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Daily | 7/1/21
It was a grey and cloudy morning. Mia was taking breakfast with her sister, Stephany and getting ready for school. Or that is what everyone in her neighborhood thought. Mia and Stephany lived in a big city called Colia, they were passing through dark times. The governor had lost his head and wanted to declare war on the neighboring city. This had made things bad. As the principal of the school was against this war she started teaching her students how to prevent it. So every Monday and Friday some students had a meeting with the principal where they planned how to stop war and learned how to protect themselves. And today the sisters will attend their first meeting.
“Are you sure this is safe?” asked Stephany to Mia “I don’t want us to get into trouble”
“Well, it’s risky but if we want dad to come back we need to do this” said Mia sadly. Their dad had left to fight in the war and they had been alone since that moment. “Now let’s go.”
The sisters walked to school and went to their classes. When the clock struck 12 everyone went to their break and the sisters headed to the science classroom. Where the meeting was being held. When they entered the room they saw 15 other people inside. And a woman with blonde hair in a bun and blue shining eyes came to greet them.
“Ah, the new members! Welcome, welcome! As you already know I’m the principal but in these meetings call me Olivia” said the principal “Now let me introduce you to our other leader, Aden”
A tall boy with brown eyes and black hair walked towards them. “Pleasure to meet you ladies, my name is Aden. Please join us at the table” he said pointing to the center of the room.
The girls followed him and took a seat. Soon the meeting started. They asked the girls their reason for joining and they told them what they had been doing in past meetings. And what was their next plan.
“So you’re telling us that our school isn’t the only one in this alliance?” asked Stephany
“Exactly!” said one of the boys in the room “We are like three schools working together, and other people are also helping us.”
“This is a big deal girls, if we don’t make the governor change his mind things will go worse.” said Aden “Now, your work will be training for now. You will train with Alice.”
A girl with black long hair and blue eyes came towards them. “Hey! I’m Alice, leader of the attacking and defending group. I’ll be training you. Meet me at the gym at 4pm.”
The meeting continued and the sisters understood more about what was going on and how they could help. After leaving school they went back home to get ready for training. While Mia was getting their things ready Stephany was cooking some food for both of them.
“C’mon Mia, you need to eat something.” shouted Stephany “Now get down here!”
“I’m here.” Mia said as she entered the kitchen “Mmm! Tacos!”
The girls finished eating and went back to school, ready to begin with their training session. When they got there the school guard didn’t want to let them in, but after waiting some time Alice came and the guard gave them the keys to the gym.
“Does he know about the alliance?” asked Mia
“Yes, he is the one who has been giving us access to the gym and the science classroom.” answered Alice “Now show me what you know!”
As none of the girls had ever been in something like this before, training was difficult. But after an hour they were starting to understand. They finished the session and went back home. But what they didn’t know was that someone had been watching them.
I recently finished reading Harry Potter and the Order of Phoenix. And I really liked how they created DA (Dumbledore's Army) and how the Order was created.
It was a grey and cloudy morning. Mia was taking breakfast with her sister, Stephany and getting ready for school. Or that is what everyone in her neighborhood thought. Mia and Stephany lived in a big city called Colia, they were passing through dark times. The governor had lost his head and wanted to declare war on the neighboring city. This had made things bad. As the principal of the school was against this war she started teaching her students how to prevent it. So every Monday and Friday some students had a meeting with the principal where they planned how to stop war and learned how to protect themselves. And today the sisters will attend their first meeting.
“Are you sure this is safe?” asked Stephany to Mia “I don’t want us to get into trouble”
“Well, it’s risky but if we want dad to come back we need to do this” said Mia sadly. Their dad had left to fight in the war and they had been alone since that moment. “Now let’s go.”
The sisters walked to school and went to their classes. When the clock struck 12 everyone went to their break and the sisters headed to the science classroom. Where the meeting was being held. When they entered the room they saw 15 other people inside. And a woman with blonde hair in a bun and blue shining eyes came to greet them.
“Ah, the new members! Welcome, welcome! As you already know I’m the principal but in these meetings call me Olivia” said the principal “Now let me introduce you to our other leader, Aden”
A tall boy with brown eyes and black hair walked towards them. “Pleasure to meet you ladies, my name is Aden. Please join us at the table” he said pointing to the center of the room.
The girls followed him and took a seat. Soon the meeting started. They asked the girls their reason for joining and they told them what they had been doing in past meetings. And what was their next plan.
“So you’re telling us that our school isn’t the only one in this alliance?” asked Stephany
“Exactly!” said one of the boys in the room “We are like three schools working together, and other people are also helping us.”
“This is a big deal girls, if we don’t make the governor change his mind things will go worse.” said Aden “Now, your work will be training for now. You will train with Alice.”
A girl with black long hair and blue eyes came towards them. “Hey! I’m Alice, leader of the attacking and defending group. I’ll be training you. Meet me at the gym at 4pm.”
The meeting continued and the sisters understood more about what was going on and how they could help. After leaving school they went back home to get ready for training. While Mia was getting their things ready Stephany was cooking some food for both of them.
“C’mon Mia, you need to eat something.” shouted Stephany “Now get down here!”
“I’m here.” Mia said as she entered the kitchen “Mmm! Tacos!”
The girls finished eating and went back to school, ready to begin with their training session. When they got there the school guard didn’t want to let them in, but after waiting some time Alice came and the guard gave them the keys to the gym.
“Does he know about the alliance?” asked Mia
“Yes, he is the one who has been giving us access to the gym and the science classroom.” answered Alice “Now show me what you know!”
As none of the girls had ever been in something like this before, training was difficult. But after an hour they were starting to understand. They finished the session and went back home. But what they didn’t know was that someone had been watching them.
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Daily 7/4/21
As today is Sunday I was able to enjoy the morning a lot! First I read Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. I was reading the part when they go to Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes! It was really fun imagining all the things that the twins have in there! I also started reading the Hobbit. I'm not really understanding much right now but it seems like an interesting book! I felt really calm and happy while reading, maybe because I love reading. Then I meditated a little bit because well I was pretty sad yesterday so I had to clear my mind. And later I watch TV while eating breakfast! It was delicious. I ate eggs and a banana. We were (my siblings and I) watching ninjago and we were watching a season that we’ve watched like 3 times already so at the beginning I was bored but then I enjoyed seeing it a lot. My grandma was also here so I was really happy even though I wasn’t able to spend a lot of time with her. Now I’m just bored because we are going shopping for some things we need for our vacations but I think that in the afternoon I’ll watch some marvel movies.
As today is Sunday I was able to enjoy the morning a lot! First I read Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince. I was reading the part when they go to Weasley’s Wizard Wheezes! It was really fun imagining all the things that the twins have in there! I also started reading the Hobbit. I'm not really understanding much right now but it seems like an interesting book! I felt really calm and happy while reading, maybe because I love reading. Then I meditated a little bit because well I was pretty sad yesterday so I had to clear my mind. And later I watch TV while eating breakfast! It was delicious. I ate eggs and a banana. We were (my siblings and I) watching ninjago and we were watching a season that we’ve watched like 3 times already so at the beginning I was bored but then I enjoyed seeing it a lot. My grandma was also here so I was really happy even though I wasn’t able to spend a lot of time with her. Now I’m just bored because we are going shopping for some things we need for our vacations but I think that in the afternoon I’ll watch some marvel movies.
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Daily 7/5/21
Bella I know you just have some minutes to live and that you probably won’t see this letter but I need to tell you something. Even if you weren’t the main character and you role didn’t seem important to you. You were the savior, you were the one who gave life to your sisters’ way of thinking and ideas. The one that made her get up and keep going. Your way of thinking saved a lot of people and even if you had heartbreak you kept going on. That’s what makes you a strong and important person. You shouldn’t be ashamed of your mistakes but learn from them. I know that you didn’t have it easy, that you faced a lot of challenges that you didn’t expect and that some people weren’t the nicest to you. But remember that your sister was always there, even when you fought she kept believing in you. So don’t give up! Keep fighting, cause she is waiting to see you again.
Again I’m really sorry, I know I should have given you more prominence but Ann was the one for that, you had a really important role also even if it was not what you wanted.
Your dear author, Re
Bella I know you just have some minutes to live and that you probably won’t see this letter but I need to tell you something. Even if you weren’t the main character and you role didn’t seem important to you. You were the savior, you were the one who gave life to your sisters’ way of thinking and ideas. The one that made her get up and keep going. Your way of thinking saved a lot of people and even if you had heartbreak you kept going on. That’s what makes you a strong and important person. You shouldn’t be ashamed of your mistakes but learn from them. I know that you didn’t have it easy, that you faced a lot of challenges that you didn’t expect and that some people weren’t the nicest to you. But remember that your sister was always there, even when you fought she kept believing in you. So don’t give up! Keep fighting, cause she is waiting to see you again.
Again I’m really sorry, I know I should have given you more prominence but Ann was the one for that, you had a really important role also even if it was not what you wanted.
Your dear author, Re
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Daily 7/6/1
Hello! Oh my life, I just used myself in this sentence! And I did it again. Anyways, hello I’m the exclamation point I just wanna say that I'm not here to rant about being used incorrectly or not even being used. On the contrary I’m here to thank Re for using me! And I’m not gonna lie, I’m a pretty famous punctuation. Re uses me a lot! She always has something big to say and I’m always there. (And let’s not forget the she talks too much.) I mean I’m her favorite B) She may use period and comma a lot, but that’s just because she needs to. When it comes to liking I’m in first place!
Now let’s stop talking about me. I wanna use some of my precious words to talk about my dear friend: the question mark!! We became friends some years ago when Re discovered she could use us together. Like this: ?! At a beginning I wasn’t happy to share my space but later question mark and I became really good friends. We’re actually meeting tomorrow for lunch. I must say that Re uses him a lot! She could write one question mark when asking something by text but no! She uses like four or five! (It looks something like this: ‘Are you there my friend????’) Even though question mark has my respect, c’mon! When she uses me a lot of times in one sentence it’s okay! Because I’m awesome, but really question mark!
With that said I’m gonna go and talk about the interrobang. He takes my space!! If Re uses him him what will happen with me?! See! What would happen if instead of using this: ?! I would of used that interrobang thing! Well what would’ve happened, is that I wouldn’t been there! And that can’t happen! I officially say that this interrobang dude is my number one enemy!
About the other punctuations I don’t have much to say. Only one simple thing. Don’t take my space or you’ll be in big problems!!!
Now I need to leave. I have a photoshoot to attend in 1 hour.
I’m writing from this guy’s → ! ← Point of view. And I must say that he is pretty vain.
Hello! Oh my life, I just used myself in this sentence! And I did it again. Anyways, hello I’m the exclamation point I just wanna say that I'm not here to rant about being used incorrectly or not even being used. On the contrary I’m here to thank Re for using me! And I’m not gonna lie, I’m a pretty famous punctuation. Re uses me a lot! She always has something big to say and I’m always there. (And let’s not forget the she talks too much.) I mean I’m her favorite B) She may use period and comma a lot, but that’s just because she needs to. When it comes to liking I’m in first place!
