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Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
Color divide - a colorless point of view.
Prologue;
My name is Rose.
In Aurora they say that out here it is colorless, and you cannot survive. There wrong.
I have lived out here since I was born. There is a colorless village, but I live alone.
It's not that I don't like the colorless village, I'm just more accustomed to surviving by myself. Besides, I don't think they'd trust me.
My parents and the colorless people didn't exactly get along.
Besides, I have magic. I inherited it from my dad, who got himself banished to be with my mother.
I am thankful for my magic. When I was 7 i figured out I could change colors to blend in with my background. They used to go out of control, changing according to my emotions, but soon I mastered them. I can even be multiple colors at once now. Out here… Out here is freedom. I never new what it was like in the city, and I never wanted to. But I got to find out anyway. Last year, when I was 11, I was trying out my magic. I constituted really hard, then suddenly, when I opened my eyes, I was in the middle of the city, and my hands were almost impossible to see. I cried out in alarm, and immediately back in the forest. Later I figured out what happened. I wasn't REALLY In the city, but I could see into it, like I was in it. I was like a ghost. I would go though things, and no one would see or hear me. Soon I learned to let certain people see me, and to stay in for a long time. It was very amusing to see people run away like they have seen a ghost. I laughed when I saw them run. It was my revenge.
I wasn't exactly the nicest child at that time.
Chapter one
I remember the time when I first met my two best friends. I saw a young girl, thirteen, my age at the time. She looked pretty timid, so I decided to let her see me and think I was a ghost. She didn't run though, she just stared at me.
“Boo!” I yelled.
The girl just stared at me strangely. Another girl, who looked exactly like the first, except with black hair instead of light blond, was some how able to see me. Maybe they had a connection or something. “Who are you?” asked the second girl, with the black hair. “Rose.” I told her. “I'm Trixie!” The black haired girl exclaimed, as if it wasn't strange to be talking to a ghost. “This is Daisy!” she said, gesturing to the blond girl. people began to stare at her strangely, since they couldn't see me. So we decided to meet at the gate so I could explain everything.
Chapter 2
I had waited at the gate for an hour. I was just about to leave when they arrived. As soon as she saw me Trixie began to as a million questions, until Daisy finally stopped her by nudging her slightly. Just then I explained everything. It felt good to talk to other people. We talked some more, the next day, we met at the gate. And the next, and the next. Soon we were great friends. I would vist them in the citiy alot, and it made my magic stronger. Each time I vistited, I appeared a little less ghost like. I would always be trasparit, but at least now you didn't have to strain your eyes to see me. I told Trixie and Daisys things I had never told any one from Aurora before. I told them about my mother, how she had failed the test, and my father, a power magician who gave everything up for her. I told them every story I knew, and always met them at the gate. I was never worried some one would see us. I should of been more careful. One day when we were talking at the gate, a magician saw us. He yelled and I ran. I ran as far as I could. But I didn't run to the colorless city. If they followed me, they would find the city. So I ran the other way. I stayed away for two days in the land I raley verntured into. I knew I should of been staying in the parts I knew best, but I couldn't risk going back. After 2 days, however, I went back. but I still stayed as far away as I could from Aurora. I told myself I never should of used my powers like I did. I should of stayed as far away from that city of barbarians as I could. I told myself they were the ones who were exiling people. The more I told myself this, the angryer I got. I needed a friend to tell my problems to, but I couldn't go to Daisy and Trixie. I just became angyer, and anger. For a month I was angry at myself, aurora, the colorless village, the magicians, everything. I told myself I'd never use my powers again. I was literally red for that entire month. All I did was move around, hunting with my bow and only caring about myself. By the end of the month, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was sick of being angry, sick of being afraid, sick of being alone.
Chapter 3.
I had lived my life telling myself I did not want to live in Aurora, but really I had. I hated the rules and people, yet I still wished I could sleep in the houses behind the gates and talk to the people. But I'm not supposed to be in a village. I tried to stay in the colorless village once.
I had no friends. I would always snap at people or accidentally scare them. I could never get involved in any conversations, and I always made everything worse. I am ment to be outside, to wander and explore. I don't live in villages, I can't.
