key. “You'll do well to learn to live with a roommate.”
Melody opened her mouth to protest.
“Off you go now,” the headmaster interrupted.
Melody turned and stalked away.
“There must've been a mistake!” Claire protested. “We asked to be in the same dorm!”
The headmaster smiled at Claire and Bella. “Only you did, Claire.”
“What?”
“I specifically asked to be without you,” Bella muttered.
“What? But you need me to help you!”
“We have plenty of wheelchair accessible rooms on the bottom floor,” the headmaster explained. “Bella will be fine.”
Sulkily, Claire grabbed her key and went to find her dorm room.
Walking in the hallway, Melody's ears were bombarded with electric guitar music. Melody hated rock– it was so loud and chaotic, barely music at all. She pitied whoever had to be roommates with a rock person.
Someone in the hallway turned to face her. “Hey, do I recognize you?”
“Probably,” replied Melody. “I've been on TV a lot. Talent shows, commercials, that sort of thing.”
“Oh. Cool.”
“Well, see you around,” Melody chirped. It's not easy being famous, she thought. She finally found her room number, slid open the door, and saw… a girl with a bright red electric guitar.
Melody plastered a fake grin on her face. “Hi. I'm Melody. I'm your roommate,” she greeted the girl in the most friendly voice she could manage.
The girl stopped playing and took in the person standing at the door, wearing a pink skirt and a headband. “Hey. Claire.”
“So. You like rock.”
“Yeah. Well, I like a lot of genres, but mostly rock, you know?”
“Well. I like classical, mostly.”
“Classical? That's kinda boring.”
“Boring?” Melody gasped. “Well, rock is loud and annoying and not even music!”
“Hey! Rock is great!” Claire argued.
“You know what? I'm just going to unpack,” Melody grumbled.
Claire continued playing.
“Cut it out!” shouted Melody. But Claire either didn't hear or didn't care. Melody rolled her eyes and grabbed some earbuds. She already knew she hated her new roommate.
Last edited by TwirlStar (March 15, 2023 04:22:53)
- MoonlitSeas
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Scratcher
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SWC Megathread || March 2023
wip - cabin wars game show (written for cabin wars)
1000 words total
1000 words total
“Good evening, and welcome to the cabin wars show!” Moonlit exclaimed, checking her watch briefly before continuing on. “Please welcome tonight's contestants…”
Moonlit pauses, waiting for a series of spotlights to illuminate 15 podiums, each of the occupied by silhouetted figure.
“Adventureeee!” she screams into the mic, a bright red light illuminating the left most podium. On it stands a young warrior bearing a shield. On it lies a blue and red castle emblem, the edge of its facade slowly crumbling together, as if it were in a state of slight disrepair.
“Bizarooo Fiction!” she continues, oblivious to the screaming of the crowd behind her. This time, a rosy pink light flashes, revealing a young frog clad with mushroom-like armor and a glowing helmet. Around them stands a handful of rabbits, already digging fortifications aroun their position.
“Dystopiaaaan!” At the mention of the name, the crowd quiets to a whispering hush, as if in cautious awe of the duo that stands of the sapphire lit podium before them. One girl flips over, standing neatly on her hands as the other vanishes with a whirl of feather, reappearing moments later on the first girl’s shoe, as a crow, no less.
“Faaaan Fiction!” Trumpets sound in the background, an attempt at fanfare for the warrior that stands before them, this girl bathed in green and orange light. On her face, she wears a set, determined expression, as if nothing in this world will ever get in her way of winning.
“Fantasyyyy!” The crowd’s eyes widen as three fairies, each surrounding by their own purple and green aura, wave, their wings flapping neatly in unison. Between them, they carry a single bubble emitting bucketing, each iridescent bubble popping midair with a shower of sparkles.
“Folkloooore!” A shimmer of warm lights surrounds a girl surrounded by stacks of books, each of them giving off their own glowing light, as if they too held their own magic. She spreads her arms wide, casting a shimmering light on the crowd, their gasps audible as Moonlit continued.
“Histoooorical Fiction!” Three warrior appear, each of their eyes deadlocked on each other. Perhaps the rivalry was strong with these three – an interesting dynamic they’re sure to have! Of course, in unison, they may very well take on the world, and the crowd screams their approval.
“Horrorrrrr!” Another young girl, this one cloaked in deep red light, steps forward, looking proudly out to the chanting crowd. As she smiles, the entire house gets to its feet, their enthusiasm ever building with each new contestant.
“Mysteryyy!” Someone, their features unrecognizably shaded behind a cloak, slides into view, flicking an encrypted message towards to audience before standing perfectly still, the deep blue lighting casting an eerie glow on their figure.
“Nooooon fiction!” Moonlit continues, smiling at the trio of well dressed archaeologists that step forward, bearing a wide assortment of gadgets and tools. Between them, they seem to bear some sort of dinosaur head, a relic of long gone life on Earth.
“Poooe-eeee-tryyy!” she screams, separating every syllable for the name’s full affect. A cheerful coffee house barista wave to the crowd, sipping some sort of latte – they’re well prepared for a late night, if nothing else! Their maroon apron and cap matching the equally maroon spotlight perfectly, and the crowd is loving it.
“Reeealistic Fiction!” A farm girl steps forward, her jeans still covered in hay from earlier that day. She puts a finger to her lips, quieting the crowd as a trio of animals step up around her, their faces bright and ready for the night!
“Sciiiience Fiction!” Looking as though she just arrived from a long flight, a girl in a spacesuit steps forward, still bearing a sleek weapon that looks quite a bit out of this world. Perhaps she really is from another world – the sci-fi system is rumored to be a vast space! And of course, who could forget the miniature arm that swarms her feet, their bright green eyes hungry for action.
“Scriiiiiipt!” Tyrants, that’s the only way to describe the trio that steps forward. Each of them holding a microphone of their own, they look ready to burst into song at any moment, captivating every ounce to the room’s attention. This house is about to take a train ride to Hadestown, that’s for sure!
“Aaaand last but certainly not least, Thriiiiiller!” The audience’s attention temporarily shifts the young man bearing a beautiful mask and polar bear embroidered scarf, his green eyes shining brightly with anticipation. He came ready – ready to win this thing! And of course, behind him stand two equally well dressed companions, their faces well hidden behind masks of their own.
The lights dim once again, the audience quieting once again to a hush as Moonlit fidgets with the microphone, as if waiting for something to happen. Whatever it is, its not coming anytime soon – after a good ten seconds or so, she lifts it as a spotlight illuminates the panel around her. You pause for a second, realizing that she was at both Dystopian’s podium and her own panel at the same time – what is this, sorcery? Cloning? Identical twins? Squaller tricks? Illusions of the light? Whatever the case, she definitely has a trick or two up her sleeves, and is not afraid to use them.
“Now that we’ve introduced our contestants,” she smiles, pausing yet again, perhaps for the audience's attention. They’re quite a chatty bunch, aren’t they? “It’s time to announce tonight’s theme! Can I get a drumrollll?” She drags the last word out as the audience obliges.
Hundreds, thousands of limbs begin to pound on every available surface, their momentum insurmountable, a tide that cannot be stopped, a roar lion waiting for its prey. Perhaps those descriptions didn’t quite make sense – but welcome to the game show! Don’t ever expect anything to make sense around here, that’s simply not the way things work. Moonlit seems to agree, frowning as she opens her mouth and says something somehow left unheard.
- 129waterfall
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Scratcher
500+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
A Story Inspired By 9/11
(written for cabin wars and possibly the writing comp?)
(written for cabin wars and possibly the writing comp?)
currently 266 words
*cough* *cough* *cough* “Hello? Is-” I cough. “Is anybody there?” I cover my mouth in my shirt. “Noah? Noah where are you?!” I search frantically through the rubble. “No- No NOAH!” I sit back and cry, hopeless *FIRST SONG TITLE USAGE* like many other stuck here, alone. *OTHER SONG TITLE* Just minutes ago there were fearless *THIRD SONG TITLE* people running around, Noah getting lost in the swarm, me now having to live with the guilt of knowing I could've gone back. It was so selfish, that to me, the only way to go was out. Not in like the people who were the real heroes. I'm nothing for surviving. It isn't meaningful that I lived to tell my family I loved them. No. The real heroes are gone now, in the ash and rubble along with everything else.
One Hour Earlier:
It was a bright and beautiful sunny Saturday, just like any other. Children excited for the weekend bustled through the streets.
“Hey Noah, do you want to visit the skyscraper today? We can probably get a good view of the island today.”
“Yeah, sure!” Noah replied. The skyscraper was what the locals called it. As the tallest building in the world, it was one of the many cool things in their city. It is one of the things that the country is proud of. Part of it operates as a museum on the lower floors, and at the very top is the observatory, which has a stunning view. The rest of it is considered the economic central of the country!
Last edited by 129waterfall (March 11, 2023 12:57:08)
- theawesomemarbler
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Scratcher
100+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
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Cabin Wars Story
Most of the songs I know are k-pop so that's why my song titles are k-pop titles xP
I was balancing on the tightrope, trying my best to not look down due to my extreme fear of altitude. “Deep breaths, deep breaths…” I closed my eyes, trying my best to stay calm. "Oh, how would I fancy to read a nice book and relaxing on my couch and drinking coffee. It's so much more peaceful that way…“ I muttered to myself, knowing full well that my friends called me out here to test my bravery in the wilderness. ”Come on, Marbles! You can do it!“ Luna cheered for me, knowing that one wrong step can cause a whole danger for me. ”It's okay, Luna. I have safety straps on, it's not too bad even if I fall.“ I told her while comforting myself. That's when I realized her face had changed, it looked worried now. ”Luna, what's wrong?“ I asked her, thinking of one of the worst things that could possibly happen. ”Your safety cable, it fell off.“
My whole body was paralyzed in fear. This was what I had always feared of whenever I walked on tightropes. I closed my eyes, thinking that these moments would be the last of my life. ”Marbles, don't worry. If you follow my instructions we can get you across safely.“ Then she started to give me directions, I carefully obeyed them and took a step at a time. Slowly I made it to the end. However, the directions slowly began to mix in my head, ”Go left, no go right! Wait actually no stay there, and then go a little right… Wait how can you go left and right on a tightrope? It doesn't make any sense…“ After what seemed like forever, I made it to the last step, ”Good job, now jump!“ I leaped, but my landing didn't obey my head. I slipped and fell off. Luna shrieked, but my reaction time was faster than anything. I had grab on to the rope. Luna pulled me up to the other side, ”Oh my, that was so risky. I'm finally glad that I'm on the ground now…" From that day on, I'd never forget the moment where I nearly lost my life.
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Cabin Wars Story
Most of the songs I know are k-pop so that's why my song titles are k-pop titles xP
I was balancing on the tightrope, trying my best to not look down due to my extreme fear of altitude. “Deep breaths, deep breaths…” I closed my eyes, trying my best to stay calm. "Oh, how would I fancy to read a nice book and relaxing on my couch and drinking coffee. It's so much more peaceful that way…“ I muttered to myself, knowing full well that my friends called me out here to test my bravery in the wilderness. ”Come on, Marbles! You can do it!“ Luna cheered for me, knowing that one wrong step can cause a whole danger for me. ”It's okay, Luna. I have safety straps on, it's not too bad even if I fall.“ I told her while comforting myself. That's when I realized her face had changed, it looked worried now. ”Luna, what's wrong?“ I asked her, thinking of one of the worst things that could possibly happen. ”Your safety cable, it fell off.“
My whole body was paralyzed in fear. This was what I had always feared of whenever I walked on tightropes. I closed my eyes, thinking that these moments would be the last of my life. ”Marbles, don't worry. If you follow my instructions we can get you across safely.“ Then she started to give me directions, I carefully obeyed them and took a step at a time. Slowly I made it to the end. However, the directions slowly began to mix in my head, ”Go left, no go right! Wait actually no stay there, and then go a little right… Wait how can you go left and right on a tightrope? It doesn't make any sense…“ After what seemed like forever, I made it to the last step, ”Good job, now jump!“ I leaped, but my landing didn't obey my head. I slipped and fell off. Luna shrieked, but my reaction time was faster than anything. I had grab on to the rope. Luna pulled me up to the other side, ”Oh my, that was so risky. I'm finally glad that I'm on the ground now…" From that day on, I'd never forget the moment where I nearly lost my life.
361 words
Last edited by theawesomemarbler (March 20, 2023 14:03:09)
- mabshurah
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Scratcher
21 posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
word war// “Well, I was thinking it would be nice if you three were to spend some time with SuguSugu seeing how much you like him and all.” “But-” Esti complained. Toya’s smile grew wider meaning the conversion had ended. “Fine,” They grumbled. “Well, that’s settled.”
And, that’s how Mawan, Esti, and Veins ended up in the middle of a mountain village called Kutpur.
“Well, this is lovely.” SuguSugu welcomed them in at their sudden arrival. “I hope it’s not trouble.” Toya smiled as he stepped inside SuguSugu’s small cottage. “I thought it would be rather fine for the children to spend some time with you in the mountains.” “Of course, it’s alright. Ahh yes, the mountains are quite lovely.” “Well, that’s settled.” Toya grinned in satisfaction then turned over to Veins, Mawan, and Esti. “I’ll come to pick you up there when the summer’s over. Behave, will you?”
And, that’s how Mawan, Esti, and Veins ended up in the middle of a mountain village called Kutpur.
“Well, this is lovely.” SuguSugu welcomed them in at their sudden arrival. “I hope it’s not trouble.” Toya smiled as he stepped inside SuguSugu’s small cottage. “I thought it would be rather fine for the children to spend some time with you in the mountains.” “Of course, it’s alright. Ahh yes, the mountains are quite lovely.” “Well, that’s settled.” Toya grinned in satisfaction then turned over to Veins, Mawan, and Esti. “I’ll come to pick you up there when the summer’s over. Behave, will you?”
- MouseLoverr
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Word war with @mabshurah 3 minutes 88 words (i didn't have inspiration)
Two magnificent black birds flew around each other in giant circles, their midnight black feathers reflecting the moonlight with iridescent sparks. The lake below them shimmered with a crystal-clear reflection of the moon and the birds, the only disturbance in its crystal water was the shining silver fish beneath the surface. A frog called from the lily pads and one of the birds cried out in answer, only to stop suddenly as a howl rippled through the one-silent night. More howls followed, echoing and eerie, filling the night.
- MoonlitSeas
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Scratcher
500+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
weekly two - mental health and inspiration
968 total words
part one:
(160 words)
something that’s always helped me to put a smile on my face is taking a nice, long, hot shower. it’s a bit hard to explain, but i think the most interesting ideas always come to me when i’m alone with my thoughts and relaxed, which is perfect for this weekly! showers have always been a nice way to feel clean and refreshed, like a new sheet of paper, just waiting to write a story, and to take a break from everything else, from screens to homework to exercise to sleep, to everything in between, and just think about whatever’s on my mind, scheme up a new storyline, imagine a character, ponder a world, or whatever else it is that comes to me. while i don’t often stand out in the rain, as it is rather cold, i think the same concept could easily apply, should i enjoy pouring cold water as much as i do the comforts of warm water.
part two:
(152 words)
watching disney’s weekly mandalorian episode was a lovely way to spend some time with my family, a delightful excuse to consume way too much popcorn, and a nice way to wind down and relax after a long wednesday of school. one thing that strikes me about grogu and the mandalorian is their contrasting views of the world. the mandalorian is well versed in the cruelties of the world, and acts as a guardian to his adopted son and foundling, often sheltering him from the worst of it while soldiering through whatever’s thrown at him, whether it might be man-eating machines or empire forces. grogu, on the other hand, was exposed to an enormous amount of traumatizing experiences as a young child, but other appears curious, and almost childishly optimistic, which i think reflects on the fact that he is, relatively speaking, still a fairly innocent child, jedi and mandalorian foundling or not.
part three:
(528 words)
even as i stand out in the rain, making every effort to cleanse myself of you, i feel you on my skin, in my hair, in my clothes, everything i touch, in everything that’s a part of me, i feel you there. you are my inescapable, my forever, even as you meet the dust, you will always be here, always with me. even as i wish to be free, after all these years. after all these years…
dear diary,
today is wednesday, march twenty-second. it’s my birthday! together, brynn and i just turned nine years old. we had the best of times together today. she wanted to go to the bakery, so we went and got cupcakes! they had bright pink frosting. i really like sprinkles. they’re so colorful, and so sweet too. why can’t everything be made out of sprinkles? anyways, after that, brynn wanted to go to the bookstore, so we could pick out new books. she really likes this magic treehouse series, and she wanted me to read it too! so we got it, and i’m really excited to read it with her tomorrow. doesn’t brynn always have the best ideas?
love,
claire
i was so young, so innocent, so willing to follow you. and you let me step in each and every one of your footprints, following every step of the path you carved for me, the path that was never my choice, a path that was never meant to be mine. would it really have been so hard to open the door, to ask me what i wanted to do? i was always the door opener, the one who made it all easy for you. i was always there for you, ready to listen, ready to make you happy. even now, i wish i could be there for you… i wish i could make things right between us; i wish i could give you back the life you always wanted.
i wish your flowers would bloom every day; i wish the sun would shine with beautiful rainbows. i wish the world could be this perfect place we used to imagine together, this perfect place you used to believe in. i believe in happiness brynn, i really do. but i don’t believe in fairy tales.
this world, it’s beautiful in so many ways. the raindrops that now fall around me, the subtle pitter patter of the life they breathe into everything they touch, its beautiful. only with the rain might our flowers bloom, only with the rain might our tears be washed away. yet still, this world is cruel. it’s a gorgeous cage, one with snares and claws. it likes to draw you in with its shimmer, its facade of pleasant altruism, but really, i knew. someday, when you’re lost in the dream, it snatches you up in its claws, shows up what its like to be in the worst spirit of mind. it’s not a nice place, this world, to you and me. for any of us, for all the children. and i wish it were better, i really do.
but sometimes, well, we got to live with what we’ve got, you know?
authors note:
(123 words)
quite honestly, i’m not sure what brynn and claire’s story is really about, and there’s a lot more background and character building to be had here! maybe i’ll play with them a bit later today, but in the mean time, i think the important part of this story is the thought that this world is far from perfect – claire, our narrator, is far from an ideal, contrary to myself, but sometimes we really do have to live what we have, you know? and that’s not to say we shouldn’t try to change it, to make it better for others, and to give them the things we never had, but, to paraphrase dumbledore, it does poorly to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
968 total words
part one:
(160 words)
something that’s always helped me to put a smile on my face is taking a nice, long, hot shower. it’s a bit hard to explain, but i think the most interesting ideas always come to me when i’m alone with my thoughts and relaxed, which is perfect for this weekly! showers have always been a nice way to feel clean and refreshed, like a new sheet of paper, just waiting to write a story, and to take a break from everything else, from screens to homework to exercise to sleep, to everything in between, and just think about whatever’s on my mind, scheme up a new storyline, imagine a character, ponder a world, or whatever else it is that comes to me. while i don’t often stand out in the rain, as it is rather cold, i think the same concept could easily apply, should i enjoy pouring cold water as much as i do the comforts of warm water.
part two:
(152 words)
watching disney’s weekly mandalorian episode was a lovely way to spend some time with my family, a delightful excuse to consume way too much popcorn, and a nice way to wind down and relax after a long wednesday of school. one thing that strikes me about grogu and the mandalorian is their contrasting views of the world. the mandalorian is well versed in the cruelties of the world, and acts as a guardian to his adopted son and foundling, often sheltering him from the worst of it while soldiering through whatever’s thrown at him, whether it might be man-eating machines or empire forces. grogu, on the other hand, was exposed to an enormous amount of traumatizing experiences as a young child, but other appears curious, and almost childishly optimistic, which i think reflects on the fact that he is, relatively speaking, still a fairly innocent child, jedi and mandalorian foundling or not.
part three:
(528 words)
even as i stand out in the rain, making every effort to cleanse myself of you, i feel you on my skin, in my hair, in my clothes, everything i touch, in everything that’s a part of me, i feel you there. you are my inescapable, my forever, even as you meet the dust, you will always be here, always with me. even as i wish to be free, after all these years. after all these years…
dear diary,
today is wednesday, march twenty-second. it’s my birthday! together, brynn and i just turned nine years old. we had the best of times together today. she wanted to go to the bakery, so we went and got cupcakes! they had bright pink frosting. i really like sprinkles. they’re so colorful, and so sweet too. why can’t everything be made out of sprinkles? anyways, after that, brynn wanted to go to the bookstore, so we could pick out new books. she really likes this magic treehouse series, and she wanted me to read it too! so we got it, and i’m really excited to read it with her tomorrow. doesn’t brynn always have the best ideas?
love,
claire
i was so young, so innocent, so willing to follow you. and you let me step in each and every one of your footprints, following every step of the path you carved for me, the path that was never my choice, a path that was never meant to be mine. would it really have been so hard to open the door, to ask me what i wanted to do? i was always the door opener, the one who made it all easy for you. i was always there for you, ready to listen, ready to make you happy. even now, i wish i could be there for you… i wish i could make things right between us; i wish i could give you back the life you always wanted.
i wish your flowers would bloom every day; i wish the sun would shine with beautiful rainbows. i wish the world could be this perfect place we used to imagine together, this perfect place you used to believe in. i believe in happiness brynn, i really do. but i don’t believe in fairy tales.
this world, it’s beautiful in so many ways. the raindrops that now fall around me, the subtle pitter patter of the life they breathe into everything they touch, its beautiful. only with the rain might our flowers bloom, only with the rain might our tears be washed away. yet still, this world is cruel. it’s a gorgeous cage, one with snares and claws. it likes to draw you in with its shimmer, its facade of pleasant altruism, but really, i knew. someday, when you’re lost in the dream, it snatches you up in its claws, shows up what its like to be in the worst spirit of mind. it’s not a nice place, this world, to you and me. for any of us, for all the children. and i wish it were better, i really do.
but sometimes, well, we got to live with what we’ve got, you know?
authors note:
(123 words)
quite honestly, i’m not sure what brynn and claire’s story is really about, and there’s a lot more background and character building to be had here! maybe i’ll play with them a bit later today, but in the mean time, i think the important part of this story is the thought that this world is far from perfect – claire, our narrator, is far from an ideal, contrary to myself, but sometimes we really do have to live what we have, you know? and that’s not to say we shouldn’t try to change it, to make it better for others, and to give them the things we never had, but, to paraphrase dumbledore, it does poorly to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
Last edited by MoonlitSeas (March 11, 2023 03:31:29)
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Scratcher
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SWC Megathread || March 2023
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Weekly 2:
Word Count: 868
Date: March 11th 2023
Cabin: Sci-Fi
Link to directory: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7023654/
Part one: Do an off-screen activity for 15 minutes and write 100 reflective words (134)
Making pizza with my family was a fun activity that we did one night. Each of us made our own unique pizzas. We started by stretching out the pre-made dough that we got at the supermarket. It was surprisingly difficult, and some of our dough got pretty tough. On mine, I added cheese, chicken, basil, onions, mushrooms and balsamic vinegar dressing. My sister, just a simple cheese pizza. My brother, bell peppers, onions, cheese and bacon bits. My mom, chicken, tomatoes, cheese, basil, onions, mushrooms and balsamic vinegar dressing. Basically the same thing as me. My dad, onions, sun dried tomatoes, onions, bell peppers and cheese. It was really fun, being able to spend that time with them. Friday’s are our family nights, and I’m always grateful to spend this time bonding with them.
Part two: Consume a piece of media, writing 100 reflective words (219)
I decided, for this part of the weekly, to listen to a song called ‘Feed the Machine’ by Poor Mans Poison. (Disclaimer: It does have minimal swearing. If you consider heIl a swear word, then it does ramp it up a bit, but the swearing in mainly used in the context of ‘we’ve been condemned’) This song was recommended to me by a friend, and when I first listened to it, it was one of those songs that was on repeat for a whole day. This song is one that I like to call a ‘story theme song’. One that conveys a certain message that encapsulates a certain story, or is used as inspiration for an overarching theme. It doesn’t have a specific plot in the song, but just has good lyrics that match with a good vibe. I always thought of it as the song that would play in the background while the villain rode up to the town on horseback. I might actually write a story based off this one day, considering my ‘headcanons’ for it (I did not read the next part of the weekly before writing that sentence XD). Like, the villain is a broken liar that was actually the victim of a higher power, feeding their followers to this ‘machine’ in an attempt to get something from the machine, only to then be betrayed by this higher, evil force.
Part three: Write a 500 word story based off of the other two parts (515) (I am DEFINITELY rewriting this someday)
Once the door opened and people saw that she was on the other side, the roaring conversations came to a halt. The large, hard eyes that glowed like the sun, the plump lips that glistened a ruby red. She commanded the room, along with the people inside it. She strut over to the counter of the shop, grinning like a wild animal, “Could I get a small cheese pizza, darling?” She looked straight at one of the workers there. The small girl’s eyes were wide as she nodded fearfully. When she didn’t move, the woman waved her hand in a shooing motion, amused. The girl ran away a moment later, “Right away, ma’am. Sorry ma’am.” The woman smirked at the girl’s discomfort. Idiot. She watched from her seat as the girl made the pizza, calling out to her, “Make sure it’s perfect! You wouldn’t want the machine to notice you, would you?” The girl yelped at the thought, replying, “No ma’am, sorry ma’am.” The woman, bored of watching the worker, turned around in her seat. She scanned the room, looking for an easy target. She spotted a man, around her age and pointed at him, “You seem nice. What’s your name?” “Micheal, ma’am.” She grinned, “Ooh, that has a nice ring to it. I like you calling me that. It rolls off the tongue.” He nodded, smiling softly, “It does sound nice.” He knew not to say much more than that. One wrong move and the machine would have his head. She tapped her chin thoughtfully, “Y’know, Micheal? I like you. I think you’d be a nice addition to the family, if you catch my drift.” His eyes widened. What had he even done? She stood from her stool, just as the girl had set it down at her place. She stepped toward him, reaching out for his wrist. “The machine has been pretty hungry, lately. Let’s go try and fix that, shall we?” She grabbed it, and he stood up obidiently. He didn’t want to die. There had to be something he could do, right? His mind flashed to the victims that had fallen to the machine before. There was no ‘being saved’. Not once she noticed you.
She led him out of the building, smirking. Micheal wondered what he had done to attract her attention. Was he too loud? Did he not look at her soon enough once she entered the room? He didn’t want to die. There had to be a way. He suddenly stopped, no longer following her. She was tugged back a bit by his halting, and she turned towards him, eyes blazing, “And who told you that you could stop walking, Micheal?” “No one.” He muttered defiantly. She squeezed his wrists, her long nails digging into his skin, “So you just decided to stop right here? Don’t you realize how dangerous that is?” “Yes, I do.” He replied, speaking up. She tilted her head in amusement, “Funny. You’ve got a backbone. I admire that.” She reached for her gun at her side. “Too bad it won’t get you anywhere.”
Word Count: 868
Date: March 11th 2023
Cabin: Sci-Fi
Link to directory: https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/post/7023654/
Part one: Do an off-screen activity for 15 minutes and write 100 reflective words (134)
Making pizza with my family was a fun activity that we did one night. Each of us made our own unique pizzas. We started by stretching out the pre-made dough that we got at the supermarket. It was surprisingly difficult, and some of our dough got pretty tough. On mine, I added cheese, chicken, basil, onions, mushrooms and balsamic vinegar dressing. My sister, just a simple cheese pizza. My brother, bell peppers, onions, cheese and bacon bits. My mom, chicken, tomatoes, cheese, basil, onions, mushrooms and balsamic vinegar dressing. Basically the same thing as me. My dad, onions, sun dried tomatoes, onions, bell peppers and cheese. It was really fun, being able to spend that time with them. Friday’s are our family nights, and I’m always grateful to spend this time bonding with them.
Part two: Consume a piece of media, writing 100 reflective words (219)
I decided, for this part of the weekly, to listen to a song called ‘Feed the Machine’ by Poor Mans Poison. (Disclaimer: It does have minimal swearing. If you consider heIl a swear word, then it does ramp it up a bit, but the swearing in mainly used in the context of ‘we’ve been condemned’) This song was recommended to me by a friend, and when I first listened to it, it was one of those songs that was on repeat for a whole day. This song is one that I like to call a ‘story theme song’. One that conveys a certain message that encapsulates a certain story, or is used as inspiration for an overarching theme. It doesn’t have a specific plot in the song, but just has good lyrics that match with a good vibe. I always thought of it as the song that would play in the background while the villain rode up to the town on horseback. I might actually write a story based off this one day, considering my ‘headcanons’ for it (I did not read the next part of the weekly before writing that sentence XD). Like, the villain is a broken liar that was actually the victim of a higher power, feeding their followers to this ‘machine’ in an attempt to get something from the machine, only to then be betrayed by this higher, evil force.
Part three: Write a 500 word story based off of the other two parts (515) (I am DEFINITELY rewriting this someday)
Once the door opened and people saw that she was on the other side, the roaring conversations came to a halt. The large, hard eyes that glowed like the sun, the plump lips that glistened a ruby red. She commanded the room, along with the people inside it. She strut over to the counter of the shop, grinning like a wild animal, “Could I get a small cheese pizza, darling?” She looked straight at one of the workers there. The small girl’s eyes were wide as she nodded fearfully. When she didn’t move, the woman waved her hand in a shooing motion, amused. The girl ran away a moment later, “Right away, ma’am. Sorry ma’am.” The woman smirked at the girl’s discomfort. Idiot. She watched from her seat as the girl made the pizza, calling out to her, “Make sure it’s perfect! You wouldn’t want the machine to notice you, would you?” The girl yelped at the thought, replying, “No ma’am, sorry ma’am.” The woman, bored of watching the worker, turned around in her seat. She scanned the room, looking for an easy target. She spotted a man, around her age and pointed at him, “You seem nice. What’s your name?” “Micheal, ma’am.” She grinned, “Ooh, that has a nice ring to it. I like you calling me that. It rolls off the tongue.” He nodded, smiling softly, “It does sound nice.” He knew not to say much more than that. One wrong move and the machine would have his head. She tapped her chin thoughtfully, “Y’know, Micheal? I like you. I think you’d be a nice addition to the family, if you catch my drift.” His eyes widened. What had he even done? She stood from her stool, just as the girl had set it down at her place. She stepped toward him, reaching out for his wrist. “The machine has been pretty hungry, lately. Let’s go try and fix that, shall we?” She grabbed it, and he stood up obidiently. He didn’t want to die. There had to be something he could do, right? His mind flashed to the victims that had fallen to the machine before. There was no ‘being saved’. Not once she noticed you.