Now let’s stop talking about me. I wanna use some of my precious words to talk about my dear friend: the question mark!! We became friends some years ago when Re discovered she could use us together. Like this: ?! At a beginning I wasn’t happy to share my space but later question mark and I became really good friends. We’re actually meeting tomorrow for lunch. I must say that Re uses him a lot! She could write one question mark when asking something by text but no! She uses like four or five! (It looks something like this: ‘Are you there my friend????’) Even though question mark has my respect, c’mon! When she uses me a lot of times in one sentence it’s okay! Because I’m awesome, but really question mark!
With that said I’m gonna go and talk about the interrobang. He takes my space!! If Re uses him him what will happen with me?! See! What would happen if instead of using this: ?! I would of used that interrobang thing! Well what would’ve happened, is that I wouldn’t been there! And that can’t happen! I officially say that this interrobang dude is my number one enemy!
About the other punctuations I don’t have much to say. Only one simple thing. Don’t take my space or you’ll be in big problems!!!
Now I need to leave. I have a photoshoot to attend in 1 hour.
Last edited by RLove10 (July 18, 2021 19:23:55)
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Re's SWC writing
Weekly 1
Part 1 | 514 words (counting the lists)
Character 1 | Plant: Ficus | Name: Fred
Traits:
- Tough, is physically strong
- Adaptable, he is able to adapt quickly to situations
- Homebody, prefers being in his comfy couch than on nature
- Creative, can create something out of nothing
- Unique, has ideas and ways of doing things that others don’t understand
- Independent, knows how to take care of himself
- Tolerant, is willing to hear things that he doesn’t agree with
- Emotional, he has a strong character but when you ‘hit’ him in a sensitive place he gets pretty emotional
- Delicate, he gets bothered easily and is pretty exaggerated
- After time he gets attached to some people
Fred is an average height boy. He has black messy hair and blue eyes. He is a kind person who after times gets attached easily to others. His country of origin is Canada. Before, he used to be outside a lot and do a lot of exercise so he is really strong. His parents work in a big company so they moved from city to city. After moving a few times Fred stopped going out and stayed at home. He got adapted to moving schools and everything because he only had one friend in his hometown. Everyone thought he was weird because of his ideas but they didn’t know that he had a talent for creating things. After time he got used to his parents not being home so he became independent at a young age. He gets pretty emotional sometimes but is really tolerant. He became really delicate after moving. When he is home alone Fred designs some clothes, so he spends his whole day inside and no longer wants to be in nature.
Character 2 | Plant: China Doll | Name: Charlotte
Traits:
- Independent, she can maintain herself on her own
- Free, she does whatever she wants
- Mature, she learned to grow fast
- Works better when she’s outside
- Likes music
- Energetic, can’t stay still for long periods
- Fast learner, she ‘grows’ really fast
- Quick when working in peace
- Likes teamwork
- Can stand being inside but not for really long periods
Charlotte has curvy brunette hair, and blue deep eyes. She is a short girl and has smooth white skin. She comes from France, and moved to the U.S.A when she was 17 years old. Charlotte works in a clothing store in New York. She is pretty energetic so she is the one that attends customers. When designing she goes to the park that is next to her apartment. Her father passed aways when she was 12 so she became mature and independent. She is a little rebellious but knows how to control herself. Teamwork and quick learning are her strongest areas. And music inspires her a lot. Charlotte loves nature and most of her designs are inspired by it. She knows how to maintain and stand for herself. Her english is not the best but she knows how to make others understand her. Her dream is being a famous fashion designer and opening her own boutique in New York city or even her hometown Paris.
Part 2 | 180 words
Hylophobia - Fear of trees forests or wood
As he flicked through the mail a golden envelope caught his attention. He took it and his heart started pumping faster.
After Fred had moved two times he decided to go to the woods near his school. And he had invited another 2 boys who he thought were his friends. But when being in the woods one of the boys cutted a branch from a tree and it almost crushed Fred. He felt betrayed and no longer made friends. After what happened in the woods, Fred got a phobia for trees -Hylophobia-, thinking that he might get killed by one. He started staying inside and got a passion for designing. He decided to share his designs online and one day he got a letter from a super famous fashion designer. Charlotte moved from Paris to New York and there she also got a letter from this super famous designer. So both of them later meet in a competition where the prize is a lot of money and work along with this famous designer.
Part 3 | 311 words
Thai Milk Tea
I’m gonna describe the place where Fred lives. At the moment he lives in a house with his parents, in Vancouver. His house has marble floors and the walls have an orangish color. He lives in a house that has a big garden. With big pine trees and beautiful flowers. But Fred doesn’t seem to notice this beauty that surrounds him. He lives in a two-floor house. And he spends most of his time in his designing studio. There are white walls in the studio, and he has a big desk where he plans his designs. He has a space for taking pictures and a big area with different mannequins.
Jasmine Green Milk Tea
Now I’m gonna describe Charlotte’s apartment in New York. She lives on the lowest level and her window has a beautiful view to the park next to her. Her apartment is of a minty color. In the main room of her apartment she designs. There she has 2 mannequins, a big white comfy couch and a closet full of materials. She also has a desk in her room to design. And there is a little kitchen. As she loves music there are some speakers in her apartment and she has a lot of plants. Her favourite plant is the China Doll.
Rose Tea
The setting based on this drink is the place where the famous competition held by the fashion designer is held. This will be in London. And it will be in the mansion of the famous designer. The color palette of all the place is pink. Different shades of pink. The place has four floors with different rooms. There is also a fancy pool and a place for a catwalk. The surroundings are really beautiful. There is a big garden full of flowers, especially roses. And there are a lot of mannequins with dresses and other incredible and really stylish things.
Part 4 | 1029 words
Part 1 | 514 words (counting the lists)
Character 1 | Plant: Ficus | Name: Fred
Traits:
- Tough, is physically strong
- Adaptable, he is able to adapt quickly to situations
- Homebody, prefers being in his comfy couch than on nature
- Creative, can create something out of nothing
- Unique, has ideas and ways of doing things that others don’t understand
- Independent, knows how to take care of himself
- Tolerant, is willing to hear things that he doesn’t agree with
- Emotional, he has a strong character but when you ‘hit’ him in a sensitive place he gets pretty emotional
- Delicate, he gets bothered easily and is pretty exaggerated
- After time he gets attached to some people
Fred is an average height boy. He has black messy hair and blue eyes. He is a kind person who after times gets attached easily to others. His country of origin is Canada. Before, he used to be outside a lot and do a lot of exercise so he is really strong. His parents work in a big company so they moved from city to city. After moving a few times Fred stopped going out and stayed at home. He got adapted to moving schools and everything because he only had one friend in his hometown. Everyone thought he was weird because of his ideas but they didn’t know that he had a talent for creating things. After time he got used to his parents not being home so he became independent at a young age. He gets pretty emotional sometimes but is really tolerant. He became really delicate after moving. When he is home alone Fred designs some clothes, so he spends his whole day inside and no longer wants to be in nature.
Character 2 | Plant: China Doll | Name: Charlotte
Traits:
- Independent, she can maintain herself on her own
- Free, she does whatever she wants
- Mature, she learned to grow fast
- Works better when she’s outside
- Likes music
- Energetic, can’t stay still for long periods
- Fast learner, she ‘grows’ really fast
- Quick when working in peace
- Likes teamwork
- Can stand being inside but not for really long periods
Charlotte has curvy brunette hair, and blue deep eyes. She is a short girl and has smooth white skin. She comes from France, and moved to the U.S.A when she was 17 years old. Charlotte works in a clothing store in New York. She is pretty energetic so she is the one that attends customers. When designing she goes to the park that is next to her apartment. Her father passed aways when she was 12 so she became mature and independent. She is a little rebellious but knows how to control herself. Teamwork and quick learning are her strongest areas. And music inspires her a lot. Charlotte loves nature and most of her designs are inspired by it. She knows how to maintain and stand for herself. Her english is not the best but she knows how to make others understand her. Her dream is being a famous fashion designer and opening her own boutique in New York city or even her hometown Paris.
Part 2 | 180 words
Hylophobia - Fear of trees forests or wood
As he flicked through the mail a golden envelope caught his attention. He took it and his heart started pumping faster.
After Fred had moved two times he decided to go to the woods near his school. And he had invited another 2 boys who he thought were his friends. But when being in the woods one of the boys cutted a branch from a tree and it almost crushed Fred. He felt betrayed and no longer made friends. After what happened in the woods, Fred got a phobia for trees -Hylophobia-, thinking that he might get killed by one. He started staying inside and got a passion for designing. He decided to share his designs online and one day he got a letter from a super famous fashion designer. Charlotte moved from Paris to New York and there she also got a letter from this super famous designer. So both of them later meet in a competition where the prize is a lot of money and work along with this famous designer.
Part 3 | 311 words
I have 3 different settings in my story so I decided to use about 100 words in each setting and 3 different boba drinks.
Thai Milk Tea
I’m gonna describe the place where Fred lives. At the moment he lives in a house with his parents, in Vancouver. His house has marble floors and the walls have an orangish color. He lives in a house that has a big garden. With big pine trees and beautiful flowers. But Fred doesn’t seem to notice this beauty that surrounds him. He lives in a two-floor house. And he spends most of his time in his designing studio. There are white walls in the studio, and he has a big desk where he plans his designs. He has a space for taking pictures and a big area with different mannequins.
Jasmine Green Milk Tea
Now I’m gonna describe Charlotte’s apartment in New York. She lives on the lowest level and her window has a beautiful view to the park next to her. Her apartment is of a minty color. In the main room of her apartment she designs. There she has 2 mannequins, a big white comfy couch and a closet full of materials. She also has a desk in her room to design. And there is a little kitchen. As she loves music there are some speakers in her apartment and she has a lot of plants. Her favourite plant is the China Doll.
Rose Tea
The setting based on this drink is the place where the famous competition held by the fashion designer is held. This will be in London. And it will be in the mansion of the famous designer. The color palette of all the place is pink. Different shades of pink. The place has four floors with different rooms. There is also a fancy pool and a place for a catwalk. The surroundings are really beautiful. There is a big garden full of flowers, especially roses. And there are a lot of mannequins with dresses and other incredible and really stylish things.
Part 4 | 1029 words
My story is in another forum post. And it's not complete cause I don't have the energy nor time to finish it right now. So it's just the first part of the story.
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Daily 7/8/21
Fred got out of the airport and founded a crowd of people around of what happened to be a limousine. He walked towards it with curiosity and founded a poster above the limousine that said: “Participants of the Lady Beaumont's competition”. He was actually surprised that they were using a limousine for the competition. But when he tried to get on it he saw a girl struggling to pass through the press and fans. He jumped out of the limousine and went directly to help her. When he got to her her papers and things fell so he started picking them up.
“Are you okay ma'am?” he asked “Let me help you.”
“Oh, no it's okay!” said Charlotte raising her head. Fred raised his head to see her and they bumped into each other. “Oh my god! I'm so sorry!”
“Don't worry about it” said Fred laughing “Here, let's get into the limousine.”
Both of them entered the limousine and no one talked until they got to Lady Beaumont's mansion. Some butlers opened the doors and when everyone got out the only sound was the big gasp that everyone gave. The mansion was gigantic and that wasn't the only surprising thing. Lady Beaumont was walking down the stairs to meet everyone. And she was wearing an incredible outfit!
“Welcome everyone! As you know you are all here because I think your work is outstanding!” announced Lady Beaumont “Now, you should all go and take some rest. I'm sure that trip was tiring.”
