SORRY! I'm taking this story down. I really appreciated all your wonderful comments, but sorry. One of my friends has just got her story stolen, and I'm telling you, it scared the heebies jeebies out of me. Not saying that you'll do such a thing, but just… just in case. Sorry again!

haras5 wrote:

That's cool! I've only been reading a little bit of the story, but what I've been reading of it I liked. Good job!

utsi10 wrote:

Nice

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

THX! (Just curious, but whose your fav character in the story?)

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

THX! (Just curious, but whose your fav character in the story?)

Hm.. Rose, maybe? Either Rose or Jack.

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

THX! (Just curious, but whose your fav character in the story?)

Hm.. Rose, maybe? Either Rose or Jack.

YAY! (I'm trying to get everyone to like Rose…) My own fav character haven't come out yet, but so far, I guess it's Jack….

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

THX! (Just curious, but whose your fav character in the story?)

Hm.. Rose, maybe? Either Rose or Jack.

YAY! (I'm trying to get everyone to like Rose…) My own fav character haven't come out yet, but so far, I guess it's Jack….

Ooh, cool! I look forward to meeting your favorite character.

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

THX! (Just curious, but whose your fav character in the story?)

Hm.. Rose, maybe? Either Rose or Jack.

YAY! (I'm trying to get everyone to like Rose…) My own fav character haven't come out yet, but so far, I guess it's Jack….

Ooh, cool! I look forward to meeting your favorite character.

It's the bad one… XDDD

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

catcat800 wrote:

This story is just.. WOW. Like, your writing style is great, and the scenes are executed really nicely, and nothing is dragged on, and nothing is rushed, I love it!

THANK YOU SO MUCH! (Things like these just makes my day! XD)

Ah, no problem! (You deserve it. :'3)

THX! (Just curious, but whose your fav character in the story?)

Hm.. Rose, maybe? Either Rose or Jack.

YAY! (I'm trying to get everyone to like Rose…) My own fav character haven't come out yet, but so far, I guess it's Jack….

Ooh, cool! I look forward to meeting your favorite character.

It's the bad one… XDDD

I always like the bad ones xD

singer543 wrote:

This is great! You're an excellent author.

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

singer543 wrote:

This is great! You're an excellent author.

Thank you! (I'm not really an author… XP)

singer543 wrote:

ForeverAnAuthor wrote:

singer543 wrote:

This is great! You're an excellent author.

Thank you! (I'm not really an author… XP)

You are too!