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Scratcher
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Week #3: Fantasy Words: 3006 +4000 points for poetry
Part One: List
Part One: Connections Words: 317 (200 required)
Part One: Narrations Words: 424 (400 required)
Part Two: Questionnaire Words: 1,033 (800 required)
Part Three: Dystopian Fantasy Words: 375 (300 required)
Part Three: Urban Fantasy Words: 307 (300 required)
Part Three: Hidden Worlds Words: 550 (300 required)
Word Total:
+317
+424
+1033
+375
+307
+550
Part One: List
- Strict, dreary town in the midst of lively, free cities
- “Magic Forbidden” rules; everyone born with it, no one allowed to us it
- Marriage is for gain ONLY
- Proper society, freedom frowned upon
- Lively society, no rules.
- Children are dark, guilty creatures.
- Girls are decorations
- King rules the so called “kingdom” (town) in the empire
- Town governor/mayor/ruler is the so-called “prince of denial,” or the illegal child of the empire’s king and a peasant.
- The town/kingdom is hated upon
- The town/kingdom is loved
- No humor, dull town
- Beautiful forest with lively creatures
- Being part/serving the military is the ‘ideal’ job, with a farmer being a close second
- A desert of coldness, sheets of ice
- Poorness is frowned upon, wealth is power
- 3 rival families, one love triangle
- A circle symbolizes the good
- A triangle symbolizes the evil
- LGBTQ+ is so frowned upon on, you can go to jail (“the triangle of misery”)
- As legend states, only once the town finds happiness will the fog surrounding it disperse, and only then will the sun shine.
- Witches are only helpful, with angels being the dark one
Part One: Connections Words: 317 (200 required)
In the midst of all the free, lively cities of the biggest empire of history, tucked into the middle, lies the sad, dreary Insinqi Town, pronounced “In-sin-gi”. Insinqi is quite hated by the rest of the cities, villages, and towns- it has a strict, “absolutely NO magic use” policy, no humor, and proper etiquette is everything. Over at Insinqi, there are two main symbols: the circle, which means good, and the triangle, which symbolizes evil. Much like this, a boy-girl marriage is the only “correct” marriage for them. This is why LGBTQ+ is such a sin here; if you tried to commit against the “correctness,” you would be sent to the “triangle of misery,” or jail. Of course, to match this, you’d be ignored if you were poor- only the wealthy have room here, apparently. If you’d look closer at all the couples, you could really see the fact that ‘marriage is for gain only, and girls are decorations.’
The mayor of Insinqi has been said to be an illegitimate child of the emperor, Sarchiri (or “His lord of our empire, may the sun rise with you day after day”), and a measly peasant. At the closest towns to Insinqi, there is a legend. This particular legend states that once the town finds happiness, the fog will finally disperse, and then the sun will shine there.
Another very important part of society there is the fact that they believe children are dark and guilty, and they grow out of it in time. That being said, the amount of children who are actually found guilty is very low.
And finally, there are three rivaling families. Two of the families have 16-year-old boys, and they’re all fighting for the one, 15-year-old girl from the last family. While the girl’s family despises the two boys’ families, they are the only ones high enough on the social rankings for their beauty.
Part One: Narrations Words: 424 (400 required)
I walked quietly along the main path of my town, Insinqi. I was walking to the jail, the prison, or however you wanted to call it. One of our town legends (we have a lot of those), states that along with all the spirits, the fog in our town comes from the prison, because it becomes thicker the closer you get. My brother had went and gotten himself involved with one of the children gangs, and it had wound him up in prison. As my sore feet, after a day of farming, carried me, a young, fourteen year old girl who could be delicious prey for some, my mind wandered through stories, rumors, and gossip.
I finally reached the jail. Its layout was the definition of “evil”: it had the base of a triangle, the evilest shape for us. I drag my body to the front desk, desperately hoping that the richest person that guards the front desk isn’t there today. Of course, my wish is in vain- Wincer “Rich” Carmeli is sitting, glaring at me. He signs me in, probably with a comment like “Girl visits her brother too much; visitor for cell #34”. I honestly didn’t care; my brother had done what he could to keep my mother and I safe, even though it was him going to a gang, joining, and getting caught, ending with being sent to prison. Even the thought of my wonderful brother, only five years older than me, put a smile on my face. Unfortunately, one thought always dimmed my smile: it would be hard for him to get a wife, get higher on the social status, you get the idea.
As I neared cell thirty-four, my head started pounding, my footsteps getting slower and slower, until I stopped, and let his green-milky eyes stare into my freaky blue ones. One gaze, a glance, was all it took; words that were unspoken flew between us, back and forth, back and forth. While he was here, our sibling bond had only gotten stronger, until it was unbreakable. A new smile pulsated on my lips; I could imagine his warm hands around me, and I could almost sense the fog lifting. I longed to touch him, have his warm body curled around me during the current cold winter nights.
My time with him, just staring, mesmerized, was over too quickly- I had been too late to have more than ten minutes. My feet started to walk me back home, the fog settling in my mind, and my heart aching.
Part Two: Questionnaire Words: 1,033 (800 required)
1. How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it?
Around four out of five people potentially have magic. However, only three out of the four can actually use the magic, harness it and change it. The other “one out of four” is the one that has magic, but can’t form it, a, “title without the hard work.” The final one out of five has absolutely NO magical ability, and the only way one with no magic can so-called “perform magic” is by using special stones that disappear after one use, no exceptions. At the age of three, every person’s magical ability (if there) will appear; at noon on the day of their birth, golden sparks will fly around them. If they are part of the one fifth who has magic but cannot harness it, there will be red sparks.
2. What is the origin of your magic?
One simple word: Legends. In this world of mine, legends and happiness are some of the strongest weapons. There was one sorcerer, granted the ability of magic by a strong gemstone, one of the special stones that disappear after one use. This stone had magic because of how it mixed with chemicals and minerals, cold and heat. So when the sorcerer, only three years old, swallowed the stone, the magic grew inside of him. And it was genetic. So it got passed down, and down, and down. However, mere seconds before he died, a legend has said that he cursed any town, city, or village that was unhappy: until they could find true happiness, even for a single millisecond, immediately the fog will lift- until they aren’t, it’ll stay. In most of these housing settlements, happiness was found in days, until one town was left, Insinqi.
3. What kind of magic is used in your world?
All sorts. There are special sorcerers who specialize in plants, who can heal them with a touch, will them to ripen their fruits, to grow stronger and higher. There are special blacksmiths, using metal magic, that could fix metal shields, reiron the magic swords, and craft a bow and many, many arrows. You could go to a healing house and visit a healing witch, where they would use your “life strings” to fix a broken bone, massage a clenched muscle, or just bewitch your cold to fly off and away. There is even Music Magic, which a band or singer absolutely needs to create good music.
4. What is an important symbol of your world?
The most important symbol is the circle. For a circle means many things, from a never ending cycle of love, or maybe friendship, to a shape with no bumps, or, in Insinqi Town, the main and only path of the town is a never-ending loop of intertwined circles. The entire empire is built of a circle, the so-called “royal castle” of one of the small kingdoms in the empire is a circular tower, with four more towers branching off at the top.
5. What are some slang terms or other words used in your world that are related to magic?
Unsurprisingly, in the town of Insinqi, there are no slang terms for magic- here, it is forbidden to practice, although some do, maybe the herbalist erging the plant to heal itself, or the blacksmith to fix a tricky spear. However, in other cities, there are some- as well as the most popular one, “MG’ed,” which means “magicked.” Another popular one is “M”- such as “Did you just do the M?” Of course, every town, or gang, or anyone really, develops some of their own slang, but “MG’ed” and “M” remain the most used.
6. Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
Yes, for instance, MM, or Music Magic (also known as Musyc Magyc) would give you a tingling sense in your fingers, your fingertips would smell of one’s favorite smells of the world, and taste of your favorite food or drink. M2M (Metal Magic) would give you, after a particularly hard job, the metallic taste of blood on your tongue, and the feeling of harshness. T3TM (Healing Magic) would give you the sudden urge to k1ss somebody (a reason why many T3TM healers have stuffed animals), and a 8M (a Seer) would give you the breath of peppermint.
7. Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how?
Magic does NOT affect the government at all. Magic is used for jobs (ect. MM), but was originally created for each person on their own, if they can harness it. So technically, no, it doesn’t affect the government, but people might vote for a Seer (8M) to be their president rather than an MM, because music magic doesn’t exactly help run a government. Likewise, metal users (M2M’s) would probably be put to shifts as security guards, like for prison, instead of a herb worker.
8. How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world?
I can, for the most part, make the character seem a bit “unafraid,” or maybe unsurprised by magic- after all, if you are unsurprised by something or someone, (or some ability), it is probably part of the norm, right? However, to include that more magical element, I’ll still be adding some surprise; you do need surprise for magic. Also, adding laws and punishments help- they show the reader that this world is used to magic, and actually is quite strict when it comes to it (everything from almost free reign to absolutely no magic.)
9. What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic?
One of the biggest ones: the first sorcerer, Mahi Ali’Shua (the one who swallowed the stone), set up an intricate curse and spell system that, if a town, village, or city is happy, they have a sunny, just right weather, if sad, mad, or anything other than joyful and related feelings, then it would either be way to hot (over 130 degrees fahrenheit at night) or too cold and dreary. The second and other most noteworthy example is when the dragons were killing humans and eating them, or using them as pets. Mahi’s own daughter, Sha’ati Yaefa, was the one who used her metal and fire magic to tame them.
10. What happens when magic gets out of control in your world?
Oftentimes, when magic gets out of control, there are natural disasters that happen. Some of these natural disasters include avalanches, fires (often the worst), blizzards, heat waves, the list could go on to cover over ten pages, but you get the gist. There’s a legend known as “A Volley Wave,” and tells of what happened when Sha’ati Yaefa died. Apparently, for the 31 days of mourning of August, it rained everyday volleyballs on the people. While most believe this is a made believe legend, there is actual proof to support it.
Part Three: Dystopian Fantasy Words: 375 (300 required)
“Jade.” The teacher, who is a white male who despises females (well, all my teachers are the exact same), doesn’t even see it fit to ask a question in the right tone. Instead, it’s his normal, harsh, why-is-there-a-female-in-my-class tone.
“Yes, sir?” I asked in a polite voice. The only other girl in the class was Clementine, a bright, straight 100’s girl.
“Did you do your homework?”
“Almost done, sir, it’s due tomorrow,” I said with a quick smile. “I’ve got it in my pack, sir.”
“Get it our right this second, Jade, this second.” He growls at me, “Or are you such a bad student, not to mention you are a girl, that you can’t do homework?”
“It’s right here in my pack.” I say, giving him a fake smile. I know it doesn’t reach my eyes, but do I care? No. “Here sir.” I handed him over my project, a poster talking about why girls were so dumb and why we were the only ones that couldn’t use magic. I hated the subject, yes, but the topic might give me some extra points. It was technically complete, I just had to add some old stickers I found that matched the topic, but now, thinking about it, it was probably better this way.
“Nice work,” he says, lifting my hopes up, “for a girl.” This guy, I swear.
“Thank you sir, now I’ll be on my way,” I grabbed my pack, then ran out the door before he could catch me. I was heading down Cathae street, following the ever-so familiar path. Unfortunately, I couldn’t wear a hood- that would draw very much unneeded attention to me. The becomation of the uneven stones told me I was getting closer, before I turned a sharp right, then straight for three more yards, then right again. I finally arrived at GAM headquarters.
“Girls, almighty, for magic,” I whispered then, making sure nobody was watching, I headed in, humming ‘Babe, It’s Gotta Be You’ by the Musyc Magyc Musycians (the MMM’s are the most popular boy and girl band now). “Shallo, Carni,” I said as I passed the guard, then continued humming. And in there, stood the grand glory of our headquarters, in what appeared to be shambles.
Part Three: Urban Fantasy Words: 307 (300 required)
“You are under arrest for trespassing on government property-”
“Oi, really Jen?” I complain as she puts handcuffs on me. “Not cool, putting your best sister and best friend in handcuffs because you don’t recognize me, girl.”
“Riley?” Jen asks, but finishes tying me off, just in case.
“Yes, no get these stupid things off me!”
“Oh uh right- wait. What’s the password?” Jen asks again, giving me a suspicious look.
“There isn’t a password!” I screeched.
“Fine Riley,” she signed, “c’mon, though, something interesting finally happens and it's you!” She uses magic to get the handcuffs back around her belt, and we walk together to the headquarters.
“Where’s the trespasser?” Jamie, or our eldest sister, complained.
“Riley, how about you explain?” Jen said with a grin, then slipped away to the rankings. I rolled my eyes at her, then turned around to face Jamie.
“You guys thought I was a trespasser even though you set me up for a mission. End of story. But I did find something interesting…” Everyone leaned in; I repressed the urge to giggle.
“You know McKayla Parker? She was there, talking with the mayor.” In our town, we have a police force, yes, but is it the leading protection? Absolutely not. The mayor is the only one to have complete power, and she ultimately has the best security guards- including McKayla Parker, the most famous and the best police woman.
“And that’s why… Jacqueline,” I paused for the effect, waiting for my sister to turn her head, “would you like to explain to us why you had a hard time remembering Jen and I apart, McKayla?” Jacqueline, or should I say, McKayla, paused then glared at me.
“Well, you got me there, Riley Joahnbur. Maybe you should connect me to a lie detector, and I can explain some things for you?”
Part Three: Hidden Worlds Words: 550 (300 required)
“Emi, stop daydreaming! We’re going off to look at the coast!” My best friend, Akari, was dragging our friend group out to the Japanese Coast, to a small secluded place where we could swim.
“Akari, you owe me a new jacket,” Shiran, our other friend, complained.
“Yeah, why are we going out to the beach?” Efi, our other other friend asked.
“There’s been rumors of mermaids!” Akari clapped her hands excitedly, and we all shook our heads. Akari always drags us to the closest places she can if it has to do with mermaids. We all signed once more, then followed Akari to the car. Her Suzuki, a small white car, was big enough to fit us four. “Let’s gooooo!”
“Coughing up to you, giving you all you want… but how come it’s always, ‘not’? I give myself to you, for you, but all you give me back is ‘not’!”
“It’s always not, not, not, so when will you…”
“Finally give me a yes? (yes, yes, yes)”
“You lot are definitely crazy, remind me why I hang out with you guys…?” Shiran groaned. “What’s so special about the Girls? Except for the fact they’re a world-wide sensation?” I laughed, then gave my cousin a hug.
“Shiran, we need to work on what music you like, you know that, right?”
“I know, okay?” Shiran patted my arm. “Put still, could you, you know, tone down the music? I mean, we’re going to look for mermaids, and you guys are blasting music into my ear.”
“Anddddd…. We’re here!!” Emi yells, puts the car in park in a very bad place, and hops out. I come out, with Shiran and Efi following me.
“Is it just me or did it take less time to get here?” I ask, swallowing the traces of sea salt in the air.
The water dancing in front of my eyes, blue and green, the girl swimming only wearing seaweed, the taste of salt- wait, swimming in seaweed!?!? I glanced back, thinking my eyes were playing tricks on me, but there she was, waving at me.
“Erm, am I the only one who can see that girl?” I pointed at where she was waving.
“Emi, are your eyes okay? There’s nothing there!” Akari hugged me. “I mean, I don’t see a tail or anything- Emi, NO!” I jumped. Into. The. Freakin’. Sea.
“NOOOO!!!” I heard the wails of Akari, I could almost see Efi’s “what-the-heck-did-you-do” look (the one I knew all so well), and Shiran’s horror. Absolute, complete, horror. My feet finally hit the sea- and as I submerged, My tight white shirt turned into a mosaic of seashell on a bikini, my short-cropped denim jeans turned into a seaweed short skirt, and I could actually feel three pearls appearing embedded on my skin, upon my eyes (where eyeliner would go).
“Oh look, you have a Count’s ranking,” a lively, bubbly voice said beside me. I turned around, and there was the girl. “I’m Elly, by the way.”
“I- I- how can I breathe?” I ask, terrified.
“You’re part Undper!” Undper? Okay… “It means your mom was an Undper, and your dad was a human! Oh, and I know it’s your mom, because of the pearls on your eyes!”
“I- right. Erm, could you maybe give me a tour…?”
Word Total:
+317
+424
+1033
+375
+307
+550
- coolgirl100-
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Scratcher
100+ posts
July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Cabin wars:586 words
If you go out and sail on the blue ocean for many months and years, you would soon not be able to tell the difference between the sea and the sky.
The fish would be shaped like the stars and the whales will become shaped like clouds.
The sea air will be all the air you will ever know, and the slight rocking on your canoe will always be moving. The sea will never stand still, and wouldn't you. You would just be sailing on your own, for years on end, until you grew up into a young person. and that would be when you finally teach a lone island.
the island would be small, but at least it had people. it would have been so long since you had seen other humans, and you wouldn't talk to them at first. they would live in small villages that were happy and everyone got along, and you would still stay in the shadows and hide. people would approach you and you would shove them away. You didn't know what island you were on, why have set sail in the sea in the first place, or even who you are and who you were meant to be.,
the world will become suddenly a place you don't even know and you would lone to be back in the sea, sailing, where blue is all you know. Sail beside the whales and the sharks and the fish that dart around the surface.
Once again, you will face the blue sky and the blue ocean, spread out like a carpet of dreams before you. You feel at home, with the bobbing waves, the salty air, and the foam that froth on the sea. The fish you manage to catch and the sharks you swim calmly under.
You reach another island. the same one,m hat with the village with the people who always get along with each either. be an island is floating and travels the sea the way you do on your boat. You skip the island and sail even more on the blue ocean and the blue sky.
the ocean's waters change with the sky. it is blue during the day but becomes black at midnight, The fish are silvery specks like the stars whereas they would be the big fluffy clouds during the day. You are used to the storms and the canoes are rotting from being tossed and turned around in them. the wood is splintering as you sail for many years, sometimes seeing the floating island and sometimes not. years pass until you can't tell the difference between the sky and the sea during the evening. Your life is peaceful and calm, and as never-ending as the sea.
You eventually reach the mainland, and never-ending land where animals beyond your wildest dreams are eating strange too-green tuffs you vaguely remember is called grass, and the villages are bigger and have more people in them.
you remember this mainland from long ago before you set out to explore the ocean. The memories drift into your mind as calm as a canoe in an endless sea: the house without grows ivy everywhere on the outside, the farms and villages nearby, the other people you lived with, your family.
the house is right there beside the sea. the people are gone, but you still sit beside the old creaking cottage and watch the sea one last time before setting out again in a sea full of dreams and memories.
If you go out and sail on the blue ocean for many months and years, you would soon not be able to tell the difference between the sea and the sky.
The fish would be shaped like the stars and the whales will become shaped like clouds.
The sea air will be all the air you will ever know, and the slight rocking on your canoe will always be moving. The sea will never stand still, and wouldn't you. You would just be sailing on your own, for years on end, until you grew up into a young person. and that would be when you finally teach a lone island.
the island would be small, but at least it had people. it would have been so long since you had seen other humans, and you wouldn't talk to them at first. they would live in small villages that were happy and everyone got along, and you would still stay in the shadows and hide. people would approach you and you would shove them away. You didn't know what island you were on, why have set sail in the sea in the first place, or even who you are and who you were meant to be.,
the world will become suddenly a place you don't even know and you would lone to be back in the sea, sailing, where blue is all you know. Sail beside the whales and the sharks and the fish that dart around the surface.
Once again, you will face the blue sky and the blue ocean, spread out like a carpet of dreams before you. You feel at home, with the bobbing waves, the salty air, and the foam that froth on the sea. The fish you manage to catch and the sharks you swim calmly under.
You reach another island. the same one,m hat with the village with the people who always get along with each either. be an island is floating and travels the sea the way you do on your boat. You skip the island and sail even more on the blue ocean and the blue sky.
the ocean's waters change with the sky. it is blue during the day but becomes black at midnight, The fish are silvery specks like the stars whereas they would be the big fluffy clouds during the day. You are used to the storms and the canoes are rotting from being tossed and turned around in them. the wood is splintering as you sail for many years, sometimes seeing the floating island and sometimes not. years pass until you can't tell the difference between the sky and the sea during the evening. Your life is peaceful and calm, and as never-ending as the sea.
You eventually reach the mainland, and never-ending land where animals beyond your wildest dreams are eating strange too-green tuffs you vaguely remember is called grass, and the villages are bigger and have more people in them.
you remember this mainland from long ago before you set out to explore the ocean. The memories drift into your mind as calm as a canoe in an endless sea: the house without grows ivy everywhere on the outside, the farms and villages nearby, the other people you lived with, your family.
the house is right there beside the sea. the people are gone, but you still sit beside the old creaking cottage and watch the sea one last time before setting out again in a sea full of dreams and memories.
Last edited by coolgirl100- (July 23, 2022 15:35:28)
- scratch_warrior_cat
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Scratcher
500+ posts
July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Brainstorming: 361 words
1. Seven islands, surrounded by thousands of miles of ocean
2. Each island ruled by a council
3. One central council manages all the islands, but there is much division and strife
4. The representative of the largest island has too much control over the others
5. Each island has several villages, whose inhabitants are tightly connected
6. Central council lives on the biggest island, disconnected from the people
7. Island geography creates distinct culture for each island
8. Local council members are usually respected in the community, and are chosen via a vote
9. Use of language varies based on social status; council members speak in a very refined way, while those on the least powerful islands speak very informally
10. Each island has a color that corresponds with what type of magic the inhabitants usually have
11. Each island also has a symbol that appears on official correspondences and government purposes
12. Music and art are very important, and each island has a unique style of architecture
13. High-ranking officials have expensive clothing, while lower-ranked members of society have simpler garments, made out of local materials
14. Most people in the world can wield soft magic that corresponds to one of the four elements, fire, water, wind, or earth
15. Those who do not have magic and those who do have a great rivalry within society
16. Since most people have magic, the only regulations are that they must be trained to control their magic, and that they cannot use it to harm, deceive, or take advantage of others
17. The more powerful a person is with magic, the harder it is to control, and the most likely they will be seen as a danger to society
18. If a person is deemed too dangerous or unfit to live on the isles, they will be exiled: cast off from the isles into the ocean
19. The magic takes the color of the island that the person comes from
20. The magic is natural, and may come from the power of the volcanoes that created the islands
21. Magic can drain its users over time, especially the most powerful ones
Connections between bolded items: 560 words
The Heptad Islands are located in the middle of an ocean so vast that they have not received any visitors in a thousand years, ever since the first settlers arrived. There are seven main islands of different sizes, each with a unique culture and way of life: the Diamond Isle, the Emerald Isle, the Topaz Isle, the Garnet Isle, the Zircon Isle, the Peridot Isle, and the Quartz Isle. Because of the water that separates the populations, there aren’t many connections between the islands except for travel and trade. A High Council of seven people has been in place for about a century, dedicated to promoting peace and cooperation. This High Council mimics the smaller councils that each island has, which are made up of elected members that serve for life. While the High Council is supposed to judge each island equally, the majority of the power is held by the Councilor of the largest island, the Diamond Isle.
While each island has a distinct accent, all speak the same language, and a person from one island can be easily understood by someone from one of the other isles. Higher-ranked members of society (such as Councilors) usually have more refined speech similar to that spoken on the Diamond Isle, while lower-ranked people—like simple fishers and craftspeople—tend to speak more informally. The members of the High Council live on the Diamond Isle for easy access to the main government facilities, but there are concerns that this causes them to overlook the more isolated islands.
On official government documents and structures, you can usually find the symbol of the island(s) that it concerns or belongs to. Each island has a symbol: their name in the ancient language. In addition, each island has a unique color that gave them their name, and that appears in all art and architecture. This color comes from the color of the magic of the people of that island.
All magic on the islands corresponds to one or more of the four elements fire, water, wind, and earth. While the combinations of these elements can create unique abilities, they all derive from the four basics, which are thought to be created by the same volcanoes that formed the islands thousands of years ago. Almost everyone can use some magic, but some are more powerful than others. Those who cannot use magic or have very little magical ability usually make up for it with ingenuity and creativity, and there is often conflict between magic-users and non-magic-users. On the other end of the spectrum, those who are very powerful with magic are often shunned and feared. They have trouble controlling their magic, and even the simplest use often is more powerful than they expected, and drains a great deal of energy.
If a person, magical or not, is deemed too dangerous to society, they may be exiled from the islands and cast off into the endless ocean. There aren’t many rules, but the ones that do exist discourage harming, deceiving, or taking advantage of others. If the rules are broken, they are punished severely, usually by demoting one’s rank and causing societal shame.
The community is very important in the Heptad Islands, especially among members of the small villages on each island. Loyalty to the group rather than the self is expected to be placed above all else.
Story: 620 words
I curled my fingers over the water, feeling the wind deep in my bones. As I relaxed, deep red plumes flowed from my hands into the air, swirling with the breeze. I closed my eyes, content to stay beneath the warm sun and gently laughing waves. I could live like this forever.
“Ayanna!” a sharp voice cut through my peacefulness, and the magic around me blew away abruptly in the breeze. I groaned slightly, pushing magic into the water so my raft would float a bit further out to sea. Maybe she’d believe that I couldn’t hear her.
“AYANNA, COME BACK TO SHORE THIS INSTANT!” I closed my eyes, trying to pretend that the noise was just the cry of a bird.
Abruptly, the calls broke off. She must have given up. I heaved a sigh of relief.
Then my raft rocked, nearly pitching me over the side. Or maybe not. I looked down to see a crimson mist spreading through the waves, causing the water to dip and swell as if it was underneath a furious tempest. I clutched on tightly as my raft shot toward the shore. In a few moments, it hit the beach with a squelch, showering a rain of sand and water over me.
I lay there, stunned, staring up at my mother’s angry face. She stood over me, her perfectly styled curls, gleaming red dress, and spotless garnet earrings making her look even more intimidating than she usually did.
“Ayanna, we’re going to be late because of you,” she growled.
I blinked up at her innocently, taking my sweet time to get to my feet. “You could just go without me,” I pointed out.
Her glare could have vaporized all the water in the ocean. “I want you cleaned up and ready in two hundred drumbeats. I won’t have the other Councilors see what a disgrace you normally are to this island.”
I shifted my face into a nonchalant expression, but inside, my heart was drifting apart like a clump of sand in warm water. I trudged past her, promising myself that I wouldn’t let her see the tears welling in the corners of my eyes.
But she must have noticed anyway, because I caught a murmur as I headed up the beach. “Pathetic. What a waste of such power.”
My hands curled into fists. What luck I had to have the rottenest parent in the seven islands. All she cared about was popularity and control.
As my anger swelled, a tiny part of my mind warned that it was dangerous to let my emotions grow too strong. It sounded a bit like Mother.
The roar of the ocean drowned out the rest, and my vision filled with red. I couldn’t see anything, but I could feel the connection between myself and the sky, the ocean, the trees, getting louder and stronger, a symphony that intensified with every thump of my heartbeat.
But then, as quickly as it came, the music faded. My muscles felt weak, and I barely registered my legs buckling, sending me face-first into the hot sand. I closed my eyes. It was warm, and the allure of the darkness begged me to follow it.
Something shook my shoulder, turning me onto my back. I opened my eyes to see my mother’s face slack with shock and anger. Behind her, I could see pieces the wood that had been my raft scattered across the beach, along with an entire row of trees that had been swaying to the breeze only a minute before.
“What have you done?” my mother moaned, shaking her head. But even if I had wanted to answer, I couldn’t hold on anymore, and the world went black.
Author’s Note (261 words)
To start off, this was a very fun and interesting weekly, and I very much enjoyed worldbuilding and creating stories for these five worlds!Fantasy writing is one of my favorite genres to read, but it can sometimes be a struggle to write in. However, the workshops were very helpful, and I learned a lot about how to worldbuild for fantasy worlds! This particular piece comes from an idea for a world that I’ve had for a while, but I mixed up the magical powers a bit, inspired by my writing competition entry’s world. It was really fun brainstorming how the magic and society of this world works, and I feel that the guiding questions in the workshop really helped make the world more structured and realistic.
I had quite a bit of fun connecting all the dots together, and I ended up picking most of the elements in the list :3. Also, for the story, I wanted to explore what would happen if someone with extremely powerful powers was, at the same time, in a position of power herself, as the daughter of one of the most important people in the Heptad Isles. However, I also wanted to experiment with terrible parents, which I haven’t written a lot about before, so voila, there goes the first part of my weekly.
I might return to this world in future SWC tasks, since I do like the way it is going. High fantasy seems like an interesting genre, and I look forward to writing in it again in the future!
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Questionnaire: 1,100 words total
1. How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities? (88 words)
My world is built on the real world, but where everyone has a special physical or mental ability. These abilities run in families, so close relatives usually will have the same ability. There are many types of abilities, such as telepathy, telekinesis, divination, levitation, superstrength, water-breathing, superspeed, teleportation, the ability to pass through solid objects, the ability to commune with the dead, the ability to speak to animals, and more. People use their ability to complete everyday tasks, and they can be used like any other natural skill.
2. What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments? (109 words)
Because magic is so commonplace, its use is allowed everywhere in the world. The only regulations regarding magic are designed to make sure that everyone is treated fairly, regardless of which power they have. People are not allowed to use their magic to get an uneven advantage over others, such as using their powers to invade others’ privacy or rights. All people are required to carry identification and wear a pin that allows others to know what their power is. If someone uses their powers to break the law or hurt others, they are subject to harsh punishments, including a dangerous procedure that can take away their power altogether.
3. What is the origin of your magic? (142 words)
People’s abilities come from their genetics, and there is no established reason of why it happens. For as long as anyone can remember, these powers have always existed. Just like no one in real life questions our ability to breathe oxygen or walk, people in the fictional world don’t really think about why powers exist. Since many different genes influence the type and strength of a person’s powers, it is hard to determine what abilities a person will have during early development. Before age 10, children will very rarely exhibit any abilities, but it is almost unheard of for a person to not manifest their ability before age 13. After a child reaches the required age, their ability becomes obvious and the strength of their powers can be easily measured. Abilities can grow stronger over time, or weaker with lack of use.
4. How can your world’s magic aid character development? (129 words)
A character’s ability can influence their hobbies and interests, since they will usually practice activities that fit in with their powers. Also, their power can influence how they feel about themselves and their ability to tackle other challenges. If they have a very strong power, they might have difficulty controlling it, leading them to have trouble getting along with others and focusing on tasks that provoke their abilities. However, strong powers might influence their personality in other ways, and the way they control their ability speaks to their character and unique way of coping. On the other hand, a weak ability might make them more self-conscious and cause them to try harder to fit society’s norms and expectations, and they might learn to show their strengths in other ways.
5. How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? (97 words)
Magic is extremely common in the world, and people without special abilities are extremely rare. This usually only happens because of a birth defect and mutation that suppresses a person’s natural genes, or because a person used their powers to commit such a severe crime that their ability was removed. The vast majority of characters even take their magic for granted, as normal a part of them as hair or eye color. Characters are aware that everyone has magic inside them, but that their own powers won’t develop until they are within a specific age range (10-13).
6. How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world? (112 words)
I can ensure that the magic in the story is realistic by making it a part of everyday life. Everyone has these abilities, and they are viewed as a normal aspect of being human. A character’s ability is like a muscle: the more it is used, the stronger it gets. With lack of use, one’s abilities can deteriorate. In addition, people use their abilities to work and do chores, and there is a variety of jobs available for each known ability. For example, a telepath might work as a translator or a social worker, and a person who can talk to animals would make a good veterinarian, zookeeper, or animal control official.
7. What are the limitations of your world’s magic? (80 words)
A person cannot use their abilities indefinitely. It takes energy and conscious effort to use one’s abilities, especially if they have not been properly trained. People with stronger abilities must put more effort into using them, and even those with the strongest powers must still exercise their ability, or it will deteriorate. Even so, every ability has its limits, and there’s only so strong that a person’s powers can get before they overload the person’s capacity to fuel their abilities.
8. Compared to our modern society, what do the characters do differently in your world, now that magic is incorporated? (105 words)
The technology in the magical world is pretty similar to that in the real world, but other aspects of life differ substantially. There are different sports tailored to specific abilities, and many professions are specifically performed by people of certain powers. In addition, some people use their abilities in the arts and sciences. The power and type of ability is very important to society, and some people might be prejudiced against those who have too strong or weak or controversial powers. Also, the use of powers makes the structure of society a bit different to accommodate for all the different abilities that people can have.
9. How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)? (103 words)
In my world, the education system differs based on the abilities of government to serve their people’s needs. In most countries, children younger than age 10 receive uniform education about the different types of abilities, as well as subjects that are present in our world, such as science, mathematics, language arts, social sciences, technology, and sports that do not require the use of abilities. However, once they develop an ability, they start taking specialized classes to hone their powers. Depending on how rare and powerful their ability is, a person might be sent to a special school with others with the same powers.
10. What happens when magic gets out of control in your world? (135 words)
When a person’s powers get out of control, the local government is usually called in to resolve the situation. Sometimes it is an accident, and the person is assigned mandatory classes to learn to control their ability and make sure the same thing does not happen again. Since most abilities have been categorized and recorded, many societies have safety measures in place to protect and control people of any ability. However, due to the ethical concerns associated with such measures, they are strictly regulated and are only to be used if there is no other option. If a person consistently uses their powers to harm others and shows no sign of ever going to stop, the government may make the decision to take away their powers with a controversial procedure that is very rarely used.
Author’s Note (420 words)
Magical realism was always a genre that I didn’t fully understand very well. It sounds like an oxymoron; how could something have magic and be realistic at the same time?
After doing a bit of research, I assumed that magical realism was a genre where magic is introduced into real life, usually as a ‘hidden magic’ behind everything. I was wrong, XD, and this weekly really helped clear it up for me.
I was confusing magical realism with Hidden Worlds Fantasy, and magical realism itself is practically the opposite from what I was assuming.
Magical realism is where magic is a normal part of everyday life, but it isn’t the focus of the story. Unlike other fantasy stories where the magic is an essential part of the problem that characters have to solve, magical realism assumes that magic was part of life all along, but the real problem is one that could happen in real life. Magic is simply used as a tool to help solve it.
Magical realism runs very strong parallels to realistic fiction, and any story written in magical realism could also be rewritten in realistic fiction, replacing the magic with real-life tools. Looking back on the books I have read, magical realism is not a very common genre, but I have read a couple books that use it!
Now, luckily, for the weekly, I didn’t have to actually write a story in this genre, simply build a world for it. Originally, I was going to make a world where people could turn into different types of animals, but that made it a bit hard to answer all the questions, since I couldn’t really imagine how this was going to serve as a tool for the people of this world.
So instead, I gave them all KOTLC powers! (don’t sue me for unoriginality I’m the leader of Fan-fi I’m allowed to take ideas from other places from time to time)
It was pretty interesting to think about how people could use these powers in real life if they were a normal part of the world, and I enjoyed answering all the questions! Perhaps I’ll use this world in future works, since it would be fun to finally put a character into it and see how things go!
Anyway, overall, I learned a lot about magical realism, and it was interesting to see how the world evolved and developed as I answered all the questions! Now that that’s over with, it’s time to move on to part 3!
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Weekly 3 - 2844 words total
Brainstorm: 74 words
Mafia groups
Urban City
Obsessed with the notion of saving face
Aroace kingdom
Shapeshifter
Obsessed with fire
Random holes pop everywhere
Magic Depends on Mood
Plays off facades
Everyone Values Harmony
Speaks in short sentences
Magic is loosely regulated
Lies as a form of magic
Studying stealth and dexterity quite often
Obsession with Candy
Naivety as a prized possession
Values Youth
Weird aversion towards green
Only communicates through telepathy
Rich social status = never seen
Part 1 (Connections): 240 words
Greyden is a world located in an urban city, that is separate from the rest of Earth. There are few ways to get inside, and those who aren’t born inside / trapped in there will not get in. Holes peak around, which allow entry to different parts of Greyden, but never outside of the invisible territory. The richest people are the only people who can bypass the no-passing the city, but they always must turn back because then the people will discover them. There won’t be a new generation stuck, because everyone in this kingdom is aroace. The people of this kingdom also value youthfulness while being an adult, which basically means don’t get job (that tires you) and don’t have kids. This is where magic systems unite and go: because the top class is elite and has the ability to shapeshift their way through holes and blend into the background (through schooling, so can the middle class). Candy is their currency where they exchange it, because candy is believed to give good luck. Another way to get up the social ladder is to create a facade of naivety, but don’t actually be naive because the people placing facades will scam you and you will be left alone. (Unless you play the facade that you are playing a facade and not actually naive which is genius.) Children speak straight to the point, so the sentences are usually blunt and short.
Part 1b: 442 words
My face softens with the candy that was handed to me. It shines with a delicious golden brown glow, giving it some softening. Candy, though savory, was always meant to be saved. It had to be traded for newer goods.
Though I have reached the ripe age of twenty, I don’t work. I call over to my friend, Mellissa, who is sitting at the bench of the cafe. Her and I are in school, studying the fundamentals of calculus. It was a subject deemed worthy by a world above. Handed towards us, a collection of numbers appeared on the page. It’s not like we wanted to learn and adapt to a foreign world.
“Did you hear the rumor?” I stash the candy in my pocket.
“Of what? There are many.” She glances at my shirt, wet with water.
“Of a foreign world called Earth.”
“Oh, that.” Mellissa taps on her glasses. “I don’t know. It may or may not exist. I’ve tried going in holes. Only the rich elite can access the world.”
“Does it exist though?” My face is written with curiosity. The cars in the background honk and blare noises. I have the urge to shapeshift them into tiny ants.
Mellissa has a curious gaze in her eyes. I wonder if she likes candy. “The rumors were brought by the elite. So I don’t know. Apparently they’re giants, and,” she grimaces. “Hold hands and touch lips and have children.”
The words make my stomach sick. “That’s quite a new idea.” Also very weird.
“No, the giants have done this for centuries. Our behavior is abnormal. They call people who behave like us AroAce.”
AroAce, not a bad label. Wonder what their society would think of us.
She finishes her licorice drink, dropping it in a vanishing hole. “Giants are quite interesting.” We walk past a shop and I feel the urge to touch the handle of the candy store, but I remind myself that it was shapeshifted in some form.
Though I urge to have someone notice me on the streets, truly naive people are quickly eliminated by those who know better. So I avoid smiling and hide my inexperience to prevent standing out.
She shapeshifts the hole into a large portal that sinks us both into the deep underground. It is filled with various neons that shine. The liveliness carried throughout, loud noises bustling.
“Three lollipops for a textbook,” Mellissa hands her lollipops, carved in chocolate, to the dealer. But the dealer withholds the textbook from her.
Anger dots her face but she accepts it.
I shapeshift myself into a sharp weapon, which eventually sedates him. Then we run.
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Part 2: 977 words total
For this, I’ll be doing the world in Tides of Yue!
