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Scratcher
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
“Huh..?”
“What?”
“Why are you wear- you know what, never mind. I don’t want to know.”
“What, are you jealous of this?”
“No! It’s just a little bit, well, over the top. ”
“Over the top?! I spent hours on this.”
“I can see that. She’s not going to like it, just so you know.”
“I know, that’s the whole point.”
“Wait a minute, back up! You did all of this just to annoy her?”
“Pretty much, she’s funny when she’s angry.”
“What are you thinking?! You know better than to annoy her, especially with her dad around.”
“I’m not scared of him!”
“He got seven kids suspended last year.”
“Well maybe a little…”
“He also got four teachers fired!”
“Ok…but that won’t stop me from making this the funniest day ever! I gonna run over to her ri-”
“Your shoe is untied.”
“Oh. Thank you.”
“Anytime.”
“There we go….right now!”
“Wait! Did you ever think about painting the back of your costume?”
“Oh great heavens, don’t tell me.”
“It’s uh-”
“Don’t say it!”
“A little-
“I said stop it!”
“Plain. You might want to fix that later unless you wanna become a laughingstock of the class.”
“Knock it off with the jokes! I knew I forgot something…”
“What?”
“Why are you wear- you know what, never mind. I don’t want to know.”
“What, are you jealous of this?”
“No! It’s just a little bit, well, over the top. ”
“Over the top?! I spent hours on this.”
“I can see that. She’s not going to like it, just so you know.”
“I know, that’s the whole point.”
“Wait a minute, back up! You did all of this just to annoy her?”
“Pretty much, she’s funny when she’s angry.”
“What are you thinking?! You know better than to annoy her, especially with her dad around.”
“I’m not scared of him!”
“He got seven kids suspended last year.”
“Well maybe a little…”
“He also got four teachers fired!”
“Ok…but that won’t stop me from making this the funniest day ever! I gonna run over to her ri-”
“Your shoe is untied.”
“Oh. Thank you.”
“Anytime.”
“There we go….right now!”
“Wait! Did you ever think about painting the back of your costume?”
“Oh great heavens, don’t tell me.”
“It’s uh-”
“Don’t say it!”
“A little-
“I said stop it!”
“Plain. You might want to fix that later unless you wanna become a laughingstock of the class.”
“Knock it off with the jokes! I knew I forgot something…”
- MokshithaVedarsh
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Scratcher
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
My entry for writing comp.
word count: 1032 words.
Category: Juniors.
The Two Young detectives.
Once upon a time there lived two sisters named Siri and Devi. Siri was 2 years older than Devi. Both Siri and Devi loved and were good at solving mysteries. They often used to help others in their colony to find their lost things, if any.
One fine day, They were playing in the park joyfully but they spotted a Thin, pale, weak old woman sad and was looking very tense. They went to her and asked why she was sad and she said, “ I have worked very hard for a month to earn money, today my master gave me money and I lost it. What will my son and I eat for a whole month?” Siri and Devi listened very carefully and decided to help that old woman.
They said together, “ Hello, I am Siri and this is Devi, I think we can help you find your money but first you have to answer my question.” The old woman said, “ Sure dears, Please, you're welcome to ask any question regarding this.”
Siri and Devi started their investigation. Siri asked, " Where did you last keep it?” The old woman said, “ I kept it somewhere near the wall.” Devi asked, “ Grandma, can you remember where you kept it exactly?” Old woman replied, “ hmm. I can’t remember as I am too old so I don’t remember things much.” Devi said, “ it’s fine, we will just look for some clues near the wall.”
They started to look everywhere but nowhere to be found. Fortunately they found a small piece of cloth from the purse the old woman was carrying. They examined and found that it was a type of chemical. They didn't know what it was so they started to look everywhere they could for that.
They were tensed about where to find it as they promised the old lady to find it. Then his Mother came and saw them looking worried and exhausted from all the searching, so she said, “ Siri and Devi, what is making you so worried and tired?” Siri and Devi told the old lady how they promised to find but only got a clue of a chemical. Her mother asked, “ Can you show it to me? I can help you.” Siri and Devi showed the piece of cloth which holds the chemical.
Her mother took it to her lab to commence the tests to find which chemical it was. Her eyes were worried and shocked to know which chemical it was. She told her children, “ The chemical is nitric acid which is used to test gold and the old woman's coins were made with copper. Solve this mystery and be safe. I have to go now as I have an important project to complete.”
The girls were confused and Siri gave a grin and siad, “ It was gold, a special type I think and it was covered with copper to make its appearance like a normal copper coin. They went back to the old lady and said, “ ma’am, your chemical was stolen by someone. It was because your metal is a special type of gold metal which was covered with copper.” The old woman was shocked and pleaded with them to find it and siri and devi did just that, they went to find the fingerprint to their father who was a Police Commissioner.
His father found the fingerprint, it was a thief who was very sneaky and then Siri went to his place and in a minute she fought all the assistants of the sneaky thief and reached him. He was shocked and Devi investigated the stolen purse. The thief didn’t utter a single word but was forced by Siri so he told everything he knew.
It was so that there was a Leader named Kingman who wanted to rule the entire world and be the richest man in the entire world. He started to know about a metal which can produce endless gold but only when it is mixed with Sapphire with a particular amount.
The girls were astonished and threatened him to tell them their hideout and he told in a rusty voice, “ It is near the Suvarnagiri lake.”
They girls went there and sneaked into the hideout. With a blink of an eye, Siri and Devi fought all the people in the hideout and went to Kingman.
They said in a clear voice, “ Kingman, your game is over. Now give me back the coins. You're under arrest!” The Kingman gave a wicked laugh and said, “ My game is always on and see the melody of money. If we sell the gold I’ll get 100 million as it can produce that much worth gold in a single day. See 100,000,000(stretching his voice) I’ll give you 40% of the share. The girls said, “ We will never-never be a person like you. We like to help others and earn money through our own hard work just like our parents.
The Kingman furiously called many men to attack them. Siri and Devi were kids. How can they fight such a strong army of men? They collected all their courage and stood there ready to fight for justice.
Just then, In the smoke came an army of policemen and his father was leading them. A fierce battle took place and as history says, “ always good wins” Siri and Devi won and Kingman was locked in the Jail for 15 long years as he had many other crimes committed and he felt ashamed and guilty for himself.
The machine was destroyed and the old woman was given a lot of money and his son studied hard and became an officer and started to serve the country. The old woman was proud and thanked Siri and Devi
Siri and Devi were very happy to help the old lady and were given a medal of young detectives medal by the Mayor of their city for such bravery and intelligence. They cracked a problem which big officers were not able to do!
Moral: One should always be kind and helpful to others. One should never steal anything from others. One should always think wisely and solve a problem.
word count: 1032 words.
Category: Juniors.
The Two Young detectives.
Once upon a time there lived two sisters named Siri and Devi. Siri was 2 years older than Devi. Both Siri and Devi loved and were good at solving mysteries. They often used to help others in their colony to find their lost things, if any.
One fine day, They were playing in the park joyfully but they spotted a Thin, pale, weak old woman sad and was looking very tense. They went to her and asked why she was sad and she said, “ I have worked very hard for a month to earn money, today my master gave me money and I lost it. What will my son and I eat for a whole month?” Siri and Devi listened very carefully and decided to help that old woman.
They said together, “ Hello, I am Siri and this is Devi, I think we can help you find your money but first you have to answer my question.” The old woman said, “ Sure dears, Please, you're welcome to ask any question regarding this.”
Siri and Devi started their investigation. Siri asked, " Where did you last keep it?” The old woman said, “ I kept it somewhere near the wall.” Devi asked, “ Grandma, can you remember where you kept it exactly?” Old woman replied, “ hmm. I can’t remember as I am too old so I don’t remember things much.” Devi said, “ it’s fine, we will just look for some clues near the wall.”
They started to look everywhere but nowhere to be found. Fortunately they found a small piece of cloth from the purse the old woman was carrying. They examined and found that it was a type of chemical. They didn't know what it was so they started to look everywhere they could for that.
They were tensed about where to find it as they promised the old lady to find it. Then his Mother came and saw them looking worried and exhausted from all the searching, so she said, “ Siri and Devi, what is making you so worried and tired?” Siri and Devi told the old lady how they promised to find but only got a clue of a chemical. Her mother asked, “ Can you show it to me? I can help you.” Siri and Devi showed the piece of cloth which holds the chemical.
Her mother took it to her lab to commence the tests to find which chemical it was. Her eyes were worried and shocked to know which chemical it was. She told her children, “ The chemical is nitric acid which is used to test gold and the old woman's coins were made with copper. Solve this mystery and be safe. I have to go now as I have an important project to complete.”
The girls were confused and Siri gave a grin and siad, “ It was gold, a special type I think and it was covered with copper to make its appearance like a normal copper coin. They went back to the old lady and said, “ ma’am, your chemical was stolen by someone. It was because your metal is a special type of gold metal which was covered with copper.” The old woman was shocked and pleaded with them to find it and siri and devi did just that, they went to find the fingerprint to their father who was a Police Commissioner.
His father found the fingerprint, it was a thief who was very sneaky and then Siri went to his place and in a minute she fought all the assistants of the sneaky thief and reached him. He was shocked and Devi investigated the stolen purse. The thief didn’t utter a single word but was forced by Siri so he told everything he knew.
It was so that there was a Leader named Kingman who wanted to rule the entire world and be the richest man in the entire world. He started to know about a metal which can produce endless gold but only when it is mixed with Sapphire with a particular amount.
The girls were astonished and threatened him to tell them their hideout and he told in a rusty voice, “ It is near the Suvarnagiri lake.”
They girls went there and sneaked into the hideout. With a blink of an eye, Siri and Devi fought all the people in the hideout and went to Kingman.
They said in a clear voice, “ Kingman, your game is over. Now give me back the coins. You're under arrest!” The Kingman gave a wicked laugh and said, “ My game is always on and see the melody of money. If we sell the gold I’ll get 100 million as it can produce that much worth gold in a single day. See 100,000,000(stretching his voice) I’ll give you 40% of the share. The girls said, “ We will never-never be a person like you. We like to help others and earn money through our own hard work just like our parents.
The Kingman furiously called many men to attack them. Siri and Devi were kids. How can they fight such a strong army of men? They collected all their courage and stood there ready to fight for justice.
Just then, In the smoke came an army of policemen and his father was leading them. A fierce battle took place and as history says, “ always good wins” Siri and Devi won and Kingman was locked in the Jail for 15 long years as he had many other crimes committed and he felt ashamed and guilty for himself.
The machine was destroyed and the old woman was given a lot of money and his son studied hard and became an officer and started to serve the country. The old woman was proud and thanked Siri and Devi
Siri and Devi were very happy to help the old lady and were given a medal of young detectives medal by the Mayor of their city for such bravery and intelligence. They cracked a problem which big officers were not able to do!
Moral: One should always be kind and helpful to others. One should never steal anything from others. One should always think wisely and solve a problem.
- Reva-Scifi_Lover
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Scratcher
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Word War (Lost)
“Wha- What!?” I stuttered, utterly shocked. Time travelers!? These guys must be playing some joke but then again… how did they create a huge machine. I stared at Mel and see in her eyes that she is completaly being honest. I rubbed m eyes and took a deep breath. I might be dreaming. This isn't possible…or is it?
“You must think we are lying,” Mel started, “ but we are not, we are here to help you, your generation…It is in a grave and fatal danger and we're here to save it.”
+91 words
“Wha- What!?” I stuttered, utterly shocked. Time travelers!? These guys must be playing some joke but then again… how did they create a huge machine. I stared at Mel and see in her eyes that she is completaly being honest. I rubbed m eyes and took a deep breath. I might be dreaming. This isn't possible…or is it?
“You must think we are lying,” Mel started, “ but we are not, we are here to help you, your generation…It is in a grave and fatal danger and we're here to save it.”
+91 words
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Scratcher
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
entry for the writing competition (i'm late plzplzplz give me an extension gahhhhh-)stuck
I'm Haley. Haley Evans. Even though I'm top of the class, I feel like a stranger to everyone. Invisible. Locked up in a prison cell with no bars, but the bars were myself. I stood up and headed to the washroom. Thankfully, no one was around. I heaved a soft sigh and quietly pulled down my black hoodie. Gleaming silver eyes stared back at me in the mirror, reflecting a tall, slender girl with silky brown hair. But there was more to the sad picture. My eyes have been trained, trained to see the darkness behind this beautiful, perfect girl. Imperfections. So many imperfections.
“You have no friends.”
“Nobody wants you.”
I could hear them, repeating to me over and over again, the same few phrases. The voices, running through my head like an endless train.
“Why do you study so hard?”
“What's wrong with you?”
No one could help me. Inside, I saw a trapped little girl. Hidden behind the seemingly flawless picture of Haley Evans. She was stuck. Stuck in this state of mind, an empty void, with no one to support me. I checked my watch. Lessons were starting in five minutes. I donned my hoodie and trudged back to class.
After school, I took my bag with me and walked to the canteen. I put down my bag at the canteen bench and stared into empty space. The obnoxious chatter of students was blocked out. I was used to it now.
“You’re helpless.”
“Give up, there’s no solution.”
The voices came again. There was no way I could stop them. I came to accept the fact that I couldn’t do anything about it.
“Hey, I’m Kaitlyn! Want to be friends?”
I turned around and saw a girl with blonde, wavy hair and deep, mysterious green eyes. “H-hello…”
I was in a dilemma. My mind was torn into two pieces.
“Don’t accept her help, no one can help you!”
“She can help you. Believe in her.”
“So?” Kaitlyn quipped. “Can we be friends?”
I hesitated.
“Okay.”
The voices screamed in agony. “NO!” They pounded my brain, begging me to rethink my choice. However, I had already chosen what I wanted. My life is controlled by me. I could do what I and I myself wanted.
Years later, and Kaitlyn and I were still friends. Kaitlyn had taught me how to appreciate life and to socialise more with others without having to trust them too much. She helped me cope with my trust issues and anxiety and soon, I became an activist for helping children and teenagers with mental illnesses like me. Throughout my life, Kaitlyn had supported me and I was so, so grateful for her.
We had been and will be best friends for as long as time exists.
And that means forever.
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word count: 467 (it's so short-)
Last edited by astro-liiqht (March 25, 2022 11:23:28)
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Scratcher
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
3/24, 310/300 words, I worked with Horror: Work with someone in any cabin that is an enemy of yours to write a story. If the genres allow for it, we'd encourage trying to mix each of your cabins' genres into one story, though this is not necessary. Each of you should write at least 300 words toward the story to earn 600 points to each cabin. (The recommended method to write such a story is taking turns to write a comment's worth of writing until you reach 300 words but if you have another method, that's fine too!) Also, cabin wars are tomorrow! Cabin wars are an activity in which people copy and paste “wars” into other cabins, challenging them to write a certain amount of words in a limited period of time, or lose points. The war list will be posted tomorrow and rules will be posted in the description in about a half hour.
(the bold text is my part)
A girl suddenly appears in a street that had been previously empty, the street lights flickering on and off.
There doesn't seem to be anybody living in the houses nearby, as they're all covered in darkness.
The girl lightly treads down the street, nearing a vacant home. Her footsteps echo around the town, showing how abandoned it really is. She steps on the porch and puts her hand on the doorknob, hesitating slightly before opening it.
As she ponders whether or not to enter, the porch lights suddenly flick on, and the door begins to creak open. Fully aware of the dangers that may be inside, the girl proceeded into the dark house.
She steps inside, the floorboards creaking underneath her weight. Nervous that it might break in half, she carefully turns around to face the door, trying to exit. But just as she reaches for the doorknob, it slams shut in her face, though she didn’t touch it. “J-just the wind…” she says, her teeth chattering frantically as her mind races, thinking up a million possibilities as she turns back around.
As she mentally scolded herself for being so inconsiderate for coming into this house, there was a sudden movement coming from somewhere behind her. The girl quickly noticed it, and spun around swiftly, making sure that nothing was there or ready to attack when she made her next move. Clarifying that everything seemed alright, she continued down the long winded hall. Eventually she reached a door that read, “Come in, if you dare”.
She did dare, so she took a deep breath and opened the door. The room was pitch black, with no windows— at least, none that she could see— or light switch. When she closed the door fully, she considered turning back, but found that the door had somehow locked from the outside, although she hadn’t seen or heard anyone else inside. She then took a shaky breath, trying to regain her courage as she slowly ventured inside.
The room seemed pretty “normal” for the haunted-like house. It was merely just a study room, with a big desk and a lamp. But obviously, there had to be something more, this couldn’t be it. The girl began to ponder what part she was missing out - what had she not considered yet. Of course, there were many possibilities of what caused these weird things to happen, but the girl decided not to contemplate anymore, and actually looked around for clues. Since she has been locked in, the only way out would probably be another exit - meaning that there should be a key around here somewhere. She scavenged around the various parts of the room, but couldn’t find anything.. That is until she opened one of the drawers in the desk.
Her grin wide with glee, she scooped out a delicate, small, golden key, barely visible in the dim light. She then looked around, rubbing her eyes to try to help them adjust to the dark as she searched for some sort of door or exit. When she finally spotted one beneath a desk, she took the key out and placed it there. When she twisted it, it revealed a small, hidden tunnel, just tall enough for her to fit through if she crawled on her knees. She took another deep breath and crossed her fingers for luck before she entered, painfully crawling across the floor.
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Scratcher
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Hello. It's Peach here with my fourth and final weekly.
You can find my other two weeklies here: Fanfiction Writing! I did not have time for the third weekly.
Part 1:
Biographies. Must be 300 words for each character.
Character 1~
Six of clubs. Colors: Dark red and red
Character 2~
2 of diamonds. Colors:Yellow and pink.
!I AM USING THE FIRST SET OF COLORS!
Phillin is incredibly introverted. Some would say a cat’s got his tongue or something along the lines of that. This main character is ten years old and has a twin brother. Phillin loves to go on little adventures with his brother, but doesn’t like when he stays in the woods overnight. He has glasses and really curly black hair that rests on the top of his head. He is very eager to try new things. Phillin loves sweets and anything sour. Also, he can’t stand being told what to do when he has already been told. Phillin is very kind, but he does not easily warm up to people, especially in a large group. He likes to wear baggy jeans and a shirt a size too big. He also loves to read any fantasy related book he can get his hands on. It’s his way to get into the world of imagination without him having to talk to anyone. He loves being able to escape into a world that he knows does not exist because when he is reading, it feels so real and relatable. Philin likes being alone most of the time, but the only other person he enjoys being around is his twin brother, Blin. One of Philin’s worst fears is being left alone in the dark. He could be left alone almost anywhere and would enjoy it, but the dark scares him out of any possible thing. Even though he knows nothing can get him in the dark, he still believes that the dark is something there to taunt him and to make fun of him. Philin has no friends, but he feels that his brother is the closest thing to a friend he could ever have. He lives with both of his parents, and knows he is very lucky to have them.
306 Words.
Blin is also an omnivert. He can act just like his brother, or he can make you mistake him for someone else. His personality is filled with chaos and actually, much like a chameleon, he can change his personality depending on his mood and internal behavior. Also like his brother, Blin enjoys sweets, but likes spicy more than sour. Blin loves being able to improve on things that he thinks is necessary. Like his brother, he is kind, but he is not hesitant when speaking his mind. Blin likes wearing jackets and hoodies no matter the weather because he isn’t bothered by the weather change. He loves nature and really wants to tame a wild animal even though he knows it’s almost impossible to achieve such a goal. To him, being able to tame an untameable creature makes him feel like he can accomplish anything because he has done something that not many people can ever do. He has a wide imagination and loves to think of any random thing he can possibly think of. One of Blin’s worst fears is being told that he can’t do anything right. Even though he knows he can’t do every little thing perfectly, he likes doing the best he can in the most possible things. Blin has one friend that he met at school, and he feels like he can discuss almost any of his problems with her because she understands home really well. Even though he has his parents and Philin to hang out with, he enjoys hanging out with his friends at sleepovers or anything like that because he enjoys being a part of things. He does enjoy being around his father because he gives out great advice whenever Blin asks him something and Blin is very thankful to have him.
300 Words.
Description of setting. Must be at least 150 words.
This story is going to be based on the season of Autumn, so it’s sometime in between August and November. The trees will all have a darkish-red brown color with bright elaborate red leaves blooming on the extending branches. There will be a scene with snow which rests on the very tips of the leaves themselves. Most of the story will be written in the daytime to show a light mood instead of a dark and gloomy mood. There might be a scene when the sky turns dark and a blizzard occurs, but it’s not written in stone yet. The cabins are made with the same darkish-red brown color of the trees and they all have a red brick roof. The houses also have a red brick trim touching the ground that extends only two feet above the ground. The air is very crisp and chill in the fall since winter is coming near in around a month or so.
160 Words.
Beginning of story with the above characters and setting. Must be at least 400 words.
Philin squinted his eyes to try to read the italicized words in his book.
“What are you reading?” Blin asked.
“I’m trying to read these words. They’re so tiny.”
“Let me see.” Blin took the book. “This could be the end.” He said as he read the italicized words.
“Oh. Thank you.”
“No problem. I think you need your eyesight checked again. If you can’t read that now with your glasses, then it might be time to get new ones. Also, I don’t know how you’re reading chapter books already. You’re in second grade! Did mom and dad give you superpowers?
“No. Instead of reading little kid books, you can start reading chapter books too, it might be good for you to start now.”
Blin looked at his brother. “Just because I’m the same age as you doesn’t mean I have to do every little thing exactly like you.”
Philin ignored Blin and continued to read his book. He took a glance every once in a while to see what his brother was doing since he had become quiet all of a sudden. “Are you feeling okay? You’re quiet now.”
“Huh? I just . . . Nothing.”
Philin closed his book and sat down on a bench next to him. The bench was cold and uncomfortable, but Philin knew something was up with Blin.
Blin sat down next to him with a sigh. “Do mom and dad think I’m weird?” He asked.
“Okay. That was kind of random but no. They don’t think you’re weird.”
“How do you know? It’s gotta be something about how I’m not on the same reading pace as everyone else? I mean everyone else is starting to read chapter books like you, and I’m still reading . . . baby books.”
“You know everyone has a different reading pace, and you’re just one of the people who . . . have fallen behind.”
“Fallen behind?! I’ve fallen behind?! I knew I should have made myself sick instead of going to that lazy summer camp! That’s when you knew how to read more complicated words, right? You weren’t forced to go, but I was and now look at me. I have fallen behind everyone else who didn’t go to that camp.”
“It’s not because of the camp.” Philin mumbled.
“What?” Blin asked.
“It’s not because of the camp.” Philin repeated. He saw Blin’s eyes widen, and he remained silent until Philin continued talking, even if he really despised talking.
404 Words.
Part 2:
Continue the story with the list of requirements
Include a very long to do list 211 Words
Make a character allergic to something strange 277 Words
Have a character spend a rainy day inside 124 Words
Your character reunites with a long lost friend 165 Words
Write your protagonist in their comfort place when they’re stressed 163 Words
Have a character go on a rant about the good old days 213 Words
Philin sighed. He pulled out an empty sheet of paper and found a pen. “We’ll write a to-do list.” He said. He wrote down the list which was written in small ink. Philin completed the page, then flipped to the other side or the sheet and filled that side as well.
Blin opened his mouth. “That’s a . . . long to-do list.”
“It’s not that long. Read it.”
“Mention to mom and dad about the camp. Then tell them that Blin is falling behind in reading, then treat them to some dessert to trick them, then convince them to teach Blin to read more advanced words . . .” Blin continued down the page until he had to flip it over. When he was finished reading, he was out of breath. “Do you really think it’ll work?” He asked.
“Of course. I wrote it down.”
Blin jumped off the bench with excitement. “Let’s do it!” Without looking back at Philin, Blin ran to their parent’s cabin. “Hey. Can I keep the list?” He asked Philin.
Philin handed Blin the list.
Blin smiled as he opened the door to the cabin.
Philin followed behind quietly, but surely. He went to the kitchen and sat on a stool as he waited for his mother to notice his appearance. He cleared his throat.
“Oh, Philin! How are you? How was school? Did you do anything fun?” Mother asked.
“It was okay.” He replied.
“Where’s Blin?”
Philin looked back at the door, then at the dining room table, then back at his mother and shrugged.
“Oh. He’s probably just in his room. He did come in after you, right?”
“Yes.”
“Oh, I’m glad. Oh, and your father should be here any second.”
Philin looked at the door once again as he heard it open.
“Hey Phil —Where’s Blin?” Father asked.
Why are they asking me that? He thought.
“Here I am!” Blin yelled as he ran out from his room. “I have some news, too.”
“That’s great, Blin, but I need to put my stuff down, then your mom and I can listen to your news. Have an orange while you wait.”
Blin grinned and grabbed an orange from the table. As he chewed the orange, his face began to grow dots all over it.
Philin watched his father set his bag on the ground next to the dining room table. “Um. Blin. Your . . . face . . .” Philin began.
“What?” Blin asked.
“Are you allergic to oranges?” Philin asked with a surprised expression.
“Huh. That’s cool!” Blin replied.
Once father sat the bag down, he gestured to Philin’s mother to sit down.
“So, what’s the news?” Mother asked.
Blin ignored his allergic dots on his face and read word for word everything on the to-do list, but replaced the word ‘Blin’ with I so it looked like he wrote it. He gave his parents cookies and sat down with puppy eyes once he had finished reading the list aloud. Mother, father, and Philin all stared at Blin’s face. “Come on, guys. Did you even pay attention?!”
“Well, your face is . . .” Father tried.
“Swollen.” Philin continued.
“Yes. Swollen.” Mother commented.
“I don’t care about that. I want to learn more complex words like sponatnus.”
“You mean spontaneous?” Philin asked.
“Yeah, that word.”
Philin set his head on his hand, then glanced at the window to his left. He saw rain heavily pouring down.
“Well, I think you’re going to have time.” Mother said, spotting the rain.
“Don’t step outside or I’ll have you grounded for two weeks. I despise mud on these floors.”
Blin grinned and slowly reached to his face to touch the dots. “Woah. They feel cool.”
“Don’t touch them.” Mother demanded. She walked to the phone which hung from the wall.
Philin turned to look at father. “Are you going to teach him?” He asked.
Father opened his mouth, then closed it, not knowing the right answer.
The front door opened and rain just barely came into the house through the door. The young boy walked in and stood on the placemat. He took his rain boots off and set them by the door. “Hi, Phil.” He said.
Philin looked at the boy with a curious face. “Thib?” He asked.
“Is that a question, or an answer?”
“Oh, wonderful. You came.” Mother walked up to the boy and gave him a hug.
“You-You invited . . . him?!” Philin asked.
“Well, yes . . . I assumed since your father and I will be teaching Blin how to read more complex words, that you may be a tad . . . lonely, so I invited him over. Isn’t that great?”
Father saw the look on Philin’s face and held back laughter while shaking his head.
“Mom, you know I like being ‘lonely’.” Philin stormed off into his room and slumped onto his bean bag. He grabbed his book and began to read. His anger had slowly diffused. Just then, Philin heard a knock on the door behind him.
“Apparently you haven’t forgotten about the snowball fight?” Thib said, opening the door.
“That was an illegal hit.” Philin replied.
“Look, I know why you’re upset, but you need to chill.”
“Yeah. Like that crispy pun you just added.”
“Exactly. It was just a game. I understand you might not want to be friends again, but you should really reconsider it.” Thib walked out of the room, closing the door behind him.
I think I might be a little too harsh on him. The snowball did damage! Ugh. I can’t make up my mind! Philin thought. He heard another knock, then something slid underneath the door. Do you accept? ~Thib Philin smiled and replied to the note. Yes. He wrote. He opened the door and walked out. He looked to his left, then to his right, but there was no sight of Thib. Philin stood there, waiting for Thib to sneak up on him.
Thib jumped up behind Philin and threw him to the ground. “Hey, we aren’t playing hide and grab-seek.” He said.
“You remember that game? That was the only time you would ever let me hurt you.”
“You didn’t hurt me.”
“Oh.”
“Remember that time when we stayed up all night eating popcorn and jellybeans?”
“Yes! And we set up that amazing pillow fort.”
“Yup . . . hey, I got grounded for that.”
“But wasn’t it worth it?”
Philin nodded.
“Let’s convince your parents to let us do that again.”
Philin ran into the dining room and sat near Mother and Father. “Can we set up a fort?” He asked.
Mother looked at Philin, then at Thib. “Sure. Why not?”
Philin’s mouth dropped. “Really?!”
Thib spied from the corner with a smile on his face.
“Don’t forget to heat up some popcorn.” Father said.
“Oh, boy! Thank you.” He looked at Blin who looked somewhat stressed. “You’ll get there, Bliln. I promise.” He ran over to Thib. Philin adjusted his glasses with a grin. “The good old days are back in session.”
1,153 Words!
That's the end of the Weekly!
Total words: 2,323!
Cabin War! Write 3,000 words as a cabin and don't repeat adjectives!
It had been raining for days and Dolio still had no idea what to do. He was used to spending his free time outside in the warm air, but now he had been cooped up for three days with almost nothing to do. Dolio sighed and placed his elbow on the cold windowsill.
Hiltt pushed Dolio’s arm off the windowsill. “Come on, Dolio. We can do something other than sit here and wait for the sun to come out. The more you wait with boredom, the more you will need to wait for it to come.”
Dolio let out a huff. “It;s just not the same when the weather is like this. I mean come on, look at my attitude. It’s cold and gloomy just like it is outside.”
“Man. I am so glad I’m not you. My mood doesn’t change with the clouds. It flies free like a bird.”
“Seriously?”
“What? I’ve been practicing my fancy grammar. You should try it too. It will help with your laziness.”
“I’m not.”
“Then how about you go get us a cookie?” Hillt tried.
Dolio glanced at the cookie jar in the kitchen, but refused to go after it.
“That’s exactly what I’m talking about! You don’t even want sweets. That’s your favorite thing, am I right?”
Dolio shrugged his shoulders.
“Okay, that’s it.” Hiltt grabbed Dolio’s arm and began pulling.
“Hey. Would you stop that?”
“Would you stop being a grump?”
“I can’t.”
“Yes you can. If I can, then you can.”
Dolio continued to pull his arm back. “Oh, look! Mom’s brought us donuts!” He teased.
Hiltt let go of Dolio’s arm and fell backwards.
Dolio burst with laughter.
“Oh, you think that’s funny?”
“What? You did that all on your own. You let go.”
“You knew I would let go.”
“I know. I’m a genius. A pure cleverest.”
310 Words!
Word War with: @ScarletTheArtist
Elinn ran as fast as she could and tried not to trip. She pushed herself against the bushes and trees until she came to a halting stop. In front of her, she saw a sudden change in the setting. Instead of the thick green muggy forest behind her, all she could see now was endless snow. It began to grow on her and she knew that she had to run through the snow, no matter the costs because it could cost her life if she stayed here, in between the worlds.
91 Words!
Fanfiction Weekly #4:
Write a crossover with someone else's characters!
