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- MiaTheMia
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yay!Taken! Username:miagupta
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:yup
What you do not want us to say be honest i want to hear the truth
Deadline:a day
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/27133006/comments/
Preferred way of contact here im following the thread
i need tips on how to improve
UVS for Teddy,Renee,Soliel,Goldie.I play animal crossing
- Yeetoburro1
- Scratcher
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I'm doing another order right now, your order will be done about 30 minutes after you complete my testing order.yay!Taken! Username:miagupta
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:yup
What you do not want us to say be honest i want to hear the truth
Deadline:a day
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/27133006/comments/
Preferred way of contact here im following the thread
i need tips on how to improve
- MiaTheMia
- Scratcher
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is it true it will get done in a few hours ?
in my country it is 10 so bye!
in my country it is 10 so bye!
UVS for Teddy,Renee,Soliel,Goldie.I play animal crossing
- Yeetoburro1
- Scratcher
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Depends. If my testing order is fast, yes, if it is slow, no. is it true it will get done in a few hours ?
in my country it is 10 so bye!
- lightningspark6545
- Scratcher
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Application form
Username: lightningspark6545
Have you read the terms? yes
Experience: a lot, actually. Wait, how do we review?
Why you want to work here: It seems to be growing fast, and I'm trying to improve my reviewing skills
2 Example reviews:
hehe quite long, for The Pride Shoppe thingy
Username: lightningspark6545
Have you read the terms? yes
Experience: a lot, actually. Wait, how do we review?
Why you want to work here: It seems to be growing fast, and I'm trying to improve my reviewing skills
2 Example reviews:
hehe quite long, for The Pride Shoppe thingy
Oreo Shop 2.0's ReviewFirst Impression: 7.5/10
When you first look at The Oreo Shop 2.0, there is the banner, which is made by a staff member, which is good as you sell banners.The banner seems of high quality, and you have an About section, which is great for customers to know what kind of shop they are going to order from, However, I think it might be beneficial to list down your services, instead of keeping them on the Staff post, which customers will be most likely to not read. Also, instead of keeping your motto in the About section, I recommend highlighting it, make it stand out, so I suggest putting it in it's own quote, use the bold font, and big letters, like this.Also, it's great that you have a directory, it helps customers navigate your shop, and none of the links seem to be broken! Overall, a great first impression[center][quote][big][b]"Getting your orders done in the crack of a biscuit!"[/b][/big][/quote][/center]Original Posts: 8/10
Your posts are quite easy to understand, which is good, and you have a directory on every post. Your rules are easy to understand and clear. You have all types of forms, except a Resign Form, which isn't that important in my opinion. In my opinion, you might want to remove the link in the directory of the post that you are currently on, but as I said, it's only my opinion. But the only thing that bothers me most is that you do not have a portfolio, or unique additions. You might want to add a portfolio so customers can see how skilled your shop is. You might want to add something unique too, to help your shop stand out from the other competitors. (Other shops) Overall, you still have plenty of helpful information.Bulletin Board Code: 8.5/10
You show an great mastery of BBCode, it helps the shop look more professional and pleasing! However, you could still improve more by touching it up a bit, highlighting (Bold and Big) the important posts.Productivity: 7.5/10
To calculate your productivity, I use two measures, OPP, Orders Per Page, and SI, Spam Index. I am using the last 4.5 pages to calculate this. (19,18,17,16,15). Your OPP Score is 1/4.5, it is quite low, and I noticed it was unfinished, but that's fine, as it was the most recent post as of now. your SI, Spam Index is 30/90, or 0.30. (I hope this is right), You might want to get workers to stop going off-topic a lot.Shop Environment: 7/10
Your shop is very lively, and workers seem to enjoy themselves, but there is a lot of off-topic posts, so you could make a new thread or studio for that. When there is too much spam, it is very unlikely that customers will order. I also recommend bumping more often so more people will notice it.Final Impression: 77/100 - C+
This shop has loads of potential, and could be the next big shop, if you lowered the amount of Spam, and tried bringing in some more orders. Hope this helps, and good luck!Advice:
- Decrease the amount of spam.
- Try advertising to bring in more orders.
- Bump more often.
- Create a thread, or studio for off-topic.
- Highlight some important parts.
- Highlighting the motto.
- Remove the link of the current post in the directory.
- 2nd: you might know this
Here's your review: This is a great game, the idea is original, enough to get loved by a Famous Scratcher. I love how you go down to get to the next level, but maybe you could make it more realistic, like brown particles falling from the sky, like everything might collapse, as an earthquake just happened, maybe at the last levels, make it harder, like make the ground split, or shake, it will feel like the aftershock is almost there. Thanks for ordering!
im a regular guy
ive never been on the forums before. totally.
never owned or joined any shops or anything. yep.
ok, yes, i founded lightning studios, a dying shop that has fell from its prime ig.
- Yeetoburro1
- Scratcher
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Accepted! Would you like to be the Secretary, the only BoD slot we have open? snip
- Yeetoburro1
- Scratcher
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Hey, I remember that xD Here's your review: This is a great game, the idea is original, enough to get loved by a Famous Scratcher. I love how you go down to get to the next level, but maybe you could make it more realistic, like brown particles falling from the sky, like everything might collapse, as an earthquake just happened, maybe at the last levels, make it harder, like make the ground split, or shake, it will feel like the aftershock is almost there. Thanks for ordering!
- lightningspark6545
- Scratcher
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Yeah secretary is fine.Accepted! Would you like to be the Secretary, the only BoD slot we have open? snip
xDHey, I remember that xD Here's your review: This is a great game, the idea is original, enough to get loved by a Famous Scratcher. I love how you go down to get to the next level, but maybe you could make it more realistic, like brown particles falling from the sky, like everything might collapse, as an earthquake just happened, maybe at the last levels, make it harder, like make the ground split, or shake, it will feel like the aftershock is almost there. Thanks for ordering!
im a regular guy
ive never been on the forums before. totally.
never owned or joined any shops or anything. yep.
ok, yes, i founded lightning studios, a dying shop that has fell from its prime ig.
- gummybear700
- Scratcher
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My review:by @gummybear700
Who did your order? @yeetoburro1
Was it on Time? Yes! It was perfectly on time! My order actually came very early I didn't expect it to be so quick!
Scale of 1-10? 10! Maybe even eleven! The review was truthful and helpful!
Would you come back? Yes! I will definitely come back as service is fast and helpful.
Quote : Golden Reviews deserve gold medals for their speed, honestly and golden service!
Who did your order? @yeetoburro1
Was it on Time? Yes! It was perfectly on time! My order actually came very early I didn't expect it to be so quick!
Scale of 1-10? 10! Maybe even eleven! The review was truthful and helpful!
Would you come back? Yes! I will definitely come back as service is fast and helpful.
Quote : Golden Reviews deserve gold medals for their speed, honestly and golden service!
- TImeAndAgain
- Scratcher
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Who did your order? @yeetoburro1
Was it on time? It was early 0.o
How was it, on a scale of 1 to 10? 9
Would you come back? if i need a review again.
Quote? (We may use this)(optional) : this definately should be a more noticed shop.
Was it on time? It was early 0.o
How was it, on a scale of 1 to 10? 9
Would you come back? if i need a review again.
Quote? (We may use this)(optional) : this definately should be a more noticed shop.
Hi! Im jek, also known as TimeAndAgain. I like programming, engineering, and 3D moddeling.
- zobandzeff
- Scratcher
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Order Form
Username:zobandzeff
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:golden
What you do not want us to say you can order any of the options
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/426127/
Preferred way of contact through my shop
Username:zobandzeff
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:golden
What you do not want us to say you can order any of the options
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/426127/
Preferred way of contact through my shop
- JC20092009
- Scratcher
500+ posts
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Order Form
Username:zobandzeff
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:golden
What you do not want us to say you can order any of the options
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/426127/
Preferred way of contact through my shop
Claimed!
- lightningspark6545
- Scratcher
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I know this is taken, but I would like to take it again for a bonus review! Order Form
Username:zobandzeff
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:golden
What you do not want us to say you can order any of the options
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/426127/
Preferred way of contact through my shop
im a regular guy
ive never been on the forums before. totally.
never owned or joined any shops or anything. yep.
ok, yes, i founded lightning studios, a dying shop that has fell from its prime ig.
- zobandzeff
- Scratcher
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you can do that if you want toI know this is taken, but I would like to take it again for a bonus review! Order Form
Username:zobandzeff
Type of review shop
Have you read the terms?:golden
What you do not want us to say you can order any of the options
Link:https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/426127/
Preferred way of contact through my shop
- MiaTheMia
- Scratcher
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um its approching 24 hours but i still havent got my review
UVS for Teddy,Renee,Soliel,Goldie.I play animal crossing
- Yeetoburro1
- Scratcher
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You have not completed the testing review. We cannot give an accurate review without looking at your service. um its approching 24 hours but i still havent got my review
- MiaTheMia
- Scratcher
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oh now i get it i just finished it anywayYou have not completed the testing review. We cannot give an accurate review without looking at your service. um its approching 24 hours but i still havent got my review
UVS for Teddy,Renee,Soliel,Goldie.I play animal crossing
- Yeetoburro1
- Scratcher
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Good!Active!ACTIVITY CHECK
Quote this post and say “Active” by the 27th, or you will be fired. (Seems harsh, but I cannot let employees just not be active)