Here’s the story Moonsoon_man! Just remember at the start when its on scratch everything will be an audiobook but when it becomes its own new website ill convert everything to animation (so what ur doing rn is the script for the audiobook)!!! If possible can ya make the episode 20 - 30 mins? Script wise? Anyway here’s the story!!

Episode One - The Outcast
After Order 66, We Meet A Jedi Named Ken Kar On The Run After His Master And Fellow Padawans Had Been Murdered By Anakin Skywalker And A Clone Trooper In The Jedi Temple. Ken Kar Ends Up Crashed On Kothacca, A Criminal Safe Haven. Ken Is Taken In By Brae Tein, A Crime Lord Who Offers Him Protection In Order For His Service. We Meet Ken 24 Years Later, The Empire Has Just Dissolved, Ken Kar Is Now A Gritty Pessimist Who Is Strong With The Force. On Kothacca, He Is Labeled As A Vigilante Known As “DarkStar” Who Is Obsessed With Killing Ex-Clones And Other Ex-Imperial Loyalists, Ken Is Still Working For Brae Tein But Grows To Discover That She Was Loyal To The Empire, Giving Them Weapons, Slaves And More In Exchange For Credits And Riches, Ken Kills Brae Tein And His Eyes Fade To Yellow. Ken Jumps Into The Streets From A Window His Saber Still Ignited, He Spots A Family, He Recognises The Father As A Clone, He Stares At The Clone And Tilts His Head And Tilts His Head, He Runs At The Clone, He Throws His Sabre At His Legs, The Clone Falls To The Ground, Ken Raises His Sabre Up And Thrusts It Into The Clone Repeatedly, He Stops, And You See A Blood Splatter On His Face, He Looks Around Him To See A Crowd Forming Around Him, He Smiles And Tilts His Head. Cut To Black.

can i work with you on this one i would really appreciate it

EpicgamesCon wrote:

can i work with you on this one i would really appreciate it

Prob not but maybe a different one, just to see ur writing can you write me a paragraph of ur best storytelling

Wow, this sounds awesome! I think there should be some sort of “guardian angel” for the father, so that it seems more of a challenge for Ken Kar. Possibly a former Purge Trooper is protecting him… or maybe the father is a former Purge Trooper, and is slightly formidable. I dunno, something like that, just to keep the excitement up a bit.

Monsoon_Man wrote:

Wow, this sounds awesome! I think there should be some sort of “guardian angel” for the father, so that it seems more of a challenge for Ken Kar. Possibly a former Purge Trooper is protecting him… or maybe the father is a former Purge Trooper, and is slightly formidable. I dunno, something like that, just to keep the excitement up a bit.

Nah, I think the father will just be an ex-clone, the scene is there just for shock and cliffhanger and a BIG setup for VADER, for context here:
WARNING SPOILERS FOR FATWS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j39UtdsJC-0

Matjam02 wrote:

Monsoon_Man wrote:

Wow, this sounds awesome! I think there should be some sort of “guardian angel” for the father, so that it seems more of a challenge for Ken Kar. Possibly a former Purge Trooper is protecting him… or maybe the father is a former Purge Trooper, and is slightly formidable. I dunno, something like that, just to keep the excitement up a bit.

Nah, I think the father will just be an ex-clone, the scene is there just for shock and cliffhanger and a BIG setup for VADER, for context here:
WARNING SPOILERS FOR FATWS
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j39UtdsJC-0

No probs, you're the boss, just a thought.

I was actually thinking about that scene when I was reading the paragraph you put up!

