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-Spectrum

Hi there! Unfortunately since I am taking a hiatus Rainbow Reviews is closed, I will probably be back with in a couple of months however!

Created on September 3rd 2016
Member of The Shop Federation as of September 10th

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Members of the shop, please do these if you can! They are in prioritized order; first = has been waiting the longest.

PackersRuleGoPack wrote:
Username: PackersRuleGoPack
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/117360235/
Any notes: None

thoyal wrote:
Username: thoyal
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119459936/#player
Any notes: Please review this sometime soon!

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Last edited by -Spectrum (Dec. 9, 2016 06:43:23)

monkeytrooper

Hey can I join

-Spectrum

monkeytrooper wrote:
Hey can I join

I'll be accepting members soon, at the moment it's just the royal ‘we’

-Spectrum wrote:
We are currently not hiring, sorry!

-Spectrum

Bump!

-Spectrum

Bump! I'm now looking for others to help me out

60 second rule, is that you? I haven't seen you for a while…

monkeytrooper

I will help

thoyal

Yes! I need a shop like this. I'm always looking for feedback on my games.

Right now I'm working on a zombie defense game. Check it out here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119593170/. I want to make it professional, kind of like Illusyum: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/117154285/. Right now I'm working on the first level, but sometime in the future I want to have multiple levels and a level select. I'm also still developing the plotline. However, for me to develop the plotline completely, I need to know how many levels I am going to make! Each level should last about one to three minutes. How many levels do you think I should have? I was originally going to do three, but now I'm thinking more of five. I've been in contact with professional gaming websites, and hopefully, they can put my game on their websites when I'm finished. So, right now, can you play the game and tell me what you think? I'll probably come back to this shop and get more feedback later on.

P.S. If you want to help with this game, let me know!

-Spectrum

thoyal wrote:
Yes! I need a shop like this. I'm always looking for feedback on my games.

Right now I'm working on a zombie defense game. Check it out here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119593170/. I want to make it professional, kind of like Illusyum: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/117154285/. Right now I'm working on the first level, but sometime in the future I want to have multiple levels and a level select. I'm also still developing the plotline. However, for me to develop the plotline completely, I need to know how many levels I am going to make! Each level should last about one to three minutes. How many levels do you think I should have? I was originally going to do three, but now I'm thinking more of five. I've been in contact with professional gaming websites, and hopefully, they can put my game on their websites when I'm finished. So, right now, can you play the game and tell me what you think? I'll probably come back to this shop and get more feedback later on.

P.S. If you want to help with this game, let me know!

That sounds awesome! I'll do it ASAP! Do you think you could fill out the form, though? ^u^

thoyal

-Spectrum wrote:
thoyal wrote:
Yes! I need a shop like this. I'm always looking for feedback on my games.

Right now I'm working on a zombie defense game. Check it out here: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119593170/. I want to make it professional, kind of like Illusyum: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/117154285/. Right now I'm working on the first level, but sometime in the future I want to have multiple levels and a level select. I'm also still developing the plotline. However, for me to develop the plotline completely, I need to know how many levels I am going to make! Each level should last about one to three minutes. How many levels do you think I should have? I was originally going to do three, but now I'm thinking more of five. I've been in contact with professional gaming websites, and hopefully, they can put my game on their websites when I'm finished. So, right now, can you play the game and tell me what you think? I'll probably come back to this shop and get more feedback later on.

P.S. If you want to help with this game, let me know!
That sounds awesome! I'll do it ASAP! Do you think you could fill out the form, though? ^u^

I think my post already covered the information the form wanted, but I'll fill out the form anyway.

Username: Thoyal
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119593170/
Any notes: Read the first post.

bigpuppy

Username: bigpuppy
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118749590/
Any notes: Please tell me on my profile when you are done.

-Spectrum

thoyal wrote:
I think my post already covered the information the form wanted, but I'll fill out the form anyway.

Username: Thoyal
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119593170/
Any notes: Read the first post.

Thanks, it was just a bit long and it's easier in this format

bigpuppy wrote:
Username: bigpuppy
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118749590/
Any notes: Please tell me on my profile when you are done.

Sure! I'll do it ASAP, and of course I'll tell you on your profile

monkeytrooper wrote:
I will help

OK, can you fill out the sign-up form, please? ^^

PackersRuleGoPack

Username: PackersRuleGoPack
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115040825/ https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/117360235/

-Spectrum

PackersRuleGoPack wrote:
Username: PackersRuleGoPack
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115040825/
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/117360235/

I'll add that to my to-do list! I've got a lot to do, but it shouldn't take more than a couple of days

MagicPigPerson

Username: MagicPigPerson
Activity level: Like 7/10… (I go on here whenever I get bored, which is often…)
Experience with reviewing: I do reviews with Craft Supply. Link to the shop here
Any extra notes: Failure is always an option.

-Spectrum

MagicPigPerson wrote:
Username: MagicPigPerson
Activity level: Like 7/10… (I go on here whenever I get bored, which is often…)
Experience with reviewing: I do reviews with Craft Supply. Link to the shop here
Any extra notes: Failure is always an option.

Accepted! If you could do some of the reviews on the list that'd be great, since I've got a lot to do

MagicPigPerson

-Spectrum wrote:
Accepted! If you could do some of the reviews on the list that'd be great, since I've got a lot to do

Sure! I'll do bigpuppy's request. (P.S, you might want to update the member list…)

-Spectrum

MagicPigPerson wrote:
-Spectrum wrote:
Accepted! If you could do some of the reviews on the list that'd be great, since I've got a lot to do
Sure! I'll do bigpuppy's request. (P.S, you might want to update the member list…)

Thanks! Oh, and thanks for the reminder, I'll do that right now ^^

Wybscrach

Could somebody review this?
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115742620/

-Spectrum

Wybscrach wrote:
Could somebody review this?
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115742620/

Hi there! Please fill out the form, it just makes it easier for us

-Spectrum

thoyal wrote:
Username: Thoyal
Link to project(s): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/119593170/
Any notes: Read the first post.

Customer: Thoyal
Project: Zombie Game
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Coding 7/10
There's not much yet, but at this stage, great!
Suggestions: See Bugs and Glitches section.

Art: 6/10
Pretty good, but since you want it to be a professional game, see the suggestions.
Suggestions: Professional games usually have either a simplistic style or a detailed one, but yours is somewhere in between, so I would recommend playing around and finding what you're good at, then working on the art ^u^

Music: 0/10
N/A
Suggestions: I know that the game is in early stages, but perhaps add some music? Try bensound.com, it's really good for royalty-free tracks.

Bugs/Glitches: 9/10
So far, fine! I only found one bug, which is when the zombies spawn too close to the edge of the screen and it's impossible to shoot them.
Suggestions: Set a limit for how far left or right the zombies x position can be.

Overall: 8/10
I like this a lot, it's a simple game but it could become really big one day

Suggestions: See the other sections ^^ As for the levels, I think around ten or even more might be even better!
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Notes: You mentioned collaborating on this, I might just take you up on that — I could do the art and you the coding, perhaps? I'll think about it, and anyway it's up to you :3

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