I made a little collection of some of my digital art, and I was wondering if someone would look at it, and maybe criticize it?
This is the art collection.

the shading could use some work idk

i think coloring your lines would help, prepare for a five second low quality mockup

(my brush's anti-anialising was off so sorry about pixellation)

I was going to get around to this, sorry for the late reply.
This is probably going to sound weird at first, but there's something about the shapes in your work that seems off to me. I'm struggling to place exactly what it is if I'm honest, but I think it might stem from how you're drawing. Do you draw freely without using any form of construction and/or start almost immediately with your final outline? If so, I think that might be what's doing it. Basically, I feel like each piece needs a bit more polish, and I feel that the polish needs to be applied in the stages before getting the outline you're going to stick with- you just need to to a couple more checks of the proportions and spacing of everything first.

TheRealNetherBefore wrote:

I was going to get around to this, sorry for the late reply.
This is probably going to sound weird at first, but there's something about the shapes in your work that seems off to me. I'm struggling to place exactly what it is if I'm honest, but I think it might stem from how you're drawing. Do you draw freely without using any form of construction and/or start almost immediately with your final outline? If so, I think that might be what's doing it. Basically, I feel like each piece needs a bit more polish, and I feel that the polish needs to be applied in the stages before getting the outline you're going to stick with- you just need to to a couple more checks of the proportions and spacing of everything first.

I never sketch with my digital art, as it's quite a nuisance. I do sketch with traditional art.

The outline is too obvious.

badatprogrammingibe wrote:

The outline is too obvious.

What do you mean? It's supposed to be like that. I don't do art without outlines.

zafzaf wrote:

TheRealNetherBefore wrote:

I was going to get around to this, sorry for the late reply.
This is probably going to sound weird at first, but there's something about the shapes in your work that seems off to me. I'm struggling to place exactly what it is if I'm honest, but I think it might stem from how you're drawing. Do you draw freely without using any form of construction and/or start almost immediately with your final outline? If so, I think that might be what's doing it. Basically, I feel like each piece needs a bit more polish, and I feel that the polish needs to be applied in the stages before getting the outline you're going to stick with- you just need to to a couple more checks of the proportions and spacing of everything first.

I never sketch with my digital art, as it's quite a nuisance. I do sketch with traditional art.

I think just a couple shapes (definitely a circle for the head and a line of action) would help. Try using lines of actions and circles, cylinders, and boxes to lay out where the shapes will be and mesh transform the proportions until they look right. It'll also help your lines be more confident. Try texturing the color to show fur instead of making wobbly outlines as well, or just spike occasionally with thing outlines, as right now your lines just look shaky and not as furry as they could be.

hmm I'm new here and I would love to rate it but it's not working on my end.

--_Nova_-- wrote:

zafzaf wrote:

TheRealNetherBefore wrote:

I was going to get around to this, sorry for the late reply.
This is probably going to sound weird at first, but there's something about the shapes in your work that seems off to me. I'm struggling to place exactly what it is if I'm honest, but I think it might stem from how you're drawing. Do you draw freely without using any form of construction and/or start almost immediately with your final outline? If so, I think that might be what's doing it. Basically, I feel like each piece needs a bit more polish, and I feel that the polish needs to be applied in the stages before getting the outline you're going to stick with- you just need to to a couple more checks of the proportions and spacing of everything first.

I never sketch with my digital art, as it's quite a nuisance. I do sketch with traditional art.

I think just a couple shapes (definitely a circle for the head and a line of action) would help. Try using lines of actions and circles, cylinders, and boxes to lay out where the shapes will be and mesh transform the proportions until they look right. It'll also help your lines be more confident. Try texturing the color to show fur instead of making wobbly outlines as well, or just spike occasionally with thing outlines, as right now your lines just look shaky and not as furry as they could be.

BUT I USE FIREALPACA I CAN'T TEXTURE THINGS AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA