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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

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A new project has been added to the Phase 1 slate, which will be directed and written by @boom2ratz.
I lost it btw, ill just rewrite that chunk….
Anyway can i know what phase one is?
I Recommend having 6 projects in phase one
That's sad, but hopefully you'll be able to remember. Yeah, I'm aiming for around 6-10. Also, do you mean what the projects are, or what the phase in general is about? (Like how MCU Phase 4 is about the multiverse.)
Both
I already have plans for a sequel to Fantastic four, maybe 1 & 2 can be developed back to back
You’ll see what I mean though, the 2 post credits scenes to 1 perfectly set up a sequel

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Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

A new project has been added to the Phase 1 slate, which will be directed and written by @boom2ratz.
I lost it btw, ill just rewrite that chunk….
Anyway can i know what phase one is?
I Recommend having 6 projects in phase one
That's sad, but hopefully you'll be able to remember. Yeah, I'm aiming for around 6-10. Also, do you mean what the projects are, or what the phase in general is about? (Like how MCU Phase 4 is about the multiverse.)
Both
I already have plans for a sequel to Fantastic four, maybe 1 & 2 can be developed back to back
You’ll see what I mean though, the 2 post credits scenes to 1 perfectly set up a sequel
Okay. I might tell you. The general idea is about heroes coming together. Also, cool.

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

A new project has been added to the Phase 1 slate, which will be directed and written by @boom2ratz.
I lost it btw, ill just rewrite that chunk….
Anyway can i know what phase one is?
I Recommend having 6 projects in phase one
That's sad, but hopefully you'll be able to remember. Yeah, I'm aiming for around 6-10. Also, do you mean what the projects are, or what the phase in general is about? (Like how MCU Phase 4 is about the multiverse.)
Both
I already have plans for a sequel to Fantastic four, maybe 1 & 2 can be developed back to back
You’ll see what I mean though, the 2 post credits scenes to 1 perfectly set up a sequel
Okay. I might tell you. The general idea is about heroes coming together. Also, cool.
So will we have 1 & 2 be made back to back.

Matjam02;
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Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

A new project has been added to the Phase 1 slate, which will be directed and written by @boom2ratz.
I lost it btw, ill just rewrite that chunk….
Anyway can i know what phase one is?
I Recommend having 6 projects in phase one
That's sad, but hopefully you'll be able to remember. Yeah, I'm aiming for around 6-10. Also, do you mean what the projects are, or what the phase in general is about? (Like how MCU Phase 4 is about the multiverse.)
Both
I already have plans for a sequel to Fantastic four, maybe 1 & 2 can be developed back to back
You’ll see what I mean though, the 2 post credits scenes to 1 perfectly set up a sequel
Okay. I might tell you. The general idea is about heroes coming together. Also, cool.
So will we have 1 & 2 be made back to back.
Okay.

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We open with Victor Von Doom in 1457 in Latveria, he’s king, he tells his wife he is going to observe a huge solar flare coming towards earth (he calls it dragons breath as back then they didn’t know what it was), we see he loves his wife very much). He travels to a nearby hill (pretty high) and observes the flare as it hits earth, this one is odd and it contains a huge amount of quantum proportion, it zaps doom and takes him away.

In 1980s USA, we see Reed Richards, Sue Storm, Ben Grimm & Johnny Storm boarding A space shuttle, as they are shot up, Professor Franklin Storm (through comms) mentions that they’re just there to observe this strange solar flare. When they get to this space station, Reed & Ben take some readings and find out that this solar flare thats sending out an odd amount of quantum particle. Suddenly a figure (who for now we see as a silhouette) gets shot out of the flare and through the space station, it goes through and as there’s a hole in the glass: Reed, sue, Ben & Johnny get sucked out of the space station and towards the flare, the flare shoots out a lot of radiation which is absorbed by the four. Reed feels like his head is about to explode, Johnny feels really hot etc. The four fall unconscious in space.

