I have spent more time on viewing peoples' projects than making my own. But I've made a game called Bubble. I just uploaded Bubble pre-alpha from Scratch 1.4 today. I am seeking for feedback, reviews, and ideas. Bubble Pre-Alpha is not in my main account (Rumanti) but on my test and alternate account, MagicSparkle.

Please submit your ideas, feedback, reviews, and constructive critic in this thread, not on the project.

Any constructive reviews/critic would be credited in my final work.

Thanks, Rumanti.

Hmm… Let's see…

Make the player smaller,
Add lives, so if you lose all you have to start the game again,
Also moving obstacles would be good,
Powerups,
And make the start screen with buttons like “Play” “Settings” “Instructions”

That is all that I can think of,

Also, First!

ScratchJahd2011 wrote:

Hmm… Let's see…

Make the player smaller,
Add lives, so if you lose all you have to start the game again,
Also moving obstacles would be good,
Powerups,
And make the start screen with buttons like “Play” “Settings” “Instructions”

That is all that I can think of,

Also, First!

Thanks for the feedback! I'd try to add your suggestions.

ScratchJahd2011 wrote:

Hmm… Let's see…

Make the player smaller,Agreed, and maybe more agile too.
Add lives, so if you lose all you have to start the game again, Sorry, but I don't agree, I don't like having to keep starting over.
Also moving obstacles would be good, Agreed.
Powerups, Agreed, like 5 sec shield, score increase, etc.
And make the start screen with buttons like “Play” “Settings” “Instructions” Agreed.

That is all that I can think of,

Also, First!

Comments in bold.

tcaclass wrote:

ScratchJahd2011 wrote:

Hmm… Let's see…

Make the player smaller,Agreed, and maybe more agile too.
Add lives, so if you lose all you have to start the game again, Sorry, but I don't agree, I don't like having to keep starting over.
Also moving obstacles would be good, Agreed.
Powerups, Agreed, like 5 sec shield, score increase, etc.
And make the start screen with buttons like “Play” “Settings” “Instructions” Agreed.

That is all that I can think of,

Also, First!

Comments in bold.

Thanks tcaclass, for the extra thoughts

I've played it and… I believe you need to put a level in between level one and two. The character could be a little smaller, and the character needs to be able to come to a complete stop faster. These are the only flaws I found. Good game.

It really needs expansion upon the formula, like power ups, different types of hazards, bosses, and stage theming. This could become a concept for an iPhone game!

Thanks for the reviews everybody I would definitely add more buttons (instructions, et cetera) and smaller player. I would do some tests first to see if some stuff works…

FirstSkyler1 wrote:

I've played it and… I believe you need to put a level in between level one and two.

Uh, what? What did you meant?

Great project, I would say that's feature material! I think you should add a bit of gravity, as what goes up, must come down!

Rumanti wrote:

Thanks for the reviews everybody I would definitely add more buttons (instructions, et cetera) and smaller player. I would do some tests first to see if some stuff works…

FirstSkyler1 wrote:

I've played it and… I believe you need to put a level in between level one and two.

Uh, what? What did you meant?

I think he means that level 1 is too easy and level 2 is too hard.

I think the sprite is just fine size wise, but I do agree, he needs to be more responsive. Besides that great game and good job.

My Suggestions:

• Make the bubble a little smaller
• Make it so that the bubble's velocity is reset when it dies so that it doesn't keep moving
• Add a certain amount of lives to increase the difficulty

It would also be cool if you added moving obstacles, powerups, other hazards, and a main menu.

pinser wrote:

Rumanti wrote:

Thanks for the reviews everybody I would definitely add more buttons (instructions, et cetera) and smaller player. I would do some tests first to see if some stuff works…

FirstSkyler1 wrote:

I've played it and… I believe you need to put a level in between level one and two.

Uh, what? What did you meant?

I think he means that level 1 is too easy and level 2 is too hard.

Thanks for the clarification. I'd redo the levels.

AQUAGIRL30 wrote:

I think the sprite is just fine size wise, but I do agree, he needs to be more responsive. Besides that great game and good job.

Thanks! I'd make it more responsive.

Thepuzzlegame wrote:

My Suggestions:

• Make the bubble a little smaller
• Make it so that the bubble's velocity is reset when it dies so that it doesn't keep moving
• Add a certain amount of lives to increase the difficulty

It would also be cool if you added moving obstacles, powerups, other hazards, and a main menu.

I am going to do all of it. Thank you for the suggestions!

Making the bubble smaller would be good, that way, you could make the level more detailed.
Secondly, you need a difficulty curve… There was no curve, really. just a spike.
I think the bubble should look more… bubblish (that's just me, sorry.)
AND one more thing…
GOOD WORK, GOOD LUCK.

ShadowFlareX wrote:

I think the bubble should look more… bubblish (that's just me, sorry.)

How do I do it? Add some highlight… Or what? Can you please explain?

Sorry for the late reply. I had been quite inactive lately.