I'm an outsider.
My parents had told me I was to young for wepons, but I was eight then. I made weapons myself. A strong bow, and a knife. Again, I was a pretty nasty child. I would shoot every wolf I saw. I still do. It's not even because of revenge anymore. Wolves killed my father, and caused the death of my mother. But I've forgiven them by now. I don't shoot them because I'm angry.
I shoot them because I'm afraid.
Everyone has a fear, even me. But there was one girl I knew, who never seemed to be afraid. Or angry. Or sad. Or any emotion at all. I never went near the city or used my powers, for the sake of my friends, who already had many people who'd do anything to get rid of them. So Kyla was my only friend. She told me tales about the city, and taught me how to grow plants. Soon, I figured out how to grow them in trees. I did find myself staring at the wall often though. I would get closer each day. One day, I saw a girl. “hi.” I said. “Hello…” said the girl. (credit to @Eeveexxx for character) “Who are you?” I asked. “Red. But thats not my color.” she said. I smiled. “My name is Rose, but my color isn't pink” I said. Red laughed. “What is your color?” I asked. “Violet.” she said. “Me to!” I said, laughing. I figured out a while ago that's what I would be if i stayed in the city. She smiled. “What's it like out here?” she asked, ignoring the fact that I had a color and was out here. “Out here its freedom. Were not trapped in the city, or forced to follow rules.” I said. I smiled. “And there are even more shades of colors out here.” we laughed. “Red! Red!” called a voice. “I got to go. Bye!” Red said quickly and left.
I remember the very first time i met Robin. I was wandering near the colorless village, when I ran into him. We introduced ourselves, then just talked to each other. It was nice. We talked and played. He would sneak out, and I would talk with him. One day we even snuck into the village and messed up that testing place!
There was the time I made the mistake of walking Robin back home. “There you are! Wear were you?” Asked a woman, we ran into. “This is my mom. When I was banished she insisted she go with me. Almost killed a guard.” Robin had whispered to me. “She sounds… nice” I whispered back. The women stopped in front of us. “I told you never to leave the village! Whose this? You weren't with a LONER were you?” she asked Robin. “She… is protective around loners.” he whispered. His mom looked at me. “Who are you?” She barked. “Rosetta Charm.” I said, my full name. “Well, Rosetta Charm, if your to important to live in the city, then don't. We don't want people who only come when they need it then leave.” she said. Robin rolled his eyes. “Mom, she's ok. And she's not coming to live here. I think” Robin looked hopeful. I shook my head, “I'm not coming to live. I don't feel comfortable around large amount of people for a long period of time.” I said.. “Well, then stay away!” said Robins mom. I winced. Robin noticed. “Mom,” he began. “No, it's ok. I guess I just didn't know colorless people hated strangers. I don't know why I thought they were unlike the city. I guess there just as exclusive as Aurora.” I said indigently. Before they could do anything, I turned around and ran back.
I ran through the forest, tears streaming down my face. I knew I didn't belong in the village, but it still hurt not to be wanted? Did no one want me? Was I just a mistake? I stopped at the river. I kneeled over and cried for an hour. I splashed water on my face, washing the dirt off, and erasing evidence of me crying. I looked at myself in my reflection. “I am strong. I am strong.” I whispered, sounding weak. “I am strong!” I yelled. I started crying again.
Kyla was waiting for me at my little hut that day. It was as if she knew something was wrong. I don't remember much. but I do remember when I woke up, Kyla was gone I followed her tracks to a river. Worried, I started to panic. Desperate, I had climbed a tree, climbing higher than I had ever before, although I was afraid of heights. I looked around. I had fallen out of the tree before I could find her. Luckily, the other branches broke my fall. I chewed on some pepper mint. I was convinced it was the city's fault. Or wolves. I hated both. I jumped down from the tree, and felt pain in my foot. I moved my foot to see a wolves tooth. I picked it up and sat down, taking a knife out.
I made the wolf tooth into a necklace, just because I could. At that moment, I was reminded of Robin. I ran to the colorless village without thinking.