The four awake in a government facility where they are being experimented on, Dr Allen (the person experimenting on them) mentions that they’ll be taken to solitary confinement until they find out what’s going on with them. The four breakout and we get a really awesome scene where four use there abilities (first they can’t really control them, but by the end of this awesome action scene they can), the four escape but Johnny makes sure to grab a lunch box (which he thinks contains food - later we’ll come to find out it Dosnt).

We cut to a military site, where this mysterious figure wakes up, we see who it is, doom….who is now heavily disfigured. He is being inspected by a troop of military scientists, doom wakes up and grabs a scientist by the neck and screams, “where is she!?!?!”, the scientist doesn't know who he means, doom promptly zaps the scientist with his green electricity and it fries his neck, the scientist dies. Doom kills the rest and then walks into one of there tents, he scans a TV with his hand by touching the TV, all the information since 1457 goes into his brain, he asks himself, “where is Maria” and then Walks over to a laptop and types in “Maria Von Doom”, he finds an article saying, “Maria Von Doom Of Latveria, Queen To Missing King Victor Von Doom, Remians Have Allegedly Been Found. Rumours Said Maria Died After Invasion Struck Latveria From Symkaria”. Screaming In Anger Victor Vows to travel back to his wife in any way possible and lets out a huge ray of electricity.

The four travel through a train tunnel, as there technically fugitives, Ben becomes hungry and Reed figures that due to Ben’s size, he’ll need a lot of food otherwise he’ll starve. Johnny opens the lunch box and discovers it to be a secret laptop, which states that they’ll be another solar flare 10 times the size and radioactive and they sent the four to see the first one, to see if such one would alter them in anyway just in case they needed to prepare for it since it’ll arrive in 7 days time. Suddenly sue gets a splitting headache and hears dooms voice, she walks away from the group for a bit and doom seems to be talking to her, she tries to block him out and succeeds temporarily. She tells the group they need to head back to the base as someone’s coming, someone powerful.

We see Victor Von Doom Breaking into the NASA base base we get a really cool action sequence of him kind of taking everyone down there and then he approaches Professor Franklin storm and grabbed him by the neck an Asks one simple question: when is the next solar flare, Franklin says it is coming in one day but doesn’t know why Victor then explains he wants to use his power of telekinesis to wrap it around the Earth so he can travel back to his wife. Franklin warms them this will be a bad idea and it might even collide the 1980s with 1457, Doom throws him aside and zaps him, he survives but is in critical condition. The fantastic four then rush into the building and help everyone inside, Johnny approaches his father (Franklin) and rushes him outside to an ambulance. Read, Sue and Ben then take on Doom, Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all. We get an amazing action sequence (like really a massive next level stuff) and we finished the action sequence with do winning the fight and snatching the lunchbox off of Johnny, Reed at the last second tries to latch on to do but do teleports away. Before then rushed outside to see the police which frankly explains to that before a heroes and the charges should be dropped. We then cut to a scene in a hospital where Franklin is in critical condition and the four are in civilian clothes and are surrounding him, Franklin tells the four dooms plan and tells them that the next solar flare is dangerous and if the previous one gave the bees powers then this one will either collide the 1980s with 1457 or could even bring a dormant disease that nowadays we would have no ability to combat to the present or maybe even something worse. Johnny and raged that doom would do such a thing to the Earth, to his father, to his sister, or to his friends sets in self blaze and flies out the window vowing to kill Doom, Ben agrees with read but he will go after him and stop him from doing anything reckless. We then see a scene where Reed & Sue Are at a court hearing, where The judge ruled them innocent but under pressure from the jury has to make the decision to execute a plan with the government for their powers to be removed. Read and Sue then leave the courthouse, happy and angry with the result, and suddenly realise that Ben is not back with Johnny, the to have a flirtatious moment which leads to them kissing.

I’ll do more later

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Awesome plot!