What kind of magic is used in your world?
This is mostly magic that bypasses human constructs of death. By trading things, including people, names, etc. you get to live a while longer. The way it works is that the witch or dealer trades an item that is somewhat valuable, and the dealer can tell how much something is worth and that will be how long the person lives. This is the only way people can live longer than was granted by their poor lives and luck. Usually, this magic always works. (83 words)
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
There are like,,, no regulations on magic. It’s a black market where none of this bypassing death nonsense is known by ordinary people but elites. The dealers who sell these are free to abuse power and under / overcharge, but they are usually somewhat connected to the afterlife, therefore can calculate how much an item is worth, and that changes over time. The dealers actually don’t have much to gain, other than the ability to spite a person they highly dislike. Dealers usually associate with high-ranking officials in the palace, so that’s where some interesting corruption takes place. Also, Yue (the main character) hates the place because it’s quite corrupt. Her mother was one of the few who was not corrupt. (121 words)
Compared to our modern society, what do the characters do differently in your world, now that magic is incorporated?
A lot of backdoors open for rich criminals. As with saying, government officials are corrupt and family members try to exile each other and play mind games, because of court drama! Magic is used as a vessel to perpetuate injustice, with limited access. Because any ‘thing’ can be sacrificed, which could potentially lead a person in power to sacrifice ordinary civilians, which is very harmful. With this magic, things are more chaotic without a fair ruler, but usually the more corrupt person gets in power. This also has bred hatred within society. (92 words)
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
I imagine the dealer gets a tingling sense of energy, because they have to sniff out the value for the item. They go into a sense of focus, where all they can focus on are the approximations and the life quality, and whether or not it’s best for them to do so. When they get back into the natural world, it’s a different feeling (almost a rush of energy being suddenly lifted from their shoulders). They usually see something that indicates how much the value is with how heavy the mist is (heavier means more valuable). There’s a prickly smell in the air that makes a very wandering distraction to those who are dealers. (114 words)
What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic?
Magic is quite the double-edged sword, and it really depends on who holds the magic. Yue’s father was a corrupt ruler so she decided to be brutal and trade her father’s neck, by luring her father with an item she traded the dealer (and she paid time off her life). Her mother also traded a large chunk of her life to be pure, but also strong-willed, which took time off of her life, but raised strong women who could resist corruption (and take down the patriarchal empire). (87 words)
What are the limitations of your world’s magic?
Oooh, so trading has a specific value and risks are high because when you sacrifice material things (including humans), they do have specific value (that humans indeed exaggerate the importance, but that doesn’t change the fact they do). If you change time, a non-material item, for something else, that isn’t ideal for you. Also, the otherworld / afterlife has a sense of when things are unbalanced, so they don’t let you intrude upon boundaries. Sometimes the trade might be invalid, but the dealer is meant to be OP. (87 words)
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
Again, depends on what is traded (or the users). Many people do not know about this magic but elite people in the royal palace are actively aware of it, so it’s seen as something that is advantageous. The use is normalized, and usually elites trade, which doesn’t cause too much chaos. However, the magic is seen as a curse upon the people who trade with dealers, because they have to sacrifice many things, and can sometimes wreck havoc (like Yue’s decision to free the people ultimately led to other people to frame her for her brother, her father’s heir’s assasination). As long as transactions are subtle, it works. (108 words)
What is the origin of your magic?
Basically, there is a special gene that makes you immortal, therefore able to tell the value of items in time. This originated from ‘The Great Disaster‘, where a village was exposed to too much radiation, but one sole survivor remained in the village. The radiation gave them blue blood, which gave them the power to be immortal. This is found in 1 in 1 million people, and it’s very rare for the immortal dealers to reproduce. The gene gives you a sense of power, but you must be carefully trained. (90 words)
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
Most of Yue’s world consists of commoners, who do not receive education, but work and grow grains. Education was a thing of status that many commoners don’t have access to, unless they’re truly gifted, which would probably have them trained in the royal palace. For royalty and elites, they are trained in mathematics, linguistics, history, as well as strategy (and physical education). Whatever are the skills needed to survive a changing kingdom that does not offer stability. As for the rare dealers, they are trained on their intuition and judgment, as well as quick-thinking. They have specific classes to train their magic (like martial arts classes to improve their spirituality). (110 words)
What are some slang terms or other words used in your world that are related to magic?
I didn’t explore this for Tides of Yue but a ‘Switch’ could be used to describe dealers, as they both displace time and elements (as well as ‘Witch’, which can be a word for them). Also, the trade is called the flip, because you’re flipping the Switch (which goes together). The flipping is the result of the displacement. The word for the magic itself is called ‘Time Manipulation’, but the elite people in Yue’s world like to say ‘T-Mani’, which is short and sweet. (84 words)
Part 3: 1111 words total
Urban Fantasy: 334 words
Outside, I hear the city breathe. Warm air rises and falls, as the bustling atmosphere settles within. Boston is a busy sphere: entangled in noises, the city is interwoven with plastic glory. I rise above the buildings, towards the darkened sky. Traffic must be busy these days, isn’t it?
When no-one is watching, corners zip and turn. Beatings on the glass of windows travel, a harsh cacophony against my ears. Where no one looks are the spirals of crime, where children are displaced from the dirt-filled slums. A look into the dark alleyways: tall skinny boys surrounding a small, chubby-faced child.
I dive downward to see the details: they surround the little boy, wanting to snatch the small loaf of bread out of his hands. His cheeks, chubby and rounded are dusted with the city’s smog. I suppose that’s why his clothing is ripped, and jagged in stains. He refuses with a gentle no. They surround him, snatching the bread out of his fingers. He is pushed onto the dirty ground, scarred with red marks.
He cries in a high-pitched scream, but they are buried by the city's traffic. The rest of the world will keep on turning, without him, and they will not bat an eye to his starvation until the story erupts in furious cries.
I turn towards the gang of boys that have snatched the boy’s bread. Yet they live the same situation– a family of five siblings with no home to go to. They sit by the streets and wait, snatching food and collecting coins as they please. Again, because of the bustling city life, they can’t afford to do anything.
With a burst, I zoom over the buildings, as I land down and act as a customer. I pay the loaf of bread and dip a cent to them.
I zoom by the boy’s location and the loaf is handed to him. He mutters a thank you, and perhaps that’s the shiniest glow that has ever shone on him.
Hidden Worlds: 307 words
Quickly, I type the digits into the holographic touchpad, a code only the people of Elva know. The holographic forcefield opens, and I arrive into the world that’s familiar: where everything is electronic.
Even the color of the sky, the wired trees that stick around and waver, the structure that contrasts with the natural glow of the Earth – where humans live. Even the way we walk and talk monotonously feels less than human. But the artificiality of Elva, I suppose that’s what wires our brains into thinking in riddles.
“When the glow of our mind lights, do not breathe, just go on.” We go in and out of Elva, all authorized by the leaders.
Do not breathe, just go on. If anyone questions how you disappear, make it as realistic but unstrange, because you’ll be discovered. As I walk in a perfectly straight line perpendicular to the way I enter, the circle sun draws a parabola through the sky.
I walk around half the distance of the line, but a flash of red catches my mind.
“Someone has breathed, the glow of our minds have been lighted!” Shuffling occurs, as screams penetrate the distance, but the leaders stay calm. With a still face, they broadcast things are still fine.
The person who is an outsider, rolls on her stomach. We can tell by the unaligned way she walks when the electric sidewalks that are perfectly straight waver tight beneath her feet, the way her eyes begin dosing asleep as the unnatural colors enter her eyes.
She is caught on camera, and her features are plastered over the invisible forcefield. A look of confusion paints her gaze, and she mumbles before trying to run, but her legs are stuck in a perpetual motion.
The leaders smirk, before she faces her last breath– a quick stab in the gutter.
Dystopian Fantasy: 470 words
The world’s a lot louder when Yue’s not here.
I sit amongst the corroded rubble, waiting for another desperate client to trade away their status for a few more days to live, or trade time for an item. Watching the noise is exhausting. Hearing the whispers from royalty of foreign wars and chaos. Frankly, it’s exhausting to hear their concerns.
The current emperor, Yang sits on the throne. Seizing power and removing all members on the throne, he boasts over the kingdom. Corruption lives like the air they breathe, but he ignores it, because now he sits above all of it.
With my power, I could remove those who sit and command their people like blocks to be controlled. But I don’t, because I don’t have an obligation to. It’s nature's role to aid what happens to the people. I don’t prey on the poor nor ruin them; I’m just a mere observer of the events that happen. The people must rise against the monarchs, despite the spears pointing against them.
A leader who could lead fairly has been immortalized in stone. They could wait for eons or hope for a fair leader. Wrinkles have already contoured my skin, but it must be even scarier to find a young woman of a thousand years flipping, or manipulating time. There’s nothing new seen: only a simple pattern of corruption before stability emerges, then falls once again.
My orb flickers, and I see a man with long robes heading my way. I’m unbothered: the emperor is about to greet me.
The sand slides against his feet, as he struggles to move forward. Seeing an emperor so desperate is not a new sight, but nevertheless, refreshing. He moves forward, in dripping sweat. Exhaustion must be plaguing him, but time manipulation is a lengthy process that bypasses time constructs.
He arrives in a cold frown. “What do I need for power?”
Power, always an interesting motive. “You already possess this vessel.”
“My kingdom is in shambles!” He screams. “You wouldn’t know how hard it is to run one.”
I raise an eyebrow, as he continues in fury.
“I can trust no one,” he leans close to my ear. “There’s a sinking feeling that I will die soon..”
“You want obedience?” What every tyrant desires. If they can pay, I will grant their wish– for the hefty price of thirty years.
“Yes. I’ll do what it takes.” He frowns.
“You must confirm this. You are about to trade thirty years of your life for obedience throughout your kingdom.”
“Thirty,” he pauses, while making his final nod. Unknown to him, he only has 1 month left.
I breathe in and breath out, the tingling in my chest. The heat radiates from my fingers, as I take off thirty years.
Ultimately, their decision is their final outcome.
Brainstorm: 74 words
Mafia groups
Urban City
Obsessed with the notion of saving face
Aroace kingdom
Shapeshifter
Obsessed with fire
Random holes pop everywhere
Magic Depends on Mood
Plays off facades
Everyone Values Harmony
Speaks in short sentences
Magic is loosely regulated
Lies as a form of magic
Studying stealth and dexterity quite often
Obsession with Candy
Naivety as a prized possession
Values Youth
Weird aversion towards green
Only communicates through telepathy
Rich social status = never seen
Part 1 (Connections): 240 words
Greyden is a world located in an urban city, that is separate from the rest of Earth. There are few ways to get inside, and those who aren’t born inside / trapped in there will not get in. Holes peak around, which allow entry to different parts of Greyden, but never outside of the invisible territory. The richest people are the only people who can bypass the no-passing the city, but they always must turn back because then the people will discover them. There won’t be a new generation stuck, because everyone in this kingdom is aroace. The people of this kingdom also value youthfulness while being an adult, which basically means don’t get job (that tires you) and don’t have kids. This is where magic systems unite and go: because the top class is elite and has the ability to shapeshift their way through holes and blend into the background (through schooling, so can the middle class). Candy is their currency where they exchange it, because candy is believed to give good luck. Another way to get up the social ladder is to create a facade of naivety, but don’t actually be naive because the people placing facades will scam you and you will be left alone. (Unless you play the facade that you are playing a facade and not actually naive which is genius.) Children speak straight to the point, so the sentences are usually blunt and short.
Part 1b: 442 words
My face softens with the candy that was handed to me. It shines with a delicious golden brown glow, giving it some softening. Candy, though savory, was always meant to be saved. It had to be traded for newer goods.
Though I have reached the ripe age of twenty, I don’t work. I call over to my friend, Mellissa, who is sitting at the bench of the cafe. Her and I are in school, studying the fundamentals of calculus. It was a subject deemed worthy by a world above. Handed towards us, a collection of numbers appeared on the page. It’s not like we wanted to learn and adapt to a foreign world.
“Did you hear the rumor?” I stash the candy in my pocket.
“Of what? There are many.” She glances at my shirt, wet with water.
“Of a foreign world called Earth.”
“Oh, that.” Mellissa taps on her glasses. “I don’t know. It may or may not exist. I’ve tried going in holes. Only the rich elite can access the world.”
“Does it exist though?” My face is written with curiosity. The cars in the background honk and blare noises. I have the urge to shapeshift them into tiny ants.
Mellissa has a curious gaze in her eyes. I wonder if she likes candy. “The rumors were brought by the elite. So I don’t know. Apparently they’re giants, and,” she grimaces. “Hold hands and touch lips and have children.”
The words make my stomach sick. “That’s quite a new idea.” Also very weird.
“No, the giants have done this for centuries. Our behavior is abnormal. They call people who behave like us AroAce.”
AroAce, not a bad label. Wonder what their society would think of us.
She finishes her licorice drink, dropping it in a vanishing hole. “Giants are quite interesting.” We walk past a shop and I feel the urge to touch the handle of the candy store, but I remind myself that it was shapeshifted in some form.
Though I urge to have someone notice me on the streets, truly naive people are quickly eliminated by those who know better. So I avoid smiling and hide my inexperience to prevent standing out.
She shapeshifts the hole into a large portal that sinks us both into the deep underground. It is filled with various neons that shine. The liveliness carried throughout, loud noises bustling.
“Three lollipops for a textbook,” Mellissa hands her lollipops, carved in chocolate, to the dealer. But the dealer withholds the textbook from her.
Anger dots her face but she accepts it.
I shapeshift myself into a sharp weapon, which eventually sedates him. Then we run.
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Part 2: 977 words total
For this, I’ll be doing the world in Tides of Yue!
What kind of magic is used in your world?
This is mostly magic that bypasses human constructs of death. By trading things, including people, names, etc. you get to live a while longer. The way it works is that the witch or dealer trades an item that is somewhat valuable, and the dealer can tell how much something is worth and that will be how long the person lives. This is the only way people can live longer than was granted by their poor lives and luck. Usually, this magic always works. (83 words)
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
There are like,,, no regulations on magic. It’s a black market where none of this bypassing death nonsense is known by ordinary people but elites. The dealers who sell these are free to abuse power and under / overcharge, but they are usually somewhat connected to the afterlife, therefore can calculate how much an item is worth, and that changes over time. The dealers actually don’t have much to gain, other than the ability to spite a person they highly dislike. Dealers usually associate with high-ranking officials in the palace, so that’s where some interesting corruption takes place. Also, Yue (the main character) hates the place because it’s quite corrupt. Her mother was one of the few who was not corrupt. (121 words)
Compared to our modern society, what do the characters do differently in your world, now that magic is incorporated?
A lot of backdoors open for rich criminals. As with saying, government officials are corrupt and family members try to exile each other and play mind games, because of court drama! Magic is used as a vessel to perpetuate injustice, with limited access. Because any ‘thing’ can be sacrificed, which could potentially lead a person in power to sacrifice ordinary civilians, which is very harmful. With this magic, things are more chaotic without a fair ruler, but usually the more corrupt person gets in power. This also has bred hatred within society. (92 words)
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
I imagine the dealer gets a tingling sense of energy, because they have to sniff out the value for the item. They go into a sense of focus, where all they can focus on are the approximations and the life quality, and whether or not it’s best for them to do so. When they get back into the natural world, it’s a different feeling (almost a rush of energy being suddenly lifted from their shoulders). They usually see something that indicates how much the value is with how heavy the mist is (heavier means more valuable). There’s a prickly smell in the air that makes a very wandering distraction to those who are dealers. (114 words)
What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic?
Magic is quite the double-edged sword, and it really depends on who holds the magic. Yue’s father was a corrupt ruler so she decided to be brutal and trade her father’s neck, by luring her father with an item she traded the dealer (and she paid time off her life). Her mother also traded a large chunk of her life to be pure, but also strong-willed, which took time off of her life, but raised strong women who could resist corruption (and take down the patriarchal empire). (87 words)
What are the limitations of your world’s magic?
Oooh, so trading has a specific value and risks are high because when you sacrifice material things (including humans), they do have specific value (that humans indeed exaggerate the importance, but that doesn’t change the fact they do). If you change time, a non-material item, for something else, that isn’t ideal for you. Also, the otherworld / afterlife has a sense of when things are unbalanced, so they don’t let you intrude upon boundaries. Sometimes the trade might be invalid, but the dealer is meant to be OP. (87 words)
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
Again, depends on what is traded (or the users). Many people do not know about this magic but elite people in the royal palace are actively aware of it, so it’s seen as something that is advantageous. The use is normalized, and usually elites trade, which doesn’t cause too much chaos. However, the magic is seen as a curse upon the people who trade with dealers, because they have to sacrifice many things, and can sometimes wreck havoc (like Yue’s decision to free the people ultimately led to other people to frame her for her brother, her father’s heir’s assasination). As long as transactions are subtle, it works. (108 words)
What is the origin of your magic?
Basically, there is a special gene that makes you immortal, therefore able to tell the value of items in time. This originated from ‘The Great Disaster‘, where a village was exposed to too much radiation, but one sole survivor remained in the village. The radiation gave them blue blood, which gave them the power to be immortal. This is found in 1 in 1 million people, and it’s very rare for the immortal dealers to reproduce. The gene gives you a sense of power, but you must be carefully trained. (90 words)
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
Most of Yue’s world consists of commoners, who do not receive education, but work and grow grains. Education was a thing of status that many commoners don’t have access to, unless they’re truly gifted, which would probably have them trained in the royal palace. For royalty and elites, they are trained in mathematics, linguistics, history, as well as strategy (and physical education). Whatever are the skills needed to survive a changing kingdom that does not offer stability. As for the rare dealers, they are trained on their intuition and judgment, as well as quick-thinking. They have specific classes to train their magic (like martial arts classes to improve their spirituality). (110 words)
What are some slang terms or other words used in your world that are related to magic?
I didn’t explore this for Tides of Yue but a ‘Switch’ could be used to describe dealers, as they both displace time and elements (as well as ‘Witch’, which can be a word for them). Also, the trade is called the flip, because you’re flipping the Switch (which goes together). The flipping is the result of the displacement. The word for the magic itself is called ‘Time Manipulation’, but the elite people in Yue’s world like to say ‘T-Mani’, which is short and sweet. (84 words)
Part 3: 1111 words total
Urban Fantasy: 334 words
Outside, I hear the city breathe. Warm air rises and falls, as the bustling atmosphere settles within. Boston is a busy sphere: entangled in noises, the city is interwoven with plastic glory. I rise above the buildings, towards the darkened sky. Traffic must be busy these days, isn’t it?
When no-one is watching, corners zip and turn. Beatings on the glass of windows travel, a harsh cacophony against my ears. Where no one looks are the spirals of crime, where children are displaced from the dirt-filled slums. A look into the dark alleyways: tall skinny boys surrounding a small, chubby-faced child.
I dive downward to see the details: they surround the little boy, wanting to snatch the small loaf of bread out of his hands. His cheeks, chubby and rounded are dusted with the city’s smog. I suppose that’s why his clothing is ripped, and jagged in stains. He refuses with a gentle no. They surround him, snatching the bread out of his fingers. He is pushed onto the dirty ground, scarred with red marks.
He cries in a high-pitched scream, but they are buried by the city's traffic. The rest of the world will keep on turning, without him, and they will not bat an eye to his starvation until the story erupts in furious cries.
I turn towards the gang of boys that have snatched the boy’s bread. Yet they live the same situation– a family of five siblings with no home to go to. They sit by the streets and wait, snatching food and collecting coins as they please. Again, because of the bustling city life, they can’t afford to do anything.
With a burst, I zoom over the buildings, as I land down and act as a customer. I pay the loaf of bread and dip a cent to them.
I zoom by the boy’s location and the loaf is handed to him. He mutters a thank you, and perhaps that’s the shiniest glow that has ever shone on him.
Hidden Worlds: 307 words
Quickly, I type the digits into the holographic touchpad, a code only the people of Elva know. The holographic forcefield opens, and I arrive into the world that’s familiar: where everything is electronic.
Even the color of the sky, the wired trees that stick around and waver, the structure that contrasts with the natural glow of the Earth – where humans live. Even the way we walk and talk monotonously feels less than human. But the artificiality of Elva, I suppose that’s what wires our brains into thinking in riddles.
“When the glow of our mind lights, do not breathe, just go on.” We go in and out of Elva, all authorized by the leaders.
Do not breathe, just go on. If anyone questions how you disappear, make it as realistic but unstrange, because you’ll be discovered. As I walk in a perfectly straight line perpendicular to the way I enter, the circle sun draws a parabola through the sky.
I walk around half the distance of the line, but a flash of red catches my mind.
“Someone has breathed, the glow of our minds have been lighted!” Shuffling occurs, as screams penetrate the distance, but the leaders stay calm. With a still face, they broadcast things are still fine.
The person who is an outsider, rolls on her stomach. We can tell by the unaligned way she walks when the electric sidewalks that are perfectly straight waver tight beneath her feet, the way her eyes begin dosing asleep as the unnatural colors enter her eyes.
She is caught on camera, and her features are plastered over the invisible forcefield. A look of confusion paints her gaze, and she mumbles before trying to run, but her legs are stuck in a perpetual motion.
The leaders smirk, before she faces her last breath– a quick stab in the gutter.
Dystopian Fantasy: 470 words
The world’s a lot louder when Yue’s not here.
I sit amongst the corroded rubble, waiting for another desperate client to trade away their status for a few more days to live, or trade time for an item. Watching the noise is exhausting. Hearing the whispers from royalty of foreign wars and chaos. Frankly, it’s exhausting to hear their concerns.
The current emperor, Yang sits on the throne. Seizing power and removing all members on the throne, he boasts over the kingdom. Corruption lives like the air they breathe, but he ignores it, because now he sits above all of it.
With my power, I could remove those who sit and command their people like blocks to be controlled. But I don’t, because I don’t have an obligation to. It’s nature's role to aid what happens to the people. I don’t prey on the poor nor ruin them; I’m just a mere observer of the events that happen. The people must rise against the monarchs, despite the spears pointing against them.
A leader who could lead fairly has been immortalized in stone. They could wait for eons or hope for a fair leader. Wrinkles have already contoured my skin, but it must be even scarier to find a young woman of a thousand years flipping, or manipulating time. There’s nothing new seen: only a simple pattern of corruption before stability emerges, then falls once again.
My orb flickers, and I see a man with long robes heading my way. I’m unbothered: the emperor is about to greet me.
The sand slides against his feet, as he struggles to move forward. Seeing an emperor so desperate is not a new sight, but nevertheless, refreshing. He moves forward, in dripping sweat. Exhaustion must be plaguing him, but time manipulation is a lengthy process that bypasses time constructs.
He arrives in a cold frown. “What do I need for power?”
Power, always an interesting motive. “You already possess this vessel.”
“My kingdom is in shambles!” He screams. “You wouldn’t know how hard it is to run one.”
I raise an eyebrow, as he continues in fury.
“I can trust no one,” he leans close to my ear. “There’s a sinking feeling that I will die soon..”
“You want obedience?” What every tyrant desires. If they can pay, I will grant their wish– for the hefty price of thirty years.
“Yes. I’ll do what it takes.” He frowns.
“You must confirm this. You are about to trade thirty years of your life for obedience throughout your kingdom.”
“Thirty,” he pauses, while making his final nod. Unknown to him, he only has 1 month left.
I breathe in and breath out, the tingling in my chest. The heat radiates from my fingers, as I take off thirty years.
Ultimately, their decision is their final outcome.
- scratch_warrior_cat
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Dystopian Fantasy: 520 words
What do you do when you realize you’re the bad guy? When, despite you doing what you thought was best for everyone around you, it turns out that you just made everything worse? If that happens, are you allowed to be mad at others for calling you names and glaring at you as if you are the scummiest being to ever walk the earth? Or would that just prove them right?
I’m not usually the philosophical type, but for some reason my mind couldn’t stop circling with these questions as I made my way over the cobbled streets. Even though I clutched the thick cloak tightly over my shoulders, the rain soaked deep into my clothes, chilling me to the bone.
I could use a spell to dry and warm myself. The words were already surfacing in my mind, a compelling promise of comfort and peace. But I just shook my head and kept walking. Even though the logical part of me admitted that letting myself get soaked wasn’t going to make up for everything I had done, my resolve crumbled at the thought of using my magic to make myself feel good in the middle of such poverty and misery.
So I kept trudging forward, forcing myself to gaze at the state of my people. My prisoners, more like. What kind of spoiled brat lived in luxury while the people who made his life possible struggled every day to survive? Even now, with the ability to repair their crumbling homes and heal their wounded, I stood at the side like a coward, too afraid of their judgement and hatred to use my magic to help them.
My mind flashed back to the little boy I’d tried to help not long ago. He’d been crouched in a corner, covered in rags and whimpering as his fingers and toes slowly froze in the freezing rain. My heart breaking, I had reached into my coffer and given him five gold pieces, more than enough to buy himself and his family food and clothing.
Moments later, his mother spotted me and snatched her son away. She threw the gold in my face, cursing, and disappeared down a side alley. At first, I was bewildered and angry. Their family could have survived on that gift for months. But then, as I left the corner of the village, I watched as three members of the royal guard stopped a couple of peasant girls, scaring them half to death. I recognized the girls as servants at the castle, and my heart sank as I saw them turn out their pockets to prove that they hadn’t stolen anything.
It was then I realized that if the mother had let her son accept my donation, they wouldn’t have been able to use it without being accused of treachery and theft.
Now, standing in the middle of the village that lay in the shadow of my home, an ironic helplessness flooded me. I had the money, the power, the magic to do so much for this community, but how could I use it to stand against my family’s legacy?
Author’s Note (189 words)
Usually an Author’s Note
Is not written in verse
But it’s cabin wars
So here it is, for better or worse
I’m discussing the third part of the weekly
The first story, to be exact
I chose dystopian fantasy
It was fun, that’s a fact
Usually a dystopian world
Focuses on the people
A rebellion, rising up
From the ashes of oppression
But this time I wondered
What if I did something new
Wrote about the oppressors
A change of heart in view
I never introduced his name
But Prince Tristan is an interesting royal
He’s just realized that all his world
Comes from his people’s spoils
Clearly he’s not as bad
As he thinks himself to be
But thoughts are not as powerful as actions
Will he act? Will he?
I’ve said before
That my stories write themselves
I don’t know what the prince will do
After the final words were written
Overall, this piece
Was very interesting to write
Not only with the genre
But the main character’s self-spite
Perhaps I’ll continue the story
Then again, perhaps not
But I’ll definitely continue
To explore Dystopian Fantasy’s lot
Urban Fantasy: 668 words
Tip-tap, tip-tap. Rattle-tip-tap.
The rain patters rhythmically on the sidewalk, roofs, and streets, but the few pedestrians ambling about don’t even seem to notice. A few cars whoosh past, leaving a spray of dirty water in their wake, and the wail of sirens can be heard from a few blocks away. I pause for a moment beneath an overhang to wring out my hair, observing the City around me. It’s got its own beauty, in a way. Not many cities can manage to stand tall and majestic when even the rats must be drowning.
A flash of lightning illuminates the dark clouds, outlining the skyscrapers in a silver glow. If you weren’t a local and you didn’t have a watch, you’d think it was dusk. That is, until you spotted the enormous clock on the BankCorp building. 12 o’ clock noon.
Tip-tap, rattle-rattle-tap.
You might say it’s dangerous for a girl to be out and about in the city in weather like this. Besides the obvious dangers like crooks hiding in dark alleys and the rain-slicked roads making it easy for a distracted driver to skid right into you, to the untrained eye, the City seems to exude an air of menace. If you say that, you probably have never heard of Wild Town. Those of us who live in the ‘dark side’ of the City know that “Tame Town” has nothing on our ‘hood.
And that’s the way we like it.
A few blocks later, that air of menace you were talking about suddenly dips into the freaky zone. You think those dudes in cloaks are creepy? Don’t worry, at least they’re human. That building over there—yes, the one that’s covered with vines and looks like it’s going to topple over if you sneeze on it—has a coven of witches with a vampire as their next door neighbor. You don’t want to be anywhere near when they start arguing about whose music preferences are more brain-numbing. Spoiler alert, they both belt out some pretty nasty stuff.
As I cross the street, I give a wide berth to the manhole cover in the middle of my path. Am I superstitious? Nah. Just practical. No need to make the ogres mad by stepping on their front door.
You can get to my apartment by heading straight ahead, but anyone who’s worth anything knows that that path leads straight into Clacker Territory. A word of advice: if you have to go a mile out of your way to avoid those angsty arthropods, you’re getting a good deal.
Lucky for me that I only have to walk a few extra blocks. This route will serve my purpose for now, but it’s rather boring and safe. Next time, I might head that way just for kicks. Now THAT’LL make a good story or two.
Nearing my apartment, I circle around the back of the building, eyes searching for the bright red gleam of the fire escape. Once I spot it, a light push off the ground is enough to send me up into the air, and I grasp the metal ladder, taking only a second to stabilize myself before scaling the side of the building.
Is the City dangerous? Absolutely. But it’s the only home I’ve ever known, the only one I’ve ever wanted. Am I ever scared of all the unnatural creatures that live here with me? A few of them make my heart race like a spooked cat, but for the most part, they know to stay out of my way. With my superstrength and enchanted sword, I’ve built up quite a reputation around these parts.
Tip-and-rattle-tap. Rattle-tippy-tap.
When I reach the floor that my apartment’s on, I swing over to the nearest window and slide it open. After taking a moment to shake the rain off my ponytail, I slip inside and close the window behind me, leaving the clatter of the rain to its own devices outside.
That’s enough reflection. It’s time to get to work.
Author’s Note (163 words)
Thought the poem would stop back there?
Haha think again.
For I still need about 300 words
To win the war that Lio sent
Now let’s talk about the second story
Of part 3 of this weekly
I haven’t read or written
Much Urban Fantasy
But the style appeals to me
So I decided to give it a try
This story wrote itself as well
Started with onomatopoeia (but how to spell this :cry:)
This character’s attitude
Is not one I’ve written before
Great personality for a teenaged bounty hunter
Note’s not over yet, there’s more
Urban Fantasy’s interesting
I might do it once more
Hopefully I didn’t botch it too much
But at least 4000 points I’ll score
Will I continue this story?
Maybe, maybe not
If I need a horror piece
I’ll definitely take this back out
So that’s it for this note
I look back at how much I wrote
It’s not over yet, so
Onto Science Fantasy let’s go
Science Fantasy: 561 words
I stepped off the platform, surprised when my footsteps seemed to bounce higher than normal. I had known that the gravity was weaker on Capricorn-9 than on my home planet, but it was one thing to have learned a fact in school, and quite another to experience it on real life.
I experimented with a couple of hops, seeing how high and far I could jump. With every leap, the ship got farther and farther away. After bounding a bit farther, I looked back to see how small the landing craft had gotten. Only problem was, I did so in the middle of a leap.
I tripped over the spongy ground and whirled through the air before landing face-first on a clump of stringy purple ferns. I had been seeing them all over the place, and they had looked soft and squishy. Not so.
I groaned, trying to untangle my face from the plants. The leaves were covered with little suction-cup razor things that refused to come off, no matter how much I pulled. And they HURT.
I struggled there for a few more moments, unaware of my surroundings. Then an unfamiliar voice said something that I didn’t catch, and the plant retreated. I looked up to see a robed figure look down on me disapprovingly.
“Cas a floringo toon,” the figure said. Or at least, that’s what it sounded like.
I stared uncomprehendingly.
“Goodness gracious, Xylar!” a voice from behind called. “I leave you alone for one degree and you somehow manage to get yourself into yet another mess!”
I turned to see my aunt stepping through the ferns, shaking her head. “I’m so sorry, ambassador,” she told the robed native. “Ae is my sister’s child, and I brought aem here with me.”
“Chok toon klaring ten,” the ambassador replied, waving their hand. I noticed that they were holding a stick that seemed to be the same material as the sucker ferns.
My aunt gave a short nod in reply, glancing at me. I wondered what the ambassador had said, especially when they lifted their wand and pointed it at me.
“Uhh, what are they going to do?” I asked nervously, stepping back.
“Storius,” the figure murmured, and a purple mist shot out of the wand and sprayed all over me.
“AAAAA,” I shrieked, trying to brush it off, but only succeeded in getting it all over my hands as well. My aunt shook her head, and the ambassador looked… amused?
“Calm down, it won’t hurt you,” the figure said, a crisp foreign accent flowing over their words.
I stopped flailing and stared at them. “You can speak Stellarian?”
My aunt sighed. “They just cast a translator spell, Xylar.”
“Oh.” Well. That explained it.
“Come,” the ambassador beckoned, turning away. “We have much to discuss about the treaty between our planets.”
“Of course,” my aunt replied, taking my arm and dragging me along. I shook her off and started walking normally. The ambassador went a bit further up ahead, and then my aunt grabbed my ear without warning.
“Hey—” I protested.
“No more trouble, Xylar,” she hissed. “This is very important.”
I blinked at her innocently. She glared.
“No more trouble,” I repeated affirmatively.
“You’d better,” she growled, turning back to follow the ambassador.
I trailed behind them. My first visit to another planet was turning out quite interesting.
Author’s Note (229 words)
Now for the last author’s note
After this one I’ll be done
I'll try
To write
In free verse this time
So that I won’t have to think up rhymes
Science Fantasy, my
beloved
I love this genre
so
very
much
It combines
two
Of my favorite styles
Sci-fi and Fantasy
They seem different
But are so fun
To write
When they are connected
Of course, in this story
The characters have a
SPACESHIP
*insert lightsaber and engine noises*
That’s the Sci-fi part
But there’s also the alien ambassador
With a magic wand
It’s made from those
Icky
Plants, the ones that the main character got stuck in
Really should look where ae’s going, shouldn’t ae?
Xylar’s a little clueless
But ae’s still fun
to write about
On another topic
I made up
Random
Words for the ambassador to say
Please don’t be mad at me
I don’t have much
Experience
Writing alien languages,
And I had to rush to be done for
CaBiN WaRs (yay)
While this piece wasn’t my
Best,
I feel proud of it
In its own way
And I will definitely keep
Writing
This genre in the
Future.
This weekly,
Overall,
Was a great experience
I learned a lot about Fantasy
And writing in general
And I can’t wait until the next one
Now it’s just time to format
And then I will submit.
Bye!
- angelwings-
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Part 1
Ideas (20):
Connections (268 words):
Narrative (415 words):
Part 2
What kind of magic is used in your world? (81 words)
Part 3
Dystopian (537 words):
Hidden Worlds (353 words):
Steampunk (695 words):
Ideas (20):
- Animal world (but not really? More like animal-people ish)
- Gods n demons
- Dif hair color = different social hierarchy
- Everyone should be dressed in black
- Flowers are extremely poisonous
- Studying and playing are reversed positions
- underground/water
- Blood as currency (purity = worth)
- Tech is banned
- Magical powers
- Kill to live
- Maze world
- Woman can have multiple husbands
- No physical touch w others except mother/father or wifey/husbando
- clans/realms -> symbol of recognition
- Death is cool + looked forward to (don’t ask??)
- Kids > parents
- Art as a way of living (need to submit an art piece every year, like a draft)
- Dazzling world w lots of diamonds
- Dystopia ish in which ruler is v bad
Connections (268 words):
Each house in the kingdom of Yeiata is decorated with thousands of dazzling diamonds- yet they have no use, and are only a symbol of shame. Each year, every citizen of Yeiata are required to submit a drawing of Litien, the dead queen of the kingdom that had caused the king to indulge himself in wine and no longer care for the kingdom. The result of refusal to this request- which acted more like a law, a command- was the beheading of the citizen and a diamond that replaced the name in their family tree, a mark of defiance that had been put out too quickly, that would cause the social class of the family to degrade down to the bottom level. Yet citizens that produced drawings the king liked were rewarded with a promotion in class and a bottle of quality blood, the currency used in Yeiata- the purer the blood was, the more it was worth.
In Yeiata, physical touch is not allowed, as even a slight brush of hands would signify the risk of the execution of a whole family; it is only acceptable for your birth parents, or else your wife or husband, to be able to touch you. Technology is banned, and so is the usage of magic; because if you dared to conjure magic or tamper with electronics, it would mean a rebellion, an act of defiance against the king.
In this world, everyone is a literal copy of one another, all dressed in black from head to toe, the only difference the hair color, the representative of social class and hierarchy.
Narrative (415 words):
I kept my head down as we hurried towards the town hall, my left hand clenched tightly onto the neatly folded, pressed drawing kept hidden in my coat pocket, my right grabbing onto my mother’s hand as crowds pushed in on us from all sides, sweeping me off direction as we struggled to reach our destination in time. The cold, crisp air cut into my bones like a dagger, yet all I could do was pull the thin, tattered cloak around me even tighter and continue my way on through the snow. Carriages, decorated with patterns of blood red and black, rushed by us, splattering my mother and I with muddy, melting snow as the owners inside them, dressed in black suits and uniforms, their black- or else white- hair slicked back or styled into an updo, looked out the window at us. I wanted to look up at them, staring back, as if daring them to say something. But I couldn’t- because as rude as they were behaving, they were the upper class and we the lower, which meant that no matter what they did to us, as long as it wasn’t unforgivable, we had no right to fight back or resist.
A carriage sped right in front of us just as I was about to put my foot out onto the street. A step forward, and we would’ve been hit, the full impact coming at us, leaving us hospitalized- if we even had the money, or the right- for months. I glanced up furiously, pulling my mother backwards as she lost her footing and stumbled. “Hey..!” I started, my mother scrambling to hush me.
“They’re the upper class,” she hissed in my ear, her grip on my wrist hardening as she pulled me forward, urging me on. “We- can- do- nothing.”
“They might not actually be,” I argued, “hair colors can be dyed-”
One look from her shut me up.
I lowered my head and continued walking, my violet hair wet and sticky, reeking of muddy dirt and old snow.
Out of the corner of my eye, I caught a young boy, no older than 17- or at least a few years older than me, I guessed- sticking his head out of the carriage that had almost hit us, his hand waving to me, gloved in a sleek, satin color of black. The bustle of the city drowned out his voice, but- believe it or not- I swear I knew he said, “Sorry.”