Robins mother was gone too. Monsters, he explained, although I had never seen any in al my days of being alone. Maybe monsters hated me, too.
Of course, Aurora didn't have to worry about monsters, did they. And it was at that moment I decided to start my own rebellion.
We tracked down Trixie and Daisy, Robin and I. We recruited a girl named Hope, also. Five people aren't much or a rebellion, but it was better than nothing. Trixie, Daisy, and Hope found out Aurora's secrets, and me and Robin snuck in and caused trouble.
If was good, made me feel like I was important.
I'm still trying to stop the city right now. Want to join me?
Prologue;
My name is Rose.
In Aurora they say that out here it is colorless, and you cannot survive. There wrong.
I have lived out here since I was born. There is a colorless village, but I live alone.
It's not that I don't like the colorless village, I'm just more accustomed to surviving by myself. Besides, I don't think they'd trust me.
My parents and the colorless people didn't exactly get along.
Besides, I have magic. I inherited it from my dad, who got himself banished to be with my mother.
I am thankful for my magic. When I was 7 i figured out I could change colors to blend in with my background. They used to go out of control, changing according to my emotions, but soon I mastered them. I can even be multiple colors at once now. Out here… Out here is freedom. I never new what it was like in the city, and I never wanted to. But I got to find out anyway. Last year, when I was 11, I was trying out my magic. I constituted really hard, then suddenly, when I opened my eyes, I was in the middle of the city, and my hands were almost impossible to see. I cried out in alarm, and immediately back in the forest. Later I figured out what happened. I wasn't REALLY In the city, but I could see into it, like I was in it. I was like a ghost. I would go though things, and no one would see or hear me. Soon I learned to let certain people see me, and to stay in for a long time. It was very amusing to see people run away like they have seen a ghost. I laughed when I saw them run. It was my revenge.
I wasn't exactly the nicest child at that time.
Chapter one
I remember the time when I first met my two best friends. I saw a young girl, thirteen, my age at the time. She looked pretty timid, so I decided to let her see me and think I was a ghost. She didn't run though, she just stared at me.
“Boo!” I yelled.
The girl just stared at me strangely. Another girl, who looked exactly like the first, except with black hair instead of light blond, was some how able to see me. Maybe they had a connection or something. “Who are you?” asked the second girl, with the black hair. “Rose.” I told her. “I'm Trixie!” The black haired girl exclaimed, as if it wasn't strange to be talking to a ghost. “This is Daisy!” she said, gesturing to the blond girl. people began to stare at her strangely, since they couldn't see me. So we decided to meet at the gate so I could explain everything.
Chapter 2
I had waited at the gate for an hour. I was just about to leave when they arrived. As soon as she saw me Trixie began to as a million questions, until Daisy finally stopped her by nudging her slightly. Just then I explained everything. It felt good to talk to other people. We talked some more, the next day, we met at the gate. And the next, and the next. Soon we were great friends. I would vist them in the citiy alot, and it made my magic stronger. Each time I vistited, I appeared a little less ghost like. I would always be trasparit, but at least now you didn't have to strain your eyes to see me. I told Trixie and Daisys things I had never told any one from Aurora before. I told them about my mother, how she had failed the test, and my father, a power magician who gave everything up for her. I told them every story I knew, and always met them at the gate. I was never worried some one would see us. I should of been more careful. One day when we were talking at the gate, a magician saw us. He yelled and I ran. I ran as far as I could. But I didn't run to the colorless city. If they followed me, they would find the city. So I ran the other way. I stayed away for two days in the land I raley verntured into. I knew I should of been staying in the parts I knew best, but I couldn't risk going back. After 2 days, however, I went back. but I still stayed as far away as I could from Aurora. I told myself I never should of used my powers like I did. I should of stayed as far away from that city of barbarians as I could. I told myself they were the ones who were exiling people. The more I told myself this, the angryer I got. I needed a friend to tell my problems to, but I couldn't go to Daisy and Trixie. I just became angyer, and anger. For a month I was angry at myself, aurora, the colorless village, the magicians, everything. I told myself I'd never use my powers again. I was literally red for that entire month. All I did was move around, hunting with my bow and only caring about myself. By the end of the month, I couldn't stand it anymore. I was sick of being angry, sick of being afraid, sick of being alone.
Chapter 3.
I had lived my life telling myself I did not want to live in Aurora, but really I had. I hated the rules and people, yet I still wished I could sleep in the houses behind the gates and talk to the people. But I'm not supposed to be in a village. I tried to stay in the colorless village once.
I had no friends. I would always snap at people or accidentally scare them. I could never get involved in any conversations, and I always made everything worse. I am ment to be outside, to wander and explore. I don't live in villages, I can't.
I'm an outsider.
My parents had told me I was to young for wepons, but I was eight then. I made weapons myself. A strong bow, and a knife. Again, I was a pretty nasty child. I would shoot every wolf I saw. I still do. It's not even because of revenge anymore. Wolves killed my father, and caused the death of my mother. But I've forgiven them by now. I don't shoot them because I'm angry.
I shoot them because I'm afraid.
Everyone has a fear, even me. But there was one girl I knew, who never seemed to be afraid. Or angry. Or sad. Or any emotion at all. I never went near the city or used my powers, for the sake of my friends, who already had many people who'd do anything to get rid of them. So Kyla was my only friend. She told me tales about the city, and taught me how to grow plants. Soon, I figured out how to grow them in trees. I did find myself staring at the wall often though. I would get closer each day. One day, I saw a girl. “hi.” I said. “Hello…” said the girl. (credit to @Eeveexxx for character) “Who are you?” I asked. “Red. But thats not my color.” she said. I smiled. “My name is Rose, but my color isn't pink” I said. Red laughed. “What is your color?” I asked. “Violet.” she said. “Me to!” I said, laughing. I figured out a while ago that's what I would be if i stayed in the city. She smiled. “What's it like out here?” she asked, ignoring the fact that I had a color and was out here. “Out here its freedom. Were not trapped in the city, or forced to follow rules.” I said. I smiled. “And there are even more shades of colors out here.” we laughed. “Red! Red!” called a voice. “I got to go. Bye!” Red said quickly and left.
I remember the very first time i met Robin. I was wandering near the colorless village, when I ran into him. We introduced ourselves, then just talked to each other. It was nice. We talked and played. He would sneak out, and I would talk with him. One day we even snuck into the village and messed up that testing place!
There was the time I made the mistake of walking Robin back home. “There you are! Wear were you?” Asked a woman, we ran into. “This is my mom. When I was banished she insisted she go with me. Almost killed a guard.” Robin had whispered to me. “She sounds… nice” I whispered back. The women stopped in front of us. “I told you never to leave the village! Whose this? You weren't with a LONER were you?” she asked Robin. “She… is protective around loners.” he whispered. His mom looked at me. “Who are you?” She barked. “Rosetta Charm.” I said, my full name. “Well, Rosetta Charm, if your to important to live in the city, then don't. We don't want people who only come when they need it then leave.” she said. Robin rolled his eyes. “Mom, she's ok. And she's not coming to live here. I think” Robin looked hopeful. I shook my head, “I'm not coming to live. I don't feel comfortable around large amount of people for a long period of time.” I said.. “Well, then stay away!” said Robins mom. I winced. Robin noticed. “Mom,” he began. “No, it's ok. I guess I just didn't know colorless people hated strangers. I don't know why I thought they were unlike the city. I guess there just as exclusive as Aurora.” I said indigently. Before they could do anything, I turned around and ran back.
I ran through the forest, tears streaming down my face. I knew I didn't belong in the village, but it still hurt not to be wanted? Did no one want me? Was I just a mistake? I stopped at the river. I kneeled over and cried for an hour. I splashed water on my face, washing the dirt off, and erasing evidence of me crying. I looked at myself in my reflection. “I am strong. I am strong.” I whispered, sounding weak. “I am strong!” I yelled. I started crying again.