Jane was laying on her bean bag, with her nose stuck in her book. The rainy days were the best time to read, especially if the story were incredibly gloomy. It gets you in the right mood. Jane glanced above her at the window. It was fogged up with thick water and the sound of the trees blowing made her grow uneasy. She couldn't stand it when everything was out of order and messy. It was just so . . . immature.
“Hey, Jane. Let's look at the flowers mommy planted near the window!” Lily exclaimed.
Jane let out a sigh, but in order to make Lily happy, she knew to obey her commands.
The next part is being written . . .
You can find my other two weeklies here: Fanfiction Writing! I did not have time for the third weekly.
Part 1:
Biographies. Must be 300 words for each character.
Character 1~
Six of clubs. Colors: Dark red and red
Character 2~
2 of diamonds. Colors:Yellow and pink.
!I AM USING THE FIRST SET OF COLORS!
Phillin is incredibly introverted. Some would say a cat’s got his tongue or something along the lines of that. This main character is ten years old and has a twin brother. Phillin loves to go on little adventures with his brother, but doesn’t like when he stays in the woods overnight. He has glasses and really curly black hair that rests on the top of his head. He is very eager to try new things. Phillin loves sweets and anything sour. Also, he can’t stand being told what to do when he has already been told. Phillin is very kind, but he does not easily warm up to people, especially in a large group. He likes to wear baggy jeans and a shirt a size too big. He also loves to read any fantasy related book he can get his hands on. It’s his way to get into the world of imagination without him having to talk to anyone. He loves being able to escape into a world that he knows does not exist because when he is reading, it feels so real and relatable. Philin likes being alone most of the time, but the only other person he enjoys being around is his twin brother, Blin. One of Philin’s worst fears is being left alone in the dark. He could be left alone almost anywhere and would enjoy it, but the dark scares him out of any possible thing. Even though he knows nothing can get him in the dark, he still believes that the dark is something there to taunt him and to make fun of him. Philin has no friends, but he feels that his brother is the closest thing to a friend he could ever have. He lives with both of his parents, and knows he is very lucky to have them.
306 Words.
Blin is also an omnivert. He can act just like his brother, or he can make you mistake him for someone else. His personality is filled with chaos and actually, much like a chameleon, he can change his personality depending on his mood and internal behavior. Also like his brother, Blin enjoys sweets, but likes spicy more than sour. Blin loves being able to improve on things that he thinks is necessary. Like his brother, he is kind, but he is not hesitant when speaking his mind. Blin likes wearing jackets and hoodies no matter the weather because he isn’t bothered by the weather change. He loves nature and really wants to tame a wild animal even though he knows it’s almost impossible to achieve such a goal. To him, being able to tame an untameable creature makes him feel like he can accomplish anything because he has done something that not many people can ever do. He has a wide imagination and loves to think of any random thing he can possibly think of. One of Blin’s worst fears is being told that he can’t do anything right. Even though he knows he can’t do every little thing perfectly, he likes doing the best he can in the most possible things. Blin has one friend that he met at school, and he feels like he can discuss almost any of his problems with her because she understands home really well. Even though he has his parents and Philin to hang out with, he enjoys hanging out with his friends at sleepovers or anything like that because he enjoys being a part of things. He does enjoy being around his father because he gives out great advice whenever Blin asks him something and Blin is very thankful to have him.
300 Words.
Description of setting. Must be at least 150 words.
This story is going to be based on the season of Autumn, so it’s sometime in between August and November. The trees will all have a darkish-red brown color with bright elaborate red leaves blooming on the extending branches. There will be a scene with snow which rests on the very tips of the leaves themselves. Most of the story will be written in the daytime to show a light mood instead of a dark and gloomy mood. There might be a scene when the sky turns dark and a blizzard occurs, but it’s not written in stone yet. The cabins are made with the same darkish-red brown color of the trees and they all have a red brick roof. The houses also have a red brick trim touching the ground that extends only two feet above the ground. The air is very crisp and chill in the fall since winter is coming near in around a month or so.
160 Words.
Beginning of story with the above characters and setting. Must be at least 400 words.
Philin squinted his eyes to try to read the italicized words in his book.
“What are you reading?” Blin asked.
“I’m trying to read these words. They’re so tiny.”
“Let me see.” Blin took the book. “This could be the end.” He said as he read the italicized words.
“Oh. Thank you.”
“No problem. I think you need your eyesight checked again. If you can’t read that now with your glasses, then it might be time to get new ones. Also, I don’t know how you’re reading chapter books already. You’re in second grade! Did mom and dad give you superpowers?
“No. Instead of reading little kid books, you can start reading chapter books too, it might be good for you to start now.”
Blin looked at his brother. “Just because I’m the same age as you doesn’t mean I have to do every little thing exactly like you.”
Philin ignored Blin and continued to read his book. He took a glance every once in a while to see what his brother was doing since he had become quiet all of a sudden. “Are you feeling okay? You’re quiet now.”
“Huh? I just . . . Nothing.”
Philin closed his book and sat down on a bench next to him. The bench was cold and uncomfortable, but Philin knew something was up with Blin.
Blin sat down next to him with a sigh. “Do mom and dad think I’m weird?” He asked.
“Okay. That was kind of random but no. They don’t think you’re weird.”
“How do you know? It’s gotta be something about how I’m not on the same reading pace as everyone else? I mean everyone else is starting to read chapter books like you, and I’m still reading . . . baby books.”
“You know everyone has a different reading pace, and you’re just one of the people who . . . have fallen behind.”
“Fallen behind?! I’ve fallen behind?! I knew I should have made myself sick instead of going to that lazy summer camp! That’s when you knew how to read more complicated words, right? You weren’t forced to go, but I was and now look at me. I have fallen behind everyone else who didn’t go to that camp.”
“It’s not because of the camp.” Philin mumbled.
“What?” Blin asked.
“It’s not because of the camp.” Philin repeated. He saw Blin’s eyes widen, and he remained silent until Philin continued talking, even if he really despised talking.
404 Words.
Part 2:
Continue the story with the list of requirements
Include a very long to do list 211 Words
Make a character allergic to something strange 277 Words
Have a character spend a rainy day inside 124 Words
Your character reunites with a long lost friend 165 Words
Write your protagonist in their comfort place when they’re stressed 163 Words
Have a character go on a rant about the good old days 213 Words
Philin sighed. He pulled out an empty sheet of paper and found a pen. “We’ll write a to-do list.” He said. He wrote down the list which was written in small ink. Philin completed the page, then flipped to the other side or the sheet and filled that side as well.
Blin opened his mouth. “That’s a . . . long to-do list.”
“It’s not that long. Read it.”
“Mention to mom and dad about the camp. Then tell them that Blin is falling behind in reading, then treat them to some dessert to trick them, then convince them to teach Blin to read more advanced words . . .” Blin continued down the page until he had to flip it over. When he was finished reading, he was out of breath. “Do you really think it’ll work?” He asked.
“Of course. I wrote it down.”
Blin jumped off the bench with excitement. “Let’s do it!” Without looking back at Philin, Blin ran to their parent’s cabin. “Hey. Can I keep the list?” He asked Philin.
Philin handed Blin the list.
Blin smiled as he opened the door to the cabin.
Philin followed behind quietly, but surely. He went to the kitchen and sat on a stool as he waited for his mother to notice his appearance. He cleared his throat.
“Oh, Philin! How are you? How was school? Did you do anything fun?” Mother asked.
“It was okay.” He replied.
“Where’s Blin?”
Philin looked back at the door, then at the dining room table, then back at his mother and shrugged.
“Oh. He’s probably just in his room. He did come in after you, right?”
“Yes.”
“Oh, I’m glad. Oh, and your father should be here any second.”
Philin looked at the door once again as he heard it open.
“Hey Phil —Where’s Blin?” Father asked.
Why are they asking me that? He thought.
“Here I am!” Blin yelled as he ran out from his room. “I have some news, too.”
“That’s great, Blin, but I need to put my stuff down, then your mom and I can listen to your news. Have an orange while you wait.”
Blin grinned and grabbed an orange from the table. As he chewed the orange, his face began to grow dots all over it.
Philin watched his father set his bag on the ground next to the dining room table. “Um. Blin. Your . . . face . . .” Philin began.
“What?” Blin asked.
“Are you allergic to oranges?” Philin asked with a surprised expression.
“Huh. That’s cool!” Blin replied.
Once father sat the bag down, he gestured to Philin’s mother to sit down.
“So, what’s the news?” Mother asked.
Blin ignored his allergic dots on his face and read word for word everything on the to-do list, but replaced the word ‘Blin’ with I so it looked like he wrote it. He gave his parents cookies and sat down with puppy eyes once he had finished reading the list aloud. Mother, father, and Philin all stared at Blin’s face. “Come on, guys. Did you even pay attention?!”
“Well, your face is . . .” Father tried.
“Swollen.” Philin continued.
“Yes. Swollen.” Mother commented.
“I don’t care about that. I want to learn more complex words like sponatnus.”
“You mean spontaneous?” Philin asked.
“Yeah, that word.”
Philin set his head on his hand, then glanced at the window to his left. He saw rain heavily pouring down.
“Well, I think you’re going to have time.” Mother said, spotting the rain.
“Don’t step outside or I’ll have you grounded for two weeks. I despise mud on these floors.”
Blin grinned and slowly reached to his face to touch the dots. “Woah. They feel cool.”
“Don’t touch them.” Mother demanded. She walked to the phone which hung from the wall.
Philin turned to look at father. “Are you going to teach him?” He asked.
Father opened his mouth, then closed it, not knowing the right answer.
The front door opened and rain just barely came into the house through the door. The young boy walked in and stood on the placemat. He took his rain boots off and set them by the door. “Hi, Phil.” He said.
Philin looked at the boy with a curious face. “Thib?” He asked.
“Is that a question, or an answer?”
“Oh, wonderful. You came.” Mother walked up to the boy and gave him a hug.
“You-You invited . . . him?!” Philin asked.
“Well, yes . . . I assumed since your father and I will be teaching Blin how to read more complex words, that you may be a tad . . . lonely, so I invited him over. Isn’t that great?”
Father saw the look on Philin’s face and held back laughter while shaking his head.
“Mom, you know I like being ‘lonely’.” Philin stormed off into his room and slumped onto his bean bag. He grabbed his book and began to read. His anger had slowly diffused. Just then, Philin heard a knock on the door behind him.
“Apparently you haven’t forgotten about the snowball fight?” Thib said, opening the door.
“That was an illegal hit.” Philin replied.
“Look, I know why you’re upset, but you need to chill.”
“Yeah. Like that crispy pun you just added.”
“Exactly. It was just a game. I understand you might not want to be friends again, but you should really reconsider it.” Thib walked out of the room, closing the door behind him.
I think I might be a little too harsh on him. The snowball did damage! Ugh. I can’t make up my mind! Philin thought. He heard another knock, then something slid underneath the door. Do you accept? ~Thib Philin smiled and replied to the note. Yes. He wrote. He opened the door and walked out. He looked to his left, then to his right, but there was no sight of Thib. Philin stood there, waiting for Thib to sneak up on him.
Thib jumped up behind Philin and threw him to the ground. “Hey, we aren’t playing hide and grab-seek.” He said.
“You remember that game? That was the only time you would ever let me hurt you.”
“You didn’t hurt me.”
“Oh.”
“Remember that time when we stayed up all night eating popcorn and jellybeans?”
“Yes! And we set up that amazing pillow fort.”
“Yup . . . hey, I got grounded for that.”
“But wasn’t it worth it?”
Philin nodded.
“Let’s convince your parents to let us do that again.”
Philin ran into the dining room and sat near Mother and Father. “Can we set up a fort?” He asked.
Mother looked at Philin, then at Thib. “Sure. Why not?”
Philin’s mouth dropped. “Really?!”
Thib spied from the corner with a smile on his face.
“Don’t forget to heat up some popcorn.” Father said.
“Oh, boy! Thank you.” He looked at Blin who looked somewhat stressed. “You’ll get there, Bliln. I promise.” He ran over to Thib. Philin adjusted his glasses with a grin. “The good old days are back in session.”
1,153 Words!
That's the end of the Weekly!
Total words: 2,323!
Cabin War! Write 3,000 words as a cabin and don't repeat adjectives!
It had been raining for days and Dolio still had no idea what to do. He was used to spending his free time outside in the warm air, but now he had been cooped up for three days with almost nothing to do. Dolio sighed and placed his elbow on the cold windowsill.
Hiltt pushed Dolio’s arm off the windowsill. “Come on, Dolio. We can do something other than sit here and wait for the sun to come out. The more you wait with boredom, the more you will need to wait for it to come.”
Dolio let out a huff. “It;s just not the same when the weather is like this. I mean come on, look at my attitude. It’s cold and gloomy just like it is outside.”
“Man. I am so glad I’m not you. My mood doesn’t change with the clouds. It flies free like a bird.”
“Seriously?”
“What? I’ve been practicing my fancy grammar. You should try it too. It will help with your laziness.”
“I’m not.”
“Then how about you go get us a cookie?” Hillt tried.
Dolio glanced at the cookie jar in the kitchen, but refused to go after it.
“That’s exactly what I’m talking about! You don’t even want sweets. That’s your favorite thing, am I right?”
Dolio shrugged his shoulders.
“Okay, that’s it.” Hiltt grabbed Dolio’s arm and began pulling.
“Hey. Would you stop that?”
“Would you stop being a grump?”
“I can’t.”
“Yes you can. If I can, then you can.”
Dolio continued to pull his arm back. “Oh, look! Mom’s brought us donuts!” He teased.
Hiltt let go of Dolio’s arm and fell backwards.
Dolio burst with laughter.
“Oh, you think that’s funny?”
“What? You did that all on your own. You let go.”
“You knew I would let go.”
“I know. I’m a genius. A pure cleverest.”
310 Words!
Word War with: @ScarletTheArtist
Elinn ran as fast as she could and tried not to trip. She pushed herself against the bushes and trees until she came to a halting stop. In front of her, she saw a sudden change in the setting. Instead of the thick green muggy forest behind her, all she could see now was endless snow. It began to grow on her and she knew that she had to run through the snow, no matter the costs because it could cost her life if she stayed here, in between the worlds.
91 Words!
Fanfiction Weekly #4:
Write a crossover with someone else's characters!
Jane was laying on her bean bag, with her nose stuck in her book. The rainy days were the best time to read, especially if the story were incredibly gloomy. It gets you in the right mood. Jane glanced above her at the window. It was fogged up with thick water and the sound of the trees blowing made her grow uneasy. She couldn't stand it when everything was out of order and messy. It was just so . . . immature.
“Hey, Jane. Let's look at the flowers mommy planted near the window!” Lily exclaimed.
Jane let out a sigh, but in order to make Lily happy, she knew to obey her commands.
The next part is being written . . .