Part 2
What kind of magic is used in your world? (81 words)
My world is split into two realms- Heaven and the Underworld. Angels and demons (called spyrrei and spyrrae) operate on mana; the more mana they have, the more powerful they are. They use the mana to respond to prayers in the mortal world; they lose 50 mana every year, and gain 100 mana every time they respond to a prayer. Some spyrrae/ei have special gifts that can make them more powerful in some way, but will in another limit them.How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities? (87 words)
Spyrrei, the angels, mainly help people in the mortal world, or else either keep track of records of all the mana everyone has (the analysts), have meetings on the next step regarding the Underworld (the advisors), or conduct personal affairs given by the Emperor. Spyrrae, the demons, mainly use their magic powers for destruction, causing little conflicts here and there, or else they do the same jobs as the spyrrei do and are either analysts or advisors. Each side has an emperor that rules over the land.What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments? (117 words)
Spyrrei/ae have to do things in alignment with their role. If they don’t follow their role, for example, a spyrrei, an angel, does something bad such as murder or something similar to that, they get planted with some type of chip that causes pain during their birthmonth (the month that they were born) and get banished to the mortal world to live the rest of their life as a mortal with no magical powers.How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? (111 words)
For the spyrrae/ei, definitely all of them know they possess magic. A spyrrae/ei is born when a mortal in the mortal realm performs a blood sacrifice, and the first drop of blood that hits the ground becomes a spyrrae/ei. They are randomly chosen to become either a spyrrae/ei and become an official adult spyrrae/ei at 15 years old; before that, they are an apprentice under a spyrrae/ei with rare powers (as mentioned earlier). All should know by the age of five if they possess a rare power, and are assigned a role (analyst or advisor) when they become an adult. Teachers teach in both directions.What are the limitations of your world’s magic? (88 words)
Unless a spyrrae/ei possesses a rare power, they are unable to do something big, for example, reincarnate someone or kill a human being. Magic, in fact, even weakens a spyrrae/ei’s adaptability under extreme conditions, which means they might even be easier to be killed by another spyrrae/ei in war. When a spyrrae/ei “dies,” their spirit dissipates, and unless it is fed with a lot of mana and is managed by another spyrrae/ei who has the power of rebirth, will technically be gone forever.How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)? (105 words)
Magic is not viewed as a talent; rather, it is more like something that you should know since you were born or should learn naturally as you grow up, such as talking or eating. Rare gifts are seen as precious and amazing, and can get you a higher position in your society, although jealousy might also appear along with that. The benefits of having a rare gift also include being able to accept an apprentice (which might potentially increase your mana) and can choose to be reborn, getting another chance as a spyrrae/ei if you are not happy with your current position in life.Compared to our modern society, what do the characters do differently in your world, now that magic is incorporated? (95 words)
Firstly, this world is set in a historical period time setting, back a few thousand years ago in one of the Chinese dynasties. People in the mortal realm are not majorly affected by the spyrrae/ei, except for the fact that their prayers actually bring upon real help, not based upon belief or faith of religion. There is no social hierarchy in the Heavenly realm, as everyone is, more or less, treated as an equal, but power dynamic is cut more harshly in the Underworld, as it’s more of a ‘kill to live’ power dynamic.Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how? (90 words)
Politics are majorly affected by religion and whatnot. People in the mortal realm more or less side with the Heavenly realm, the good side, but as caused by greed, if a person wants to be particularly powerful instead of just living on with their life, they might look towards the Underworld for help. If the emperor in the mortal realm is being bad and looking towards the Underworld for power and money (since the Underworld is underground, they are very rich), the Heavenly realm might step out to stop them.What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic? (122 words)
Special objects, often in the shape of jewelry, can possess special benefits that come from rare gifts. For example, the main character Su Rui’s past life, in which her name was Lan XiYun, got gifted with a hairpin from her lover, a spyrrei with the rare gift of reincarnation called Xu YingXiao, that had the ability to both strengthen the mana of the wearer and combine the effects of spyrrae/ei birth and reincarnation, in which if the blood of the person reincarnated fell onto the pearl in the center, they would be reborn with a new identity. Objects like these (Lan XiYun’s hairpin, Su Rui’s tear pearls) push the plot forward and solve problems in both the magical and mortal realms.How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)? (172 words)
As said earlier, spyrrae/ei officially turn into adults at the age of 15. They continue aging in count but not in appearance, and are generally immortal until they die in battle or murder or turn into a mortal, which means they could be 845 years old but still have the appearance of a 15-year-old. Before the age of 15, from when they are born all the way to the age of 15, they are an apprentice of a rare spyrrae/ei, whom they apply for to be their teacher, similar to occupational searching in the present world. If the spyrrae/ei they apply for accepts, they become their apprentice until the age of 15, in which they become an adult; if they do not, they continue to apply for other rare spyrrae/ei until someone is willing to accept them. A teacher can have up to 3 apprentices at one time, and they generally teach magic history and operation of mana, along with directions toward being both an analyst and advisor.
Part 3
Dystopian (537 words):
I stand up and brush off patches of dirt stuck here and there on my dress. It shouldn’t really count as a dress now, with the bottom ripped off, the sleeves missing and the collar uneven, but it was my grandmother’s and my mother wouldn’t be happy to see me let it go.
Surveying the amount of plants and flowers in my basket, I let out a small sigh of dissatisfaction as I turn and trudge back home. The amount of plants we had been able to savage since the start of the new government has been decreasing ever since the other families in our neighborhood ran out of food and turned to the woods for help. It isn’t easy, but it’s harder for the ones surviving alone, evicted from our country for crimes that they were framed for.
The door squeaks as I open it and step inside, kicking off my shoes as I set the basket on the counter. I pick up a handful of chrysanthemums and wash them in a wash bin, the water already muddy with dirt and grime and left unchanged for days. Everything - even clean water - has become more and more valuable as the days drag on, the value of money plummeting as we are able to buy even less from the barely adequate amount of money my father left us before he was evicted.
I drop the chrysanthemums in a paper cup and head into the bedroom, feeling the walls through the darkness. It isn’t easy living in the dark every day, the windows boarded in fear of the police and even the lights and crystals on what used to be our chandelier sold to the wealthy in exchange for meager amounts of cash. I miss the days when I would awaken to the sound of birds chirping and rays of sun probing lazily into my window, when I could enjoy the fresh air and stare at the little rainbows reflected on our wall as sunlight shines through the crystals. It’s all gone now, though. As much as I miss those days, I know for sure that they aren’t coming back- not until someone does something to change this mess.
“Ma?” I ask quietly, slipping into the room, a dim, warm circle of light surrounding the bedpost, providing a small amount of light to the otherwise pitch-black room. I head over, guided by the candle light, wincing as my leg hits the bedpost and numbs briefly, but I ignore it. My mother sits next to the candle light, squinting her eyes at her trembling hand holding a needle, attempting to pass through the fabric. She’s grown old - suddenly - after my father left us. What used to be a smile on her rosy cheeks is now a grimace on wrinkly skin. The new government had not only taken away her vitality, but also had extinguished the fire inside her. It should have been expected ever since my father and brother were dispelled, but I still can’t help but mull over- over and over again - the possibilities of our current life if we had just ran away before the new government took control of our lives every time I look at her.
Hidden Worlds (353 words):
Before I knew what I had just done, everyone’s eyes turned to me. I looked at Rio, his round eyes in fear as he looked at me, stunned.
“Litien..?”
I opened my mouth, but nothing came out, because the truth was, I didn’t know how to explain. We had been together for years- and this whole time I had been keeping from him my biggest secret, which I had sworn to keep from everyone. Even him.
Seeing no response, his eyes filled with tears, his lips trembling as he took a step back from me, his hands gripped into fists by his sides. I stared at him, my face offering no response as I fought back the urge to run away from him, so I wouldn’t need to see the look on his face right now.
It was fear. He was scared of me.
My hand reached out to him, but he gasped and stumbled back, as if eager to get as far from me as possible.
I hesitated. “Rio…”
A scream suddenly broke the silence, and I turned. “He tried to kill him! He tried to kill Rio!”
“He’s a sorcerer!”
“Get away from him!”
I tried to explain, and yet, my throat seemed like it couldn’t come up with the words to do so.
“I’m not… I-”
But nobody listened to my feeble attempts to deny what they accused me for, and the shouts only increased, in volume, number and enthusiasm.
I’m not sure when the first rock hit me.
But not before long, everyone was throwing things at me, screaming at me, their eyes full of disgust- and some, though they didn’t know what had happened, joined in- because all of the sudden, in a matter of seconds, I had become an evil sorcerer who had tried to hurt his best friend, who had been using some type of dark magic and attempted to release chaos on humanity.
Right after I had just saved them.
And when my eyes fell on Rio, he looked away, and I realized that he had never said a word in attempt to protect me.
Steampunk (695 words):
Octavia stepped into the room, her eyes roving over the carnage. Books were littered everywhere, a pair of old leather boots in the corner; the bed was undone, pens and ink bottles scattered around the floor. The whirring of gears and machinery created a constant hum that was eerily unsettling, yet more strangely, comfortably so. She surveyed the room, searching for any sign of a human being beneath the mess, yet there was none.
“Hello?” she called cautiously, her hands fidgeting as she walked towards the desk, buried under heaps of paper and notebooks. She flipped through a few stacks of files, her mouth opening subconsciously in amazement and surprise. “Wow,” Octavia breathed, thumbing through sketches and models of machines, diagrams and maps, long lists of notes and ideas, considering topics and perspectives she had never dared to think of before in her life.
“Hey,” a voice behind her made her jump, her hand instantly shrinking back from the notebook she was holding in her hand, her hand lightly tracing over the pencil sketches, long smudged with lead, the paper old with eraser marks. “How may I help you?”
Octavia turned to see a young man, at most 22 of age, with sleek, silver white hair, and crystal blue eyes, deep and clear like two little gemstones. Blushing beet red, she bowed, her hair flopping forward and hitting herself in the face. “I’m really sorry- I didn’t mean to-”
“She’s your new apprentice, Mr. Prescott,” a young lady butted in, her high heels polished and shiny as she brushed off her sleeves, the once silky, white satin now ashy gray with soot and steam. “Octavia Landell. Have fun.” She looked at the young man- Mr. Prescott- one last time, in her eyes something that Octavia understood only too well- before leaving, her heels clacking on the wooden floor.
Mr. Prescott turned back to Octavia, a relaxed smile on his face. “Nice to meet you, Octavia,” he said, holding out his hand, brown leather gloves over fair, white skin, like a lady’s. After a moment of hesitation, he pulled off the glove, so that the ashes wouldn’t get onto Octavia’s hand. “You can call me Lucius.”
Octavia gaped at him, before blushing again and nodding furiously. “Of course. I’m Octavia.”
Lucius smiled, before turning back to the desk, rifling through the pages. “Nice to see someone finally interested in my work,” he commented, glancing at her with a sideways smile. “It’s been years since I’ve met someone like you.”
Octavia gaped at him. “Really? But you’re amazing! I love the ideas you have- and you make wonderful designs- you’re lovely!”
She blushed again, realizing only later on what she had thoughtlessly blurted out.
Lucius laughed, looking at her. “You’re very cute.”
Octavia turned a deeper shade of red. “Thank- thank you-”
Lucius just smiled, looking down at his watch, a white glass plate nested inside a copper ring, the little needles on the clock face ticking by. “It’s late,” he said, pushing up his glasses, styled in a way that matched with his watch. “You should go rest.” He walked towards the door, looking back at Octavia, his hand resting on the rim, a sheet of copper painted over black granite. “I’ll be in the engine room if you need me for anything. You can also call Victoria, she’s the lady who just came in.”
“Of course,” Octavia smiled, her eyes turning into little crescent moons as dimples appeared on her cheeks.
Lucius smiled and left, leaving her alone in the room, subconsciously tucking a piece of hair behind his ear before realizing that he had cut it all off. His smile dimmed, his hand hesitating before falling down, tightening into a fist, compressing all his emotions.
He stepped outside, the wind ruffling his hair as he looked up at the sky, the stars glittering above matching the tears swimming in his eyes. Before he knew it, a tear slid down and fell onto the ground.
“My name is Lucius,” Basil whispered, her hand trembling to wipe away the tears. “As it will be for the rest of my life.”
“There’s no turning back now.”
- theniqhtsfall
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Scratcher
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Weekly 7/17-7/24
Part 1 Word counts: 926 for brainstorming, 458 for connections, 497 for narrative (1881 total),Part 1:
Part 2 Word counts for each question (respectively): 189, 172, 224, 264, 270, 261, 187, 231, 231, 226 (2255 total for this part)
Part 3 Word counts for each subgenre: 425, 414, 472 (1311 total for this part)
5447 words total, 5557 words with my notes in parts 2 and 3.
Brainstorming - 926 words
Sentient species of homeothermic animals living in communities, as well as some smaller, more isolated groups of reptiles and marine life.
Soft magic, but generally the magic functions as a pair of hands with opposable thumbs, so that these animals can perform construction tasks similar to that of humans. Magic most prevalent in birds.
There’s a bit more water overall (proportionately speaking) than on Earth, meaning overall sea levels are slightly higher, but more of it is trapped away in underground reservoirs, and huge storms that seem to end up…who knows where. Most places are either extremely arid or have extreme monsoon seasons.
Less elevation differences — there are not many places with mountains or nor forests with huge overgrowth, so populations of animals who are known to live there are a lot smaller.
Values communication, mostly in the written form. As such, leaf-calligraphy is popular in certain places, as is clay tablature. Ciphering and translation abilities, as well as (to a lesser degree) transporting many items safely, are highly valued
Adding onto the last point, most legends and stories throughout the world, usually centered around a physical landmark or oddity, are known by almost all who live on land.
Aquatic life often clashes with those on land. Inherently, because of the chosen communication mediums of those on land, and their lack of ability to swim, it’s been difficult for the two parties to set up communications. Some animals on land, usually those who feed on or are fed on by fish, fall into the camp of wanting to wage total war and obliterate the fish. Others wish to open negotiations. The fish say glub glub (untranslated).
Many species are judged based on their ability to live in the highest (un-submerged) volcano, located at the very center of the world. There is a species of frog, led by the allegedly immortal “Goobert”, that lives in these conditions every day, and will happily host those who choose to brave the challenge. In recent years, they’ve made it far more humane, cooling those who could not make it. Those who can adapt best here are seen as the most resilient, clever, and tough, and usually end up leading their species.
Do animals feed on each other? Yes, yes they do. Population sizes of predators are generally small, although population sizes for scavengers/carrion-eaters are noticeably larger. They are seen as barbaric and the ones that still survived have made deals with many of the herbivores (or other animals lower on the food chain) to help trim the population of the species. Some animals also just have a sacrifice culture. Generally, the most successful carnivores feed on food in the water, which is considered fair game.
The most organized species are the frogs and the birds. Both species share a belief that each animal has a deity, and that their respective deity is the best of them all. As such, birds will generally take pilgrimages south every year, in order to prove their adherence to their deity…somewhere. The rest of this list will focus on the birds.
Certain species of birds enjoy the equivalent of blood sports — normally, this entails plucking a feather off of the opponent. Others like to use their gastroliths in order to create artwork, or simply flaunt the size of theirs to others. Some who unsuccessfully braved the volcano are resigned to a life of gladiating in this way.
Elders die. They’re not revered, they’re not banished, they just go bye-bye in the middle of the night from…unknown causes.
There lies a city in the northeastern straits of the planet (when viewed from a flat map akin to ones on Earth) that is home to all types of birds. Everyone lives in harmony. Egg-eating birds? Sorry, can’t feed here, unless you fancy eating snake eggs. Birds that eat other birds? Get outside of city walls. This definitely has no flaws and no avenues towards organized crime or anything. It is also a gated community.
Music is viewed as highly primitive. Every sound has a purpose for communication, it is certainly not something to be used for one’s personal whims or amusement.
Family is not especially emphasized in most birds. Polygamy is condoned, and taking care of children is meant to be a communal effort. Those who are overly clingy to any member of their family are shunned.
Geese. The superior species of bird is geese, and they know it. They will let you know it. You will know it. They are the one exception to the music rule. They will honk at you. HONK HONK.
There’s a very informal bureaucracy that doesn't actually do anything besides take random censuses and make notices from a council of birds who might be doing this to see conning potential in the future. Who knows…
All of the high-elevation locations are completely overrun by birds, who make their nests there. Many try to use their magic to construct ever higher towers of homes to avoid predators.
Bread is sacred. How did any of these creatures get the technology to make bread? It’s a mystery, but birds will fight to the death over it. Most say it’s a gift of the Gods.
General lack of fear of death. The afterlife is something which is not widely discussed, but many assume that it’s going to be much, much more prosperous than actual life. Being quite conditioned to deal with death, it’s not a big deal, and isn’t at all a taboo topic like it is in the world they travel to afterwards.
Connections - 458 words
At the center of the surface lies a tunnel, a long, fiery portal that leads into the depths of the planet. No one has ever made it all the way down, but the Kingdom of Goobert resides deep within its depths, tempering the fires and ensuring hot magma doesn’t obliterate the entire world. Guards are kept at the mouth of the volcano at all times, day and night, armed to the teeth with sharp, heated stones to keep out intruders. But the frogs claim the weapons are to prevent the fire from coming out, not to prevent others from coming in. Each day, thousands pass by. Some stay for just a few hours in the best sauna on the entire planet, others attempt to live on their own in the various crevices of the structure. Many have to be carried out on a stretcher made of a smooth, black, reflective slab and dumped into the various pools nearby in order to cool off, where eager visitors watch and take pity. Yet others come to the volcano for cleansing purposes. The flightless birds are banished and inevitably wander here. That is, when they existed. Others, such as the geese and the crane, come for its close proximity to the sea. They attempt to build their nests along the sides of the volcanoes with no other purpose than to test their architectural skills. The feathers along their wings morph into separate limbs as they carry sticks and stones to create a tower. The frogs warn them about avalanches of rocks, the high temperatures, and risk of the slant height knocking over the eggs, but the birds don’t listen. They do it for the sake of their species, not for themselves. The geese can be heard honking their own horn all day, whilst the cranes and pelicans sit in grudging silence, judging and envying their better-off counterparts and condescendingly chiding them about wasting their tongues. These birds all hunt and fish together, with some waders running their beaks through the marshy shores for slugs and tadpoles, while larger birds hunt the larger fish, flying high in large arcs before practically throwing themselves at the sea. The frogs disapprove, believing in more humane treatment of the fish, but besides disallowing the birds to cook their meals on premises, they do nothing about it. These birds come every few months from a city just a few days flight north of the volcano itself, stay for a while to feed and to ‘cleanse themselves’, and then fly away again. Most do not make any contact with the frogs unless they choose to stay longer, and most, seeing only the guards that diligently watch over their homes, scoff, and think of the creatures as primitive.
Narrative - 497 words
(Screw conlanging, random names here we go)
Adrian rolled out of his nest, forgetting that the way to the ground would take more than a few seconds. He barely recovered in time, squawking loudly as he hastily beat his wings. He shook his head in disbelief — this was not his first time doing that, and he could already hear the tuttings and silent, critical looks from the other birds around him. But today, he didn’t hear any of that. The sun was high in the sky. He stared at the flat, rolling plains in front of him. Where has everyone gone? All he saw was the grass rippling in the wind, and the calm waves beating against the shore. That reminded him: fish. He almost forgot to use his wings in his excitement, doing an awkward fusion between a waddle and a skip down to the gravelly shore. Squawking again, he backed off as a wave came in particularly high, and internally complained to himself about his overuse of his beak for purposes other than eating. The water was normally wine-dark, but today had a more gray-ish hue, and the skies weren’t even overcast. Adrian listened as hard as he could, but still, no sign of other birds. Shrugging to himself, he took off, circling a couple hundred feet from the sea, admiring the crest of the waves, the peace and serenity of it all.
He was already hurtling down towards the water when he realized why everything was so silent. Everyone was well on their way to the Volcano. It had some other name, title, and honorifics to it, but Adrian had long forgotten what it was. He had never seen or known of any other volcano on the planet, and even he, as dimwitted as he was, knew about most of the affairs of the world (so he thought). Hastily, he caught a fish and tilted his head directly skywards, feeling it slide down his throat into his stomach. It wasn’t enough to keep him full, but it would have to do if he were to make it to the volcano by nighttime.
Whilst in the air, he rehearsed the lines he was going to use to speak to King Goobert, although he knew he wouldn’t get to meet the monarch at this rate. No one would let him. But he didn’t want to ruminate on that, so instead he thought of why he wasn’t woken. Sure, he had a sleeping problem, but normally Jack would come to—
Jack was approaching his older years. He was probably gone. Not gone as in at the Volcano. Gone as in in the Volcano. The realization hit Adrian like a brick wall, and he crashed into a tree. When he awoke, a group of concerned weasels were peering over him. He felt grateful for a moment that there was at least someone who cared for his well-being. Then, one of them licked their lips, and made a comment about birds incentivizing survival of the fittest.
Part 2:
We’ll stay with the goose-centric world for this one, but we’ll move forward substantially in time. At this point, the birds have created a semi-functional society, aided mostly by the fact that they have magic to give them all the skills of humans, while also being able to fly. And being very cool.
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
Basically, it’s not. Birds are incredibly proud of their wings, whether that be for its beauty or for the ability to soar high in the sky, so they’re not very likely to use hands for things they don’t have to. Besides, other than professions like construction or incredibly minute craftwork, it’s not particularly necessary. The most common form of magic is basically making more limbs, either hands with opposable limbs to grab and maneuver things in place of talons, or just adding more and more wings/legs like an octopus. That can’t really fly well. But there are also many lesser-used possibilities, the most common of which have to do with endurance (for flying) and the ability to seemingly steadily fly in one place. Also, bread, for increased energy, although at this point magic isn’t needed to make it. Many tedious, labor-intensive tasks that don’t involve the hunter-gathering lifestyle will require magic, but for the most part it’s not used. Why? Because, to be frank, it’s really late, and I don’t like thinking, and thinking about the implications of magic on a bird society is a little bit difficult.
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
Outside the grand city of Campanis, there are very few rules and regulations on magic, hence why labor-intensive work tends to use it. Inside the city, because young pranksters and smart-alecks like using magic to prank and harass others, there are strict limits and complete curfews on the usage of magic. Most don’t know about these laws, but punishment is usually just permanent banishment, as well as potentially probation, suspension, and expulsion from partaking in religious activities (normally retreats to the Volcano). Of course, in the city of Campanis, many are only able to live in the comfort that they do because of the innovations bolstered heavily by magic. However, many who live here are much older, tending to be smug and complacent, believing that magic within itself is not too useful. As such, they tend not to practice it, and shun those that do. Their children are raised to not be able to proficiently use it, and thus the punishments, despite being considered on the hefty side, are not well known.
What is an important symbol of your world?
Conch shells, both in world and out-of-world, for understanding a great deal of the culture. There are not many large bodies of land, and when there is, it’s generally flat, and the most advanced civilizations of avians do not live very far inland. They generally live on islands because of the copious amounts of water proportional to the land. In an era where discussions with marine-life is no longer a novelty or quite as foreign as before, but still extremely tentative, conch shells have artificially skyrocketed in value as a sign of goodwill. Certain towns and coastal villages will use it as a form of valuable currency, and others will collect the shells, polishing and dusting them off every day and showing off the collections to others. They are meant to symbolize prosperity and youth – something that a child would likely try to use in practicing their magic, or just trying to test their strength in wanting to pick up and have that item. Of course, there are oftentimes things living in the conch shells, and using them in this way often disturbs this, but it’s the thought that counts, and to the PR campaigns of Campanis, what the fish see on the purpose is all that matters. The snails that can be found within these shells also often make for a good meal.
What is the origin of your magic?
Like all things, it started in the volcano. So I’m told (by a very intoxicated King Goobert), a little goose had tried to stay a night within the volcano, just to relax. He felt the rumbling first, and then he heard it, everything around him vibrating violently. And, as any rational goose would, he tried to fly out, and got his wing caught along a sharp rock. As it turns out, the volcano frogs had failed in their tasks, and the magma had begun to spew upwards. The poor goose was just moments away from being engulfed by the ocean of molten liquid when their deity suddenly sprang into action, horrified that one of its kind would have to die such a gruesome death. The deity knew that even if the goose was able to get its wing unstuck, it wouldn’t be able to fly, given that it would’ve had to have gotten extremely hurt from being snagged on the rock. So instead, it gave the goose a third wing. Invisible to the eye, but the goose could feel it, and wincing through the pain, it dragged its broken wing off of the rock and flew up in the nick of time to safety. Given how many geese were waiting outside of the volcano that day to enter for their cleansing ritual, the deity likely thought that the option for some additional limb or body part would be incredibly useful in hitches specifically applicable to volcanoes. But of course, I heard it from a frog, so maybe you shouldn’t take my word for it.
How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world?
What a funny question- oh. Wait. It’s being serious. Um. I think incorporating it as a reverse-aristocracy sort of thing – birds who need it in their everyday lives use it. Those who are more comfortable in their lives, can have others do things for them, don’t need magic for much, and snobbishly look down upon those who have to rely on it to get by. It’s not that they don’t know about it, it’s just that, being sheltered, and in a city relatively separated and distinct (except for a few government positions and other lower-ranked management occupations) between its classes, it makes sense for some to be completely out of touch and see magic as distasteful. On a more general note, magic can’t be overly powerful or used on a whim, that makes things a bit more complicated, and societies would be more incentivized to actually use it. It takes, like most other things, quite a bit of skill and practice to get it down, and techniques of learning it are mostly blunt trial and error. This further contributes to opinions of honing magic being unrefined, and also sets a bar for those in the upper echelon of life who are interested to give up quickly, unhappy with their lack of progress and being generally clueless about where to begin. For the ‘urban’ rich, they don’t have to think much about magic at all, although they are aware of its existence. For the lower class, it’s a lot like being able to effectively plant and till the ground. It’s another tool and task to master in order to sustain oneself.
What is a folk tale you have heard that involves magic, and how can you take inspiration from that tale?
Hans Christian Andersen has a nice little fairy tale on a pair of lucky galoshes (boots) that will grant its wearer anything they wish. A judge travels back to the 1500s, some oaf manages to get his head unstuck, someone wishes to dead (but comes back to life when the galoshes are removed), someone gets turned into a bird, caught, and nearly killed in his escape (this is just what I can remember off the top of my head, it’s a very strange and fascinating story overall). The premise of the galoshes is incredibly simple: anything the person wishes for, the galoshes will grant them as long as they are wearing them. If the galoshes come off (although it’s inferred it becomes a part of the bird and can’t just fall off due to sheer size), then the effects of the wish also fade. Still, there are still many ambiguous elements to it, like the fact that it fits every person that wears it, and the people are often completely unaware of the galoshes' effects, or, in the case of the man that turned into a bird, unaware that the galoshes are what's causing it. I’d like to have that sort of simplicity in that the major rule of magic – that it can act as a limb or an additional body part (tentative on the latter) – is set as a relatively hard and fast rule, but the nitty gritty on what that can entail is a little more up in the air, to give me some creative freedom within specific scenarios.
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
It’s seen by many who perform manual labor for a living to be a boring norm. Almost all birds still prefer to catch their own food, if nothing else than for the thrill of the chase and being able to stretch their wings, which is a task that doesn’t require magic, but of physical tasks, it’s the exception in this regard and not the norm. Nest construction, especially on elevated platforms and towers, requires a lot more work, and is where magic was first used (or at least first documented to have been used). For those who are more involved in religion, magic is seen as a fascinating concept, but not one that has many interesting capabilities, as they are of the belief that it should only be used under extreme circumstances, and when those situations arise, there should be a high threshold of ease for the birds. Many who live in Campanis view magic in practice as a clear indication of a bird being little better than barbarism, but again, recognize the potential value that it may have (but not how it’s actually affected) on society.
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
Yes! Depending on the limb they are choosing to extend upon, the brain may have to consciously or subconsciously deal with its addition. For instance, some may want to increase lung capacity, particularly if they wish to fly at extremely high altitudes or wade longer in the sea. Since they don’t consciously breathe, they don’t have to consciously use their extra invisible lung here, but they’ll be able to breathe more, and have that. The effect is far more obvious in the more common applications of this magic. When one tries to add a hand, they experience the feeling of touch slightly differently than they do with other limbs. The brain first has to process this additional sensation, so having something foreign being connected to it seems quite strange and jarring, and as such perception of touch is often altered. Sometimes, the other senses are temporarily impaired as well as the brain attempts to focus in on its new addition. Many will close their eyes at first, or try to wear mufflers to make this process go by more smoothly. After a while, the five senses will be felt normally, just through an extra channel. The brain will also have full autonomous control of the limb, sort of like how an octopus is very much aware of and can control all of its tentacles despite having more than two of them.
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
There is not much of one in most places, and the distribution of education is actually surprisingly equitable across all regions and ‘class’ of bird, but is far less so by species. Certain, aggressive species like geese will receive education on military tactics and superiority, believing themselves to be the messenger and protectors of their avian deity (the so-called “Goose God”), and pretty much all geese are subject to doing so, and have it so thoroughly ingrained in their system that it could be taught by any of them (and it’s often taught by random, elder geese, as family is not a huge factor here). Geese will also, as well pretty much all other species of bird, receive copious amounts of religious education. Praising the “Goose God,” learning on the correct location and rituals during a pilgrimage, etc. The education happens very sparsely compared to us humans here on Earth, spread out to be approximately twice per fortnight. Magic is taught as an abstract concept, but no application is given other than being grateful for their deities. This is also where many learn to write inscriptions for non-verbal communication, especially those that do not need to use it in their everyday lives. This standardized form of writing, mandatory across almost all, helps to ensure safe transactions, deliveries, and pilgrimages, all of which are extremely beneficial to the avians as a whole.
Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how?
Not really, actually. I will now use this as an excuse to talk about the surprisingly centralized (but still, overall incredibly decentralized) government of the general bird conglomerate. Because the bird population is so widely spread out, it is virtually impossible for there to be a government or series of governments that can be readily summarized and generalized into a cohesive trend. Sure, there’s a bird ‘authority’ that releases ‘censuses’ every once in a while, but how many have access to, answer, or get results for that census is completely up in the air, and likely a very, very small sample size. However, there is one community where the local administration could be seen as more centralized, and that is in Campanis. But not really. Everything is seen as a direct democracy, which says basically nothing because only those working in certain professions and of certain species get a say in things. There is a large amount of influence from religious groups and third parties. These groups are mixed in their feelings towards magic, generally the most animosity magic gets is something along the lines of “poor people, am I right”. Usually, there’s…some support for it as a concept, with the degree and specific details of that support being vague enough that nothing can really be considered, much less passed, without a huge breakdown in government.
Part 3:
Dystopian Fantasy: 425 words (482 with note)
(Feeding into the stupid trope of “government controls magic”, but I want to make it slightly more believable by having it controlled in a way that to most, is not an issue at all, and they see it as beneficial. That said, the government is nowhere near benevolent, and most will to some degree, complacently acknowledge that.)
“Thank you. I’m here today at the Kilead Wharf. The weather’s not looking very nice, the rain is pelting down, and a few moments ago there was even hail the size of golf balls ricocheting off the docks. It’s been a few days since the beginning of the new rebellion, which some have nicknamed the Arken, sprang up right here within the confines of this town. The Inerian Emperor has been greatly peeved, and has allegedly already ordered several units from cities in the area to traverse the swamps and marshes to come and put down the rebellion. But of course, once can’t kill an idea, only the people who, at the moment, are most vehemently going to defend it.
Historically, this southwestern port town has been one of the poorest and underdeveloped within the whole Empire. It’s suffered greatly from tariffs on aquaculture, and as such has had to rely on magic in order to make its industries profitable. Its tourism industry is all but dead, and its once prosperous lands have been converted, allegedly out of government spite, into humid wastelands. Throughout the previous weeks other reporters and I have been on the ground in other Inerian communities of all sizes, from its vast sapphire capital to the very remote outskirts. Almost all express an eerie gratitude towards the Emperor for helping them better control and channel their magic. Long gone are the days of spending years to refine your skills, just to carry out basic tasks. Now, while the scope of what can be done is extremely limited, especially in the department of harming or deceiving others, many feel as though the situation is a vast improvement over what they had before. Now, there is no longer a need to feel guilt for accidentally breaking communal standards or values. The magic they can use help them get by, even when droughts or government mishaps occur.
But things are a bit different down at the docks. To speed up their output, the villagers here not only use magic to help feed and nurture their seafood, but also to kill, skin, chop, and store to prepare for export, things that have been explicitly blocked in the usage of magic. Unfortunately, local authorities did not allow our team to speak to anyone, regardless of their involvement within the revolt. An actual testimony would be nice, but they did emphasize allowing reporters a greater view into their operations once they are slightly further along in their mission. So, that’s all I have today. Back to you.”
Urban Fantasy: 414 words (I give up)
Jamie’s day wasn’t turning out too well. After eighteen years in a small town, she was now expected to learn the public transportation system of America’s third largest city in just three hours. Starting from her studio apartment near Rogers Park, she had to take three different train lines, then take the bus in order to get to her new office. Not knowing how to transfer lines, she physically left the building of her stops, and unknowingly paid for her fare twice over, as a security guard, wearing an expression comprising half of pity and half of scorn, watched her silently. It was only 5:30, and she had an entire day of work to get through, plus the same ordeal (but more dangerous) back home. At least in the early mornings, the stations were full of people trying to go to work. Everyone was awake in the few hours between the afternoon and the evening, and the thought of what could happen to her in a city like this terrified her to no end.
But for now, she pushed those thoughts aside and boarded her second train, which had a vaguely earth but definitely putrid scent. Who brought in the skunk? Oh, how little she knew. She closed her eyes and wrinkled her nose, sinking exhaustedly into her hard, plastic seat. It would just be for a moment.
Approaching Howard, end of the line. Please exit, take a bus, or transfer to the RED or PURPLE lines. Thank you for riding with CTA.
The train exhaled and everyone tumbled out, but Jamie still had her eyes — and ears — closed off from the world. The doors hissed as they clanged shut, and the train continued to move. A few haphazard jolts at first, then a more gradual acceleration into its usual speed, but it was enough to wake Jamie up. She marveled at the emptiness, there were only two other people on the train now. A man in a navy suit and a younger teenager, face hidden by the shadows (and by their hoodie), sitting in the opposite corner of the train. The darkness of the surroundings temporarily tricked her into thinking they were in a tunnel on the tracks, when the train was actually coasting gently on sewage water.
She didn’t realize until she saw a blinding light suddenly illuminate the murky green waves around her, and the train, now but a few feet tall, crashed down thirty feet into the Chicago River.
Science Fantasy: 472 words
Today, the pharmacy is closed. In fact, all businesses are. It's a newly instituted (locally-inspired) national holiday, but it’s not really for any sort of celebration. No, it’s really more of a cleanup day. Yawso officials had decided to impulsively open up a new line of medication for testing. It would be used recreationally, as would everything that came out of this city. As soon as I turned eighteen, I had eagerly lined up to take what was at the time, the newest and hottest. I remember like it was yesterday, because it was designed to completely mess up one’s perception of time. It was small, no bigger than a pea, and a vibrant, neon blue. Basically, it looked and tasted exactly like chalk.
It was espoused as a mini time-traveling device, able to transport you back to view your old memories, relive them again, but also forcing you to carry out the exact actions you had taken before in order to prevent… something I should’ve paid attention to when the doctors were explaining it. It was eventually meant to be used in criminal justice cases, but first, after they’d tested on rodents and birds, they’d decided to get a sample group of volunteers.
I don’t think it did any of those things, because I remember passing out and waking up the next day. When I returned to report my side effects to the scientists, they gravely explained to me what had happened. I had gone into a seizure, and was taken to the hospital. I was discharged at some point, and I must’ve returned to my home in a stupor, where I woke up and discovered I’d lost time.
I still went back again, just to see what other adventures awaited me. As it turns out, my first ordeal could be considered fairly mild, on the spectrum of what these medications do. The one that was released a week ago was a plain, white, circular tablet. Or so I was told. Nobody will tell me what it does, I was still fast asleep from my last test medication. But as I drove to the closed pharmacy, bat and mask sitting in the seat beside me, I could see unconscious bodies laying across all sorts of structures. None, from what I could tell, were injured, and it sure looked like they still had life in them. I was almost certain most of them were not first-time volunteers, and like me, would be standing outside the pharmacy now, if they weren’t unconscious. I gingerly placed my bat on the front windowsill. Break. The glass shattered instantly, finally filling my ears with a sound other than the hum of the AC and the rumble of medical trucks. I clamber in and begin sifting through the boxes, desperately searching for one I hadn’t yet tried.
- amiable_dolphin
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Scratcher
500+ posts
July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Weekly- Fantasy Worldbuilding
Cabin: MYTHHH (FTWWW)
Total word count: 2479 words
PART 1
717 words
Brainstorming
Setting: 311 words
Narrative: 406 words
Part 2
853 words
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
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What is a folk tale you have heard that involves magic, and how can you take inspiration from that tale?
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What kind of magic is used in your world?
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What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic?
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How can your world’s magic aid character development?
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How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
81 words
Part 3
909 words
Science Fantasy
301 words
Hidden Worlds
304 words
Dystopian Fantasy
304 words
Cabin: MYTHHH (FTWWW)
Total word count: 2479 words
PART 1
717 words
Brainstorming
1. Magical ocean water
2. Rainforest
3. Constitutional monarchy
4. Life on clouds
5. Crow considered as holy bird
6. World of lies
7. World of truth
8. Witchcraft practiced
9. Magicians considered as the most powered people, apart from the monarch
10. Tropical Island
11. Set in a castle
12. Set in the Amazon rainforest
13. Everybody is vegetarian
14. Parrots considered bad omens
15. Everybody must have a pet necessarily
16. Strong crime rate
17. Severe punishments in schools
18. Wild animals kept as domestic animals
19. Flower garden
20. Underwater world
Setting: 311 words
The isolated, tropical, mysterious island of acornville, holds a lot of secrets. It can be titled as what some people may call utopia, or dream land. It is situated in the middle of the acorn ocean, whose water is magical. Drinking some of the salty water could heal any sort of disease, be it cancer, or pneumonia!
Apart from this, There is underwater life. Mermaids and Sirens along with urchins are quite common to be spotted.
Acornville is a beautiful place, and so are its people. The residents of acornville, though not many, are humble and generous people. A praiseworthy fact about this place is that lying is a punishable offence, which is why you would find the most honest people here! The people here worship crows, and parrots are considered as a sign of evil. Quite contradictory to most of the rest of the world right? but thats just how acornville is! Different. In the world of acornville, Having pets is a must over here. It is a law from the government. They believe that pets bring prosperity to the family and the animals also have a home. No animal found here is stray. Every animal has a family to live with, and those who don't, reside in a nearby animal shelter. On the island, there is a rainforest which is evergreen. Not even the wild animals from the forest are stray. It is quite common for people to have tigers and lions and bears as pets over here! About 80,00 feet above acornville, Yes, in the sky, there are magical clouds. There is a particular kind of species of crows only found on top of the clouds. There is an arrangement by which tourists can go and view those crows. Crows have really boosted the tourism and economy of Acornville This is partly why crows are considered holy.
