Hello! I have recently taken an interest in writing short stories and plan to publish them on Scratch. But first I need more ideas, I only have written up 3 paragraphs and I need some help. So I thought, “Hey, how about I ask some wonderful Scratchers!” and my other self was like, “Yeah! That's a great idea!” So that's how I came up with the idea.

Jobs available:
~Read what I have so far, then make suggestions with ideas and I will most likely add the idea with my own wording, or if given the creator's wording (with credit of course!)
~Help edit and revise the work I have so far (with credit of course)
~Feel free to post a possible sypnosis for the story, based on what I have so far (with credit of course)

Note:
Every time I add a new part I will post the whole story so you can build off of what I have!

Now it's time to share the 3 paragraphs I have created:

The colored leaves fluttered across my face as I lay on
my back under the tree. It was so peaceful. No annoying brothers, no school drama, just peacefulness.

“Corin, get inside immediately!” A loud voice corroded through my mind. I opened my eyes for a second, and
closed them again.

“I said get inside right now!” The voice spoke again. I
opened my eyes again and realized the voice wasn't in my
head, it was Mother.

Now I will highly appreciate any help that is given and give credit to any help that is given, even if the help wasn't used, or I will try to

Bye for now, @-hammi

Hi! I see you've got a bit of story written. What were you thinking it to be about?

unfiltered wrote:

Hi! I see you've got a bit of story written. What were you thinking it to be about?

I was heading for a girl who is disliked by her family, then something happens to her. I don't think I'm going to have something like “Then her family started liking her” I'm thinking more “When that something happens to her, she goes somewhere and starts living there” While I'm thinking about it, this might be longer than a normal short story, I have added on some more, but I might need to edit some parts before typing it up. If you have any other ideas, feel free to put them out there!