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We open with Victor Von Doom in 1457 in Latveria, he’s king, he tells his wife he is going to observe a huge solar flare coming towards earth (he calls it dragons breath as back then they didn’t know what it was), we see he loves his wife very much). He travels to a nearby hill (pretty high) and observes the flare as it hits earth, this one is odd and it contains a huge amount of quantum proportion, it zaps doom and takes him away.

In 1980s USA, we see Reed Richards, Sue Storm, Ben Grimm & Johnny Storm boarding A space shuttle, as they are shot up, Professor Franklin Storm (through comms) mentions that they’re just there to observe this strange solar flare. When they get to this space station, Reed & Ben take some readings and find out that this solar flare thats sending out an odd amount of quantum particle. Suddenly a figure (who for now we see as a silhouette) gets shot out of the flare and through the space station, it goes through and as there’s a hole in the glass: Reed, sue, Ben & Johnny get sucked out of the space station and towards the flare, the flare shoots out a lot of radiation which is absorbed by the four. Reed feels like his head is about to explode, Johnny feels really hot etc. The four fall unconscious in space.

The four awake in a government facility where they are being experimented on, Dr Allen (the person experimenting on them) mentions that they’ll be taken to solitary confinement until they find out what’s going on with them. The four breakout and we get a really awesome scene where four use there abilities (first they can’t really control them, but by the end of this awesome action scene they can), the four escape but Johnny makes sure to grab a lunch box (which he thinks contains food - later we’ll come to find out it Dosnt).

We cut to a military site, where this mysterious figure wakes up, we see who it is, doom….who is now heavily disfigured. He is being inspected by a troop of military scientists, doom wakes up and grabs a scientist by the neck and screams, “where is she!?!?!”, the scientist doesn't know who he means, doom promptly zaps the scientist with his green electricity and it fries his neck, the scientist dies. Doom kills the rest and then walks into one of there tents, he scans a TV with his hand by touching the TV, all the information since 1457 goes into his brain, he asks himself, “where is Maria” and then Walks over to a laptop and types in “Maria Von Doom”, he finds an article saying, “Maria Von Doom Of Latveria, Queen To Missing King Victor Von Doom, Remians Have Allegedly Been Found. Rumours Said Maria Died After Invasion Struck Latveria From Symkaria”. Screaming In Anger Victor Vows to travel back to his wife in any way possible and lets out a huge ray of electricity.

The four travel through a train tunnel, as there technically fugitives, Ben becomes hungry and Reed figures that due to Ben’s size, he’ll need a lot of food otherwise he’ll starve. Johnny opens the lunch box and discovers it to be a secret laptop, which states that they’ll be another solar flare 10 times the size and radioactive and they sent the four to see the first one, to see if such one would alter them in anyway just in case they needed to prepare for it since it’ll arrive in 7 days time. Suddenly sue gets a splitting headache and hears dooms voice, she walks away from the group for a bit and doom seems to be talking to her, she tries to block him out and succeeds temporarily. She tells the group they need to head back to the base as someone’s coming, someone powerful.

We see Victor Von Doom Breaking into the NASA base base we get a really cool action sequence of him kind of taking everyone down there and then he approaches Professor Franklin storm and grabbed him by the neck an Asks one simple question: when is the next solar flare, Franklin says it is coming in one day but doesn’t know why Victor then explains he wants to use his power of telekinesis to wrap it around the Earth so he can travel back to his wife. Franklin warms them this will be a bad idea and it might even collide the 1980s with 1457, Doom throws him aside and zaps him, he survives but is in critical condition. The fantastic four then rush into the building and help everyone inside, Johnny approaches his father (Franklin) and rushes him outside to an ambulance. Read, Sue and Ben then take on Doom, Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all. We get an amazing action sequence (like really a massive next level stuff) and we finished the action sequence with do winning the fight and snatching the lunchbox off of Johnny, Reed at the last second tries to latch on to do but do teleports away. Before then rushed outside to see the police which frankly explains to that before a heroes and the charges should be dropped. We then cut to a scene in a hospital where Franklin is in critical condition and the four are in civilian clothes and are surrounding him, Franklin tells the four dooms plan and tells them that the next solar flare is dangerous and if the previous one gave the bees powers then this one will either collide the 1980s with 1457 or could even bring a dormant disease that nowadays we would have no ability to combat to the present or maybe even something worse. Johnny and raged that doom would do such a thing to the Earth, to his father, to his sister, or to his friends sets in self blaze and flies out the window vowing to kill Doom, Ben agrees with read but he will go after him and stop him from doing anything reckless. We then see a scene where Reed & Sue Are at a court hearing, where The judge ruled them innocent but under pressure from the jury has to make the decision to execute a plan with the government for their powers to be removed. Read and Sue then leave the courthouse, happy and angry with the result, and suddenly realise that Ben is not back with Johnny, the to have a flirtatious moment which leads to them kissing.

We then see Johnny fly into Doom’s military camp from earlier and he literally just punches the living hell Doom just beat him to a pulp, Ben Grimm then arrives and stops Johnny from killing doom. The to then engage in a small brief fight which results with Johnny hugging Ben saying he wishes he never got his powers and Ben comforts him and says that they were given these powers for a reason. During the heartfelt moment do you get the upper hand and attacks Johnny and Ben, Doom you then teleports away and arrived at the hill (which he disappeared from earlier) where he falls to his knees and sobs, he cries out that he did nothing wrong and he deserves to see his wife again, he realises that the Solar Flare is his chance and he doesn’t care what he has to do to get back to 1457. We get a sad scene where we see Professor Franklin storm passing away, Johnny, Sue and then can be seen with tears in their eyes upon hearing the news from Reed (this scene there in an apartment which is mentioned to belong to Reed, this is where they’ve been based recently). This connected morning bonds between together as a family, and they all agree that they must stop Doom and bring him to justice.

I’ll do the rest later

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Nice! I like how the family dynamic is going.

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Nice! I like how the family dynamic is going.
Nearly done

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Fantastic Four: Marvels First Family:
with some sequel ideas afterwards, please re-read the whole thing as some made some edits from before

We open with Victor Von Doom in 1457 in Latveria, he’s king, he tells his wife he is going to observe a huge solar flare coming towards earth (he calls it dragons breath as back then they didn’t know what it was), we see he loves his wife very much). He travels to a nearby hill (pretty high) and observes the flare as it hits earth, this one is odd and it contains a huge amount of quantum proportion, it zaps doom and takes him away.

In 1980s USA, we see Reed Richards, Sue Storm, Ben Grimm & Johnny Storm boarding A space shuttle, as they are shot up, Professor Franklin Storm (through comms) mentions that they’re just there to observe this strange solar flare. When they get to this space station, Reed & Ben take some readings and find out that this solar flare thats sending out an odd amount of quantum particle. Suddenly a figure (who for now we see as a silhouette) gets shot out of the flare and through the space station, it goes through and as there’s a hole in the glass: Reed, sue, Ben & Johnny get sucked out of the space station and towards the flare, the flare shoots out a lot of radiation which is absorbed by the four. Reed feels like his head is about to explode, Johnny feels really hot etc. The four fall unconscious in space.

The four awake in a government facility where they are being experimented on, Dr Allen (the person experimenting on them) mentions that they’ll be taken to solitary confinement until they find out what’s going on with them. The four breakout and we get a really awesome scene where four use there abilities (first they can’t really control them, but by the end of this awesome action scene they can), the four escape but Johnny makes sure to grab a lunch box (which he thinks contains food - later we’ll come to find out it Dosnt).

We cut to a military site, where this mysterious figure wakes up, we see who it is, doom….who is now heavily disfigured. He is being inspected by a troop of military scientists, doom wakes up and grabs a scientist by the neck and screams, “where is she!?!?!”, the scientist doesn't know who he means, doom promptly zaps the scientist with his green electricity and it fries his neck, the scientist dies. Doom kills the rest and then walks into one of there tents, he scans a TV with his hand by touching the TV, all the information since 1457 goes into his brain, he asks himself, “where is Maria” and then Walks over to a laptop and types in “Maria Von Doom”, he finds an article saying, “Maria Von Doom Of Latveria, Queen To Missing King Victor Von Doom, Remians Have Allegedly Been Found. Rumours Said Maria Died After Invasion Struck Latveria From Symkaria”. Screaming In Anger Victor Vows to travel back to his wife in any way possible and lets out a huge ray of electricity.

The four travel through a train tunnel, as there technically fugitives, Ben becomes hungry and Reed figures that due to Ben’s size, he’ll need a lot of food otherwise he’ll starve. Johnny opens the lunch box and discovers it to be a secret laptop, which states that they’ll be another solar flare 10 times the size and radioactive and they sent the four to see the first one, to see if such one would alter them in anyway just in case they needed to prepare for it since it’ll arrive in 7 days time. Suddenly sue gets a splitting headache and hears dooms voice, she walks away from the group for a bit and doom seems to be talking to her, she tries to block him out and succeeds temporarily. She tells the group they need to head back to the base as someone’s coming, someone powerful.

We see Victor Von Doom Breaking into the NASA base base we get a really cool action sequence of him kind of taking everyone down there and then he approaches Professor Franklin storm and grabbed him by the neck an Asks one simple question: when is the next solar flare, Franklin says it is coming in one day but doesn’t know why Victor then explains he wants to use his power of telekinesis to wrap it around the Earth so he can travel back to his wife. Franklin warms them this will be a bad idea and it might even collide the 1980s with 1457, Doom throws him aside and zaps him, he survives but is in critical condition. The fantastic four then rush into the building and help everyone inside, Johnny approaches his father (Franklin) and rushes him outside to an ambulance. Read, Sue and Ben then take on Doom, Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all. We get an amazing action sequence (like really a massive next level stuff) and we finished the action sequence with do winning the fight and snatching the lunchbox off of Johnny, Reed at the last second tries to latch on to do but do teleports away. Before then rushed outside to see the police which frankly explains to that before a heroes and the charges should be dropped. We then cut to a scene in a hospital where Franklin is in critical condition and the four are in civilian clothes and are surrounding him, Franklin tells the four dooms plan and tells them that the next solar flare is dangerous and if the previous one gave the bees powers then this one will either collide the 1980s with 1457 or could even bring a dormant disease that nowadays we would have no ability to combat to the present or maybe even something worse. Johnny and raged that doom would do such a thing to the Earth, to his father, to his sister, or to his friends sets in self blaze and flies out the window vowing to kill Doom, Ben agrees with read but he will go after him and stop him from doing anything reckless. We then see a scene where Reed & Sue Are at a court hearing, where The judge ruled them innocent but under pressure from the jury has to make the decision to execute a plan with the government for their powers to be removed. Read and Sue then leave the courthouse, happy and angry with the result, and suddenly realise that Ben is not back with Johnny, the to have a flirtatious moment which leads to them kissing.

We then see Johnny fly into Doom’s military camp from earlier and he literally just punches the living hell Doom just beat him to a pulp, Ben Grimm then arrives and stops Johnny from killing doom. The to then engage in a small brief fight which results with Johnny hugging Ben saying he wishes he never got his powers and Ben comforts him and says that they were given these powers for a reason. During the heartfelt moment do you get the upper hand and attacks Johnny and Ben, Doom you then teleports away and arrived at the hill (which he disappeared from earlier) where he falls to his knees and sobs, he cries out that he did nothing wrong and he deserves to see his wife again, he realises that the Solar Flare is his chance and he doesn’t care what he has to do to get back to 1457. We get a sad scene where we see Professor Franklin storm passing away, Johnny, Sue and then can be seen with tears in their eyes upon hearing the news from Reed (this scene there in an apartment which is mentioned to belong to Reed, this is where they’ve been based recently). This connected morning bonds between together as a family, and they all agree that they must stop Doom and bring him to justice.

The fantastic four approach doom who is in the middle of the city, from multiple speakers we can hear government warnings for everyone to vacate the city if they can due to the oncoming solar flare. Before look up to see do you using his telekinesis to bring the solar flare closer and closer, they momentarily stop him and the four, now better with the powers, begin to have the most epic fight with Doom, afterwards Doom, tries to move the flare closer and succeeds, Reed realises they can’t Beat him so they must sacrifice themselves so the Earth can live. Read tell Sue to create a force field around the solar flare, doom and them selves, which she does: Doom complains viciously about how they’re doing themselves and no matter what they do they will die nonetheless, Reed tells him that his vicious plan is over and Doom ask them how they are able to be so strong in the final moments alive, Reed tells do that it’s because their family and Johnny makes it remark and says they are the fantastic four but Ben replies to Johnny and says that’s a stupid name, using their abilities combined they shoot Doom you into the solar flare and look at each other and all hold hands as solar flare then absorbs them.When they are absorbed Sue for field breaks and the solar flare collapses in on its self (it disintegrates away), the fantastic four have saved the day, we then see many new reports reporting on the fantastic fours death and how they saved humanity from near extinction.

We then jump cut To the present day and we open up in a shield base, where Hank Pym & Nick Fury are standing in front of a quantum gate, a scientist shouts test 393 and the quantum gate opens up, the scientist then reads aloud that she is detecting a high amount of solar quantum radiation approaching through the gateway, suddenly four figuresOr thrown out the machine and around the base, all the shield agents point their guns at them, it is read, Sue, Ben and Johnny (All in their suits it from the 80s, I was thinking maybe in this they could wear spandex because it’s the 80s). Nick Fury approaches them and asks them who they, Johnny says they’re fantastic four, and Ben says it is still a stupid name he said that five minutes ago, read says it sounds cool but then seriously (a serious tone) ask fury who they are and where they are fury tells them they are in the present day and The alleged heroics we’re back in the 80s, Siri says let’s get you up to speed, and then says let’s god * change those costumes and maybe we get a quick glimpse of their costumes for the next film or something and then we cut to black and get the credits.

Mid Credit Scene:
In the mid credit scene we see a mysterious figure say a large amount of radiation has just been released on Earth (because they’ve come to the present) disfigure then says that this means it will be a big meal, we then see who this figure is talking to, Galactus, this figure is then revealed to be the Silver surfer. Galactus then tells him to go for recon before he has his meal, the silver surfer then zips away into the stars.

End Credit Scene
In The end credits scene we see a black screen and hear Reed say, “because we’re family”, we then fade to see doom laying in the middle of a battlefield, alive, we then see a mysterious female figure approach him, Dhoom leaps up grabs the female by the neck and asks where he is, this figure says he is in No Man’s land During a fight between Latverian forces and Symkarian forces, doom whispers to himself that if he can’t have his wife back he may do what she would’ve wanted, win the war, he raises a figure (who he’s still holding by the neck) upwards and asks her who she is, she says - Silver Sablinova aka Silver Sable…

Sequel Ideas:
  • In the sequel they would take on Galactus and the silver sable while Doom would also be a secondary minor antagonist who is fighting against silver sable. At the start, SHEILD would give them the BAXTER BUILDING as there new HQ, At somepoint in the film, Reed and sue get married and At the end, Reed & Sue have a child.
  • In a third one they would go up against Annihilus, in the quantum realm, doom gets the chance to so back to his wife but instead at the end sacrifices himself to beat Annihilus. Johnny would die in this one, protecting his nephew when the BAXTER BUILDING aid destroyed when Annihilus enters the earth and we’d either get a tease of Reed mentoring Spider-Man in a spider-man film at the end OR air spider-mans already been established, him joining the team to

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Wow, that's an amazing plot! The sequels also sound really interesting!