Last edited by Peachy_Rain (March 27, 2022 20:44:30)
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
swc word war - march 25
words: 211
warred: @NewYork_Com. who wrote 250 words
After writing thousands of words, there will never be an answer for the question “Is there an end?”. There is no end to the path of a writer, for that is the path you have chosen and there will be no relief. No breaks, no pauses. Inspiration put to paper is your life now. That is the philosophy that I use to determine the world and stuff like that or something. I don’t comprehend sentence structure, okay? I’m not up to actually writing something right now so I’m not going to sound coherent to normal people like you (assuming you are fine and not like me). I hope you’re having a good day and aren’t being lost in the same abyss as myself, and that your journey will have an end instead of going on for all eternity or until you lose your strength to write down your ideas. There are better fates than enjoying something so much that you can’t stop doing it, I suppose. I guess if you try so hard to enjoy something you will easily find the end, but if you naturally find something that you love there will be no end for you. Falling into the endless trap of writing words and stories for all eternity
words: 211
warred: @NewYork_Com. who wrote 250 words
After writing thousands of words, there will never be an answer for the question “Is there an end?”. There is no end to the path of a writer, for that is the path you have chosen and there will be no relief. No breaks, no pauses. Inspiration put to paper is your life now. That is the philosophy that I use to determine the world and stuff like that or something. I don’t comprehend sentence structure, okay? I’m not up to actually writing something right now so I’m not going to sound coherent to normal people like you (assuming you are fine and not like me). I hope you’re having a good day and aren’t being lost in the same abyss as myself, and that your journey will have an end instead of going on for all eternity or until you lose your strength to write down your ideas. There are better fates than enjoying something so much that you can’t stop doing it, I suppose. I guess if you try so hard to enjoy something you will easily find the end, but if you naturally find something that you love there will be no end for you. Falling into the endless trap of writing words and stories for all eternity
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Scratcher
45 posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
3/25 daily!
a collaboration with Scarlett_makesart
(bolded text is mine, regular text is hers)
this is not formatted!
357 words written by me, kenna
the comment thread: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/seventene/#comments-195669115
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The night screamed silence, giving all power to the snow. The light stayed silent, respecting the little flakes. Snow was gently falling, slowly turning into a blizzard. The air was silent as a breath and as dark as a cave. There was an unusual scent in the air. Danger! Footsteps marched along and through the empty fields, leaving no traces behind. Swift as a fox, the first moved around the beams, and into the shadows by a male, followed by a female.
Their footfalls were strong yet quiet, steady but quick. The group pushed through the harshly embracing snow, on their way to… where exactly? They made their way through the darkness, who was patiently waiting: fast asleep, but ready to strike. Not a sound could be heard, yet the unforgiving whispers of the night taunted them.
They walked across the shadows, trying to find their master, to tell him their news. Their life was already full of misery, and it was starting to get worse. They moved fast on their feet, as their footsteps slowed down. “We're here” the leader said. The man lying on the ground slowly opened his eyes, taking a few moments to finally wake up. “What have you found?” He asked, getting up from the cold floor.
“Nothing, sir,” the leader replied. His expression showed no flaws, but his fingers were curved into white knuckled fists; a gesture of fear, perhaps. Fear, anger, pain, sadness, misery: all the same to them now. “Young one, it's clear that you're hiding something. No worries, though. Your punishment will catch up to you eventually,” the man on the ground told him, his raspy voice itself enough to scare anyone away.
The leader nodded in response, turning back to the group. He gave another slight nod, indicating that it was time to go. Unfortunately it was getting late and they still didn't have a shelter to sleep in. The leader sighed, wondering what he did to deserve his life. Ever since he was little, he had to follow a master. His life was always full of misery, and he never had a chance to be free. The leader shaked his head, trying to get rid of the bad thoughts.
He knew it's how life works, though. Some are lucky, some are not. He, actually, is on the luckier side. One's hope always arrives at one point in life. Perhaps his will come soon. He lead his group down an infinite path of slush, mud, and dirt, and finally found a resting point. Suddenly, the wind broke the silence. The taunting whispers found themselves at reality's door: knock, knock, knock– will they ever get a rest?
The leader gestured is hand in a way, to tell the group members to follow. “Will we be able to..” One of the group members said with a pause. “ you know.. live? I mean look at us. We're all with out, and beaten up”
“The hope will arrive sometime,” the leader responded, no hint of optimism in his voice whatsoever. “That's what you always say, sir!” one member chirped. “Because it's true.” “Really? Or are you just lying to us so we'll continue to blindly follow you?!” she snapped. The leader turned around to look his members in the eye. His gaze terrified them; it matched the delicately powerful wind, howling and howling… ready to strike… Hope! They can all suddenly taste it.
“C'mon, we'll find a place shorty” The leader said, finally having a shot of belief. “Yes sir” the group members said, too tired to argue with their leader. And just like that, the group continued their journey to find a good shelter to stay.
The scent of the air was as sweet as honey and as sharp as a knife. The form of the hope was unknown, but that didn't matter. The wind did not calm down. Though, now, the gentle jabs were playful and silly, not painful and sorrowful. For once in their pitiful lives, they found hope. What a beautiful thing it is. The winter blossom petals fall, fall, fall: resting in the snow, buried in its warm embrace.
a collaboration with Scarlett_makesart
(bolded text is mine, regular text is hers)
this is not formatted!
357 words written by me, kenna
the comment thread: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/seventene/#comments-195669115
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The night screamed silence, giving all power to the snow. The light stayed silent, respecting the little flakes. Snow was gently falling, slowly turning into a blizzard. The air was silent as a breath and as dark as a cave. There was an unusual scent in the air. Danger! Footsteps marched along and through the empty fields, leaving no traces behind. Swift as a fox, the first moved around the beams, and into the shadows by a male, followed by a female.
Their footfalls were strong yet quiet, steady but quick. The group pushed through the harshly embracing snow, on their way to… where exactly? They made their way through the darkness, who was patiently waiting: fast asleep, but ready to strike. Not a sound could be heard, yet the unforgiving whispers of the night taunted them.
They walked across the shadows, trying to find their master, to tell him their news. Their life was already full of misery, and it was starting to get worse. They moved fast on their feet, as their footsteps slowed down. “We're here” the leader said. The man lying on the ground slowly opened his eyes, taking a few moments to finally wake up. “What have you found?” He asked, getting up from the cold floor.
“Nothing, sir,” the leader replied. His expression showed no flaws, but his fingers were curved into white knuckled fists; a gesture of fear, perhaps. Fear, anger, pain, sadness, misery: all the same to them now. “Young one, it's clear that you're hiding something. No worries, though. Your punishment will catch up to you eventually,” the man on the ground told him, his raspy voice itself enough to scare anyone away.
The leader nodded in response, turning back to the group. He gave another slight nod, indicating that it was time to go. Unfortunately it was getting late and they still didn't have a shelter to sleep in. The leader sighed, wondering what he did to deserve his life. Ever since he was little, he had to follow a master. His life was always full of misery, and he never had a chance to be free. The leader shaked his head, trying to get rid of the bad thoughts.
He knew it's how life works, though. Some are lucky, some are not. He, actually, is on the luckier side. One's hope always arrives at one point in life. Perhaps his will come soon. He lead his group down an infinite path of slush, mud, and dirt, and finally found a resting point. Suddenly, the wind broke the silence. The taunting whispers found themselves at reality's door: knock, knock, knock– will they ever get a rest?
The leader gestured is hand in a way, to tell the group members to follow. “Will we be able to..” One of the group members said with a pause. “ you know.. live? I mean look at us. We're all with out, and beaten up”
“The hope will arrive sometime,” the leader responded, no hint of optimism in his voice whatsoever. “That's what you always say, sir!” one member chirped. “Because it's true.” “Really? Or are you just lying to us so we'll continue to blindly follow you?!” she snapped. The leader turned around to look his members in the eye. His gaze terrified them; it matched the delicately powerful wind, howling and howling… ready to strike… Hope! They can all suddenly taste it.
“C'mon, we'll find a place shorty” The leader said, finally having a shot of belief. “Yes sir” the group members said, too tired to argue with their leader. And just like that, the group continued their journey to find a good shelter to stay.
The scent of the air was as sweet as honey and as sharp as a knife. The form of the hope was unknown, but that didn't matter. The wind did not calm down. Though, now, the gentle jabs were playful and silly, not painful and sorrowful. For once in their pitiful lives, they found hope. What a beautiful thing it is. The winter blossom petals fall, fall, fall: resting in the snow, buried in its warm embrace.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
La Patisserie De Reves
Writing comp entry
1,197 words
She walks as if her feet don't touch the ground, as if she has transcended life itself and chooses to grace the earth with her presence. Her alabaster boots are a stark contrast to the earth-spattered cobblestones around her, as are her neat dress and doeskin gloves. Her hair is perfectly curled, framing her porcelain face in delicate russet spirals. Eyes of the palest cornflower blue peek out beneath her long lashes, which she bats daintily at passerby. Her immaculate facade almost hides the slight stoop of her shoulders, the tiredness in her eyes.
She does not belong here.
The villagers stare unabashedly at this newcomer with suspicion and curiosity. They lower their hand-woven baskets and whisper softly to one another, wondering what such a seemingly well-to-do young lady would want with their little town. Perhaps she came on behalf of one of the wealthy barons who seemed to own much of the kingdom.
Perhaps not.
She traipses along purposefully, though it is evident she has never been here before. At every crossroad, she ceases, glances about, and continues wandering. She persists in this curious pattern for quite a while.
Finally, she halts in front of a nondescript shop, gently closing her lace parasol and looking expectantly at the sign. Engraved with a single rose, letters in a dainty script read ‘La Pâtisserie de Rêves.’
The girl nods once and lifts her gloved hand to knock on the wooden doorway. Three quick raps and she slips in, closing the door behind her.
The shop is open and breezy, a small wooden counter the only furniture in sight. Behind it, perched on a stool, sits the proprietress.
The girl steps in cautiously and shuts the door softly behind her, nervously pushing her perfectly curled hair out of her eyes. When she speaks, her voice is soft and clipped.
“Good afternoon. I'm here for a pastry.”
The proprietress stands up and extends her hand.
“Vivienne,” she states. Her voice is pure silver, with the faintest hint of an accent.
The girl merely nods in response.
“Lucie. A pleasure to make your acquaintance.”
The corners of Vivienne's mouth turn up in a slight smile as she walks over to Lucie. She places her hands gently on Lucie's cheeks, her amber eyes assessing the lines and curves of the girl's face.
“We will rid your pretty face of that sorrow. Come, come.”
She pulls Lucie through a small wooden door into another chamber. The only sign of life is a small flowerpot in the corner, though the plant within has wilted.
“Sit.” Vivienne pulls Lucie down, her dress billowing as the girl is startled into a sitting position.
Holding out her hands, Vivienne closes her eyes and relaxes her face. She begins to speak, her voice soft yet assertive.
“Your sorrows, your pain, your grief, your burdens. Unleashed they shall be, never to haunt you again.”
She places her hands on Lucie's, and the journey begins.
The rain has calmed, leaving the earthy scent of petrichor lingering over the field. Scattered clouds dot the cerulean sky, the remains of a storm wavering on the edge of dispersion. The grass is dewy, droplets of water lounging on the blades without a care in the world.
A small girl leaps joyously through the meadow, her hair streaming wildly behind her. Behind her runs an older woman, struggling to keep up. Though their clothes are ragged and their faces soiled, the looks on their faces make it clear that they have escaped the burden of everyday life.
The girl reaches behind her, laughing as she skips along, her bare feet barely touching the ground. The woman sighs, trying to contain the smile that threatens to seize her. Breathing heavily, she starts to run faster, catching up with the child and grasping her hand tightly. Hand in hand, they bound through the field, laughing as their cares melt away.
Vivienne opens her eyes, staring unsurprised as tears roll down Lucie's face.
“We are almost done, child. Be patient.”
The image is slightly blurry now, almost tear-stained. It is the same field, wildflowers swaying gently in the breeze, but the air has a tinge of melancholy. The girl stands in front of a headstone, head bowed. She has aged, as children tend to do, but a trace of youthfulness still remains. She sobs quietly, hands unconsciously pulling out the grass around her.
The world is quiet now.
“Ah, I see. A straightforward task.” Vivienne smiles reassuringly, her palms still on Lucie's. She closes her eyes and begins to hum a wistful tune. The faint scent of lavender wafts through the air, followed closely by sugar, vanilla, and buttermilk.
Moving her hands in a weaving motion, Vivienne begins to speak.
Sorrows, worries, burdens, fear,
Everything you ever wish
Soon, they all will become clear
On this little serving dish
Everything you ever wish
All your hopes and dreams shall be
On this little serving dish
Trust in yourself, trust in me
All your hopes and dreams shall be
As the tears roll down your face
Trust in yourself, trust in me
You shall leave this hopeless place
As the tears roll down your face
I will weave your hopes and dreams
You shall leave this hopeless place
Bringing in the tattered seams
I will weave your hopes and dreams
Sorrows, worries, burdens, fear,
Bringing in the tattered seams
Soon, they all will become clear
A blinding light bursts from Vivienne's hands, though she sits calm, tranquil, eyes closed. Lucie gasps, raising her hands to cover her face as Vivienne begins to weave.
She plucks a single silver thread out of the air, and then a gold one, and then one of the palest rose. Her hands weave back and forth, spinning the threads until all that is left is a small ball. It shines with the golden, nostalgic glow of memories, the silver of fallen tears, the rose of early childhood.
Vivienne pinches her eyes even tighter and presses the ball between her hands. There is a small pop and her eyes fly open, pupils dilated. When she speaks, her voice is low and raspy.
“This is a gift. If you do not consume the entirety by sunset, the charm will fade. Now, go. Leave and do not return.”
She uncurls her hand, and Lucie brings her hand to her mouth in delight. In the palm of Vivienne's hand sits a tiny cake, perfect in every way. Crowned with a dab of buttermilk frosting, a sprinkle of lavender, and a mist of vanilla, the cake mimics a purple lily just before bloom.
Lucie lifts the cake out of Vivienne's palms with the utmost care, her delicate fingers grasping the dish. She places it gently in her basket and covers it with a creamy muslin cloth, embroidered with a single wildflower. Vivienne nods once, and Lucie smiles slightly in return.
She turns her back on the shop, on what once was, and steps out into the street. The light seems dull, muted, the colors slightly more faded.
When she turns around, the sign is gone, the only trace of the bakery a single rose in the shop window.
Writing comp entry
1,197 words
She walks as if her feet don't touch the ground, as if she has transcended life itself and chooses to grace the earth with her presence. Her alabaster boots are a stark contrast to the earth-spattered cobblestones around her, as are her neat dress and doeskin gloves. Her hair is perfectly curled, framing her porcelain face in delicate russet spirals. Eyes of the palest cornflower blue peek out beneath her long lashes, which she bats daintily at passerby. Her immaculate facade almost hides the slight stoop of her shoulders, the tiredness in her eyes.
She does not belong here.
The villagers stare unabashedly at this newcomer with suspicion and curiosity. They lower their hand-woven baskets and whisper softly to one another, wondering what such a seemingly well-to-do young lady would want with their little town. Perhaps she came on behalf of one of the wealthy barons who seemed to own much of the kingdom.
Perhaps not.
She traipses along purposefully, though it is evident she has never been here before. At every crossroad, she ceases, glances about, and continues wandering. She persists in this curious pattern for quite a while.
Finally, she halts in front of a nondescript shop, gently closing her lace parasol and looking expectantly at the sign. Engraved with a single rose, letters in a dainty script read ‘La Pâtisserie de Rêves.’
The girl nods once and lifts her gloved hand to knock on the wooden doorway. Three quick raps and she slips in, closing the door behind her.
The shop is open and breezy, a small wooden counter the only furniture in sight. Behind it, perched on a stool, sits the proprietress.
The girl steps in cautiously and shuts the door softly behind her, nervously pushing her perfectly curled hair out of her eyes. When she speaks, her voice is soft and clipped.
“Good afternoon. I'm here for a pastry.”
The proprietress stands up and extends her hand.
“Vivienne,” she states. Her voice is pure silver, with the faintest hint of an accent.
The girl merely nods in response.
“Lucie. A pleasure to make your acquaintance.”
The corners of Vivienne's mouth turn up in a slight smile as she walks over to Lucie. She places her hands gently on Lucie's cheeks, her amber eyes assessing the lines and curves of the girl's face.
“We will rid your pretty face of that sorrow. Come, come.”
She pulls Lucie through a small wooden door into another chamber. The only sign of life is a small flowerpot in the corner, though the plant within has wilted.
“Sit.” Vivienne pulls Lucie down, her dress billowing as the girl is startled into a sitting position.
Holding out her hands, Vivienne closes her eyes and relaxes her face. She begins to speak, her voice soft yet assertive.
“Your sorrows, your pain, your grief, your burdens. Unleashed they shall be, never to haunt you again.”
She places her hands on Lucie's, and the journey begins.
The rain has calmed, leaving the earthy scent of petrichor lingering over the field. Scattered clouds dot the cerulean sky, the remains of a storm wavering on the edge of dispersion. The grass is dewy, droplets of water lounging on the blades without a care in the world.
A small girl leaps joyously through the meadow, her hair streaming wildly behind her. Behind her runs an older woman, struggling to keep up. Though their clothes are ragged and their faces soiled, the looks on their faces make it clear that they have escaped the burden of everyday life.
The girl reaches behind her, laughing as she skips along, her bare feet barely touching the ground. The woman sighs, trying to contain the smile that threatens to seize her. Breathing heavily, she starts to run faster, catching up with the child and grasping her hand tightly. Hand in hand, they bound through the field, laughing as their cares melt away.
Vivienne opens her eyes, staring unsurprised as tears roll down Lucie's face.
“We are almost done, child. Be patient.”
The image is slightly blurry now, almost tear-stained. It is the same field, wildflowers swaying gently in the breeze, but the air has a tinge of melancholy. The girl stands in front of a headstone, head bowed. She has aged, as children tend to do, but a trace of youthfulness still remains. She sobs quietly, hands unconsciously pulling out the grass around her.
The world is quiet now.
“Ah, I see. A straightforward task.” Vivienne smiles reassuringly, her palms still on Lucie's. She closes her eyes and begins to hum a wistful tune. The faint scent of lavender wafts through the air, followed closely by sugar, vanilla, and buttermilk.
Moving her hands in a weaving motion, Vivienne begins to speak.
Sorrows, worries, burdens, fear,
Everything you ever wish
Soon, they all will become clear
On this little serving dish
Everything you ever wish
All your hopes and dreams shall be
On this little serving dish
Trust in yourself, trust in me
All your hopes and dreams shall be
As the tears roll down your face
Trust in yourself, trust in me
You shall leave this hopeless place
As the tears roll down your face
I will weave your hopes and dreams
You shall leave this hopeless place
Bringing in the tattered seams
I will weave your hopes and dreams
Sorrows, worries, burdens, fear,
Bringing in the tattered seams
Soon, they all will become clear
A blinding light bursts from Vivienne's hands, though she sits calm, tranquil, eyes closed. Lucie gasps, raising her hands to cover her face as Vivienne begins to weave.
She plucks a single silver thread out of the air, and then a gold one, and then one of the palest rose. Her hands weave back and forth, spinning the threads until all that is left is a small ball. It shines with the golden, nostalgic glow of memories, the silver of fallen tears, the rose of early childhood.
Vivienne pinches her eyes even tighter and presses the ball between her hands. There is a small pop and her eyes fly open, pupils dilated. When she speaks, her voice is low and raspy.
“This is a gift. If you do not consume the entirety by sunset, the charm will fade. Now, go. Leave and do not return.”
She uncurls her hand, and Lucie brings her hand to her mouth in delight. In the palm of Vivienne's hand sits a tiny cake, perfect in every way. Crowned with a dab of buttermilk frosting, a sprinkle of lavender, and a mist of vanilla, the cake mimics a purple lily just before bloom.
Lucie lifts the cake out of Vivienne's palms with the utmost care, her delicate fingers grasping the dish. She places it gently in her basket and covers it with a creamy muslin cloth, embroidered with a single wildflower. Vivienne nods once, and Lucie smiles slightly in return.
She turns her back on the shop, on what once was, and steps out into the street. The light seems dull, muted, the colors slightly more faded.
When she turns around, the sign is gone, the only trace of the bakery a single rose in the shop window.
Did I have an absolutely amazing idea that translated badly to writing? Yes.
Did I do it on the last day because I may or may not have sprained my ankle from 6 hours of play practice every night? Yes.
Did I write a random pantoum in the middle just because I felt like it? Yes.
Is the ending of a much lower quality than the beginning? Yes.
Do I regret any of it? No.
You get no other context, aside from that I got slightly inspired by Beauty and the Beast, The Night Circus by Erin Morgenstern, and probably other things as well.
La patisserie de reves: The bakery of dreams
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
swc daily - march 25
words: 307 out of 615 (group total)
partner: @gh0stwriter, who wrote 308 words (bold)
The sky was a calm shade of blue- a shade which was clearly unfit for the time when you considered what was happening below the clouds.
As you stared up at the sky, the cloud nearly covering the sun moved, and you looked away quickly. The light still left an afterimage as you stared at the floor.
The sky was just a distraction, you reminded yourself as your eyes recovered. You had lots of other things you had to do, and you didn't have time to watch the clouds.
As the afterimage started to fade, you realized that you were still holding the volleyball as everyone was waiting for you to serve it. You felt your face turn red as you finally served it. It was a terrible serve, and it went straight down, bouncing off the net.
You heard the disappointed murmurs of the watching crowd, and you felt your face turn an even brighter shade of red.
You tried to focus on the game, not the audience. As you turned towards the net, the volleyball came straight towards you. You quickly hit it, and luckily, this time it went over the net.
You exhaled a sigh of relief at your luck, but you didn't have long to rest. Your opponent quickly hit the volleyball back over the net, and you hurried to hit the ball back in time.
As the opponent missed the ball, you glanced back for your teammates. They were cowering behind you, shaking and screaming. Why weren’t they helping? You were confused, but you turned back to focus on the game.
Suddenly, just as your opponent was about to hit the ball back at you, they seemed to trip- rather, the ground seemed like it was moving up to meet your opponent's feet. You looked down at the now-still ground, then looked around the court, and realized what your teammates were looking at.
On the opposing team’s side, there was some sort of monster made from mud—smiling a fanged grin that sent a chill down your back. The monster disappeared, and the ground started to become oddly sticky, and you started to sink down in the mud. Except it was more like a liquid than dirt. The ball became fully submerged.
You tried to get out of the mud, but there were no handholds in sight. No way to escape. You could see the sky getting further and further away, and you felt as though it would be hopeless to resist sinking through the mud. Then, you suddenly stopped sinking.
For a second, you felt relieved, but then the mud started to harden. You’d get stuck soon. You tried to push yourself upwards, but the mud stabilized quicker than you thought. The ground started to tighten around your waist. Uh oh. You thought.
A hand reached down towards yours, and you took it. As they tried to help pull you up, you realized that the hand was one of your teammate's hands. The ground was still tightening, and you felt as though you would be stretched in half from the conflicting forces.
You squeezed your teammate’s hand, trying to move, but the ground started to tighten even more so. The other teammates, and even the opposing team were trying to help. The ground squeezed so tightly that you thought you would burst, but suddenly you could feel yourself getting dislodged from the ground’s grip. You were nearly free.
Just a bit more, you thought. Almost there… Then, the ground suddenly seemed to let go, and you were sent flying through the air from the sudden release. You slid to the ground and rolled to a stop next to the net.
words: 307 out of 615 (group total)
partner: @gh0stwriter, who wrote 308 words (bold)
The sky was a calm shade of blue- a shade which was clearly unfit for the time when you considered what was happening below the clouds.
As you stared up at the sky, the cloud nearly covering the sun moved, and you looked away quickly. The light still left an afterimage as you stared at the floor.
The sky was just a distraction, you reminded yourself as your eyes recovered. You had lots of other things you had to do, and you didn't have time to watch the clouds.
As the afterimage started to fade, you realized that you were still holding the volleyball as everyone was waiting for you to serve it. You felt your face turn red as you finally served it. It was a terrible serve, and it went straight down, bouncing off the net.
You heard the disappointed murmurs of the watching crowd, and you felt your face turn an even brighter shade of red.
You tried to focus on the game, not the audience. As you turned towards the net, the volleyball came straight towards you. You quickly hit it, and luckily, this time it went over the net.
You exhaled a sigh of relief at your luck, but you didn't have long to rest. Your opponent quickly hit the volleyball back over the net, and you hurried to hit the ball back in time.
As the opponent missed the ball, you glanced back for your teammates. They were cowering behind you, shaking and screaming. Why weren’t they helping? You were confused, but you turned back to focus on the game.
Suddenly, just as your opponent was about to hit the ball back at you, they seemed to trip- rather, the ground seemed like it was moving up to meet your opponent's feet. You looked down at the now-still ground, then looked around the court, and realized what your teammates were looking at.
On the opposing team’s side, there was some sort of monster made from mud—smiling a fanged grin that sent a chill down your back. The monster disappeared, and the ground started to become oddly sticky, and you started to sink down in the mud. Except it was more like a liquid than dirt. The ball became fully submerged.
You tried to get out of the mud, but there were no handholds in sight. No way to escape. You could see the sky getting further and further away, and you felt as though it would be hopeless to resist sinking through the mud. Then, you suddenly stopped sinking.
For a second, you felt relieved, but then the mud started to harden. You’d get stuck soon. You tried to push yourself upwards, but the mud stabilized quicker than you thought. The ground started to tighten around your waist. Uh oh. You thought.
A hand reached down towards yours, and you took it. As they tried to help pull you up, you realized that the hand was one of your teammate's hands. The ground was still tightening, and you felt as though you would be stretched in half from the conflicting forces.
You squeezed your teammate’s hand, trying to move, but the ground started to tighten even more so. The other teammates, and even the opposing team were trying to help. The ground squeezed so tightly that you thought you would burst, but suddenly you could feel yourself getting dislodged from the ground’s grip. You were nearly free.
Just a bit more, you thought. Almost there… Then, the ground suddenly seemed to let go, and you were sent flying through the air from the sudden release. You slid to the ground and rolled to a stop next to the net.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
=====March 25, Daily=====
'Write a story with someone in an enemy cabin'
The bolded words are by my partner from contempt, @glitter_butt_rules
The wind howled as I climbed the mountain. Each step was closer to escape. Fatigue waved over me, but I kept running. Far behind, I could see the yells of the guards pursuing me. I didn't know where I would go, or how long till I could be free of the constant fear of being caught. I just had to stumble in confusion, and hope it would be enough to escape. I only had a vague idea of what I had done. I knew there was something different about me. My mother had told me that there was fire in my blood, and that people don't like what they don't understand. Only a few minutes ago, guards had burst into my home. “Aga, run!” my mother had shrieked, the words left echoing in the air. I had taken off, leaving my mother behind. Guilt started washing over me, and tears flew off my face as I ran. I was all alone, at this moment.
My feet pounded on the ground, and I kept running until the only sound in my ears was my own breathing, heavy and labored. When I reached the top of the mountain I stopped and leaned over, putting my head between my knees. Then I heard the guards shouting, and I got up again, But they had already reached the summit with me. My breathing was still not calmed. I looked at them, and saw my own eyes in theirs. Why were they scared? I took a step. They flinched. I took another. They started to surround me. I looked over to the edge of the mountain, about a yard away from me. I looked at the obvious leader of their entourage. Holding my gaze on his bloodshot brown eyes, I sprinted to the edge of the mountain and jumped. Frantically, I tried to swim through the air to grab the side of the mountain, which was a cliff, unlike the side I climbed. I saw a ledge, jutting out not far, but it was connected to a small cave. I aimed for the ledge in my fall, which had begun to bring me some form of twisted peace
I landed on the ground, but twisted my ankle as I did. Colors swam before my eyes, and pain shot through my leg. I limped inside the cave, hoping, praying that I would be safe, if only for this moment. I was lucky enough, as no guards seemed to dare to jump on to the ledge, perhaps in the fear of falling to their doom. I could hear the sound of the rein's cracking and the steady hoofbeats of the horse, slowly fading away. I closed my eyes, giving myself a moment of rest. It didn't last long, though, with the fear that more guards would be back for me. I braced myself as I got up, and checked for anyone on the edge of the cliff. No one. The thought brought a sliver of peace, but a wave of fear as I realized I was trapped. I shivered, suddenly feeling cold. All of a sudden, fire appeared in my hand. Curiosity flowed through me, and I touched the fire with my other hand, awed to see it didn't harm me. I brought it to my ankle, with more instinct than control, and a warmth flooded my leg. The fire dissipated in a warm glow, and I gently brushed my hand over my ankle. It was healed.
'Write a story with someone in an enemy cabin'
The bolded words are by my partner from contempt, @glitter_butt_rules
The wind howled as I climbed the mountain. Each step was closer to escape. Fatigue waved over me, but I kept running. Far behind, I could see the yells of the guards pursuing me. I didn't know where I would go, or how long till I could be free of the constant fear of being caught. I just had to stumble in confusion, and hope it would be enough to escape. I only had a vague idea of what I had done. I knew there was something different about me. My mother had told me that there was fire in my blood, and that people don't like what they don't understand. Only a few minutes ago, guards had burst into my home. “Aga, run!” my mother had shrieked, the words left echoing in the air. I had taken off, leaving my mother behind. Guilt started washing over me, and tears flew off my face as I ran. I was all alone, at this moment.
My feet pounded on the ground, and I kept running until the only sound in my ears was my own breathing, heavy and labored. When I reached the top of the mountain I stopped and leaned over, putting my head between my knees. Then I heard the guards shouting, and I got up again, But they had already reached the summit with me. My breathing was still not calmed. I looked at them, and saw my own eyes in theirs. Why were they scared? I took a step. They flinched. I took another. They started to surround me. I looked over to the edge of the mountain, about a yard away from me. I looked at the obvious leader of their entourage. Holding my gaze on his bloodshot brown eyes, I sprinted to the edge of the mountain and jumped. Frantically, I tried to swim through the air to grab the side of the mountain, which was a cliff, unlike the side I climbed. I saw a ledge, jutting out not far, but it was connected to a small cave. I aimed for the ledge in my fall, which had begun to bring me some form of twisted peace
I landed on the ground, but twisted my ankle as I did. Colors swam before my eyes, and pain shot through my leg. I limped inside the cave, hoping, praying that I would be safe, if only for this moment. I was lucky enough, as no guards seemed to dare to jump on to the ledge, perhaps in the fear of falling to their doom. I could hear the sound of the rein's cracking and the steady hoofbeats of the horse, slowly fading away. I closed my eyes, giving myself a moment of rest. It didn't last long, though, with the fear that more guards would be back for me. I braced myself as I got up, and checked for anyone on the edge of the cliff. No one. The thought brought a sliver of peace, but a wave of fear as I realized I was trapped. I shivered, suddenly feeling cold. All of a sudden, fire appeared in my hand. Curiosity flowed through me, and I touched the fire with my other hand, awed to see it didn't harm me. I brought it to my ankle, with more instinct than control, and a warmth flooded my leg. The fire dissipated in a warm glow, and I gently brushed my hand over my ankle. It was healed.
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Scratcher
1000+ posts
Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
4th Weekly!
Part #1
Section 1: Character Bio's
First Character Card: 6 of Clubs
Name: Leslie Alaiya Blanchard——-
Species: Human
Age: 14
Personality: Leslie is a 14 year old girl who's generally shy around people. She's a INFJ, who tends to keep to herself. She does this so that way she can spend her life thinking and imagining what the world could be. Leslie can be unrealistic at times, but she doesn't care. She likes seeing things in her own way.
Leslie is an artist, and she isn't limited to just one kind of art. Every night, she gazes up at the stars and imagines all sorts of things. But Leslie isn't just a dreamer, she's a doer. She takes those dreams and creates them with art. Art is simply how Leslie expresses herself, and it's a key part of her life.