I've done lots more, but I want to clean it up before I share it with you. I'm kind of a perfectionist when it comes to my writings, so once I further edit the other chapters I've written, I'll share them. Enjoy! (P.S. how is my writing style?)
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Star Wars: Tales of Kothacca
Episode 1:
“The Outcast”
Created and Developed by Matjam02
Episode Written by Monsoon_Man

A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away…

CHAPTER 1
“Execute Order 66”

Ken was starting to feel paranoid. Very paranoid.
He was aboard a cruiser, running frantically for his life… from one of his closest friends: a clone named Mech. Ken didn’t know what was happening: all he knew was he wasn’t safe.
He remembered he was training with his master. Ken had to do a series of jumps and flips using the Force and had just finished. When he met up with his master and Mech, there was a mysterious message Mech had just received.
It said something like, “Execute Order 66,” but Ken wasn’t 100% sure. Immediately after hearing that sentence, Mech raised his blaster–and fired it at Ken.
“Dodge!” Ken’s master yelled. Obviously, Ken listened. He flipped up, and the impact of coming down almost sent everyone flying.
“Now go! Now!” The Jedi Master ordered. As Ken took off running, he watched his master force push Mech into a wall, knocking the clone out.
Now, hours later, Ken was still on the run… but his master was dead. He was still in shock, but he had seen hundreds of people die–why was his master any different?
Ken decided it would be best to crawl through the vents. He did for a while until he fell through an opening and was now standing in front of 5 clone troopers–including Mech.
Ken didn’t want to do it, but he brought out his lightsaber. The troopers immediately fired, but Ken was skilled. He had just practiced those flips, and now he was going to put them to use. As he blocked some of the shots with his saber, he dodged and jumped and flipped around, trying hard not to die.
Ken flipped in front of three of the troopers and sliced them all at once. He jumped in front of another trooper and force pushed him into a closing blast door, crushing the trooper. Now, the only one left was Mech. Ken couldn’t do it, though. Mech was too much of a friend. In some ways, he was a hero to Ken. But Ken had to do it.
“I’m sorry, but I have to–” Ken began, but suddenly Mech blasted him in the shoulder. PEW! PEW! PEW! Ken started falling back, losing balance, becoming completely vulnerable. Ken kept moving back desperately. Mech was firing so many shots at him, Ken’s arms were starting to feel tired at the amount of blocking he was doing with his lightsaber. Ken kept moving back. Finally, he took one last step, and jumped through a closing blast door, a shot from Mech’s blaster denting the door.
Ken kept running. He found the place he was looking for, the hangar. He found a simple X-Wing and jumped into it. Luckily, there was an astromech droid nearby, and Ken ordered it to jump into the droid socket. The droid listened.
Ken set the coordinates to any system in the Outer Rim that could be safe: and he chose Kothacca–a remote planet full of smugglers and hiding fugitives. Sure, it didn’t sound safe in general, but at least there weren’t any clone troops there.
As Ken took off, he looked back at the hangar. He saw Mech standing there, slipping his helmet off. Ken searched for something in Mech’s eyes, but it wasn’t there.
And then Ken was off and away, just trying to survive in the cold place that was the galaxy.

Awesome!
(Btw Mech’s the guy he will kill at the end of the episode in front of his new family)

Matjam02 wrote:

Awesome!
(Btw Mech’s the guy he will kill at the end of the episode in front of his new family)

Thanks! Also, great minds think alike. I was thinking the exact same thing!!!

Monsoon_Man wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

Awesome!
(Btw Mech’s the guy he will kill at the end of the episode in front of his new family)

Thanks! Also, great minds think alike. I was thinking the exact same thing!!!

Yeh, anyways I gotta go to bed rn but I had an idea for another episode, called “The Smugglers” or “the robbers” or somin like that and it’s like an Ocean 11 heist

Matjam02 wrote:

Monsoon_Man wrote:

Matjam02 wrote:

Awesome!
(Btw Mech’s the guy he will kill at the end of the episode in front of his new family)

Thanks! Also, great minds think alike. I was thinking the exact same thing!!!

Yeh, anyways I gotta go to bed rn but I had an idea for another episode, called “The Smugglers” or “the robbers” or somin like that and it’s like an Ocean 11 heist

Hmmm, sounds interesting. I haven't actually watched Oceans 11 though