Kyla was waiting for me at my little hut that day. It was as if she knew something was wrong. I don't remember much. but I do remember when I woke up, Kyla was gone I followed her tracks to a river. Worried, I started to panic. Desperate, I had climbed a tree, climbing higher than I had ever before, although I was afraid of heights. I looked around. I had fallen out of the tree before I could find her. Luckily, the other branches broke my fall. I chewed on some pepper mint. I was convinced it was the city's fault. Or wolves. I hated both. I jumped down from the tree, and felt pain in my foot. I moved my foot to see a wolves tooth. I picked it up and sat down, taking a knife out.
I made the wolf tooth into a necklace, just because I could. At that moment, I was reminded of Robin. I ran to the colorless village without thinking.
Robins mother was gone too. Monsters, he explained, although I had never seen any in al my days of being alone. Maybe monsters hated me, too.
Of course, Aurora didn't have to worry about monsters, did they. And it was at that moment I decided to start my own rebellion.
We tracked down Trixie and Daisy, Robin and I. We recruited a girl named Hope, also. Five people aren't much or a rebellion, but it was better than nothing. Trixie, Daisy, and Hope found out Aurora's secrets, and me and Robin snuck in and caused trouble.
If was good, made me feel like I was important.
I'm still trying to stop the city right now. Want to join me?
Last edited by rosescent (Aug. 5, 2016 19:01:46)
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Scratcher
76 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
Amazing story
Tell @bubble103 about it and she will put a link in the studio
Tell @bubble103 about it and she will put a link in the studio
- GodzillaKing100
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Scratcher
100+ posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
cool?
I didn't read it. LOL! :D But why are you reading this stupid long piece of text instead of reading this short post? Are you thinking of quoting this? I don't think so! Because of this. BLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHIHATEMYSELFLOLOLOLOLBLAHBLAHBLAH
I didn't read it. LOL! :D But why are you reading this stupid long piece of text instead of reading this short post? Are you thinking of quoting this? I don't think so! Because of this. BLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHBLAHIHATEMYSELFLOLOLOLOLBLAHBLAHBLAH
- eeveexxx
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Scratcher
76 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Red
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
- rosescent
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Scratcher
34 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
- eeveexxx
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Scratcher
76 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
- rosescent
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Scratcher
34 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
^u^ but what dose Red say?wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
- eeveexxx
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Scratcher
76 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
^u^ but what dose Red say?wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
she would ask about being colour less and what she thought was the bigger picture not just colour and colour less and what she thought the magicians where up to really!
- rosescent
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Scratcher
34 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
k thanks!^u^ but what dose Red say?wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
she would ask about being colour less and what she thought was the bigger picture not just colour and colour less and what she thought the magicians where up to really!
- eeveexxx
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Scratcher
76 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
k thanks!^u^ but what dose Red say?wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
she would ask about being colour less and what she thought was the bigger picture not just colour and colour less and what she thought the magicians where up to really!
Hey I love the bit so far and I'm sure Red would love to help the rebellion as she often breaks into the magicians towers
- RosettaCharm
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Scratcher
9 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
ok! ^u^ yayk thanks!^u^ but what dose Red say?wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
she would ask about being colour less and what she thought was the bigger picture not just colour and colour less and what she thought the magicians where up to really!
Hey I love the bit so far and I'm sure Red would love to help the rebellion as she often breaks into the magicians towers
- shinsh628
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Scratcher
1 post
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
ok! ^u^ yayk thanks!^u^ but what dose Red say?wow I love what you have added could you include a meeting with my character Redok! also, your story is amazing to!
Reds Bio https://scratch.mit.edu/projects/79316766/
My story https://scratch.mit.edu/discuss/topic/155120/
thanks
she would ask about being colour less and what she thought was the bigger picture not just colour and colour less and what she thought the magicians where up to really!
Hey I love the bit so far and I'm sure Red would love to help the rebellion as she often breaks into the magicians towers
- mgs38
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Scratcher
3 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
That's awesome! There is this cool website that @bubble103 is on, and you should totally put it on it (wattpad)!
- RosettaCharm
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Scratcher
9 posts
Color divide - a colorless point of veiw.
This is awesome!Why thank you!
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