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Wow, that's an amazing plot! The sequels also sound really interesting!
I’ll write the second one for you and you can see how you like it..

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

Wow, that's an amazing plot! The sequels also sound really interesting!
I’ll write the second one for you and you can see how you like it..
Okay.

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Matjam02 wrote:

Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all.
Lol autocorrect is funny. (Assuming this is autocorrect, if it isn’t, no offense)

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robotboy06 wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all.
Lol autocorrect is funny. (Assuming this is autocorrect, if it isn’t, no offense)
Yeah, I noticed that too, lol.

What If…? Doctor Doom gravy injured the Fantastic Four?

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AnimatorsParadise wrote:

robotboy06 wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all.
Lol autocorrect is funny. (Assuming this is autocorrect, if it isn’t, no offense)
Yeah, I noticed that too, lol.

What If…? Doctor Doom gravy injured the Fantastic Four?
XD

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robotboy06 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

robotboy06 wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all.
Lol autocorrect is funny. (Assuming this is autocorrect, if it isn’t, no offense)
Yeah, I noticed that too, lol.

What If…? Doctor Doom gravy injured the Fantastic Four?
XD
I’ve been been unwell recently so I’ve been using speech to text.

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Matjam02 wrote:

robotboy06 wrote:

AnimatorsParadise wrote:

robotboy06 wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

Doom says if they don’t pass over the lunchbox immediately he will gravy injure them all.
Lol autocorrect is funny. (Assuming this is autocorrect, if it isn’t, no offense)
Yeah, I noticed that too, lol.

What If…? Doctor Doom gravy injured the Fantastic Four?
XD
I’ve been been unwell recently so I’ve been using speech to text.
Okay.

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Fantastic Four: Herald
Plot so far, this title could be changed


We open with the silver surfers backstory, we slowly pan over moments of his past while we here a voiceover describing it, we then get a small short scene where we see the silver surfer zipping through space and we can see that he is contemplating what he has to do, we see two small scientists in a small little lab, looking at computers, they start beeping like crazy and scientist one says to the other that somethings coming, they both get out there lab and watch the sky as a fast silver ray zips past them. We then cut the black and get the titles.

We reopen with Read & Sue in normal civilian clothes in a room of the shield base, Sue expresses her concerns about Hank and fury. Read tells them it will be fine and he trusts them, read and Sue are about to kiss when Johnny walks in and interrupts them he tells them that they are needed and they all must report to Hank and fury, Johnny also mentions that if they were brought to the present, then doom may have been as well. The fantastic four go to Hank & Fury, with you we ask them how they got here, they explain the events of the first movie, and Fury says a line about how when they came back it released a huge amount of solar quantum energy, he tells them that another chunk of energy of the same amount on them proportion was released in Symkaria two days ago. Johnny realises it’s Doom and asks read and if he can go after him alone, Reed declined the offer and says they stick together, Hank then tells them to go get comfortable as they’re going to need it for what’s ahead. The Four travel back to there quarters and Johnny and Reed have an argument about who gets to lead the team, they bicker for a while and Johnny storms off after doom.

We get a scene of Johnny racing through the sky to Symkaria, suddenly a silver beam crashes into Johnny knocking him to the ground, the silver beam lands and it’s the silver surfer, who in this will have a monotone voice (When he was happy he spoke with emotion but when he became a herald for Galactus, his voice became monotone), Johnny engages in a fight with the silver surfer warns him he shouldn’t be fighting him, the silver surfer then gravely injures johnny and as he flies away he tells him, “I am not the one who is going to destroy your planet, Galactus is…”, Silver Surfer flies off as we get a shot of johnny covered in blood, crying for help, Johnny sees a figure stand over him and we cut to black.

Back at the H

I’ll do the rest later

Matjam02;
“Speak softly and carry a big stick; you will go far”

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