Fred took his luggage and went straight to what seem to be his room. He entered the mansion along with the others and followed their ‘guide’. He was told that his room was at the second floor along with another two girls. They all went up and before Fred entered his room he heard a female voice calling him. He turned around and saw the girl from before.
“Hi! Uhm, I just wanted to thank you for helping me on the airport.” said the girl “By the way, my name is Charlotte.”
“Pleasure Charlotte, I'm Fred” he answered “And no problem, it seem that you needed help.”
“Well, we should go to sleep. See you around!” said Charlotte and she entered her room.
Fred was surprised, it was the first time that he actually talked with someone as a friend…? He wasn't used to having friends or people who were nice to him. His designs had a lot of likes and everything online. But the people that he met in real life, weren't as kind as Charlotte had been. He entered his room with a big smile on his face. And went to sleep with the thought that he might finally make a friend again.
I actually haven't got to this part on my story so after I write this I will just incorporate it. This is how my characters Charlotte and Fred meet each other.
Fred got out of the airport and founded a crowd of people around of what happened to be a limousine. He walked towards it with curiosity and founded a poster above the limousine that said: “Participants of the Lady Beaumont's competition”. He was actually surprised that they were using a limousine for the competition. But when he tried to get on it he saw a girl struggling to pass through the press and fans. He jumped out of the limousine and went directly to help her. When he got to her her papers and things fell so he started picking them up.
“Are you okay ma'am?” he asked “Let me help you.”
“Oh, no it's okay!” said Charlotte raising her head. Fred raised his head to see her and they bumped into each other. “Oh my god! I'm so sorry!”
“Don't worry about it” said Fred laughing “Here, let's get into the limousine.”
Both of them entered the limousine and no one talked until they got to Lady Beaumont's mansion. Some butlers opened the doors and when everyone got out the only sound was the big gasp that everyone gave. The mansion was gigantic and that wasn't the only surprising thing. Lady Beaumont was walking down the stairs to meet everyone. And she was wearing an incredible outfit!
“Welcome everyone! As you know you are all here because I think your work is outstanding!” announced Lady Beaumont “Now, you should all go and take some rest. I'm sure that trip was tiring.”
Fred took his luggage and went straight to what seem to be his room. He entered the mansion along with the others and followed their ‘guide’. He was told that his room was at the second floor along with another two girls. They all went up and before Fred entered his room he heard a female voice calling him. He turned around and saw the girl from before.
“Hi! Uhm, I just wanted to thank you for helping me on the airport.” said the girl “By the way, my name is Charlotte.”
“Pleasure Charlotte, I'm Fred” he answered “And no problem, it seem that you needed help.”
“Well, we should go to sleep. See you around!” said Charlotte and she entered her room.
Fred was surprised, it was the first time that he actually talked with someone as a friend…? He wasn't used to having friends or people who were nice to him. His designs had a lot of likes and everything online. But the people that he met in real life, weren't as kind as Charlotte had been. He entered his room with a big smile on his face. And went to sleep with the thought that he might finally make a friend again.
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Daily 7/9/21
Part 1
After the sisters left the room, this mysterious person entered and walked towards Alice. He got closer to her and started applauding.
“Bravo Alice, it looks like you do know how to train someone.” said the man “I hope that you don’t train them too well. We don’t want them to defeat us, or you will be seen as a traitor.”
“Get away from me Chase! You know I don’t do this because I want!” screamed Alice “Let me refresh your memory. One year ago your men entered my house, kidnapped my parents and forced them to work for you! Later you told me that if I was your spy you would free us all! But my parents are still in your headquarters working for your monstrous cause!
‘Dear you know things take time. Now, I will come and check on you every few days. Au revoir! said Chase walking away
Alice stayed there thinking about what she could do to save her parents and at the same time work in the alliance. Without betraying them. As Chase had said he came every few days and saw the sisters’ training. They had got a lot better. But even if Alice wanted to show them more advanced things, she knew she couldn’t. Chase was still watching her. And this worried her a lot. Even to the point that Olivia noticed it. So she called the sisters to help her.
“Girls, I’m worried about Alice. She looks worried and restless.” said Olivia “I want you to see what’s bothering her and try to help her if possible.”
“Okay, we’ll see what we can do” said Mia as she and her sister walked out of the room.
The girls started looking for Alice but couldn’t find her. Until they went to the gym and founded her talking with someone. They tried to see who it was but the glass didn’t let them see clearly. They finished talking and the guy was coming towards the door where the girls were hiding.
“Quickly hide!” said Stacey. They hide behind the door and saw that the guy had blonde hair and brown eyes. “Who is he?”
“I don’t know” answered Mia “Let’s go and ask Alice.”
The girls entered the gym and went to Alice. They asked her who the guy (Chase) was but Alice didn’t knew what to answer. So she said:
“Oh, he is no one. Don’t worry” said Alice “Now, I gotta go.”
Alice runned away and left the sisters there. In confusion.
Part 2
“Is he here?” Chase asked to the man next to him
“Not yet sir.” the man answered, “He should be here soon.”
Chase walked from one side to another. His soldiers had never seen their commander so nervous. As Chase kept walking, two soldiers brought a man who looked really bad. His clothes were all ragged and he looked restless and old. When the soldiers dropped him, Chase stopped walking and stood in front of him.
“Look who we have here!” exclaimed Chase laughing “The old Tom! How have you been old man!”
“Aren’t you ashamed Chase?” said the man “Just look at you. In what have you become? If only she could see you, she’d be so disappointed.”
“Don’t you dare say that!” yelled Chase “Don’t you dare talk about her in my presence!”
Chase gave him a slap in the face and told the soldiers to take him away. After all his guards left, all the power and confidence that he had shown disappeared. They were replaced with fear and nervousness. But no one could blame him. After all he was coming, and he was the only one Chase feared.
Back in the city, Alice was at her apartment. She was sitting on her couch looking at the sky. Thinking about what had happened earlier. She had lied to her friends and Chase had found her. Her life couldn’t get any worse, right?
“What should I do?” thought Alice “I can’t let them win! And he needs to pay for what he did! He betrayed me! But I can’t tell anyone. It’s dangerous! Ugh this really sucks!”
She went to sleep thinking about her parents and the one that had betrayed her.
Meanwhile back with Chase things weren’t that good. He was there and he wasn’t happy.
“How is our spy doing?” He asked
“Uhm not so bad sir!” answered Chase “She knows her position in this”
“Good, good!” laughed the mysterious voice “She better know.”
This is a continuation of the story I wrote in the 1st daily
Last part of the first part of the story: They finished the session and went back home. But what they didn’t know was that someone had been watching them
Part 1
After the sisters left the room, this mysterious person entered and walked towards Alice. He got closer to her and started applauding.
“Bravo Alice, it looks like you do know how to train someone.” said the man “I hope that you don’t train them too well. We don’t want them to defeat us, or you will be seen as a traitor.”
“Get away from me Chase! You know I don’t do this because I want!” screamed Alice “Let me refresh your memory. One year ago your men entered my house, kidnapped my parents and forced them to work for you! Later you told me that if I was your spy you would free us all! But my parents are still in your headquarters working for your monstrous cause!
‘Dear you know things take time. Now, I will come and check on you every few days. Au revoir! said Chase walking away
Alice stayed there thinking about what she could do to save her parents and at the same time work in the alliance. Without betraying them. As Chase had said he came every few days and saw the sisters’ training. They had got a lot better. But even if Alice wanted to show them more advanced things, she knew she couldn’t. Chase was still watching her. And this worried her a lot. Even to the point that Olivia noticed it. So she called the sisters to help her.
“Girls, I’m worried about Alice. She looks worried and restless.” said Olivia “I want you to see what’s bothering her and try to help her if possible.”
“Okay, we’ll see what we can do” said Mia as she and her sister walked out of the room.
The girls started looking for Alice but couldn’t find her. Until they went to the gym and founded her talking with someone. They tried to see who it was but the glass didn’t let them see clearly. They finished talking and the guy was coming towards the door where the girls were hiding.
“Quickly hide!” said Stacey. They hide behind the door and saw that the guy had blonde hair and brown eyes. “Who is he?”
“I don’t know” answered Mia “Let’s go and ask Alice.”
The girls entered the gym and went to Alice. They asked her who the guy (Chase) was but Alice didn’t knew what to answer. So she said:
“Oh, he is no one. Don’t worry” said Alice “Now, I gotta go.”
Alice runned away and left the sisters there. In confusion.
Part 2
“Is he here?” Chase asked to the man next to him
“Not yet sir.” the man answered, “He should be here soon.”
Chase walked from one side to another. His soldiers had never seen their commander so nervous. As Chase kept walking, two soldiers brought a man who looked really bad. His clothes were all ragged and he looked restless and old. When the soldiers dropped him, Chase stopped walking and stood in front of him.
“Look who we have here!” exclaimed Chase laughing “The old Tom! How have you been old man!”
“Aren’t you ashamed Chase?” said the man “Just look at you. In what have you become? If only she could see you, she’d be so disappointed.”
“Don’t you dare say that!” yelled Chase “Don’t you dare talk about her in my presence!”
Chase gave him a slap in the face and told the soldiers to take him away. After all his guards left, all the power and confidence that he had shown disappeared. They were replaced with fear and nervousness. But no one could blame him. After all he was coming, and he was the only one Chase feared.
Back in the city, Alice was at her apartment. She was sitting on her couch looking at the sky. Thinking about what had happened earlier. She had lied to her friends and Chase had found her. Her life couldn’t get any worse, right?
“What should I do?” thought Alice “I can’t let them win! And he needs to pay for what he did! He betrayed me! But I can’t tell anyone. It’s dangerous! Ugh this really sucks!”
She went to sleep thinking about her parents and the one that had betrayed her.
Meanwhile back with Chase things weren’t that good. He was there and he wasn’t happy.
“How is our spy doing?” He asked
“Uhm not so bad sir!” answered Chase “She knows her position in this”
“Good, good!” laughed the mysterious voice “She better know.”
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Daily 7/11/21
I was up in my room watching chatting with my friends when I heard a big ‘boom’ noice downstairs. I went and saw my parents watching the TV. Apparently they were watching the news and that’s were the sound had came from.
“What’s going on?” I asked confused
“Some men just took down the angel.” muttered my mom angrily “Savages! How could they!”
“I don’t know my dear, I don’t know..” was all my father said
I didn’t understand, why was there such rampage about an old statue. If that men took it down can’t people just put it up again, or they could even make another one. The actual one looks pretty old. I kept thinking about how people were making to much drama, when my bestie texted in the group chat.
“OMG! Did you guys saw the news?” was what my bestie said
“Yes I did.” I answered “There’s such a drama about the angel”
“How could that men do that?!” said another friend “They just took down THE ANGEL! the Angel of Independence!”
“I know! It’s just outrageous!” said another friend
“But why to much drama, isn’t it just a statue?” I asked and there were no messages until my bestie texted my privately
“You aren’t serious, right?” she said “Ami, do you even know what the angel means?”
“No?” I answered and she told me to talk with my parents
I was confused. Had my friends got angry? Did I said something wrong? Why was the angel so important? As I had so many questions I went to the kitchen were my parents were cooking dinner. If anyone could give me the answers and explanations I wanted, it was them. So I took my seat in the table and started talking.
“Mom, why is the angel so important?” I asked, she turned around and looked at me confused
“Why? Oh my dear, you don’t know!” she exclaimed “Okay, let’s sit down. And I will tell you a story,”
She took her seat and the table and started telling me a story. One that I would have known, if it weren’t for spending 10 of my 13 years living somewhere else. I had just moved to Mexico 3 years ago, and there were a lot of things I didn’t knew. So this story was important and it went like this:
“The 6 of September of 1810, Mexico was finally free from Spain. We were now a independent country. Everyone was so happy! And finally on 1910 there was a monument made in honor of our independence. This angel is a monument of Mexico’s independence. And a tribute to brave people who lost their lives fighting. It is the most important monument of the whole country. Just like New York’s Statue of Liberty the Angel means freedom to us.”
Now I understood it all! The angel was really important to Mexican people and this men were taking down, the symbol of their independence and freedom. This men were trying to tell us something. Now I didn’t saw the drama as something crazy and unnecessary. This men were threatening us, and I knew people wouldn’t stand with their arms crossed. Or at least I wouldn’t.
I was up in my room watching chatting with my friends when I heard a big ‘boom’ noice downstairs. I went and saw my parents watching the TV. Apparently they were watching the news and that’s were the sound had came from.
“What’s going on?” I asked confused
“Some men just took down the angel.” muttered my mom angrily “Savages! How could they!”
“I don’t know my dear, I don’t know..” was all my father said
I didn’t understand, why was there such rampage about an old statue. If that men took it down can’t people just put it up again, or they could even make another one. The actual one looks pretty old. I kept thinking about how people were making to much drama, when my bestie texted in the group chat.
“OMG! Did you guys saw the news?” was what my bestie said
“Yes I did.” I answered “There’s such a drama about the angel”
“How could that men do that?!” said another friend “They just took down THE ANGEL! the Angel of Independence!”
“I know! It’s just outrageous!” said another friend
“But why to much drama, isn’t it just a statue?” I asked and there were no messages until my bestie texted my privately
“You aren’t serious, right?” she said “Ami, do you even know what the angel means?”
“No?” I answered and she told me to talk with my parents
I was confused. Had my friends got angry? Did I said something wrong? Why was the angel so important? As I had so many questions I went to the kitchen were my parents were cooking dinner. If anyone could give me the answers and explanations I wanted, it was them. So I took my seat in the table and started talking.
“Mom, why is the angel so important?” I asked, she turned around and looked at me confused
“Why? Oh my dear, you don’t know!” she exclaimed “Okay, let’s sit down. And I will tell you a story,”
She took her seat and the table and started telling me a story. One that I would have known, if it weren’t for spending 10 of my 13 years living somewhere else. I had just moved to Mexico 3 years ago, and there were a lot of things I didn’t knew. So this story was important and it went like this:
“The 6 of September of 1810, Mexico was finally free from Spain. We were now a independent country. Everyone was so happy! And finally on 1910 there was a monument made in honor of our independence. This angel is a monument of Mexico’s independence. And a tribute to brave people who lost their lives fighting. It is the most important monument of the whole country. Just like New York’s Statue of Liberty the Angel means freedom to us.”
Now I understood it all! The angel was really important to Mexican people and this men were taking down, the symbol of their independence and freedom. This men were trying to tell us something. Now I didn’t saw the drama as something crazy and unnecessary. This men were threatening us, and I knew people wouldn’t stand with their arms crossed. Or at least I wouldn’t.
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Daily 7/11/21
I was up in my room watching chatting with my friends when I heard a big ‘boom’ noice downstairs. I went and saw my parents watching the TV. Apparently they were watching the news and that’s were the sound had came from.
“What’s going on?” I asked confused
“Some men just took down the angel.” muttered my mom angrily “Savages! How could they!”
“I don’t know my dear, I don’t know..” was all my father said
I didn’t understand, why was there such rampage about an old statue. If that men took it down can’t people just put it up again, or they could even make another one. The actual one looks pretty old. I kept thinking about how people were making to much drama, when my bestie texted in the group chat.
“OMG! Did you guys saw the news?” was what my bestie said
“Yes I did.” I answered “There’s such a drama about the angel”
“How could that men do that?!” said another friend “They just took down THE ANGEL! the Angel of Independence!”
“I know! It’s just outrageous!” said another friend
“But why to much drama, isn’t it just a statue?” I asked and there were no messages until my bestie texted my privately
“You aren’t serious, right?” she said “Ami, do you even know what the angel means?”
“No?” I answered and she told me to talk with my parents
I was confused. Had my friends got angry? Did I said something wrong? Why was the angel so important? As I had so many questions I went to the kitchen were my parents were cooking dinner. If anyone could give me the answers and explanations I wanted, it was them. So I took my seat in the table and started talking.
“Mom, why is the angel so important?” I asked, she turned around and looked at me confused
“Why? Oh my dear, you don’t know!” she exclaimed “Okay, let’s sit down. And I will tell you a story,”
She took her seat and the table and started telling me a story. One that I would have known, if it weren’t for spending 10 of my 13 years living somewhere else. I had just moved to Mexico 3 years ago, and there were a lot of things I didn’t knew. So this story was important and it went like this:
“The 6 of September of 1810, Mexico was finally free from Spain. We were now a independent country. Everyone was so happy! And finally on 1910 there was a monument made in honor of our independence. This angel is a monument of Mexico’s independence. And a tribute to brave people who lost their lives fighting. It is the most important monument of the whole country. Just like New York’s Statue of Liberty the Angel means freedom to us.”
Now I understood it all! The angel was really important to Mexican people and this men were taking down, the symbol of their independence and freedom. This men were trying to tell us something. Now I didn’t saw the drama as something crazy and unnecessary. This men were threatening us, and I knew people wouldn’t stand with their arms crossed. Or at least I wouldn’t.
oo this is so good :0
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Daily 7/13/21
“What are you doing with that?!”
“With what?”
“That thing… in your hand! Don’t play innocent with me. That thing you are holding may cause the destruction of this whole world!”
My friend looked at me, he was worried and scared. ‘The destruction of the whole world’, what an exaggeration. A simple and powerful new weapon wouldn’t destroy the world.
“You’re just exaggerating James,” I said “This thing has been tested and it said it’s safe when it’s off.”
“Not in your hands…” James muttered “Lune just leave that thing alone, we all know you are dangerous with weapons…”
I was offended, how could he say that! I mean, I may or may not have blown up a building with a small bomb. And maybe I almost killed 20 men with a little gun but nothing more. They were all just exaggerating about it. I may be a little clumsy and distracted, but I’m not destroying the world. I left the room and stopped thinking about it, but I found another person who thought the same as James.
“Hey Lune! Uh what are you doing with that?!” exclaimed my sister “I thought you weren’t allowed to use the new weapon…”
“Well I am! And I’m not destroying the world, Julie!” I yelled
“No! No,no,no. Who said that? Why would you destroy the world. Pfft, what a crazy idea!”
I couldn’t believe her. She was lying to me? I looked at her and said, “I know you also think I’m dumb and not able to use this. But you’ll see.”
I was gonna prove her, I was gonna prove them all. I had to find a way. But how? We were at war and we were only allowed to go out if necessary. I thought I would have to give up, until I saw someone who could help me.
“Michael! Hey Michael!” I screamed while chasing him up the stairs.
“Oh, hi Lune. What's up?” he said looking at me “Is that the new weapon?”
“Uh yeah! It is.” I answered
“Cool! So what can I do for you?
“Well, I want to do something. Something real, like going to battle. I wanna test this thing.”
“Oh..” he said and then gave me a strange look. “Well, I don’t think I can help.”
“I know you can! Please Michael!”
“Fine, c’mon. I’ll take you to the platform. You can take a plane from them.”
“Thank you Michael! I’ll repay you! I promise.”
I runned through the different halls until I got to the platform. Michael was right! There was a plane with no one on it, I could take it!
“What are you doing with that?!”
“With what?”
“That thing… in your hand! Don’t play innocent with me. That thing you are holding may cause the destruction of this whole world!”
My friend looked at me, he was worried and scared. ‘The destruction of the whole world’, what an exaggeration. A simple and powerful new weapon wouldn’t destroy the world.
“You’re just exaggerating James,” I said “This thing has been tested and it said it’s safe when it’s off.”
“Not in your hands…” James muttered “Lune just leave that thing alone, we all know you are dangerous with weapons…”
I was offended, how could he say that! I mean, I may or may not have blown up a building with a small bomb. And maybe I almost killed 20 men with a little gun but nothing more. They were all just exaggerating about it. I may be a little clumsy and distracted, but I’m not destroying the world. I left the room and stopped thinking about it, but I found another person who thought the same as James.
“Hey Lune! Uh what are you doing with that?!” exclaimed my sister “I thought you weren’t allowed to use the new weapon…”
“Well I am! And I’m not destroying the world, Julie!” I yelled
“No! No,no,no. Who said that? Why would you destroy the world. Pfft, what a crazy idea!”
I couldn’t believe her. She was lying to me? I looked at her and said, “I know you also think I’m dumb and not able to use this. But you’ll see.”
I was gonna prove her, I was gonna prove them all. I had to find a way. But how? We were at war and we were only allowed to go out if necessary. I thought I would have to give up, until I saw someone who could help me.
“Michael! Hey Michael!” I screamed while chasing him up the stairs.
“Oh, hi Lune. What's up?” he said looking at me “Is that the new weapon?”
“Uh yeah! It is.” I answered
“Cool! So what can I do for you?
“Well, I want to do something. Something real, like going to battle. I wanna test this thing.”
“Oh..” he said and then gave me a strange look. “Well, I don’t think I can help.”
“I know you can! Please Michael!”
“Fine, c’mon. I’ll take you to the platform. You can take a plane from them.”
“Thank you Michael! I’ll repay you! I promise.”
I runned through the different halls until I got to the platform. Michael was right! There was a plane with no one on it, I could take it!
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Daily 7/16/21
As any other person who could be in Fred and Charlotte’s place. They were amazed! Not everyone got the chance to even go and stay in Lay Beaumont’s gigantic mansion. They both had two weeks to get ready and they used their time correctly. Fred told his parents about it and they looked so excited. The opportunity of doing something big and outside of his house finally came. Things with Charlotte seemed quite different. As she had the job of chief designer, she needed to leave things in order. She worked nonstop the first week and took a rest to pack her things the second. Everything was ready. Charlotte and Fred knew that the competition would be rough. Charlotte designed things she will use while staying in the mansion. And Fred tried to think how the competition could be. So after two long weeks of waiting, the day of leaving came. Fred’s parents went to the airport with him to say goodbye.
“Oh dear! You’re finally going outside!” exclaimed Fred’s mother cheerfully “I’m so happy for you!”
“We’re so proud, son.” said his father “Now chase your dream.”
“Thank you mom and dad.” chuckled Fred, “Bye, see you soon!”
Fred walked away to where the plane was. Meanwhile Charlotte kept running around the airport halls. Looking for her plane. After 20 minutes she asked a lady and she indicated where to go. Charlotte ran as fast as her feet could take her and to her luck the plane didn’t left her.
The repeated words were changed.
As any other person who could be in Fred and Charlotte’s place. They were amazed! Not everyone got the chance to even go and stay in Lay Beaumont’s gigantic mansion. They both had two weeks to get ready and they used their time correctly. Fred told his parents about it and they looked so excited. The opportunity of doing something big and outside of his house finally came. Things with Charlotte seemed quite different. As she had the job of chief designer, she needed to leave things in order. She worked nonstop the first week and took a rest to pack her things the second. Everything was ready. Charlotte and Fred knew that the competition would be rough. Charlotte designed things she will use while staying in the mansion. And Fred tried to think how the competition could be. So after two long weeks of waiting, the day of leaving came. Fred’s parents went to the airport with him to say goodbye.
“Oh dear! You’re finally going outside!” exclaimed Fred’s mother cheerfully “I’m so happy for you!”
“We’re so proud, son.” said his father “Now chase your dream.”
“Thank you mom and dad.” chuckled Fred, “Bye, see you soon!”
Fred walked away to where the plane was. Meanwhile Charlotte kept running around the airport halls. Looking for her plane. After 20 minutes she asked a lady and she indicated where to go. Charlotte ran as fast as her feet could take her and to her luck the plane didn’t left her.
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Weekly 2
Part 1
What I got was: A star, Trisha (a girl), electric guitar & jungle 651 words
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It was a clear day and a young woman named Trisha was in her room singing. Trisha had black hair with a pink stripe, dark skin and she used glasses. Her dream has always been, being a Hollywood star. She has been working for years and finally her opportunity came.
A week ago, she was called by a manager who had seen her YouTube videos. He wanted her to be the opening in a big show. Of course, Trisha agreed, and today was her big day. If she did a good job, maybe someone will be willing to contrat her! All she had to do now was take a bus that would take her to the place and give an awesome show.
“Well, I’m ready!” Trisha said “I can do this, let’s go!”
She went out and walked all the way to the bus station. There she took her bus and waited. She fell asleep and dreamed about what she would become, but soon her sleep was interrupted. She opened her eyes and saw a tree on the window.
“Uh, what in the world?” she exclaimed. Trisha looked around her and saw the rest of the passengers. They were all scared and on one side of the bus, “What’s happening?”
“We were on the road when something happened with a wheel. The bus started to go out of place and the bus fell from a cliff after some time we ended here.” said the girl next to Trisha
“Did all of us survived?” asked Trisha worried
“N-no,” answered a boy “M-my mommy didn’t and the driver is unconscious. There are only five of us alive and conscious.”
“Okay, let’s get out of here. We’ll find a shelter and think of what to do.” declared Trisha “Follow me guys.”
As there was nothing else to do, everyone followed Trisha out of the bus. They looked for a shelter and after a long time they found a cave where they could stay. For their luck, the young boy was a Boy Scout and they were able to start a fire. One of the girls knew how to cook and Trisha, who still had her guitar, entertained them.
“Wow Trisha! You really are incredible!” said one of the girls, called Emily “Why aren’t you in Hollywood already? You are so good!”
“I was gonna be soon. But this happened.” answered Trisha sadly
“We’ll help you get back. Soon we’ll all be where we should.” said the boy
They all went to sleep. All except Trisha. She wasn’t tired and she was worried. How would they get out of there? Her big night had been ruined and she was stuck in some kind of jungle or woods. She kept thinking about this while she walked, that she didn’t noticed where she was going. Nothing happened for some time but calm didn’t last long. Trisha was still walking when she fell into a hole. She looked up and saw it was a trap! Someone had put a trap in the ground.
“Is someone there?” Trisha screamed “Please! Someone help me!”
“Who are you?” said a mysterious voice from above. “Wait, let me get you out of there.”
A rope appeared and Trisha started climbing up. When she was already in the surface she saw a boy. But he wasn’t someone who had come with her, it looked like he had been there for a long time.
“Who are you?” they both asked
“My name is Trisha. Me and some other people got stuck here.” Trisha said
“I’m Louis, I had an accident a few months ago. Now I leave here.” Louis said cheerfully
“You never tried to get back?”
“I did, but I was never able to find the way back. So I adapted and stayed.”
“I guess I’ll do the same.”
Part 2 & 3
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/530264/
Part 1
What I got was: A star, Trisha (a girl), electric guitar & jungle 651 words
_________________
It was a clear day and a young woman named Trisha was in her room singing. Trisha had black hair with a pink stripe, dark skin and she used glasses. Her dream has always been, being a Hollywood star. She has been working for years and finally her opportunity came.
A week ago, she was called by a manager who had seen her YouTube videos. He wanted her to be the opening in a big show. Of course, Trisha agreed, and today was her big day. If she did a good job, maybe someone will be willing to contrat her! All she had to do now was take a bus that would take her to the place and give an awesome show.
“Well, I’m ready!” Trisha said “I can do this, let’s go!”
She went out and walked all the way to the bus station. There she took her bus and waited. She fell asleep and dreamed about what she would become, but soon her sleep was interrupted. She opened her eyes and saw a tree on the window.
“Uh, what in the world?” she exclaimed. Trisha looked around her and saw the rest of the passengers. They were all scared and on one side of the bus, “What’s happening?”
“We were on the road when something happened with a wheel. The bus started to go out of place and the bus fell from a cliff after some time we ended here.” said the girl next to Trisha
“Did all of us survived?” asked Trisha worried
“N-no,” answered a boy “M-my mommy didn’t and the driver is unconscious. There are only five of us alive and conscious.”
“Okay, let’s get out of here. We’ll find a shelter and think of what to do.” declared Trisha “Follow me guys.”
As there was nothing else to do, everyone followed Trisha out of the bus. They looked for a shelter and after a long time they found a cave where they could stay. For their luck, the young boy was a Boy Scout and they were able to start a fire. One of the girls knew how to cook and Trisha, who still had her guitar, entertained them.
“Wow Trisha! You really are incredible!” said one of the girls, called Emily “Why aren’t you in Hollywood already? You are so good!”
“I was gonna be soon. But this happened.” answered Trisha sadly
“We’ll help you get back. Soon we’ll all be where we should.” said the boy
They all went to sleep. All except Trisha. She wasn’t tired and she was worried. How would they get out of there? Her big night had been ruined and she was stuck in some kind of jungle or woods. She kept thinking about this while she walked, that she didn’t noticed where she was going. Nothing happened for some time but calm didn’t last long. Trisha was still walking when she fell into a hole. She looked up and saw it was a trap! Someone had put a trap in the ground.
“Is someone there?” Trisha screamed “Please! Someone help me!”
“Who are you?” said a mysterious voice from above. “Wait, let me get you out of there.”
A rope appeared and Trisha started climbing up. When she was already in the surface she saw a boy. But he wasn’t someone who had come with her, it looked like he had been there for a long time.
“Who are you?” they both asked
“My name is Trisha. Me and some other people got stuck here.” Trisha said
“I’m Louis, I had an accident a few months ago. Now I leave here.” Louis said cheerfully
“You never tried to get back?”
“I did, but I was never able to find the way back. So I adapted and stayed.”
“I guess I’ll do the same.”
Part 2 & 3
I combined both parts. In total there are 2001 words. As this is also an entry for the writing comp I will put it on another forum.
https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/530264/
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Daily 7/18/21
Original Lyrics from Heather by Conan Gray
Why would you ever kiss me.
I'm not even half as pretty.
You gave her your sweater it's just polyester.
But you like her better. I wish I was Heather.
Translated
What to thee, Give me a kiss, I am the midst of wars.
Give him a shirt that right? Polyester.
I want to be better. I like to be full.
* is this…
“I hate you!”
“It’s not like I even liked you!”
“Why.. Why did you do this?! I loved you…”
Those were the last words me and my crush had. She was everything to me, but I guess I was just another person for her. I remembered that day like it was yesterday. The day I finally gave up on her and the day I lost my best friend. Her name was Sky, I had liked her for 3 years and my best friend Chris was always supporting me. Or that’s what I thought. Let me tell you the story, the story of my heartbreak life.
>> We were in high school already, and this girl just drove me crazy. She was one of the most popular girls in school and my crush. My best friend, Chris, always told me to confess to her but I was just too shy. So I decided to buy a pair of shirts. One for her and one for me. When I gave the shirt to her she said it was so cute and accepted the shirt. And she became my girlfriend. But apparently my best friend also had a crush on her. I was at war with myself. The girl I liked or supported my best friend and let him have her. I stayed in this state of dilemma for a lot of time. Until I found out something that shocked me and broke my heart.
I was going to my and my girlfriend’s dorm in the school, looking for my shirt. The pair of the one I gave her, but for some reason I couldn’t find it. I looked all over but it wasn’t there. After I kept looking I heard a ‘buzz’ sound coming from the desk. There I saw my girlfriend’s phone. She had received a message from… Chris… I was confused, why would my best friend send something to my girlfriend. But then I came into the thought that they are friends. I saw it was a picture of Chris with MY shirt… I was shocked, what was he doing with my shirt?! And why was my girlfriend with her shirt next to him?! Something wasn’t right… I went to look for my girlfriend. And that’s when I saw it, she was cheating on me with him. My best friend.
I stepped in and yelled at them. <<
And that is when those dialogues enter. That’s how my love life went. I still don’t understand why she chose him instead of me. I just wish I was better.
Original Lyrics from Heather by Conan Gray
Why would you ever kiss me.
I'm not even half as pretty.
You gave her your sweater it's just polyester.
But you like her better. I wish I was Heather.
Translated
I used Spanish, Portuguese, Hawaiian, German, Japanese & Latin
What to thee, Give me a kiss, I am the midst of wars.
Give him a shirt that right? Polyester.
I want to be better. I like to be full.
* is this…
I don't think this story even makes sense
“I hate you!”
“It’s not like I even liked you!”
“Why.. Why did you do this?! I loved you…”
Those were the last words me and my crush had. She was everything to me, but I guess I was just another person for her. I remembered that day like it was yesterday. The day I finally gave up on her and the day I lost my best friend. Her name was Sky, I had liked her for 3 years and my best friend Chris was always supporting me. Or that’s what I thought. Let me tell you the story, the story of my heartbreak life.
>> We were in high school already, and this girl just drove me crazy. She was one of the most popular girls in school and my crush. My best friend, Chris, always told me to confess to her but I was just too shy. So I decided to buy a pair of shirts. One for her and one for me. When I gave the shirt to her she said it was so cute and accepted the shirt. And she became my girlfriend. But apparently my best friend also had a crush on her. I was at war with myself. The girl I liked or supported my best friend and let him have her. I stayed in this state of dilemma for a lot of time. Until I found out something that shocked me and broke my heart.
I was going to my and my girlfriend’s dorm in the school, looking for my shirt. The pair of the one I gave her, but for some reason I couldn’t find it. I looked all over but it wasn’t there. After I kept looking I heard a ‘buzz’ sound coming from the desk. There I saw my girlfriend’s phone. She had received a message from… Chris… I was confused, why would my best friend send something to my girlfriend. But then I came into the thought that they are friends. I saw it was a picture of Chris with MY shirt… I was shocked, what was he doing with my shirt?! And why was my girlfriend with her shirt next to him?! Something wasn’t right… I went to look for my girlfriend. And that’s when I saw it, she was cheating on me with him. My best friend.
I stepped in and yelled at them. <<
And that is when those dialogues enter. That’s how my love life went. I still don’t understand why she chose him instead of me. I just wish I was better.
- RLove10
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Re's SWC writing
Daily 7/19/21
Previous Version
298 words
The three of them jumped in their horses and rode all the way to the town, but what their parents didn’t know is that everytime they went to “the town” they secretly went to a hidden place in the woods where the princesses were free to do whatever they wanted. Some of you could say this is lying to your parents and it’s really bad but if you were in the princesses place you would think in a different way. If for example you were Ann, a tomboy who was forced to wear itchy dresses you would come to this place where you could wear whatever you wanted and act however you liked. And if you were Arabella, a girl who loved to spend time with the town people but was forced to stay in the castle you’d like to come to this place where only a few people knew you were there. Ann and Arabella escaped to this place with Jodi- Jodi was Ann’s best friend and one of the younger guards in the castle- every five days or so, so their parents wouldn’t have any suspects on them.
“I won! My cookies will be with me when we get back” said Ann jumping from her horse “It’s so good to be here, so relaxing I feel free again.
“Yeah yeah, Jodi could you give me my paint set please” asked Arabella “this place is beautiful and a painting of it would look marvelous in my room”
Arabella was right it was such a beautiful place, big trees that covered them with their now lovely leaves covered in snow. And you could see one or two bunnies jump from here to there. But the most beautiful sight was the frozen lake where the sister liked to ice-skate.
New Version
297 words
The three of them jumped in their horses and rode all the way to the town. But there was something their parents didn’t know. As every time they went to “town” they secretly went to a hidden place in the woods; where the princesses were free to do whatever they wanted. A lot of people say this is lying and tricking your parents and it’s really bad. But if you were in the place of this two girls you would think something different. If you were Ann; a tomboy who was forced to wear itchy dresses, you would come to this place where you could wear whatever you wanted and act however you liked. And if you were Arabella, a girl who loved to spend time with the town people but was forced to stay in the castle you’d like to come to this place where only a few people knew you were there. Ann and Arabella escaped to this place with Jodi -Jodi was Ann’s best friend and one of the younger guards in the castle- every five days or so, so their parents wouldn’t have any suspects on them.
“I won! All your cookies will be mine when we get back!” said Ann jumping from her horse “It’s so good to be here, so relaxing I feel free again."
“Yeah yeah, Jodi could you give me my paint set please” asked Arabella “This place is beautiful and a painting of it would look marvelous in my room”
Arabella was right it was such a beautiful place, big trees that covered them with their lovely leaves covered in snow. You could see one or two bunnies jumping from here to there. But the most beautiful sight was the frozen lake where the sister liked to ice-skate.
Previous Version
298 words
The three of them jumped in their horses and rode all the way to the town, but what their parents didn’t know is that everytime they went to “the town” they secretly went to a hidden place in the woods where the princesses were free to do whatever they wanted. Some of you could say this is lying to your parents and it’s really bad but if you were in the princesses place you would think in a different way. If for example you were Ann, a tomboy who was forced to wear itchy dresses you would come to this place where you could wear whatever you wanted and act however you liked. And if you were Arabella, a girl who loved to spend time with the town people but was forced to stay in the castle you’d like to come to this place where only a few people knew you were there. Ann and Arabella escaped to this place with Jodi- Jodi was Ann’s best friend and one of the younger guards in the castle- every five days or so, so their parents wouldn’t have any suspects on them.
“I won! My cookies will be with me when we get back” said Ann jumping from her horse “It’s so good to be here, so relaxing I feel free again.
“Yeah yeah, Jodi could you give me my paint set please” asked Arabella “this place is beautiful and a painting of it would look marvelous in my room”
Arabella was right it was such a beautiful place, big trees that covered them with their now lovely leaves covered in snow. And you could see one or two bunnies jump from here to there. But the most beautiful sight was the frozen lake where the sister liked to ice-skate.
New Version
297 words
The three of them jumped in their horses and rode all the way to the town. But there was something their parents didn’t know. As every time they went to “town” they secretly went to a hidden place in the woods; where the princesses were free to do whatever they wanted. A lot of people say this is lying and tricking your parents and it’s really bad. But if you were in the place of this two girls you would think something different. If you were Ann; a tomboy who was forced to wear itchy dresses, you would come to this place where you could wear whatever you wanted and act however you liked. And if you were Arabella, a girl who loved to spend time with the town people but was forced to stay in the castle you’d like to come to this place where only a few people knew you were there. Ann and Arabella escaped to this place with Jodi -Jodi was Ann’s best friend and one of the younger guards in the castle- every five days or so, so their parents wouldn’t have any suspects on them.
“I won! All your cookies will be mine when we get back!” said Ann jumping from her horse “It’s so good to be here, so relaxing I feel free again."
“Yeah yeah, Jodi could you give me my paint set please” asked Arabella “This place is beautiful and a painting of it would look marvelous in my room”
Arabella was right it was such a beautiful place, big trees that covered them with their lovely leaves covered in snow. You could see one or two bunnies jumping from here to there. But the most beautiful sight was the frozen lake where the sister liked to ice-skate.
- RLove10
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500+ posts
Re's SWC writing
Daily 7/20/21
Sun
I woke up and walked to the window. The sky looked clear and it was a sunny morning. Sun! It needed to be sun, right! As I knew that it didn't matter how much I hated it, the sun wouldn't just disappear. I started getting ready for school, I changed from my pjs and combed my messy black hair. When I was done I went downstairs to eat my breakfast. My grumpy mother was there, making what she called ‘breakfast’.
“What in the world is this?!” I asked disgusted. There was something that looked like eggs and ham. But the eggs were rotten… “This looks horrible and disgusting!”
“Well, that horrible and disgusting things is your breakfast.” my mother snarled “You can eat it, or you can leave without eating a thing, young man.”
“I prefer to buy my food at school.” I said “You could at least put some effort in the food, mom. Just because you are mad it doesn't mean you need to show your anger to the whole world.”
She looked at me and I looked at her. She knew I was right, but she didn't care. I waited for her to say something, but she was speechless. As there wasn't anything else to do there, I took my backpack and left the house.
You might be asking what happened in there, let me explain everything. My name is Jacob, and that grumpy woman was my mother. She wasn't always like that, but some months ago everything in our lives changed. My father was taking my sister shopping, they were on the car but my father couldn't exactly see where he was going. All thanks to the sun, it was one of the sunniest days I had seen. And my father didn't had his sunglasses with him, so when the sun hit his eyes directly he couldn't see a thing. They crashed… Both of them died in that car accident, all because of the sun! Since that moment I hated the sun more than anything, and my mother just hated everything.
Sun
Idk if this even makes sense :p
I woke up and walked to the window. The sky looked clear and it was a sunny morning. Sun! It needed to be sun, right! As I knew that it didn't matter how much I hated it, the sun wouldn't just disappear. I started getting ready for school, I changed from my pjs and combed my messy black hair. When I was done I went downstairs to eat my breakfast. My grumpy mother was there, making what she called ‘breakfast’.
“What in the world is this?!” I asked disgusted. There was something that looked like eggs and ham. But the eggs were rotten… “This looks horrible and disgusting!”
“Well, that horrible and disgusting things is your breakfast.” my mother snarled “You can eat it, or you can leave without eating a thing, young man.”
“I prefer to buy my food at school.” I said “You could at least put some effort in the food, mom. Just because you are mad it doesn't mean you need to show your anger to the whole world.”
She looked at me and I looked at her. She knew I was right, but she didn't care. I waited for her to say something, but she was speechless. As there wasn't anything else to do there, I took my backpack and left the house.
You might be asking what happened in there, let me explain everything. My name is Jacob, and that grumpy woman was my mother. She wasn't always like that, but some months ago everything in our lives changed. My father was taking my sister shopping, they were on the car but my father couldn't exactly see where he was going. All thanks to the sun, it was one of the sunniest days I had seen. And my father didn't had his sunglasses with him, so when the sun hit his eyes directly he couldn't see a thing. They crashed… Both of them died in that car accident, all because of the sun! Since that moment I hated the sun more than anything, and my mother just hated everything.
- RLove10
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500+ posts
Re's SWC writing
Daily 7/21/21
Descriptive Writing - 210 words
Fred woke up and thought it would be fun to look around the mansion. His room was of a beautiful color palette, white, light blue, and grey. The bed was big and comfy, with a grey bedspread and little blue pillows. There were a lot of paintings showing Lady Beaumont's best designs. He walked out of bed, feeling the soft big mat in his feet. Fred changed his clothes and went outside. When he got to the lowest floor of the mansion, he noticed that the white walls matched perfectly with the stylish floor. Soon a beautiful smell caught his attention. It was a smell he knew, he followed the smell until he got to the garden. Roses! Of course, they were the same gorgeous red roses that his mother had back at their house. He strolled through the different paths, but stopped when he heard something. It sounded like a girl singing. Fred kept listening, it was the most beautiful and melodious voice that Fred had heard in his life. He walked to the place where the sound came from and saw Charlotte sitting in a bench, looking to the horizon. Her curly hair, flowed with the air and her voice gave the place a happy and calm mood.
Narrative Writing - 221 words
Fred was surprised with what he had just witnessed. Who thought that the kind girl who apparently was an awesome designer, had such an angelic voice. He didn't knew what to do, leave? Or go and talk to Charlotte. But destiny decided for him. Charlotte turned around and saw Fred, standing there.
“Fred?” Charlotte said standing up “How long have you been there?”
“Not much, but enough to hear you amazing voice.” Fred answered as he walked towards her “How aren't you a singer?
”Thanks, I guess. And I think that fashion I just liked fashion more than singing. What were you doing out here?“
”Taking a walk around, this place is pretty big. What about you?“
”I like to take some fresh air in the mornings."
They kept talking while they walked back inside the mansion. It had only been one day and they were already friends. They got to the dinning room, where everyone was already eating breakfast. Each one took their seat and enjoyed the delicious meal. After finishing breakfast one of the butlers told everyone to go outside, where Lady Beaumont was waiting for them, ready to give them their first task. The contestants did as they were told and went all the way to the main entrance, where their hostess was standing next to a big board.
Mix - 312 words
Fred woke up with one only thing in his mind. He wanted to explore the fancy mansion he was in. His room was nice; a grey bedspread, blue pillows and a big mat on the floor. But he wanted to see more, so he went down stairs. While he looked around two maids came towards him.
“Do you need anything sir?” one of the maids asked
“No, thank you. I'm just exploring the place.” Fred answered kindly
“In that case, you could go to the garden.” the other maid suggested “There are beautiful things out there.”
“Thanks, I'll get going.”
Fred kept walking until he saw the door that led to the garden. The maid was right, the place was beautiful! There was a sent that was familiar to Fred. He looked to his left and saw roses. They were the exact red, gorgeous roses that his mother had at their house. But before he could continue thinking about his mom, something interrupted his thoughts. A voice, a girl was singing. And she had the most angelical voice Fred had ever heard. He walked towards were the voice came and was surprise of what he was seeing. It was Charlotte, she was sitting in a bench, while her curly hair flowed with the air. She was the one singing.
“Wow..” Fred whispered.
Charlotte heard his whisper and turned around. She saw Fred, standing there beside her. She was surprised and said, “Fred? What are you doing here?”
“I was strolling around when I heard your beautiful voice. What about you?”
“Oh! Thanks, I guess. And, I was just getting some air. It clears my mind.”
They kept talking while they got back to the mansion where they took breakfast. And after breakfast they all were requested outside. As Lady Beaumont was waiting for them there. Ready to give them their first task.
Descriptive Writing - 210 words
Fred woke up and thought it would be fun to look around the mansion. His room was of a beautiful color palette, white, light blue, and grey. The bed was big and comfy, with a grey bedspread and little blue pillows. There were a lot of paintings showing Lady Beaumont's best designs. He walked out of bed, feeling the soft big mat in his feet. Fred changed his clothes and went outside. When he got to the lowest floor of the mansion, he noticed that the white walls matched perfectly with the stylish floor. Soon a beautiful smell caught his attention. It was a smell he knew, he followed the smell until he got to the garden. Roses! Of course, they were the same gorgeous red roses that his mother had back at their house. He strolled through the different paths, but stopped when he heard something. It sounded like a girl singing. Fred kept listening, it was the most beautiful and melodious voice that Fred had heard in his life. He walked to the place where the sound came from and saw Charlotte sitting in a bench, looking to the horizon. Her curly hair, flowed with the air and her voice gave the place a happy and calm mood.
Narrative Writing - 221 words
Fred was surprised with what he had just witnessed. Who thought that the kind girl who apparently was an awesome designer, had such an angelic voice. He didn't knew what to do, leave? Or go and talk to Charlotte. But destiny decided for him. Charlotte turned around and saw Fred, standing there.
“Fred?” Charlotte said standing up “How long have you been there?”
“Not much, but enough to hear you amazing voice.” Fred answered as he walked towards her “How aren't you a singer?
”Thanks, I guess. And I think that fashion I just liked fashion more than singing. What were you doing out here?“
”Taking a walk around, this place is pretty big. What about you?“
”I like to take some fresh air in the mornings."
They kept talking while they walked back inside the mansion. It had only been one day and they were already friends. They got to the dinning room, where everyone was already eating breakfast. Each one took their seat and enjoyed the delicious meal. After finishing breakfast one of the butlers told everyone to go outside, where Lady Beaumont was waiting for them, ready to give them their first task. The contestants did as they were told and went all the way to the main entrance, where their hostess was standing next to a big board.
Mix - 312 words
Fred woke up with one only thing in his mind. He wanted to explore the fancy mansion he was in. His room was nice; a grey bedspread, blue pillows and a big mat on the floor. But he wanted to see more, so he went down stairs. While he looked around two maids came towards him.
“Do you need anything sir?” one of the maids asked
“No, thank you. I'm just exploring the place.” Fred answered kindly
“In that case, you could go to the garden.” the other maid suggested “There are beautiful things out there.”
“Thanks, I'll get going.”
Fred kept walking until he saw the door that led to the garden. The maid was right, the place was beautiful! There was a sent that was familiar to Fred. He looked to his left and saw roses. They were the exact red, gorgeous roses that his mother had at their house. But before he could continue thinking about his mom, something interrupted his thoughts. A voice, a girl was singing. And she had the most angelical voice Fred had ever heard. He walked towards were the voice came and was surprise of what he was seeing. It was Charlotte, she was sitting in a bench, while her curly hair flowed with the air. She was the one singing.
“Wow..” Fred whispered.
Charlotte heard his whisper and turned around. She saw Fred, standing there beside her. She was surprised and said, “Fred? What are you doing here?”
“I was strolling around when I heard your beautiful voice. What about you?”
“Oh! Thanks, I guess. And, I was just getting some air. It clears my mind.”
They kept talking while they got back to the mansion where they took breakfast. And after breakfast they all were requested outside. As Lady Beaumont was waiting for them there. Ready to give them their first task.
- RLove10
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500+ posts
Re's SWC writing
Daily 7/22/21
Mina is based of a BeAuTiFuL mango
Hello people! I’m Mina, the heiress of the Mango tribe. As most of you know, Mangoes are the most famous fruit in the world. That’s the reason my tribe is the leader and my parents the king and queen. As I’m the eldest of my siblings I’m the one who will rule when my parents are gone.
Right now my parents are in a council meeting, with the rulers of the other tribes, Pear, Melon, Banana and Apple. I’m pretty sure they are discussing a solution to our biggest problem, the giants. Every day they come to our villages and take some of us away. We aren’t exactly sure what they do with them but I have an idea, a really dark idea. I see the way the look at us, their big shiny eyes. I’m almost sure that they eat the ones they take… Even if I want to be sure I would like this not to be true, as my brother was a victim… I can’t imagine what happened to him!
“Mina! There you are.” someone said behind me, I turned around and saw my father
“Dad, do you need anything?” I asked
“Yes my dear daughter, the council wants to see you.”
T-the council? Why would the council request to see me? Did I do something wrong or was I in trouble? I couldn’t think of any reason for they to see me, or was it about me being queen? What if they thought I wasn’t ready!
“Mina! Earth to Mina, are you listening to me?” My father yelled as he shaked me
“Yes, I’m sorry father.” I said “Let’s go then..”
My father guided me trough the tree-castle until we got to the Meetings Hall. I tried to stay calm and to keep a neutral smile on my face. We entered the hall and I saw all the powerful rulers in their seats. There was Governor Pier, from the Pear tribe, King Bane and Queen Ana from the Banana tribe, Empress Melo, from the Melon tribe, and President Apolo, from the Apple tribe. My father told me to go to the center of the room and he went to his seat where my mother was.
“Mina Mango, the council has summoned you today for an important reason.” said Governor Pier “As you know giants are still a big problem. That’s the reason why we want to send you into an investigation, recognition and if possible rescue mission.”
“This won’t only give us important information, but if you success it will prove you are ready to be queen.” my mother added
“It would be an honor for me to go in this mission.” I said “When will I start?”
“In 3 days, get ready.” Empress Melo said “Good luck.”
I left the hall surprised. This mission could also help ME. What if I found my brother! I knew I didn’t had much time to get ready, so I went to my room and started packing my things.
The 3 days passed and everyone was in the tree-castle ready to farewell us. I said goodbye to my parents and started my journey. We walked for days, my blonde hair always in my face and the sparkle in my green eyes started to dim. And one day we finally got to our destiny, there was this giant place where I saw a giant… And not only that I saw something that broke my heart and got me full of fear. My suspects were true… The giants ate us, fruits…
“M’lady what should we do?” asked my commander
“Send a letter back to the village and tell them what we discovered,” I commanded “I’m gonna go and see closer”
“But it’s dangerous!” one of the men said.
“I don’t care, do what I say! And wait here for me.” I ordered them
I left my troops on our hiding place and started exploring. I knew what I was doing was risky and the most dangerous thing a fruit could do, but I didn’t care. I continued, getting closer and closer to the giant’s place. But before I could get there something stopped me….
“Mama, mama! Look, it’s a mango!” said a little giant “Can I eat it?”
“Yes dear, but wash it first” the giant’s mother said
No! No! NO! This couldn’t be happening! I was so close! I should have listened to my commander. I guess it’s the end then, at least the village will know what to do with the giants. Goodbye, cruel world.
Mina is based of a BeAuTiFuL mango
Hello people! I’m Mina, the heiress of the Mango tribe. As most of you know, Mangoes are the most famous fruit in the world. That’s the reason my tribe is the leader and my parents the king and queen. As I’m the eldest of my siblings I’m the one who will rule when my parents are gone.
Right now my parents are in a council meeting, with the rulers of the other tribes, Pear, Melon, Banana and Apple. I’m pretty sure they are discussing a solution to our biggest problem, the giants. Every day they come to our villages and take some of us away. We aren’t exactly sure what they do with them but I have an idea, a really dark idea. I see the way the look at us, their big shiny eyes. I’m almost sure that they eat the ones they take… Even if I want to be sure I would like this not to be true, as my brother was a victim… I can’t imagine what happened to him!
“Mina! There you are.” someone said behind me, I turned around and saw my father
“Dad, do you need anything?” I asked
“Yes my dear daughter, the council wants to see you.”
T-the council? Why would the council request to see me? Did I do something wrong or was I in trouble? I couldn’t think of any reason for they to see me, or was it about me being queen? What if they thought I wasn’t ready!
“Mina! Earth to Mina, are you listening to me?” My father yelled as he shaked me
“Yes, I’m sorry father.” I said “Let’s go then..”
My father guided me trough the tree-castle until we got to the Meetings Hall. I tried to stay calm and to keep a neutral smile on my face. We entered the hall and I saw all the powerful rulers in their seats. There was Governor Pier, from the Pear tribe, King Bane and Queen Ana from the Banana tribe, Empress Melo, from the Melon tribe, and President Apolo, from the Apple tribe. My father told me to go to the center of the room and he went to his seat where my mother was.
“Mina Mango, the council has summoned you today for an important reason.” said Governor Pier “As you know giants are still a big problem. That’s the reason why we want to send you into an investigation, recognition and if possible rescue mission.”
“This won’t only give us important information, but if you success it will prove you are ready to be queen.” my mother added
“It would be an honor for me to go in this mission.” I said “When will I start?”
“In 3 days, get ready.” Empress Melo said “Good luck.”
I left the hall surprised. This mission could also help ME. What if I found my brother! I knew I didn’t had much time to get ready, so I went to my room and started packing my things.
The 3 days passed and everyone was in the tree-castle ready to farewell us. I said goodbye to my parents and started my journey. We walked for days, my blonde hair always in my face and the sparkle in my green eyes started to dim. And one day we finally got to our destiny, there was this giant place where I saw a giant… And not only that I saw something that broke my heart and got me full of fear. My suspects were true… The giants ate us, fruits…
“M’lady what should we do?” asked my commander
“Send a letter back to the village and tell them what we discovered,” I commanded “I’m gonna go and see closer”
“But it’s dangerous!” one of the men said.
“I don’t care, do what I say! And wait here for me.” I ordered them
I left my troops on our hiding place and started exploring. I knew what I was doing was risky and the most dangerous thing a fruit could do, but I didn’t care. I continued, getting closer and closer to the giant’s place. But before I could get there something stopped me….
“Mama, mama! Look, it’s a mango!” said a little giant “Can I eat it?”
“Yes dear, but wash it first” the giant’s mother said
No! No! NO! This couldn’t be happening! I was so close! I should have listened to my commander. I guess it’s the end then, at least the village will know what to do with the giants. Goodbye, cruel world.
- RLove10
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500+ posts
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Daily 7/23/21
Age: 61
Genre: Mystery and Legal
“Mr. Carson you are arrested for murdering Marie Carson.”
Police started entering George Carson’s house. One by one, until there were 10 police officers in the house. George was completely shocked, what were they talking about?!
His wife had disappeared a week ago and he had been so worried. How could someone even think he had killed her. Everyone in town knew Marie was everything to George, and when they got the news that he had killed her no one could believe it. And the person who was more troubled about it was Lucy, Geroge’s sister.”
“Are you crazy! My brother would never do a thing like that!” yelled Lucy when they were at the police station “I demand you let him go!”
“I’m sorry ma’am but we can’t do that. There is evidence he is the guilty.” a police officer said “He will have a trail in 2 weeks.”