A downside to the way Leslie operates is that she likes to push herself to the limit. She can easily stay up all night just thinking and working, without realizing she has a life outside of her art. Leslie is in need of a friend or companion who can help her realize there's more to life then just creating things.
Leslie is also very sensitive. Even just the slightest insult can really tick her off. This is just one of the many reasons she tends to not hang out with other kids her age. At school, her priorities are just get though the day, and just live though it. She doesn't want much to do with anyone else, but she's willing to lend a helping hand if someone needs it. Leslie doesn't like talking about herself. She isn't rather fond of who she is yet until she achieves success in her life. She rather not tell people about what her hopes and dreams are, or what hardships she's going through. She is reluctant to trusting people, and talking about herself.
Overall, Leslie is an artist, who dreams about her future life, and is willing to work hard towards that goal. She's very modest for the most part, and extremely shy. Although she doesn't have many friends, she doesn't wish she had anymore. Leslie might not like telling people what's on her mind, but she's always willing to help others out.
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Second Character Card: 5 of Diamonds
This is gonna be a real challenge…
Name: Triston Madison Blanchard——-
Species: Human
Age: 17
Personality: Trison is Leslie's older brother. He watches over her ever since their parents left them 10 years ago. His perspective on the world changes often, and Leslie has to cope with it. Trison tries his best to care for his sister, but at times it's proven to be a challenge.
Trison's favorite sound in the whole world is the sound of cars zooming by, of crowds cheering loudly, of anywhere there's noise. These sounds are the exact ones that drive his sister nuts. He wishes that one day, when Leslie is all grown up, he can move the the city and start a brand new life there. He wants to forget the life he had earlier, since it was low-key for the most part. He wants to be a journalist, and be big time.
Most people at Trison's school don't even know who he is. But he wants to change that. He wants to be well known one day, and then they'll all know his name. Unlike Leslie, Trison isn't afraid of talking to people. In fact, he's the life of every party. He gets tired really easily though, and that' causes issues for Leslie. Trison has a handful of good friends that he relies on, and that has helped him all thought his life.
A thing about Trison is that he often sees certain people as obstacles in his way of getting big. When this happens, he just wants to get rid of them as soon as possible. When Leslie has to deal with this, she tries to help him the best she can. But there are times where Trison's ego can get in the way of what he wants. This is the very thing that has been holding Trison back the majority of his life. In order to progress, he needs to overcome this and try and improve.
Trison, like his sister, is also very caring. He loves his sister to the ends of the Earth. She is the most important thing in his life. In terms of the romantic game, Trison has been unsuccessful. He dated a girl a year younger then him for a few months before realizing that she wasn't his type. Ever since then, Trison has been struggling to find someone else he can depend on. Leslie keeps encouraging him to try, but sometimes Trison feels like he just wants to give up.
Overall, Trison is a determined human who has plans for success. But in order to get there, he needs to overcome several things holding him back. One day, he vowed that people all over the world will know his name. Trison can't wait to be at that point, but first, he must sort key details in his life out.
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Section #2: Setting
Two Background Colors I got: Red and Pink
You know what this means?
School Gym—–
The gym looks like your average school gym, with it's basketball hoops, and rows and rows of bleachers. But is this really your ‘average school gym?’ No, it isn't. You know why?
Valentines Day.
The gym has been decked out in red and pink streamers. They have been hung from the basketball hoops, and continue all around the gym. There has been a table set up, that has been covered in a white table cloth. The bleachers have been pushed in to save space. The floors of the usually marked floor have been covered by bubble wrap.
The white lights have been tinted with red screening so they have a more red tone to them. Heart-shaped balloons have been tied up to the door knobs of various closets. A enormous DJ booth has been set up under one basketball hoop, taking up some space. Right next to it, speakers, on both sides of the booth, are connected to amplify the sound.
Over in one corner of the gym, a photo booth has been set up with a background of Paris. There's another booth next to that, which forms a line for the photo booth. Over on that wall, a huge banner has been hung up which read's ‘Ocean View High School Dance.’ That banner is a shimmery white color, adored with tiny red and pink hearts.
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Section #3: 400-500 Word Mini Story, Using the Characters and Setting
“Leslie!”——
Leslie jumped up at the sound of her name. She was in algebra class, and she had been dozing off.
“Wh-What?” She asked. The students around her started laughing, causing Leslie to blush slightly.
“The answer to number seven?” The teacher demanded.
Leslie, her eyes wide open, starred down at her sheet, and scanned the page.
“Oh, uh…. y equals -3.5?” She answered, not at all confident.
“That is incorrect.” The teacher announced. “Sarah, the answer to number seven?”
"It's positive 3.5. Since both numbers are negative, your answer is going to be positive.“ Sarah answered in a know-it-all tone.
The teacher beamed at Sarah. ”Very good, and for you.“ She said, looking at Leslie. ”Instead of daydreaming, why not try to pay attention?“
Leslie gave a small nod, but didn't say anything.
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When school was finally over, Leslie didn't hesitate to run home. She rather be there then stuck at school with all the students walking around. but before she reached the front door, someone stopped her. They reached out and tugged on Sarah's hoodie tight, with enough force to make her fall. Laughter quickly arose as Leslie looked around to see who did it.
”Hello, Daydreamer.“ A voice mocked. It was Sarah. Leslie slowly pushed herself back up and eyed Sarah closely.
”Was that necessary?“ She asked. That caused Sarah to laugh harder.
”No, but I enjoyed every second of it.“ She said with a smirk. ”Maybe now you'll learn.“
Leslie rolled her eyes, unsure what to do. She could easily go tell a teacher on Sarah, but she wasn't sure if that was the right choice to make.
”Leslie!“ A voice outside the school yelled.
Leslie's eyes widened for a moment, before she turned back towards Sarah.
”Bye.“ She said in a weak voice. She then proceeded to leave before Sarah could do anything else.
Leslie's older brother, Trison was waiting for her outside. She smiled as she walked towards him.
”How was your day?“ He asked.
Leslie shrugged, and decided not to tell him about math class or what happened in the hallway.
”Not very talkative, I see.“ He pointed out.
”Is that such a remarkable discovery for you?“ She asked. ”Is it so universal that your going to write it down in that diary of yours, and then save it for a rainy day?“
”Ha ha, very funny. No, I'm not, I was simply asking, that's all.“ He said.
Leslie glanced up at her brother and grinned. ”So what about you? Anything remarkably exciting happen to you today?“ She asked.
”Nothing much, just the usual. A+ on English essay, still no date to the Valentine's day dance, desperately trying to figure stuff out.“ He said. After that, he paused and turned to face his sister.
”One day, Leslie. One day…" He said, and Leslie laughed.
The two chatted amongst themselves all the way home. Now at home, Leslie felt better then she did all day.
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Part #2
Add at least 1,000 words to your story from Section 3, using a new element.
I don't understand if I'm supposed to throw in a bunch of random elements into this lol.
If anyone knows, then feel free to help me since I'm a dumb human being :]
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WEEKLY #4
Part One: 685/600 words, 162/150 words, 450/400 words
Once you have a character, you need to dive deeper into their personality in a 300-word biography. You need (at least) two prominent characters overall, so you'll have to write at least 600 words of characters, 300 for each card you get.
1. Aniela: age range = 20-40, personality = ambivert (8 of hearts)
2. Georgle: age range = 20-40, personality = omnivert (7 of diamonds)
Aniela is a pirate with auburn hair, brown eyes, freckles, a bubbly and adventurous attitude, and an energetic and outgoing personality. She loves to make people laugh and finds it her duty to make sure that anyone she’s around doesn’t have a frown upon their face. Though, as an ambivert, she automatically takes on the role of a leader in any situation. Because of her leadership skills, she is one of the many leaders of her pirate crew. She mainly speaks gently to them, but she can quickly become bossy and loud if she needs to. Aniela is also very curious and has a great tendency to question things whenever she feels like it, which is mostly all of the time. Although her eyepatch, covering a scarred eye made from a creature’s claws, may scare off people at first glance, once you get to know her, the more you realize how kind and considerate she really is— unless you’re one of her enemies, of course. She is in her early twenties and therefore mostly acts mature, though sometimes she lets out an excited squeal if she can’t help herself— usually when she finds hidden treasure or spotted an adorable animal. Her heart isn’t made of stone from her traumatic backstory, but she instead tries to be an optimist to make sure that others don’t ever get the chance to feel her heartbreak, as she always puts others over herself. She tries to be kind, calm, and patient to everyone around her, though, if frustrated, Aniela does release a small temper that she’s deeply trying to subdue over time. Aniela is also a very independent and secretive person who prefers to keep her problems to herself, believing that it’s her mission to stop them and that telling other people only adds more trouble and unnecessary complications. (305 words)
Georgle is, despite popular opinion, a pretty relaxed twenty year old, though sometimes he questions everything and likes to double-check that he didn’t forget anything before he leaves. Georgle has oil black hair that’s almost always messy, blue eyes that sparkle and glance at every nook and cranny whenever you look at them, and is Aniela’s right hand man. He’s an omnivert, so he can get very stressed and drained easily, though he can also be the opposite: energetic and caffeinated-like in situations with certain qualities, though it mainly depends on Georgle’s current mood. He usually checks, double-checks, and triple-checks everything Aniela does and tends to, not on purpose, however, trail behind her, since Aniela is very independent. But because of this, she ignores him most of the time, confident in her abilities, and therefore causes Georgle not to keep up with her almost ninety percent of the time he’s around her. Although, it is true that, without Georgle, Aniela’s missions and adventures would not run as smoothly, although she is determined not to admit that. Despite their mini rivalry, Aniela does enjoy having Georgle at her side, since he helps keep her emotions and temper in-check, whether she asks or not. So, in a way, Georgle is Aniela’s guide dog, helping her find her way to victory, though he is too humble to take any of the credit. For the most part, however, Georgle is shy and tentative, though he is eager and willing to take orders and will do anything for Aniela, including having his own life taken in any means if it helps her succeed. Additionally, their friendship runs deep, since they met through an orphanage, as they were both abandoned by their parents at an early age. They grew up together and cared for each other, becoming the family they never got to have. When they eventually escaped from the orphanage, they started an organization dedicated to adventuring to distant lands to gain money; something that they never got the opportunity to have as young orphans. This organization soon turned into a pirate crew, which they have run for more than six years now, and Georgle still tries his best to be there for Aniela and be the brother she never had, no matter the cost. (380 words)
Flesh the setting out in 150 words. (I got red and light blue
)The ship, swaying with the gentle tide of the light blue waters, holds the ship’s crew, which consists of its leader, Aniela, and the rest of her pirates. Aniela stares out at the sea, the slow rocking of the waves moving the ship ever so slightly. A beautiful array of red fills the sky, swallowing it in a rainbow of color. The red light of the sunset shines onto the blue waves, tinting it in a dark shade of maroon, mixing with the blue with an eerie glow. Aniela lets out a romantic sigh, her eyes glued to the beautiful moment as her breath comes out in a white puff of fog. She leans against the boat’s rails, which are made out of iron and are colored silver. Engraved near the bottom of the ship’s hull is the word “Titan” engraved in golden cursive print. The rest of the boat matches in a golden brown hue, giving the boat an elegant gleam. (162 words)
Once you have your characters and setting, do a free write with them for at least 400 words.
You'll be continuing this story later in Part 2, so there actually is a maximum for this part - your freewrite should NOT go beyond 500 words.
I wake, unable to sleep due to the jarring turns caused by the rough ocean waves. They slosh the boat around, causing me to stumble around the bottom floor, my auburn hair flying. My light brown eyes are half closed as I climb up the ladder, deciding to stay above deck instead of sleeping. At least up there I could throw up as much as I wanted. But when I reach the floor, I spot a familiar face.
“What are you doing here, Georgle?”
He turns around to face me, slightly alarmed since he didn’t hear me come up. Then he yawns. “I could say the same to you,” He says, looking smug and sleep deprived.
I scoff and move towards the rails where Georgle is, leaning against it with one arm and using the other to keep my balance.
Georgle, I respond, saying, “Couldn’t sleep.”
He looks towards me, concerned, as though that was a big problem. I hate when he does that; it makes everything seem like a problem. But then again, it’s kind of sweet, knowing that he always has my back and is constantly looking out for me.
He grabs my hand and squeezes it reassuringly as I gaze at the current, watching it swash mesmerizingly. Before I know it, I’ve fallen asleep, the lovely view of the bright red sunset still engraved inside my head.
The next morning, my eyes flutter open, noting Georgle still at my side with noticeable dark circles under his navy blue eyes.
Once I regain my senses, I yawn and push myself away from Georgle. I tell him to go to sleep, but, before he answers, I usher him into his bedroom and lock him inside. Brotherly love.
I then dust off my hands, take a deep breath, and head downstairs to face my fellow pirates.—
“Hey everyone!” I say as I swing open the door.
They all politely greet me back, some shaking the others awake impatiently, others hiding something behind their back, and the rest cleaning their weapons.
“I’ve found a treasure map.”
Everyone sits upright.
“Finally,” Phineas mutters, one of my least favorite pirates.
I ignore him and continue. “We’re going to travel to Hudson Bay and follow this map,” I wave the map around before continuing. “to find the treasure. But if I see a single one of you second guessing me or my opinions,” I glare at Phineas. “you’re getting thrown right off the ship. Are we clear?”
I get nods and a few grumbles —mostly from Phineas— as a response.
I take that as a yes and head back upstairs, the low heels of my boots clicking as I walk across the wooden floor. (450 words)
Part Two: 2096/1500 words
Continue playing until you've done six activities. The project will give you a notification when you have. At this point, you can either keep playing, or continue your story freely until you reach 1500 words.
i got: write a scene where a character talks with their conscience / have the lights suddenly go out in the next scene / give one of your characters amnesia / include three similes and a metaphor in what you've written so far / a frenemy disguises themself as a friend of your protagonist / have a character reveal an irrational fear /
bold letters = figurative language (for the challenge)
On my way to the top floor, I pass by Georgle’s room and finally unlock it. He greets my sly smile with an exaggerated sigh.
Together, we climb up the rungs of the ladder. When my head peeks out from below deck, I observe the action above. All I see is Georgle, who went up before me. No one else seems to be there.
As I reach the floor, I pass him, patting him on the back as I tell him about the treasure map. Once I am done, he looks back up at, his eyes wide with astonishment.
“Can I see?” He says, still shocked as he points to the treasure map.
I nod and hand it over. He scans it, intrigued, before looking back at me. “Well, what are you waiting for? Let’s go!”
I grin. “That’s the spirit.”
I call the pirates upstairs, and they do so, though most are still sleepy and are rubbing their eyes constantly— the only thing that’s keeping them awake.
Once everyone has come up, I say, “We will now start the mission.”
Everyone cheers and high-fives their friends— except Phineas, who doesn’t have any. He just rolls his eyes and folds his arms stubbornly.
“Take your positions!” I shout, causing everyone to dash around me in a blur, all hurrying to their stations with an excited energy.
The only person left is Georgle, who looks up at me expectantly.
I place a hand on his shoulder. “You, my friend, will stay with me.”
He grins and follows me to the front of the ship, everyone working hard to get it running as fast as possible. As soon as the sails are down, I start steering the ship forward, using the map as my guide.
I continue until the sun goes down, with Georgle continue pestering at me, saying that I should sleep.
“I can do the rest at night while you can rest,” Georgle says, somehow still at it.
I sigh, finally giving in. “Alright,” I say, wiping sweat from the hard day at work. “But only if you shut up after.”
He chuckles. “Come on, Aniela, you need to sleep.”
