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- MagicPigPerson
- Scratcher
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Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Review of https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/115564868/ for MasterJPixelIt's new, It was added with the update that changed the search bar. I think it's pretty cool!
Graphics(1-10): 9/10 Even though they weren't 100% my style, the graphics were very consistent, something I appreciate a lot in games.
Coding(1-10): 5/10 The walking wasn't the best coding I've seen. I couldn't find your exact code, but I think you're using something like this:when [right v] key pressedIt would be better to use this:
change x by (10)when [right v] key pressedGlitches(1-10): 7/10 None that I could find, though you mentioned a few yourself that should be fixed.
repeat until <not <key [right v] pressed?>>
change x by (10)
end
Creativity(1-10): 7/10
Grammar(1-10): 9.99/10 The “-ing” form of die is “dying,” not “dieing.”
What you think about their project(Your Professional opinion): Still needs a lot of work, but I think it will shape up to be an awesome game!
What could be improved upon(The stuff the needs to be tweaked or worked on a bit): (see my above comments)
EDIT: Whoa, cool, you can add the BB code scratchblocks to you backpack! Is this new, or have I just never noticed it?
- monkeytrooper
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Type of Music(Rock, Hip Hop etc):Upbeat jazz
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):medium with swing
Date(When you want it done):as soon as possible
Miscellaneous:It is for an intro so only a couple secs in length
Speed(could be in BPM or just slow, fast or medium):medium with swing
Date(When you want it done):as soon as possible
Miscellaneous:It is for an intro so only a couple secs in length
Signatures are a strange one really aren't they?
- CinderBerry1712
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
- Caleb101
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Project(A link to the project you want reviewed): https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118210871/
Date(When you want it done): Whenever possible
Skill(Your level of skill): Coding 9.5/10 art 5/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I am mainly looking for a review that tells me what features are good/ not good, what you think sould be added, and any glitches you find or imbalances in the game system.
Thanks in advance
Date(When you want it done): Whenever possible
Skill(Your level of skill): Coding 9.5/10 art 5/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I am mainly looking for a review that tells me what features are good/ not good, what you think sould be added, and any glitches you find or imbalances in the game system.
Thanks in advance
- MistickMage
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118210871/Project(A link to the project you want reviewed):
Date(When you want it done): Whenever possible
Skill(Your level of skill): Coding 9.5/10 art 5/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I am mainly looking for a review that tells me what features are good/ not good, what you think sould be added, and any glitches you find or imbalances in the game system.
Thanks in advance
If everyones fine with it, I'll do it
Gender: Genderfluild-ish. Female most of the time, though occasionally Agender.
Sexuality: Bisexual
Spirit Animal: American Kestrel
Favorite Color: Blue/grey
- CrazyGoldfish3
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Hey people.
Work of Sigton
Brains: http://i.cubeupload.com/J6ESvL.png
ZLGames: http://i.cubeupload.com/4UTQw8.png
Aleyne: http://u.cubeupload.com/Aleynesansonnet/c78Untitleddesign.png
- CinderBerry1712
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf
- Flint-L
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Go ahead mate!https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/118210871/Project(A link to the project you want reviewed):
Date(When you want it done): Whenever possible
Skill(Your level of skill): Coding 9.5/10 art 5/10
Miscellaneous: This game is in its early stages, so I am mainly looking for a review that tells me what features are good/ not good, what you think sould be added, and any glitches you find or imbalances in the game system.
Thanks in advance
If everyones fine with it, I'll do it
Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.
–
“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates
- goldfish678
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
apparently you guys have the third biggest active shop (I think) on scratch, maybe you could advertise that xD
- CinderBerry1712
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf
Is No one going to do my order??
If not, MTBH's shop will suffice
Last edited by CinderBerry1712 (Aug. 25, 2016 10:09:50)
- Flint-L
- Scratcher
500+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
You only placed your order two days ago.Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf
Is No one going to do my order??
If not, MTBH's shop will suffice
While we do have quite a few members, not all of them have the ability to complete your order, and especially not in two days.
Secretary and Manager of Tropical Waves.
–
“True wisdom comes to each of us when we realize how little we understand about life, ourselves, and the world around us.”
-Socrates
- CinderBerry1712
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
You only placed your order two days ago.Type of Music medieval, dark, royal
Speed varying but not slow or sad
Date within 7 days but ideally as soon as possible
Miscellaneous: like lotr the hobbit star wars
Check out the warrior cat game here! And see This.
Silverleaf
Is No one going to do my order??
If not, MTBH's shop will suffice
While we do have quite a few members, not all of them have the ability to complete your order, and especially not in two days.
okay sorry
- CrazyGoldfish3
- Scratcher
1000+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Still here, lurking silently.
Same.
Work of Sigton
Brains: http://i.cubeupload.com/J6ESvL.png
ZLGames: http://i.cubeupload.com/4UTQw8.png
Aleyne: http://u.cubeupload.com/Aleynesansonnet/c78Untitleddesign.png
- OpenWood
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
(Ignore this post)
Last edited by OpenWood (Aug. 31, 2016 20:27:56)
- rick_ds
- Scratcher
100+ posts
Tropical Waves - |Art, Sounds, Scripts and Reviews|
Type of Art(Banner, logo etc):Sprite
Date(When you want it done): 2nd September
Style(Vector or Bitmap): Bitmap
Miscellaneous; It should be a Top down Spaceship
that is colored white and and orange
and must be 8 Bit
When it is complete please inform me on my profile and give a link to a scratch project containing the sprite
Date(When you want it done): 2nd September
Style(Vector or Bitmap): Bitmap
Miscellaneous; It should be a Top down Spaceship
that is colored white and and orange
and must be 8 Bit
When it is complete please inform me on my profile and give a link to a scratch project containing the sprite
Last edited by rick_ds (Aug. 31, 2016 20:30:16)
when green flag clicked
forever
Imagine :: motion
Program :: sound
Share :: operators
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