“Evidence! What evidence?!” growled Lucy
“I have orders of keeping the evidence confidential and a secret from everyone, including you ma’am.” insisted the officer
“You little! My brother is innocent!” Lucy yelled as she tried to punch the officer
“Lucy! What are you doing?!” Lucy’s husband said as he entered the room and hold her hands “I’m really sorry for the trouble officer, we’ll leave now.”
Lucy and her husband, Mark went to their car and Mark drove them home. Lucy was so angry and entered the room huffing. She seated in the couch and started to cry. Mark entered the house and saw his wife crying so he went with her.
“Hey, everything will be okay. We’ll sort things out.” Mark comforted her
“What can we do?! My brother was framed, Marie is dead.” Lucy sobbed “If we don’t do something he will have no chance to be free.”
“Then let’s do something.” Mark said, Lucy looked at him confused “Let’s proof George’s innocence.”
Lucy looked at Mark, he was right. If they proved George’s innocence and founded the true criminal things will be good again. But how could they do it? They didn’t have any lead. There was only one thing they could do. Lucy had a friend at the police station and if he couldn’t help them, they were lost.
Age: 61
Genre: Mystery and Legal
“Mr. Carson you are arrested for murdering Marie Carson.”
Police started entering George Carson’s house. One by one, until there were 10 police officers in the house. George was completely shocked, what were they talking about?!
His wife had disappeared a week ago and he had been so worried. How could someone even think he had killed her. Everyone in town knew Marie was everything to George, and when they got the news that he had killed her no one could believe it. And the person who was more troubled about it was Lucy, Geroge’s sister.”
“Are you crazy! My brother would never do a thing like that!” yelled Lucy when they were at the police station “I demand you let him go!”
“I’m sorry ma’am but we can’t do that. There is evidence he is the guilty.” a police officer said “He will have a trail in 2 weeks.”
“Evidence! What evidence?!” growled Lucy
“I have orders of keeping the evidence confidential and a secret from everyone, including you ma’am.” insisted the officer
“You little! My brother is innocent!” Lucy yelled as she tried to punch the officer
“Lucy! What are you doing?!” Lucy’s husband said as he entered the room and hold her hands “I’m really sorry for the trouble officer, we’ll leave now.”
Lucy and her husband, Mark went to their car and Mark drove them home. Lucy was so angry and entered the room huffing. She seated in the couch and started to cry. Mark entered the house and saw his wife crying so he went with her.
“Hey, everything will be okay. We’ll sort things out.” Mark comforted her
“What can we do?! My brother was framed, Marie is dead.” Lucy sobbed “If we don’t do something he will have no chance to be free.”
“Then let’s do something.” Mark said, Lucy looked at him confused “Let’s proof George’s innocence.”
Lucy looked at Mark, he was right. If they proved George’s innocence and founded the true criminal things will be good again. But how could they do it? They didn’t have any lead. There was only one thing they could do. Lucy had a friend at the police station and if he couldn’t help them, they were lost.
Sorry for leaving it like this. I don't have the inspiration nor time to continue it now. Might do it later.
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Re's SWC writing
Weekly 3
Part 1 - 300 words
You are running through the town, bumping into people. Your heart rate is in the sky, and your feet are about to give up. You’re panting and you have the big need to stop running, but you can’t! Someone is chasing you and you need to escape. You have just ran from the orphanage where you grew up, and the local police are chasing you. There was only one way to escape and that was taking a ship and leaving the island. They look around and one of them spots you next to a store. “There!” another says Oh no! They will catch you, you need to do something quick! You see a street hidden in the dark and your first instinct is to go to it. The police is running after you but you lose them when entering the street. When you get to it, you stop a bit to take some air. You know you can’t rest for long so you keep running, feeling your legs burning and your heart beating at an intense speed. Finally you get to the dock, but the ship you were planning to take has already left! You don’t know what to do and fear starts to take your control. You keep looking for a way out, and then you see two girls walking towards a ship. They look like pirates, they must be some type pirate crew getting food. A crazy thought goes through your head, what if you leave with them? Living a pirate life doesn’t sound that bad, but there could be other opportunities in your life. Which is the right decision? As much as you would love to think more you can’t! The police is still chasing you and they are getting closer every minute.. What should you do?
A) Go and sneak into the pirate ship
B) Stay and find another way
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Part 2 - 345 words
Your instinct made a decision. You follow the pirate girls to their ship and sneak while everyone is busy getting the ship ready. You decided to hide behind a big bunch of boxes. Finally you have some time to rest, your heart slows down and your heavy panting stops. You take a look at the ship, it looks like most of the pirates are girls. What should you do? You could hide until they get to another island, but wouldn’t they find you? You kept fighting with yourself without knowing what to do so the world chose for you. The ship started to move and that’s when you knew you were going with the pirates.
“Raise the sails!” the captain ordered “Aye captain!” all the pirates answered. “Sira, Feather! Please go and move those boxes to somewhere else.” the pirate said to two young pirate girls. “Aye captain!” They walked towards the boxes where you were hiding. You started to breathe heavily, knowing they would catch you. You moved from box to box until there were only 2 boxes left. The girl with black hair and glasses, whose name was Sira, came closer to the box where you were. She accidentally dropped her glasses and saw your feet. “Captain! We have an intruder!” The captain gave a suspicious look and walked towards the box, she moved it away and saw you. You were intimidated by her face, her long black hair and her sword, which was pointing towards you. “Who be ye, little scallywag. And how did ye get to me ship?” she asked. With no other choice than telling the truth you tell her your whole story. Some of the girls look at you sadly while others murmur. “Ye be lucky, most of us be orphans, so we can relate.” the captain says “But ye sneaked into me ship. I give ye two options. Ye become one of us and start with some work or ye walk the plank.” Your choice is clear in your head so you answer the captain. “I decide to…”
A) Become one of them
B) Walk the plank
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Part 3 - 126 words (I think)
https://turbowarp.org/555253140
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Part 4 - 2906 words (counting words from task 1 & 2)
You are running through the town, bumping into people. Your heart rate is in the sky, and your feet are about to give up. You’re panting and you have the big need to stop running, but you can’t! Someone is chasing you and you need to escape. You have just ran from the orphanage where you grew up, and the local police are chasing you. There was only one way to escape and that was taking a ship and leaving the island. They look around and one of them spots you next to a store. “There!” another says Oh no! They will catch you, you need to do something quick! You see a street hidden in the dark and your first instinct is to go to it. The police is running after you but you lose them when entering the street. When you get to it, you stop a bit to take some air. You know you can’t rest for long so you keep running, feeling your legs burning and your heart beating at an intense speed. Finally you get to the dock, but the ship you were planning to take has already left! You don’t know what to do and fear starts to take your control. You keep looking for a way out, and then you see two girls walking towards a ship. They look like pirates, they must be some type pirate crew getting food. A crazy thought goes through your head, what if you leave with them? Living a pirate life doesn’t sound that bad, but there could be other opportunities in your life. Which is the right decision? As much as you would love to think more you can’t! The police is still chasing you and they are getting closer every minute.. What should you do?
A) Go and sneak into the pirate ship
B) Stay and find another way
Part 1 - 300 words
You are running through the town, bumping into people. Your heart rate is in the sky, and your feet are about to give up. You’re panting and you have the big need to stop running, but you can’t! Someone is chasing you and you need to escape. You have just ran from the orphanage where you grew up, and the local police are chasing you. There was only one way to escape and that was taking a ship and leaving the island. They look around and one of them spots you next to a store. “There!” another says Oh no! They will catch you, you need to do something quick! You see a street hidden in the dark and your first instinct is to go to it. The police is running after you but you lose them when entering the street. When you get to it, you stop a bit to take some air. You know you can’t rest for long so you keep running, feeling your legs burning and your heart beating at an intense speed. Finally you get to the dock, but the ship you were planning to take has already left! You don’t know what to do and fear starts to take your control. You keep looking for a way out, and then you see two girls walking towards a ship. They look like pirates, they must be some type pirate crew getting food. A crazy thought goes through your head, what if you leave with them? Living a pirate life doesn’t sound that bad, but there could be other opportunities in your life. Which is the right decision? As much as you would love to think more you can’t! The police is still chasing you and they are getting closer every minute.. What should you do?
A) Go and sneak into the pirate ship
B) Stay and find another way
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Part 2 - 345 words
Your instinct made a decision. You follow the pirate girls to their ship and sneak while everyone is busy getting the ship ready. You decided to hide behind a big bunch of boxes. Finally you have some time to rest, your heart slows down and your heavy panting stops. You take a look at the ship, it looks like most of the pirates are girls. What should you do? You could hide until they get to another island, but wouldn’t they find you? You kept fighting with yourself without knowing what to do so the world chose for you. The ship started to move and that’s when you knew you were going with the pirates.
“Raise the sails!” the captain ordered “Aye captain!” all the pirates answered. “Sira, Feather! Please go and move those boxes to somewhere else.” the pirate said to two young pirate girls. “Aye captain!” They walked towards the boxes where you were hiding. You started to breathe heavily, knowing they would catch you. You moved from box to box until there were only 2 boxes left. The girl with black hair and glasses, whose name was Sira, came closer to the box where you were. She accidentally dropped her glasses and saw your feet. “Captain! We have an intruder!” The captain gave a suspicious look and walked towards the box, she moved it away and saw you. You were intimidated by her face, her long black hair and her sword, which was pointing towards you. “Who be ye, little scallywag. And how did ye get to me ship?” she asked. With no other choice than telling the truth you tell her your whole story. Some of the girls look at you sadly while others murmur. “Ye be lucky, most of us be orphans, so we can relate.” the captain says “But ye sneaked into me ship. I give ye two options. Ye become one of us and start with some work or ye walk the plank.” Your choice is clear in your head so you answer the captain. “I decide to…”
A) Become one of them
B) Walk the plank
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Part 3 - 126 words (I think)
https://turbowarp.org/555253140
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Part 4 - 2906 words (counting words from task 1 & 2)
This part contains Pirate Lingo so here are some link that can help if you don't understand something.
Pinterest pin - https://pin.it/5ZpSUpk
Translator - https://lingojam.com/PirateSpeak
You are running through the town, bumping into people. Your heart rate is in the sky, and your feet are about to give up. You’re panting and you have the big need to stop running, but you can’t! Someone is chasing you and you need to escape. You have just ran from the orphanage where you grew up, and the local police are chasing you. There was only one way to escape and that was taking a ship and leaving the island. They look around and one of them spots you next to a store. “There!” another says Oh no! They will catch you, you need to do something quick! You see a street hidden in the dark and your first instinct is to go to it. The police is running after you but you lose them when entering the street. When you get to it, you stop a bit to take some air. You know you can’t rest for long so you keep running, feeling your legs burning and your heart beating at an intense speed. Finally you get to the dock, but the ship you were planning to take has already left! You don’t know what to do and fear starts to take your control. You keep looking for a way out, and then you see two girls walking towards a ship. They look like pirates, they must be some type pirate crew getting food. A crazy thought goes through your head, what if you leave with them? Living a pirate life doesn’t sound that bad, but there could be other opportunities in your life. Which is the right decision? As much as you would love to think more you can’t! The police is still chasing you and they are getting closer every minute.. What should you do?
A) Go and sneak into the pirate ship
B) Stay and find another way
Last edited by RLove10 (July 24, 2021 19:53:35)