He drags me downstairs, the prying eyes of the crew staring at me as I go, causing the hairs on the back of my neck to stand straight up. As I wipe my sweat on my dress, I try to wipe away my fear as well. Something isn’t right…
But I don’t get to think much with Georgle still rambling on about how important sleep is all the way to my bedroom.
He swings open the door and locks me inside, winking before he does so and saying that it was revenge from earlier. I can’t blame him.
I sigh as I jump onto my bed, the sheets springing. I then lay down, trying to concentrate, though it’s hard with the constant sloshing of the waves moving the boat around all the time. The only good thing is that everything in here is nailed to the floor. It’s some comfort, though not much.
I take a deep breath and let my wrinkles cease, just thinking about me. Not the annoying Georgle and definitely not the pressuring crew. Especially not Phineas.
Being a leader in front of them is exhausting. And it’s draining me more than I know. But they need me more than I do. So, I have no choice, in a way.
I press my fingers against my temples and close my eyes, trying to stay calm. I take a deep breath and suddenly the world fades around me.—
When I open my eyes again, I have been transported to my happy place somewhere inside my mind, with no sea, no pirates, no drama. Just me for advice. And advice is exactly what I need.
I start spitting out questions, spilling all of my recent worries and troubles, though most are about Phineas’ behavior.
Before I realize what I’m doing, I have talked and complained and stressed about everything the crew has been pressuring me to do: starting with finding a new adventure, keeping my crew happy and entertained, having to stay calm and collected after having to deal with Phineas’ sour attitude, and making sure no one makes fun of Georgle, my little brother of sorts. And, of course, trying to stay sane after listening to all of those beheaded pirate captains that Phineas shares every night, somehow coming up with a new one that’s more devastating than the other. He gets his points across, though. Except I think I’m the only one who notices.
By the time I have finished, tears are spilling out of my eye —since one is covered by an eyepatch—, I am on my knees, pleading on the floor.
I give a shaky, hollow breath. “What should I do?”
What do they expect of you?
I wipe the recent tears and try to regain my composure. “I-I don’t know. Phineas thinks I’m a coward, a bad leader… but maybe I won’t be a leader any longer.” I have to keep blinking to stop tears from flowing again. “The scary part is that the others might follow him. I might have had to walk the plank myself if I didn’t find that treasure map. They were bored to death and yearned for adventure, so if I fail, I doubt anyone will take my side.”
What about Phineas?
“H-he is… complicated, to say the least. He will definitely support me, though I doubt that will make any difference. The rest of the crew does not see him as a threat; just a weak little boy who is always following me like a lost lamb. And… I have to agree.” I stop, hesitating before I continue. “The most he will do for me is comfort me as I struggle, which won’t help much in terms of battle strategy. Plus, it’s like thirty against two, which, I have to say, isn’t the best odds.”
Are you sure Phineas does not have anything else to offer?
“Well yeah,” I say. “He just—”
I stop, cutting myself off as I realize something. “Thank you,” I whisper, switching back into reality.—
I awake to the squeak of my cabin door’s hinges.
“Aniela,” Georgle hisses. “They need you upstairs!”
I groan and say, “Coming!”
I rub the tiredness out of my eyes and spring out of my bed, smiling more than I had been before.
I feel regenerated until I see Phineas waiting for me.
My blood starts to boil.
I sigh, placing my hand against my forehead in annoyance. “Not now, Phineas.”
Before he can answer, lightning strikes the sky in a flash of golden light, thunder soon following in its place.
But when the lightning fades away… it’s still pitch black.
Panic seizes my veins, and my crew’s too. No one can see anything so they’re all just screaming their heads off and bumping into each other like frightened puppies.
“Everyone, calm down!” I have to repeat the order multiple times before they finally do.
Suddenly it’s silent. All of them must be looking towards my voice. A chill goes down my back, and I have to take several deep breaths before I speak again.
“Does anyone have any lamps or candles?”
I hear a few murmurs of agreement, and satisfied, attempt to find my way back downstairs.
On the way down, my head accidentally hits something. I let out a pained gasp before the world fades around me.—
When my eyes flutter open, I wake to the blinding light of the sun shining into my eyes. I have to blink to see my surroundings. The sky is tinged with red, reflecting its color against the clear blue waters so that it looks like a whale died there. Where am I?
I struggle to get up, as I’m currently laying on a floor as smooth as a brick wall, though someone forces me back down. Suddenly, I notice that all around me are worried faces, saying things that I don’t understand. I search their faces for any form of recognition. It’s all blank.
“Aniela!” The man who forced me down earlier gives a relieved grin. “You’re awake! I was afraid that you’d never wake up.”
I gaze into his blue eyes, confused and lost. “W-who are you?”—
He tells me that my name is Aniela. I’m human. Female. Twenty-one years old.
Though, right now, I am a rock; dumb, slow, and stupid.
He explains everything he knows about me: about my past, the present, and what I want for the future. As he explains this, he never leaves my side, includes every little detail, and smoothes my hair and looks towards me after every memory, as if that might trigger it. It doesn’t.
Even after he explains my life story, I’m still as blank as an unused notebook. The only thing that I remember was waking up; nothing before that.
When the first tear trickles down his cheek, I start feeling sorry for the guy. I must’ve been a really big part of his life, and to lose it in the blink of an eye…
I have a strange feeling that I know how that feels.
I hug him.
We grieve together.—
He leaves me in my room, letting me think.
He gives me too much time.—
When he comes back, I remember everything. All of those memories, those old stories —even the sappy ones— have all come back.
I am about to tell him, but he seems interested in other subjects.
He sighs and joins me on my bed without asking first —not that I mind in the first place.
“How would you like it if we could go outside together?” At my perplexed expression he chuckles. “Just to relax, not remember. Just take a breath of fresh air and hope for the best, you know? Nothing fancy.”
I shift uncomfortably and say, “Okay, sure.”
Though something seems off.—
I knew what would happen even before he took out the knife.
Going up to the above deck, it was too quiet. It was never this quiet, and never had been before. Something was definitely off. I just couldn’t place it.
“It’s beautiful, isn’t it?” Georgle says, trying to start a conversation.
I look towards him quizzically. “What’s beautiful?”
He points to the sea. “Don’t you love how the sun shines onto the water, making it look like a sea of doom and blood…” He glances towards me hungrily. “…and vengeance.”
I hear him unsheathe his knife from his coat pocket, and luckily sprang out of the way before I get stabbed, nearly missing the target.
I take a deep, shuddering breath. “Why are you doing this?”
He laughs. But not like Georgle.
“Who are you?”—
He rips off his disguise gleefully, revealing…
“Phineas?!”
Another laugh, as though my reaction was amusing.
He smiles smugly. “Who were you expecting?’
I growl. “That’s enough, Phineas. Put down the knife,” I say, eyeing it suspiciously as I anticipated another attack.
When he swung, I flipped and took it from him before it could scrape me.
I could see the scales tipping.
“What are y-”
I stab him.—
One week later…
I awake from the nightmares that never stop coming.
It’s always the same scene: stabbing Phineas in the chest. the blood pouring onto my hands. His pained screams echoing forever until morning comes.
An never-ending abyss of fear and hatred and blood and revenge.
Georgle —the real one— walks into the room, not caring enough to knock. At my pained expression he stops dead in his tracks.
“What’s wrong?” He bends down to meet my eye level, but I shoo him away.
“It’s nothing,” I lie, trying to regain my composure.
I haven’t told anyone about the nightmares yet, nor my fear.
He sighs. “You don’t need to lie to me.”
So I stop. “After I killed Phineas, I’ve been having nightmares about the same scene, over and over and over again…”
I gaze into his lovely blue eyes, looking towards them for support. “I think I’m afraid.”
Georgle’s eyes widen. “Of what?”
“Of someone betraying me.”
His expression turns serious and hard to read, leaving me impatient.
Finally, he speaks. “Aniela, if you ever have any problems, don’t be afraid to come to me.”
I have to blink repeatedly to stop the tears in my eyes from spilling. “Really?”
“Of course. I’ll always be there for you.”
I smile. “And I’ll always be there for you.”
I rest my head against his shoulders, finally at peace.
sorry for the bad ending and having my writing slowly getting worse as i neared the end ;;; by then i was getting impatient, so sorry aufonalf
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Wow so this was the longest part of the weekly when this was a thing we had to do but we did it in a day this time i love @stormiiikat
MINE: 300
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helloooo Idk if you're online but I had some ideas and we have to do this in one day and for me this was the hardest part of the weekly so I might freaking die but anyways, I was thinking could we try and tell like a simplish story? Something with a sheep- maybe idk it just came to mind
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@IvyCreations Yeah, that would be good! You start ^^
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@StormiiKat Once upon a time, there was a particularly strange and quite funky sheep. It was very lonely up on its hill, basking in the coruscating sunbeams. All it had to do day after day was eat grass, hay, and more grass. It was not quite sure what its purpose was on this earth, though it was fairly certain that it was to eat grass. It was a sheep. What else were sheeps meant for? You couldn't ride on them like horses or milk them like cows. The sheep was lonely…. until one day, when…..
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@IvyCreations When a lone shepherd came along. The shepherd had been sad and lonely because he had no friends and not even any sheep. When the shepherd saw the strange sheep, he realized that he could finally own his very own sheep! The shepherd neared the sheep, but the sheep backed up a little bit. After all, when being a sheep, you can never be sure if someone wants to eat you or not.
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@StormiiKat The sheep was quite confused. A person??? The sheep had never met a person in… person before! It was very excited but of course also scared- it did not want to become bacon, or whatever it is sheep become sometimes. “Baaaa” it baaaaa'd at the shepherd. It was more of a neutral baa than a happy, sad or angry baa- it was trying to be cautious around this shepherd. Was he a good person? The sheep would have to find out!
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@IvyCreations The shepherd reached down and patted the sheep on its head. “Good sheep,” the shepherd said. “Let's be friends.” The sheep was beginning to trust this person more and more, but he still did not want to be made into lamb stew. “Baaaa?” it baaaa'd at the shepherd, meaning to ask if the shepherd would eat it. “You're a funny little guy, aren't you?” The shepherd said to the sheep, patting it again.
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@StormiiKat “Baaa!” Said the sheep, a sound which meant “Only the funniest,” but of course the shepherd would not understand that. The sheep thought it funny that it could understand the words the shepherd said, but the shepherd could not understand it. The sheep was a very happy sheep when the shepherd reached down to pat it, and it thought that it should be BEST friends with this shepherd until the end of time. The shepherd decided he was going to take this sheep home.
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations On the way of taking the sheep home, the shepherd decided that it was going to MacFonald's, which was a tavern and inn. The shepherd purchased some lamb stew inside and took it out to share with the sheep. “BAaAaaAAA!!!!” the sheep said, offended at being offered cannibalism. “Oops!” The shepherd said and went back in to get a bowl of oats. He brought it out and the sheep forgave him.
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat The sheep and the shepherd soon became the best of friends. They liked to sit and watch the dreamy sunsets together, and the sheep really liked when the shepherd read it its very favorite books. Most of all, the sheep liked
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations -to go on walks with the shepherd in the early morning before it was light out. The sheep did not understand why the shepherd insisted on doing so- after all, being a sheep, the sheep was naturally fat and the sheep did not see any point in losing any of the sheep's fat. The shepherd brought the sheep with him though, and the sheep didn't mind very much as long as they could spend time together. Over time, the two became inseparable and would be for the rest of their lives.
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat Okay so 1) I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH and 2) I AM SUBMITTING THIS NOW
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MINE: 300
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IvyCreations
helloooo Idk if you're online but I had some ideas and we have to do this in one day and for me this was the hardest part of the weekly so I might freaking die but anyways, I was thinking could we try and tell like a simplish story? Something with a sheep- maybe idk it just came to mind
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations Yeah, that would be good! You start ^^
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat Once upon a time, there was a particularly strange and quite funky sheep. It was very lonely up on its hill, basking in the coruscating sunbeams. All it had to do day after day was eat grass, hay, and more grass. It was not quite sure what its purpose was on this earth, though it was fairly certain that it was to eat grass. It was a sheep. What else were sheeps meant for? You couldn't ride on them like horses or milk them like cows. The sheep was lonely…. until one day, when…..
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations When a lone shepherd came along. The shepherd had been sad and lonely because he had no friends and not even any sheep. When the shepherd saw the strange sheep, he realized that he could finally own his very own sheep! The shepherd neared the sheep, but the sheep backed up a little bit. After all, when being a sheep, you can never be sure if someone wants to eat you or not.
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat The sheep was quite confused. A person??? The sheep had never met a person in… person before! It was very excited but of course also scared- it did not want to become bacon, or whatever it is sheep become sometimes. “Baaaa” it baaaaa'd at the shepherd. It was more of a neutral baa than a happy, sad or angry baa- it was trying to be cautious around this shepherd. Was he a good person? The sheep would have to find out!
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations The shepherd reached down and patted the sheep on its head. “Good sheep,” the shepherd said. “Let's be friends.” The sheep was beginning to trust this person more and more, but he still did not want to be made into lamb stew. “Baaaa?” it baaaa'd at the shepherd, meaning to ask if the shepherd would eat it. “You're a funny little guy, aren't you?” The shepherd said to the sheep, patting it again.
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat “Baaa!” Said the sheep, a sound which meant “Only the funniest,” but of course the shepherd would not understand that. The sheep thought it funny that it could understand the words the shepherd said, but the shepherd could not understand it. The sheep was a very happy sheep when the shepherd reached down to pat it, and it thought that it should be BEST friends with this shepherd until the end of time. The shepherd decided he was going to take this sheep home.
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations On the way of taking the sheep home, the shepherd decided that it was going to MacFonald's, which was a tavern and inn. The shepherd purchased some lamb stew inside and took it out to share with the sheep. “BAaAaaAAA!!!!” the sheep said, offended at being offered cannibalism. “Oops!” The shepherd said and went back in to get a bowl of oats. He brought it out and the sheep forgave him.
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat The sheep and the shepherd soon became the best of friends. They liked to sit and watch the dreamy sunsets together, and the sheep really liked when the shepherd read it its very favorite books. Most of all, the sheep liked
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StormiiKat
@IvyCreations -to go on walks with the shepherd in the early morning before it was light out. The sheep did not understand why the shepherd insisted on doing so- after all, being a sheep, the sheep was naturally fat and the sheep did not see any point in losing any of the sheep's fat. The shepherd brought the sheep with him though, and the sheep didn't mind very much as long as they could spend time together. Over time, the two became inseparable and would be for the rest of their lives.
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IvyCreations
@StormiiKat Okay so 1) I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH and 2) I AM SUBMITTING THIS NOW
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
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- YorkiesAreAmazing123
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Penelope quietly strolled across the edge of a pond, searching for a sign of prey. There was a small chance that a fish would appear from the murky water she was surrounded by and an even smaller chance that she would be able to find food for the day. As the sun set, a cold wind went through her curly black hair as she stared down at the freezing pond, noticing a small fish-like shadow in the river.
“Finally, a chance.” Penelope mumbled as she threw her rusty fishing rod into the now clear pond, channeling all her focus onto the scrawny fish.
Penelope then prayed to her God, asking him to guide the fish toward her rod so she could end her hunger that she had for so many days. Little by little, the fish started to move towards her rod, making Penelope feel like her lord had answered her prayer. Penelope smiled. Not even a thousand suns could explain her gratefulness at the moment.
After a few minutes had passed, the fish was finally in the perfect position to be caught. She then exerted all of her strength into reeling the fish out of the water. It felt to Penelope as if the fish was getting stronger and stronger by the second since it was pulling harder and harder, and her restless, starving, muscles were not helping her to catch it either.
Minutes passed and Penelope was not even close to reeling the fish up.
“Come on, come on!” Penelope yelled as the minutes grew longer and her motivation gradually cut away.
Penelope’s heart cried when she finally reeled in not a fish-
but a broken, white, plastic can.
Penelope threw her fishing rod over to the nearest tree, wondering when she would meet her parents again.
Feeling ashamed of her fruitless efforts, she trudged over to the wooden cabin she had built for herself, hearing a sound from a bush nearby.
She instantly went into a fighting stance her dad taught her when she was young.
“Who’s there?” she yelled as she stood steadily on the moist grass below her.
Nobody answered. She then heard a rustle once more from the bush and after a few minutes had passed, she decided to check the bush for predators. Penelope had never walked slower to something than she did at that moment. Every step was a risk after all, her grandmother did die from a gun shot a man in a bush.
When she had finally approached the bush, she realized that the only thing that was in the it was a squirrel eating a few nuts.
A sigh of relief came out of Penelope’s mouth as she walked over to her cabin, which at the moment of was her only achievement in this journey. It was a fair house compared to the houses at her village. She built every bit of it. She cut down the oak trees, pulled the logs down, and did not even complain about all the back pain she got in return from it all. She was proud of what she built by herself and could not wait to welcome her family to her home.
As she saw the moon primly sit upon the black sky, she reminded herself to notch her log with her sword since another day had gone by. As she notched another line onto the log, she realized that she never had counted the amount of days that had passed. Penelope then put on a stiff face after counting the lines. Seventy four days. That was the amount of time she had been alone.
Penelope’s family left her when she was ten years old and promised her that they would return within forty days worth of time. They said that if they hadn’t returned, they would send a letter to her. Her family did not tell her even the smallest hint at why they had to leave, they just kind of.. left. There was not to many reasons for one to question why Penelope was shaking with fear when she noticed that more than forty days had gone by.
Penelope’s heart sank as a hundred horrible scenarios popped up into her mind.
/Maybe they forgot about me. Maybe they died. Maybe they came here and saw the cabin I built and thought that it was so ugly, they left!/
She got dizzy just thinking about it. Penelope bolted into her cabin when she reminded herself that she needed to get eight hours of sleep. She might not like to admit it, but Penelope had a phobia of lack of sleep since when she was younger, her and her sister had been tortured by a man that went by the name Xavier who forced them to stay awake without any food for three days straight. It was an exhausting, terrifying, experience but whenever she had reminded herself about it, she just remembered how she could face anything, anywhere.
As she quietly went to sleep on her bed, the moon glowed.
The next morning came. Penelope heard a few quiet chirps from the birds outside that made a beautiful harmony. As she opened the door to look outside, she heard a loud noise coming from a tree.
/An intruder?/ she thought as she grabbed the sword that was neatly placed along her door. She then saw a majestic messenger owl appear from the tree, flying elegantly.
/I wonder who the message is from! Is it my parents?/
Penelope’s mind wandered into a door of happy thoughts. She then remembered that her parent’s owl messenger had a red strap attached to his leg so she focused her eyes on the leg of the owl, wondering if this owl was sent by her parents. As she observed the right leg, she did not see a red strap on the leg.
Penelope sighed, hoping that her parents were okay and well.
The owl softly landed upon Penelope’s left arm with the envelope that contained the message on his left leg. Penelope quickly grabbed the envelope ripping it open, noticing that the name on it was not anybody she knew.
Dear Penelope Rodriguez-Lopez,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have come to alert you that your family has died from a surprise attack while they were riding a bus about forty days ago. Do not stress, I am on my way to the cabin you had built to take care of you.
With love, Grandpa Thomas
“Finally, a chance.” Penelope mumbled as she threw her rusty fishing rod into the now clear pond, channeling all her focus onto the scrawny fish.
Penelope then prayed to her God, asking him to guide the fish toward her rod so she could end her hunger that she had for so many days. Little by little, the fish started to move towards her rod, making Penelope feel like her lord had answered her prayer. Penelope smiled. Not even a thousand suns could explain her gratefulness at the moment.
After a few minutes had passed, the fish was finally in the perfect position to be caught. She then exerted all of her strength into reeling the fish out of the water. It felt to Penelope as if the fish was getting stronger and stronger by the second since it was pulling harder and harder, and her restless, starving, muscles were not helping her to catch it either.
Minutes passed and Penelope was not even close to reeling the fish up.
“Come on, come on!” Penelope yelled as the minutes grew longer and her motivation gradually cut away.
Penelope’s heart cried when she finally reeled in not a fish-
but a broken, white, plastic can.
Penelope threw her fishing rod over to the nearest tree, wondering when she would meet her parents again.
Feeling ashamed of her fruitless efforts, she trudged over to the wooden cabin she had built for herself, hearing a sound from a bush nearby.
She instantly went into a fighting stance her dad taught her when she was young.
“Who’s there?” she yelled as she stood steadily on the moist grass below her.
Nobody answered. She then heard a rustle once more from the bush and after a few minutes had passed, she decided to check the bush for predators. Penelope had never walked slower to something than she did at that moment. Every step was a risk after all, her grandmother did die from a gun shot a man in a bush.
When she had finally approached the bush, she realized that the only thing that was in the it was a squirrel eating a few nuts.
A sigh of relief came out of Penelope’s mouth as she walked over to her cabin, which at the moment of was her only achievement in this journey. It was a fair house compared to the houses at her village. She built every bit of it. She cut down the oak trees, pulled the logs down, and did not even complain about all the back pain she got in return from it all. She was proud of what she built by herself and could not wait to welcome her family to her home.
As she saw the moon primly sit upon the black sky, she reminded herself to notch her log with her sword since another day had gone by. As she notched another line onto the log, she realized that she never had counted the amount of days that had passed. Penelope then put on a stiff face after counting the lines. Seventy four days. That was the amount of time she had been alone.
Penelope’s family left her when she was ten years old and promised her that they would return within forty days worth of time. They said that if they hadn’t returned, they would send a letter to her. Her family did not tell her even the smallest hint at why they had to leave, they just kind of.. left. There was not to many reasons for one to question why Penelope was shaking with fear when she noticed that more than forty days had gone by.
Penelope’s heart sank as a hundred horrible scenarios popped up into her mind.
/Maybe they forgot about me. Maybe they died. Maybe they came here and saw the cabin I built and thought that it was so ugly, they left!/
She got dizzy just thinking about it. Penelope bolted into her cabin when she reminded herself that she needed to get eight hours of sleep. She might not like to admit it, but Penelope had a phobia of lack of sleep since when she was younger, her and her sister had been tortured by a man that went by the name Xavier who forced them to stay awake without any food for three days straight. It was an exhausting, terrifying, experience but whenever she had reminded herself about it, she just remembered how she could face anything, anywhere.
As she quietly went to sleep on her bed, the moon glowed.
The next morning came. Penelope heard a few quiet chirps from the birds outside that made a beautiful harmony. As she opened the door to look outside, she heard a loud noise coming from a tree.
/An intruder?/ she thought as she grabbed the sword that was neatly placed along her door. She then saw a majestic messenger owl appear from the tree, flying elegantly.
/I wonder who the message is from! Is it my parents?/
Penelope’s mind wandered into a door of happy thoughts. She then remembered that her parent’s owl messenger had a red strap attached to his leg so she focused her eyes on the leg of the owl, wondering if this owl was sent by her parents. As she observed the right leg, she did not see a red strap on the leg.
Penelope sighed, hoping that her parents were okay and well.
The owl softly landed upon Penelope’s left arm with the envelope that contained the message on his left leg. Penelope quickly grabbed the envelope ripping it open, noticing that the name on it was not anybody she knew.
Dear Penelope Rodriguez-Lopez,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have come to alert you that your family has died from a surprise attack while they were riding a bus about forty days ago. Do not stress, I am on my way to the cabin you had built to take care of you.
With love, Grandpa Thomas
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
Cabin Wars-
You walk through the forest, and a dark shadow appears. “Come with me, and you’ll find all the wonderful candies and friends and toys and plushies.” You hesitate. Your mum (mom) had told you to never listen and obey strangers. But could you always trust your mother? You eventually say “No.”. You dash off, looking for where your friends are, where they are waiting to toast marshmallows with you, where they are waiting to make smores with you, where they are waiting to sing and sleep with you.
You walk through the forest, and a dark shadow appears. “Come with me, and you’ll find all the wonderful candies and friends and toys and plushies.” You hesitate. Your mum (mom) had told you to never listen and obey strangers. But could you always trust your mother? You eventually say “No.”. You dash off, looking for where your friends are, where they are waiting to toast marshmallows with you, where they are waiting to make smores with you, where they are waiting to sing and sleep with you.
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Scratch Writing Camp Writing Sharing Thread (March 2022)
DAILY
Me-
I woke, sweating. Today was where she would leave everything behind. Not that she had anything to leave. Since she was 6 she was left on her own to survive. 14 years she had survived on her own. Now it was time for her to leave, and find new people, new places. It would be her and Dream. Dream was the only person she knew. She slipped out her rundown mattress, pushing off a scraggly shawl. She walked out, to the small shed she had managed to build out of mud, twigs, grass, and hay. “Dream?” she called out. A whinny answered her.
@imaperson-ithink -
“Today’s the day, Dream,” she said, excited but nervous. She tugged on the bag on her shoulders, made of leaves, vines, and cloth scraps. “Today’s the day,” she repeated, trailing off at the end. She has been waiting for this day for 8 years, more than half her lifetime. She decided that when she was old enough, and had enough food to last, she would leave the forest, in search of some sort of civilization. Now that she finally fit the requirement she set, she could, at last, find a way home.
Me-
She slipped onto Dreams back, spurring her into a steady gait. She pulled out her map, made out of pressed leaves and berry ink. She had been exploring to find a way out of the forest for 3 weeks, until she finally saw an opening where the trees began thinning out. She didn't dare explore more after that. Tracing the path on her map, she tucked it into her bag. Taking a deep breath, carefully led Dream throughout the forest. It wasn't easy for a horse to move quickly through a forest, and she had to carefully guid her through the mess of trees, logs, and the occasional stream.
@imaperson-ithink-
Slowly, the trees started spreading out, and beyond them, a vast plain of grass and flowers. It seemed to stretch on forever in all directions but behind them. “We made it out,” she said, “But now we need to find our way in.” Dream replied with a whinny. She stroked Dream's mane, remembering when she had found her. It was an impossibly cold night, and Mae was only eleven. She was scared that she was going to freeze to death, until the horse, much smaller at the time, stumbled upon her shelter. She slowly approached it, in hopes that getting close could generate warmth. They both stayed near each other all night, keeping each other warm.
Me-
Mae smiled at the memories. Dream had proved to be a trustworthy and loyal horse. “Come on. We are going home.” Dream, delighted to be in an open space, took off in a fast gallop. They covered several miles before dusk. Mae kept riding, looking for a shelter, until she found a large hill. Near the foot of the hill was a big tree, providing shade for both of them. She slid off Dream, and pulled out some food, her old matress, with her shawl. She let Dream graze for a bit, eating the grass, until she lay down under the tree. She drifted off into sleep.
@imaperson-ithink-
Suddenly, she was awakened by a wet drop hitting her face. She sprang up, to see gray clouds moving overhead. “Oh no,” she said. She remembered the time that a tree was struck with lightning a couple years ago, the fire didn’t stop for 3 days, and burned half of her garden. She knew that the tree had a large chance of getting struck, due to how tall it was, and standing under it could mean death. But, standing in the open gave a chance for it to hit her directly. Standing on the hill would make her elevation above the tree, even more chance to be struck. She silently prayed to herself that there would be no lightning, and it would pass quickly. Just then, lightning shot the ground a few miles away, thunder following soon after. Dream whinnied. So much for no lightning.
Me-
Dream began pawing the ground. Another bolt struck the ground, and Dream couldn’t take it any longer. She took off, galloping. “Dream! No!” Mae stumbled to her feet and ran as fast as she could. “Dream! Dream!” She kept running, scared for herself and Dream. Dream finally heard her calls, and paused. As she got closer, she saw a flash of light in the corner of her eye, and everything went black.
She awoke slumped on a couch. She saw a flickering fire, and realized she was in a hut.
Me-
I woke, sweating. Today was where she would leave everything behind. Not that she had anything to leave. Since she was 6 she was left on her own to survive. 14 years she had survived on her own. Now it was time for her to leave, and find new people, new places. It would be her and Dream. Dream was the only person she knew. She slipped out her rundown mattress, pushing off a scraggly shawl. She walked out, to the small shed she had managed to build out of mud, twigs, grass, and hay. “Dream?” she called out. A whinny answered her.
@imaperson-ithink -
“Today’s the day, Dream,” she said, excited but nervous. She tugged on the bag on her shoulders, made of leaves, vines, and cloth scraps. “Today’s the day,” she repeated, trailing off at the end. She has been waiting for this day for 8 years, more than half her lifetime. She decided that when she was old enough, and had enough food to last, she would leave the forest, in search of some sort of civilization. Now that she finally fit the requirement she set, she could, at last, find a way home.
Me-
She slipped onto Dreams back, spurring her into a steady gait. She pulled out her map, made out of pressed leaves and berry ink. She had been exploring to find a way out of the forest for 3 weeks, until she finally saw an opening where the trees began thinning out. She didn't dare explore more after that. Tracing the path on her map, she tucked it into her bag. Taking a deep breath, carefully led Dream throughout the forest. It wasn't easy for a horse to move quickly through a forest, and she had to carefully guid her through the mess of trees, logs, and the occasional stream.
@imaperson-ithink-
Slowly, the trees started spreading out, and beyond them, a vast plain of grass and flowers. It seemed to stretch on forever in all directions but behind them. “We made it out,” she said, “But now we need to find our way in.” Dream replied with a whinny. She stroked Dream's mane, remembering when she had found her. It was an impossibly cold night, and Mae was only eleven. She was scared that she was going to freeze to death, until the horse, much smaller at the time, stumbled upon her shelter. She slowly approached it, in hopes that getting close could generate warmth. They both stayed near each other all night, keeping each other warm.
Me-
Mae smiled at the memories. Dream had proved to be a trustworthy and loyal horse. “Come on. We are going home.” Dream, delighted to be in an open space, took off in a fast gallop. They covered several miles before dusk. Mae kept riding, looking for a shelter, until she found a large hill. Near the foot of the hill was a big tree, providing shade for both of them. She slid off Dream, and pulled out some food, her old matress, with her shawl. She let Dream graze for a bit, eating the grass, until she lay down under the tree. She drifted off into sleep.
@imaperson-ithink-
Suddenly, she was awakened by a wet drop hitting her face. She sprang up, to see gray clouds moving overhead. “Oh no,” she said. She remembered the time that a tree was struck with lightning a couple years ago, the fire didn’t stop for 3 days, and burned half of her garden. She knew that the tree had a large chance of getting struck, due to how tall it was, and standing under it could mean death. But, standing in the open gave a chance for it to hit her directly. Standing on the hill would make her elevation above the tree, even more chance to be struck. She silently prayed to herself that there would be no lightning, and it would pass quickly. Just then, lightning shot the ground a few miles away, thunder following soon after. Dream whinnied. So much for no lightning.
Me-
Dream began pawing the ground. Another bolt struck the ground, and Dream couldn’t take it any longer. She took off, galloping. “Dream! No!” Mae stumbled to her feet and ran as fast as she could. “Dream! Dream!” She kept running, scared for herself and Dream. Dream finally heard her calls, and paused. As she got closer, she saw a flash of light in the corner of her eye, and everything went black.
She awoke slumped on a couch. She saw a flickering fire, and realized she was in a hut.
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