Ahhh amazing! When's more coming out?? :3

bubble103 wrote:

Ahhh amazing! When's more coming out?? :3

Hopefully by the weekend sorry for not updating it in a while.
Also after leaning what there colour is would they be sorted in to classes by colour?
Also could Red and Scarlet be given the chance to leave the orpanage at 15 but where could they live?
Thanks

eeveexxx wrote:

bubble103 wrote:

Ahhh amazing! When's more coming out?? :3

Hopefully by the weekend sorry for not updating it in a while.
Also after leaning what there colour is would they be sorted in to classes by colour?
Also could Red and Scarlet be given the chance to leave the orpanage at 15 but where could they live?
Thanks

Their training begins after earning their colour - they all go to the Academy. Yeah, probably sorted into classes by colour rank, but it's up to you.
If they wanted to leave, they could become apprentices to a magician. They'd be able to live with the magician while working for the magician and learning at the same time.

bubble103 wrote:

eeveexxx wrote:

bubble103 wrote:

Ahhh amazing! When's more coming out?? :3

Hopefully by the weekend sorry for not updating it in a while.
Also after leaning what there colour is would they be sorted in to classes by colour?
Also could Red and Scarlet be given the chance to leave the orpanage at 15 but where could they live?
Thanks

Their training begins after earning their colour - they all go to the Academy. Yeah, probably sorted into classes by colour rank, but it's up to you.
If they wanted to leave, they could become apprentices to a magician. They'd be able to live with the magician while working for the magician and learning at the same time.

Great thanks

Love it! Some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed in a sec. This is great, keep writing!

-ninjagirl- wrote:

Love it! Some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed in a sec. This is great, keep writing!

Yep my spelling and grammar isn't great it a wonder why I'm in top set and what did you mean by they can be fixed in a sec also could you point them out for me

eeveexxx wrote:

-ninjagirl- wrote:

Love it! Some grammatical errors, but those can be fixed in a sec. This is great, keep writing!

Yep my spelling and grammar isn't great it a wonder why I'm in top set and what did you mean by they can be fixed in a sec also could you point them out for me

I just figured it was in a word document somewhere..XD That's how I always type mine before putting them on Scratch.

Some of the dialogue is missing periods, and Mary's bits are a bit unclear. Other than that, you're fine.

This is awesome! There's this super-cool site called Wattpad that @bubble103 is on that you should totally put that on!

Amazing! I love it!

There are a bunch of typos. Good story though.