Narrative: 406 words
I, Emily, reside on the island of Acornville along with my family. Not many people live here, it has a total population of only about 500 people.The people here are very trustworthy, as everyone (almost 99% of the population) are completely honest. Lying is a punishable offence over here. How would anyone know if you're lying, you wonder? Well, at the time of your birth (if you're born in acornville), A spell is casted on you, and your nose grows when you lie, yes, pretty much like the story of pinocchio. and if you are not born here, when you come to get citizenship, the spell is casted and only then you're allowed to reside here. Tourists are excluded from this spell. This is such a strong practice that one could call the cops on you if you lie! This spell has also been extremely helpful to cops while catching criminals. It might seem a bit too harsh, but trust me it really has benefitted acornville, The crime rate has reduced by over 85% in the past decades.
My family consists of me, my parents, my older brother, brownie (our pet lion), Poppy (our pet dog) and pidgie (our pet crow).
Having a pet is compulsory law in acornville, it brings prosperity to the house, atleast thats what my parents have been telling me all my life. We recently got pidgie when my grandmother passed away, since crows are considered holy. My father thought getting a crow would bring back the positivity in our house. Brownie the lion is 11 years old, and has been with us ever since I was three and he was a cub! Poppy is a * dog, 2 years old. I'm fourteen and my older brother is eighteen.
I was five when I first heard about the legend of our island and the surrounding ocean, how it has magical water, mythical creatures, and about the crows found on clouds! I enquired my dad about it, and soon he took us on a trip to all of those places. Turns out it is true! and now, my visits to the ocean to meet the mermaids and sirens has been like a daily thing to do! I have grown up with them and we are great friends! I also often take brownie on a walk to the rainforests, his second home, and actually his birthplace. Living a life on acornville is really exciting!
Part 2
853 words
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
82 words
The laws in the world of Acornville are severe and might seem harsh. There’s a law for complete honesty. A spell is casted on each resident and it is pretty similar to the tale of pinocchio. Your nose will grow when you lie. One can get sued for lying and can be sentenced for upto 2 years for telling a single lie! Seems very harsh but this has helped reduce the crime rate. This has also helped the cops with catching criminals.What is an important symbol of your world?
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An important symbol of my world is crow. Crows are considered holy and are worshipped. They are considered as a symbol of good luck. This is mainly because of the extremely rare variety of crows found in acornville, on top of CLOUDS! Nobody has the scientific proof of why they live on clouds and only clouds, but it does attract a lot of tourists! Crows have helped a lot in boosting acornville's popularity and tourism and have been beneficial for the economy.
What is a folk tale you have heard that involves magic, and how can you take inspiration from that tale?
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A folk tale I heard that involves magic is that of pinocchio. It was one of my favourites when I was younger and I was often afraid that my nose will grow when I lie. I took inspiration from that tale by inserting a similar spell in my world. Every person is casted a spell which makes their nose grow when they lie. This is why most of the people here can be trusted and are very honest. Lying is a punishable offence.How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
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In the world of acornville, different people have different opinions on the different types of magic. For the spell that grows their nose when lying, some people might see it as a curse to the society, while some may call it a blessing in disguise since it has really decreased the crime rate of Acornville. For the crows living on clouds and the magical water, People fantasize them and really feel blessed to be born in such a beautiful place.Describe the popular infrastructure in your world.
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The popular infrastructure in my world includes a lot of things, especially the rare variety of crows living on clouds floating in the sky. Another fascinating thing is the mythical creatures like sirens and mermaids living in the magical water of acorn ocean. There is also a rainforest which is evergreen and has an amazing climate. One may love to have a trail in the woods. You wont be afraid to encounter wild beasts since all of them are either adopted or with the animal shelter.
What kind of magic is used in your world?
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The kind of magic used in my world has healing powers and it is used for the prosperity and internal development of people of Acornville. Some of the few magics used include a lie detector, which, similar to the tale of Pinocchio, causes your nose to elongate when you lie. This has hugely reduced the crime rate of Acornville and has been beneficial in a lot of ways. There is also magical water in the surrounding ocean which treats any disease. The magic is also useful for boosting tourism as rare crows are found on top of clouds over here.
What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic?
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One of noteworthy examples of problems which can be solved by the power of magic in acornville is definitely the healing power of the magical water of the acorn ocean. It can treat any sort of diseases, be it typhoid or cancer! Just one drop can make the disease go away! Also the spell that detects lies also helps the cops in catching criminals. This seems a bit too harsh but it has reduced the crime rate of Acornville by a lot!
How can your world’s magic aid character development?
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The magic in Acornville really helps in internal development of a person. A spell is casted on them at birth which causes their nose to elongate whenever a lie is told. People refrain from lying due to this helps in developing their quality of honesty. Acornville has the most honest people on earth! Most of the people here are telling the truth ninety nine out of hundred times, of course, they wouldn't want to be another pinocchio in the making!How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
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Magic in acornville is an extremely helpful way of character development and health. A spell is casted on each resident which causes their nose to elongate every time they lie. So due to this spell, people do not wish to lie often and thus are very honest. The healing power of the water in the acorn ocean has the ability to cure any kind of disease, whether it is common cold, typhoid or something as deadly as cancer! Due to some certain, unknown magic, rare crows live on top of clouds, and the clouds hold them instead of getting sunk.
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
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The education system of acornville is quite impressive. Even though it is an isolated island, away from the rest of the world, the literacy rate here is quite high! People attend school upto 16 years of age, and may pursue higher education later on. The educators are either self-taught people, or foreigners who originally come from other parts of the world. The children are taught more than 9 languages in schools, some of which are english, french, dutch, spanish and vietnamese.
Part 3
909 words
Science Fantasy
301 words
Around four parallel universes ahead of ours, there was a planet, identical to the earth, with life on it. This was called the planet of utopia. It was the only planet with life on it in that particular universe, just like the Earth. A spaceship entered the atmosphere of this planet and soon landed onto a barren land. A couple came out of the spaceship and examined the new surrounding. It seemed quite normal to them, like it is on the Earth, until, an unfamiliar creature approached them. The creature, couldn't really be termed as a homosapien, for he was green in colour. Well, it couldn't be termed a zombie or goblin either. What was this creature?
“who are you both? Why do you look so different?” the “weird” looking creature enquired the couple. “Hey, we are romeo and juliet, Two astronomical scientists from Earth. Oh, you wouldn't be knowing what Earth is. Well, its just another planet like yours, with life! We reached here with the help of really advanced technology. We time travelled to the year 2065, met our future selves, who gave us the plan about how to reach here, and well, here we are! Sooo are you a human?” “Human? whats a human? sounds like a vegetable to me! Well people here are mostly coogles, if that's what you were asking.” the green creature said. “A coogle? interesting!” Juliet said. “So tell me more about.. what was it? Earth?” the coogle asked. “The Earth is a part of the galaxy milky way. Life on earth consists of humans, plants and animals.” Romeo answered. “Oh, here we have coogles, bobs and pluts!”
Alll of this was really fascinating for romeo and juliet. They couldn't believe they were in another universe and practically talking to…. an alien right now.
Hidden Worlds
304 words
The screen widens and you see a set of five people who were extremely small, even smaller than dwarfs. This species of humans was called the oblivio and was unknown to the rest of the world. To the “normal” human beings, oblivios may just seem to be some ants, thats how small they were! They had only one goal in life, making the life of normal humans hell. They had a community of their own, spying on “normal” people, and living a lifestyle, yet no one was aware of their existence. They were very smart people but they believed that they would be wiped out of existence if regular humans knew about them. So, in order to continue their species, they lived a very mysterious and secretive lifestyle, causing chaos to the regular humans, yet no one having a clue about it.
That was, until recently. The oblivios had been such a nuisance to the world that too many suspicious activities were noticed in the world. Scientists and cops were investigating, but no trace of evidence. That was until a toddler grabbed the attention of one oblivio and alerted his parents, who thought of it as a regular ant. Later on research, this was all over the news and people were now mercilessly looking for ant-looking humans.
The oblivios were tensed, so they decided to go undeground until this heated up news was silenced. They started creating less chaos for the moment. They made sure to avoid as many humans as they could. Who knew a little toddler could cause them so much trouble? They did everything secretly now and made sure to create minimal nuisance, so as to not gather too much attention. Soon the suspicions of “ant-looking people” were discarded and announced as fake and false rumours. “We're safe!!” A voice remarked.
Dystopian Fantasy
304 words
You are a born *. You are tired of being trapped in your own house and you wish that you could roam around freely without being noticed and risking your life. You did not like traversing through tunnels and always having to be cautious about your surroundings. Who knew being so intelligent would also cause harm to you! You had to think a thousand times before leaving your house, because humans were always around to attack you. Even the government had officially granted them the right to kill endless number of *, without being punished or sentenced! How cruel the world can be!
A * is a creature, similar to humans, with a similar body structure and internal organs, but they have much more intelligence quotient than humans. The only feature that differentiated a human from a * was that there were no ear lobes in *, you could call them advanced humans, just like humans are evolved monkeys. You could call * a sub-division of homosapiens, but the humans on earth definitely did not feel like it. The human race has become extremely cold-hearted and selfish over the past few decades. They also believed that humans were supposed to be the most dominant and intelligent species in the entire world. Therefore, The *, not considered as humans by them, were extremely intolerant for humans. They believed that at this rate * would dominate the world and humans would have no value. When in reality the * had no such plans and wanted to befriend the human race. Humans have always been a threat to the lives of *. They never wasted any chance of making their lives hell and/or killing them. Selfish, cold-hearted humans only have one life goal- to wipe out the existence of the *. Ugh, Jealousy is a drug.
- TheWarriorCat0416
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
A short story I wrote because I needed something to write
Day 1
Everything was normal, until the day the rift opened.
A huge crack in the ground suddenly appeared under a city, swallowing humans, buildings, and everything else. As more and more people fell in, it grew. When the news spread around the world, the rift had eaten about a third of North America. Soon, strange creatures came out of the rift, pulling people in and making the rift grow bigger.
Me and my friends were in a party, and no one noticed anything was wrong. Before we knew it, we were falling down a seemingly endless pit. People screamed and panicked. Animals tried to get out, but the gravity seemed to be very strong, making it impossible to climb or fly out. Objects were everywhere, hitting people and breaking. There were many glowing things around us, like a flashlight and someone holding some lit matches.
As I was falling, I managed to find a first-aid kit falling next to me. I held it and looked for my friends. I looked around for anyone who I knew. I finally saw a flash of lime green hair and a familiar face. I tried to get to her, but it was impossible with the amount of random things falling around us. I shouted, “Sara! Over here!” She noticed me and said, “Haley! There you are!” We both attempted to go towards each other. Then, the light below became brighter. Everything faded into white.
Day 2
I woke up in a forest. I stood up and studied this new place. The trees were quite big, with pink leaves. I found a cute fox eating something, but it ran away when I tried to go near it. I still had the first-aid kit in my hand, but Sara was nowhere to be seen. I walk around, looking for any signs of humans. Soon, I find a cobblestone path that seems to be very long.
I follow the path, waiting for something to happen. After a few minutes, I find a boy my age on the ground. He had a horrifying wound on his leg. I gasped and ran to him. “Are you okay? How did you get that wound?” He opened his eyes and said, “My name's Peter. i fell through the rift and ended up here. A piece of debris made this wound. I can see you have that first-aid kit, so you should be working on my wound before it gets infected.”
“Oh, okay.” I opened the kit and peeked inside. They had bandages, pills, and some medicine. The boy sat up and pointed to a small green bottle of medicine. "Use that one, and then use the bandage. I got to work, cleaning his wound and using the medicine. He didn't even wince when I rubbed the medicine on his wound. I would've screamed, since that wound seems to hurt a lot.
i will continue this later
Day 1
Everything was normal, until the day the rift opened.
A huge crack in the ground suddenly appeared under a city, swallowing humans, buildings, and everything else. As more and more people fell in, it grew. When the news spread around the world, the rift had eaten about a third of North America. Soon, strange creatures came out of the rift, pulling people in and making the rift grow bigger.
Me and my friends were in a party, and no one noticed anything was wrong. Before we knew it, we were falling down a seemingly endless pit. People screamed and panicked. Animals tried to get out, but the gravity seemed to be very strong, making it impossible to climb or fly out. Objects were everywhere, hitting people and breaking. There were many glowing things around us, like a flashlight and someone holding some lit matches.
As I was falling, I managed to find a first-aid kit falling next to me. I held it and looked for my friends. I looked around for anyone who I knew. I finally saw a flash of lime green hair and a familiar face. I tried to get to her, but it was impossible with the amount of random things falling around us. I shouted, “Sara! Over here!” She noticed me and said, “Haley! There you are!” We both attempted to go towards each other. Then, the light below became brighter. Everything faded into white.
Day 2
I woke up in a forest. I stood up and studied this new place. The trees were quite big, with pink leaves. I found a cute fox eating something, but it ran away when I tried to go near it. I still had the first-aid kit in my hand, but Sara was nowhere to be seen. I walk around, looking for any signs of humans. Soon, I find a cobblestone path that seems to be very long.
I follow the path, waiting for something to happen. After a few minutes, I find a boy my age on the ground. He had a horrifying wound on his leg. I gasped and ran to him. “Are you okay? How did you get that wound?” He opened his eyes and said, “My name's Peter. i fell through the rift and ended up here. A piece of debris made this wound. I can see you have that first-aid kit, so you should be working on my wound before it gets infected.”
“Oh, okay.” I opened the kit and peeked inside. They had bandages, pills, and some medicine. The boy sat up and pointed to a small green bottle of medicine. "Use that one, and then use the bandage. I got to work, cleaning his wound and using the medicine. He didn't even wince when I rubbed the medicine on his wound. I would've screamed, since that wound seems to hurt a lot.
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Weekly #3 -
Part One:
Brainstorming:
- Soft Magic
- However there are rules about who can use the magic
- Mountain setting for the main palace and city
- Ruled by a monarchy
- No elections, queens and kings selected by bl00dline
- No democracy at all
- Importance of conformity in most ways of life (as a society)
- Vegetarian (as a society)
- Large kingdom with many different climates and weather patterns
- Education (especially for children) very important (as a society)
- Romance important, people marry for love (as a society)
- Punishments for breaking laws are very severe
- Royal court is a very highly held and desired job
- Very strict about attire for subjects (I.e dresses/skirts for girls and pants for boys)
- Importance of politeness stressed
- Very large gaps in the “classes” (between the poor and the rich)
- Poppies are a symbol of good
- Daisies are a symbol of innocence
- General softcore/cottagecore aesthetic
- Wolves are a symbol of evil
(149 Words)
Connections:
Sitting on a coastline with large beaches but also plenty of forests, deserts, and really any kind of climate you can imagine there being, is the large kingdom of Sista. The kingdom of Sista is led by a queen and a king, both of whom inherit the throne from their parents, aunts, or uncles. There is no way for anyone to become queen or king unless they are a part of the royal bl00dline. The kingdom was formed from many smaller nations that were always arguing over rulers, as well as laws that should be made, this is why there is no democracy in Sista. The king and queen have absolute power over everything. The royal palace and the main city of the kingdom of Sista is located in a valley surrounded by large mountains on all sides, keeping the royal family, their advisors and close friends and family safe from most (if not all) invaders to the country.
To make sure that all of their citizens are conforming and getting along, education is an important aspect of the Sista culture. Children begin school when they are four years old and continue schooling until the age of eighteen, at which point they can become apprenticed, and every person wishes to be apprenticed to the royal court, as it is one of the most sought after jobs in Sista; mostly due to the benefits that it can get people and their families. Schooling is also important to the people of Sista because it teaches their children to be polite and respectful people under any and all circumstances. This politeness extends towards animals as well and so all people of Sista are vegetarian, and most are vegan, however that is not a requirement by law as being vegetarian is.
(297 Words)
Narrative:
Eighteen year old Alaya Michaels brushed her braids over her shoulder and readjusted her skirt over her legs as she continued to write answers for her test. This was the last test that she would ever have to take in school and she was extremely glad for it. Not that she didn’t enjoy school (at least, she would never say that out loud to anybody as it could very well get her into trouble) but once she was finished with this, she would be done with her schooling and she would be able to be apprenticed to someone in the kingdom of Sista. She of course was hoping to be apprenticed to somebody in the royal court, as it was one of the best paying jobs that one of her status could get. Although, with her family being on the poorer side of the subjects of Sista, and having absolutely no connection with anyone in the royal family or their court, she had very slim chances. While she was aware of that of course, (her parents had drilled it into her ever since they had began to learn about apprenticeships when she and her classmates were barely nine years old) she was still holding out some hope that maybe somehow she would by some miracle be chosen to apprentice someone in the royal court. She knew that if she was, that it would be absolutely amazing for both her and her family. She knew that if she was apprenticed she would be able to move into the palace where the royal court resided and her family would be allowed to move into the main city that was near the palace. They would receive an immediate social boost, something that she knew her parents and siblings would love. It would give her younger siblings a better chance at life, which was all she had ever really wanted for them.. It was part of the reason she had worked so hard to try and get the apprenticeship. It was what was best for her and for her family as well.
There was another factor however that might affect her eligibility for the apprenticeship she desired. The royal court used magic for most of their tasks and it was a large part of the job. While she knew that everyone in Sista possessed magical abilities, some were more suited to the royal court than others, and Alaya had never even discovered what her power was.. She had been trying for years but for whatever reason her ability refused to show itself. If she couldn’t reason with her ability then how on earth was she going to convince people that she had what it took to be on the royal court and help with the royal family. People would laugh at her and think she was crazy if she told them she didn’t even know if she really had an ability, much less what it was going to be. She tried not to think about that though and looked back down at her test.
Alaya shook her head, clearing it so that she could continue to focus on her test. For her entire life, she had been receiving amazing grades, much to the pleasure of her parents. She knew her parents were also hopeful that she would receive an apprenticeship to the royal court, even though they never told her that, not wanting to raise her hopes. Ever since she had learned how hard it may be for her to be apprenticed, she had been determined to keep her grades up.. Though it was not only the anticipation of the royal court apprenticeship that kept her grades up.. She had seen what had happened to her classmates who lost their grades.. Most of them disappeared from school and when she had asked about them, she only received the answer that they had been redirected to a school more suited for their talents. She found that hard to believe though and it had been enough to make her insanely dedicated to her studies.
She had once again become unfocused about her test and she gave her wrist a quick pinch, drawing herself back to the present. She needed to focus on this if she wanted to come out on top of her class again. She was sure that it was the only way she would ever be considered for that apprenticeship. She only had two more questions to answer and she had about fifteen minutes left on her test, plenty of time to think through the answers before she wrote them down. And if she had time after she would for sure go back and double check all of her other answers. She didn’t intend to try and show off by submitting her test early like she had seen some of her classmates do. She intended to make sure all of her answers were the best that they could possibly be. If she was going to make things better for herself and her family then she had to get things right on this test. More than anyone else in this classroom.
Looking down at the last question on her test, she was slightly surprised. This one was not a question of science or math or english or any of the other things that she had studied throughout her fourteen years of schooling. Instead it asked:
Where do you wish to be apprenticed and why are you a good fit for this position?
Alaya looked at the question in momentary shock.. She had never expected such an open ended question on her test. She hadn’t studied for this.. How was she supposed to know what the right answer to this was? What if this question alone was going to cause her to lose her desired apprenticeship… If she answered truthfully, would they take away her chance of becoming part of the royal court for being too proud and full of herself? But if she lied and said something more expected of her class, they may believe her and assign her that, which was not what she would ever want. She wanted to do something important with her life, not just live and work as someone like the people she had grown up around. After some hesitation.. She decided to tell the truth and spent the rest of the time on her test writing about why she wanted to be apprenticed to the royal court, hoping it would be enough for her wish to come true.
(1089 Words)
Total of 1535 words for Part One
Part Two:
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it?
In the kingdom of Sista, every subject has some kind of a magical ability. However until it manifests itself and shows up, people do not know what kind of magic they will possess. Most, if not all, characters believe that they all have some kind of ability from an extremely young age. Over the years, there have been very few cases where someone has gone their entire life without manifesting an ability, however those cases are few and far between and it is extremely rare for such a thing to happen.
(91 Words)
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
Magic in the kingdom of Sista is fairly commonplace and most people use it to help them with their jobs. There are numerous different abilities and they are all suited to different areas of work. For the most part, based on their magic, children and young adults are assigned apprenticeships, though you are allowed to have a preference on what job you would like to go into. Even though you can have preference though, you have no control over what you ultimately get.
(83 Words)
How is magic viewed in your world?
In the kingdom of Sista, magic is simply viewed as a natural thing in life and there is nothing really special about it other than the occasional extremely rare ability. The only time that something related to magic would cause one to be ostracized is when (though the chance is slim) someone reaches the age of nineteen or twenty and they have still not yet figured out what their ability is. In those cases, people are usually sent to complete the most menial of tasks as they are considered weak and pathetic compared to the others in the kingdom who do have magic.
(103 Words)
Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how?
In all totality, magic doesn't really affect anything in the government since the royal family is chosen by bl00dline and not through any kind of election or eligibility process or anything like that. However, if for any reason one of the royal family did not manifest a power they would probably be extremely ostracized and perhaps even kicked out of the kingdom or sent to live in as a commoner. Though this has never happened to the public knowledge and so no procedure is known.
(86 Words)
What are the limitations of your world's magic?
There are no limitations for the actual magic that people possess, they could really do anything that they wanted if they really put their minds to it. However there are plenty of laws and restrictions that the royal family of the kingdom of Sista has put into place to prevent people from doing anything rash or anything they deem unworthy of being done with magic. People are not allowed to harm themselves or others (including animals) with their magic and they cannot resuscitate the d3@d either. There are also laws forbidding personal enhancements of mind or body in any way shape or form.
(104 Words)
Describe the popular infrastructure in your world.
The most popular kind of infrastructure that is prevalent in all of the cities and towns in the kingdom of Sista is a sort of quaint small town kind of feel. In most of the cities the houses look like small cottages with thatched roofs, however in the poorer areas those cottages may be much smaller and in worse disrepair than others in the more wealthy areas of town. The palace where the t=royal family lives is made up of white quartz with light pink roofs and tower tops.
(90 Words)
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or would hypothetically learn)?
Education is an extremely important aspect in the society of Sista and it is required that all children go to school from the ages of four to eighteen. They go to school six days a week, Monday through Saturday, and get a break on Sundays. Education is one of the only things in Sista that is completely equitable no matter your social status, as all children attend boarding schools so as to keep focused on their studies. These boarding schools are only located in the wealthy areas of town and are well funded.
(93 Words)
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
The sensations that one would feel vary depending on the type of ability that people possess. For example, someone with the power of telekinesis (or moving things with their mind) feel their heads get warmer as they move things and when they close their eyes they can see the item that they are moving in front of them in real time, as if their eyes were open. Although the only difference between what they see and what is happening in the real world is that in their mind things are only black and purple.
(94 Words)
What happens when magic gets out of control in your world?
When magic gets out of control, there are different things done depending on the kind of trouble and how out of control things have gotten. If it was just a simple misuse of magic that might have been an accident, then people are given a couple of days in a city prison and they may have to go to some kind of magical training classes to learn how to better control their abilities. But if someone breaks one of the core magical laws, they may be forcibly removed of their magical abilities by someone of the royal court or they may be sentenced to life in prison.
(107 Words)
What kind of magic is used in your world?
In the kingdom of Sista uses soft magic and so there are really endless possibilities to what people could do, though there are laws that prevent people from doing whatever they want. As for the kinds of abilities that people can have, there are tons of different ones, so many that all of them may not even have been recorded yet as new ones are popping up every now and again, which is both exciting and also worrying for some of the leaders of the kingdom.
(86 Words)
Total of 937 Words for Part Two
Part Three
Dystopian Fantasy:
As I sat in the bright white room, I looked over at my friend and tried to give her a slight smile, though I immediately dropped my smile as I saw my teacher turn back around in the classroom. I knew I wasn’t supposed to be smiling at my friend, or even looking at her during school. And especially not right before one of our biggest tests. This test was one of our most important ones of our entire lives. We had already passed preliminary exams to make it this far. For preliminary exams we had to prove that we had good control over our abilities, some of which were much more difficult to control than others. For example, while I had the ability to control others with my mind, something that was easy for me to control, my friend Daisy had the ability to light things on fire, but if she got too excited, nervous, scared or any other kind of big emotion it was hard for her to control it and she wasn’t able to control whatever fire she created or stop herself from creating more… I hadn’t seen her since before the preliminary exams.. I was sure she had gotten too nervous during her exam and hadn’t passed. I tried not to think about that though. However, this test would determine whether we liver or- well… If we didn’t. The government only wanted and allowed the most in control and smartest students to survive and go onto living in the society. I looked around the room and saw similarly blank expressions, though I knew that deep down each and every one of these girls was extremely terrified. There were only girls in this room and the boys were being tested in another room. This was usually the case as we weren’t supposed to have any kind of romantic relationships until we were assigned our living partner when we turned eighteen. Even then, we weren’t allowed to choose, so it was always best to keep girls and boys separated from each other.
Suddenly I looked down and saw the test proctor had placed a crisp white test booklet on my table. I was the last one to receive one and I watched as the proctor went back to the front of the room and sat in the large chair. We were informed that we would have one hour to complete the test and that anyone who failed to complete the booklet or who got less than 90% would fail and be “redirected” though we all knew that redirected meant we would never see anyone again.. We would be gone forever. When the clock started I opened my booklet and started my test, praying that I would finish in time to move on to the next round of tests.
(470 Words)
Urban Fantasy:
Twelve year old Lux looked over her shoulder as she walked down the streets of Coronado in California. The light was beginning to fade but it was still light enough for her to see where she was going and be able to calculate her place in the city. She was walking past other people slowly as she dared, and as she walked she simultaneously plucked things from people’s pockets with her hands as well as with her telekinesis. She was careful to make sure nobody saw her, she knew that if she was spotted by practically anybody she was in for a mugging and she would have her days earnings stolen. She couldn’t let that happen. As she walked, she would grab mens watches and women's jewelry as quietly as she could, keeping her head down and her headphones in, though there was nothing playing in them; they were really just for show that people would think she was just any other teenage girl walking down the street. Her gray clothing and plain hairstyle were also meant to deflect attention from her. It was the only way she would be able to do her job effectively enough to earn her keep.
Why was she needing to earn her keep and where? Well, when she was young her parents had both walked out, unable to raise a child in the conditions they were living in, and Lux had been left alone. She wasn’t even sure if that was really her name.. It was simply the name she had been given when she had joined “The Misfits.” The Misfits were a group of street kids that were led by a man named Andras. Andras found lost and vulnerable children, like Lux had been, and he promised them food, shelter and clothing.. But to do that, they had to bring him money or goods by whatever means necessary. Some of the older kids were able to earn their money legally, but most, like Lux, were too young to get a job and they were forced to wander the dangerous city and pickpocket and steal their way to earning their keep for the day.
Suddenly Lux heard someone shout behind her
“Hey you! Give me back my wallet!” They screamed. Without looking behind her to see who it was, she took off running, praying she wouldn’t be caught as she ran through the dark filthy streets.
(402 Words)
Hidden World Fantasy:
Standing by the doorway I hesitated.. I knew that I wasn’t supposed to be here but it was such a temptation to go out into the human world.. I almost couldn’t resist. I had heard so many stories about the way that humans lived and I needed to know if they were really true. I felt that some of them were much too outrageous to possibly be true, but there was no way for me to confirm unless I left my little hidden world where I lived, with the rest of the population of fairies and pixies.
Now, when you hear fairies and pixies, I’m sure you're thinking about those things that you see in drawings or like the ones in TinkerBell or something, but I assure you that we look nothing like any of the characters in any of those stories or movies. In fact, we’re much more interesting than that. We’re the same size as people say that humans are in fact, and our wings CAN be iridescent like the ones that you might be imagining, however more often that not their a completely solid color and you can’t really see through them.
Looking around at the large wooden door, I knew that if I really wanted to go to the human world, it would be as easy as just opening the door and walking through the portal.. I wasn;t sure exactly where I would be ending up if I did go through the portal, but I knew that I would at least be able to confirm or deny some of the rumors I had been told. However, I also had heard the warnings that if I were to go outside that I may expose my world to the humans, which could be absolutely catastrophic if it happened.
Even though I knew this, I looked at the door and considered my options. If I went then I would be able to know everything that I really had ever wanted to know about the human world. Was that worth possibly exposing my entire world to the humans? I thought long and hard and then finally resigned myself to my decision. I put my hand on the door, took a deep breath and turned the knob, walking through the door and into another world.
(385 Words)
Total of 1257 Words for Part Three
Total of 3729 Words for Weekly #3
Part One:
Brainstorming:
- Soft Magic
- However there are rules about who can use the magic
- Mountain setting for the main palace and city
- Ruled by a monarchy
- No elections, queens and kings selected by bl00dline
- No democracy at all
- Importance of conformity in most ways of life (as a society)
- Vegetarian (as a society)
- Large kingdom with many different climates and weather patterns
- Education (especially for children) very important (as a society)
- Romance important, people marry for love (as a society)
- Punishments for breaking laws are very severe
- Royal court is a very highly held and desired job
- Very strict about attire for subjects (I.e dresses/skirts for girls and pants for boys)
- Importance of politeness stressed
- Very large gaps in the “classes” (between the poor and the rich)
- Poppies are a symbol of good
- Daisies are a symbol of innocence
- General softcore/cottagecore aesthetic
- Wolves are a symbol of evil
(149 Words)
Connections:
Sitting on a coastline with large beaches but also plenty of forests, deserts, and really any kind of climate you can imagine there being, is the large kingdom of Sista. The kingdom of Sista is led by a queen and a king, both of whom inherit the throne from their parents, aunts, or uncles. There is no way for anyone to become queen or king unless they are a part of the royal bl00dline. The kingdom was formed from many smaller nations that were always arguing over rulers, as well as laws that should be made, this is why there is no democracy in Sista. The king and queen have absolute power over everything. The royal palace and the main city of the kingdom of Sista is located in a valley surrounded by large mountains on all sides, keeping the royal family, their advisors and close friends and family safe from most (if not all) invaders to the country.
To make sure that all of their citizens are conforming and getting along, education is an important aspect of the Sista culture. Children begin school when they are four years old and continue schooling until the age of eighteen, at which point they can become apprenticed, and every person wishes to be apprenticed to the royal court, as it is one of the most sought after jobs in Sista; mostly due to the benefits that it can get people and their families. Schooling is also important to the people of Sista because it teaches their children to be polite and respectful people under any and all circumstances. This politeness extends towards animals as well and so all people of Sista are vegetarian, and most are vegan, however that is not a requirement by law as being vegetarian is.
(297 Words)
Narrative:
Eighteen year old Alaya Michaels brushed her braids over her shoulder and readjusted her skirt over her legs as she continued to write answers for her test. This was the last test that she would ever have to take in school and she was extremely glad for it. Not that she didn’t enjoy school (at least, she would never say that out loud to anybody as it could very well get her into trouble) but once she was finished with this, she would be done with her schooling and she would be able to be apprenticed to someone in the kingdom of Sista. She of course was hoping to be apprenticed to somebody in the royal court, as it was one of the best paying jobs that one of her status could get. Although, with her family being on the poorer side of the subjects of Sista, and having absolutely no connection with anyone in the royal family or their court, she had very slim chances. While she was aware of that of course, (her parents had drilled it into her ever since they had began to learn about apprenticeships when she and her classmates were barely nine years old) she was still holding out some hope that maybe somehow she would by some miracle be chosen to apprentice someone in the royal court. She knew that if she was, that it would be absolutely amazing for both her and her family. She knew that if she was apprenticed she would be able to move into the palace where the royal court resided and her family would be allowed to move into the main city that was near the palace. They would receive an immediate social boost, something that she knew her parents and siblings would love. It would give her younger siblings a better chance at life, which was all she had ever really wanted for them.. It was part of the reason she had worked so hard to try and get the apprenticeship. It was what was best for her and for her family as well.
There was another factor however that might affect her eligibility for the apprenticeship she desired. The royal court used magic for most of their tasks and it was a large part of the job. While she knew that everyone in Sista possessed magical abilities, some were more suited to the royal court than others, and Alaya had never even discovered what her power was.. She had been trying for years but for whatever reason her ability refused to show itself. If she couldn’t reason with her ability then how on earth was she going to convince people that she had what it took to be on the royal court and help with the royal family. People would laugh at her and think she was crazy if she told them she didn’t even know if she really had an ability, much less what it was going to be. She tried not to think about that though and looked back down at her test.
Alaya shook her head, clearing it so that she could continue to focus on her test. For her entire life, she had been receiving amazing grades, much to the pleasure of her parents. She knew her parents were also hopeful that she would receive an apprenticeship to the royal court, even though they never told her that, not wanting to raise her hopes. Ever since she had learned how hard it may be for her to be apprenticed, she had been determined to keep her grades up.. Though it was not only the anticipation of the royal court apprenticeship that kept her grades up.. She had seen what had happened to her classmates who lost their grades.. Most of them disappeared from school and when she had asked about them, she only received the answer that they had been redirected to a school more suited for their talents. She found that hard to believe though and it had been enough to make her insanely dedicated to her studies.
She had once again become unfocused about her test and she gave her wrist a quick pinch, drawing herself back to the present. She needed to focus on this if she wanted to come out on top of her class again. She was sure that it was the only way she would ever be considered for that apprenticeship. She only had two more questions to answer and she had about fifteen minutes left on her test, plenty of time to think through the answers before she wrote them down. And if she had time after she would for sure go back and double check all of her other answers. She didn’t intend to try and show off by submitting her test early like she had seen some of her classmates do. She intended to make sure all of her answers were the best that they could possibly be. If she was going to make things better for herself and her family then she had to get things right on this test. More than anyone else in this classroom.
Looking down at the last question on her test, she was slightly surprised. This one was not a question of science or math or english or any of the other things that she had studied throughout her fourteen years of schooling. Instead it asked:
Where do you wish to be apprenticed and why are you a good fit for this position?
Alaya looked at the question in momentary shock.. She had never expected such an open ended question on her test. She hadn’t studied for this.. How was she supposed to know what the right answer to this was? What if this question alone was going to cause her to lose her desired apprenticeship… If she answered truthfully, would they take away her chance of becoming part of the royal court for being too proud and full of herself? But if she lied and said something more expected of her class, they may believe her and assign her that, which was not what she would ever want. She wanted to do something important with her life, not just live and work as someone like the people she had grown up around. After some hesitation.. She decided to tell the truth and spent the rest of the time on her test writing about why she wanted to be apprenticed to the royal court, hoping it would be enough for her wish to come true.
(1089 Words)
Total of 1535 words for Part One
Part Two:
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it?
In the kingdom of Sista, every subject has some kind of a magical ability. However until it manifests itself and shows up, people do not know what kind of magic they will possess. Most, if not all, characters believe that they all have some kind of ability from an extremely young age. Over the years, there have been very few cases where someone has gone their entire life without manifesting an ability, however those cases are few and far between and it is extremely rare for such a thing to happen.
(91 Words)
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
Magic in the kingdom of Sista is fairly commonplace and most people use it to help them with their jobs. There are numerous different abilities and they are all suited to different areas of work. For the most part, based on their magic, children and young adults are assigned apprenticeships, though you are allowed to have a preference on what job you would like to go into. Even though you can have preference though, you have no control over what you ultimately get.
(83 Words)
How is magic viewed in your world?
In the kingdom of Sista, magic is simply viewed as a natural thing in life and there is nothing really special about it other than the occasional extremely rare ability. The only time that something related to magic would cause one to be ostracized is when (though the chance is slim) someone reaches the age of nineteen or twenty and they have still not yet figured out what their ability is. In those cases, people are usually sent to complete the most menial of tasks as they are considered weak and pathetic compared to the others in the kingdom who do have magic.
(103 Words)
Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how?
In all totality, magic doesn't really affect anything in the government since the royal family is chosen by bl00dline and not through any kind of election or eligibility process or anything like that. However, if for any reason one of the royal family did not manifest a power they would probably be extremely ostracized and perhaps even kicked out of the kingdom or sent to live in as a commoner. Though this has never happened to the public knowledge and so no procedure is known.
(86 Words)
What are the limitations of your world's magic?
There are no limitations for the actual magic that people possess, they could really do anything that they wanted if they really put their minds to it. However there are plenty of laws and restrictions that the royal family of the kingdom of Sista has put into place to prevent people from doing anything rash or anything they deem unworthy of being done with magic. People are not allowed to harm themselves or others (including animals) with their magic and they cannot resuscitate the d3@d either. There are also laws forbidding personal enhancements of mind or body in any way shape or form.
(104 Words)
Describe the popular infrastructure in your world.
The most popular kind of infrastructure that is prevalent in all of the cities and towns in the kingdom of Sista is a sort of quaint small town kind of feel. In most of the cities the houses look like small cottages with thatched roofs, however in the poorer areas those cottages may be much smaller and in worse disrepair than others in the more wealthy areas of town. The palace where the t=royal family lives is made up of white quartz with light pink roofs and tower tops.
(90 Words)
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or would hypothetically learn)?
Education is an extremely important aspect in the society of Sista and it is required that all children go to school from the ages of four to eighteen. They go to school six days a week, Monday through Saturday, and get a break on Sundays. Education is one of the only things in Sista that is completely equitable no matter your social status, as all children attend boarding schools so as to keep focused on their studies. These boarding schools are only located in the wealthy areas of town and are well funded.
(93 Words)
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
The sensations that one would feel vary depending on the type of ability that people possess. For example, someone with the power of telekinesis (or moving things with their mind) feel their heads get warmer as they move things and when they close their eyes they can see the item that they are moving in front of them in real time, as if their eyes were open. Although the only difference between what they see and what is happening in the real world is that in their mind things are only black and purple.
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What happens when magic gets out of control in your world?
When magic gets out of control, there are different things done depending on the kind of trouble and how out of control things have gotten. If it was just a simple misuse of magic that might have been an accident, then people are given a couple of days in a city prison and they may have to go to some kind of magical training classes to learn how to better control their abilities. But if someone breaks one of the core magical laws, they may be forcibly removed of their magical abilities by someone of the royal court or they may be sentenced to life in prison.
(107 Words)
What kind of magic is used in your world?
In the kingdom of Sista uses soft magic and so there are really endless possibilities to what people could do, though there are laws that prevent people from doing whatever they want. As for the kinds of abilities that people can have, there are tons of different ones, so many that all of them may not even have been recorded yet as new ones are popping up every now and again, which is both exciting and also worrying for some of the leaders of the kingdom.
