MissGrimdark's Reading and Reviews Shop

MissGrimdark

MissGrimdark's Readings and Reviews Shop

Introduction:

Hello, my name is MissGrimdark. This is an alternate account, however I will not reveal my original account. On my original account, I have a seniority of 2 years and 5 months, before this I had used the program itself for a year. Now, the purpose of this shop is for people who write and create stories. I review any stories, but prefer darker themes. I also review games' story-lines and original characters. There will be a list below of everything I review.

Not only do I review, but I also do readings. Let's say you are young and a parent will not allow you to read your story in a video. I will be very glad to review your story, possibly make suggestions, and possibly even make a reading of it. More details below!

Forms:

Want me to read or review your story, character, or plot? Fill out the applications below!

Story Form:

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Story:
Story Word Length:
Genre:
Original or Fan-Fiction:

Character Biography Form:

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Character Biography:
Biography Word Length:
Fandom (If yes, what fandom?):

Game Form

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Game:
Approximate Game Duration:
Genre:

Reading Form

Username:
Link to Profile:
Link to Story:
Story Word Length:
Genre:
Original or Fan-Fiction:
Voice Actors Wanted(Yes or No?):
Music Wanted (Yes or No?):
Sound Effects Wanted (Yes or No?)
Custom Art for Background (Yes or No?):
Digital Art or Traditional?:

Waiting Time:
(You do not have to do this, I will inform you of your wait time once your order is confirmed.)

Story and Character Biography Wait Time:

Step 1: Automatically, I will need about two days to get requests done, so they are of good quality and include insightful criticism. So, add 2 days to your wait time.
Step 2: Check your form, how long is your story. For every 500 words, please add 1 day to your wait time.
Step 3: How many people are in front of you? Add 1 day per each person ahead.

Game Wait Time:

Step 1: Automatically, I will need about two days to get requests done, so they are of good quality and include insightful criticism. So, add 2 days to your wait time.
Step 2: Check your form, how long is your game. For every 10 minutes, please add 1 day to your wait time.
Step 3: How many people are in front of you? Add 1 day per each person ahead.

Reading Wait Time:

Step 1: Automatically, I will need about two days to get requests done, so they are of good quality and include insightful criticism. So, add 2 days to your wait time.
Step 2: Check your form, how long is your story. For every 1,000 words, please add 1 day to your wait time.
Step 3: How many people are in front of you? Add 1 day per each person ahead.
Step 4: Do you want voice actors? Add 2 days for each voice needed, as auditions take lots of time.
Step 5: Do you want music? Add 1 day as it takes time for me to select accurate, mood-fitting music.
Step 6: Do you want sound effects? Add 1 day for me to find proper sound effects.
Step 7: Do you want custom art for the background? Add 2 days for me to create the best background I can produce.
Step 8: If you want traditional add 1 day to your time. If you want digital, add 2 to your total.

PLEASE NOTE IT MAY OR MAY NOT TAKE THE AMOUNT OF TIME THE STEPS SAY, IT IS AN APPROXIMATION

Request List:

~None Yet~

Thanks for visiting!

MissGrimdark

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-Writer-

Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

STORIES I The Paper Plane I Bananas I Winter ~ Part One I Winter ~ Part Two I Winter ~ Part Three
(\__/) “The world is a weird place.” -Sigton “MY CAPS BROKE” -Sigton
(='.'= ) “Why did you name your guitar Kyle? I thought that was my nickname!” ZLGames
(“)_(”) “My real name isn't Kyle. It's just what half of Scratch calls me now.” ZLGames | “Bitmap is easy. You just make something in vector then click ‘Convert to Bitmap’ ” - ZLGames (Kyle) | “If you think my jokes are too cheesy, you might be… LAUGHTOSE INTOLERANT!” - BlockWave's signature | “I WUV SPOODERS” - Ducky (Kyle) 1987 | “Someone is talking in your laptop, you should have it checked.” -My mom

MissGrimdark

-Writer- wrote:
Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

Accepted! I will have it done within three days, however I do not think it will take that long!

Thank you for ordering!

-Writer-

MissGrimdark wrote:
-Writer- wrote:
Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

Accepted! I will have it done within three days, however I do not think it will take that long! Thank you for ordering!

Thanks! You're welcome!

STORIES I The Paper Plane I Bananas I Winter ~ Part One I Winter ~ Part Two I Winter ~ Part Three
(\__/) “The world is a weird place.” -Sigton “MY CAPS BROKE” -Sigton
(='.'= ) “Why did you name your guitar Kyle? I thought that was my nickname!” ZLGames
(“)_(”) “My real name isn't Kyle. It's just what half of Scratch calls me now.” ZLGames | “Bitmap is easy. You just make something in vector then click ‘Convert to Bitmap’ ” - ZLGames (Kyle) | “If you think my jokes are too cheesy, you might be… LAUGHTOSE INTOLERANT!” - BlockWave's signature | “I WUV SPOODERS” - Ducky (Kyle) 1987 | “Someone is talking in your laptop, you should have it checked.” -My mom

rollercoasterfan

Hey, I'm from the UltraRunner shop! You recently submitted a form to partner, remember? When will that order above be complete so I can add this shop on the list?

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MissGrimdark

rollercoasterfan wrote:
Hey, I'm from the UltraRunner shop! You recently submitted a form to partner, remember? When will that order above be complete so I can add this shop on the list?

Sometime within the next three days

rollercoasterfan

MissGrimdark wrote:
rollercoasterfan wrote:
Hey, I'm from the UltraRunner shop! You recently submitted a form to partner, remember? When will that order above be complete so I can add this shop on the list?

Sometime within the next three days

Great! Just get it finished so I can add you.

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Code_Name_Geek

Username: Code_Name_Geek
Link to Profile: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/Code_Name_Geek/
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/72215774/
Story Word Length: About 1000
Genre: Short story
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

Are you a writer of any kind? Check out the Writers' Guild of Scratch!

Looking for project ideas? The Creative Spark studio is packed full of projects designed to jumpstart your imagination!

“Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don’t live it, it won’t come out of your horn. They teach you there’s a boundary line to music. But, man, there’s no boundary line to art.”
—Charlie Parker

MissGrimdark

Code_Name_Geek wrote:
Username: Code_Name_Geek
Link to Profile: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/Code_Name_Geek/
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/72215774/
Story Word Length: About 1000
Genre: Short story
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

It should take about 5 days. Thanks for ordering and sorry for the late reply!

MissGrimdark

-Writer- wrote:
Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

A cute and sweet short story, I enjoyed this tale quite a bit. I feel as though the manner in which you wrote the character's experience was lovely. Some of your sentences were slightly abruptly ended and I believe the story's ending, while unique, could be improved. Aside from those points, the story is absolutely lovely. The character was simple and had a simple voice in the story.The mysterious boy and helper really made the story unique. I cannot think of much more to be said about it other than excellent job and I enjoyed this story very much!

Thanks for ordering! Sorry the review is so short!

rollercoasterfan

Yay, a completed order!

If you still want to partner with the UltraRunner Shop, please re-complete the form with the example. Thanks!

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MissGrimdark

rollercoasterfan wrote:
Yay, a completed order!

If you still want to partner with the UltraRunner Shop, please re-complete the form with the example. Thanks!

Okay

-Writer-

MissGrimdark wrote:
-Writer- wrote:
Username: -Writer-
Link to Profile: Here.
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/71428682/
Story Word Length: 532
Genre: General Fiction
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

A cute and sweet short story, I enjoyed this tale quite a bit. I feel as though the manner in which you wrote the character's experience was lovely. Some of your sentences were slightly abruptly ended and I believe the story's ending, while unique, could be improved. Aside from those points, the story is absolutely lovely. The character was simple and had a simple voice in the story.The mysterious boy and helper really made the story unique. I cannot think of much more to be said about it other than excellent job and I enjoyed this story very much!

Thanks for ordering! Sorry the review is so short!

Thanks! It's okay.

STORIES I The Paper Plane I Bananas I Winter ~ Part One I Winter ~ Part Two I Winter ~ Part Three
(\__/) “The world is a weird place.” -Sigton “MY CAPS BROKE” -Sigton
(='.'= ) “Why did you name your guitar Kyle? I thought that was my nickname!” ZLGames
(“)_(”) “My real name isn't Kyle. It's just what half of Scratch calls me now.” ZLGames | “Bitmap is easy. You just make something in vector then click ‘Convert to Bitmap’ ” - ZLGames (Kyle) | “If you think my jokes are too cheesy, you might be… LAUGHTOSE INTOLERANT!” - BlockWave's signature | “I WUV SPOODERS” - Ducky (Kyle) 1987 | “Someone is talking in your laptop, you should have it checked.” -My mom

Code_Name_Geek

MissGrimdark wrote:
Code_Name_Geek wrote:
Username: Code_Name_Geek
Link to Profile: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/Code_Name_Geek/
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/72215774/
Story Word Length: About 1000
Genre: Short story
Original or Fan-Fiction: Original

It should take about 5 days. Thanks for ordering and sorry for the late reply!

No problem!!

Are you a writer of any kind? Check out the Writers' Guild of Scratch!

Looking for project ideas? The Creative Spark studio is packed full of projects designed to jumpstart your imagination!

“Music is your own experience, your thoughts, your wisdom. If you don’t live it, it won’t come out of your horn. They teach you there’s a boundary line to music. But, man, there’s no boundary line to art.”
—Charlie Parker

eeveexxx

would it be ok for you to review my blurb
https://scratch.mit.edu/users/eeveexxx/ profile

Eeveexxx

KaosAndMeyhem

Username: KaosAndMeyhem
Link to Profile: https://scratch.mit.edu/users/KaosAndMeyhem/
Link to Story: https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/87736775/
Story Word Length: ???? (Never checked. I just write. Never do watch the length)
Genre: ???? (No clue. Like I said, I just write.)
Original or Fan-Fiction: Fan-Fiction. Skylanders Fan-Fiction.

Note: I post it only one chapter at a time, if that's okay. (This is Chapter 1.)
Also, question: If I have more than one chapter I would like you to review, and they're all separate, can I post all of the links at once or do I have to post all of the links separately?
Also also: Thank you for considering to review this. It really means a lot to me since I have a hard time mustering up the courage to do stuff like actually posting what I write and ask people to review it. I really appreciate it.

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