She led him out of the building, smirking. Micheal wondered what he had done to attract her attention. Was he too loud? Did he not look at her soon enough once she entered the room? He didn’t want to die. There had to be a way. He suddenly stopped, no longer following her. She was tugged back a bit by his halting, and she turned towards him, eyes blazing, “And who told you that you could stop walking, Micheal?” “No one.” He muttered defiantly. She squeezed his wrists, her long nails digging into his skin, “So you just decided to stop right here? Don’t you realize how dangerous that is?” “Yes, I do.” He replied, speaking up. She tilted her head in amusement, “Funny. You’ve got a backbone. I admire that.” She reached for her gun at her side. “Too bad it won’t get you anywhere.”
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Cabin Wars Rambles #1
3/11
538 words
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“Apologies mean nothing to me,” I scowl, as the old man begs for my mercy. After the things he's done to me, he should be glad I'm letting him live- in prison. A shiver runs down my spine as he cries out to me.
“Please, please! I didn't mean it! I didn't, I swear! I-I just did that kind of stuff back when I was a kid, so I thought it was fine to do it now!” he whines. I feel like throwing up at that. He touched girls when he was a kid? Touched them every time he saw them? I gag. We aren't objects, you scumbag. Life in prison better teach him that.
“Be glad I'm letting you live. Guards, take this hag away,” I command my troop. Being the queen was a tasking job, of course, but it was awesome at times. I watched in fake sorrow as the old man is dragged away, screaming for me to spare him. I ignore his whines and continue on. No woman is allowed to be touched without consent. That was a law I was sure to make.
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Make it go back
Make it go back to how it was years ago
When I was just starting to write
When I didn't know what any of those words meant
I love everyone and think that they are all equal
But make it go back
Make rainbows not mean anything more than that
Make school shootings not happen
Make my life my childhood
I don't want to go on
I can't go on
I can't keep living like this
No one can
It's torture
I constantly have to watch what I say
Just in case I offend someone
I can't talk about my religion
I can't talk about my faith
I can't talk about anything
My mouth is zipped shut
When I was a child
I could talk about what ever I wanted
Make it go back
Please
Make it go back
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My wedding will take place in a church. A big, fancy church. It'll be built out of stone and a nice, tan color, and the sanctuary where I shall get married will be a beautiful shade of tan as well. Not too light, not too dark. Just perfect. The floor will be carpeted with a dark brown pattern spread all over it. There will be tule crossing all over the ceiling and white roses everywhere. The flower girls will be my cousin's child, my second-cousin. My maid of honor will be my best friend in the entire world, the one who really understands me, who will listen to what I'm saying. My bridesmaids will be my friends from my friend group, as well as one of my friend's little sisters who I know quite well. My teen associate youth pastor who I currently have at my church will officiate the wedding. My husband will be nice and kind and tall. We'll exchange love letters before we get married. He isn't allowed to see me on my big day. Chipotle will cater my wedding and my aunt will make my cake. There will be several layers to my cake; strawberry, chocolate, vanilla, carrot. My wedding will be perfect.
3/11
538 words
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“Apologies mean nothing to me,” I scowl, as the old man begs for my mercy. After the things he's done to me, he should be glad I'm letting him live- in prison. A shiver runs down my spine as he cries out to me.
“Please, please! I didn't mean it! I didn't, I swear! I-I just did that kind of stuff back when I was a kid, so I thought it was fine to do it now!” he whines. I feel like throwing up at that. He touched girls when he was a kid? Touched them every time he saw them? I gag. We aren't objects, you scumbag. Life in prison better teach him that.
“Be glad I'm letting you live. Guards, take this hag away,” I command my troop. Being the queen was a tasking job, of course, but it was awesome at times. I watched in fake sorrow as the old man is dragged away, screaming for me to spare him. I ignore his whines and continue on. No woman is allowed to be touched without consent. That was a law I was sure to make.
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Make it go back
Make it go back to how it was years ago
When I was just starting to write
When I didn't know what any of those words meant
I love everyone and think that they are all equal
But make it go back
Make rainbows not mean anything more than that
Make school shootings not happen
Make my life my childhood
I don't want to go on
I can't go on
I can't keep living like this
No one can
It's torture
I constantly have to watch what I say
Just in case I offend someone
I can't talk about my religion
I can't talk about my faith
I can't talk about anything
My mouth is zipped shut
When I was a child
I could talk about what ever I wanted
Make it go back
Please
Make it go back
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My wedding will take place in a church. A big, fancy church. It'll be built out of stone and a nice, tan color, and the sanctuary where I shall get married will be a beautiful shade of tan as well. Not too light, not too dark. Just perfect. The floor will be carpeted with a dark brown pattern spread all over it. There will be tule crossing all over the ceiling and white roses everywhere. The flower girls will be my cousin's child, my second-cousin. My maid of honor will be my best friend in the entire world, the one who really understands me, who will listen to what I'm saying. My bridesmaids will be my friends from my friend group, as well as one of my friend's little sisters who I know quite well. My teen associate youth pastor who I currently have at my church will officiate the wedding. My husband will be nice and kind and tall. We'll exchange love letters before we get married. He isn't allowed to see me on my big day. Chipotle will cater my wedding and my aunt will make my cake. There will be several layers to my cake; strawberry, chocolate, vanilla, carrot. My wedding will be perfect.
Last edited by Eeveedonut (March 11, 2023 14:32:41)
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Scratcher
100+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Cabin Wars!
For three friends coming into their least favorite class of the day, their expressions were all glum. Allison had a number of ways to put off entering the dreaded class, and her tactics often made them late. Whether it was wanting to use the other entrance or needing a stretch break, her groans said it all. Her friends, Caroline and Analucia, her two friends with her, didn’t seem to mind and preferred to be late with her rather than go into the class early. On this particular day when they found themselves unfortunate enough to have the class, Allison seemed in a particularly bad mood.
“I wish I could skip,” a look of longing crossed her face before she forced a laugh.
“Or stay home,” Caroline said in agreement. Analucia stayed quiet but a rogue smile tugged at her lips. Allison looked at her pointedly as if willing her to add on, but by then they had entered the class and had fallen silent.
The class wasn’t just any old class. No, it wasn’t snooze-ville history or the long-lasting english. There was only one class that could be so horrible. PE. There PE class wasn’t just any lousy PE class, no, it was taught by the infamous Mr. Hatchett. He was said to make you run laps until you dropped then do push-ups till you collapsed, and so far no one had been able to prove him otherwise. Along with Mr. Hatchett, there were two other teachers, though neither of them were quite as strict as Mr. Hatchett. Ms. Thawyer was a middle aged woman who was always handing out stickers to her class for good work. Then there was Mr. Green, a younger teacher who looked suspiciously like Mr. Clean. They made up the main PE teachers, besides the occasional sub.
When you arrived at class you were supposed to wait by your teacher's desk so they could mark their attendance, but when the girls arrived they didn’t see anyone. It didn’t seem suspicious, Mr. Hatchett was always hanging around the teachers lounge doing whatever it was that teachers did in there. However, once it was five minutes past the start of class the students began glancing around, searching for their absent teacher.
Suddenly, the doors leading out of the classroom slammed shut and the lights flickered until there was just pitch black in the gym. A booming voice cut into the silence, echoing throughout the large gym. “Hello students, and welcome to the triennial game of Grog!” Allison and Caroline let their eyes drift together. Within them was a look of confusion and surprise, completely natural when something of this nature had been sprung upon them. They had played Grog in class, surely this was just another game with added theatrics? Analucia looked oddly determined, and when they jogged over to their other friends Maya and Stephanie, who looked just as–if not more–confused than Allison and Caroline.
“Line up and put on your jerseys!” Mr. Hatchett barked suddenly. Allison grimaced and made a great show of pulling her hair up and readjusting the jersey so it wouldn’t touch any part of her body other than her clothes. Caroline looked just as repulsed by the disgusting jersey’s, although she didn’t make as much of a show while putting them on. Chances were, the jersey’s had never been washed in their lifetime–if ever.
A strange growling noise was coming from the boys locker room, and the girls shared a look of understanding. This wouldn’t have any student grogs. No, those were real live grogs being held in the horrid boys locker rooms. No wonder they were so anxious to get out. Or maybe it was the smell of humans on the other side of the wall. Either way, Allison and Caroline were carefully pushing all the boys toward the noises. This was life or death, and neither was willing to risk it.
Ignoring the commotion on the gym floor, Mr. Hatchett continued. “Let’s have a little on the rules, shall we?” He seemed to be delaying their inevitable doom for as long as possible, maybe waiting for everyone to realize the predicament they were in. Every student in the room seemed to be puzzling over where Mr. Hatchett’s voice was coming from, and Analucia figured it out first. She pointed up at the ceiling, which was now 50 feet tall, and at a glass box where the devilish teacher was standing. The ceiling had definitely grown taller from this class from when they had last been in the gym.
“Rule number one,” he smiled evilly at Analucia and she quickly looked away. “No escaping the lost box. If you do, punishment.” What punishment would there be for someone who was already dead? Allison didn’t know and didn't want to find out. “Rule number two, find three pucks, and you can–well, you’ll find out later.” The class groaned. No one wanted to wait for his instructions which he seemed to be delivering at the glacial speed of a snail. They had the sense not to groan, even when he added, “if you survive.”. Some people looked visibly afraid, others looked ready to prove something, whatever that may be. Maya looked grim for a second, thinking it had ruined her plan, but brightened up quite quickly. She seemed to be having a mental conversation with herself, not that any of them blamed her for that. “Last rule,’ Mr. Hatchett paused to let his voice sink in. “Everything else is fair game.”
Allison and Caroline shared one last grim look before focusing on the task at hand. In that one look, they made an agreement. They stuck together, no matter what. Caroline continued herding the groups of boys toward the boys locker room, and the growls coming from it were getting louder and louder each minute. Allison was surveying those who weren’t going towards the locker rooms, however difficult it was in the darkness. She spots Maya, Analucia and Stephanie grouped in a corner and goes to stand near Caroline right when a large click echoes through the gym, presumably the sound of the lock on the door being removed. Allison and Caroline watch long enough to see the boys try and keep a stoic expression on their faces while the grogs come at them. They think they’re protecting the girls. Allison snorts before dragging Caroline to the rest of their small group. Allison shows signs of excitement, exhilaration, as if she has been waiting for this her whole life. Caroline looks prepared, ready to do whatever it takes to keep her friends alive. Analucia looks just as determined as Caroline, with a dash of bravery in her stare. And Maya, strangely enough, looks like she’s been plotting this her entire life. Allison gives her a weird stare and announces a statement she says everyday during PE, but finally is true. “Oh well. Looks like I should’ve stayed home from school today.” It’s her futile attempt to lighten the mood, but it turns out majorly unsuccessful. Trying to be prepared, Allison wonders how long they’ll be stuck here. It’s unsure, but she plans for multiple situations. She squinted to see through the dark, but she couldn’t see any walls nearby. Hadn’t they started near the bleacher walls? She taps her watch to see if it will provide any additional light, but her heart sinks when she realizes she hadn’t charged it in a week. Jolting everyone from their individual thoughts, she asks if anyone has a watch.
“Er– I left it at home.” Caroline averts her gaze and laughs nervously.
“On PE day?” Allison raises her voice, and Caroline cringes.
“I do!” Analucia announces proudly.
“You do?” Allison turns from Caroline and huddles near Analucia.
“No!” Analucia cries. Allison looked exasperatedly at her. “I forgot to charge my watch last night! It’s only at one–zero now!” They watch their last hope, in the form of a watch, die. Allison sighs loudly. Without the watches she would have to moderate her current plans for their survival.
“Here’s what we’re going to do,” Allison announces. “If we’re here for a while, we’ll send up a traveling camp with tents and such and–oh!” Allison looks even more angry. “We don’t have food! How are we supposed to survive without food?!” Caroline shoots her friend a warning look. Any louder and she’ll attract the grogs attention. “Fine, we’ll focus on my short term plan. We find the pucks, do what we need to do with them and get out.” Easier said than done. Scanning the endless sea of black, they can barely see their hands. It would be challenging, but they could do it. They gave each other determined looks and set out to look for the pucks.
- 129waterfall
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Scratcher
500+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
cabin wars junk writing yayyyy
1374 words
this is me, waterfall, writing absolutely worthless junk for cabin wars! Yes, I will write all five thousand words by myself if I have to. note how I write five thousand out as two words to make more words and to literally write random stuff and have it count. Unfortunately i can't write a a a a forever because that would be cheating - but note how I snuck them in there? these are genius cabin wars or just writing strats for when you want to write a lot quickly. I mean, I wrote a two thousand word introduction about myself, and it was absolutely trash, but it didn't matter. and it does not matter now, either. make sure not to use apostrophes (however you spell that) and instead of writing “doesn't” write “does not” like I did above ^^ right there. Also your grammar can be terrible - nobody will notice, and nobody's gonna care haha. One, it's not like anyone's going o read this, and two, it''s just junk cabin wars writng, not your writing comp entry or something like that. honestly I've probably already written about one hundred and fifty word by rambling on like that. I mean, isn't this smart? Also remember that the point is to write many words, not characters. so try to limit the amount of long words that you write because it takes up more time. If I have to write five thousand words like this, I will. But I'd also have to stretch ten times for the extra challenge (which I have no problem doing even though it is kind of tiring, that to me is one of the many points of cabin wars) finger murder finger murder FINGER MURDERRRR HEHEHE ooh and betraying people that's fun too. WATERFALL KEEP WRITING STOP PAUSING TO SLEEP- yes this is the day of sleep deprivation like every other day and i sin no way an exception even though I accidentally got sleep today ;P but anyways once I finish writing at least like, two thousand words, I think (not all on here but still) ignore this weird sentence slash paragraph slash all my cabin wars writing, okay? also I keep pausing I can't do that because I'm pretty sure that I have five thousand words to write on my own which is ridiculous but uhhhh and I would like to go get breakfast, but I only have eight hours and with my wpm it's like, sixty five times sixty times eight which is thirty one thousand possible words in eight hours, but obviously I don't always write at that speed, and I need breaks and such. So with that math, even if you divide it by six, it should only take me about TWO HOURS STRAIGHT OF WRITING AAAAAH to finish this but whatever although my wrists hurt so that's something - oki i'm going to penguin waddle now i stretched last time even though I'm pretty sure I haven't reached five hundred words yet, better be safe than sorry. Also I've been up for like an hour warring people and writing this aaahsdfjlkjfsdf this is very tiring and my wrists are like, dying - it's not my fingers, my fingers are fine, but my wrists are dying right now. Literally as I'm writing this I'm on my bed with my face face planted into a pillow, writing with my wrists off to the side not even checking my spelling which is either good or really really bad because I have no idea if I've kept my hand formation lmao. but I can go back and fix it. actually, I did great~ now I shall write a few words about ow when people say lol, haha, lmao, or anything of that sort, they're like ninety nine percent of the time not laughing. and limh was a good idea but people stopped using it. like I don't laugh at things a lot, but I don't want to be rude so I fake laugh in real life, but when I think something is funny but still don't laugh I often say lol anyways. but do you guys (i know nobody's reading this but still) do you guys do the same thing too? Like are you actually laughing when you say lol? Oh my gosh the sound of me just typing non stop iin my room loll (oh and there I go with the lol thing again.) okay wrist break i'm going to shake them out and stretch ahahaha they hurt but I must keep going - I'm going to have like buff wrists when I'm done with this. okay now to actually do that instead of writing about it because it hurttss :cri: oh geez I cracked my neck quite nicely while doing that. aand it's been another five minutes since I said it had been an hour me online even though it was actually an hour and seventeen minutes but I was just feeling too lazy to type it, but now I need to type stuff like before but don't have other stuff to say (well now I do) so I'm just typing this because it's cabin wars and I need to single handedly write five thousand words and yeah. Also I'm pretty sure even though I'm face planted into my pillow I know in my fingers when I've pressed the wrong key, so I just still click backspace and fix it, and when I can't tel if I've written a character, like Idk if I pressed down hard enough, then I actually look up. I think that's pretty cool. because I can just write face down in my pillow. I love stream of consciousness too howeve you spell that lol) because it is another thing, and another type of writing that enables you to write half asleep. Like the little things on the f and j keys I believe, (well I can just find the bumps to find out) they're really helpful because you can go back to your hand position without having to look up from your pillow. Ah, how I love this, so calm and peaceful to write in this way, except for the very awkward position that my wrists are in, causing them to hur even more. I really have to relax my arms and adjust my wrists every minute or two just so that it doesn't hurt so much. But I'm perfectly fine, just weak haha. and the lol haha laughing thing again that I don't feel like writing out but it would probably be productive to write out. I love how instead of finishing my other story that I only wrote like, two hundred words on, I just come here and write this while sleeping because why not xDD okay I looked up and it's so bright haha and I've actually written quite a lot. whoo time to copy it and in hte process accidentally press v instead of c, so that I paste it and lose all of this, and then I just have to do a way too low estimate of the words that I wrote. Soyay, hoep that doesn't happen . Here we go. OMG NO WAY - without counting this, or anything after the here we go, I've already written one thousand one hundred and ninety seven words. and now that's one thousand two hundred and something. which is pretty good. also maybe by the time I eat breakfast and come back someone else might be online so that I don't have to write the remaining like, four thousand and five hundred words myself. I'm so hungry my stomach - I can literally hera it haha. so time to go eat, and then I'll come back and write more. final word count for this piece of trash ^^^ we'll see. also I'm pretty sure I can write an entire essay of things that help and don't help you write while you're face down on a pillow. anyways, I have to actually be done writing now and eat breakfast sooo… (yes me dragging that and this out as long as possible for more words - i mean I could always just not be done yet but whatever it really doesn't matter) so now I will be actually done. right … now.
1374 words
this is me, waterfall, writing absolutely worthless junk for cabin wars! Yes, I will write all five thousand words by myself if I have to. note how I write five thousand out as two words to make more words and to literally write random stuff and have it count. Unfortunately i can't write a a a a forever because that would be cheating - but note how I snuck them in there? these are genius cabin wars or just writing strats for when you want to write a lot quickly. I mean, I wrote a two thousand word introduction about myself, and it was absolutely trash, but it didn't matter. and it does not matter now, either. make sure not to use apostrophes (however you spell that) and instead of writing “doesn't” write “does not” like I did above ^^ right there. Also your grammar can be terrible - nobody will notice, and nobody's gonna care haha. One, it's not like anyone's going o read this, and two, it''s just junk cabin wars writng, not your writing comp entry or something like that. honestly I've probably already written about one hundred and fifty word by rambling on like that. I mean, isn't this smart? Also remember that the point is to write many words, not characters. so try to limit the amount of long words that you write because it takes up more time. If I have to write five thousand words like this, I will. But I'd also have to stretch ten times for the extra challenge (which I have no problem doing even though it is kind of tiring, that to me is one of the many points of cabin wars) finger murder finger murder FINGER MURDERRRR HEHEHE ooh and betraying people that's fun too. WATERFALL KEEP WRITING STOP PAUSING TO SLEEP- yes this is the day of sleep deprivation like every other day and i sin no way an exception even though I accidentally got sleep today ;P but anyways once I finish writing at least like, two thousand words, I think (not all on here but still) ignore this weird sentence slash paragraph slash all my cabin wars writing, okay? also I keep pausing I can't do that because I'm pretty sure that I have five thousand words to write on my own which is ridiculous but uhhhh and I would like to go get breakfast, but I only have eight hours and with my wpm it's like, sixty five times sixty times eight which is thirty one thousand possible words in eight hours, but obviously I don't always write at that speed, and I need breaks and such. So with that math, even if you divide it by six, it should only take me about TWO HOURS STRAIGHT OF WRITING AAAAAH to finish this but whatever although my wrists hurt so that's something - oki i'm going to penguin waddle now i stretched last time even though I'm pretty sure I haven't reached five hundred words yet, better be safe than sorry. Also I've been up for like an hour warring people and writing this aaahsdfjlkjfsdf this is very tiring and my wrists are like, dying - it's not my fingers, my fingers are fine, but my wrists are dying right now. Literally as I'm writing this I'm on my bed with my face face planted into a pillow, writing with my wrists off to the side not even checking my spelling which is either good or really really bad because I have no idea if I've kept my hand formation lmao. but I can go back and fix it. actually, I did great~ now I shall write a few words about ow when people say lol, haha, lmao, or anything of that sort, they're like ninety nine percent of the time not laughing. and limh was a good idea but people stopped using it. like I don't laugh at things a lot, but I don't want to be rude so I fake laugh in real life, but when I think something is funny but still don't laugh I often say lol anyways. but do you guys (i know nobody's reading this but still) do you guys do the same thing too? Like are you actually laughing when you say lol? Oh my gosh the sound of me just typing non stop iin my room loll (oh and there I go with the lol thing again.) okay wrist break i'm going to shake them out and stretch ahahaha they hurt but I must keep going - I'm going to have like buff wrists when I'm done with this. okay now to actually do that instead of writing about it because it hurttss :cri: oh geez I cracked my neck quite nicely while doing that. aand it's been another five minutes since I said it had been an hour me online even though it was actually an hour and seventeen minutes but I was just feeling too lazy to type it, but now I need to type stuff like before but don't have other stuff to say (well now I do) so I'm just typing this because it's cabin wars and I need to single handedly write five thousand words and yeah. Also I'm pretty sure even though I'm face planted into my pillow I know in my fingers when I've pressed the wrong key, so I just still click backspace and fix it, and when I can't tel if I've written a character, like Idk if I pressed down hard enough, then I actually look up. I think that's pretty cool. because I can just write face down in my pillow. I love stream of consciousness too howeve you spell that lol) because it is another thing, and another type of writing that enables you to write half asleep. Like the little things on the f and j keys I believe, (well I can just find the bumps to find out) they're really helpful because you can go back to your hand position without having to look up from your pillow. Ah, how I love this, so calm and peaceful to write in this way, except for the very awkward position that my wrists are in, causing them to hur even more. I really have to relax my arms and adjust my wrists every minute or two just so that it doesn't hurt so much. But I'm perfectly fine, just weak haha. and the lol haha laughing thing again that I don't feel like writing out but it would probably be productive to write out. I love how instead of finishing my other story that I only wrote like, two hundred words on, I just come here and write this while sleeping because why not xDD okay I looked up and it's so bright haha and I've actually written quite a lot. whoo time to copy it and in hte process accidentally press v instead of c, so that I paste it and lose all of this, and then I just have to do a way too low estimate of the words that I wrote. Soyay, hoep that doesn't happen . Here we go. OMG NO WAY - without counting this, or anything after the here we go, I've already written one thousand one hundred and ninety seven words. and now that's one thousand two hundred and something. which is pretty good. also maybe by the time I eat breakfast and come back someone else might be online so that I don't have to write the remaining like, four thousand and five hundred words myself. I'm so hungry my stomach - I can literally hera it haha. so time to go eat, and then I'll come back and write more. final word count for this piece of trash ^^^ we'll see. also I'm pretty sure I can write an entire essay of things that help and don't help you write while you're face down on a pillow. anyways, I have to actually be done writing now and eat breakfast sooo… (yes me dragging that and this out as long as possible for more words - i mean I could always just not be done yet but whatever it really doesn't matter) so now I will be actually done. right … now.