(86 Words)
Total of 937 Words for Part Two
Part Three
Dystopian Fantasy:
As I sat in the bright white room, I looked over at my friend and tried to give her a slight smile, though I immediately dropped my smile as I saw my teacher turn back around in the classroom. I knew I wasn’t supposed to be smiling at my friend, or even looking at her during school. And especially not right before one of our biggest tests. This test was one of our most important ones of our entire lives. We had already passed preliminary exams to make it this far. For preliminary exams we had to prove that we had good control over our abilities, some of which were much more difficult to control than others. For example, while I had the ability to control others with my mind, something that was easy for me to control, my friend Daisy had the ability to light things on fire, but if she got too excited, nervous, scared or any other kind of big emotion it was hard for her to control it and she wasn’t able to control whatever fire she created or stop herself from creating more… I hadn’t seen her since before the preliminary exams.. I was sure she had gotten too nervous during her exam and hadn’t passed. I tried not to think about that though. However, this test would determine whether we liver or- well… If we didn’t. The government only wanted and allowed the most in control and smartest students to survive and go onto living in the society. I looked around the room and saw similarly blank expressions, though I knew that deep down each and every one of these girls was extremely terrified. There were only girls in this room and the boys were being tested in another room. This was usually the case as we weren’t supposed to have any kind of romantic relationships until we were assigned our living partner when we turned eighteen. Even then, we weren’t allowed to choose, so it was always best to keep girls and boys separated from each other.
Suddenly I looked down and saw the test proctor had placed a crisp white test booklet on my table. I was the last one to receive one and I watched as the proctor went back to the front of the room and sat in the large chair. We were informed that we would have one hour to complete the test and that anyone who failed to complete the booklet or who got less than 90% would fail and be “redirected” though we all knew that redirected meant we would never see anyone again.. We would be gone forever. When the clock started I opened my booklet and started my test, praying that I would finish in time to move on to the next round of tests.
(470 Words)
Urban Fantasy:
Twelve year old Lux looked over her shoulder as she walked down the streets of Coronado in California. The light was beginning to fade but it was still light enough for her to see where she was going and be able to calculate her place in the city. She was walking past other people slowly as she dared, and as she walked she simultaneously plucked things from people’s pockets with her hands as well as with her telekinesis. She was careful to make sure nobody saw her, she knew that if she was spotted by practically anybody she was in for a mugging and she would have her days earnings stolen. She couldn’t let that happen. As she walked, she would grab mens watches and women's jewelry as quietly as she could, keeping her head down and her headphones in, though there was nothing playing in them; they were really just for show that people would think she was just any other teenage girl walking down the street. Her gray clothing and plain hairstyle were also meant to deflect attention from her. It was the only way she would be able to do her job effectively enough to earn her keep.
Why was she needing to earn her keep and where? Well, when she was young her parents had both walked out, unable to raise a child in the conditions they were living in, and Lux had been left alone. She wasn’t even sure if that was really her name.. It was simply the name she had been given when she had joined “The Misfits.” The Misfits were a group of street kids that were led by a man named Andras. Andras found lost and vulnerable children, like Lux had been, and he promised them food, shelter and clothing.. But to do that, they had to bring him money or goods by whatever means necessary. Some of the older kids were able to earn their money legally, but most, like Lux, were too young to get a job and they were forced to wander the dangerous city and pickpocket and steal their way to earning their keep for the day.
Suddenly Lux heard someone shout behind her
“Hey you! Give me back my wallet!” They screamed. Without looking behind her to see who it was, she took off running, praying she wouldn’t be caught as she ran through the dark filthy streets.
(402 Words)
Hidden World Fantasy:
Standing by the doorway I hesitated.. I knew that I wasn’t supposed to be here but it was such a temptation to go out into the human world.. I almost couldn’t resist. I had heard so many stories about the way that humans lived and I needed to know if they were really true. I felt that some of them were much too outrageous to possibly be true, but there was no way for me to confirm unless I left my little hidden world where I lived, with the rest of the population of fairies and pixies.
Now, when you hear fairies and pixies, I’m sure you're thinking about those things that you see in drawings or like the ones in TinkerBell or something, but I assure you that we look nothing like any of the characters in any of those stories or movies. In fact, we’re much more interesting than that. We’re the same size as people say that humans are in fact, and our wings CAN be iridescent like the ones that you might be imagining, however more often that not their a completely solid color and you can’t really see through them.
Looking around at the large wooden door, I knew that if I really wanted to go to the human world, it would be as easy as just opening the door and walking through the portal.. I wasn;t sure exactly where I would be ending up if I did go through the portal, but I knew that I would at least be able to confirm or deny some of the rumors I had been told. However, I also had heard the warnings that if I were to go outside that I may expose my world to the humans, which could be absolutely catastrophic if it happened.
Even though I knew this, I looked at the door and considered my options. If I went then I would be able to know everything that I really had ever wanted to know about the human world. Was that worth possibly exposing my entire world to the humans? I thought long and hard and then finally resigned myself to my decision. I put my hand on the door, took a deep breath and turned the knob, walking through the door and into another world.
(385 Words)
Total of 1257 Words for Part Three
Total of 3729 Words for Weekly #3
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Description of Arloch
Arloch is the grand capital city of the Cathege Empire. Surrounded on all four sides by the Amyth River, the place is a gleaming center of trade and wealth. Narrow canals snake throughout the city, filled with gently drifting gondolas, a common form of transport. The small vessels are often intricately carved, designed by specialized artists, with glittering metal embellishments to add some extra flare. Many of Arloch’s wealthier families own private gondolas, the more beautifully crafted boats signaling a higher amount of money and status.
Alongside these convulsed waterways are normal city streets, cobbled with a glinting gold material. They are not made from actual gold, though the smoothly polished stones do possess a deceivingly lustrous quality. Framing the streets and canals are near rows of shops and storefronts, advertising every kind of good and service imaginable: tailors, bakeries, grocers, even an inventor’s office where one can order all sorts of strange but useful contraptions. None of these businesses, however, hold any kind of prestige when compared to the Cartographer’s College in the city center.
One could say that Cathege is governed by mapmakers. All of the ruling class and many nobles graduated from the Cartographer’s College. Those who make all of the important decisions in Cathege are the Scholars’ Clan, comprised of the Head Cartographer and his chosen Senior Cartographers, or advisors. Besides having control over the entire empire, this group rules over the Cartographer’s Guild, which only allows the most promising citizens into its ranks. All of the most influential people in Cathege have a place in the Guild, and most live in Arloch. Upon recieving an invitation to the Guild, people generally move to the capital city, where all events worth knowing about take place. And of course one never rejects said invitation. That would be completely unheard of.
The Cartographer’s College is said to be the grandest place in all of Arloch. It is difficult to confirm these rumors, however; the Guild is very exclusive about who they let in, and those who are offered an invitation remain tight-lipped. One can safely agree, however, that Arloch is the height of Cathege’s wealth and high achievement. Outside the city, things are far less beautiful and extravagant. It is almost as if the cartographers keep all their riches to themselves.
Word count: 383
Arloch is the grand capital city of the Cathege Empire. Surrounded on all four sides by the Amyth River, the place is a gleaming center of trade and wealth. Narrow canals snake throughout the city, filled with gently drifting gondolas, a common form of transport. The small vessels are often intricately carved, designed by specialized artists, with glittering metal embellishments to add some extra flare. Many of Arloch’s wealthier families own private gondolas, the more beautifully crafted boats signaling a higher amount of money and status.
Alongside these convulsed waterways are normal city streets, cobbled with a glinting gold material. They are not made from actual gold, though the smoothly polished stones do possess a deceivingly lustrous quality. Framing the streets and canals are near rows of shops and storefronts, advertising every kind of good and service imaginable: tailors, bakeries, grocers, even an inventor’s office where one can order all sorts of strange but useful contraptions. None of these businesses, however, hold any kind of prestige when compared to the Cartographer’s College in the city center.
One could say that Cathege is governed by mapmakers. All of the ruling class and many nobles graduated from the Cartographer’s College. Those who make all of the important decisions in Cathege are the Scholars’ Clan, comprised of the Head Cartographer and his chosen Senior Cartographers, or advisors. Besides having control over the entire empire, this group rules over the Cartographer’s Guild, which only allows the most promising citizens into its ranks. All of the most influential people in Cathege have a place in the Guild, and most live in Arloch. Upon recieving an invitation to the Guild, people generally move to the capital city, where all events worth knowing about take place. And of course one never rejects said invitation. That would be completely unheard of.
The Cartographer’s College is said to be the grandest place in all of Arloch. It is difficult to confirm these rumors, however; the Guild is very exclusive about who they let in, and those who are offered an invitation remain tight-lipped. One can safely agree, however, that Arloch is the height of Cathege’s wealth and high achievement. Outside the city, things are far less beautiful and extravagant. It is almost as if the cartographers keep all their riches to themselves.
Word count: 383
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Realm Four
“Sophie!” Alberto called. “There’s an envelope here – with your name on it.”
Sophie whirled around and ran in his direction: “You better not be joking.”
“I’m not,” Alberto said as she ripped open the envelope. A circular object was inside. Sophie examined it, turning it to its side. On the side was a timer, already counting down from an hour.
“W-” Albert began to speak when someone interrupted him.
“I see you have finally found it.”
“Who are you?” Sophie asked. It was strange; the person seemed to have been there the entire time, yet they had never seen her. The girl was about 5’0, with blue-gray eyes and jet-black hair. She had a peculiar smile, and there was something about it she had not seen on anyone else.
“My name is Misty, if that’s what you want to know,” she replied. “I cannot explain who I am to a full extent. I believe you already knew that.”
Had she seen Sophie when she read Alberto’s first envelope? Unnerved, Sophie answered, “I suppose I do. How do you?”
Misty smiled, but gives no reply.
“Why are you here?” Alberto asked.
“I suppose I should get to the point- I regret to inform you that there is a higher power.”
“I thought Hilde’s world was real,” Sophie insisted.
“Well, it is. So is yours. But there is another world. Your experiences prior to this had been written by a Norwegian man named Jostein Gaarder. And this is a short story written by another author for a writing contest for something called SWC. Scratch Writing Camp. She feels the keyboard bump under her fingers as I speak. She told me to say hello.”
Sophie gaped at her.
“Can we escape again?” Alberto interjected.
“Maybe,” Misty responds vaguely. “Yet your escape to Hilde’s world was fiction.”
Sophie and Alberto exchanged glances.
“Should I expand?”
“Yes, please.” This time it was Alberto who answered.
This isn’t new to us, Sophie thought. It shouldn’t be too hard to accept, except that they would never be real. She smiled sadly. Alberto put an arm around her.
“Well, first off, let’s get a little basic information. The ability of there to be more realms is infinite. There could be someone writing the author writing about us, someone writing about someone writing about the author writing about us, and so on. The author is writing this as fanfiction of your story, which is from you coming back home before your first encounter with Alberto’s envelopes, up to your trials at the boat. Your book was Sophie’s World, as you may already know.”
“You’re trapped in this realm,” she continued. “You cannot get out, simply because you were not created in our realm. When this story ends, yours will too. I will never truly leave either. In fact, I am just a creation created to help you understand. I am at the mercy of the author as much as you are. The author could do anything to us. Here’s a demonstration-”
Misty suddenly flew up, wings sprouting out of her back. Alberto began to breakdance, and Sophie dived into a pool with her eyes open and clear and with the ability to breathe underwater. Misty smiled and droped down.
Alberto laughs: “I am quite too old to dance like that.” Sophie emerged from the water, stepped out, and grinned too. “That was fun, though I’d like to be dry now.” And she was.
Misty nodded. “By the way, I can greet the judges reading this right now. In fact, I will. Hello there, judges. And you can say hi to them too.” She smiles at Sophie.
“Hey, judges,” Sophie said tentatively.
“I offer my greetings as well,” Alberto surprised them both by saying.
The dark side to this- personality, thought, and desire was nothing but creations at the hands of the author.
“Would you like to speak to Hilde and Albert?” Misty asked.
“Yes!” Sophie exclaimed in excitement.
Misty smiled softly. “Of course.” She closed her eyes, opened them again, and waited. Hilde and Albert appeared.
“What?” Hilde asked groggily. She and Albert had been sleeping when they were summoned, and they weren’t wonderfully pleased to be woken up.
“Hilde, meet Sophie and Albert. Alberto, meet your creations.”
Hilde and Alberto were given a quick explanation of the realms. They were not frightened, and instead, they laughed. “You’ve got a taste of your own medicine,” Hilde told her father.
Hilde turned to Sophie, who gave her a friendly smile. The two started chatting about casual things, while Alberto and Albert engaged in philosophical discussion.
“Time is almost up,” Misty said a while later. “What would you like to do?”
“Where are we going after this?” Albert asked.
“Where do you want to go?”
“Back,” Sophie interjected. “To the start. Maybe we could still get out.”
Misty smiled, but did not have the guts to crush her dreams. “Maybe. Why don’t you enjoy your time?”
A nice house appeared not far away from them. They entered. “You have ten minutes left.” She made some coffee and grabbed some drinks from the fridge. The five were happy as they could be until one minute was left.
“This story will end now. I’ll send you back, to see what you can do.” She waved. Hilde, Albert, Sophie, and Alberto disappeared. The bomb shattered, taking the realm with it.
Sophie Amundsen was on her way home from school. She had walked the first part of the way with Joanna. They had been discussing robots…
“Sophie!” Alberto called. “There’s an envelope here – with your name on it.”
Sophie whirled around and ran in his direction: “You better not be joking.”
“I’m not,” Alberto said as she ripped open the envelope. A circular object was inside. Sophie examined it, turning it to its side. On the side was a timer, already counting down from an hour.
“W-” Albert began to speak when someone interrupted him.
“I see you have finally found it.”
“Who are you?” Sophie asked. It was strange; the person seemed to have been there the entire time, yet they had never seen her. The girl was about 5’0, with blue-gray eyes and jet-black hair. She had a peculiar smile, and there was something about it she had not seen on anyone else.
“My name is Misty, if that’s what you want to know,” she replied. “I cannot explain who I am to a full extent. I believe you already knew that.”
Had she seen Sophie when she read Alberto’s first envelope? Unnerved, Sophie answered, “I suppose I do. How do you?”
Misty smiled, but gives no reply.
“Why are you here?” Alberto asked.
“I suppose I should get to the point- I regret to inform you that there is a higher power.”
“I thought Hilde’s world was real,” Sophie insisted.
“Well, it is. So is yours. But there is another world. Your experiences prior to this had been written by a Norwegian man named Jostein Gaarder. And this is a short story written by another author for a writing contest for something called SWC. Scratch Writing Camp. She feels the keyboard bump under her fingers as I speak. She told me to say hello.”
Sophie gaped at her.
“Can we escape again?” Alberto interjected.
“Maybe,” Misty responds vaguely. “Yet your escape to Hilde’s world was fiction.”
Sophie and Alberto exchanged glances.
“Should I expand?”
“Yes, please.” This time it was Alberto who answered.
This isn’t new to us, Sophie thought. It shouldn’t be too hard to accept, except that they would never be real. She smiled sadly. Alberto put an arm around her.
“Well, first off, let’s get a little basic information. The ability of there to be more realms is infinite. There could be someone writing the author writing about us, someone writing about someone writing about the author writing about us, and so on. The author is writing this as fanfiction of your story, which is from you coming back home before your first encounter with Alberto’s envelopes, up to your trials at the boat. Your book was Sophie’s World, as you may already know.”
“You’re trapped in this realm,” she continued. “You cannot get out, simply because you were not created in our realm. When this story ends, yours will too. I will never truly leave either. In fact, I am just a creation created to help you understand. I am at the mercy of the author as much as you are. The author could do anything to us. Here’s a demonstration-”
Misty suddenly flew up, wings sprouting out of her back. Alberto began to breakdance, and Sophie dived into a pool with her eyes open and clear and with the ability to breathe underwater. Misty smiled and droped down.
Alberto laughs: “I am quite too old to dance like that.” Sophie emerged from the water, stepped out, and grinned too. “That was fun, though I’d like to be dry now.” And she was.
Misty nodded. “By the way, I can greet the judges reading this right now. In fact, I will. Hello there, judges. And you can say hi to them too.” She smiles at Sophie.
“Hey, judges,” Sophie said tentatively.
“I offer my greetings as well,” Alberto surprised them both by saying.
The dark side to this- personality, thought, and desire was nothing but creations at the hands of the author.
“Would you like to speak to Hilde and Albert?” Misty asked.
“Yes!” Sophie exclaimed in excitement.
Misty smiled softly. “Of course.” She closed her eyes, opened them again, and waited. Hilde and Albert appeared.
“What?” Hilde asked groggily. She and Albert had been sleeping when they were summoned, and they weren’t wonderfully pleased to be woken up.
“Hilde, meet Sophie and Albert. Alberto, meet your creations.”
Hilde and Alberto were given a quick explanation of the realms. They were not frightened, and instead, they laughed. “You’ve got a taste of your own medicine,” Hilde told her father.
Hilde turned to Sophie, who gave her a friendly smile. The two started chatting about casual things, while Alberto and Albert engaged in philosophical discussion.
“Time is almost up,” Misty said a while later. “What would you like to do?”
“Where are we going after this?” Albert asked.
“Where do you want to go?”
“Back,” Sophie interjected. “To the start. Maybe we could still get out.”
Misty smiled, but did not have the guts to crush her dreams. “Maybe. Why don’t you enjoy your time?”
A nice house appeared not far away from them. They entered. “You have ten minutes left.” She made some coffee and grabbed some drinks from the fridge. The five were happy as they could be until one minute was left.
“This story will end now. I’ll send you back, to see what you can do.” She waved. Hilde, Albert, Sophie, and Alberto disappeared. The bomb shattered, taking the realm with it.
Sophie Amundsen was on her way home from school. She had walked the first part of the way with Joanna. They had been discussing robots…
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weekly three wow fantasy— ahahahah this was a challenge- fantasy is not my favourite genre in the world but this was- point worthy
1] High fantasy and worldbuilding: 785 words
1a] Facet Brainstorming: 128 words
. an abandoned desert temple
. a bustling high school
[. a secluded igloo
[. a wishing river
. a library, with several twisting tunnels
[. an inactive gate, needing magic to be opened
[. a large auditorium
[. 1harmony4 and bobarlotte working as florists
. a pendant as a symbol of love
. a goose as a symbol of love!
[. romance as invaluable
[. can only sleep on carpets, embodied in a tapestry
. tiny country, big people
. an island being attacked by a tsunami
[. Megatron fari curb stomps humanity
[. siren wilbur soot is a mcdonalds worker
. cats are jumping. everywhere.
. a mango tree is very fruitful
. a sussy crewmate is in my walls
[. a rainbow leading to- molten lava
1b] Connections: 227 words
Amidst a cold, blinded world, comes forth the acknowledgement of a small, peaceful, and calm abode. This would be known as a secluded igloo, blizzard prone. The snow accumulates in a torrent around the gracious, exquisite feat, with the snow held in uproar, over a calm, wishing river. Anyone can come and retreat to the depths of this masterpiece, so much so that 1Harmony4 and Bobarlotte, the florists from a nearby counterpart of town, come down in droves at the weekends, hands overflowing with chrysanthemums, as they pour their flowers into the river, and wish for good health. This is simply one of the many plays which are enacted at the nearest auditorium, which is holstered by a largely inactive, observing gate, which can only be opened by the spark of magic. This means that magic can be something which can bewitch the minds of people, as opposed to love, and so Megatron Fari consistently stampedes through the land, crushing everyone with the love of her magic in downpour. This is therefore why romance is invaluable. Fari’s strides eventually caused the uproar of a tsunami across the land, which allowed Siren, otherwise known as Wilbur, to race from his own home, fleeing to a nearby rainbow, and praying to the molten lava at the other end, before sleeping on a carpet, only this, his own individual tapestry.
1c] Narrative: 430 words
Siren was so excited, enthralled, captivated by the sudden idea he had collected to venture into the auditorium, gazing at a wonderful show, one containing two florists: 1Harmony4, and Bobarlotte, praying over a wishing river. The river in question was majestic, yet the climate was torrent-bound, dense with blizzards of snow, and as a result, packed with a single, secluded, igloo. It was wonderfully pleasant to gaze upon, and Siren would not make haste to be fruitful. These two individuals poured chrysanthemums and lilies and roses within the river, which allowed them to begin to pray for the outcome of good heath, something both individuals would be fortunate to have, if they ever seemed to pertain to this, which Siren analysed, carefully. Siren himself lived around the outskirts of the auditorium, which can be accessed easily by a huge, magical gate, which requires wizardry to open, which makes the auditorium such an enthralling expenditure. It was acknowledged in droves among the residents of the area, that magic was a bewitching trait, which can upright the trajectory of someone’s mind, and divert them from the sole belief in love, making romance invaluable, which Apollo would continuously complain towards, irritating Siren out of his senses. It is, however, haphazardly insecure in the area, as Megatron Fari would stampede through the land at several random intervals, which terrified Siren immensely, because, despite his reputation and his power, small tinges of the individuals of the area are plenty to cause him shock, or fear. Therefore, Siren would race to his home, and then across a rainbow in his back garden (as Zephyrus can easily work his way through bargaining the sky), which he would race across, paralysed by terror, and then pray to the molten lava at the end of the journey, among a carpet, embodied in tapestry. It is because of this he becomes lightheaded, and passes out from the influence of smoke, asleep, on the carpet. Siren is usually awoken by Ender, his purple particles hovering around Siren’s head uneasily, as Ender attempts to wake him up by shuffling his feet to match eyesight with Siren, which usually would fail. Ender, therefore, would bring one of Blade’s weapons along with him, to threaten Siren with- not death- but something gruesome (which he would never attempt) if the retreat has slightly more length than usual. Eventually, Ender would sigh, and collect Siren by the neck, lifting him, and carrying him home, where he will be rested by a carpet, and lulled into a more severe slumber by Blade’s potato rambles, and Apollo’s screaming.
2] Questions about the fantasy world! 985 words
. What kind of magic is used in your world? (85)
Probably mind control, although, I do not wish to follow the script from the third part of part one, primarily because all the characters are from a fanfiction, Tommyinnit’s clinic for supervillians by bonesandthebees on ao3, but Siren is the main focus, primarily because his superpower is mind control, or mind reading, which is why I’ve decided to place a focus on the mind, because cognitive intuition is very complex, and by mystifying this, complexity can be visual, which is why I just love Siren.
. How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities? (112)
Firstly, there is a gate at the auditorium where the individual will have to use magic to act on the circumstances, that is, open the gate, which can only be achieved once mind control is inputted, so the individual would need to picture the gate opening, and it will open! Another way of using mind control would be, not necessarily stalker type, but it can be used to know whether someone has developed the impression which you were intending, so it can give content to people, again, not stalking, unless the populations were so desperate to find out someone’s opinion on a major controversial issue, and take it incorrectly, and cancel them.
. What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments? (95)
The laws are simply not to use magic with any malicious or harmful intent, and intent can easily be surfaced by inspecting an individual’s mind, and if malice is located, a person can be sent to any range of school, something which rewires a person’s attitude, which can also simply be put as therapy. The laws can also be jail time, although, this does not always pertain to necessity, as people do not usually disobey moral boundaries with this trait, and may choose to treat people with equity over a desire to understand them better.
. What is an important symbol of your world? (86)
As this is highly based around Siren Wilbur, the symbol of the world is the L’manberg flag. This flag is the flag of Wilbur Soot’s country, L’manberg, on the Dream SMP. The reason for this close connection is because Clinic was built upon the foundations of the Dream SMP, which is why (spoiler for Clinic) Wilbur unalives, and then obtains a white streak, which is a reflection of c!Wilbur from the server. Therefore, the sever can pose a role in the symbolism of the world! Somehow.
. What is the origin of your magic? (137)
This is complicated, because this is also the reason why Fari can be seemed to be so large. Magic in this sense was a blessing, from a traveller attempting to cross to the end of the rainbow, only to find, not a pot of Gold, but a well-wisher, who granted the traveller the ability to understand whether their girl loved them back, which turned out to be true love. The traveller then returned to the wisher and thanked her, which allowed two more wishes. The traveller hated Fari, so cursed her with her height, and instead, granted the rest of the world the power of mind control. Fari however, ignorant to misconceptions, stereotypes and bad takes on her character, took her power to her advantage, and works for the police force. Fari always wanted to be tall.
. How can your world’s magic aid character development? (102)
People can see character development from the way these powers are used, which can be taken to their potential, or used as a plot of backstab, where a person can hypnotise someone else to love them, or care about them, or benefit them, against their own wishes. The potential from these powers can be ensuring people have a balanced view of the world and their relations, which usually doesn’t follow, which can lead to character development of individuals striving to even reach normality, or have less biased rules, or individuals can retaliate, and propose a strike against the need to be normal.
. How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? (86)
Most possess the magic, although there can be an Encanto situation, where one is not gifted, this was given to Fari and her predecessors as a curse, so these were not given the magic, whereas every other population in the area has been given this, although Fari is ignorant. Therefore, she can be seen as a terror, not simply because of her height, but because of her attitude to living, but this makes her jovial and carefree; which benefits everyone and her, at least, she thinks.
. How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world? (88)
Hypnotic traits are real, and Fari could be tall, although she is never going to be satisfied with 5’7”, when Fari is 5’8” on a good day. Mind control, however, is essentially crucial in politics and persuasion, and by taking this to the next level, so people can understand other people’s perspective on themselves and other topics, such as schools, or politicians, or rules which work in function; this can tackle issues such as dysmorphia or insecurity, which is why this magic can be practical in this society.
. What is a folk tale you have heard that involves magic, and how can you take inspiration from that tale? (95)
Obviously, the tale is Clinic, and this involves magic, and the inspiration taken is Siren’s power, which is mind control/hypnotising/gaslighting others (if necessary). Another folk tale is Encanto, where magic is at the centre of the plotline, and therefore the impact of being unique, or the pressures of upholding magic can be better understood, as these flaws are exhibited in many of the characters, such as Luisa, living in hatred to being used; Isabela is also an example, which craves attention and perfection through her magic, yet doesn’t feel free to express this as herself.
. What are the limitations of your world’s magic? (99)
People can’t perform supernatural abilities, such as flying, populations cannot fly, or walk through walls, or become tangible or not, so the commonly stereotyped magical traits are not present, which is a limit to creativity, from the traveller, but also from the writer of this weekly, I’m rushing the weekly come on man it’s due in 5 hours.¬¬¬¬ Now Zura has said all these sections have to be 80 words! I am just adding more words venting about Zura, but also, Vi has added a Cabin war, and it is quite annoying as Fairy Tales and Script are allies.
3] Joint workshop: 975 words
3a] Dystopian Fantasy: 323 words
A girl rummages through her laundry, diving and racing through the heaps of clothes with the burning ambition to find her beautiful writing, it was night, the sky remained lined with a thin, red streak, but the girl was adamant, she aimed to race the writing, scribbled onto a chalkboard, to her friends in the southern district, before the walls of the arena caved on them all. She needed away, not for an escape, but she wanted to visit her friends, as her parents won’t be home for days, and she doesn’t know how to cope. The trouble is, she is disorganised and lightheaded, unable to relax or recline of concentrate on a singular motive, which resulted in her visions and ambitions being trapped in heaps of chores and discomfort, based on carelessness. She finds this book, thankfully, and races outside the home, heralding the door open and waving towards the entrance, to which the door replies to a more peaceful goodbye, as, for once, the door hasn’t been opened by control, it has been burst open. The girl races through the think, misty streets, the smog lacing onto her complexion, and she whines a sign of discomfort. The smog clouds her, defending her from the newfound happiness of clear air, calm seas, and joy, which she can only find- with her family. Which therefore can be comprised as the biggest issue for the little girl, as she is easily the victim of little to no protection, and she wants to be free, as otherwise, the smog will consume her whole. She races towards her friends, scared, lost, words can be elevated upon her description, but she was confident, she would escape the deepening mist and find her salvation, it only takes time, and carefully crafted patience, but also the demystifying flicker of hope, yet she can hypnotise this into her personality with no better judgement, because everything will go her way, always.
3b] Urban Fantasy: 325 words
Somebody waves towards me from a distant caravan, as I trekked away from my own, but I subside, I’m energized, racing into the city-lit halls, decorated with the finest shades of purples, blues, reds, them all, cascading in one swoop. I was blinded by a falling light, it was fantastic, it was beaming, and I felt so honoured to be a party of such a wonderous community, which was phantasmagorical. Hence, I raced into the town square, only quickened by my heightened ability to fly forth, and then be decorated by nearby sunshine, blinded by halls and tunnels and tapestries of more and more marble, extending in every direction, palm trees lining the walls, and dahlias lining the roads. I pondered, eagerly, which direction would be best suited and best valued, which had a turnout of a northern route, covered by groves, by which I flew into, the leaves catching in my pristine locks of hair. I was shining so brightly, like a newly ignited star, and lunged into a restaurant, which was selling the finest turkey. Although, I was poor. I gazed at the window through hollow, up taking glances, excited and yearning to have a piece, so I gazed as I watched fine and elegant etiquette, and this is what I adore, people, who have dreams, and people, who are beautiful. These people have telekinesis on their money, so it can never let go, whereas the power of mine is almost criminal, with roots latched upon escapism, which is almost entirely different to my own beliefs, and I cry, staring at the walls, crying so hard, wishing for a better life. I cry, and mourn, but then open my eyes, a nearby shop, a sudden home (even though it was selling shoes to stand on) which ignited my excitement, as a darted towards this direction, nearly tripping on my worn-out sandals, and then pleaded at the door, to have a taste of salvation.
3c] Science Fantasy: 357 words
He pondered on the subject in question, gearing up, clutching onto the fabric of this word, terrified. The subject was whether the concept of Time Travel can inevitably become real, or was it simply just a distracting façade, so the purpose of living in the present can be bypassed into a more real place to live, somewhere where people are accepted for the values in which they believe in. He held the watch, held his breath, heaved, quietly, and then waited for the longest time, to hear someone knew. Time unfurled like a ribbon, wrapping him in a fabric too strong to be withstood, but too dense not to be broken. He was flung like a catapulted object through the fabric of reality with the slightest tinge of ease, which was something beautiful, as he loved the feeling. The feeling was simply being made and unmade consciously, several times over, to reappear, breathing human being once more. The fabric had to be tampered, pressed upon, yearned for, but all these attempts came with a promising outcome, which he loved to see. He was thrown out of his own morals and landed on a hard surface. Coughing, he collected himself quietly, praying that this was the past that he wanted to see. He frantically rose to his feet, listening for a voice to remind him that this is home, but the voice wasn’t real, it wasn’t even born yet, and he was flung into a universe where nobody he loved was known to anyone, but he did this for his family. He was in crippling, grave poverty, almost inescapable to most, but a game for him, he wanted to escape, and steps like these can shine light on his victory. So, he was geared, and he was strong, and he raced towards the walls of the fabric and pressed against them with such force, to find himself absorbed into a factory, where they made toys for the growing population, and he cried out as he frantically consumed himself in the duty of finding his grandfather, because that was the only way he could make it out under satisfaction.
1] High fantasy and worldbuilding: 785 words
1a] Facet Brainstorming: 128 words
. an abandoned desert temple
. a bustling high school
[. a secluded igloo
[. a wishing river
. a library, with several twisting tunnels
[. an inactive gate, needing magic to be opened
[. a large auditorium
[. 1harmony4 and bobarlotte working as florists
. a pendant as a symbol of love
. a goose as a symbol of love!
[. romance as invaluable
[. can only sleep on carpets, embodied in a tapestry
. tiny country, big people
. an island being attacked by a tsunami
[. Megatron fari curb stomps humanity
[. siren wilbur soot is a mcdonalds worker
. cats are jumping. everywhere.
. a mango tree is very fruitful
. a sussy crewmate is in my walls
[. a rainbow leading to- molten lava
1b] Connections: 227 words
Amidst a cold, blinded world, comes forth the acknowledgement of a small, peaceful, and calm abode. This would be known as a secluded igloo, blizzard prone. The snow accumulates in a torrent around the gracious, exquisite feat, with the snow held in uproar, over a calm, wishing river. Anyone can come and retreat to the depths of this masterpiece, so much so that 1Harmony4 and Bobarlotte, the florists from a nearby counterpart of town, come down in droves at the weekends, hands overflowing with chrysanthemums, as they pour their flowers into the river, and wish for good health. This is simply one of the many plays which are enacted at the nearest auditorium, which is holstered by a largely inactive, observing gate, which can only be opened by the spark of magic. This means that magic can be something which can bewitch the minds of people, as opposed to love, and so Megatron Fari consistently stampedes through the land, crushing everyone with the love of her magic in downpour. This is therefore why romance is invaluable. Fari’s strides eventually caused the uproar of a tsunami across the land, which allowed Siren, otherwise known as Wilbur, to race from his own home, fleeing to a nearby rainbow, and praying to the molten lava at the other end, before sleeping on a carpet, only this, his own individual tapestry.
1c] Narrative: 430 words
Siren was so excited, enthralled, captivated by the sudden idea he had collected to venture into the auditorium, gazing at a wonderful show, one containing two florists: 1Harmony4, and Bobarlotte, praying over a wishing river. The river in question was majestic, yet the climate was torrent-bound, dense with blizzards of snow, and as a result, packed with a single, secluded, igloo. It was wonderfully pleasant to gaze upon, and Siren would not make haste to be fruitful. These two individuals poured chrysanthemums and lilies and roses within the river, which allowed them to begin to pray for the outcome of good heath, something both individuals would be fortunate to have, if they ever seemed to pertain to this, which Siren analysed, carefully. Siren himself lived around the outskirts of the auditorium, which can be accessed easily by a huge, magical gate, which requires wizardry to open, which makes the auditorium such an enthralling expenditure. It was acknowledged in droves among the residents of the area, that magic was a bewitching trait, which can upright the trajectory of someone’s mind, and divert them from the sole belief in love, making romance invaluable, which Apollo would continuously complain towards, irritating Siren out of his senses. It is, however, haphazardly insecure in the area, as Megatron Fari would stampede through the land at several random intervals, which terrified Siren immensely, because, despite his reputation and his power, small tinges of the individuals of the area are plenty to cause him shock, or fear. Therefore, Siren would race to his home, and then across a rainbow in his back garden (as Zephyrus can easily work his way through bargaining the sky), which he would race across, paralysed by terror, and then pray to the molten lava at the end of the journey, among a carpet, embodied in tapestry. It is because of this he becomes lightheaded, and passes out from the influence of smoke, asleep, on the carpet. Siren is usually awoken by Ender, his purple particles hovering around Siren’s head uneasily, as Ender attempts to wake him up by shuffling his feet to match eyesight with Siren, which usually would fail. Ender, therefore, would bring one of Blade’s weapons along with him, to threaten Siren with- not death- but something gruesome (which he would never attempt) if the retreat has slightly more length than usual. Eventually, Ender would sigh, and collect Siren by the neck, lifting him, and carrying him home, where he will be rested by a carpet, and lulled into a more severe slumber by Blade’s potato rambles, and Apollo’s screaming.
2] Questions about the fantasy world! 985 words
. What kind of magic is used in your world? (85)
Probably mind control, although, I do not wish to follow the script from the third part of part one, primarily because all the characters are from a fanfiction, Tommyinnit’s clinic for supervillians by bonesandthebees on ao3, but Siren is the main focus, primarily because his superpower is mind control, or mind reading, which is why I’ve decided to place a focus on the mind, because cognitive intuition is very complex, and by mystifying this, complexity can be visual, which is why I just love Siren.
. How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities? (112)
Firstly, there is a gate at the auditorium where the individual will have to use magic to act on the circumstances, that is, open the gate, which can only be achieved once mind control is inputted, so the individual would need to picture the gate opening, and it will open! Another way of using mind control would be, not necessarily stalker type, but it can be used to know whether someone has developed the impression which you were intending, so it can give content to people, again, not stalking, unless the populations were so desperate to find out someone’s opinion on a major controversial issue, and take it incorrectly, and cancel them.
. What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments? (95)
The laws are simply not to use magic with any malicious or harmful intent, and intent can easily be surfaced by inspecting an individual’s mind, and if malice is located, a person can be sent to any range of school, something which rewires a person’s attitude, which can also simply be put as therapy. The laws can also be jail time, although, this does not always pertain to necessity, as people do not usually disobey moral boundaries with this trait, and may choose to treat people with equity over a desire to understand them better.
. What is an important symbol of your world? (86)
As this is highly based around Siren Wilbur, the symbol of the world is the L’manberg flag. This flag is the flag of Wilbur Soot’s country, L’manberg, on the Dream SMP. The reason for this close connection is because Clinic was built upon the foundations of the Dream SMP, which is why (spoiler for Clinic) Wilbur unalives, and then obtains a white streak, which is a reflection of c!Wilbur from the server. Therefore, the sever can pose a role in the symbolism of the world! Somehow.
. What is the origin of your magic? (137)
This is complicated, because this is also the reason why Fari can be seemed to be so large. Magic in this sense was a blessing, from a traveller attempting to cross to the end of the rainbow, only to find, not a pot of Gold, but a well-wisher, who granted the traveller the ability to understand whether their girl loved them back, which turned out to be true love. The traveller then returned to the wisher and thanked her, which allowed two more wishes. The traveller hated Fari, so cursed her with her height, and instead, granted the rest of the world the power of mind control. Fari however, ignorant to misconceptions, stereotypes and bad takes on her character, took her power to her advantage, and works for the police force. Fari always wanted to be tall.
. How can your world’s magic aid character development? (102)
People can see character development from the way these powers are used, which can be taken to their potential, or used as a plot of backstab, where a person can hypnotise someone else to love them, or care about them, or benefit them, against their own wishes. The potential from these powers can be ensuring people have a balanced view of the world and their relations, which usually doesn’t follow, which can lead to character development of individuals striving to even reach normality, or have less biased rules, or individuals can retaliate, and propose a strike against the need to be normal.
. How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? (86)
Most possess the magic, although there can be an Encanto situation, where one is not gifted, this was given to Fari and her predecessors as a curse, so these were not given the magic, whereas every other population in the area has been given this, although Fari is ignorant. Therefore, she can be seen as a terror, not simply because of her height, but because of her attitude to living, but this makes her jovial and carefree; which benefits everyone and her, at least, she thinks.
. How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world? (88)
Hypnotic traits are real, and Fari could be tall, although she is never going to be satisfied with 5’7”, when Fari is 5’8” on a good day. Mind control, however, is essentially crucial in politics and persuasion, and by taking this to the next level, so people can understand other people’s perspective on themselves and other topics, such as schools, or politicians, or rules which work in function; this can tackle issues such as dysmorphia or insecurity, which is why this magic can be practical in this society.
. What is a folk tale you have heard that involves magic, and how can you take inspiration from that tale? (95)
Obviously, the tale is Clinic, and this involves magic, and the inspiration taken is Siren’s power, which is mind control/hypnotising/gaslighting others (if necessary). Another folk tale is Encanto, where magic is at the centre of the plotline, and therefore the impact of being unique, or the pressures of upholding magic can be better understood, as these flaws are exhibited in many of the characters, such as Luisa, living in hatred to being used; Isabela is also an example, which craves attention and perfection through her magic, yet doesn’t feel free to express this as herself.
. What are the limitations of your world’s magic? (99)
People can’t perform supernatural abilities, such as flying, populations cannot fly, or walk through walls, or become tangible or not, so the commonly stereotyped magical traits are not present, which is a limit to creativity, from the traveller, but also from the writer of this weekly, I’m rushing the weekly come on man it’s due in 5 hours.¬¬¬¬ Now Zura has said all these sections have to be 80 words! I am just adding more words venting about Zura, but also, Vi has added a Cabin war, and it is quite annoying as Fairy Tales and Script are allies.
3] Joint workshop: 975 words
3a] Dystopian Fantasy: 323 words
A girl rummages through her laundry, diving and racing through the heaps of clothes with the burning ambition to find her beautiful writing, it was night, the sky remained lined with a thin, red streak, but the girl was adamant, she aimed to race the writing, scribbled onto a chalkboard, to her friends in the southern district, before the walls of the arena caved on them all. She needed away, not for an escape, but she wanted to visit her friends, as her parents won’t be home for days, and she doesn’t know how to cope. The trouble is, she is disorganised and lightheaded, unable to relax or recline of concentrate on a singular motive, which resulted in her visions and ambitions being trapped in heaps of chores and discomfort, based on carelessness. She finds this book, thankfully, and races outside the home, heralding the door open and waving towards the entrance, to which the door replies to a more peaceful goodbye, as, for once, the door hasn’t been opened by control, it has been burst open. The girl races through the think, misty streets, the smog lacing onto her complexion, and she whines a sign of discomfort. The smog clouds her, defending her from the newfound happiness of clear air, calm seas, and joy, which she can only find- with her family. Which therefore can be comprised as the biggest issue for the little girl, as she is easily the victim of little to no protection, and she wants to be free, as otherwise, the smog will consume her whole. She races towards her friends, scared, lost, words can be elevated upon her description, but she was confident, she would escape the deepening mist and find her salvation, it only takes time, and carefully crafted patience, but also the demystifying flicker of hope, yet she can hypnotise this into her personality with no better judgement, because everything will go her way, always.
3b] Urban Fantasy: 325 words
Somebody waves towards me from a distant caravan, as I trekked away from my own, but I subside, I’m energized, racing into the city-lit halls, decorated with the finest shades of purples, blues, reds, them all, cascading in one swoop. I was blinded by a falling light, it was fantastic, it was beaming, and I felt so honoured to be a party of such a wonderous community, which was phantasmagorical. Hence, I raced into the town square, only quickened by my heightened ability to fly forth, and then be decorated by nearby sunshine, blinded by halls and tunnels and tapestries of more and more marble, extending in every direction, palm trees lining the walls, and dahlias lining the roads. I pondered, eagerly, which direction would be best suited and best valued, which had a turnout of a northern route, covered by groves, by which I flew into, the leaves catching in my pristine locks of hair. I was shining so brightly, like a newly ignited star, and lunged into a restaurant, which was selling the finest turkey. Although, I was poor. I gazed at the window through hollow, up taking glances, excited and yearning to have a piece, so I gazed as I watched fine and elegant etiquette, and this is what I adore, people, who have dreams, and people, who are beautiful. These people have telekinesis on their money, so it can never let go, whereas the power of mine is almost criminal, with roots latched upon escapism, which is almost entirely different to my own beliefs, and I cry, staring at the walls, crying so hard, wishing for a better life. I cry, and mourn, but then open my eyes, a nearby shop, a sudden home (even though it was selling shoes to stand on) which ignited my excitement, as a darted towards this direction, nearly tripping on my worn-out sandals, and then pleaded at the door, to have a taste of salvation.
3c] Science Fantasy: 357 words
He pondered on the subject in question, gearing up, clutching onto the fabric of this word, terrified. The subject was whether the concept of Time Travel can inevitably become real, or was it simply just a distracting façade, so the purpose of living in the present can be bypassed into a more real place to live, somewhere where people are accepted for the values in which they believe in. He held the watch, held his breath, heaved, quietly, and then waited for the longest time, to hear someone knew. Time unfurled like a ribbon, wrapping him in a fabric too strong to be withstood, but too dense not to be broken. He was flung like a catapulted object through the fabric of reality with the slightest tinge of ease, which was something beautiful, as he loved the feeling. The feeling was simply being made and unmade consciously, several times over, to reappear, breathing human being once more. The fabric had to be tampered, pressed upon, yearned for, but all these attempts came with a promising outcome, which he loved to see. He was thrown out of his own morals and landed on a hard surface. Coughing, he collected himself quietly, praying that this was the past that he wanted to see. He frantically rose to his feet, listening for a voice to remind him that this is home, but the voice wasn’t real, it wasn’t even born yet, and he was flung into a universe where nobody he loved was known to anyone, but he did this for his family. He was in crippling, grave poverty, almost inescapable to most, but a game for him, he wanted to escape, and steps like these can shine light on his victory. So, he was geared, and he was strong, and he raced towards the walls of the fabric and pressed against them with such force, to find himself absorbed into a factory, where they made toys for the growing population, and he cried out as he frantically consumed himself in the duty of finding his grandfather, because that was the only way he could make it out under satisfaction.
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Third Weekly
Total Word Count: 2,903
Part One
Word Count: 826
Idea list
Dragons are viewed as a normal part of society
Halfbreeds are frowned upon (as a society)
Mountainous terrain
Magical market place
Magic isn’t very strictly regulated
Pirate village
Pets are almost unheard of
High ranking, mysterious form of government
Floating islands
Fluffy, whimsical aesthetic
Flighty yet politeness is the norm (as a society)
Music is held in high regard (as a society)
Magical plants are common
Talking animals are normal
One world government
The most magical people generally rank the highest in society
Multiple clans
Babbling brooks as a means of getting gossip
Many members of society can shapeshift
Vegetarianism is generally seen as good (as a society)
Connections
Word Count: 293
In the land of Soren, many members of society have magic and it’s not strictly regulated, allowing the land to take on a truly fantastic, whimsical appearance from years of magic being cast.
The most fantastic part of the land is easily the Magic Market, which is exactly what it sounds like; a marketplace where people from all over come to trade in various magical goods of all kinds.
Humans are far from the only people living in Soren, there are fantastic creatures of all kinds, from gnomes to elves to dragons to talking animals, and each has their own place in society. There are multiple clans, each with their own rank in society. The smallest clans are made of only a few closely related families, and the only way in is to be born into one or marry in. On the opposite end, the biggest clans are huge and welcome anyone who meets their specific specifications.
In the end though, an individual’s rank in society isn’t determined so much by their clan, but their species and how much magic they possess and their species. Someone with a lot of magic will rank high, where as someone with little to none would rank low.
Humans generally posses very little magic, so they rank very low, especially when compared to say, dragons and fairies, who posses astronomical amounts of magic.
No one ranks as low as a halfbreed, however; someone who’s a mix of two or more species. They’re frowned upon and generally seen as freaks of nature, no matter how wrong this viewpoint may be.
The entire world of Soren is ran by one government, which is distant and mysterious. No one knows much about the government, but no one dares disobey them.
Narrative
Word Count: 423
I live in the land of Soren, and it’s pretty great. At least, I think it is. I’ve never lived anywhere else, so I don’t really have anything to compare it to, you know?
But still, it’s a mystical, magical land where just about anything is possible. Love and peace are highly valued and war is pretty much unheard of. It’s a place where if you can dream it, you can do it, and-
“Out of my way, you halfblooded freak!” An elf snaps as he walks by, pushing me aside even though there was enough room on the sidewalk for both of us. I stumble and fall to the ground, scraping the palms of my hands as I try to catch myself. No one notices, or if they do, they don’t seem to care.
Okay, so maybe there are aspects that aren’t that great. I touch my pointed ears and look down at my cloven feet, wondering yet again why I had to be born like this. I pick myself up, this time making sure to stay to the very edge of the sidewalk so that I don’t get in anyone’s way. I continue walking as if nothing happens, hooves clip clapping on the sidewalk. I’m used to being treated like this by now, as unfair as it seems.
My name is Jorge, by the way, and I’m what people around here call a halfbreed. Or, as the random elf had oh so kindly put it, a halfblooded freak. We’re not really viewed very highly, though I imagine you could tell that already.
I myself am the son of a fairy and a satyr, but there are halfbreeds of all kinds. Dragons and wyverns, gnomes and sprites, ogres and goblins, you name it. Society tries to ignore us, but we’re here. And someday maybe we’ll be seen, maybe we’ll make a difference.
Okay, yeah, I really don’t believe that. It’s been this way as long as anyone can remember, this prejudice towards halfbreeds goes back decades, at one point we were so frowned on that we were basically nonexistent because none dared show their face. That was before my time, at least.
I don’t know why it’s like this for sure, and I don’t know that anyone does. But for some reason everyone goes along with it, and I guess maybe that means they must be right. Maybe I’m a freak of nature. Or maybe they’re wrong and this is unfair.
But either way, what are you going to do about it?
Part Two
Word Count: 1,026
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
Magic is integrated into the characters lives in such a way that it would be impossible for most of them to imagine a world without it. They use their magic to power certain pieces of technology, such as levitating scooters, in a superficially similar way to how electricity is used.
Most people posses one or a few closely related abilities that they can use independently of society. Some of the abilities are rather mundane, such as the ability to make a perfect piece of toast, but some very rare ones are full on fantastic, such as the ability to control fire. Most are somewhere between the two, such as night vision or levitation.
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it?
Magic is a very common thing, melded almost seamlessly into the characters day to day lives. All characters are aware of its existence, though not all are necessarily aware that they themselves posses it.
Most people are going to have some kind of magic that shows up at some point in their lives, likely when they’re still pretty young. Until it shows up, however, they have no way of knowing whether or not they actually posses any magic themselves. Or, their power might allow them to do something so mundane that they don’t even realize that’s what it is until much later, or at all. If that happens, or if they come in to their ability later in life, it can really effect them.
There are also, as mentioned, some people who don’t have any magic at all. These people are seen as a rare minority, however.
What is an important symbol of your world?
An important symbol in my world is the crane, which is seen as slow, graceful and precise; in other words, everything a magic wielder should be. The crane has been used to symbolize this for centuries, and it can be found on many important buildings and documents.
But there are people challenging the old ways of viewing things, pointing out that cranes can also be wild, quick and erratic when needed. These people have reclaimed the crane as their own symbol and are using it in their hopes of sparking a peaceful revolution.
How can your world’s magic aid character development?
One way that magic could side in character development in this world is by looking into the fact that some people are born with very limited to no magic. These people would likely feel out of place in society, as if they were outcasts, freaks, or not as good as anyone else. They’d likely be treated as inferior and as if they couldn’t do anything. Learning their own self worth, how to be proud of themselves despite their differences and how to stand up for themselves would make for relatable character arcs.
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
The two golden rules when it comes to magic are: A, never lose control of it; and B, never, ever, experiment with it. Magic is not to be tempered with. Breaking laws regarding magic can result in any of the following, depending on the severity of the offense: lose of job, limited use of certain magic powered technology, public regard as a threat to society, entering certain fields of profession hard or impossible, and, in rare, truly serious cases, having their very magic stripped away from them. Having their magic taken away from them is one of the most shameful, dehumanizing things that can happen to a person.
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
Magic is generally seen as a rather normal thing in this world, but it can still be fantastic, much in the way rainbows and stars are normal, but still celebrated. Its simple a normal part of the average person’s life. It’s not usually seen as a curse, except in those rare cases that someone’s magic is so outlandish that it’s deemed dangerous/a burden to society. Other than that, magic is very normal, but still viewed in a somewhat high way.
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
The sensations a person feels will depend on their ability, the strength of their magic, and the strain of the task they’re performing. Even two people with the same or similar ability will likely have two completely different experiences.
As an example, someone who can control fire would likely feel a warm to hot tingling sensation over their skin. They may smell a faint wisp of smoke or cooked food. They could see red. Maybe they hear a crackling fire, even if there isn’t one. Maybe they suddenly have a spicy taste in their mouth. There are really limitless sensations a person can feel, and they’ll likely feel multiple, but they’re so specific to each individual that it’s essentially impossible to properly describe them.
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
The schooling system in this world is much the same as ours; eg, it needs help. There are public, private, boarding and homeschooling, just like here. Some are viewed in a better light then others, with private and boarding schools seen as stingy and maybe shady, public schools normal, and homeschoolers reclusive, and no matter how wrong these stereotypes may be, they continued to stick. Characters learn the basics, such as history, math and writing, but they’re also required to take classes focusing primarily on magic, it’s effects on their lives, safe usage of it, and it’s history.
What happens when magic gets out of control in your world?
In the event that magic were to get out of control, it would cause havoc, however minor or major. Magic is seen as something the individual in possession of it should have complete control over it, and losing this control over it is disgraceful. If magic gets out of control, it would be extremely chaotic, and would cause a crisis. Whether this crisis is on a community, national, or even universal would depend solely on the severity of the chaos the magic caused and the amount of people involved.
Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how?
Magic effects the government in that they have -or believe they have- to place strict regulations and controls on magic to ensure that it doesn’t get out of hand, as it oh so easily could. They keep an eye on surges of strong or unusual magic, though they themselves are capable of doing so thanks to the use of their own incredibly strong magic. They also, as mentioned above, have the frightening ability to strip a person’s magic away from them.
Part Three
Word Count: 1,051
Steampunk fantasy
Word Count: 364
“Stop right there!” A cop shouted, running after a teenage boy. The boy turned around and smirked, leaning against the railing of the boardwalk he was standing on.
“Me? Stop? Nah, I don’t think I will.” He laughed and vaulted through a gap in the railing.
The cop shouted something unrepeatable and rushed over, looking over the railing. The boy was already long out of reach, having pulled a cord on his jacket, making it unfurl so he could glide away, still laughing.
Soon, the boy -Fran- was safely landed and huddled in a corner of an alley down in the Lower City.
“That was a close one today, wasn’t it, Spigot?” He asked, taking a small, clockwork lizard out of his shirt pocket. “But hey, we still came out with today’s meal!”
He held up a loaf of bread triumphantly, taking a bite. He hadn’t wanted to steal it, but what choice did he have? Was he supposed to starve? Not hardly.
As a penniless orphan, life was rough for young Fran, who made a home for himself in the poorest part of the steam powered city, a section called the Lower City. Here, residents lived among the gears and inter workings of the city. Crime and violence rates were high, and it could easily be said that a district full of criminals wasn’t a safe place for a child to grow up. But hey, Fran was a criminal himself, was he not?
“Look at that, Spigot,” Fran said between bites of bread, gazing upward. From this far Below the Middle City was hard to see, let alone the Upper City, and along with it, the light of day. But to Fran, it was as if he could see it in all it’s assumed glory.
“That’s going to be us, someday,” he continued longingly. “Someday, we’re going to be up there where we belong, having full meals served to us by clockwork butlers. We won’t be stuck down here with other undesirables and the sewer.”
It was a wild dream, but then again, Fran was a wild dreamer. And in the city of steam, the impossible wasn’t always so far out of reach.
Dystopian fantasy
Word Count: 336
Haze pushed the hair out of her face and looked around. She saw the same city she’d lived in for her whole life, the one she had once believed to be perfect. Nothing was different about it, but it felt like a different place entirely, now that she knew the truth.
She turned her head to look at Klay, who was right behind her. His light brown hair was a mess, and the cut he’d received from their unexpected run in with the wyvern still hadn’t healed. Haze imagined that she must look just as rough. She couldn’t help but ask herself… was this all worth it?
“Yes, it is.” Haze didn’t realize she’d voiced her thoughts out loud until Klay responded.
“It’s worth it, because it’s the only choice we have. Now that we know the truth about this place, do you really think we can submit to Their rule? We’ll never be content again.”
“If we were ever content in the first place…” Haze whispered.
“Exactly.” Klay nodded. “And forget that, They’re going to figure out what we are at some point. If we go back, They’ll kill us.”
Haze automatically brought a hand to her throat and gulped. He was right. If They found out that the two of them possessed magic, no matter how small, they’d be sentence to death in a heartbeat. It was yet another way that Haze and her new friend were quickly finding out that their world wasn’t the fair, safe place they had always been lead to think it was.
But they were going to change it. They were going to take down the government and start a new one, this time ruled by the people, not some mysterious tyrants. If they didn’t at least try, no one would, and every future citizen of this horrid city would be doomed to a miserable, brainwashed life.
Or worse.
“Come on, let’s do this.” Klay held out his hand. Hesitatingly, but still determined, Haze took it.
“Let’s do this.”
Hidden World
Word Count: 351
“What’s going on? What’s happening?” I ask my parents, eyes wide. We just got a mandate to stay inside our houses or whatever the nearest available building is at all cost. My parents share a look, before my dad speaks.
“There was a human spotted by the West Entrance.”
“/What/?”
“Now, now, don’t freak out, I’m sure it’s nothing. It’s probably just a false alarm, they happen all the time, you know that,” my dad is saying this, but it’s clear he doesn’t believe them, and I don’t either. It’s true that there are false alarms all the time, but we’ve never been ordered a mandate to stay indoors because of one before.
A human at the West Entrance… that was serious. Not only was it our most protected entrance, with a veil, Repelling enchantments, and more, it was protected like that for a reason. It lead right into the center of our city, where the oldest and most important buildings are located. The area where we don’t even pretend to hide what we are or the magic at our fingertips. If a human made it to the edge of our city, where the magic was kept more mundane, we could write it off easier, but if one breached the West Entrance and made it to the center of our city…
We’d be doomed.
“This is exactly why I said the West Entrance should be closed, didn’t I? But no, everyone thought I was crazy! Now look at the boat we’re going to be in. I tell you-“
“Hun.” My dad places a hand on my mom’s arm. “The kids.”
Ha. As if we don’t know the severity of the situation already.
A member of the Council’s voice is projected through out the city before my mom can reply and we all freeze, listening.
“A human has made it into the city. I repeat, a human has made it into the city. Please remain calm.”
It’s the next sentence that, while meant to be reassuring, causes me to tense even more.
“The human will be dealt with, no matter the cost.”
Total Word Count: 2,903
Part One
Word Count: 826
Idea list
Dragons are viewed as a normal part of society
Halfbreeds are frowned upon (as a society)
Mountainous terrain
Magical market place
Magic isn’t very strictly regulated
Pirate village
Pets are almost unheard of
High ranking, mysterious form of government
Floating islands
Fluffy, whimsical aesthetic
Flighty yet politeness is the norm (as a society)
Music is held in high regard (as a society)
Magical plants are common
Talking animals are normal
One world government
The most magical people generally rank the highest in society
Multiple clans
Babbling brooks as a means of getting gossip
Many members of society can shapeshift
Vegetarianism is generally seen as good (as a society)
Connections
Word Count: 293
In the land of Soren, many members of society have magic and it’s not strictly regulated, allowing the land to take on a truly fantastic, whimsical appearance from years of magic being cast.
The most fantastic part of the land is easily the Magic Market, which is exactly what it sounds like; a marketplace where people from all over come to trade in various magical goods of all kinds.
Humans are far from the only people living in Soren, there are fantastic creatures of all kinds, from gnomes to elves to dragons to talking animals, and each has their own place in society. There are multiple clans, each with their own rank in society. The smallest clans are made of only a few closely related families, and the only way in is to be born into one or marry in. On the opposite end, the biggest clans are huge and welcome anyone who meets their specific specifications.
In the end though, an individual’s rank in society isn’t determined so much by their clan, but their species and how much magic they possess and their species. Someone with a lot of magic will rank high, where as someone with little to none would rank low.
Humans generally posses very little magic, so they rank very low, especially when compared to say, dragons and fairies, who posses astronomical amounts of magic.
No one ranks as low as a halfbreed, however; someone who’s a mix of two or more species. They’re frowned upon and generally seen as freaks of nature, no matter how wrong this viewpoint may be.
The entire world of Soren is ran by one government, which is distant and mysterious. No one knows much about the government, but no one dares disobey them.
Narrative
Word Count: 423
I live in the land of Soren, and it’s pretty great. At least, I think it is. I’ve never lived anywhere else, so I don’t really have anything to compare it to, you know?
But still, it’s a mystical, magical land where just about anything is possible. Love and peace are highly valued and war is pretty much unheard of. It’s a place where if you can dream it, you can do it, and-
“Out of my way, you halfblooded freak!” An elf snaps as he walks by, pushing me aside even though there was enough room on the sidewalk for both of us. I stumble and fall to the ground, scraping the palms of my hands as I try to catch myself. No one notices, or if they do, they don’t seem to care.
Okay, so maybe there are aspects that aren’t that great. I touch my pointed ears and look down at my cloven feet, wondering yet again why I had to be born like this. I pick myself up, this time making sure to stay to the very edge of the sidewalk so that I don’t get in anyone’s way. I continue walking as if nothing happens, hooves clip clapping on the sidewalk. I’m used to being treated like this by now, as unfair as it seems.
My name is Jorge, by the way, and I’m what people around here call a halfbreed. Or, as the random elf had oh so kindly put it, a halfblooded freak. We’re not really viewed very highly, though I imagine you could tell that already.
I myself am the son of a fairy and a satyr, but there are halfbreeds of all kinds. Dragons and wyverns, gnomes and sprites, ogres and goblins, you name it. Society tries to ignore us, but we’re here. And someday maybe we’ll be seen, maybe we’ll make a difference.
Okay, yeah, I really don’t believe that. It’s been this way as long as anyone can remember, this prejudice towards halfbreeds goes back decades, at one point we were so frowned on that we were basically nonexistent because none dared show their face. That was before my time, at least.
I don’t know why it’s like this for sure, and I don’t know that anyone does. But for some reason everyone goes along with it, and I guess maybe that means they must be right. Maybe I’m a freak of nature. Or maybe they’re wrong and this is unfair.
But either way, what are you going to do about it?
Part Two
Word Count: 1,026
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
Magic is integrated into the characters lives in such a way that it would be impossible for most of them to imagine a world without it. They use their magic to power certain pieces of technology, such as levitating scooters, in a superficially similar way to how electricity is used.
Most people posses one or a few closely related abilities that they can use independently of society. Some of the abilities are rather mundane, such as the ability to make a perfect piece of toast, but some very rare ones are full on fantastic, such as the ability to control fire. Most are somewhere between the two, such as night vision or levitation.
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it?
Magic is a very common thing, melded almost seamlessly into the characters day to day lives. All characters are aware of its existence, though not all are necessarily aware that they themselves posses it.
Most people are going to have some kind of magic that shows up at some point in their lives, likely when they’re still pretty young. Until it shows up, however, they have no way of knowing whether or not they actually posses any magic themselves. Or, their power might allow them to do something so mundane that they don’t even realize that’s what it is until much later, or at all. If that happens, or if they come in to their ability later in life, it can really effect them.
There are also, as mentioned, some people who don’t have any magic at all. These people are seen as a rare minority, however.
What is an important symbol of your world?
An important symbol in my world is the crane, which is seen as slow, graceful and precise; in other words, everything a magic wielder should be. The crane has been used to symbolize this for centuries, and it can be found on many important buildings and documents.
But there are people challenging the old ways of viewing things, pointing out that cranes can also be wild, quick and erratic when needed. These people have reclaimed the crane as their own symbol and are using it in their hopes of sparking a peaceful revolution.
How can your world’s magic aid character development?
One way that magic could side in character development in this world is by looking into the fact that some people are born with very limited to no magic. These people would likely feel out of place in society, as if they were outcasts, freaks, or not as good as anyone else. They’d likely be treated as inferior and as if they couldn’t do anything. Learning their own self worth, how to be proud of themselves despite their differences and how to stand up for themselves would make for relatable character arcs.
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
The two golden rules when it comes to magic are: A, never lose control of it; and B, never, ever, experiment with it. Magic is not to be tempered with. Breaking laws regarding magic can result in any of the following, depending on the severity of the offense: lose of job, limited use of certain magic powered technology, public regard as a threat to society, entering certain fields of profession hard or impossible, and, in rare, truly serious cases, having their very magic stripped away from them. Having their magic taken away from them is one of the most shameful, dehumanizing things that can happen to a person.
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
Magic is generally seen as a rather normal thing in this world, but it can still be fantastic, much in the way rainbows and stars are normal, but still celebrated. Its simple a normal part of the average person’s life. It’s not usually seen as a curse, except in those rare cases that someone’s magic is so outlandish that it’s deemed dangerous/a burden to society. Other than that, magic is very normal, but still viewed in a somewhat high way.
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
The sensations a person feels will depend on their ability, the strength of their magic, and the strain of the task they’re performing. Even two people with the same or similar ability will likely have two completely different experiences.
As an example, someone who can control fire would likely feel a warm to hot tingling sensation over their skin. They may smell a faint wisp of smoke or cooked food. They could see red. Maybe they hear a crackling fire, even if there isn’t one. Maybe they suddenly have a spicy taste in their mouth. There are really limitless sensations a person can feel, and they’ll likely feel multiple, but they’re so specific to each individual that it’s essentially impossible to properly describe them.
How is the education system in your world? What do your characters learn (or hypothetically would learn)?
The schooling system in this world is much the same as ours; eg, it needs help. There are public, private, boarding and homeschooling, just like here. Some are viewed in a better light then others, with private and boarding schools seen as stingy and maybe shady, public schools normal, and homeschoolers reclusive, and no matter how wrong these stereotypes may be, they continued to stick. Characters learn the basics, such as history, math and writing, but they’re also required to take classes focusing primarily on magic, it’s effects on their lives, safe usage of it, and it’s history.
What happens when magic gets out of control in your world?
In the event that magic were to get out of control, it would cause havoc, however minor or major. Magic is seen as something the individual in possession of it should have complete control over it, and losing this control over it is disgraceful. If magic gets out of control, it would be extremely chaotic, and would cause a crisis. Whether this crisis is on a community, national, or even universal would depend solely on the severity of the chaos the magic caused and the amount of people involved.
Does magic affect the government of your world? If so, how?
Magic effects the government in that they have -or believe they have- to place strict regulations and controls on magic to ensure that it doesn’t get out of hand, as it oh so easily could. They keep an eye on surges of strong or unusual magic, though they themselves are capable of doing so thanks to the use of their own incredibly strong magic. They also, as mentioned above, have the frightening ability to strip a person’s magic away from them.
Part Three
Word Count: 1,051
Steampunk fantasy
Word Count: 364
“Stop right there!” A cop shouted, running after a teenage boy. The boy turned around and smirked, leaning against the railing of the boardwalk he was standing on.
“Me? Stop? Nah, I don’t think I will.” He laughed and vaulted through a gap in the railing.
The cop shouted something unrepeatable and rushed over, looking over the railing. The boy was already long out of reach, having pulled a cord on his jacket, making it unfurl so he could glide away, still laughing.
Soon, the boy -Fran- was safely landed and huddled in a corner of an alley down in the Lower City.
“That was a close one today, wasn’t it, Spigot?” He asked, taking a small, clockwork lizard out of his shirt pocket. “But hey, we still came out with today’s meal!”
He held up a loaf of bread triumphantly, taking a bite. He hadn’t wanted to steal it, but what choice did he have? Was he supposed to starve? Not hardly.
As a penniless orphan, life was rough for young Fran, who made a home for himself in the poorest part of the steam powered city, a section called the Lower City. Here, residents lived among the gears and inter workings of the city. Crime and violence rates were high, and it could easily be said that a district full of criminals wasn’t a safe place for a child to grow up. But hey, Fran was a criminal himself, was he not?
“Look at that, Spigot,” Fran said between bites of bread, gazing upward. From this far Below the Middle City was hard to see, let alone the Upper City, and along with it, the light of day. But to Fran, it was as if he could see it in all it’s assumed glory.
“That’s going to be us, someday,” he continued longingly. “Someday, we’re going to be up there where we belong, having full meals served to us by clockwork butlers. We won’t be stuck down here with other undesirables and the sewer.”
It was a wild dream, but then again, Fran was a wild dreamer. And in the city of steam, the impossible wasn’t always so far out of reach.
Dystopian fantasy
Word Count: 336
Haze pushed the hair out of her face and looked around. She saw the same city she’d lived in for her whole life, the one she had once believed to be perfect. Nothing was different about it, but it felt like a different place entirely, now that she knew the truth.
She turned her head to look at Klay, who was right behind her. His light brown hair was a mess, and the cut he’d received from their unexpected run in with the wyvern still hadn’t healed. Haze imagined that she must look just as rough. She couldn’t help but ask herself… was this all worth it?
“Yes, it is.” Haze didn’t realize she’d voiced her thoughts out loud until Klay responded.
“It’s worth it, because it’s the only choice we have. Now that we know the truth about this place, do you really think we can submit to Their rule? We’ll never be content again.”
“If we were ever content in the first place…” Haze whispered.
“Exactly.” Klay nodded. “And forget that, They’re going to figure out what we are at some point. If we go back, They’ll kill us.”
Haze automatically brought a hand to her throat and gulped. He was right. If They found out that the two of them possessed magic, no matter how small, they’d be sentence to death in a heartbeat. It was yet another way that Haze and her new friend were quickly finding out that their world wasn’t the fair, safe place they had always been lead to think it was.
But they were going to change it. They were going to take down the government and start a new one, this time ruled by the people, not some mysterious tyrants. If they didn’t at least try, no one would, and every future citizen of this horrid city would be doomed to a miserable, brainwashed life.
Or worse.
“Come on, let’s do this.” Klay held out his hand. Hesitatingly, but still determined, Haze took it.
“Let’s do this.”
Hidden World
Word Count: 351
“What’s going on? What’s happening?” I ask my parents, eyes wide. We just got a mandate to stay inside our houses or whatever the nearest available building is at all cost. My parents share a look, before my dad speaks.
“There was a human spotted by the West Entrance.”
“/What/?”
“Now, now, don’t freak out, I’m sure it’s nothing. It’s probably just a false alarm, they happen all the time, you know that,” my dad is saying this, but it’s clear he doesn’t believe them, and I don’t either. It’s true that there are false alarms all the time, but we’ve never been ordered a mandate to stay indoors because of one before.
A human at the West Entrance… that was serious. Not only was it our most protected entrance, with a veil, Repelling enchantments, and more, it was protected like that for a reason. It lead right into the center of our city, where the oldest and most important buildings are located. The area where we don’t even pretend to hide what we are or the magic at our fingertips. If a human made it to the edge of our city, where the magic was kept more mundane, we could write it off easier, but if one breached the West Entrance and made it to the center of our city…
We’d be doomed.
“This is exactly why I said the West Entrance should be closed, didn’t I? But no, everyone thought I was crazy! Now look at the boat we’re going to be in. I tell you-“
“Hun.” My dad places a hand on my mom’s arm. “The kids.”
Ha. As if we don’t know the severity of the situation already.
A member of the Council’s voice is projected through out the city before my mom can reply and we all freeze, listening.
“A human has made it into the city. I repeat, a human has made it into the city. Please remain calm.”
It’s the next sentence that, while meant to be reassuring, causes me to tense even more.
“The human will be dealt with, no matter the cost.”
- Piper_Camps
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Scratcher
500+ posts
July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
word war 7/23, @scratch_warrior_cat, no prompt 542 words
Let’s see, so I need to write something for a word war huh? What should I write? I’m not really sure? I always have a hard time figuring out what to write when I do word wars, unless I have a prompt of course then it’s easy. But I don’t have a prompt right now.. I don’t have anything to guide me so I kind of have to just ramble on and on until I can write something that makes any kind of sense whatsoever otherwise I’m just going to be rambling on and on forever if I don’t find something to write about. Well.. I still can't think of anything and I’m not really sure how much time I have left.. Oh I just saw I have a little less than five minutes left so I still have a bit of time to ramble on for the words that I need to get so that I can win this war. I hope that I can win at least. I don't know how fast or what my opponent is writing so I guess there’s really no way for me to know if I’m winning. Maybe they really have more words than I do? Or maybe I have a whole lot more than they do and I just don’t know it. I don’t really know but I do like writing, writing is fun and I really enjoy it, which I guess is why I'm taking part in a word war. Although it’s also kind of because I need words to count towards the cabin wars because my cabin has just been warred and I really don’t want us to lose any more points, because otherwise we’ll lose points and we might drop down on the leaderboard and we won’t be in sixth place anymore. Which I know that sixth isn’t necessarily the best place to be in, it’s better than being in last place or whatever. I would prefer to be in sixth than last. And honestly I don’t think that anybody is ever going to catch up to Thriller and Myth for whatever reason their cabins are extremely motivated. How come I’m ever in the cabin that's going the best. I don’t know, the cabins that I’m in usually have some pretty inactive people and I don’t know why that always is. But I mean Script is actually doing pretty good. As fast as I know all of us are completing the weekly right now, like on the last day that it’s possible for it to be submitted. I don’t know why we’re all such procrastinators but apparently we all are because all of us are waiting until the last day to submit it, but at least most of us are submitting it all, which is nice. At least we’re getting points from it. But so are all the other cabins so we’re really not moving up in the leaderboard too much. Oh my god, one minute left I have to write faster than ever. I'm probably making lots of spelling mistakes but that's fine. Oh wow not that many and- oh ten seconds I don’t have much more time to write anything else this is going to be over soon
Let’s see, so I need to write something for a word war huh? What should I write? I’m not really sure? I always have a hard time figuring out what to write when I do word wars, unless I have a prompt of course then it’s easy. But I don’t have a prompt right now.. I don’t have anything to guide me so I kind of have to just ramble on and on until I can write something that makes any kind of sense whatsoever otherwise I’m just going to be rambling on and on forever if I don’t find something to write about. Well.. I still can't think of anything and I’m not really sure how much time I have left.. Oh I just saw I have a little less than five minutes left so I still have a bit of time to ramble on for the words that I need to get so that I can win this war. I hope that I can win at least. I don't know how fast or what my opponent is writing so I guess there’s really no way for me to know if I’m winning. Maybe they really have more words than I do? Or maybe I have a whole lot more than they do and I just don’t know it. I don’t really know but I do like writing, writing is fun and I really enjoy it, which I guess is why I'm taking part in a word war. Although it’s also kind of because I need words to count towards the cabin wars because my cabin has just been warred and I really don’t want us to lose any more points, because otherwise we’ll lose points and we might drop down on the leaderboard and we won’t be in sixth place anymore. Which I know that sixth isn’t necessarily the best place to be in, it’s better than being in last place or whatever. I would prefer to be in sixth than last. And honestly I don’t think that anybody is ever going to catch up to Thriller and Myth for whatever reason their cabins are extremely motivated. How come I’m ever in the cabin that's going the best. I don’t know, the cabins that I’m in usually have some pretty inactive people and I don’t know why that always is. But I mean Script is actually doing pretty good. As fast as I know all of us are completing the weekly right now, like on the last day that it’s possible for it to be submitted. I don’t know why we’re all such procrastinators but apparently we all are because all of us are waiting until the last day to submit it, but at least most of us are submitting it all, which is nice. At least we’re getting points from it. But so are all the other cabins so we’re really not moving up in the leaderboard too much. Oh my god, one minute left I have to write faster than ever. I'm probably making lots of spelling mistakes but that's fine. Oh wow not that many and- oh ten seconds I don’t have much more time to write anything else this is going to be over soon
- MoonlitSeas
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Scratcher
500+ posts
July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
cabin wars proof
1003 words - real-fi's war
I looked up to our sky, a collection of lights far beyond reach. It held millions, if not billions of twinkling lights, tiny little hints of galaxies far beyond this world. We might never hold them in our hands, but we could always shoot for every little star, hoping that we might someday reach one, no matter how far away they might seem. A rare fluffy cloud occasionally made its way across – like an enormous bowl of cotton candy, it wasn’t quite tangible, yet in other ways, very much so. It was light, not to mention fluffy, holding an entire legion of air particles captive within its dainty boundaries, expanding its structure to take up more space.
Perhaps some day I could reach these dreamed up worlds, these fantasies built on perspectives, their foundations laid in an illusion of self importance. In a grand scheme of a multiverse, each individual being unique yet wholly irrelevant, a speck of duck in an untouched attic.
Beyond what lies far above my head, below our horizon lies a borderline of trees, hundreds of silhouetted pieces of bark bound to flourishing green leaves pointing in every direction. It was in many ways gorgeous, yet much of a tree’s color is lost to darkness as our sun takes a rest.
Given that Miss Moonlit just so happens to be rather tired of actually writing anything whatsoever literary, she has now taken up a new fabulous task. She will now be rambling away in an attempt to gain necessary words for this new cabin war, a fabulous gift from a camper of another cabin, though she’s not quite sure who was kind enough to gift thriller with such an amazing present. It was absolutely wonderful to have motivation to write completely random stuff anyways, despite a rather obvious fact; this writing was simply utterly atrocious. Atrocity aside, her atrocious writing would indeed count for words for Thriller, a very important trait for any writing whatsoever to have, regardless of its original intent. As she wondered what to ramble about next, she took note of a simple fact. Sky, one of her campers, had written several hundred words, which could easily be counted towards Thriller’s most recent war. However, SKy had not specified whether these words included a certain extra challenge, which is to say, Moonlit had no idea what they counted for. Regardless of their actual value for a cabin war’s purpose, Moonlit knew her word would indeed count for a purpose. These words didn’t use a very annoying three words, which would allow her to earn bonus points for Thriller with them. Typing furiously, Moonlit allows herself to be distracted briefly to check if Sky has responded to her message. Unfortunately, it would appear that her answer was no. In this case, no just so happened to mean that Sky had not yet answered, which was fine, other than a simple fact – that it now meant that Moonlit would have to continue writing utter nonsense for another five hundred words. Perhaps if she was lucky, Lucy would save her with a fabulous chunk of words, but perhaps she would never know. Even if Lucy wasn’t working on earning bonus points, she knew that Lucy was definitely writing, which was great! Lucy had already written a lot today though. Moonlit was very impressed with her diligence, not to mention her perseverance. Last but certainly not least, Moonlit couldn’t help but admire her dedication. Lucy was a camper, but she was certainly even more dedicated than some leaders right now. She hadn’t seen a few of them around much today – which was perfectly fine. Leaders were allowed to have lives. They should not be expected to be active every moment of every day. She was merely commenting on her appreciation of Lucy, as well as what a fabulous camper she was. Daisy too had written an absolutely insane amount this morning, opting to write several thousand words incredibly quickly before promptly school Moonlit for her sleep that night. In Moonlit’s defense, it had be thunderstorming. Daisy knew that Moonlit could never sleep when it's thunderstorming – she had no business in any form in scolding her for it. Moonlit takes another brief pause, happy to see that Sky has replied. It appears that she had not done a certain extra challenge, which was perfectly fine, especially since Moonlit was now too far into hers. She now only needed around another 250 words to complete it for her whole cabin, which was great! She was nearly done, all she needed to was ramble for just a little bit longer. Surely it couldn’t be all that hard of a task – she’d already made it this far without her three beloved words, so surely she could finish it. Two hundred words. Excellent. She would likely never have to pull a four thousand word rant just to finish a singular cabin war, like a handful of others had been known to do, yet she had a feeling that she definitely could if it came down to it. She was, if she did say so herself, rather excellent at being very redundant, to a point where it certainly wasn’t literary writing anymore. She could write all day like that, just taping away casually at her keyboard, occasionally doing a bit of keysmashing to excite her fingers when her word per minute fell far too low for such atrocious writing. This was cabin wars, there was simply no time for tired fingers. She would finish if it was her final action, even if it took her final breath, simply because she was determined to. In this case, that was all metaphorical, but her point should be obvious to any reader. Determination was certainly worth a lot, especially when combined with loyalty. She was beyond loyal to Thriller - she would do almost anything for her cabin, even give up a few hours of sleep. Birdi certainly wasn’t happy when she did so, but it was always worth it.
