Introduction:

Hello, my name is MissGrimdark. This is an alternate account, however I will not reveal my original account. On my original account, I have a seniority of 2 years and 5 months, before this I had used the program itself for a year. Now, the purpose of this shop is for people who write and create stories. I review any stories, but prefer darker themes. I also review games' story-lines and original characters. There will be a list below of everything I review.

Not only do I review, but I also do readings. Let's say you are young and a parent will not allow you to read your story in a video. I will be very glad to review your story, possibly make suggestions, and possibly even make a reading of it. More details below!

Forms:

Want me to read or review your story, character, or plot? Fill out the applications below!

Story Form:

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Story:
Story Word Length:
Genre:
Original or Fan-Fiction:

Character Biography Form:

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Character Biography:
Biography Word Length:
Fandom (If yes, what fandom?):


Game Form

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Game:
Approximate Game Duration:
Genre:

Reading Form

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Story:
Story Word Length:
Genre:
Original or Fan-Fiction:
Voice Actors Wanted(Yes or No?):
Music Wanted (Yes or No?):
Sound Effects Wanted (Yes or No?)
Custom Art for Background (Yes or No?):
Digital Art or Traditional?:

Story and Character Biography Wait Time:

Step 1: Automatically, I will need about two days to get requests done, so they are of good quality and include insightful criticism. So, add 2 days to your wait time.
Step 2: Check your form, how long is your story. For every 500 words, please add 1 day to your wait time.
Step 3: How many people are in front of you? Add 1 day per each person ahead.

Game Wait Time:

Step 1: Automatically, I will need about two days to get requests done, so they are of good quality and include insightful criticism. So, add 2 days to your wait time.
Step 2: Check your form, how long is your game. For every 10 minutes, please add 1 day to your wait time.
Step 3: How many people are in front of you? Add 1 day per each person ahead.

Reading Wait Time:

Step 1: Automatically, I will need about two days to get requests done, so they are of good quality and include insightful criticism. So, add 2 days to your wait time.
Step 2: Check your form, how long is your story. For every 1,000 words, please add 1 day to your wait time.
Step 3: How many people are in front of you? Add 1 day per each person ahead.
Step 4: Do you want voice actors? Add 2 days for each voice needed, as auditions take lots of time.
Step 5: Do you want music? Add 1 day as it takes time for me to select accurate, mood-fitting music.
Step 6: Do you want sound effects? Add 1 day for me to find proper sound effects.
Step 7: Do you want custom art for the background? Add 2 days for me to create the best background I can produce.
Step 8: If you want traditional add 1 day to your time. If you want digital, add 2 to your total.

PLEASE NOTE IT MAY OR MAY NOT TAKE THE AMOUNT OF TIME THE STEPS SAY, IT IS AN APPROXIMATION

Request List:

~None Yet~

-Writer- wrote:

Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

MissGrimdark wrote:

-Writer- wrote:

Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

Accepted! I will have it done within three days, however I do not think it will take that long! Thank you for ordering!

rollercoasterfan wrote:

Hey, I'm from the UltraRunner shop! You recently submitted a form to partner, remember? When will that order above be complete so I can add this shop on the list?

MissGrimdark wrote:

rollercoasterfan wrote:

Hey, I'm from the UltraRunner shop! You recently submitted a form to partner, remember? When will that order above be complete so I can add this shop on the list?

Sometime within the next three days

Code_Name_Geek wrote:

Username: Code_Name_Geek
Link to Profile: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/Code_Name_Geek/
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/72215774/
Story Word Length: About 1000
Genre: Short story
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

-Writer- wrote:

Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

rollercoasterfan wrote:

Yay, a completed order!

If you still want to partner with the UltraRunner Shop, please re-complete the form with the example. Thanks!

MissGrimdark wrote:

-Writer- wrote:

Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

A cute and sweet short story, I enjoyed this tale quite a bit. I feel as though the manner in which you wrote the character's experience was lovely. Some of your sentences were slightly abruptly ended and I believe the story's ending, while unique, could be improved. Aside from those points, the story is absolutely lovely. The character was simple and had a simple voice in the story.The mysterious boy and helper really made the story unique. I cannot think of much more to be said about it other than excellent job and I enjoyed this story very much!

Thanks for ordering! Sorry the review is so short!

MissGrimdark wrote:

Code_Name_Geek wrote:

Username: Code_Name_Geek
Link to Profile: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/Code_Name_Geek/
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/72215774/
Story Word Length: About 1000
Genre: Short story
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

It should take about 5 days. Thanks for ordering and sorry for the late reply!