SuperCooperHobbies wrote:

Rubixcube908 wrote:

SuperCooperHobbies wrote:

username: Super Cooper Hobbies
what do you want (or package): project review
how much time(minimum 3 days): Not in a particular hurry, but the sooner the better
are you following this thread: Yes
have you read the rules: Yes
other: Project Link: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/629429274/

i have checked it and here is the review: you did a nice job with the automatic views and subs. you should make the wait to upload new video shorter cause it took FOREVER(im exaggerating but it still took a while).

Thanks! I shortened the time a bit and I'm going to add more features in. Thanks for your help!

Rubixcube908 wrote:

Rubixcube908 wrote:

respond by february 21

Rubixcube908 wrote:

respond by february 21

Purvitekriwal wrote:

Rubixcube908 wrote:

respond by february 21

Hi

Rubixcube908 wrote:

Purvitekriwal wrote:

Rubixcube908 wrote:

respond by february 21

Hi

what position do you want?

Purvitekriwal wrote:

Rubixcube908 wrote:

Purvitekriwal wrote:

Rubixcube908 wrote:

respond by february 21

Hi

what position do you want?

I am a staff member of this shop already although in bod i want to be a vice president

Jolia_RKW wrote:

username: Jolia_RKW
what do you want (or package): pfp
Please can it be pale sunset sky background with a white ‘J’ and thin black outline in the center
how much time(minimum 3 days): 3 days (3rd February)
are you following this thread: nope
have you read the rules: yea also like the black background of your banner
Notify in my profile!
other: test order for white tiger federation

Rubixcube908 wrote:

Jolia_RKW wrote:

username: Jolia_RKW
what do you want (or package): pfp
Please can it be pale sunset sky background with a white ‘J’ and thin black outline in the center
how much time(minimum 3 days): 3 days (3rd February)
are you following this thread: nope
have you read the rules: yea also like the black background of your banner
Notify in my profile!
other: test order for white tiger federation

taken!

Review for the Dark Shop

This review was completed by Jolia_RKW from the тнε Wнıтε Tıɢεя Fεᴅεяαтıσп for this shop and uses their official colour/s

First Look 6/10
You have great banners and a nice what we offer you also have packages. However, I believe a use of the big, bold and colour tags would improve. For instance, a use of bold and coloured text would help define titles and give your shop a professional look. Also a directory with links to each page and some reviews. See below for example (color is #b72127)

Welcome to The Dark Shop!
We offer:
Reveiws
Pfps
intros
Logos

*if you don't see something you want, just ask. it might be added!
Packages
1A
- intro
- Logo
1B
- shop Review

BBCode Formatting 7/10
BBCode isn't used as much, again, I think titles instead of capital letters use bold and colour such as an official colour (I recommend #b72127 as it's matches your banner). However in the BoD the BBCode is good.

Product Quality 10/10
No further improvements

Speed 10/10
No further improvements

Customer Service 9/10
I was notified in the correct place and given a link to the PFP. However, on the thread there was no taken so the order looks incomplete. I recommend saying complete in both the notification on the profile and forum.

Accessibility 7/10
There is a history and resources as well as about. However no Directory or review form. Consider adding those to make your shop better

Overall 78.4/100

A few things to improve and make your shop even better would be:

• Add shop colours and use them to define titles
  
• Improve the shop grammar to look more professional
  
• Add a directory and review form
  
• Add Reviews to the front page
  
• Notify on the forum and profile

Rubixcube908 wrote: