-PoIar- wrote:

scratchy10231 wrote:

everyone has such high word goals and i'm just sitting here content with my 7500 word goal.

and oof mytholychee well we'll work hard. very very very hard.

Oh lol
Wasn't that your goal during March this year? I remember it was low like that.

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

Writing_Forever wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

-PoIar- wrote:

AtheneNocturna wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

can i just say the thumbnail is super pretty
who made the thumbnail ?

idk, it looks like everyone signed something or something liked that, although idk when that happened…i never signed it, so…

I think mystery maker wrote em all on, bc I don't remember a signing chat

Yeah, I never signed anything. And it seems like this mystery person knows all of our nicknames as well.

Yeah.

They probably just know our nicknames because we use them, lol.
I think whoever it was was named a while ago but I can’t remember who it was.

wait was it sugar

If I had to take a guess, I think it might have been Taryn?

Oh hey everyone, I'm gonna start posting weekly sets of critiques with a themed lesson for July SWC – which means, of course, that I need stuff to look at xD This week's lesson is gonna be about Simplicity for Clarity – learning how to determine which details in a work of writing are necessary to its purpose, and which are extraneous and should be cut out. It's not too complicated, but important, so I think it's a nice starting topic.
So, if any leaders or co-leaders would like to submit short excerpts from their writing that you want me to take a look at, that would be awesome! (be sure to provide some context as to what it is and its purpose). If you'd like, you can even extend this to your campers as well – I'm going to ask each of Thriller's campers individually, since this is coming from my cabin.
Post excerpts or links to excerpts in the comments of the Thriller Cabin studio: https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/11975620/comments/

HonestlyRon wrote:

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

Writing_Forever wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

-PoIar- wrote:

AtheneNocturna wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

can i just say the thumbnail is super pretty
who made the thumbnail ?

idk, it looks like everyone signed something or something liked that, although idk when that happened…i never signed it, so…

I think mystery maker wrote em all on, bc I don't remember a signing chat

Yeah, I never signed anything. And it seems like this mystery person knows all of our nicknames as well.

Yeah.

They probably just know our nicknames because we use them, lol.
I think whoever it was was named a while ago but I can’t remember who it was.

wait was it sugar

If I had to take a guess, I think it might have been Taryn?

Oh hey everyone, I'm gonna start posting weekly sets of critiques with a themed lesson for July SWC – which means, of course, that I need stuff to look at xD This week's lesson is gonna be about Simplicity for Clarity – learning how to determine which details in a work of writing are necessary to its purpose, and which are extraneous and should be cut out. It's not too complicated, but important, so I think it's a nice starting topic.
So, if any leaders or co-leaders would like to submit short excerpts from their writing that you want me to take a look at, that would be awesome! (be sure to provide some context as to what it is and its purpose). If you'd like, you can even extend this to your campers as well – I'm going to ask each of Thriller's campers individually, since this is coming from my cabin.
Post excerpts or links to excerpts in the comments of the Thriller Cabin studio: https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/11975620/comments/

You could critique this if you want, https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/356560/?page=1#post-3610587, tell me if you want me to post in the comments of Thriller.

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

Writing_Forever wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

-PoIar- wrote:

AtheneNocturna wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

-snip-

-snip-

snippity snippity

snippity snappity

snippity snippity snap.

snippity snippity snappity
snippity snippity snappity snippity

snappity snip

snappity snippity

snippy

snippy snappy

HonestlyRon wrote:

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

Writing_Forever wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

-PoIar- wrote:

AtheneNocturna wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

-snip-

-snip-

snippity snippity

snippity snappity

snippity snippity snap.

snippity snippity snappity
snippity snippity snappity snippity

snappity snip

snappity snippity

snippy

snippy snappy

i
kay, thanks!!

HonestlyRon wrote:

Does writing count even if it is in another language?

smartcutecandy wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

Does writing count even if it is in another language?

Yes

HonestlyRon wrote:

Does writing count even if it is in another language??

HonestlyRon wrote:

Just as a fun poll, how many languages do y'all know?

HonestlyRon wrote:

Just as a fun poll, how many languages do y'all know?

HonestlyRon wrote:

Just as a fun poll, how many languages do y'all know?

ringtile555 wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

Just as a fun poll, how many languages do y'all know?

English and Mandarin. When it comes to conlangs, I understand Vandus (which my friend made), Trilnarum, Lunim, and Dirente (all three of which are of my own making)

HItTheReplayButton wrote:

Writing_Forever wrote:

smartcutecandy wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

-PoIar- wrote:

AtheneNocturna wrote:

HonestlyRon wrote:

pianorecorder wrote:

snip

If I had to take a guess, I think it might have been Taryn?

Oh hey everyone, I'm gonna start posting weekly sets of critiques with a themed lesson for July SWC – which means, of course, that I need stuff to look at xD This week's lesson is gonna be about Simplicity for Clarity – learning how to determine which details in a work of writing are necessary to its purpose, and which are extraneous and should be cut out. It's not too complicated, but important, so I think it's a nice starting topic.
So, if any leaders or co-leaders would like to submit short excerpts from their writing that you want me to take a look at, that would be awesome! (be sure to provide some context as to what it is and its purpose). If you'd like, you can even extend this to your campers as well – I'm going to ask each of Thriller's campers individually, since this is coming from my cabin.
Post excerpts or links to excerpts in the comments of the Thriller Cabin studio: https://scratch.mit.edu/studios/11975620/comments/

HonestlyRon wrote:

Just as a fun poll, how many languages do y'all know?

HonestlyRon wrote:

Just as a fun poll, how many languages do y'all know?