- Eeveedonut
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Cabin Wars Rambles #2
3/11
590 words
time for a new character of mine to make her debut :0
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I walk down the street, my Starbucks Pink Drink in hand. Today's the day I start college, and I'm quite nervous. Will the people there be nice? Will they be mean? Will it be too hard? I bite my lip but quickly brush away the thought. My best friend, Lisa, gave me a tip that my crush since the seventh grade is in one of my classes! Oh wow- I can't wait to see him! He's a year older than me, sure, but he's so handsome and dreamy and I'm in love with him. Does he know I exist? Ehhh… probably not. But I'm still in love with him. I trip over a crack in the sidewalk, spilling my drink all over my crusty tennis shoes. I groan, but on the bright side, I finally have an excuse to buy new shoes! I moved to Florida and I need sandals, but I'm also broke so I've been waiting for an excuse to buy new ones. And here it was! I giggle. I know that today will be a great day, no matter what happens! World, meet Alice Conwit! I can handle whatever the world throws at me! And you can't tear me down easily!
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I run towards him. Oh gosh, I can't take it anymore!
“Ash! Wait!” I call out.
“Serena?” he questions. He's on the escalator and going up quickly. My heart is pounding as I race up the escalator. He waits for me at the top and- and- I kiss him. He wraps his arms around me, picking me up and twirling me around. I pull apart, tears streaming down my face.
“I-I love you, Ash.”
“I love you too, Serena.”
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I can't think. My brain has gone numb.
I can't see. My eyes have blacked out.
I can't feel. My nerves are gone.
I'm falling.
I'm falling down a black void
Of nothing.
Except I'm not falling.
I'm floating in place.
Yet I am falling.
I want to scream but I can't.
I want to lash out and do something
But I can't.
I'm being suffocated.
I black out.
I lose all my senses.
Goodbye, world.
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It's as if I'm stuck in tar. I can't move. I can't interact with the world. I'm just stuck. I can't scream at Tabitha. I can't do anything.
I'm dragged through my life. I turn my nose up at Tabitha every time she comes by me. I ignore her. She doesn't exist to me anymore. Eventually, she breaks. She can't stand being ignored. She can't stand being nothing.
“If you don't want to be friends, just ****ing say it instead of ghosting me!” she screams at me in the middle of the hallway at school. She lashes out at me, pulling at my hair, clawing at my face. Teachers quickly pull her off of me and she starts sobbing, saying that I started it. The principal pulls me aside, asking what happened.
“Sh-she body shamed me. So I've been ignoring her everyday since then,” I say, tears starting to erupt in my own eyes. “She screamed that at me and then attacked me- I didn't do anything! I didn't do anything.” I'm crying now. Tears are pouring down my face and the principal gives me a comforting hug. She looks me in my eyes once she pulls apart.
“You didn't do anything wrong. Tabitha has some anger issues and we've been looking for a way to expel her from this school for a while now. She won't ever bother you again.”
3/11
590 words
time for a new character of mine to make her debut :0
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I walk down the street, my Starbucks Pink Drink in hand. Today's the day I start college, and I'm quite nervous. Will the people there be nice? Will they be mean? Will it be too hard? I bite my lip but quickly brush away the thought. My best friend, Lisa, gave me a tip that my crush since the seventh grade is in one of my classes! Oh wow- I can't wait to see him! He's a year older than me, sure, but he's so handsome and dreamy and I'm in love with him. Does he know I exist? Ehhh… probably not. But I'm still in love with him. I trip over a crack in the sidewalk, spilling my drink all over my crusty tennis shoes. I groan, but on the bright side, I finally have an excuse to buy new shoes! I moved to Florida and I need sandals, but I'm also broke so I've been waiting for an excuse to buy new ones. And here it was! I giggle. I know that today will be a great day, no matter what happens! World, meet Alice Conwit! I can handle whatever the world throws at me! And you can't tear me down easily!
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I run towards him. Oh gosh, I can't take it anymore!
“Ash! Wait!” I call out.
“Serena?” he questions. He's on the escalator and going up quickly. My heart is pounding as I race up the escalator. He waits for me at the top and- and- I kiss him. He wraps his arms around me, picking me up and twirling me around. I pull apart, tears streaming down my face.
“I-I love you, Ash.”
“I love you too, Serena.”
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I can't think. My brain has gone numb.
I can't see. My eyes have blacked out.
I can't feel. My nerves are gone.
I'm falling.
I'm falling down a black void
Of nothing.
Except I'm not falling.
I'm floating in place.
Yet I am falling.
I want to scream but I can't.
I want to lash out and do something
But I can't.
I'm being suffocated.
I black out.
I lose all my senses.
Goodbye, world.
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It's as if I'm stuck in tar. I can't move. I can't interact with the world. I'm just stuck. I can't scream at Tabitha. I can't do anything.
I'm dragged through my life. I turn my nose up at Tabitha every time she comes by me. I ignore her. She doesn't exist to me anymore. Eventually, she breaks. She can't stand being ignored. She can't stand being nothing.
“If you don't want to be friends, just ****ing say it instead of ghosting me!” she screams at me in the middle of the hallway at school. She lashes out at me, pulling at my hair, clawing at my face. Teachers quickly pull her off of me and she starts sobbing, saying that I started it. The principal pulls me aside, asking what happened.
“Sh-she body shamed me. So I've been ignoring her everyday since then,” I say, tears starting to erupt in my own eyes. “She screamed that at me and then attacked me- I didn't do anything! I didn't do anything.” I'm crying now. Tears are pouring down my face and the principal gives me a comforting hug. She looks me in my eyes once she pulls apart.
“You didn't do anything wrong. Tabitha has some anger issues and we've been looking for a way to expel her from this school for a while now. She won't ever bother you again.”
- Amzingkarishma07
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Scratcher
15 posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
hey yall i'm Karishma
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say [hi, i'm new here can someone explain to me how this works thanks:)] for (2) secs
- minergold48
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Scratcher
100+ posts
SWC Megathread || March 2023
Word War with @lilyjen // 142 words
Prompt: “Their hair was made of bright, stinging stars, and it draped down to their knees in constellations.”
The actual word war:
My edited version that I’m using in the word count studio (203 words):
Prompt: “Their hair was made of bright, stinging stars, and it draped down to their knees in constellations.”
The actual word war:
Rogupp gasped as they looked up at the massive mysterious figure, who looked at them and jumped a bit in shock. They giggled as the ground shook a bit. “Oh-!” the goddess yelped. “I’m sorry, I didn’t know you were there-“ “it’s okay!” Rogupp responded, reaching out to mess with her long constellation-pattered kimono. “I’ve never seen anything like you before-! Are you a star?” The being giggled. “No, I’m not a star. But I sort of…rule the stars, in a way. I didn’t know that anyone lived on this planet!” “Oh- well I do! I haven’t met anyone else though…” They looked a little sad. The Kitsune tanuki kneeled down, gently stroking them. “It’s okay. Do you want to come with me?” They looked up in excitement. “Really-?!” When the giantess nodded, they jumped around in excitement. “Yay I get to
My edited version that I’m using in the word count studio (203 words):
Her fur was made of bright, shining stars, and her kimono draped down to her knees, covered in constellations. Rogupp gasped as they looked up at the massive figure, who looked back at them and jumped a bit in shock. They giggled as the ground shook from the impact. “Oh-!” the mysterious entity yelped. “I’m sorry, I didn’t know you were there-“ “It’s okay!” Rogupp responded, reaching out to mess with her long constellation-mottled kimono. “I’ve never seen anything like you before-! Are you a star?” She giggled. “No, I’m not a star. But I sort of…rule the stars, in a way. I didn’t know that anyone lived on this planet!” “Oh- well I do! I haven’t met anyone else though…” They looked a little sad upon realizing that. The Kitsune-Tanuki hybrid kneeled down, gently stroking them. “It’s okay. Do you want to come with me?” They looked up in excitement. “Really-?!” When the giantess nodded, they jumped around in excitement. “Yay I get to go explore! With a friend! I’ve never had a friend before!” They hopped into her open arms. “I’m Andromeda, and you?” “I’m Rogupp!” They hugged Andromeda as she slowly hovered into the air, smiling at her new companion.
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