+1001 for fan-fi's war
I looked up to our sky, a collection of lights far beyond reach. It held millions, if not billions of twinkling lights, tiny little hints of galaxies far beyond this world. We might never hold them in our hands, but we could always shoot for every little star, hoping that we might someday reach one, no matter how far away they might seem. A rare fluffy cloud occasionally made its way across – like an enormous bowl of cotton candy, it wasn’t quite tangible, yet in other ways, very much so. It was light, not to mention fluffy, holding an entire legion of air particles captive within its dainty boundaries, expanding its structure to take up more space.
Perhaps some day I could reach these dreamed up worlds, these fantasies built on perspectives, their foundations laid in an illusion of self importance. In a grand scheme of a multiverse, each individual being unique yet wholly irrelevant, a speck of duck in an untouched attic.
Beyond what lies far above my head, below our horizon lies a borderline of trees, hundreds of silhouetted pieces of bark bound to flourishing green leaves pointing in every direction. It was in many ways gorgeous, yet much of a tree’s color is lost to darkness as our sun takes a rest.
Given that Miss Moonlit just so happens to be rather tired of actually writing anything whatsoever literary, she has now taken up a new fabulous task. She will now be rambling away in an attempt to gain necessary words for this new cabin war, a fabulous gift from a camper of another cabin, though she’s not quite sure who was kind enough to gift thriller with such an amazing present. It was absolutely wonderful to have motivation to write completely random stuff anyways, despite a rather obvious fact; this writing was simply utterly atrocious. Atrocity aside, her atrocious writing would indeed count for words for Thriller, a very important trait for any writing whatsoever to have, regardless of its original intent. As she wondered what to ramble about next, she took note of a simple fact. Sky, one of her campers, had written several hundred words, which could easily be counted towards Thriller’s most recent war. However, SKy had not specified whether these words included a certain extra challenge, which is to say, Moonlit had no idea what they counted for. Regardless of their actual value for a cabin war’s purpose, Moonlit knew her word would indeed count for a purpose. These words didn’t use a very annoying three words, which would allow her to earn bonus points for Thriller with them. Typing furiously, Moonlit allows herself to be distracted briefly to check if Sky has responded to her message. Unfortunately, it would appear that her answer was no. In this case, no just so happened to mean that Sky had not yet answered, which was fine, other than a simple fact – that it now meant that Moonlit would have to continue writing utter nonsense for another five hundred words. Perhaps if she was lucky, Lucy would save her with a fabulous chunk of words, but perhaps she would never know. Even if Lucy wasn’t working on earning bonus points, she knew that Lucy was definitely writing, which was great! Lucy had already written a lot today though. Moonlit was very impressed with her diligence, not to mention her perseverance. Last but certainly not least, Moonlit couldn’t help but admire her dedication. Lucy was a camper, but she was certainly even more dedicated than some leaders right now. She hadn’t seen a few of them around much today – which was perfectly fine. Leaders were allowed to have lives. They should not be expected to be active every moment of every day. She was merely commenting on her appreciation of Lucy, as well as what a fabulous camper she was. Daisy too had written an absolutely insane amount this morning, opting to write several thousand words incredibly quickly before promptly school Moonlit for her sleep that night. In Moonlit’s defense, it had be thunderstorming. Daisy knew that Moonlit could never sleep when it's thunderstorming – she had no business in any form in scolding her for it. Moonlit takes another brief pause, happy to see that Sky has replied. It appears that she had not done a certain extra challenge, which was perfectly fine, especially since Moonlit was now too far into hers. She now only needed around another 250 words to complete it for her whole cabin, which was great! She was nearly done, all she needed to was ramble for just a little bit longer. Surely it couldn’t be all that hard of a task – she’d already made it this far without her three beloved words, so surely she could finish it. Two hundred words. Excellent. She would likely never have to pull a four thousand word rant just to finish a singular cabin war, like a handful of others had been known to do, yet she had a feeling that she definitely could if it came down to it. She was, if she did say so herself, rather excellent at being very redundant, to a point where it certainly wasn’t literary writing anymore. She could write all day like that, just taping away casually at her keyboard, occasionally doing a bit of keysmashing to excite her fingers when her word per minute fell far too low for such atrocious writing. This was cabin wars, there was simply no time for tired fingers. She would finish if it was her final action, even if it took her final breath, simply because she was determined to. In this case, that was all metaphorical, but her point should be obvious to any reader. Determination was certainly worth a lot, especially when combined with loyalty. She was beyond loyal to Thriller - she would do almost anything for her cabin, even give up a few hours of sleep. Birdi certainly wasn’t happy when she did so, but it was always worth it.
1003 words - real-fi's war
I looked up to our sky, a collection of lights far beyond reach. It held millions, if not billions of twinkling lights, tiny little hints of galaxies far beyond this world. We might never hold them in our hands, but we could always shoot for every little star, hoping that we might someday reach one, no matter how far away they might seem. A rare fluffy cloud occasionally made its way across – like an enormous bowl of cotton candy, it wasn’t quite tangible, yet in other ways, very much so. It was light, not to mention fluffy, holding an entire legion of air particles captive within its dainty boundaries, expanding its structure to take up more space.
Perhaps some day I could reach these dreamed up worlds, these fantasies built on perspectives, their foundations laid in an illusion of self importance. In a grand scheme of a multiverse, each individual being unique yet wholly irrelevant, a speck of duck in an untouched attic.
Beyond what lies far above my head, below our horizon lies a borderline of trees, hundreds of silhouetted pieces of bark bound to flourishing green leaves pointing in every direction. It was in many ways gorgeous, yet much of a tree’s color is lost to darkness as our sun takes a rest.
Given that Miss Moonlit just so happens to be rather tired of actually writing anything whatsoever literary, she has now taken up a new fabulous task. She will now be rambling away in an attempt to gain necessary words for this new cabin war, a fabulous gift from a camper of another cabin, though she’s not quite sure who was kind enough to gift thriller with such an amazing present. It was absolutely wonderful to have motivation to write completely random stuff anyways, despite a rather obvious fact; this writing was simply utterly atrocious. Atrocity aside, her atrocious writing would indeed count for words for Thriller, a very important trait for any writing whatsoever to have, regardless of its original intent. As she wondered what to ramble about next, she took note of a simple fact. Sky, one of her campers, had written several hundred words, which could easily be counted towards Thriller’s most recent war. However, SKy had not specified whether these words included a certain extra challenge, which is to say, Moonlit had no idea what they counted for. Regardless of their actual value for a cabin war’s purpose, Moonlit knew her word would indeed count for a purpose. These words didn’t use a very annoying three words, which would allow her to earn bonus points for Thriller with them. Typing furiously, Moonlit allows herself to be distracted briefly to check if Sky has responded to her message. Unfortunately, it would appear that her answer was no. In this case, no just so happened to mean that Sky had not yet answered, which was fine, other than a simple fact – that it now meant that Moonlit would have to continue writing utter nonsense for another five hundred words. Perhaps if she was lucky, Lucy would save her with a fabulous chunk of words, but perhaps she would never know. Even if Lucy wasn’t working on earning bonus points, she knew that Lucy was definitely writing, which was great! Lucy had already written a lot today though. Moonlit was very impressed with her diligence, not to mention her perseverance. Last but certainly not least, Moonlit couldn’t help but admire her dedication. Lucy was a camper, but she was certainly even more dedicated than some leaders right now. She hadn’t seen a few of them around much today – which was perfectly fine. Leaders were allowed to have lives. They should not be expected to be active every moment of every day. She was merely commenting on her appreciation of Lucy, as well as what a fabulous camper she was. Daisy too had written an absolutely insane amount this morning, opting to write several thousand words incredibly quickly before promptly school Moonlit for her sleep that night. In Moonlit’s defense, it had be thunderstorming. Daisy knew that Moonlit could never sleep when it's thunderstorming – she had no business in any form in scolding her for it. Moonlit takes another brief pause, happy to see that Sky has replied. It appears that she had not done a certain extra challenge, which was perfectly fine, especially since Moonlit was now too far into hers. She now only needed around another 250 words to complete it for her whole cabin, which was great! She was nearly done, all she needed to was ramble for just a little bit longer. Surely it couldn’t be all that hard of a task – she’d already made it this far without her three beloved words, so surely she could finish it. Two hundred words. Excellent. She would likely never have to pull a four thousand word rant just to finish a singular cabin war, like a handful of others had been known to do, yet she had a feeling that she definitely could if it came down to it. She was, if she did say so herself, rather excellent at being very redundant, to a point where it certainly wasn’t literary writing anymore. She could write all day like that, just taping away casually at her keyboard, occasionally doing a bit of keysmashing to excite her fingers when her word per minute fell far too low for such atrocious writing. This was cabin wars, there was simply no time for tired fingers. She would finish if it was her final action, even if it took her final breath, simply because she was determined to. In this case, that was all metaphorical, but her point should be obvious to any reader. Determination was certainly worth a lot, especially when combined with loyalty. She was beyond loyal to Thriller - she would do almost anything for her cabin, even give up a few hours of sleep. Birdi certainly wasn’t happy when she did so, but it was always worth it.
+1001 for fan-fi's war
I looked up to our sky, a collection of lights far beyond reach. It held millions, if not billions of twinkling lights, tiny little hints of galaxies far beyond this world. We might never hold them in our hands, but we could always shoot for every little star, hoping that we might someday reach one, no matter how far away they might seem. A rare fluffy cloud occasionally made its way across – like an enormous bowl of cotton candy, it wasn’t quite tangible, yet in other ways, very much so. It was light, not to mention fluffy, holding an entire legion of air particles captive within its dainty boundaries, expanding its structure to take up more space.
Perhaps some day I could reach these dreamed up worlds, these fantasies built on perspectives, their foundations laid in an illusion of self importance. In a grand scheme of a multiverse, each individual being unique yet wholly irrelevant, a speck of duck in an untouched attic.
Beyond what lies far above my head, below our horizon lies a borderline of trees, hundreds of silhouetted pieces of bark bound to flourishing green leaves pointing in every direction. It was in many ways gorgeous, yet much of a tree’s color is lost to darkness as our sun takes a rest.
Given that Miss Moonlit just so happens to be rather tired of actually writing anything whatsoever literary, she has now taken up a new fabulous task. She will now be rambling away in an attempt to gain necessary words for this new cabin war, a fabulous gift from a camper of another cabin, though she’s not quite sure who was kind enough to gift thriller with such an amazing present. It was absolutely wonderful to have motivation to write completely random stuff anyways, despite a rather obvious fact; this writing was simply utterly atrocious. Atrocity aside, her atrocious writing would indeed count for words for Thriller, a very important trait for any writing whatsoever to have, regardless of its original intent. As she wondered what to ramble about next, she took note of a simple fact. Sky, one of her campers, had written several hundred words, which could easily be counted towards Thriller’s most recent war. However, SKy had not specified whether these words included a certain extra challenge, which is to say, Moonlit had no idea what they counted for. Regardless of their actual value for a cabin war’s purpose, Moonlit knew her word would indeed count for a purpose. These words didn’t use a very annoying three words, which would allow her to earn bonus points for Thriller with them. Typing furiously, Moonlit allows herself to be distracted briefly to check if Sky has responded to her message. Unfortunately, it would appear that her answer was no. In this case, no just so happened to mean that Sky had not yet answered, which was fine, other than a simple fact – that it now meant that Moonlit would have to continue writing utter nonsense for another five hundred words. Perhaps if she was lucky, Lucy would save her with a fabulous chunk of words, but perhaps she would never know. Even if Lucy wasn’t working on earning bonus points, she knew that Lucy was definitely writing, which was great! Lucy had already written a lot today though. Moonlit was very impressed with her diligence, not to mention her perseverance. Last but certainly not least, Moonlit couldn’t help but admire her dedication. Lucy was a camper, but she was certainly even more dedicated than some leaders right now. She hadn’t seen a few of them around much today – which was perfectly fine. Leaders were allowed to have lives. They should not be expected to be active every moment of every day. She was merely commenting on her appreciation of Lucy, as well as what a fabulous camper she was. Daisy too had written an absolutely insane amount this morning, opting to write several thousand words incredibly quickly before promptly school Moonlit for her sleep that night. In Moonlit’s defense, it had be thunderstorming. Daisy knew that Moonlit could never sleep when it's thunderstorming – she had no business in any form in scolding her for it. Moonlit takes another brief pause, happy to see that Sky has replied. It appears that she had not done a certain extra challenge, which was perfectly fine, especially since Moonlit was now too far into hers. She now only needed around another 250 words to complete it for her whole cabin, which was great! She was nearly done, all she needed to was ramble for just a little bit longer. Surely it couldn’t be all that hard of a task – she’d already made it this far without her three beloved words, so surely she could finish it. Two hundred words. Excellent. She would likely never have to pull a four thousand word rant just to finish a singular cabin war, like a handful of others had been known to do, yet she had a feeling that she definitely could if it came down to it. She was, if she did say so herself, rather excellent at being very redundant, to a point where it certainly wasn’t literary writing anymore. She could write all day like that, just taping away casually at her keyboard, occasionally doing a bit of keysmashing to excite her fingers when her word per minute fell far too low for such atrocious writing. This was cabin wars, there was simply no time for tired fingers. She would finish if it was her final action, even if it took her final breath, simply because she was determined to. In this case, that was all metaphorical, but her point should be obvious to any reader. Determination was certainly worth a lot, especially when combined with loyalty. She was beyond loyal to Thriller - she would do almost anything for her cabin, even give up a few hours of sleep. Birdi certainly wasn’t happy when she did so, but it was always worth it.
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
Part 1: High Fantasy and Worldbuilding
Brainstorm at least 20 possible facets for a high fantasy setting.
In 200 words or more, explain the connections between at least 10 of your brainstormed ideas in one fantasy world.
Finally, write 400 words of a narrative taking place in this setting.
Brainstorm
Elders are a big part of politics, the young aren’t as respected
Bloodlines are as well, adoption into royalty is looked down upon
Soft magic system, used mainly among non human species, though are respected
Several spread out villages with one central ruler, in the “capital”
World has several realms with different species, they somewhat interact though mainly ignore each other
Empire is based off medieval europe somewhat
Dialects can differ between villages though they speak a common tongue
Humans eat what they can get their hands on, meat and plants, unlike elves which have plant based diets and orcs who eat mainly meat
Hybrids between species aren’t uncommon, though they usually end up in the human realm. Humans treat half elves as equals, half orcs aren’t treated so kindly
Elves usually infantilize half elves due to there shorter life span and “Lack of wisdom”
Orcs are brutish, abandoning half bloods and their parents due to corruption of blood and lack of strength
All human races seen as equal
Woman not as respected in many places
Taverns are common among humans and is where most communication takes place
Empire is filled with forests and rivers with little paths between villages
While laws passed by the monarch are to be followed many villages make their own rules causing different cultures between each one
Some laws are completely ignored, hence woman not being respected
Most enforcement are placed in the capital
Merchants are a most honored career,
Several more species though they are theorized to be extinct
There are several species in the magical world: humans, who are merchants valuing money; elves, intelligent and wise having a strong connection with nature; and orcs, boisterous and strong, competing with each other for power. There are many more fae, dwarves, and dragons, those though don’t show themselves and some don’t believe they exist. Right now though, we’ll focus on the empire, bustling with humans and the humanlike, yet so different they may as well be different species.
The empire is led by a high ruler of a royal bloodline, though many decisions are made by the elder council, more wise and stuck in their ways. Like most governments, they aren’t the most just, but the capital isn’t corrupt. The laws they pass are mainly in the interest of humans, more specifically the rich, though they do care to keep peace with the other realms. The three realms get along as well as they need to be, interactions are at a minimum and if not for hybrids being common in the empire, they’d barely know or care for the other’s existence. Outside the empire are villages, made to follow the same laws but drastically different. Each place is separated by forests, rivers, and hard to traverse but grassy areas. Only merchants travel much and even they’re not the most pleased to. Money is important, but there are barely any roads and some have even claimed to see monsters. These stories travel by song or ear in the taverns, the one thing most of the villages have in common. Like their dialects and phrases, the stories vary slightly but the patrons enjoy them nonetheless.
Alix walked into his quarters, immediately sitting down on his desk and writing down what was discussed just moments ago. The king had gone ill and he had to go to the meeting completely unprepared, it was exhausting. The bows, handshakes and smiles were blankets over the mockery and disdain the council felt for him, though he didn’t care, Alix couldn’t help but notice not a single one of them addressed him by your highness. Never once calling him a prince or even your grace. In front of the king they would, trying to please him and so in turn he’d take their advice. They’d get on their knees, kiss his feet and sing praises of Prince Alix, the cunning and wise, magic and elven blood running through his veins, a strategist that would lead them to victory. With the king bedridden, they barely acknowledged him as more than a peasant, an orphan the king took pity on, undeserving to be a part of the royal family.
Alix knew he was a better person than any of them were, even if he was adopted most likely out of pity. He’d argue the best he could, trying to pass laws that would help others, the rich and poor. Though he was young, he remembers his real family, they weren’t the most well off and didn’t live in any of the villages. His mother, an elf curious of the human realm, died just some time after his birth, leaving only his father and his older brother. He saw his father die before his eyes, and his brother ran away from fear, though Alix hoped for the best, he never found his brother and he’s presumed dead. It wouldn’t have happened if he had a nice home and if criminals weren’t a common place in the forests. Ever since the king allowed him to have power in the empire, against the council's protests, he’s tried his hardest to put more enforcement in all the empire, visiting the villages, debating with the king as well as the council and trying to put more emphasis on crimes instead of money.
When the king's sickness was healed, Alix was planning to ask to go on an expedition south. Many down there didn’t follow the rules put in place and due to that, got stolen from just a few days prior. The report had holes, all of them did, but just based on the information he had, he already knew who the thief was, the serpent. Alix worked quickly with documents and would be able to finish writing the reports of the meeting in a few hours, what was important was that thief. A cruel person with no respect for anyone, the rich or poor, the exact person that would kill a father leaving an innocent child orphaned. He knew the serpent wasn’t the one who did that, he speculated the thief was not much older than him, but he needed to stop him. He needed to bring justice, the serpent was only the first obstacle. (1037 words)
Part 2: Magical Realism
Complete a questionnaire. You only need to answer ten of the questions, and each of the questions will be answered with 80 words, which is a minimum of 800 words total.
What kind of magic is used in your world? There are two kinds, mind and soul magic. Mind magic can be used by anyone, though only those with an affinity for it truly use it. Elves are the most magically gifted, being able to cast magic spells at a young age many humans take years to learn. Most orcs believe magic as cheating and at worst pure evil, only using strength in their day to day lives. Soul magic is said to come from the gods themselves, being much stronger, rarer and harder to control. While its stronger it is more complicated and using too much can corrupt the user, turning them into monsters.
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities? The most common type of magic is physical, for example teleportation or changing an object’s size, shape, or location. Many magic users use their power to help with their job’s and don’t seek a higher education for it. The ones who do can learn to summon or conjure elements like fire, water or wind. These powers are in the small military sects in the empire or placed as law enforcement. Some humans are adept in all arts and instead turn to elven beings to attempt to get stronger.
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? Magic is common, it’s actually a defect to not be born with the ability, at least for humans. The thing is, most don’t know they can or care to do so even if they possess it. Military is barely respected and being able to teleport a foot in front of you isn’t the greatest help when it comes to selling, so why learn how to do it if you aren't going to use it. Elves think of magic differently, as a force they are able to wield and they respect their gods by using it. They use it for everything and if an elf isn’t born with magic they’re cast away.
How is magic viewed in your world? Depends entirely on species. To humans magic is a tool from who knows where. They don’t care to use it and some are scared of it, saying it’s a corruptive force. This isn’t a popular opinion though it's shared by quite a few people, especially with monsters said to roam in the woods. Orcs think of it as a curse, a corruption against nature, Beings shouldn’t be able to wield fire, the sun does. They shouldn’t be able to control water, the river already flows and doing so disturbs its peace. They shun both elves and humans who use it and are so disgusted that they barely go to the human realm, instead of going to war.
What happens when magic gets out of control in your world? Mind magic doesn’t get out of control, it depends on how the weider uses it and the most similar thing to it getting out of control is the wielder not being able to properly use it. An example of this is a person teleporting to the wrong place, or not being able to put out the fire the person conjured. Soul magic on the other hand is disastrous when out of control. Sometimes it seems to work against the wielder like it has a mind of its own. Using too much corrupts the mind, body and the soul, turning the wielder, even the most skilled at magic into a monster.
What are the limitations of your world’s magic? Mind magic causes exhaustion to the user and even with the most skilled wielder, most spells have a limit to what they do. You can’t simply conjure water, you have to manipulate it, so there has to be a source somewhere nearby. To be able to teleport, you need to have gone to that place before and you can’t teleport too far either. Soul magic is complicated and often needs a catalyst for example tattoos known as sigils that each have a spell correlated to them, or having a familiar that needs to be with you to cast spells.
How can your world’s magic aid character development? This is pretty specific but lets focus on one character. Kyle is a half elf born into a cult of orcs in the human realm that worships the god of strength. Orcs in the other realm don’t know of the false god's existence, but everyone in the cult believes it. He’s thought of as useless because he’s not physically strong but he’s actually blessed with soul magic. He runs away and ends up learning he doesn’t need to be physically strong, with his magic, he’s stronger than everyone back at home.
Compared to our modern society, what do the characters do differently in your world, now that magic is incorporated? A lot considering this isn’t modern society but in fact medieval. This world isn’t really advanced in the slightest and magic doesn’t really help. Elves rely on magic to the point where if it disappeared one day it’d be detrimental to their society. Orcs have the best architecture but they aren’t as smart as elves or humans, so they have little technology. The empire focuses so little on non-royals that the villages don’t change for the better. All magic does is make a few things a bit more efficient.
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses. MInd magic uses focus and imagination to be able to work, it exhausts the user. Some types can cause certain feelings, like dizziness when teleporting or heating up when conjuring fire. Those with a deep connection with magic, soul magic users, and adept magic users feel the magic. They taste the metal they’re manipulating, the cold surface on their skin. They feel the breeze and the grass between their toes of the place they teleport to. They smell the smoke, they feel the never ending rage of the fire. They’re flexible, flowing like the waters.
How is the education system in your world? Human parents educate their children, schools aren’t a common sight. Humans with magic who want to improve have to travel to the capital and pay to be able to learn, if they can’t afford to there's a chance there's a library that they can hopefully teach themselves. For elves they are taught everywhere from a very young age. There are even schools specializing in the different types of magic. Soul magic users can’t be taught as easily as mind magic users and even in the elven realm there is no school for them due to how little their numbers are.
(1017 words)
Part 3: Joint Workshop
Pick three of the genres and write three different 300 word pieces for each one, so 900 words in total.
Hidden worlds
Ezra came back into the library, a hint of sadness on his face, he didn’t sit down and when he talked he seemed distracted. He’s changed, the last time we’ve talked was in middle school, now we’re in college, it makes sense, yet the way he was acting now was different from both years and just moments ago. He used to be a small, quiet boy, picked on by kids in class and said to be mute. He had gray eyes, so pale they looked white, and apparently he was a ghost too. Now he was tall, lively and happy, completely different from before. How did a phone call make him look so disappointed?
“Jade, It was really nice to see you again but I need to go. Can we catch up later?” He said. No, please, not again, he couldn’t leave me, not like he did before. We’ve only just seen each other after all those years, I don’t want to lose him. Before I could protest, he was already walking away. If we weren’t in a library, I would be yelling for him to come back, I missed him. How was I supposed to catch up with him if he didn’t even give me his phone number? He left so fast it seemed like he wanted to leave me here, was that it? Was I just a bad memory, a clingy girl that was just a bother back then?
I couldn’t cry, there was no reason to. I’ve fallen out of friendships before, this wasn’t any different. I was just studying moments ago, I have an exam coming up. Before I couldn’t focus after seeing Ezra for the first time, now that he’s gone there’s no distractions, I can’t slack off. I turn my attention back to my laptop, trying my best to type anything, but I can’t focus. Then I hear a noise from under the table.
I looked down to see Ezra’s bag. He must’ve been in such a hurry he forgot to take it with him. The noise sounded like a bird of some kind, maybe a falcon, or maybe an eagle? I wanted to check if it was his phone, but I just packed my laptop and ran out the door. It’d be an invasion of privacy to look inside and waste time. What if he already left?
I ran out the door and didn’t see him anywhere. The campus was big and I had no idea where he might be. If he has to go somewhere he’s probably leaving the building, I should go there, quick! I think, navigating through the maze of hallways and classrooms. His phone’s alarm seemed to get louder with each step towards the exit. I slide out the door and I look left and right, groups of students are walking in and out but the gray eyed boy was nowhere in sight. Where is he? Where is he? I think desperately, but as I’m stuck in my thoughts the bag in my hand moves.
Before I can even see what’s inside, the bag drags me around at lightning speed. I hold onto it with all my might, questions running through my head. What was happening? What was in Ezra’s bag? It stops abruptly at an alleyway, with Ezra at a dead end.
“My bag! I left it at the library, Ayah’s there, what do I do?” I heard him mumbling and then the bag flew forward. The last thing I saw was a hawk, Ezra’s bewildered face and then a white light before my world was shrouded in darkness.
I woke up on the ground with Ezra's worried face right over me, the sky was a bright magenta, and the floor felt like cotton candy. This has to be a dream right? Where am I?
“You’re awake! How did you get here? Ayah never acts like that, humans aren’t supposed to be here!” He rambled, more to himself than me. I could barely hear what he was saying, a wave of exhaustion crashed over me, and my head felt sore. I must’ve hit it when I passed out, that’s why the sky was purple. Then I noticed three glowing balls in the sky. They were suns.
“What is this place?” I muttered, and Ezra sighed, redirecting his focus to me. His pale gray eyes pierced into mine, there was confusion in it, as well as something else I couldn’t put my finger on.
“This is the kingdom of Navarre, my home.”
Dystopian Fantasy
I remember hearing screams. They were yells of pain, bloodshed, pleads to spare them and their children. That noise is ingrained in my mind, those blood curdling screams of despair, desperate cries for salvation, those could have been me. If it wasn’t for hiding, if those cruel murderers just looked a little harder, they wouldv’e found me. I would've died. My mother couldn’t escape it though, she was fearless, selfless, and then she was gone. Her blood haunts my nightmares.
That day I ran, it was my first cleansing, a ritual said to please the gods and prevent overpopulation. The real purpose though was fear. The government has advanced technology, more people and less to lose. They had magic, the blessing from the gods themselves. No one would fight back because they couldn’t risk it. They wipe out half of all villages, what would happen if one of them tried to stop them. I was cold and alone the first nights, I had no idea how to live without my mom, and as the sun was about to set, I was about to die. My vision went blurry, my stomach aching, and my mouth dry. My vision went black and I woke up on a bed, warm soup next to me.
That’s when the resistance found me. A group of people who were fearless and selfless. They raised me, along with other kids older and younger than me. We traveled frequently and I never experienced another cleansing. The memories stuck with me every night. We were trained to move fast and think faster, sometimes it was overwhelming, I would throw up from the constant struggle, and go to bed crying. It changed me though, from a frail little girl to a soldier and I was happy with my life, my new family.
“Get ready, we’ve trained long enough and it’s time to fight back. Tomorrow is the next cleansing, we’ll travel at dawn and then, we strike.” Sadly, they were fearless, selfless, and just like my mother, if we go on with this plan, they’ll die.
Urban fantasy
It was friday night and this was the universal time to party the night away. Midnight is when the wild come to play and Elias was wild, at least he thought so. He looked in the mirror and winked at himself. I look pretty snazzy, don’t I? He thought to himself. He had just turned twenty one and for his birthday he was going all out.
He invited all his friends to the biggest club in New York, and he was ready to– well– do whatever people do at clubs. Drink? Nah, he’s tried it before and he despised the taste of alcohol. Dance? No! He had two left feet and the grace of a duck, he’d injure whoever he’s dancing with before the beat drops. Flirt? Probably not, the last time a girl saw him she ran away crying. That may be an overstatement but the point still stands. Maybe I should've had some practice before I decided to spend my birthday here. He’s officially an adult, well more like has all the perks of one, and wanted to try them out. Maybe just chilling at home with takeout would’ve been better but there was no way he was backing out now.
Elias strolled out the door and into the uber he got. The city lights would look beautiful if he hasn’t been living here his entire life. He got dropped off, paid a generous tip cause today was a good day and walked into the party.
It was loud, like really loud. The music playing was some pop, some that got remixed several times and people were all over each other. After narrowly avoiding vomit on the floor, he decided to try to have fun when he found his friend. They were all here already, Elias came fashionably late but he didn’t see him anywhere. He sat down in the bar, and politely denied a drink someone bought for him. Unlike him, his friends enjoyed drinking for one reason or another and he expected them to be near. Eventually he saw his friend, Shaw, but instead of heading towards him, he walked straight through a wall. And did he have horns?
Elias swerved between dancers and drunks before getting to that wall. It was rock solid. Then he felt some shove him forward and he fell through. The music, while still loud, was different and the atmosphere changed dramatically. Elias looked up to see monsters, mummies, vampires, werewolves, zombies, and Shaw who now looked like a demon. Midnight was when the wild came to play, and creatures of the night were wild.
(1533 words)
Brainstorm at least 20 possible facets for a high fantasy setting.
In 200 words or more, explain the connections between at least 10 of your brainstormed ideas in one fantasy world.
Finally, write 400 words of a narrative taking place in this setting.
Brainstorm
Elders are a big part of politics, the young aren’t as respected
Bloodlines are as well, adoption into royalty is looked down upon
Soft magic system, used mainly among non human species, though are respected
Several spread out villages with one central ruler, in the “capital”
World has several realms with different species, they somewhat interact though mainly ignore each other
Empire is based off medieval europe somewhat
Dialects can differ between villages though they speak a common tongue
Humans eat what they can get their hands on, meat and plants, unlike elves which have plant based diets and orcs who eat mainly meat
Hybrids between species aren’t uncommon, though they usually end up in the human realm. Humans treat half elves as equals, half orcs aren’t treated so kindly
Elves usually infantilize half elves due to there shorter life span and “Lack of wisdom”
Orcs are brutish, abandoning half bloods and their parents due to corruption of blood and lack of strength
All human races seen as equal
Woman not as respected in many places
Taverns are common among humans and is where most communication takes place
Empire is filled with forests and rivers with little paths between villages
While laws passed by the monarch are to be followed many villages make their own rules causing different cultures between each one
Some laws are completely ignored, hence woman not being respected
Most enforcement are placed in the capital
Merchants are a most honored career,
Several more species though they are theorized to be extinct
There are several species in the magical world: humans, who are merchants valuing money; elves, intelligent and wise having a strong connection with nature; and orcs, boisterous and strong, competing with each other for power. There are many more fae, dwarves, and dragons, those though don’t show themselves and some don’t believe they exist. Right now though, we’ll focus on the empire, bustling with humans and the humanlike, yet so different they may as well be different species.
The empire is led by a high ruler of a royal bloodline, though many decisions are made by the elder council, more wise and stuck in their ways. Like most governments, they aren’t the most just, but the capital isn’t corrupt. The laws they pass are mainly in the interest of humans, more specifically the rich, though they do care to keep peace with the other realms. The three realms get along as well as they need to be, interactions are at a minimum and if not for hybrids being common in the empire, they’d barely know or care for the other’s existence. Outside the empire are villages, made to follow the same laws but drastically different. Each place is separated by forests, rivers, and hard to traverse but grassy areas. Only merchants travel much and even they’re not the most pleased to. Money is important, but there are barely any roads and some have even claimed to see monsters. These stories travel by song or ear in the taverns, the one thing most of the villages have in common. Like their dialects and phrases, the stories vary slightly but the patrons enjoy them nonetheless.
Alix walked into his quarters, immediately sitting down on his desk and writing down what was discussed just moments ago. The king had gone ill and he had to go to the meeting completely unprepared, it was exhausting. The bows, handshakes and smiles were blankets over the mockery and disdain the council felt for him, though he didn’t care, Alix couldn’t help but notice not a single one of them addressed him by your highness. Never once calling him a prince or even your grace. In front of the king they would, trying to please him and so in turn he’d take their advice. They’d get on their knees, kiss his feet and sing praises of Prince Alix, the cunning and wise, magic and elven blood running through his veins, a strategist that would lead them to victory. With the king bedridden, they barely acknowledged him as more than a peasant, an orphan the king took pity on, undeserving to be a part of the royal family.
Alix knew he was a better person than any of them were, even if he was adopted most likely out of pity. He’d argue the best he could, trying to pass laws that would help others, the rich and poor. Though he was young, he remembers his real family, they weren’t the most well off and didn’t live in any of the villages. His mother, an elf curious of the human realm, died just some time after his birth, leaving only his father and his older brother. He saw his father die before his eyes, and his brother ran away from fear, though Alix hoped for the best, he never found his brother and he’s presumed dead. It wouldn’t have happened if he had a nice home and if criminals weren’t a common place in the forests. Ever since the king allowed him to have power in the empire, against the council's protests, he’s tried his hardest to put more enforcement in all the empire, visiting the villages, debating with the king as well as the council and trying to put more emphasis on crimes instead of money.
When the king's sickness was healed, Alix was planning to ask to go on an expedition south. Many down there didn’t follow the rules put in place and due to that, got stolen from just a few days prior. The report had holes, all of them did, but just based on the information he had, he already knew who the thief was, the serpent. Alix worked quickly with documents and would be able to finish writing the reports of the meeting in a few hours, what was important was that thief. A cruel person with no respect for anyone, the rich or poor, the exact person that would kill a father leaving an innocent child orphaned. He knew the serpent wasn’t the one who did that, he speculated the thief was not much older than him, but he needed to stop him. He needed to bring justice, the serpent was only the first obstacle. (1037 words)
Part 2: Magical Realism
Complete a questionnaire. You only need to answer ten of the questions, and each of the questions will be answered with 80 words, which is a minimum of 800 words total.
What kind of magic is used in your world? There are two kinds, mind and soul magic. Mind magic can be used by anyone, though only those with an affinity for it truly use it. Elves are the most magically gifted, being able to cast magic spells at a young age many humans take years to learn. Most orcs believe magic as cheating and at worst pure evil, only using strength in their day to day lives. Soul magic is said to come from the gods themselves, being much stronger, rarer and harder to control. While its stronger it is more complicated and using too much can corrupt the user, turning them into monsters.
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities? The most common type of magic is physical, for example teleportation or changing an object’s size, shape, or location. Many magic users use their power to help with their job’s and don’t seek a higher education for it. The ones who do can learn to summon or conjure elements like fire, water or wind. These powers are in the small military sects in the empire or placed as law enforcement. Some humans are adept in all arts and instead turn to elven beings to attempt to get stronger.
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? Magic is common, it’s actually a defect to not be born with the ability, at least for humans. The thing is, most don’t know they can or care to do so even if they possess it. Military is barely respected and being able to teleport a foot in front of you isn’t the greatest help when it comes to selling, so why learn how to do it if you aren't going to use it. Elves think of magic differently, as a force they are able to wield and they respect their gods by using it. They use it for everything and if an elf isn’t born with magic they’re cast away.
How is magic viewed in your world? Depends entirely on species. To humans magic is a tool from who knows where. They don’t care to use it and some are scared of it, saying it’s a corruptive force. This isn’t a popular opinion though it's shared by quite a few people, especially with monsters said to roam in the woods. Orcs think of it as a curse, a corruption against nature, Beings shouldn’t be able to wield fire, the sun does. They shouldn’t be able to control water, the river already flows and doing so disturbs its peace. They shun both elves and humans who use it and are so disgusted that they barely go to the human realm, instead of going to war.
What happens when magic gets out of control in your world? Mind magic doesn’t get out of control, it depends on how the weider uses it and the most similar thing to it getting out of control is the wielder not being able to properly use it. An example of this is a person teleporting to the wrong place, or not being able to put out the fire the person conjured. Soul magic on the other hand is disastrous when out of control. Sometimes it seems to work against the wielder like it has a mind of its own. Using too much corrupts the mind, body and the soul, turning the wielder, even the most skilled at magic into a monster.
What are the limitations of your world’s magic? Mind magic causes exhaustion to the user and even with the most skilled wielder, most spells have a limit to what they do. You can’t simply conjure water, you have to manipulate it, so there has to be a source somewhere nearby. To be able to teleport, you need to have gone to that place before and you can’t teleport too far either. Soul magic is complicated and often needs a catalyst for example tattoos known as sigils that each have a spell correlated to them, or having a familiar that needs to be with you to cast spells.
How can your world’s magic aid character development? This is pretty specific but lets focus on one character. Kyle is a half elf born into a cult of orcs in the human realm that worships the god of strength. Orcs in the other realm don’t know of the false god's existence, but everyone in the cult believes it. He’s thought of as useless because he’s not physically strong but he’s actually blessed with soul magic. He runs away and ends up learning he doesn’t need to be physically strong, with his magic, he’s stronger than everyone back at home.
Compared to our modern society, what do the characters do differently in your world, now that magic is incorporated? A lot considering this isn’t modern society but in fact medieval. This world isn’t really advanced in the slightest and magic doesn’t really help. Elves rely on magic to the point where if it disappeared one day it’d be detrimental to their society. Orcs have the best architecture but they aren’t as smart as elves or humans, so they have little technology. The empire focuses so little on non-royals that the villages don’t change for the better. All magic does is make a few things a bit more efficient.
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses. MInd magic uses focus and imagination to be able to work, it exhausts the user. Some types can cause certain feelings, like dizziness when teleporting or heating up when conjuring fire. Those with a deep connection with magic, soul magic users, and adept magic users feel the magic. They taste the metal they’re manipulating, the cold surface on their skin. They feel the breeze and the grass between their toes of the place they teleport to. They smell the smoke, they feel the never ending rage of the fire. They’re flexible, flowing like the waters.
How is the education system in your world? Human parents educate their children, schools aren’t a common sight. Humans with magic who want to improve have to travel to the capital and pay to be able to learn, if they can’t afford to there's a chance there's a library that they can hopefully teach themselves. For elves they are taught everywhere from a very young age. There are even schools specializing in the different types of magic. Soul magic users can’t be taught as easily as mind magic users and even in the elven realm there is no school for them due to how little their numbers are.
(1017 words)
Part 3: Joint Workshop
Pick three of the genres and write three different 300 word pieces for each one, so 900 words in total.
Hidden worlds
Ezra came back into the library, a hint of sadness on his face, he didn’t sit down and when he talked he seemed distracted. He’s changed, the last time we’ve talked was in middle school, now we’re in college, it makes sense, yet the way he was acting now was different from both years and just moments ago. He used to be a small, quiet boy, picked on by kids in class and said to be mute. He had gray eyes, so pale they looked white, and apparently he was a ghost too. Now he was tall, lively and happy, completely different from before. How did a phone call make him look so disappointed?
“Jade, It was really nice to see you again but I need to go. Can we catch up later?” He said. No, please, not again, he couldn’t leave me, not like he did before. We’ve only just seen each other after all those years, I don’t want to lose him. Before I could protest, he was already walking away. If we weren’t in a library, I would be yelling for him to come back, I missed him. How was I supposed to catch up with him if he didn’t even give me his phone number? He left so fast it seemed like he wanted to leave me here, was that it? Was I just a bad memory, a clingy girl that was just a bother back then?
I couldn’t cry, there was no reason to. I’ve fallen out of friendships before, this wasn’t any different. I was just studying moments ago, I have an exam coming up. Before I couldn’t focus after seeing Ezra for the first time, now that he’s gone there’s no distractions, I can’t slack off. I turn my attention back to my laptop, trying my best to type anything, but I can’t focus. Then I hear a noise from under the table.
I looked down to see Ezra’s bag. He must’ve been in such a hurry he forgot to take it with him. The noise sounded like a bird of some kind, maybe a falcon, or maybe an eagle? I wanted to check if it was his phone, but I just packed my laptop and ran out the door. It’d be an invasion of privacy to look inside and waste time. What if he already left?
I ran out the door and didn’t see him anywhere. The campus was big and I had no idea where he might be. If he has to go somewhere he’s probably leaving the building, I should go there, quick! I think, navigating through the maze of hallways and classrooms. His phone’s alarm seemed to get louder with each step towards the exit. I slide out the door and I look left and right, groups of students are walking in and out but the gray eyed boy was nowhere in sight. Where is he? Where is he? I think desperately, but as I’m stuck in my thoughts the bag in my hand moves.
Before I can even see what’s inside, the bag drags me around at lightning speed. I hold onto it with all my might, questions running through my head. What was happening? What was in Ezra’s bag? It stops abruptly at an alleyway, with Ezra at a dead end.
“My bag! I left it at the library, Ayah’s there, what do I do?” I heard him mumbling and then the bag flew forward. The last thing I saw was a hawk, Ezra’s bewildered face and then a white light before my world was shrouded in darkness.
I woke up on the ground with Ezra's worried face right over me, the sky was a bright magenta, and the floor felt like cotton candy. This has to be a dream right? Where am I?
“You’re awake! How did you get here? Ayah never acts like that, humans aren’t supposed to be here!” He rambled, more to himself than me. I could barely hear what he was saying, a wave of exhaustion crashed over me, and my head felt sore. I must’ve hit it when I passed out, that’s why the sky was purple. Then I noticed three glowing balls in the sky. They were suns.
“What is this place?” I muttered, and Ezra sighed, redirecting his focus to me. His pale gray eyes pierced into mine, there was confusion in it, as well as something else I couldn’t put my finger on.
“This is the kingdom of Navarre, my home.”
Dystopian Fantasy
I remember hearing screams. They were yells of pain, bloodshed, pleads to spare them and their children. That noise is ingrained in my mind, those blood curdling screams of despair, desperate cries for salvation, those could have been me. If it wasn’t for hiding, if those cruel murderers just looked a little harder, they wouldv’e found me. I would've died. My mother couldn’t escape it though, she was fearless, selfless, and then she was gone. Her blood haunts my nightmares.
That day I ran, it was my first cleansing, a ritual said to please the gods and prevent overpopulation. The real purpose though was fear. The government has advanced technology, more people and less to lose. They had magic, the blessing from the gods themselves. No one would fight back because they couldn’t risk it. They wipe out half of all villages, what would happen if one of them tried to stop them. I was cold and alone the first nights, I had no idea how to live without my mom, and as the sun was about to set, I was about to die. My vision went blurry, my stomach aching, and my mouth dry. My vision went black and I woke up on a bed, warm soup next to me.
That’s when the resistance found me. A group of people who were fearless and selfless. They raised me, along with other kids older and younger than me. We traveled frequently and I never experienced another cleansing. The memories stuck with me every night. We were trained to move fast and think faster, sometimes it was overwhelming, I would throw up from the constant struggle, and go to bed crying. It changed me though, from a frail little girl to a soldier and I was happy with my life, my new family.
“Get ready, we’ve trained long enough and it’s time to fight back. Tomorrow is the next cleansing, we’ll travel at dawn and then, we strike.” Sadly, they were fearless, selfless, and just like my mother, if we go on with this plan, they’ll die.
Urban fantasy
It was friday night and this was the universal time to party the night away. Midnight is when the wild come to play and Elias was wild, at least he thought so. He looked in the mirror and winked at himself. I look pretty snazzy, don’t I? He thought to himself. He had just turned twenty one and for his birthday he was going all out.
He invited all his friends to the biggest club in New York, and he was ready to– well– do whatever people do at clubs. Drink? Nah, he’s tried it before and he despised the taste of alcohol. Dance? No! He had two left feet and the grace of a duck, he’d injure whoever he’s dancing with before the beat drops. Flirt? Probably not, the last time a girl saw him she ran away crying. That may be an overstatement but the point still stands. Maybe I should've had some practice before I decided to spend my birthday here. He’s officially an adult, well more like has all the perks of one, and wanted to try them out. Maybe just chilling at home with takeout would’ve been better but there was no way he was backing out now.
Elias strolled out the door and into the uber he got. The city lights would look beautiful if he hasn’t been living here his entire life. He got dropped off, paid a generous tip cause today was a good day and walked into the party.
It was loud, like really loud. The music playing was some pop, some that got remixed several times and people were all over each other. After narrowly avoiding vomit on the floor, he decided to try to have fun when he found his friend. They were all here already, Elias came fashionably late but he didn’t see him anywhere. He sat down in the bar, and politely denied a drink someone bought for him. Unlike him, his friends enjoyed drinking for one reason or another and he expected them to be near. Eventually he saw his friend, Shaw, but instead of heading towards him, he walked straight through a wall. And did he have horns?
Elias swerved between dancers and drunks before getting to that wall. It was rock solid. Then he felt some shove him forward and he fell through. The music, while still loud, was different and the atmosphere changed dramatically. Elias looked up to see monsters, mummies, vampires, werewolves, zombies, and Shaw who now looked like a demon. Midnight was when the wild came to play, and creatures of the night were wild.
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
SWC Weekly #3: Fantasy
Part 1 - High Fantasy and Worldbuilding: 900 Words
Part 2 - Magical Realism: 984 Words
Part 3 - Fantasy Subgenres: 1567 Words
Total: 3451 Words
Part 1: High Fantasy and Worldbuilding: 900 Words
Brainstorm- Underwater world, hidden in the deep sea
- Platform/island suspended by plants and rocks
- Food resources are mostly underwater plants and medicines—eating seafood is highly frowned upon
- Obviously residents have the ability to breathe underwater and are natural swimmers
- Doctors have been trying to create medicines to help residents swim and breathe better, but some of them have wreaked havoc and caused unexpected effects
- Too much building has occurred for the city to float at its normal point, but Builders are working on suspending it
- The civilization relies on angelica /j the plants and rocks found underwater, which most buildings are comprised of
- Representatives from each category—Youths (8-20), Youngers (21-45), Elders (46-66), Seniors (67-87)—are chosen to lead and speak out
- Each category has its own color
- Some young people have rebelled due to pressure and a feeling of being lesser, even though this wasn’t the intention
- Mostly positive external view of the government
- Most competition for seats among Elders—viewed as powerful (Elders/Seniors) and revolutionary (Youths/Youngers)
- Conversation through speech and sign language, which are closely linked
- Random conversation minimized
- Unique plant ecosystem
- Doctors are experimenting with communicating with other species
- Plants and rocks are used for pretty much all architecture
- Struggle to create underwater technology thanks to water pressure
- Four main job types: Builders, Creators, Merchants, and Doctors
- Preservation of natural resources is key
- Creators and Doctors have teamed up to make magical substances to change the nature of water, but again, most of these unnatural things go wrong
- Kelp is a national symbol/an icon of hope and flexibility
- Uncertain past
- “Going with the flow”—literally
Description (319)No one is sure exactly where Kaliroya came from, whether it was always hidden under the watery shrouds of the Galaxa Sea or if it used to thrive along the shores. These concerns usually dissipate into the comfortably shallow sea. The “Kelp City”—kelp being its symbol of prosperity and flexibility—is loosely suspended to the sea floor by anchors of plants and rocks, its primary resources and building materials. Homes are constructed of these materials, although water flows freely within. Plants are also Kaliroya’s main food source. Eating seafood is highly frowned upon in Kaliroya, since most of the ecosystem’s animals abide peacefully with the residents.
Simplicity is encouraged and instituted throughout daily life in Kaliroya. The five main job types are Builders, Creators, Merchants, Doctors, and Officials—the fifth being a group of only eight, two chosen from each of Kaliroya’s age groups: Youths, Youngers, Elders, and Seniors. The purpose of these various age groups is to give all citizens a say—but some Youths and Youngers have rebelled due to feeling lesser or under pressure from the competitive race to be chosen by the former leaders.
Residents of the Kelp City, like the flowing seaweed that symbolizes their town, are expected and encouraged to be resourceful and flexible. However, some unrest flows throughout the town’s waters as well. Of course its residents can breathe and swim naturally, but rebellious Doctors have tried to create some potions to assist these abilities—which often fail, causing unanticipated side effects and harming Kaliroya’s waters. Creators and Doctors have invented strange devices meant to control the flow of water, which have mangled some of the famous plants that uphold Kaliroya’s ecosystem. And the lack of explanation about Kaliroya’s past brings a certain suspicion to the flowing waters, no matter how many times it is smoothed. Overall, Kaliroya is a city of contentment, with some unsolved problems lingering in the sea.
Narrative (581)“A few more days,” a voice hissed through the pleasant water, where I had been trying to shut out the thoughts of the Appointment with the blue, green, and occasionally purple swirls of the Galaxa Sea. Blush pink flashes of coral bloomed all around me, even sprouting below my fingers, a beautiful phenomenon that I could no longer pay attention to.
Kaliroya was home. Kaliroya was beautiful, and I wanted to do something wonderful to service the underwater city that had given me my life. But as a Youth? I wanted to keep frolicking and swimming in the coral meadows and tracing my fingers over rare stones and drifting up until I was told “no, Charilya, you’re going to the shallow part!” I wanted to draw swirls in the water with my thin, youthful fingers. But slowly I had noticed my hands becoming more like those of a Younger, not a Youth, and I wanted to stay a Youth.
Of course I had to be the granddaughter of one of Kaliroya’s most venerable Seniors and Officials, Julymsa. And now that I was fourteen, she seemed to think I had burst through some brand-new threshold.
I didn’t want to be an Official—yet. And I had insisted that.
“Charilya, are you listening to me?”
“I have to go,” I hissed back. And without another word, I pushed off the coral reef where I had been sitting into the expanse of water, and let the salty scent envelope me and take me away to—somewhere.
The beautiful kelp beds below looked inviting, flowing and fluctuating, so I dove down, out of Julymsa’s sight for the moment. I caressed the water, and my toes brushed the soft beds, vibrant green and red and calm, kind hues of brown. My fingers reached one of the stupid “water-space gadgets” that had been planted onto a piece of broken kelp. Without really thinking, I grabbed it from the mangled plant, and threw it far away, where it skipped through the sand and sank into the dust.
A smile spread across my lips.
This—this was how I could make Kaliroya a better place.
I passed a neighborhood of Merchants. One handed me a free seashell, and I smiled back at them without a word, which was normal. It was smooth, pearly white, the kind I had always loved. I wasn’t sure what to do with it, so I hung onto it, not letting the ripples of the sea whisk the gift away.
A familiar dome of coral and sea stones towered in the distance. The Gemiya, where the Officials conducted their business, changed the world; where the Appointment would be happening in four days. I looked at the glowing yellow and green gems of the dome, and then I turned away, and swam out of its fierce glow.
“If they’re so intent on having us go with the flow and live our simple lives,” I muttered, watching the bubbles swim and burst ahead of me, “they might as well let us do so even when we’re young.”
The words drifted up into the water, and swirled to meet the faraway land where great stars sent light to the Galaxa Sea and it accepted it gratefully. And passed it to its hidden gem, its proudest work, Kaliroya, which one day I would be a great Official for, and would hold up the weight of the world.
But that day would not come four days from now.
Part 2: Magical Realism Questionnaire: 984 Words
What kind of magic is used in your world? (89)The magicians scattered throughout the world have a rather quirky, yet dangerous ability—the ability to reshape, twist, and distort objects. The magic is activated by pressing down on the object with both thumbs and closing one’s eyes. The magic takes on varying degrees of power, depending on the amount the magician possesses—some magicians can make dents or twist a small trinket, while others can reshape buildings. The latter degree of magic is especially dangerous—not that it doesn’t provide an eccentric charm to the objects it reaches.
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments? (110)Before receiving access to the potion that gives the magic, aspiring magicians must be approved by their local governments, doctors, and chemists. The laws restrict using magic upon other people’s property without request or approval by the owner—and even then, magicians must be approved by their local governments if they plan to work with others’ houses, vehicles, or other notable objects. Most leaders permit experienced magicians to do so, as long as they have not used it for bad purposes. Punishments have been debated widely—in the past, arm cuffs were used to prevent magicians from working, but new medicines are in the mix to lessen or stop abilities.
What is the origin of your magic? (92)Magic originally came from medicines and potions created by mischievous and eccentric chemists—who never knew how influential their little projects could become. These chemists eventually combined their ideas into one, and those who used the final potion became magicians. Some of them reacted differently to the potion, which is how the differences in the degree of ability came to be. At first, it was seen as strange and potentially dangerous, but with increasing popularity, it became more accepted in society, and now graces at least thirty-five percent of its population.
How can your world’s magic aid character development? (80)Characters who have strong magic often find it out through accidents and mishaps, making them insecure about something that actually gives them great power in their world. These magicians, who can reshape buildings and even natural features sometimes, are few and far between, and have to either connect with each other—building their own community—or learn to accept themselves alone—drawing confidence from inside of themselves and developing a new strength: not caring about the misconceptions thrown their way.
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it? (93)As said earlier, about thirty-five percent of the population is made up of magicians. Most non-magicians trust them, but would prefer to continue living normal lives that they’re used to without magic. All characters who possess magic are aware that it is part of them, but not all of them are aware of the strength of their magic. Some children who take the potion at a young age and grow up around other magicians can be unaware that their power is actually “magic”—thinking it’s just a typical facet of life.
How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world? (103)The magic used in the story has its roots in the works of doctors and chemists, who never intended to completely change their world—just wanted to try something out. These tests were gradually combined to become what they are today. Now, they don’t become part of huge, world-changing things. Typically, they just add a bit of quirk to an otherwise normal world. Society was initially opposed to the magic, but like all changes in the rhythm of day-to-day life, it took time, and finally has become a relatively normal thing, although most people still do not use the magic.
What are the limitations of your world’s magic? (83)Every magician has a limit, a point at which their magic just won’t work anymore. At the beginning of its presence, magic is usually weaker, and can only be used to reshape small things. Some remarkable magicians eventually grow to change the features of their world—but using too much of it as once can weaken the magic, even disabling it for some time. Magic cannot be permanently depleted (yet), but it can be permanently weakened if a magician pushes themself too hard.
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)? (124)Magic is mainly viewed as a new inventioned, a fun and eccentric element of the world—although magicians sometimes get sick of being viewed in this unique way. It is slowly becoming normal, although it continues to bring that element to its world. Some magicians encourage non-magicians to use the potion, but most of society still stays away from using the magic. Its existence is normalized, but that doesn’t mean everyone wants to use it. Realistically, people get used to their ways, and fear change—and most are just satisfied not being magicians. Usually, specific communities and families lean more towards it or against it. Children who are raised in families with magic are more likely to use it than children who aren’t.
What happens when magic gets out of control in your world? (96)When magic gets out of control, it can cause anything from disruptions to disasters. You can probably imagine a house with twisted walls and distorted furnishings—strong magicians, children especially, can create these crazy mishaps. Sometimes, magic can even be used to change the face of the Earth, although this is very rare—and again, usually accidental. Picture the ground rippling or trees changing shape where other people stand—obviously, this could result in a whole lot of chaos. And, of course, one person’s overuse of magic can exhaust them and cause their magic to dwindle.
What are some noteworthy examples of problems (in your world) that characters solved with magic? (114)On drawing applications, artists can fix the flaws in their works with tools that distort and liquify the features of a drawing—now imagine this in the real world. Mistakes made in creations from trinkets to houses can be repaired with the right amount of magic. One helpful thing about the magic is that, for smaller things, it is easy to go back and tweak—making it a useful tool for construction workers, engineers, and more. Although it can wreak havoc when misused, the magic can fix things that could otherwise wreak their own havoc—like stones on paths sticking up that could trip people or tree branches on the verge of crashing down.Fantasy Genres: 1567 Words
Part 3: Fantasy Subgenres: 1567 Words
Dystopian Fantasy (560)Jane nestled herself in the corner of her room, trying to block out the shouts from below. The fights between the magicians and the civilians were honestly getting quite annoying, along with the ring in her ear that always arrived when she was feeling ill. When she read, whenever she tried to sleep—she could hear more shouts, and the awful pings radiated through her.
It’s an all-out civil war at this point, she thought bitterly. And the government’s egging it on. If they’re going to keep at it, they might as well do something interesting this time around.
At a young age, Jane had been told to be careful what she wished for. It became, to her, a simple cliché.
This time it wasn’t.
The voices seemed to calm down and she peered out her window, staring at the street bathed in evening light. Clearly, some magic had been worked on the street signs that twisted towards the ground. She smiled, thinking of the quirks of the rebel magicians.
Jane strolled in the direction of the little green house on the corner, with lush plants swirling up to its walls. She’d long suspected that her best friend Mei had some untold secret about magic—everyone was cautious around the mint green walls of Mei’s home. The house had been white when Jane and Mei first met at the age of six, and had been “repainted” in shades of pink, blue, and now green. Not that it made any difference to Jane—she and her best friend were one in the same.
She knocked on Mei’s door, her fingers tingling a little bit like they strangely had recently. Mei opened it, with her usual cheery smile—but her rosy tan skin soon turned paler than the overcast sky. She grasped Jane’s hand, which hurt a little bit.
“Wh—what are you doing?” Jane spluttered.
“Come inside.” Mei’s voice dropped to a whisper. “You have to hide, for now.”
Jane stumbled inside reluctantly, ready to collapse on the floor. Mei steadied her friend, linking her arm through Jane’s and turning her so she could look her in the eye. “Okay, Jane, I need you to stay with me.”
“What’s going on?”
Mei reached for her other hand, shuddering. “Look at the ground where you stood.”
Jane peered anxiously out the window. “I see plants.”
“Those weren’t there before.”
“Oh.” Jane observed the plants—they were beautiful, with luscious smooth leaves and sprouting pink, purple, and white flowers everywhere.
“O—oh.”
She turned to her friend. “Listen, I don’t care if you’re a magician. I might be a civilian but I don’t think you’re any less civil, and I’ve been suspecting it for years, and I’m not about to start a battle with you. I’m not falling for the government’s little tricks—“
“No, Jane, that’s not it,” Mei interrupted. “I mean, you got part of that right. I—“ she turned to look at the house, then hissed back, “I am a magician. But I’m not worried about your judgment. Because—“ her voice shook— “I know you wouldn’t judge me.”
“Because I’m your best friend.” Although another possibility was slinking into Jane’s mind, one that would turn her world upside down.
And Mei pulled it out a second later, sending waves of shock through her friend. “And because you’re one of us.”
Hidden Worlds (524)I always knew that ridiculous idea would prove wrong. I always knew someone unaware would stumble inside the Old Abandoned Warehouse, and be transported through the Vortex into Althadah.
All the people who told me to keep watch over the Vortex dismissed my concerns. The Old Abandoned Warehouse wasn’t well-maintained. The Vortex was so fast that nobody could even think to turn back after entering. And Althadah—
Althadah was bubbling with magical potions, shimmering with forgotten gemstones, and crowded by alchemists and illusionists who could probably turn the whole world upside down with a snap.
The boy stumbled into the Old Abandoned Warehouse late one night when I was about to slip down, and saw me. He saw the strange contraption in my hand—an Emergency Button for the Vortex—and the red curls sprouting over my head that looked a little too red not to be enchanted. And his first question, because he was a relatively polite teenage boy compared to others I’d seen roaming the streets, was, “Who are you?”
“My name’s—“ Really, it was Roselja, but that was the name of a rare rosy-pink gem in Althadah, and I’d created an alias for myself. “I’m Rosie.”
“Rosie?” He paused for a moment, a crinkle of suspicion forming along his brow. “Cool. I’m Emery.” He walked towards the little opening hole. “I’ve heard talk of this thing and I’ve always wondered what’s up with it. Do you know?”
“Um—“ I raced past him and shoved him away from the hole. “It’s really deep. I wouldn’t recommend going in there, whatever… it is… I don’t know.” It wasn’t a convincing argument, but you see, I didn’t have much time.
“I think I hear voices in there. Or screaming.” Flares of alarm shined in Emery’s grey eyes. “Should we—“ “No! It’s—it’s just a whir—“
I had said too much.
But he didn’t listen to me. It was that same politeness that sucked him into a hole—literally.
He rushed to the opening of the tunnel, glanced down, stuck his hand in, and—
Emery disappeared into the Vortex, a panicked shout echoing through the tunnel.
“I knew it,” I growled. “I just knew it.”
I slipped both my legs into the Vortex, and my jeans (a typical disguise) turned to an ocean-blue blur, slowly plunging into the black depths.
“EMERY! CAN YOU HEAR ME?”
“WHAT IS THIS PLACE?”
“SOMEWHERE I SAID YOU SHOULDN’T GO!”
The Vortex whirred our voices out, until I heard a clatter at the end of the tunnel, and then was propelled out myself. Emery was a few feet ahead of me, gasping for air, limbs sprawled all across the shining, stony ground.
The glaring red and blue gems stung my eyes—not the best sight after that all-consuming darkness.
“Wh—where am I?” Emery’s terrified eyes met mine.
I inhaled a shaky breath and turned to look at the glimmering salmon-pink peaks (roselja) of the faraway buildings, where blue winds of enchantment swirled through the streets and some strange purple fluid roamed the main street, the latest mishap of a quirky alchemist.
“…Welcome to Althadah?”
Steampunk (483)I crept onto the train late at night. The gear that let me in wasn’t a trustworthy one, squeaking and creaking with every spin. Although that was quite intentional when I stuck it onto the door of the train that would let me in.
A horn blared from the front of the train. For a short and unsettling moment, I feared that I had been found out. But indeed, I stayed put, and no stealthy opponents appeared—only Theo, perched casually on an old wooden bench, twisting a gear mindlessly.
“Careful! We have no idea what that does!” I hissed, pushing my hand over the gear.
She gazed back at me, bewildered. “Isn’t the whole point of this to cause mischief?”
“Well, not really. We’re trying to reclaim something—or someone, I guess. Come on.”
Theo sighed and agreed, and together, we slunk forward. Tucked into my handbag was the little gear-powered device that would change the game. I’d twist the tiny gear, which would probably make a horrific brassy sound but would do for the time being. Then we’d flood the car with steam, shocking the engineer, who would probably stop the train before comedically crashing to the side, which Theo and I would restrain our laughter over and probably recount for years to come, and we’d find Cleo, who would likely be in that very car enveloped by the steam—because somehow Cleo was always subjected to suffer by our plans. That was why she was still in that rickety train with the engineer and a few unsuspecting civilians who were about to witness a great escape.
In the midst of my daydream, we reached the front car, and Theo twisted the gear reaching into it carefully, grinning as the door slipped open. She dusted off the rusty surface and turned to me, gesturing towards the space.
I turned the tiniest gear ever, lips sealed tight, and got ready to unleash the steam.
But a clash and a shout from the front interrupted me, and my head snapped up, burning panic seeping into my eyes.
“What are you doing on my train?” snapped the engineer at the front, and I noticed that the stereotypical who are you hadn’t preceded it.
The voice was a bit deep, but Theo made the connection before I did, a terrified shriek sinking into her shocked gasp.
The engineer turned around with a scowl, that turned into a smirk when she saw me. She dressed in an unfamiliar grey suit, a shiny black hat shrouding her familiar orange curls, but the glint in her leafy green eyes was just as familiar as always. I was knocked back a step, dropping the gadget.
Steam clouded the car. The few passengers inside choked and gasped for air, shouting angrily. But the word I spoke was sharper than anyone’s elses, tinged with the awful taste of betrayal.
“Cleo?”
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July 2022 SWC Writing Megathread
part one (268 words in ideas + 251 words in setting + 415 words in narrative = total 934 words)
part two (865 words)
part three (302 words + 325 words + 309 words = total 936 words)
total: 934 + 865 + 936 = 2735 words!!
— sunlight is essential to survival
— no vegetation, etc, however other animals exist
— ruled in egalitarian fashion with people’s councils
— strong aversion to large factions
— everyone has equal levels of magic, but are divided into 5 large groups (healer, builder, weathermage, summoner, listener — each with distinct culture)
— large emphasis to benefit for all equally (no sort of “greater good” mindset without sacrifice in the other direction)
— blood family not that important compared to bonds formed by individuals
— community members work for the community till the day they die
— after severe biases in the past, community now works to communicate with each other better
— gratitude towards sunlight: not quite an understanding of how it works, but acknowledged that it performs some sort of life-giving role — closest thing to a god
— once sunset happens, everyone lost in a coma until the morning
— respectful honesty prioritized over kind lies
— once aggressed upon by peoples from the north, built large mounds in order to keep them out
— perfect climate year-round
— dress in gender neutral, light-weight clothing made from translucent fabrics, with comfort first and aesthetics second
— “childhood” ends early: after 6 or so years, whenever the parents feel is suitable, they give their child to age-based schools for their chosen magic specialty
— much of their conception of beauty comes from wide-open, blue skies
— once in a while, have a few days of low or no energy (falling into coma state) due to unknown reasons (which is actually just eclipses)
— when resting, tend to simply lay on the ground and absorb energy
— elders do not hold any special power by virtue of their age
Landlocked, surrounded by man-made mounds to the north and natural mountains to every other direction, the Synodun people live in a detached utopia. In their area there is no flora; instead, these people live strictly on the sun’s energy, which they require to use their magic.
This magic is broadly divided into 5 main categories, although of course there are smaller subcategories within each — the caretakers, the builders (who were the ones who created the mounds), the weathermages (who control the temperature and work towards clear blue skies), the summoners, and the speakers. In the beforetimes there was bigotry and polarization between these different groups, but after they learned to communicate, there is now a general distrust of large groups or factions. People chose what specialty they would like to practice at a very young age, often 6 or 7 years after birth, when they are given up by their parents to separate schools. The first day, they are presented with a series of five items that are imbued with different types of magic: the one they choose determines the category they will work in.
This disregard for blood family is due to the fact that individually-formed ties (such as friendships and mentorships) are considered more personal and chosen, as opposed to being forced into a relationship with someone you never chose. Despite this, most people respect their biological parents in the same way that all people respect the sun — understanding that they are the reason that they can be alive.
I scarcely remember the time I became a healer — I suppose it would be around ten years ago, almost exactly, but after all our memories are not quite developed at that time. I know how the ceremony works for all of us: how we reach for whatever talisman synchronizes with us. I just don’t remember it happening to me personally.
I have little memory of my own biological parents, either; I have a vague memory of a weather-wizard for a mother, but that could just be a construction. All I know is that I’ve grown up in this Healing School, with my sisters and brothers. We’ve watched each other gradually develop our magical talents, our barely-there quirks and proclivities. We’ve watched each other grow and grow and grow, buoyed by the life-giving force of the sun. We’ve gone from eagerly watching grown mages in their flowing gowns to becoming those mages, healing the cracked skin and sudden weakness that came, sometimes, to people who absorbed too much.
Although we must live with people of our own specialty, we often meet with the other skills — sometimes adults, sometimes people the same age as us. We talk and reminisce and joke. I look forward to it: it’s refreshing (and as much as I love my classmates, they can get quite annoying sometimes!) It is nice to know that after our training ends (only a few years left) I’ll be out and about among such thoughtful, practical people.
Recently, we went to a people’s council with students from all the other schools. We were allowed to mix and mingle — the different schools don’t have different dress rules, in order to prevent factionalism. It was an illuminating experience. It’s reassuring to know that there are no changes made covertly or behind our backs — all of it is carefully and meticulously tweaked and edited here, with the voice of all of us audible and heard.
After a full day of light and learning, night comes. None of us really know what happens during the night; for when the sun falls we cannot move, or even think. We cannot move to defend ourselves from whatever there may be, but none of us have been lost to the dark yet. But there is so much we don’t know. We don’t know how long we’re gone, for example — it could be an hour or a millenea. There is a certain kind of fear in that unknowing, but there is a comfort as well.
part two (865 words)
What kind of magic is used in your world?
The kind of magic that is used in my world is called domestic magic, often abbreviated to DM or domaj. This is used mainly to make mundane chores easier — for example, washing the dishes, doing the laundry, and organizing a bookshelf. This works in a fashion where simply by saying a quick charm with prepared ingredients (usually normal cleaning supplies, but there are some exceptions, such as for organizing tasks) for each task (provided it is not too difficult), it will finish around a half hour later.
How is the magic in the world used in the character’s everyday lives? What are the different abilities?
In everyday life, this magic is often used for housekeeping and maintenance. Most of the abilities fall under the categories of cleaning and organization. There are few applications outside the home, although some people use these abilities to work in jobs which are helped by this, such as being a librarian or a logistics manager for a hotel. Many find that the convenience of this magic outweighes the bother of trying to learn it, especially those who spend most of their time at home, as it opens up time for other activities.
How common is magic, and are all characters aware they possess it?
Magic can be learned by anyone, regardless of bloodline or talent. Often, it is taught by parents to their children, but it is also passed around among friends, and can even be self-learned using literary materials. Despite this, it is too bothersome for some people, as it takes around two months to learn and practice in order to work correctly. In addition, some do not see the benefit of learning this magic if they already live with someone who knows how. The percentage of people who can use this magic is around 30 percent of the total population.
Are there any sensations the characters feel when they are using magic? Describe these sensations using their five senses.
Characters feel a sensation of satisfaction, like the warmth after eating a light meal. Their body feels warm, the tension in their body relaxes slightly, and their eyes clear. In addition, their hands get cleaner with a sort of light scrubbing sensation. Some report smelling a faint mint smell, while others report smelling lemon or no scent at all. Many hear a soft tinkling sound as from a far-away windchime. There are no reports of visions or sights, as well as tastes.
How can you ensure the magic in your story is realistic, and is written as a normalized part of your world?
As the magic is quite mundane (as it is just an easier way to do something that almost everyone has to do), I don’t think it’ll stand out very much. However, I can normalize it by having characters mention it casually, such as by saying “Yeah, I’ll go there right after I charm my dishes.” These phrases could also be used interchangeably with phrases we already use, such as “do the laundry” or “fold clothes”, with no distinction being placed on the method.
What is the origin of your magic?
This magic was originally published by a grandmother, who discovered it after decades of cleaning her house. After trying many different methods, trying to find which was the most efficient and effective, she wrote a short article about her newfound discovery of domestic magic. It was ignored at first, until it eventually spread through word of mouth. Many were skeptical at first but were either convinced after seeing it in a friend’s house or trying it out themselves and seeing the results.
Describe the popular infrastructure in your world.
A relatively popular service — especially among busy, well-off young people — is to hire professional domestic magic users to clean their living places. As this is often faster and less invasive than traditional cleaning, as it does not require the cleaner to go into all the places which need to be cleaned, it is preferred by those people. (It is also cheaper, which is also a benefit to these young professionals.) This service can also be found among hotels, who hire their own legions of cleaners, and wealthier families with palatial homes.
What are the laws of your world, specifically about magic? Punishments?
There are no laws, specifically, about domestic magic, but the governments of the world tend to provide guidelines for their own countries. These guidelines often include reminders, such as to be careful to clean what belongs to you, instead of someone else’s; to use the proper amount of supplies, as if not, the clean can become contaminated or not be completed properly; and to make sure that one is giving the right directions when teaching someone else how to do it.
What are the limitations of your world’s magic?
In addition to being quite limited in scope (only usable in domestic settings), it also has strict resource needs and casting limitations. Although the caster may be decently removed from whatever they are trying to do, they must still be within a 100 feet of it. This is fine for a normal-sized living space, but for exceptionally large tasks or tasks that can only be attempted from afar, can be crippling. Reports have been made about some people being able to cast from further away, but they are uncomfirmed.
How is magic viewed in your world (ie. as a boring normal, as a fascinating element of their life, or as a curse on society etc.)?
It is quite normalized. It has been associated with the same things as normal housekeeping — i.e. that it is boring, that it is useless, that it is unimportant, etc. It is also seen as rather old-fashioned to it oneself, due to its association with ancient grandmothers and prim older cousins with pristine rooms. Despite not being seen as cool, however, many young people secretly practice it themselves, as its practicality (especially for busy young people) can not be overstated.
part three (302 words + 325 words + 309 words = total 936 words)
Urban Fantasy
Sheila winked at the bouncer, as he wordlessly let her into the exclusive Cat Club. She came here often, and all the bouncers knew better than to keep her type out. She smiled a mirthless, dangerous smile: not one of kindness or happiness, but a threat. Here in the depths of Hollywood, the city of glamour and celebrity, was were she liked to prey.
Even compared to all the… creatively-dressed stunning young men and women in the club, she was especially head-turning in her flowing black-and-red dress and lightly tapping stilettos. Eyes involuntarily followed her as she stalked across the room, in search of her victim tonight. She was magnetic.
Sheila had little preference as to who she would take home and feast on tonight, at least in regards to gender or appearence. Really, all she needed was someone who looked young and vibrant and lively. Yes, she thought, youth was all that matteredAfter taking a seat at the bar and flippantly ordering something strong, she prowled the room with her eyes… She recognized a few who were like her, trying to find someone to devour, chatting up girls using their sultry eyes or guys using their devilish grins. Some of them she knew, others she had heard of. She continued scouring the room, spreading her smoldering gaze, until she found what she was looking for. Perfect.
Leaving some random collection of payment (way too much, Sheila knew) on the counter, with her drink undelivered, she strolled to the other side of the room. There, a flushed young women stood alone, rather lost-seeming — perhaps a “friend” had dragged her here only to abandon her, Sheila thought. All the better for Sheila, though, to swoop in and make both their nights much more interesting.
“Hey, darling,” she crooned. “Wanna go somewhere more private?
Steampunk Fantasy
Ani ponked the steel with her hammer. “Curse you! Curse you! C’mon, work!”
She had been working on this project — a hot air balloon, one with which to travel the world — for around a half year now. She had been waiting for this specific day for ages. She had so many ideas on where to go — first, Saints Petersburg, and then Neo Amsterdam, and then Berli — only to be blocked but this stupid stuttering engine! Was all her effort (from scrounging up the parts, to sewing the entire balloon by hand, to cobbling together some sort of safe basket) gone to waste?
Just when her hope seemed to be lost, a hit from her hammer seemed to knock something into place internally, and the engine sputtered on with a huge exhale of black, belching smoke. Ani wheezed. Yes, while she was making it, she knew that her boiler was not the most efficient or clean, but she hadn’t expected it to be this bad. Oh well, at least it was on.
All of her belongings had already been packed into the basket, along with a map and a compass, so all that was left was for Ani to get in herself. After jumping over the edge and dumping a bit of the ballast (old parts) out, she turned up the strength on the burner.
After a few tantalizing seconds, she felt the balloon rise up into the air. She was ecstatic. Until this point, she hadn’t quite believed it would actually have worked. Slowly, Ani rose higher and higher. The air was colder up here, and somewhat thinner, so she was glad she had brought a nice quilt.
Once she got to what she felt like was a nice height, she decided to cut the engine, and floated among the clouds. She had never felt so bright than she did now, looking down at the rolling hills and pastoral towns. To Saints Petersburg she go!
Science Fantasy
“Now, now, students, what do we know about the Benedictans?”
A kid raised his hand. “They’re evil?”
The teacher laughed. “Well, that’s true, but I’m asking about what sort of technology they have, what sort of techniques they use, how they fight… that sort of stuff. Yes, Baln?”
Baln, the smartypants of the class, took a deep breath and started to speak. “Well, we’re not exactly sure how they do it, but they seem to have some sort of plasma that they can shoot from their hands. Their bodies don’t seem to suffer any consequences for doing this, nor do any of their technology, but it is incredibly devastating to us, because it tends to light everything on fire. Not only that, their generals are capable of someone making those blasts from lower-ranking soldiers stronger, as if some sort of amplification power.”
The teacher stopped him there. “Very good, Baln. Now, how can we use our technology to help stop them? Yes, Juli?”
“Well… Um, I know that our ships are faster, and our movements tend to be more dextrous… so those could be advantages, especially since our weapons are designed to maximize those advantages.”
“Very good!!” Baln sulked. He hadn’t gotten exclamation marks. “Well, kids, I know you’re still very young, but you should know that the future rests with you. We don’t really understand how those weird Benny bodies work, but we’ll figure it out, and then it’ll be up to you guys to work it out. What we know now is that they have some sort of magical — yes, I said magical, I know we say magic doesn’t exist, but it does — energy that they can use. Now, obviously, since we don’t have magic ourselves, we can’t counter that directly. But even now, our scientists are experimenting with special shields that are based on their magic. Now, don’t tell your sisters that, okay? It’s top secret.”
total: 934 + 865 + 936 = 2735 words!!



Fantasy writing is one of my favorite genres to read, but it can sometimes be a struggle to write in. However, the workshops were very helpful, and I learned a lot about how to worldbuild for fantasy worlds! This particular piece comes from an idea for a world that I’ve had for a while, but I mixed up the magical powers a bit, inspired by my writing competition entry’s world. It was really fun brainstorming how the magic and society of this world works, and I feel that the guiding questions in the workshop really helped make the world more structured and realistic.
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